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UPDATE 16 ~
(NO MORE DECEPTION)
INNER KI
(NO MORE DECEPTION)
INNER KI
Inner Ki ek tarha ki Life Force hai, Inner Ki bilkul Urja ke jaise hai jis ko dhayan lagane aur practice karne se koi bhi Inhuman power Achieve ker sakta hai.
Inner ki ko aj tak logo ne Dragon Ball jaise Anime me he daikha tha, Goku ki Kamehameha bhi Inner Ki Energy se bana ek Ki Blast tha, Logo ko aj tak ye sirf Kahaniya he lagi thi.
Lekin Dharti per Sach me kuch Clan hai jo Genrations se apne bacho ko Inner Ki sikhate aa rahe hai, Inner Ki ko duniya se chupaya gaya hai kiu ke agar ye baahir ati to puri Duniya khatre me aa sakti thi.
Inner Ki Achieve ho jane ke baad wo puri body me Blood ki tarha Flow karti hao, Jis se Superhuman Strength aur Fast Healing jaisi Abilities mil jati hai User ko, Lekin agar User Inner ki ko Control na ker sake to wo uss ki body ke liye he khatra ban sakti hai.
Inner Ki ke iss duniya me Total 9 Realm hai jin ko Attributes bhi kaha ja sakta hai-
1. Earth Realm
2. Water Realm
3. Fire Realm
4. Wind Realm
5. Light Realm
6. Darkness Realm
7. Nature Realm
8. Mist Realm
9. Spirit Realm
2. Water Realm
3. Fire Realm
4. Wind Realm
5. Light Realm
6. Darkness Realm
7. Nature Realm
8. Mist Realm
9. Spirit Realm
Aur iss ke baad ata hai Master Realm, Kaha jata hai ke Master Realm in sab Realm se zada takatwar hota hai, Sirf ek Master Realm User kisi bhi Desh ko tabah karne ki takat rakhta hai.
9 Realm ko 9 Clans ke beech banta gaya har Clan kisi ek Realm ko master karta aur aage apne bacho ko seekhata, Tsubame Wind Clan se ayi thi, Clan me ek ki power ko uss ki Inner Ki ke level se position milti thi.
Inner ki ke 7 Level the jis se har User ko Inner ki aur Position ko decide kia jata tha.
1. The Initiate Level
2. The Apprentice Level
3. The Journeyman Level
4. The Master Level
5. The Sage Level
6. The Ascendant Level
7. The Enlightened Level
2. The Apprentice Level
3. The Journeyman Level
4. The Master Level
5. The Sage Level
6. The Ascendant Level
7. The Enlightened Level
Inner Ki 2 tarha se Achieve hoti thi, 1 Direct Blood line me janam le ker, Jo seedhe Clan me janam lete hai wo janam se he Initiate Level Inner ki ke saath bare hote the, Kiu ki unho ne bachpan se saans lene ki tarha he Ki use ki hoti hai iss liye un ka control Ki per sab se zada mazboot hota hai.
Dusra raasta, Agar Clan se baahir koi Inner Ki Achieve karna chahta hai to usse ek Sage level Inner ki master ki madad chahiye hoti hai, Sage Level User ko 6 Maheene har Din uss ke saath Cultivate karna parta phir ek user 6 Maheene me Initiate level inner ki achieve ker sakta tha.
Lekin iss ki probability sirf 50% thi, Agar saamne wale ke paas koi bhi Inner ki talent nahi hai to koi bhi uss ke andar Inner Ki nahi awake ker sakta tha, Lekin kabhi kabhi Saalo mehnat karne se bina talent ke bhi Inner Ki Achieve ho sakti thi.
Lekin ye sab Rules kisi ne tor diye the, Direct Blood line me janam na lene ke baad bhi Sage Level Master ki madad se sirf 1 raat me Initiate level inner ki achieve karne wala pehla Vyakti, Aarav.
Tsubame khud heraan thi ke ye kaise ho gya, Tsubame ke kehne ke mutabik Pehle bhi ek system dhaarik insaan ko Inner ki practice karwai gayi thi, Lekin usse 2 Maheene lage Inner ki Achieve karne ke liye, Tsubame 10 Din me Aarav ko seekhana chahti thi lekin Aarav ne sirf 1 raat me usse Achieve ker lia.
Aarav ke liye wo sirf 30 minute ke liye dhayan me tha, Lekin wo 8 Ghante tak Inner Ki ko cultivate ker raha tha, Unique Ability Will to live aur Limitless Growth ke bohat se raaz the jo abhi tak Aarav samajh nahi saka tha.
*Clang*
8 Din guzar chuke the Aarav ko New York me aye huwe, Uss Raat ke baad Aarav ki Asli training shuru ho chuki thi-
*Wooosh*
Aarav dobara Tsubame ke saath Jungle ke beech wanhi fight ker raha tha, Lekin ab Tsubame pehle se zada power se attack ker rahi thi, Lekin ab Aarav zada attack block ker paa raha tha.
Tsubame abhi bhi Holdback ker rahi thi apni power ko, Lekin Initiate Level ke liye ye bhi uss ki pohanch se bohat door takat thi, Aarav aur Tsubame iss baar Swords Use ker rahe the.
Aarav ki healing speed pehle he tez thi, Lekin Inner Ki ki madad se Aarav ki healing speed ko boost lag gaya tha, Tsubame iss liye Aarav ko Zakhm dene se peeche nahi hat rahi thi.
Aarav Tsubame ke attack ko daikh paa raha tha, Lekin beech me ek pal aisa ata tha jab Aarav ki nazro ke saamne se Tsubame gayab ho jati thi.
*Stab*
Aarav: Ahhhh!
Aarav ke kandhe per Sword ghusi to Aarav ko ehsaas huwa ke Tsubame uss ke peeche hai, Tsubame ek pal ke liye bhi nahi jhijhak rahi thi Aarav ko kaatne se pehle, Tsubame krulta ke saath Aarav ko kaate ja rahi thi.
Tsubame: Abhi ke liye itna kafi hai! Khud ko heal ker lo aue nikalne ke liye tayar ho jao, Aj tumhe Urvi ko hospital le ker jana hai wo intezar ker rahi ho gi.
Tsubame apni sword ko wapis rakh ker nikalne ki tayari karne lagi, 8 din se Aarav Urvi se jhoot bol ker training karta tha, Lekin Na usse jhoot bolna acha lag raha tha na he wo 11 ghante se zada waqt nikal paa raha tha training ke liye.
Adarsh se baat ker ke Urvi ko hospital admit karwane ka faisla ker ke chemotherapy start karne ka decide kia gaya, Aise Urvi ko acha treatment bhi mil jata aur Aarav ko Urvi se jhoot bole bina training ke liye waqt bhi mil jata.
Aarav Inner ki Achieve karne ke baad pehle se zada powerful ho gya tha, Uss ke Stats bhi bohat zada improve huwe the, Lekin abhi bhi Technique aur Block me wo kamzoor tha.
Aarav: Tsubame Sensei! Shuru me to mujhe pata nahi laga, Lekin pichle kuch dino se ap ke attack ko block ker ke mujhe feel huwa hai ke ap har waqt Fast nahi hoti sirf kuch lamho ke liye Tez speed se move karti ho, Wo kia hai?
Tsubame: Great! Tum abhi se difference daikh paa rahe ho, Actually normally main sirf fast Move ker sakti hu, Lekin for a moment main Inner Ki ko use ker ke Light ki speed se move ker sakti hu.
Ye ek bohat zada Useful Ability thi, Agar Aarav ek second ke liye bhi aise move ker sake to wo apne opponent per Deathly Slash Use ker ke hara sakta tha.
Aarav (Eager): Sensei, that move was sick! Can you teach me how to do it?
Tsubame: Hmm! Ye kabhi main ne kisi ko seekhaya nahi hai, Lekin main Wind Fighting books ki madad se seekha sakti hu, Main aj he yahan reh rahe Clan members se wo book le ker ati hu, Mujhe time lage ga to tumhe kal subha tak ki training akele karni ho gi.
Tsubame apni jacket utaar ker badalne lagi, Aarav ki nazar Jacket utarte he wapis un 2 Tarbooz per chali gayi aur uss ke saamne uss raat ke scene waapis aa gye.
Aise Perfect Boobs Aarav ne sirf Porn movie me daikhe the jo uss ke dosto ke usse dikhayi thi, Aarav jahan nashe me doob raha tha wanhi Tsubame ko koi dikkat nahi thi apna shareer dikhane me.
Uss ke liye ye sirf uss ke kaam ka ek hissa tha, Aarav apni nazro ko rok na saka aur neeche uss ki Chut per ankhe khud chali gayi jis ko bilkul saaf ker ke rakha tha Tsubame ne, Aarav pehli baar apne saamne kisi larki ko bina kapro ke daikh raha tha.
Tsubame: Aarav!
Tsubame ne Aarav ke saamne chutki bajate huwe usse hosh me laya, Tsubame jacket pehan chuki thi wo Aarav ko apne uroojo ko ghoorte huwe bhi mehsoos ker chuki thi lekin kuch boli nahi thi.
Aarav: Sorry Sorry! Main kuch sochne laga tha, Ap fikar mat kare ap ja ker book le aoo main practice karta rahu ga.
Tsubame(Nods): Theek hai! tumhe ghar choor ker main nikalti hu phir.
Aarav ne bhi apne kapre badal liye, Dono waapis Jungle se baahir aa gye jahan un intezar pehle se driver ker raha tha, Aarav ko ghar choor Tsubame wahan se nikal gayi.
Aarav bhi Ghar ke andar jaane laga to ek larka bhaagte huwe uss ke paas aa gaya.
Larka: Akash sir ne ap ke ate he ap ko bulane ka kaha hai! Wo ap ka andar intezar ker rahe hai.
Aarav ne Larke ko raasta dikhane ko kaha to wo aage chalne laga, Aarav bhi uss ke saath peeche chalne laga, Aarav dusri baar ghar ke andar ja raha tha.
Archana beech beech me Urvi aur Aarav ke liye khud khaana bana ker le ati thi, Akash bhi beech beech me Aarav ki training daikhne ata rehta tha uss ke siwaye aur koi bhi Aarav aur Urvi se nahi mila tha.
Aarav ko wo larka balcony me le gaya jahan Saamne Akash baitha huwa tha, Balcony me chaye wagaira peene ke liye intezam kia gaya tha.
Aarav: Akash Sir!
Aarav ki awaz sunte he Akash khara ho gya, Uss ke chehre per khushi se muskurahat aa gayi.
Akash: Abhi bhi Sir bula rahe ho! Tum sirf Akash keh sakte ho mujhe.
Akash ne Aarav ke liye apne saamne wali Chair bahir ki aur Aarav ko baithne ka ishara ker dia, Aarav bhi Akash ke saamne ja ker baith gaya.
Aarav: Abhi thora samay lage ga! Lekin abhi zaroorat nahi hai, Agar bakiyo ke Sir kehte huwe main sirf Naam se pukaru ga to Rude lage ga.
Akash: Ye bhi sahi kaha! Theek hai abhi ke liye Sir keh sakte ho Tum, Lekin jab yahan shift ho jao gye to sirf mere Naam se pukaro gye mujhe.
Aarav ne hami bhar di to Akash bhi khush ho gya, Ek Servant ne Aarav ke liye Chai daal di cup me aur Permission le ker wahan se nikal gayi dono ko private me baat karne ke liye akela choor ker, Wahan sirf Akash aur Aarav ke saath Barbie he tha.
Akash: 3 Din se tum busy the! Main ne socha Tum to yaad karo gye nahi to main he bula lu tumhe, Training ki kia Update hai?
Aarav: Abhi apni Inner Ki ko strong karne per dhayan de raha hu! Tsubame mujhe fighting style aur strategies ke liye bhi tayar ker rahi hai, Gym se aur Inner ki Se Stat bohat tezi se barh rahe hai....
Aarav sab kuch batata raha aur Akash dhayan se ek ek baat sun raha tha Aarav ki, Jaise Aarav ki har baat Akash ke intrest ki ho, Wo chup baitha sirf Aarav ko bolne de raha tha.
Aarav: .... Tsubame mujhe drop ker ke Apne clan se book lene chale gayi hai! Aj aur kal ke liye mujhe khud training karni ho gi.
Akash: Aj to tumhe apni behan ko Hospital bhi le ker jana hai na! Main ne driver ko inform ker dia hai, Aur ye rakho.
Akash ne ek Card table per rakh dia, Pehli nazar me he Aarav ko pata lag gaya ke ye ek Credit Card hai.
Aarav: Ye kis liye? Ap pehle he Hospital ke sab Bills daikh rahe ho! Main ye accept nahi ker sakta.
Akash (Sigh): Huh! Aarav tum bhool rahe ho uss din main ne tumhe kia kaha tha! Tum mere liye mere chote bhai ke jaise ho, Aur mujhe nahi pasand ke mera chota bhai itni choti baato ki fikar kare, Ab muh band karo aur ye apne paas rakho, Aur agar tumhe aj samay mila hai to thors rest bhi ker lena, Khud per itna pressure daalna acha nahi hai.
Aarav: Lekin hamare paas sirf 11 din hai! Rest karne ka time nahi hai, Abhi mujhe khud ko aur bhi strong banana hai, Hume nahi pata ke iss baar hume kaise danav se larna ho ga.
Akash: Lekin-
“Bhayiaaaa!!!”
Akash baat aage barhata uss se pehle Vanshika ki awaz ne uss ma dhayan apni taraf kheench lia, Vanshika muh phulaye wahan aa gayi.
Aarav Vanshika ko Uss din ke baad ab daikh raha tha, Vanshika ko daikhte he uss ke dil ki dharkane barhne lagi, Wo khud ko control karna chah raha tha lekin wo apni nazre hata he nahi paa raha tha Vanshika ke upar se-
Wanhi Vanshika ayi to andar gusse se thi, Lekin apne saamne Aarav ko baitha daikh wo shaant ho gayi, Aarav ko apni taraf yun daikhta daikh wo apna dhayan Akash ki taraf ker leti hai.
Vanshika: Bhayia! Ye drivers ke saath kia problem hai? Main jaise he kisi driver ko bulati hu wo sab mujh se bhaagne lag jate hai.
Akash: Wo to bhaage gye he! Tumhe yaad hai na kitna gussa karti ho tum un ke upar? Sara frustration un per nikalo gi to wo bhi to tum se bhaage gye.
Aarav: *Chuckle*
Vanshika: *Glare*
Aarav: (. ❛ ᴗ ❛.)
Vanshika: Meri Shoot thi Aj! Lekin un ki wajha se late ho gayi hu, Ab kal jao gi lekin ap kisi Driver ko Arrange karo.
Vanshika muh banate huwe boli, Wo sach me frustrate thi wo puri tarha tayar thi, Uss ki sundarta Aarav ko bhi pighla rahi thi-
Akash: Hmm! Aarav tum kal free ho na, Tum Vanshika ko le jana sirf 2 se 3 ghante ka he kaam ho ga iss ko, Kia kehte ho?
Aarav: *Surprise*
Aarav ke haath se chaye ka cup nikalte huwe bacha, Aarav ne Vanshika ki taraf daikha to wo bhi usse he daikh rahi thi, Jaise keh rahi ho ke haan keh do warna kacha chaba jao gi.
Aarav: Theek hai!
Akash: Phir decide ho gya! Lekin Vanshu yaad rakhna, Aarav tumhare saath Driver ban ker nahi jaa raha, Wo ek family ke member ki tarha wahan tumhare saath ho ga, Tumhe koi problem to nahi hai iss se?
Vanshika (Sigh): Theek hai! Lekin iss se keh do ke mujh se koi sawal na karw, Last time bhi sawal puch puch ker Headache karwa dia tha.
Vanshika kehte huwe wahan se nikal gayi, Aarav bhi daikhne laga ke ye abhi huwa kia hai, Vanshika aandhi ki tarha ayi aur Nikal gayi.
Akash: Thanks! Abhi tumhe bhi jaldi jo gi Hospital ke liye, Tum ja sakte ho, Aur haan Urvi ki fikar mat karna Mom uss ke saath rahe gi.
Aarav ko pehle se Archana ne bata dia tha, Iss liye Aarav ne koi Objection nahi di, Aarav bhi wahan se nikal gaya, Akash uss ko peeche se jaate huwe daikhta raha uss ke chehre per ek santushti thi.
Akash(Smile): Abhi tak nahi badla ye! Bachpan se aisa he hai, Khud se kisi se baat nahi karta aur jab koi iss se baat kare to pura khul jata hai.
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India
Mumbai ~ 5:27 PM
“Veer! Veer! Veer!”
Ek Admi Veer ka Naam pukarte huwe pure ghar me ghoom raha tha, Akhir ek Kamre me usse Veer dikh gaya jahan wo apni choti behan ke saath khel raha tha, Saamne Admi ki halat daikh Veer ko pata lag gaya ke kuch serious baat hai.
Veer(Grin): Tanu, Abhi bhayia ke kaam karne ka waqt ho raha hai! Ap ja ker Didi ke saath khelo main baad me khelu ga ap ke saath.
Tanu(Smile): OK!
*Umah*
Tanu Veer ke gaal per pyaari si Kiss de ker apne teddy ko haath me pakre baahir ki taraf bhaag gayi, Veer bhi khara ho gya aur Uss Admi ko apne paas baithne ka ishara ker ke ek kursi per baith gaya.
Veer: Kia baat hai, Kunal? Aise kamre me aoo gye to bache dar jate hote hai! Agli baar se thora dhayan rakhna.
Kunal: Sorry! Lekin baat he kuch aisi hai, Mujhe aj he khabar mili hai ke Karunesh Chacha ko New York ki sarko per raaste me kisi Gang ne Goliyo se maar dia hai.
Veer ka chehra serious ho gya, Ye uss ke liye bhi dukh ki baat thi lekin abhi usse soch samajh ker aage ke baare me sochna tha.
Veer: Ghar me kisi ko pata hai kia?
Kunal: Dada Ji ko bata dia hai! Baki jab Ishika College se wapis aye gi to sab ko bata dia jaye ga.
Veer wanhi apni jagha peeche sar tika ker baith gaya, Wo gehri soch me tha wanhi Kunal kisi jawab ke intezar me tha.
Veer(Smirk): Akash se mujhe aisi Umeed nahi thi! Akhir kis ko wo pagal bana raha hai aisi kamzoor kahani bana ker, tch tch, Usse pata hai ke main vishwas nahi karu ga wo mujhe bata raha hai ke uss ka agla shikaar main hu.
Kunal(Shock): What!!!! Ye sab Akash ne kia hai, Lekin kiu?
Veer: Ab iss kiu ka jawab to Akash khud de ga! Chacha ji ki body ko yahan laane ki tayaari karo, Baki sab un ke antim sanskar ke baad daikha jaye ga.
Kunal: Lekin! agar wo Akash tumhare liye aa raha hai to hume kuch karna ho ga.
Veer: Wo mere kuch karne ka intezar ker raha hai! Wo tab tak kuch bhi nahi kare ga, Intezar karo main khud uss ke paas jao ga ye daikhne ke liye ke akhir kitna bara shikaari hai wo?
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Presbyterian Hospital
New York ~ 3:31 PM
Driver ne Car ko Hospital ke bahir rok dia, Aarav aur Urvi Car se baahir aa gye, Archana bhi Driver ko wait karne ka keh ker bahir aa gayi.
Hospital ke baahir he Hospital ka Chief Physician baahir he intezar ker raha tha, Archana ko daikhte he uss ne pehchaan lia aur jaldi se uss ke paas aa gaya.
Chief: Welcome!
Archana: Thank You Chief! Adarsh ne ap ko bata dia ho ga hamare ane ka, Lekin ap ko khud ane ki zaroorat nahi thi.
Chief: Aisa kuch nahi hai! Ap hamare liye Special hai ap ke liye to hum khud he aye gye na, Ap in baato ki fikar mat kare aur andar aye.
Chief ne unhe saath chalne ka kaha aur andar ki taraf chal diye, Itna bara Hospital Dono behan bhai pehli baar daikh rahe the, Aur upar se uss ke saamne River ka View wahan ka mahool aur bhi zada khubsoorat bana raha tha.
Lekin sirf baahir se nahi Andar se bhi hospital bohat zada bara tha, Wanhi itne bare Hospital ka Chief Physician khud unhe lene aya tha, Ye daikh sab ko pata chal gaya tha ke ye koi VIP aye hai.
Chief: Adarsh Sir ne hume Puri information de di hai! Hamari Team ne pure treatment ko setup ker dia hai, Sirf kuch Test ke baad ap ko bhi sab kuch bata dia jaye ga.
Archana(Smile): Adarsh ne ap ke hospital ko choose kia hai! Mujhe ap se bohat Umeed hai ke ap apna best do gye.
Chief: Believe me! Our hospital is the best Hospital in the whole city, We have the Best doctor's, the best Facilities and best Treatment.
Archana Doctor ko ache se ehsaas dilwa rahi thi ke ye Patient un ke hospital ke liye kitna Important hai, Akhir uss ne itna waqt Apne husband ke saath guzara tha jahan Adarsh ke saath usse bhi aise logo ko handle karna per jata tha.
Ghar me ek House Wife baahir ek alag Elegance liye chal rahi thi, Chief bhi apne shabd soch samajh ker chun raha tha, Wanhi Urvi apne bhai ke haath ko thame apni anxiety ko control ker rahi thi.
Chief unhe Urvi ke liye ready kiye gye Room me le gye, Ye ek VIP Room tha jahan na sirf laitne ke liye bed tha saath me study table aur Sofa bhi rakhe huwe the, Tabhi ek doctor's ki team andar aa gayi.
Chief: Ye Dr. James Cooper hai! Aj se ye he Miss Urvi ka Case handle kare gye.
James: Hello Everyone!
James ne sab ko greet kia aur apne saath aye Residents ko Basic test karne ke liye keh dia, Aarav ye daikh khush tha ke akhir uss ki behan ka treatment shuru ho chuka hai.
Agar Aarav khud se mehnat ker ke Treatment karwana chahta to bhi wo aisa treatment nahi karwa sakta tha, Agar System Curse tha phir bhi Aarav uss Curse ko accept karne ke liye tayar tha agar wo apni behan ke liye aise kuch ker sake.
Basic test karne ke baad James apne residents se Urvi ko bare Test ke liye ready karne ka keh ker baahir chala gaya, Archana bhi James ke saath baahir chali gayi Treatment ke related information lene ke liye.
Resident's tayari karne lage, Wo bilkul Professionaly apna kaam ker rahe the, Residents me 2 larkiye aur 1 larka tha, Urvi ko change karne ka keh ker wo baahir chale gye.
Aarav: Tu ne daikha! Wo kaise sab test ker rahe the, Ek din meri behan bhi aise Doctor ka Uniform pehan ker Hospital me Patients ka ilaaj kare gi.
Urvi(Nods): Hmm!
Aarav: Huh! Maa ka sapna tha ke tu un ki tarha ki Doctor bane, tu sahi ho ja jaldi se, Phir tujhe ek ache se medical College me parhne bheju ga, Lekin agar tujhe kuch aur karna hai to wo bhi theek hai, Ab mujhe lagta hai ke hum sab sapne pure ker sakte hai.
Aarav apni taraf se puri koshis ker raha tha Urvi ko Cheer Up karne ki, Urvi pehli baar apne bhai se alag rehne wali thi itne din ke liye, Lekin Aarav ko nahi pata tha ke iss baar wo Urvi ke paas wapis aa sake ga ya nahi.
Urvi(Whisper): Bhayia!!!
Aarav(Smile): Haan?
Urvi ne apni nazre utha ker Aarav ki ankho me daikha to Aarav ki dil ki dharkane thamne ko ho gayi, Urvi ka wo nam ankho se Aarav ki ankho me daikhna Aarav ko andar se chalni ker raha tha.
Ye Ankhe Aarav pehle bhi daikh chuka tha, Ye dard pehle bhi mehsoos kia tha Uss ne, Aarav wanhi Sofe per baith gaya Usse khud per hansi aa rahi thi.
Aarav: Mujhe koshis bhi nahi karni chahiye thi! Ye jaante huwe bhi ke main jhoot bolne me kitna bura hu phir bhi main ne koshis ki, Ugh, Akhir kise Pagal bana raha tha main, *Sigh*........Kab se pata hai tujhe?
Urvi(Sobbing): Manohar Uncle se baate karte huwe sun lia tha main ne ap ko! Lekin mujhe Vishwas nahi huwa per jo kuch hota aa raha hai uss ke baad sab kuch clear ho gya mere liye.
Urvi nazre jhukaye huwe thi, Aarav ne apni zindagi me dusri Baar Urvi se jhoot bola tha aur ye soch ker uss ko khud per hansi aa rahi thi ke dono baar he wo pakra gaya jhoot bolte huwe.
Urvi: Kitne din reh chuke hai?
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Aarav: 11 Din!!!
Urvi: Hmm! Ap jaane tak Please yahan mat ana warna main khud ko rok nahi saku gi ab ki baar.
Aarav apni jagha se khara huwa aur chalte huwe Urvi ke paas aa ker Usse apni bahon me bhar lia, Urvi ke ruke huwe ansoo behne lage.
Aarav: Tu Pareshaan mat ho! Main bilkul sahi salamat wapis aao ga, Akhir teri wo kasam bhi to nibhani hai mujhe.
“Aarav Arya! Agara tum apni Mann mani karne chahte to aisa he sahi! Per yaad rakhna mujhe mera bhai bilkul sahi halat me wapis chahiye, Tumhe jo karna hai karo per ant me hamesha mera bhai mujhe mere paas chahiye”
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[Aj ke liye itna he, 4.5K words ka update hai umeed karta hu ke ap logo ko update pasand aye ga, Target wo he hai agar iss update per 30 likes huwe to next Update Tuesday ko aye ga, Update ka maza le milte hai agle Update per tab tak ke liye, Sayonara!!!!]
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Beautuful updare bro
Aarav ne bohat kuch achieve kar liya aur end scene
Aarav janant ki sair kar gya thodi c
Bhut shi bhai kya hi story Jaa rhi h thoda ekdum kahi aur ka scene hota h fir back to the aarav aate hein ekdum alag hi maza h isme
Superupdate Bhai finaly arav ko kuch Naya Mila and Tsubame ka reaction dekhne layik tha use vishwas hi nahi ho raha
Spectacular update.... waiting for the next and fabulous update...
Nice update
Update 16 has been posted Guys!!!
