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Kitne bahane h bhai aapke paas....Kal se ye error aa raha tha ek post ke liye bhi mushkil ho rahi thi. Fix hone ka wait ker raha tha lekin ab tak nahi huwa to ab mushkil se he sahi post karunga
Update 98 ~
(Declaration of War)
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Wind Clan
Japan ~ 5:29 PM
*Groan*
“Ughhh”
“Avinash?”
Kim Min-Soo mushkil se uski jagha per khada huwa tha. Uska dhayan ab Yoo-Jung ki taraf se bilkul hat chuka tha. Uske saamne uska sab se bura aur daravana sapna khada huwa tha.
Lekin usko samajh nahi aa rahi thi ke Avinash abhi bhi zinda kaise hai aur wanha kya ker raha hai.
Tsubame: Now, Let me introduce you all to the leader of the Righteous Clan! The man who once ruled over all the clans, the former leader of the Spirit Clan... Avinash Arya!
Daisuke (Relief): Fuuuu ~
Daisuke ne uska haath neeche ker diya. Santiago ko Yoo-Jung ki taraf badhte daikh wo special team ko signal dene ke liye ready tha. Lekin Aarav ki Avinash ke roop me entry daikhte he wo ruk gaya.
Kim Min-Soo (Furious): Leader?
Aakash Barbie Yoo-Jung aur Avinash. Kim Min-Soo ke raaste ke sabhi pathar ek saath uske saamne aa ker khade ho gaye the. Ab tak uske liye sab kuch sahi chal raha tha. Lekin ye naya Clan uske gale mein haddi ban raha tha.
Tinkerbell: [He's strong, Dragonic Overlord ke aura ko itna lambe samay tak endure karna easy nahi hai... Yoo-Jung bhi sirf kuch seconds he khadi reh sakti hai. Kim Min-Soo sirf uske bete ke kaaran he itna uchhal nahi raha.]
Aarav: [Hmm ~ But, I'm still stronger than him]
Aarav: Kneel down ...!
[Ability: Dragonic Overlord (Level 2) activated]
[Level 2 consumes 100 mana every 10 seconds]
[Aura's intensity increased threefold]
*Baammm*
*Cough Blood*
Kim Min-Soo bhi uske ghutnon per neeche gir gaya aur Aura ko resist karne ki koshish mein uski body per dabav badhne laga aur uske muh se khoon bhi nikalne laga. Santiago per bhi pressure badh gaya aur wo ab hilne ki halat mein bhi nahi tha.
Baaki sab clan sirf unko baith ker daikh he sakte the. Unke saamne khade dono insaan he khatarnak the. Wo kisi bhi ek ko support ker ke dusre ko khud ka dushman nahi banana chahate the.
*Tuck*
*Tuck*
*Tuck*
Aarav aage badhte huwe Kim Min-Soo ke paas aa gaya. Kim Min-Soo abhi bhi usko gusse se laal huwi aankhon se daikh raha tha.
Kim Min-Soo (Furious): Kaise? Zinda kaise hai tu?
Aarav (Scoff): Tujhe sach mein ye laga tha ke jo tu khud nahi ker saka wo tera beta ker sake ga?
Aarav ke muh se Soo-Hyun ka zikar sun ker Kim Min-Soo aur bhi gussa ho gaya. Kim Soo-Hyun ne Avinash ko dhokha diya tha. Kim Min-Soo ko bhi pata tha ke Avinash uske dushmanon ko aise nahi jaane deta.
Kim Min-Soo: Ek aur mauka de raha hu! Khamoshi ke saath ye sab kuch band ker de aur peeche hat ja. Tujhe andaza bhi nahi hai ke tu kis aag ke saath khelne ki koshish ker raha hai.
Aarav: Hmm ~
Aarav ne haath aage badhate huwe Kim Min-Soo ka left haath ko pakad liya. Ek pal ke andar he Kim Min-Soo ki saanse bohat tez ho gayi aur dil zor se dhadakne laga.
Aarav (Smile): Ye haath to shayad main ne kaat diya tha na? Lagta hai bohat high ranked healer hai tumhare paas? Ela...?
Kim Min-Soo (Shivering): A-Avina -
*Grrrch*
Kim Min-Soo (Scream): Arggghhhh ~
Aarav ne Kim Min-Soo ka haath dheere dheere se ukhadna shuru ker diya aur phir puri tarha ukhad ker uske shareer se alag ker ke ek taraf phenk diya.
Unke saamne baithe huwe baaki sab clan aur unke leader bhi uss drishya ko daikh ker khauf se kaanpne lage. Unhone kabhi nahi socha tha ke wo kabhi Kim Min-Soo ko aisi halat mein daikhe gaye.
*Ba-dump-Ba-dump*
Yoo-Jung ke dil ki dhadkane bhi badh gayi. Lekin usne kuch bhi nahi kiya aur na he nazron ko hatne diya. Uska ye sab daikhna zaroori tha. Usko khud ko aisi situation ke liye ready karna tha.
*Woooosh*
*Clang*
*Thump*
Ek taraf se uski taraf kuch ate sense karte he Aarav ne usko block ker diya. Ek dagger Aarav ke upar se hote huwe side per gir gaya. Aarav ne saamne ki taraf daikha to Kim Min-Soo ke peeche usko koi khada dikhayi diya.
Santiago (Smile): Fourteen...!
Tinkerbell: [Elite Guild?]
*Woooosh*
Aarav ne uthate huwe usko pakadna chaha. Lekin ek he pal mein uske saamne se Kim Min-Soo aur Fourteen dono he gayab ho gaye. Udhar khade sab log ye daikh hairan ho gaye aur unko dhundhane lage.
Aarav ne uske peeche daikha to fourteen aur Kim Min-Soo usko Santiago ke paas khade dikhayi diye. Fourteen ne Santiago per haath rakha aur wo bhi unke saath gayab ho gaya.
Aarav: [Invisibility...?]
Daisuke: Sab abhi ke abhi unk-
Aarav: Nahi...!
Daisuke unhe dhundhne ke orders dene he laga tha ke Aarav ne usko rok diya. Daisuke bhi uske rokne per ruk gaya. Aarav ne Aakash ki taraf daikha to usko samajh aa gayi ke ab uski perfomance ki baari aa gayi hai.
Aakash aage badhne laga aur stage ke beech mein aa gaya. Barbie usko protect karne ke liye uske paas he khada ho gaya.
Mist Clan Leader: Daisuke, Ye sab ho kya raha hai?
Aakash: Uska javab main dunga...!
Aakash ki baat sun sabhi chup ker gye. Aakash ke itne saal duniya se dur rehne ke baad bhi ab tak uski authority abhi bhi waise he thi. Clan Leaders bhi ab bina soche kuch bhi nahi ker rahe the.
Aakash: Ab tak jaise ke ap sab ne he daikha ke Elite Guild ab Fire clan ko puri tarha se support ker rahi hai...! Ap sab ko bhi ache se andaza hai ke unke ek hone ka kya kaaran ho sakta hai... Lekin koi bhi kuch bhi karne se dar raha hai.
*Silence ~*
Aakash ki baat sun ker bhi koi kuch bhi nahi bol raha tha. Fire Clan aur Kim Min-Soo ke iradon ka to sab ko pata tha. Lekin sabhi safe rehne ke liye kuch bhi nahi ker rahe the. Ya ye keh lo ke sabhi unki haar maan chuke the.
Aakash: Ap sab ka kya dar hai uska bhi hamay ache se pata hai...! Agar sab clan mil bhi jaate to Fire clan se jeet nahi sakte the aur na he kabhi jeet sake gye bhi... Lekin ab kisi aur ko jeetne ki zaroorat nahi hai.
Aakash ki baat sun ker sabhi Leaders thode hairan ho gye. Wanhi dusri taraf Aarav sab ko observe ker raha tha.
Aakash (Aggressively): Right here, right now, the Righteous Clan declares war against the Fire Clan! Anyone who sides with them will be our enemy.
Water Clan Leader: What?
Aakash ki baat sun ker baaki sab ke saath he uske peeche khade log bhi hairan ho gye. Aarav ne ab tak unhe iss plan ke baare mein kuch bhi nahi bataya tha.
Aakash (Nod): Haan, Kisi ko hum per vishwas karne ki ya saath dene ki zaroorat nahi hai! Sirf tab tak haar manane ki koshish bhi na karna jab tak Righteous clan lad raha hai. Haar maan lene wala clan hamare liye dushman ho ga.
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Outside Wind Clan
Japan ~ 5:59 PM
*Psssst*
*Thud*
*Groan*
Fourteen ne clan se baahir aa ker Kim Min-Soo aur Santiago ko invisibility se baahir nikal diya. Unko baahir nikalte he Fourteen bhi Kim Min-Soo ke saath neeche baith gaya.
Fourteen (Groan): Ughhh... Fuck...!
Fourteen ka kandha buri tarha se ghayal ho gaya tha aur khoon beh raha tha. Usne Aarav ke attack ko dodge to ker liya tha lekin phir bhi uske vaar se Fourteen ka kanda ghayal ho gaya.
Lekin uske saath neeche gire huwe Kim Min-Soo ki halat aur bhi kharab thi. Uska haath ek baar dobara se uske shareer se alag ho gaya tha. Santiago bhi bohat samay tak Dragonic Overlord ke aura ke pressure mein rehne se exhaust ho gaya tha.
*Woooosh*
*Woooosh*
“Clan Leader”
Elite guild ke aur bhi kuch log pedon ke peeche se nikalte huwe udhar aa gye aur unko protect karne lage. Backup team mein Fourteen seventeen aur eighteen the aur teeno he abhi Santiago ke under the.
Unke saath he Fire clan ke sab Elders bhi udhar aa gye. Unki nazar clan ki taraf thi aur wo ambush ke liye taiyar the. Lekin ab tak unke peeche koi bhi nahi aya tha.
*Ka-booooom*
Abhi sab chaukanne ho ker he khade the ke unhe Clan ke andar Kim Min-Soo ka helicopter blast hote dikh gaya. Ek raja ki tarha aya Kim Min-Soo ab ek mujrim ki tarha bhaag raha tha. Uske Helicopter ko tabah ker ke wind clan unke beech ki jang ka elan ker rahe the.
Kim Min-Soo (Furious): Avinash Arya...! Aur kitni baar mere raaste mein aye ga? Lekin ab aur nahi. Ab ki baar sab kuch ek saath nasht ho ga aur uske beech mein he ho ga tera ant.
Kim Min-Soo ki aankhon mein khoon utar aya tha.
Seventeen: Eleven, Team attack ke liye ready khadi hai! Ap ke orders milte he sab clan ke andar ghus jaye gye aur clan ko tabah ker de gye.
Santiago: Nahi, Wind Clan ko hum ne kuch zyada he underestimate ker diya tha...! Agar hum ab dobara andar gye to shayad kabhi baahir nahi aa sake gye.
Seventeen: Huh?
Santiago ne uske aas-paas daikhte huwe kaha ab Aarav ki power ko experience karne ke baad uska bhi confidence toot gaya tha. Usko khud ke aur uske beech ka difference saaf mehsoos ho gaya tha.
Seventeen aur Eighteen uski baat sun ker hairaan the. Unhone kabhi usko aise khauf mein nahi daikha tha. Lekin Santiago peeche ho raha tha to unhen bhi andaza ho raha tha ke andar jana kitna bada risk ho sakta tha.
Santiago: Clan Leader... Hamay yanha se nikalna ho ga! Yanha rehna ab safe nahi hai.
Kim Min-Soo (Nod): Hmm ~ Soo-Hyun se contact karo...! Ab jang shuru karne ka samay kareeb aa gaya hai.
Kim Min-Soo ki baat sun ker Santiago ne nod karte huwe haan keh diya aur unhone Kim Min-Soo ko temporary heal kiya aur usko saath le ker udhar se nikal gye.
****
Wind Clan
Japan ~ 10:27 PM
*Sigh*
Sabhi Leaders ko bhejane ke baad Tsubame aur Daisuke clan ke ek private room ke andar aa ker baith gye. Udhar pehle se he Aarav aur plan mein shamil baaki sab log baithe huwe the.
Hiroshi (Sigh): Huh, Min-Soo ko zinda jaane dene ka idea acha nahi tha...! Ab hum sabhi uske direct target ban chuke hai.
Aarav: Uske target per to ap hamesha se he the aur rehne bhi wale the! Unke liye sab se dangerous enemies ap yaani wind clan tha. Lekin ab righteous clan ke ane se ap unke top target nahi ho...Aur main sab ko protect karte huwe nahi lad sakta tha.
Isabelle: Protect? Lekin kis se?
Aarav: Backup team se... Yoo-Jung tum ne bhi feel kiya tha na!?
Yoo-Jung: *Nod*
Aarav ne Yoo-Jung ki taraf daikhte huwe pucha to Yoo-Jung ne haan mein sar hila diya. Unki baat ko sun ker sab confuse hone lage.
Dhanush: Kya feel kiya tha? Sab isharon mein baat karni band kare gye kya?
Daisuke (Sigh): Santiago Yoo-Jung se shaktishali tha...! Uske stats Yoo-Jung se bhi high the.
Daisuke ke paas bhi Aarav ki tarha status ko check karne ka feature tha. Aarav ke saath usne bhi tab Santiago ke stats ko check kiya tha.
Tsubame (Frowns): Lekin ye kaise ho sakta hai? Yoo-Jung Isabelle aur Daisuke to Aarav ke kaaran unki Limit ko break ker sake the. Lekin Santiago ne kaise?
Daisuke: Sirf Santiago he nahi... Backup team bhi unki Limit break ker chuke hai...!
Daisuke ki baat sun ker udhar baithe sabhi log pareshan ho gye. Unhone ye kabhi bhi expect nahi kiya tha ke Elite Guild ke members bhi unki Limit break ker chuke ho gye.
Lekin unhe ye aur bhi dara raha tha ke agar Eleven itna strong tha to higher ranked aur kitne zyada strong ho gye. Ye he kaaran tha ke Yoo-Jung ne khud se move nahi kiya tha.
Yoo-Jung: Aarav, Tumhe kya lagta hai? Agar main aur Santiago ladte to hum mein se kon jeetne wala tha?
Aarav (Sigh): Huh, Santiago ke stats tum se zyada zaroor the! Lekin sirf higher stats hone se he koi jeet nahi sakta. 1v1 mein tumhara experience usse bohat zyada hai. Kyu ke tum shuru se train hoti ayi ho Santiago ki tarha sirf player ban ker train nahi huwi.
Yoo-Jung: But?
Aarav (Sigh): Stats alone don’t decide everything! But, they’re still very important. So honestly, I can’t say for sure who’d win.
Aarav ki baat sun ker kamre ke andar khamoshi si chha gayi. Unhe vishwas nahi ho raha tha ke Elite Guild aise players ko chhupaye huwe hai. Disaster ke samay Yoo-Jung he strongest players mein thi. Lekin ye sab kanha se aye usko pata bhi nahi tha.
Aarav: Kim Min-Soo abhi injured hai! Uske next move mein usko samay lage ga. Soo-Hyun bhi abhi baahir nahi aye ga. Lekin hum tab tak baith ker uska intezar nahi ker sakte. Dushman hamari expectations se zyada strong hai.
Aakash: Righteous clan unka direct target ho sakta hai! Lekin wind clan bhi unke target per hai. Hiroshi ap ko branch families se bhi sab ko yanha bulana ho ga.
Hiroshi: *Nod*
Aarav: Aur baaki sab ko ab sirf ek he kaam karna ho ga...! Get Stronger.
Aarav ki baat sun sabhi ke andar ek aag si bhadak gayi. Aarav udhar baitha kuch der tak unhen aage kya karna hai batata raha. Daisuke bhi uske pack mein aa gaya tha aur usne bhi limit break ker di thi to Aarav usko bhi training ki kuch key details ke baare mein batane laga.
*Beep*
Aarav abhi baat ker he raha tha ke uske paas rakha phone ring karne laga. Usne check kiya to Peter ke secret number se usko message aya huwa tha.
****
Café La Brisa
Spain ~ 6:03 PM
“One cappuccino for table six”
Flora ne awaaz lagate huwe kaha to Lily ne aa ker coffee le li aur table ki taraf chale gayi. Internet per cafe ka page banane ke baad se cafe ka kaam badh gaya tha aur Flora ne new staff bhi hire ker liya tha.
Khud se shuru kiye huwe kaam ko yun badhate daikh ker Flora bhi khush thi. Usne ab tak Vansh ke aye paise ko haath bhi nahi lagaya tha. Abhi bhi wo aise he khush thi.
Lekin ab wo Lily ke future ke baare mein bhi soch rahi thi aur usko cafe mein sirf part time kaam karne de rahi thi. Lily bhi uski padhai per pura dhayan de rahi thi aur ab unhe lag raha tha ke unki life mein bhi khushiyan aa rahi hai.
Flora: Vanshika...!
Flora staff room mein ayi to Vanshika udhar phone le ker baithi huwi thi. Vanshika ka abhi break time chal raha tha. Lekin Flora ne usko aise phone mein khoye huwe nahi daikha tha.
Flora: Kya huwa? Kuch pareshan lag rahi ho!?
Flora ki baat sun ker Vanshika ne bhi ek thandi aah bhari aur usko phone dikhane lagi. Phone mein france ke liye flights ki timings khuli huwi thi. Ye daikh Flora pehle to kuch samajh nahi saki. Lekin jaise he usko samajh aya wo hairan ho gayi.
Flora: Vanshika, Kya tum Aakash se milne ke baare mein soch rahi ho?
Vanshika (Nod): Hmm ~ Jaanti hu ke bohat time lag gaya hai! Lekin ab shayad mujhe bhayia se mil lena chahiye hai. Mere kaaran wo bhi guilty feel ker rahe hai, Aur....Ab main unhe miss ker rahi hu.
Flora (Smile): Ye to bohat achi baat hai! Kab ja rahi ho? Wait, 1-2 din rukna ho ga hamay pehle tumhare liye kuch shopping karni ho gi aur thodi skincare bhi karni ho gi...Aakash tumhe daikh ker khush hona chahiye hai ke uski behan bhi yanha per khush thi. Saturday tak kisi flight ki book-
Vanshika: Relax ~ Relax, Flora calm down! Abhi ke liye main yanhi hu. Next month bhayia ki birthday hai to unko tab he Surprise du gi aur tab tak ke liye main yanhi per hu ap ka sar khaane ke liye.
Flora: Ye bhi acha idea hai! Lekin bohat awkward ho ga na? Kya hum bhi tumhare saath aye kya? Pe-
Vanshika (Smile): Flora, Please abhi bohat time baaki hai aur main khud bhayia ki awkwardness ko khatam ker dungi! Lekin main soch rahi thi ke agar *Blushes* Agar main Aarav ko bhi bula leti to?
Flora (Sigh): Huh ~ Ye hai asli reason hamay saath na le ker jaane ka? Ye bhi theek hai. Ab hum kanha yaad rahe gye?
Vanshika (Giggling): Ab aisi bhi baat nahi hai ap meri 4th favorite person hai...!
Flora: Awww.....Wait! 4th?
*Click*
Flora abhi usko kuch keh sakti ke usse pehle he Vanshika udhar se bhaag ker baahir nikal gayi aur Flora peeche muh khole baithi reh gayi.
Flora: 4th?
****
Level Up Tower
Floor 39th ~ 4:36 AM
*Zipp*
Michael aur Caroline Level Up tower ke 39th floor ke andar aa gye. Un dono ne he apna face per ek mask lagaya huwa tha to koi bhi unhe pehchan nahi sakta tha. Michael ke paas uske kuch small beast bhi the aur wo dono akele he 39th floor tak aye the.
Michael: Huh, Yanha se ab kanha jana hai?
Michael ne uske aas-paas daikhte huwe caroline se pucha to usko bhi kuch nahi pata tha. Michael aur Caroline aage badhne lage aur unke aas-paas bhi daikhte rahe.
Ye Guardian ka floor tha unke raaste mein aur koi bhi monster nahi tha.
*Grooowwwrrrr*
Unhe abhi chalte kuch he samay huwa tha ke kuch Demon Wolves unke paas aa gye. Unko daikh ker pehle to caroline thodi chaukanni ho gayi. Lekin wo uske paas aa ker shaanti se khade ho gye.
Michael: Lagta hai hamay inko he follow karna ho ga...!
Caroline (Nod): Hmm ~
Michael ki baat sun ker Caroline bhi uske saath he Demon Wolves ko follow karne lagi. Demon wolves unko puri tarha se cover ker rahe the ke floor per agar koi ho bhi to unhe wo dono dikhayi na de.
*Awwoooo*
Demon Wolves unhe pahadon ke beech le ker aa gye aur howl karte huwe aage badhne lage. Dono unke saath aage chalte rahe aur unhe kuch aage badhne per he Demon Wolves ke den ke andar unhe ek vyakti baitha dikhayi diya.
Ye chehra wo pehli baar daikh rahe the. Lekin uska chehara kis se milta tha ye samajhte unhe samay nahi laga ke Unke saamne baitha vyakti koi aur nahi Aarav tha.
Michael bhi bohat had tak Aarav ke plan ko jaanta tha aur wo usko support bhi ker raha tha. Kyu ke Elite guild sirf clans ke liye nahi puri duniya ke liye ek khatra ban sakti thi aur Michael santulan bigadne nahi dena chahata tha.
Michael: Aarav?
Aarav (Nod): Yanha ate kisi ko dikhayi to nahi diye?
Caroline: Abhi tower mein raat ka samay hai! Phir bhi bohat se player tower mein the. Lekin hum ne kisi ko shak nahi hone diya aur yanha aye hai.
Aarav aur Association secret mein ek saath kaam ker rahi thi. Avinash aur Association ke beech agar relations ki khabar kisi pata lagti to wo Aayush ke cover ke liye risky ho sakti thi. Aarav ab aisi koi bhi galti nahi karna chahata tha jiske chalte uske kisi bhi apne ko kuch hota.
Aarav 39th floor per Shadow ki reverse summoning se aya tha. Usne Rahul ke saath ye experiment kiya tha ke wo 39th Floor per Shadow ki summoning se aa ja sakta tha. Lekin yanha se nikalne ke liye usko ek Arcane Monolith stone ka use karna padna tha.
Aarav: Hmm ~ Ab yanha bulane ka karaan bata sakte ho kya?
Aarav ki baat sun ker Michael ne ek baar caroline ki taraf daikha aur ek picture nikal ker uske saamne rakh di. Aarav ne usko daikha to picture mein ek invitation letter tha.
Aarav: Ye kiska invitation hai?
Michael: C.O.D ...! Carnival of death ...!
Aarav: Carnival of Death? Ye kya hai? Main ne iske baare mein pehle kabhi nahi suna...!
Michael (Sigh): Huh, Carnival of death ki shuruaat 7 saal pehle huwi thi! 7 saal mein 4 baar Carnival of death shuru huwa hai aur har baar hazaron player usmein mar chuke hai.
Aarav: Lekin ye hai kya?
Michael: Shuruaat mein sab ko Carnival of death player ke liye banayi ek game lag rahi thi! Hazaron player ko uska invitation aya tha aur sab ne usmein participate bhi kiya tha. Unhe apni team ke saath 5 stages clear karni thi aur jeetne per wo kuch bhi maang sakte the aur unki wo khawahish puri honi thi.
Aarav: Lekin kya wo sach tha?
Michael (Nod): Haan, Lekin usmein sirf ek team he jeet sakti thi...!
Aarav: Aur haarne walo ka kya?
Michael (Sigh): Un sab ko ye to bataya gaya ke unhe jeete per kya mile ga! Lekin kisi ko bhi ye nahi pata tha ke haarne per kya ho ga... Winners ke sivaye baaki sabhi haar jaate the aur losers ke liye sirf ek cheez intezar ker rahi thi.
Aarav: Death....!?
Michael: *Nod*
Aarav: Aur ab tak kitne log jeet sake hai?
Michael: Ek bhi nahi...!
Tinkerbell: [Wait, so nobody's actually winning in there? It’s not a competition at all? They’re just walking straight to their deaths?]
Aarav: [Seems like it]
*Shivering*
Aarav ne Michael ke peeche khadi huwi caroline ki taraf daikha to wo kaanp rahi thi. Lekin wo dar se nahi kaanp rahi thi. Uski aankhon mein Aarav ko nafrat dikhayi de rahi thi. Ek badle ki aag aur lachari dikhayi de rahi thi.
Aarav: Ab ek baar dobara se tumhara ye carnival of death shuru ho raha hai...! Mujhse kya chahate ho?
Michael: Hum 2 baar high ranked players ko bhej chuke hai! Lekin ab tak na koi bhi kuch pata laga saka hai aur na he first stage se aage badh saka hai.
Aarav: Aur ab tum chahate ho ke main association ke liye participate karu!? Aur main aisa kyu karunga? Already mere paas karne ke liye bohat kuch hai.
Michael: Kyu ke hamay shak hai ke Elite Guild aur C.O.D ke beech kisi tarha ka connection hai...!
Aarav: Huh?
Michael: [_______]
Aarav (Nod): Hmm ~ Mujhe kuch time chahiye hai sochane ke liye! Lekin agar ye sach hai to hum ja rahe hai.
Aarav keh ker uth gaya aur Shadow ke paas chala gaya aur uske upar baith gaya.
Aarav: Malia...!
[Summoning Shadow]
Shadow ke neeche ek black circle ban gaya aur wo usmein kud gaya. Aarav aur Shadow dono udhar se gayab ho gye the. Michael bhi ye daikh ker hairan ho gaya.
Michael (Smile): Huh....Shayad ab ki baar result alag ho gye! Shayad ab ki baar hum C.O.D ko jad se ukhad sake gye.
Caroline (Nod): Hmm ~ Ab ki baar main khud make sure karungi ki result positive he ho aur ab ki baar hamari taraf se ek bhi casualty na ho.
Michael (Smile): *Nod*
*Grrrch*
Demon Wolves ne awaaz karte huwe unhe ishara kiya to Michael aur Caroline dono unke saath udhar se waapis chal diye.
****
Veer's House
Mumbai ~ 7:17 AM
“Aye, Aye...Uth na ab...! Kab tak aise ghode gadhe bech ker sone wale ho?”
Aayush uske muh ke upar tak chadar ko le ker laita huwa tha. Neend to uski kab ki khul gayi thi. Lekin wo ab tak baahir nahi ja raha tha. Usko awaazen saaf sunayi de rahi thi. Lekin ye he awaaz uski raaton ki neend barbad kiye huwe thi.
*Splash*
Ek puri bhari huwi pani ki balti Aayush ke upar gir gayi. Lekin paani ke saath baalti bhi ayi thi aur uske kaaran Aayush side per ho gaya. Lekin ye karte huwe uski neend ka natak toot gaya tha. Ab uske saamne Tanu uski kamar per haath rakh ker khadi huwi thi.
Aayush: Maafi...!
Tanu: Abhi tumhari class lene ka dil to bohat ker raha tha! Lekin abhi ke liye chhod rahi hu....Ab ye batao ke wo kab tak waapis aye gye?
Aayush: Master se ab tak contact nahi huwa! Lekin kuch aur time lag sakta hai.
Tanu (Frustrated): Lekin wo tum se he kyu contact karte hai? Main bhi to hu na?
Aayush: Unhe dar hai ke ap kisi ko bata d~ Do gi...!
Aayush ki bolte huwe awaaz band hone lagi aur usko ye bhi ehsaas ho gaya ke wo abhi kya bol raha tha. Tanu usko ghoor ker daikh rahi thi jaise abhi usko phaad ker rakh de gi.
Tanu: Hmm ~ Ab tum keh rahe ho ke unhen mujhse zyada tum per bharosa hai? Wo mujhse bohat he zyada tum per trust karte hai?
Aayush: Aisi baat nahi hai! Wo t-
*Ring*
Aayush abhi kuch kehne he laga tha ke uske phone per kisi ki call ane lagi. Aayush ne phone ki screen per daikha to Nandini ki call aa rahi thi. Aayush ne turant phone utha ker call attend ker li.
Aayush: Hello...Haan....Zaroori kaam hai? Wait nahi ho sakta?....Main aa raha hu...!
Aayush ne chair se uska suit uthaya aur Tanu se jaan bachate huwe udhar se bhaagne laga. Lekin Tanu ko bhi uske iraden pata the to wo uske peeche bhaagne lagi.
Tanu: Tumhare zaroori kaam ki to...haiyaa...!
Tanu ne ek laat bhaagte huwe Aayush ke peeche maar di. Lekin wo ruka nahi aur bhaagte huwe udhar se nikal gaya. Tanu usko peeche gusse se ghoorte huwe daikhne lagi. Lekin agle he pal uske chehre per shaitani muskan aa gayi.
Usne apne trouser ki pocket se ek khujli powder ki bottle nikali aur usko daikhne lagi. Usmein se half bottle khaali thi.
Tanu (Grin): Sirf 30 seconds ke liye khul ker bhaag lo! Mr. Trusted Man. Kekeke ...! Huh?
Abhi Tanu khush he ho rahi thi ke uski tangon mein bhi khujli shuru ho gayi. Usne bottle ke upar daikha to powder ki bottle khuli huwi thi.
Tanu (Scream): Mummy...!
*Thud*
*Thud*
*Thud*
Tanu udhar se seedhe uske kamre ki taraf bhaag gayi aur nahane ke liye uske bathroom ke andar ghus gayi aur seedha shower khol ker uske neeche khadi ho gayi.
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Wind Clan
Japan ~ 2:09 AM
*Thud*
*Thud*
*Thud*
Yoo-Jung holographic training feature se training ker rahi thi. Uske saamne abhi 100 ke kareeb Kim Min-Soo khade huwe the. Yoo-Jung ek ke baad ek Kim Min-Soo ke chithade uda rahi thi. Lekin uska gussa shaant nahi ho raha tha.
Yoo-Jung (Panting): Huh ~ Huh ~ Huh...!
2 ghante ki lagatar training ke baad Yoo-Jung ki bhi saanse phulna shuru ho gayi. Yoo-Jung attack karte huwe kayi baar to saans lena bhi bhool rahi thi to uski halat aur bhi bigad rahi thi.
“Ab kuch acha lag raha hai kya?”
Yoo-Jung achanak awaaz sun ker chaunk gayi aur peeche ghoom gayi. Uske saamne Daisuke ki Maa Miyuki khadi huwi thi. Yoo-Jung training mein itna doob gayi thi ke usko ehsaas he nahi huwa ke uske paas kaun khada huwa tha.
Yoo-Jung (Greet): Madam Miyuki!? Ap itni raat ko yanha kaise?
Miyuki: Ye training hall hamara special training hall tha! Aksar late night training ke liye hum yanha aya karte the. Sab se alag aur sunsan raat ko yanha kisi ka bhi ana mushkil he hota tha.
Yoo-Jung bhi ye sab daikh ker he yanha training ke liye ayi thi. Miyuki chalte huwe udhar he rakhi huwi ek chair per baith gayi aur uske saath wale chair per haath rakh Yoo-Jung ko bhi baithne ka ishara karne lagi.
Yoo-Jung bhi uske paas aa ker baith gayi aur rest karne lagi. Miyuki udhar baithi kuch der aasman ki taraf daikhti rahi.
Miyuki: Mann kaafi bhaari ho gaya hai kya?
Yoo-Jung: Huh, Ap ko kaise?
Miyuki (Smile): Ab itni raat ko neend kharab ker ke training sirf 2 log he karte hai! Ek jinhen raat ki neend kitni zaroori hoti hai uska ehsaas nahi hota aur dusre wo jinhen raat ki neend naseeb he na ho rahi ho wo. Ab tum konsi ho?
Miyuki ki baat sun ker Yoo-Jung ko bhi ehsaas ho gaya ke wo ek aisi insaan ke saamne hai jisne uski zindgi ki unch nich ko ache se daikha hai aur unse seekha bhi hai.
Yoo-Jung: Shayan dusri...!
Miyuki (Smile): Kya huwa? Jaise socha tha kuch waise nahi gaya kya?
Yoo-Jung (Nod): Laga tha ke ab main itni strong ho gayi hu ke mera vaar kabhi ruke ga nahi! Lekin aj uss insaan ko saamne daikha to pura shareer he kaam karna chhod gaya... Ab koshish ker rahi hu ke apne enotuons ka gala ghont ker unhe maar du ke aage se waisi situation mein kabhi meri body bhi mujhe dhokha na de sake.
Yoo-Jung uski training mein Kim Min-Soo ko nahi maar rahi thi balki khud ko andar he andar se khatam karne ki koshish ker rahi thi. Uski baat ko sun Miyuki ne usko thoda relax karne diya.
Miyuki: Yoo-Jung, Kya insaan ek machine hai?
Yoo-Jung: Huh?....Nahi...!
Miyuki: Agar insaan ek machine nahi hai to aakhir tum kaise apne emotions ka switch On aur Off ker sakti ho? Koi bhi insaan uske emotions ko maar nahi sakta...Haan, Samjhota ho jata hai. Lekin phir bhi emotions wanhi rehte hai...!
Yoo-Jung: Huh, Phir main kya ker sakti hu?
Miyuki: Kabhi Kabhi hamare saamne har raasta he mushkil raasta hota hai! Ab tum ya to ek mushkil raasta chhun sakti ho ya aasan raaste ke intezar mein zindgi barbad ker sakti ho.
Yoo-Jung: Huh?
Miyuki (Nod): Haan, Tum sirf emotions ke gale ko ghont ker guilt se azad hona chahati ho! Lekin ye mumkin nahi hai. Insaan ko uske liye gye galat aur sahi sabhi nirnayon ka bojh puri zindgi saath le ker he chalna hota hai.
Miyuki ki baaton ki gehrai ko Yoo-Jung mehsoos ker pa rahi thi. Jaise Yoo-Jung pehli insaan nahi thi jisko usne aise daikha tha.
Miyuki (Smile): Ek aur bhi tumhari tarha ka murkh insaan daikha hai main ne! Uske saamne bhi kuch aise he halat the. Usko sahi aur apnon ke beech mein se ek ko chunana tha. Ye soch ker wo har pal dara rehta tha...Lekin jab samay aya to sahi ka saath dete huwe usse ek pal bhi nahi laga.
Yoo-Jung: Phir?
Miyuki: Phir kya? Sahi nirnay lene ke baad bhi uske andar se guilt kanhi nahi gaya. Uske haath uske he apnon ke khoon se sane huwe the. Usko pachtawa hota tha...Lekin main jaanti hu ke agar usko dobara bhi nirnay lena hota to wo wohi nirnay leta jo usne pehli baar liya tha aur uska bojh bhji puri umar apne saath le ker chalta rehta.
Yoo-Jung: Hmm ~
Yoo-Jung aur Miyuki yun he baithi udhar baithi rahi aur Miyuki upar aasaman ki taraf daikhte rahi.
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Spirit Clan
India ~ August 1st
*Woooosh*
Miyuki hava mein udte huwe Spirit clan ki taraf tezi se badh rahi thi. Uske saath he Hiroshi bhi aa raha tha. Miyuki ke chehre ka rang dar se ude huwe the.
Miyuki (Shout): Udhar...!
Miyuki ek taraf daikhte huwe udhar neeche jaane lagi. Uske peeche he Hiroshi bhi neeche utarne laga.
*Thump*
*Clang*
Miyuki ne neeche ate he uske saamne ghutnon per gire huwe Avinash ke haathon se uski talwar ko pakad ker phenk diya. Avinash uske gale per talwar rakh ker baitha huwa tha. Uska pura shareer khoon se bheega huwa tha aur aankhen aansuon se bhari huwi thi.
Miyuki ke ane ke baad bhi Avinash ki nazre Miyuki ki taraf nahi gayi. Miyuki uski nazron ka peecha kiya to usko uske saamne kuch laashe giri huwi dikh gayi. Usmein Spirit clan ki Leader aur Avinash ki choti behan ki bhi laash thi.
Avinash ke sivaye udhar aur koi bhi nahi tha. Ye daikh ker Miyuki ko bhi samajh aa gaya ke unka hatyara aur koi nahi Avinash khud he tha. Ye soch ker he Miyuki aur Hiroshi ki rooh kaanp gayi.
*Chatttaaaakkkk*
Ek thapar ki awaaz sun ker Miyuki aur Hiroshi dono he chaunk gaye. Unhone Avinash ki taraf daikha to ye thapar usne khud ko mara tha hosh mein ane ke liye.
Miyuki (Tearful): Avinash?
Avinash (Breath): Fuuuu ~ Huh, Kayar ban gaya tha main...! Lagne laga tha ke khud ko khatam ker ke responsibility lene se bach sakta hu... Lekin abhi bhi bohat kuch karna baaki hai... Ye hamare clan ke beech ki problem hai...Tum dono ko yanha se abhi ke abhi jana ho ga...!
“Clan Leader”
Abhi Miyuki kuch keh sakti ke Spirit clan ke kuch aur bhi members udhar unki taraf badhne lage.
*Woooosh*
*Slash*
*Woooosh*
*Slash*
Ek ek ker ke unke kate huwe shareer neeche girte gye aur unke beech Avinash khada huwa tha.
Avinash: Ab tum dono ko yanha se jana chahiye hai! Agar tum dono ko yanha kisi ne daikha to iss sab ko Wind clan ki sajish kaha jaye ga aur Spirit clan itna kamzor nahi tha ke wo kisi aur ke bahkane per apnon ka khoon baha de ga.
*Slash*
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Miyuki (Smile): Huh...Agar tum aj yanha hote to aj bhi pura bojh akele he uthane ki koshish ker rahe hote...Lekin ab koi hai jo tumhare bojh ko bhi kandha de sakta hai....Tumhara khud ka beta ab tumhare nakshe kadmon per chal raha hai.
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Protector Guild Building
Nigeria ~ 2:16 PM
“Guild Leader, Abhi hum ne ek yellow ranked gate ko khareeda hai! Hamari guild ki new joining aj usko clear karne wali hai”
Kunle abhi uski guild building mein aya he tha ke uska secretary uske paas aa gaya aur usko sab kuch batane laga. Kunle bhi chalte huwe uski puri baat dhayan se sun raha tha.
Kunle: Unke saath ek A ranker Player ko bhi jaane dena! Unki safety test se bhi zyada important hai.
Secretary: Yes Leader...!
Kunle: Aur kuch?
Secretary: Aur ap ki wife ne aj ap ko time per ghar ane ke liye kaha hai....!
Kunle (Blushes): Hmm ~ Ab kaam per bhi dhayan de do ye aurton wale kaam band ker do.
Kunle ne uske secretary ko udhar se bhaga diya uske chehre per muskan aa gayi. Uski shaadi ko abhi kuch he samay huwa tha aur ab uski bhi ek family ban rahi thi. Usne uske chote sabhi bhaiyon aur behan ko unki life mein set ker diya tha aur ab uska time tha.
*Click*
Kunle uske office ka darwaza kholte huwe andar chala gaya aur coat ko utar ker files ko khol ker baith gaya.
*Tck*
Abhi Kunle ne ek file uthayi he thi ke uske andar se kuch baahir gir gaya. Kunle ne usko uthaya to wo kisi invitation letter ki tarha ka tha.
Kunle: C.O.D?
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[Aj ke liye itna he, Ye update bohat late huwa hai aur uske bohat reasons the. Lekin agar khud bataunga to sab ko bahane he lage gye aur mujhe kuch khaas farak nahi padta. Kyu ke main ne apni puri koshish ki thi. Ye update almost 6K Words ka tha umeed karta hu ap ko update pasand aya ho ga target hamara wohi hai 130 Likes ke liye ab milte hai agle update per aur tab tak ke liye, Sayonara!!!]
Mast update dia hai bhai...next arc ka intezar rahega....
maza aa gaya
Super update
Zabardast update
Nice update
Super update hai Bhai
Super update bro
But koi muze batayega 6 core kahase aye aur spirit core chod ke ye naya mist one kaise master bana![]()
Very nice Update Bhai
Ohhh bhai maza aagya
Ab arrav apni full power mein haina ?
So its the end of this extraordinary arc .
Aarav has cleared 34th level of apex tower in 2 months that's impressive usko aur bhi kam samay lagta agar travel distance aur monsters quantity ke bajay quality mein hote to . Monster numbers mein jyada hai par power mein kam kyonki aarav ne prison guard ko defeat kiya hua hai uske level ka monster shayad hi hoga. Let's see.
Clan summit ho chuka hai and as always fire clan winner hai jabtak spirit clan participate nahi karegi .last mein naye clan ka intro "righteous clan" that sounds astonishing .clan ke elders whoa chun chun ke qi users aaye hai is clan mein aakash, barbie, yoo jung . Par Aarav ka kya role hai is clan mein ye nahi show kiya hai aapne .
At last Aarav's entry with Dragonic Overload and a new body of his father that's something no one has expected.kim min soo ki fat gayi hogi.
Elite guild ka bhi scene hai jo pehle kisi update mein nahi dikha that's something new .
Last mein soul aur sushant ka convo about system for vansh ye to kabhi socha na tha .
Aakash body rejected system how is this possible .aakash is story mein sabse surprising aur secretive character hai iske raaz bahut sare hai jaise ki aakash ne elite guild ke top elites ko mar dala on his own or say with Veer but no one knows how.
Update was amazing as always .waiting for new arc and its blockbuster starting with Aarav's presence at clan summit,and some action.
Nice update
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Bhai kya hi jabardast update diya hai ekdum awesome update
ab aarav apni full power me hai ab fight scene dekhne me maja aayega
Aur ek naya clan bhi bana liya hai Righteous clan jiske sabhi elder chun chun kar rakhe hai jese yoo-jung aakash barbie aur akir me arav ki kya hi jabardast entry huyi hai uske hi father Avinash ki body me so- hyun ki pat kar hath me aa gayi hogi
Or akhir me aakash ki body ne system ko reject kar diya
Ab eagerly waiting for next arc
Bahut hi shandaar or powerfull updated bro
Excellent update bhai![]()
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Yeah mujhe pahile doubt tha Aakash Sayani itna strongfull hokar syatem owner kyu nhi hai.
Aab maza ayega ladai dekhne main the most powerful person Aarav Arya.
Humesha ki tarah mast mazedaar ek number update brother.
बेहतरीन उम्दा
Masterful update, dear bro, congrats
Gajab shandaar update
Dhamakedaar update tha, Bhai, Dhanyavad. Aapka agla awesome update ka intezaar rahega Besabri se hamein, Bhai
Dhamakedaar update tha, Bhai, Dhanyavad. Aapka agla awesome update ka intezaar rahega Besabri se hamein, Bhai
awesome update bro
Wow first of all congratulations for the completion of yet another ARC. jaisay naam hai waisay hi is ARC me kafi bonds Bane kafi purane characters ki entry Hui kuch dushman khatam huay.
Arav ke parents ki kahani samne aayi. Urvi ke sath bonds change huay to singh parivar ke sath connection baney. Akash wapas Aya and Vansh se revenge pura hua. Vanishka wapas aayi.
Aur sath me aaya Naya challenge fire clan leader.
Details review baad me doonga dear but bohat khoob likha aapne specially Arav ki entry as a Avinash. Kia hi dashing entry thee wow maza aa gaya. Ab dekhtey hai Naya clan kia rang dikhaya hai.
Next arc jaisa title hai it's a carnival of death aur naam ki tarah yaha kafi khoon bahne wala hai aur lagta hai next time Arav bhi shayad as a competitor ban ke aaye uske ander provided woh solo leveling kar sakey.
Most important bro. Concentrate on your exams we will co-operate with you for a weekly update but exams ke baad sari bhar pai chahiye.
Mind-blowing and mind-boggling update dear bro, phew.............----- dimaag ke parkache hi uda diya aapne toh --- what superlative writing skills hai aapki--- Maan Gaye hum toh that you belong to a separate special cadre / level / genre which only a few handful have attained, out of sheer grit and guts. Congratulations, dear bro and thank-you for this fantabulous update. Expecting Aarav to create magic in Avinash Aarya's avatar in clan's summit - understand now why Aarav purchased 2 body reconstruction skills , wow, that was the masterstroke/masterpuch that you saved till the right time to deliver - Maan Gaye aapko, Bhai. Expecting more lethal dose of action from your upcoming awesome updates - you were right in saying to one of your readers - if my memory is right - may be it was in an answer to a query from Misty Vixen - that you stated your fans highly prefer Action than insipid sex - you wereright - the thrills that keep our adrenaline pumping hard cannot be in any manner whatsoever compared with anything, least of all, sex. Hats off to you, dear bro for constantly delivering us, such hair raising high octane updates. Still in awe, maybe it may take much longer time to get over it. Expecting another round of these fantabulous updates from your side from the forthcoming update onwards, dear bro. Regards.
Meri Dil mein yeh savaal thi par pooch nahi paaya - mujhe mere savaal ka jawab mil Gaya - Dhanyavad Raju0053 Bhai ko yehi savaal poochne ke liye
Bhai - yeh gif bahut hi badiya musibat hai hamare liye Kyun ki mod dwara mujhe warn kiya Gaya tha ki child porn illegal hai - tabhi Werewolf Bhai ne mujhe samjaya tha ki gifs me underage boy ya girl hue toh, use kabhi na use karne mein hi apni bhalayi hai. Main bhi aapko yeh hi baat Bata Raha hoon
Who was this Lady?
Thanks for acknowledging me lol. Yeah, I'm still in the early phase of the story so I can't comment on how sweet it gets later...but the start is absolutely stupendous.
Will try to catch up to the latest updates soon!
nice update
Nice update
what a update bro maaz aaa gaya
Keep it up
Waiting for next
Nice update
I really dont know about it....... Thik hai aage se dhyan rakhugaa.........Baki GIFs to use kar sakte hai na.![]()
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I really dont know about it....... Thik hai aage se dhyan rakhugaa.........Baki GIFs to use kar sakte hai na.![]()
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Nice update
Awesome update and nice story
Nice update
Awesome update
Superb update bro
Good keep it up and exam ko exam ki tarah rakhana koi tension mat lena it's just a exam
Bhai one night is sufficient don't worry mene bhi aise hi padhi ki hai
Bahut badhiya update
1. Idhar michel ko becky keh raha ha ki arav apex tower clear kar sakta ha ya nahi udhar arav ke liye to ye koi badi bat nahi ha usne prison me 113 years survive kiye ha to apex tower to uske liye kuchh bhi nahi wo to time jyada le raha ha isliye arav nikal gaya udhar se isi se andaja lagaya jaa sakta ha ki arav kitna powerful ha
2. Idhar carnival of death ka invitation aa gaya ha kisi Player ko jo ki ise maje me le raha ha lekin michel serius ha iske bare me lekin ye invitation kisne diya ye suspence ha or naam se hi pata lag raha ha mout ka invitation ha ye
3. Idhar kim min soo full attitude me aya ha Hiroshi ne bhi use avinash ki yad dilakar uske jakhm khured diye lekin kim min soo full attitude me ha kyonki use pata ha ki ab avinash nahi rsha to ab kon rak sakta ha use or usi ki tarah nikla uske clan ka ladka sentigo jo power ke ghamand me ha jo ki jald hi tutne wala ha
4. Lagta ha ye jo meeting chal rahi thi wo elite guild ki hi chal rahi thi jisme arav ke uper najar rakhe hue the or akash ke bhi jinda hone ki khabar ne unko sochne per majbur kar diya or akash ne inke one ko haraya tha matlab ki strongest member ko akash ne pehle hi nipta diya jise sunker hi sab guild players ke rongte khade ho gaye ki akash jaisa insan one ko kaise hara sakta ha or ye jis arav per najar rakhe hue han wo lagta ha ayush ha kyonki arav to udhar ha hi nahi
5. Idhar jaise jaise tsubame arav ke clan ke elders ko introduce karwa rahi thi waise waise hi sabke hosh udte ja rahe the in sab clan members ke hi clan ke logon ne dusri clan join kar li barbie ko dekhkar darkness clan ke leader ki fati ir barbie to waise hi darkness clan se nafrat karta ha or aksh ke time per bhi sabke hosh ud gaye ki akash kaise qi user ha or you jung ki entry per to kim min soo ke hosh ud gaye pehle hi spirit clan ke logon ko dekhkar iska dimag kharab ho raha tha or uski khud ki beti bhi uske against ha to khud ko rok nahi paya ye
Min soo ne to sidha sentigo ko hamla karne ke liye bol diya or sentigo bhi apne power ke nashe andha honer you jung per talwar tan di ki jaise use koi rok nah sakta or fir entry hui apne arav ki wo bhi avinash ke form me sidha presence se hi sentigo ghutno per or min soo bhi jahan kuchh jyada hi uchhal raha tha avinash ko dekhkar use vishwas nahi hua use laga tha ki uske bete ne avinash ko mar diya lekin us time bhi avinash ko dhoke se haraya tha soo hyn ne nahi to us time bhi kuchh nahi kar sakta tha agar unke bich ladayi hoti to avinsh ko dekhkar min soo ka para high ho gaya ha ab ayega maja lagta ha arva ne avinash ka roop soo hyun ko bahar nikalne ke liye kiya ha kyonki avinash ne hi uski maa ko haraya tha to usko gussa dilakar soo hyun ko bahar nikalna chahta ha
6. Sentigo ne kya soch kar yoo jung per talwar rakh di ki wo you jung ko hara dega agar arav ata bhi nahi to bhi yoo jung sentigo ko harakar mar deti sari hekdi nikal jati iski or min soo bhi bas apne bete ke dam per hi itna uchhalta ha ki uske bete se jyada powerful koi nahi lekin use pata nahi ah uske bete ka bhi bap wapis aa gaya ha jiski power ki koi limit nahi ha soo hyun vs arav jab hoga tab maja ayega dono hi revenge ki agg me jal rahe han khaskar arav wo to soo hyun se ladne ke liye tadap raha hoga
Ek bat Ela Öztürk iska jikar kab hoga dobara story me isne avinash ko kyon dhoka diya tha jabki avinash use apni beti samjhta tha iska bhi raj jaldi khulna chahiye or kahin isko bhi to tapka to nahi diya kahin waise lag nahi raha wo bhi player ha ek tarah or healer bhi ha
7. Idhar last me sushant ne kaha ha ki arav pura monster ha sach hi kaha ha avinash ka roop lekar min soo ko jala raha ha title sahi ha story revenge ek dam sweet tarike se lega arav tadpa tadpa kar marega sabko or idhar soul ne sushant ko search karne ke liye kaha ki vansh system choce thi ya nahi or fir bomb fut gaya system to akash ke liye tha lekin vansh ko mil gaya lekin akash ko system na kyon nahi chuna jabki wo to full capable tha system ke liye
8 idhar last me arav bhai ke states itne high ha ki agar bahar walon ko pata pad jaye to unka kaleja muh me aa jaye or maje ki bat ha wo ruk hi nahi rahe or ek nahi bahut se clans ki qi ke core ha uske pas matlab ki wo sabki ability ko istemal kar sakta ha yahi to arav ko main character banati ha
Great update, a little complex but very informative. Kafi baatein khul kar saamne aa gayi.
Samay kam hone ke karan Aarav ko 34th Floor se hi wapis lautna pada. Kuch samay aur hota toh weh shayad apna level 300 tak pahuncha kar sab stats unseal kar leta. Khair yeh mauka baad me bhi milega.
7 maheene baad Wind clan ne Summit organize ki thi. Jahan Wind Clan isko ek oppurtunity samajh kar apni clan ki kshamta ko dikhane ki soch raha tha, wahin par Fire Clan ka leader Kim Min-Soo iss mauke ko khona nahi chahta tha aur bache huye clans ko apne saath mila kar Wind Clan ko neecha dikhana chahta tha aur usko kamzor karna chahta tha jisase aage chal kar koi bhi uski authority ko challenge nahi kare.
Idhar Elite Guilds ke baare me bhi pata laga, weh kis tarah se previous one ke katil ko dhund rahi hai. Bass ek baat nahi samajh me aayi ki pehle kaha tha ki inke jo Elderrs marr gaye the unko inhone dusron se fill nahi kiya tha per yahan par to sab the, keval Eleven ko chhod kar. jo Summit me lad raha tha.
Idhar Urvi ki Akash ke liye chinta emotional thi, lekin usko shayad nahi pata ki Akash to 4 saal baad hi coma se bahar aa gaya tha aur apni strength bada raha hoga.
Ab samajh me aaya ki Aarav ne Meera se kya maanga tha. Uske andar Mist Core ko active karna aur Derek ko bhi help karna. Agar Derek Demon Wolf ki tarah 2 mahine me paida ho sakta hai to unhi ki tarah grow bhi kar raha hoga. Is samay tak to usko pura grow karke ek jawan ladka ho jana chahiye tha.
Aarav ne Association ke liye barrier bhi bana diya aur shayad ab weh uske ander aur bahar jane ko bhi control kar payega. Lekin yahan par agle arc COD (Carnival of Death) ki neev bhi rakh di hai. Akhir is card ko bhejne wale kaun hain.
Jab Aarav ne 'Body Reconstruction Card' use kara toh pehle laga ki weh apni identity ko hide kar raha hai, lekin weh Avinash ka chehra le lega, yeh to master stroke tha. Bahut log to Avinash ko dekh kar hi Kim Min-Hoo ka saath chhod denge. Aur kya hi dhaansu entry maari hai.
Jab Tsubame ne nayi 'Righteous Clan' ko introduce kiya, jo Summit organize karne ka ek aur reason tha, to sabse jyada Akash, Saanvi aur Barbie ko dekh kar sab chauk gaye honge. Ooper se Avinash...
Last me Aarav ke stats ko dekh kar to maza aa gaya. Bass, Level thoda aur badha le. 'Will to live' bhi 76% ho gayi hai. Aur 6 cores...
Soul, Wind ke baare me to pata tha, Fire Core shayad Yoo-Jung se aur Darkness Barbie se, Mist Meera se, lekin Light Core kahan se aa gaya. Aur sabse badi baat abhi 3 cores khali hain, shayad baad me yeh bhi develop ho jayenge.
Ab sab khul ke saamne aa gaya hai. Akash ke aane ke baad Elite Guilds kya karti hai kyonki unko Akash par hi jyada shak hai. Aur Aarav ke reconstruct kab tak kaam karta hai...
Last me, Kim Soo-Hyun abhi tak saamne kyon nahi aaya...
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Bhai mene ye story 4 din me pad li he
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Bhut hi mazedar khani he
Awesome Boht shandar update bro hope next arc jald parhne ko mile ga is time is platform par just apki story ka intezar rehta Kamal ka likhty ho Maza ata hai kafi apki story ko parhne me keep it up bro Best wishes for you and best of luck upcoming arc and pls request hai story complete Karna bich na chorna aksr Jo stories best hoti hain wo is platform par adhori pari hai apse umeed hai ap pora karo ge ...................
update kb dye rahy ho bhai
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Update please Bhai![]()
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Ab to next Saturday Tak he update aayega
Awesome update bro
LIKES MORE LEFT IN TWO DAYS
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Yes, , you can, dear bro.
Aisa thodi hi hota hai 132 like karne wale kya kare unhone ne apna pyar diya na bina kisi shart ke aise nahi chalta pura week wait Kiya hai
Update new Saturday ko aye gi
Ap like k sath reply(comments) ka option b rakh lian jo like karian gaye wo sath mian reply b karian gaye
Abi jasye 97 update k bad Mera khud ka 4 reply ha
To like k ilawa reply ka target b sath rakh saktye hian
Bhai exam ho gaya kya
Sorry bro I had waited for update now you update when ever you like thanx for till now update and reply
Waiting
Intejar
Hello everybody I'm new here kya koi mujhe btaega ki post(update) pr like kese krte h
Thank you dear
Awesome update bhai![]()
First like bohat stories per haiLekin last like kisi per nahi hai
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aj Saturday hai .. any update??!!
Bhai like ka Target pura nahi hua isliye update nahi aaya
Bhai update milega kya??
अपडेट
Story me dobara vansh ki entry karwane ki soch rahe hai kya
Update bro
Next update ka intazar ha
Like goal complete karne ka bawa
waiting for update bhai
Bro update please
bhai chota update hai ... dil maange more
Mind-blowing
waiting for your next update
14 more to get new update .writer bro you must have to give banger this time as target has taken 2 weeks
waiting bhai
Bhai update kab doge??
Update kab tak ayega
Bhai update to Saturday ko he aayega aur wo bhi tab aayega jab likes ka Target done ho jayega
Silent
Readers active ho jaye to updates 5 din ke gap par milne lagega par pata nahi kis mitti ke bane hai wo ki login karke target complete karne mein **nd fat jati hai
किधर है
Update kab tak aaye ga
अपडेट
11 readers ko lao re kahin dusre thread se pakad keye to 1 week ka free mein gap ho gya
Theek hai na bhai next week dekhte hai writer ke shook hai pure hone do na
Dheere dheere mahine me sirf 2 update denge bus. Werewolf ke raster pe hai ye bhi.
For the likes target...I liked it even tho I can't read it now...but I have a doubt...how many updates will be there in this story?
Kyuki jitni bhi maine system wali story padhi hai kabhi khtm hi nhi hote...hope you have ending planned![]()
Awesome update .waiting for next banger
story bahut acchi he
Update bhut slow he
Superb, mind-blowing , Fantastic story bro
Mene story read ki agar fir bhi comment na karata to ye galat hota jyada to kuch likh nahi sakata lekin story sach me kamaal ki h
Har ek update m suspense ke sath kholte or banate najar aaye h
Power ko kitne ache se dikhaya h Qi wala to mast tha iske bare me mai jyada to nhi janata lekin mere ko acha laga
Aapne sach me bahut achi story likhi h
keep going bro
Bhai update kb tk de rhe ho
Ab sbrr nhi ho rha jldi se update de do
Ok bro we are waiting
Eagerly waiting for tonight bro .
5 likes hi reh gye hai goal ke pura hone mein
waiting bahi
Matlab aaj nahi aapayega UPDATE???![]()
I love you
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Har baar update ke time yhi hota h
Koi baat nahi bhai bahane mat banao agle Saturday de dena hum wait kar lenge.....
Bhai next Saturday bhi mushkil he hai
Abhi Monday ya Tuesday Tak phone repair ho aayega.
Uske baad likhna suru karenge aur uske baad photo editing hogi to jisme time to lagega he
To update next se next Saturday Tak he possible ho payega.
waiting bhai
Bro update kb tk doge me ek silent reader tha apki Story ke like ke goal pure krne or apki story psnd aane ki wjh se me samne aaya pr ab ap update dene ke bjaye bahaane pr bahaane de rhe ho
Bro update kb tk doge me ek silent reader tha apki Story ke like ke goal pure krne or apki story psnd aane ki wjh se me samne aaya pr ab ap update dene ke bjaye bahaane pr bahaane de rhe ho
Waiting for your update bro
Thanks bro waiting
Thank you bro
Bhai hum log 16 DAYSwait kiye hai to at least 10k+ words ka Update to hona hi chahiye.............Take more time and give a wonderful UPDATE on
Saturday.
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ok waiting bhai
700 pages poore huye isliye update jaldi dena chahiye ....
aa jao bhai
Congrats bro for the great 700 pages journey
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Congratulations for completing 700 pages bhai![]()
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Bhai update please![]()
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Yaha writer hi gayab ho gya h lagta h mobile phir se kharab ho gya....
waiting bhai
Waiting
Aadmi ki pehchan uski juban se hoti he bro
Don't disappoint us
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Waiting
Bhai kya hua?
Update dedo bro
Intejar
Kitne bahane h bhai aapke paas....
Itna bahana banana bhi sahi nahi h
Mast update dia hai bhai...next arc ka intezar rahega....
maza aa gaya
Super update
Zabardast update
Nice update
Super update hai Bhai
Super update bro
But koi muze batayega 6 core kahase aye aur spirit core chod ke ye naya mist one kaise master bana![]()
Very nice Update Bhai
Ohhh bhai maza aagya
Ab arrav apni full power mein haina ?
So its the end of this extraordinary arc .
Aarav has cleared 34th level of apex tower in 2 months that's impressive usko aur bhi kam samay lagta agar travel distance aur monsters quantity ke bajay quality mein hote to . Monster numbers mein jyada hai par power mein kam kyonki aarav ne prison guard ko defeat kiya hua hai uske level ka monster shayad hi hoga. Let's see.
Clan summit ho chuka hai and as always fire clan winner hai jabtak spirit clan participate nahi karegi .last mein naye clan ka intro "righteous clan" that sounds astonishing .clan ke elders whoa chun chun ke qi users aaye hai is clan mein aakash, barbie, yoo jung . Par Aarav ka kya role hai is clan mein ye nahi show kiya hai aapne .
At last Aarav's entry with Dragonic Overload and a new body of his father that's something no one has expected.kim min soo ki fat gayi hogi.
Elite guild ka bhi scene hai jo pehle kisi update mein nahi dikha that's something new .
Last mein soul aur sushant ka convo about system for vansh ye to kabhi socha na tha .
Aakash body rejected system how is this possible .aakash is story mein sabse surprising aur secretive character hai iske raaz bahut sare hai jaise ki aakash ne elite guild ke top elites ko mar dala on his own or say with Veer but no one knows how.
Update was amazing as always .waiting for new arc and its blockbuster starting with Aarav's presence at clan summit,and some action.
Nice update
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Bhai kya hi jabardast update diya hai ekdum awesome update
ab aarav apni full power me hai ab fight scene dekhne me maja aayega
Aur ek naya clan bhi bana liya hai Righteous clan jiske sabhi elder chun chun kar rakhe hai jese yoo-jung aakash barbie aur akir me arav ki kya hi jabardast entry huyi hai uske hi father Avinash ki body me so- hyun ki pat kar hath me aa gayi hogi
Or akhir me aakash ki body ne system ko reject kar diya
Ab eagerly waiting for next arc
Bahut hi shandaar or powerfull updated bro
Excellent update bhai![]()
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Yeah mujhe pahile doubt tha Aakash Sayani itna strongfull hokar syatem owner kyu nhi hai.
Aab maza ayega ladai dekhne main the most powerful person Aarav Arya.
Humesha ki tarah mast mazedaar ek number update brother.
बेहतरीन उम्दा
Masterful update, dear bro, congrats
Gajab shandaar update
Dhamakedaar update tha, Bhai, Dhanyavad. Aapka agla awesome update ka intezaar rahega Besabri se hamein, Bhai
Dhamakedaar update tha, Bhai, Dhanyavad. Aapka agla awesome update ka intezaar rahega Besabri se hamein, Bhai
awesome update bro
Wow first of all congratulations for the completion of yet another ARC. jaisay naam hai waisay hi is ARC me kafi bonds Bane kafi purane characters ki entry Hui kuch dushman khatam huay.
Arav ke parents ki kahani samne aayi. Urvi ke sath bonds change huay to singh parivar ke sath connection baney. Akash wapas Aya and Vansh se revenge pura hua. Vanishka wapas aayi.
Aur sath me aaya Naya challenge fire clan leader.
Details review baad me doonga dear but bohat khoob likha aapne specially Arav ki entry as a Avinash. Kia hi dashing entry thee wow maza aa gaya. Ab dekhtey hai Naya clan kia rang dikhaya hai.
Next arc jaisa title hai it's a carnival of death aur naam ki tarah yaha kafi khoon bahne wala hai aur lagta hai next time Arav bhi shayad as a competitor ban ke aaye uske ander provided woh solo leveling kar sakey.
Most important bro. Concentrate on your exams we will co-operate with you for a weekly update but exams ke baad sari bhar pai chahiye.
Mind-blowing and mind-boggling update dear bro, phew.............----- dimaag ke parkache hi uda diya aapne toh --- what superlative writing skills hai aapki--- Maan Gaye hum toh that you belong to a separate special cadre / level / genre which only a few handful have attained, out of sheer grit and guts. Congratulations, dear bro and thank-you for this fantabulous update. Expecting Aarav to create magic in Avinash Aarya's avatar in clan's summit - understand now why Aarav purchased 2 body reconstruction skills , wow, that was the masterstroke/masterpuch that you saved till the right time to deliver - Maan Gaye aapko, Bhai. Expecting more lethal dose of action from your upcoming awesome updates - you were right in saying to one of your readers - if my memory is right - may be it was in an answer to a query from Misty Vixen - that you stated your fans highly prefer Action than insipid sex - you wereright - the thrills that keep our adrenaline pumping hard cannot be in any manner whatsoever compared with anything, least of all, sex. Hats off to you, dear bro for constantly delivering us, such hair raising high octane updates. Still in awe, maybe it may take much longer time to get over it. Expecting another round of these fantabulous updates from your side from the forthcoming update onwards, dear bro. Regards.
Meri Dil mein yeh savaal thi par pooch nahi paaya - mujhe mere savaal ka jawab mil Gaya - Dhanyavad Raju0053 Bhai ko yehi savaal poochne ke liye
Bhai - yeh gif bahut hi badiya musibat hai hamare liye Kyun ki mod dwara mujhe warn kiya Gaya tha ki child porn illegal hai - tabhi Werewolf Bhai ne mujhe samjaya tha ki gifs me underage boy ya girl hue toh, use kabhi na use karne mein hi apni bhalayi hai. Main bhi aapko yeh hi baat Bata Raha hoon
Who was this Lady?
Thanks for acknowledging me lol. Yeah, I'm still in the early phase of the story so I can't comment on how sweet it gets later...but the start is absolutely stupendous.
Will try to catch up to the latest updates soon!
nice update
Nice update
what a update bro maaz aaa gaya
Keep it up
Waiting for next
Nice update
I really dont know about it....... Thik hai aage se dhyan rakhugaa.........Baki GIFs to use kar sakte hai na.![]()
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I really dont know about it....... Thik hai aage se dhyan rakhugaa.........Baki GIFs to use kar sakte hai na.![]()
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Nice update
Awesome update and nice story
Nice update
Awesome update
Superb update bro
Good keep it up and exam ko exam ki tarah rakhana koi tension mat lena it's just a exam
Bhai one night is sufficient don't worry mene bhi aise hi padhi ki hai
Bahut badhiya update
1. Idhar michel ko becky keh raha ha ki arav apex tower clear kar sakta ha ya nahi udhar arav ke liye to ye koi badi bat nahi ha usne prison me 113 years survive kiye ha to apex tower to uske liye kuchh bhi nahi wo to time jyada le raha ha isliye arav nikal gaya udhar se isi se andaja lagaya jaa sakta ha ki arav kitna powerful ha
2. Idhar carnival of death ka invitation aa gaya ha kisi Player ko jo ki ise maje me le raha ha lekin michel serius ha iske bare me lekin ye invitation kisne diya ye suspence ha or naam se hi pata lag raha ha mout ka invitation ha ye
3. Idhar kim min soo full attitude me aya ha Hiroshi ne bhi use avinash ki yad dilakar uske jakhm khured diye lekin kim min soo full attitude me ha kyonki use pata ha ki ab avinash nahi rsha to ab kon rak sakta ha use or usi ki tarah nikla uske clan ka ladka sentigo jo power ke ghamand me ha jo ki jald hi tutne wala ha
4. Lagta ha ye jo meeting chal rahi thi wo elite guild ki hi chal rahi thi jisme arav ke uper najar rakhe hue the or akash ke bhi jinda hone ki khabar ne unko sochne per majbur kar diya or akash ne inke one ko haraya tha matlab ki strongest member ko akash ne pehle hi nipta diya jise sunker hi sab guild players ke rongte khade ho gaye ki akash jaisa insan one ko kaise hara sakta ha or ye jis arav per najar rakhe hue han wo lagta ha ayush ha kyonki arav to udhar ha hi nahi
5. Idhar jaise jaise tsubame arav ke clan ke elders ko introduce karwa rahi thi waise waise hi sabke hosh udte ja rahe the in sab clan members ke hi clan ke logon ne dusri clan join kar li barbie ko dekhkar darkness clan ke leader ki fati ir barbie to waise hi darkness clan se nafrat karta ha or aksh ke time per bhi sabke hosh ud gaye ki akash kaise qi user ha or you jung ki entry per to kim min soo ke hosh ud gaye pehle hi spirit clan ke logon ko dekhkar iska dimag kharab ho raha tha or uski khud ki beti bhi uske against ha to khud ko rok nahi paya ye
Min soo ne to sidha sentigo ko hamla karne ke liye bol diya or sentigo bhi apne power ke nashe andha honer you jung per talwar tan di ki jaise use koi rok nah sakta or fir entry hui apne arav ki wo bhi avinash ke form me sidha presence se hi sentigo ghutno per or min soo bhi jahan kuchh jyada hi uchhal raha tha avinash ko dekhkar use vishwas nahi hua use laga tha ki uske bete ne avinash ko mar diya lekin us time bhi avinash ko dhoke se haraya tha soo hyn ne nahi to us time bhi kuchh nahi kar sakta tha agar unke bich ladayi hoti to avinsh ko dekhkar min soo ka para high ho gaya ha ab ayega maja lagta ha arva ne avinash ka roop soo hyun ko bahar nikalne ke liye kiya ha kyonki avinash ne hi uski maa ko haraya tha to usko gussa dilakar soo hyun ko bahar nikalna chahta ha
6. Sentigo ne kya soch kar yoo jung per talwar rakh di ki wo you jung ko hara dega agar arav ata bhi nahi to bhi yoo jung sentigo ko harakar mar deti sari hekdi nikal jati iski or min soo bhi bas apne bete ke dam per hi itna uchhalta ha ki uske bete se jyada powerful koi nahi lekin use pata nahi ah uske bete ka bhi bap wapis aa gaya ha jiski power ki koi limit nahi ha soo hyun vs arav jab hoga tab maja ayega dono hi revenge ki agg me jal rahe han khaskar arav wo to soo hyun se ladne ke liye tadap raha hoga
Ek bat Ela Öztürk iska jikar kab hoga dobara story me isne avinash ko kyon dhoka diya tha jabki avinash use apni beti samjhta tha iska bhi raj jaldi khulna chahiye or kahin isko bhi to tapka to nahi diya kahin waise lag nahi raha wo bhi player ha ek tarah or healer bhi ha
7. Idhar last me sushant ne kaha ha ki arav pura monster ha sach hi kaha ha avinash ka roop lekar min soo ko jala raha ha title sahi ha story revenge ek dam sweet tarike se lega arav tadpa tadpa kar marega sabko or idhar soul ne sushant ko search karne ke liye kaha ki vansh system choce thi ya nahi or fir bomb fut gaya system to akash ke liye tha lekin vansh ko mil gaya lekin akash ko system na kyon nahi chuna jabki wo to full capable tha system ke liye
8 idhar last me arav bhai ke states itne high ha ki agar bahar walon ko pata pad jaye to unka kaleja muh me aa jaye or maje ki bat ha wo ruk hi nahi rahe or ek nahi bahut se clans ki qi ke core ha uske pas matlab ki wo sabki ability ko istemal kar sakta ha yahi to arav ko main character banati ha
Great update, a little complex but very informative. Kafi baatein khul kar saamne aa gayi.
Samay kam hone ke karan Aarav ko 34th Floor se hi wapis lautna pada. Kuch samay aur hota toh weh shayad apna level 300 tak pahuncha kar sab stats unseal kar leta. Khair yeh mauka baad me bhi milega.
7 maheene baad Wind clan ne Summit organize ki thi. Jahan Wind Clan isko ek oppurtunity samajh kar apni clan ki kshamta ko dikhane ki soch raha tha, wahin par Fire Clan ka leader Kim Min-Soo iss mauke ko khona nahi chahta tha aur bache huye clans ko apne saath mila kar Wind Clan ko neecha dikhana chahta tha aur usko kamzor karna chahta tha jisase aage chal kar koi bhi uski authority ko challenge nahi kare.
Idhar Elite Guilds ke baare me bhi pata laga, weh kis tarah se previous one ke katil ko dhund rahi hai. Bass ek baat nahi samajh me aayi ki pehle kaha tha ki inke jo Elderrs marr gaye the unko inhone dusron se fill nahi kiya tha per yahan par to sab the, keval Eleven ko chhod kar. jo Summit me lad raha tha.
Idhar Urvi ki Akash ke liye chinta emotional thi, lekin usko shayad nahi pata ki Akash to 4 saal baad hi coma se bahar aa gaya tha aur apni strength bada raha hoga.
Ab samajh me aaya ki Aarav ne Meera se kya maanga tha. Uske andar Mist Core ko active karna aur Derek ko bhi help karna. Agar Derek Demon Wolf ki tarah 2 mahine me paida ho sakta hai to unhi ki tarah grow bhi kar raha hoga. Is samay tak to usko pura grow karke ek jawan ladka ho jana chahiye tha.
Aarav ne Association ke liye barrier bhi bana diya aur shayad ab weh uske ander aur bahar jane ko bhi control kar payega. Lekin yahan par agle arc COD (Carnival of Death) ki neev bhi rakh di hai. Akhir is card ko bhejne wale kaun hain.
Jab Aarav ne 'Body Reconstruction Card' use kara toh pehle laga ki weh apni identity ko hide kar raha hai, lekin weh Avinash ka chehra le lega, yeh to master stroke tha. Bahut log to Avinash ko dekh kar hi Kim Min-Hoo ka saath chhod denge. Aur kya hi dhaansu entry maari hai.
Jab Tsubame ne nayi 'Righteous Clan' ko introduce kiya, jo Summit organize karne ka ek aur reason tha, to sabse jyada Akash, Saanvi aur Barbie ko dekh kar sab chauk gaye honge. Ooper se Avinash...
Last me Aarav ke stats ko dekh kar to maza aa gaya. Bass, Level thoda aur badha le. 'Will to live' bhi 76% ho gayi hai. Aur 6 cores...
Soul, Wind ke baare me to pata tha, Fire Core shayad Yoo-Jung se aur Darkness Barbie se, Mist Meera se, lekin Light Core kahan se aa gaya. Aur sabse badi baat abhi 3 cores khali hain, shayad baad me yeh bhi develop ho jayenge.
Ab sab khul ke saamne aa gaya hai. Akash ke aane ke baad Elite Guilds kya karti hai kyonki unko Akash par hi jyada shak hai. Aur Aarav ke reconstruct kab tak kaam karta hai...
Last me, Kim Soo-Hyun abhi tak saamne kyon nahi aaya...
Silent readers ziada hian
Ap Reply (comments) ka option b sath rakh saktye hian like k option k sath.
300 comments har update k liae
bhai Vanshika Or arav Ko short me Kyu NipTa Diya UnKa Intimate Seen......
Bohot khub likhte ho.
Bhai mene ye story 4 din me pad li he
Lat lag gayi
Bhut hi mazedar khani he
Awesome Boht shandar update bro hope next arc jald parhne ko mile ga is time is platform par just apki story ka intezar rehta Kamal ka likhty ho Maza ata hai kafi apki story ko parhne me keep it up bro Best wishes for you and best of luck upcoming arc and pls request hai story complete Karna bich na chorna aksr Jo stories best hoti hain wo is platform par adhori pari hai apse umeed hai ap pora karo ge ...................
update kb dye rahy ho bhai
Like ka Target jaldi pura do warna update next Saturday ko aayega
Update please Bhai![]()
oo
Ab to next Saturday Tak he update aayega
Awesome update bro
LIKES MORE LEFT IN TWO DAYS
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Yes, , you can, dear bro.
Aisa thodi hi hota hai 132 like karne wale kya kare unhone ne apna pyar diya na bina kisi shart ke aise nahi chalta pura week wait Kiya hai
Update new Saturday ko aye gi
Ap like k sath reply(comments) ka option b rakh lian jo like karian gaye wo sath mian reply b karian gaye
Abi jasye 97 update k bad Mera khud ka 4 reply ha
To like k ilawa reply ka target b sath rakh saktye hian
Bhai exam ho gaya kya
Sorry bro I had waited for update now you update when ever you like thanx for till now update and reply
Waiting
Intejar
Hello everybody I'm new here kya koi mujhe btaega ki post(update) pr like kese krte h
Thank you dear
Awesome update bhai![]()
First like bohat stories per haiLekin last like kisi per nahi hai
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aj Saturday hai .. any update??!!
Bhai like ka Target pura nahi hua isliye update nahi aaya
Bhai update milega kya??
अपडेट
Story me dobara vansh ki entry karwane ki soch rahe hai kya
Update bro
Next update ka intazar ha
Like goal complete karne ka bawa
waiting for update bhai
Bro update please
bhai chota update hai ... dil maange more
Mind-blowing
waiting for your next update
14 more to get new update .writer bro you must have to give banger this time as target has taken 2 weeks
waiting bhai
Bhai update kab doge??
Update kab tak ayega
Bhai update to Saturday ko he aayega aur wo bhi tab aayega jab likes ka Target done ho jayega
Silent
Readers active ho jaye to updates 5 din ke gap par milne lagega par pata nahi kis mitti ke bane hai wo ki login karke target complete karne mein **nd fat jati hai
किधर है
Update kab tak aaye ga
अपडेट
11 readers ko lao re kahin dusre thread se pakad keye to 1 week ka free mein gap ho gya
Theek hai na bhai next week dekhte hai writer ke shook hai pure hone do na
Dheere dheere mahine me sirf 2 update denge bus. Werewolf ke raster pe hai ye bhi.
For the likes target...I liked it even tho I can't read it now...but I have a doubt...how many updates will be there in this story?
Kyuki jitni bhi maine system wali story padhi hai kabhi khtm hi nhi hote...hope you have ending planned![]()
Awesome update .waiting for next banger
story bahut acchi he
Update bhut slow he
Superb, mind-blowing , Fantastic story bro
Mene story read ki agar fir bhi comment na karata to ye galat hota jyada to kuch likh nahi sakata lekin story sach me kamaal ki h
Har ek update m suspense ke sath kholte or banate najar aaye h
Power ko kitne ache se dikhaya h Qi wala to mast tha iske bare me mai jyada to nhi janata lekin mere ko acha laga
Aapne sach me bahut achi story likhi h
keep going bro
Bhai update kb tk de rhe ho
Ab sbrr nhi ho rha jldi se update de do
Ok bro we are waiting
Eagerly waiting for tonight bro .
5 likes hi reh gye hai goal ke pura hone mein
waiting bahi
Matlab aaj nahi aapayega UPDATE???![]()
I love you
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Har baar update ke time yhi hota h
Koi baat nahi bhai bahane mat banao agle Saturday de dena hum wait kar lenge.....
Bhai next Saturday bhi mushkil he hai
Abhi Monday ya Tuesday Tak phone repair ho aayega.
Uske baad likhna suru karenge aur uske baad photo editing hogi to jisme time to lagega he
To update next se next Saturday Tak he possible ho payega.
waiting bhai
Bro update kb tk doge me ek silent reader tha apki Story ke like ke goal pure krne or apki story psnd aane ki wjh se me samne aaya pr ab ap update dene ke bjaye bahaane pr bahaane de rhe ho
Bro update kb tk doge me ek silent reader tha apki Story ke like ke goal pure krne or apki story psnd aane ki wjh se me samne aaya pr ab ap update dene ke bjaye bahaane pr bahaane de rhe ho
Waiting for your update bro
Thanks bro waiting
Thank you bro
Bhai hum log 16 DAYSwait kiye hai to at least 10k+ words ka Update to hona hi chahiye.............Take more time and give a wonderful UPDATE on
Saturday.
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ok waiting bhai
700 pages poore huye isliye update jaldi dena chahiye ....
aa jao bhai
Congrats bro for the great 700 pages journey
PAGES COMPLETED![]()
Congratulations for completing 700 pages bhai![]()
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Bhai update please![]()
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Yaha writer hi gayab ho gya h lagta h mobile phir se kharab ho gya....
waiting bhai
Waiting
Aadmi ki pehchan uski juban se hoti he bro
Don't disappoint us
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Waiting
Bhai kya hua?
Update dedo bro
Intejar
Kitne bahane h bhai aapke paas....
Itna bahana banana bhi sahi nahi h
Har baar hagna bhi sahi nahi hota.Kitne bahane h bhai aapke paas....
Itna bahana banana bhi sahi nahi h