Fantasy Vengeance ~ Revenge is sweet [ᏚᎩᏚᎢᎬᎷ]

[Salty~Otaku]

Schedule​

UPDATE#​	DATE​
Update 106​	1st February 11:30 PM​
Update 107​	5th February 11:30 PM​
Update 108​	8th February 11:30 PM​
Update 109​	12th February 11:30 PM​
Update 110​	18th February 11:30 PM​

 

[mistyvixen]

Yes, if you want to

I want but...I have read many in this genre...from likes The Primal Hunter to Mother of Learning...Cradle...so I can predict a lot...I don't want to sugarcoat anything what I find new I'll appreciate it.

Obviously, there are flaws in the first update! aur latest updates ke andar bhi wo flaws abhi bhi hai. I’m more aware of them than anyone else

That's only natural...no author is perfect

Mostly reviews ke andar negative points he hone the aur hote bhi hai! If a review doesn’t point out any negatives, it’s probably full of sugarcoated words

Negative points dikhate hai ke koi kitne deep mein story ko padh rha hai...kyuki koi bhi bina dimag lagaye aur soche toh nhi likh skta yeh... A bit of appreciation is important too!

Lekin wo reviews aur readers bhi utne he prescious hote hai! Unki koshish writer ko motivate rakhne ki hoti hai... Aur sach kahunga ke shuruaat mein mujhe un reviews ki he zaroorat thi

Yup!! Last mein whi tumhe apne writing mein reflect karate hai

Honestly, I prefer comparison reviews over reviews for every single update! I don’t even remember a lot of what I wrote in the first update anymore

Absolutely, ek toh aisa reader chaiye jo honestly apne feeling har update pe de ske

I want to know where I’ve improved, where I still need to work, and which parts were the most interesting

I'll try to cover that soon

Ab tak ki story ke ek overall review ki tarha! I was actually expecting something like that from Samar_Singh since I had pretty high hopes.

Sabki apni pasand hote hai...I like this type of stories jahan action aur external stories pe jayda focus ho... That's why I have a huge crush on Jin from Northern Blade.

But I guess I failed to hold his attention, so he left midway... Again

_ABHAY_Smarty_ ne ek aisa review diya tha! Lekin ab main dhoond ker uska link daalne se raha

Uski post search ker ke daikh lena agar daikhna ho to

Itne mehant kon karega ab

I can’t force anyone to read my story, and I never will! I don’t read many stories myself, and I know that if I read something half-heartedly, I won’t enjoy it or truly understand what the writer was trying to convey.

Maine bhi bahut kam dekhe hai yahan toh...and I started yours because I was familiar with this genre

That’s why I don’t promote my story anymore either

Who likes ads

But I think you want to read it... you’re just not getting the time to do so! Main ek baar puri story padh ker uske baad review dene ke liye he kahunga

You got me. I'm a binge reader...ek ek update padhna toh kabhi nhi...I like to digest whole book in one sitting...

Maybe I can hope for a review like _ABHAY_Smarty_ who knows?

I will read mutilple updates together...like 10 till where the story is now...uske baad catchup kar liya tab aur badha dungi...will this be fine...??

 

[Gaurav1969]

Yes, if you want to

Obviously, there are flaws in the first update! aur latest updates ke andar bhi wo flaws abhi bhi hai. I’m more aware of them than anyone else

Mostly reviews ke andar negative points he hone the aur hote bhi hai! If a review doesn’t point out any negatives, it’s probably full of sugarcoated words

Lekin wo reviews aur readers bhi utne he prescious hote hai! Unki koshish writer ko motivate rakhne ki hoti hai... Aur sach kahunga ke shuruaat mein mujhe un reviews ki he zaroorat thi

Honestly, I prefer comparison reviews over reviews for every single update! I don’t even remember a lot of what I wrote in the first update anymore

I want to know where I’ve improved, where I still need to work, and which parts were the most interesting

Ab tak ki story ke ek overall review ki tarha! I was actually expecting something like that from Samar_Singh since I had pretty high hopes.

But I guess I failed to hold his attention, so he left midway... Again

_ABHAY_Smarty_ ne ek aisa review diya tha! Lekin ab main dhoond ker uska link daalne se raha

Uski post search ker ke daikh lena agar daikhna ho to

I can’t force anyone to read my story, and I never will! I don’t read many stories myself, and I know that if I read something half-heartedly, I won’t enjoy it or truly understand what the writer was trying to convey.

That’s why I don’t promote my story anymore either

But I think you want to read it... you’re just not getting the time to do so! Main ek baar puri story padh ker uske baad review dene ke liye he kahunga

Maybe I can hope for a review like _ABHAY_Smarty_ who knows?

I know about that review it was so fabulous and fantastic that one should take copy of it .there are so many readers and members who have such skills to express each thread of their feelings through words,Samar_Singh and Abhay_Smarty are one of those .
i remember there is a thread which posts his first part as a review of a reader,and really that review was truly magnificient and great and i never saw such review ever .
I am a beginner in this and gaining such skill.and i will be that reader.

 

[Shanu]

Mind-blowing update bhai

 

[_ABHAY_Smarty_]

Yes, if you want to

Obviously, there are flaws in the first update! aur latest updates ke andar bhi wo flaws abhi bhi hai. I’m more aware of them than anyone else

Mostly reviews ke andar negative points he hone the aur hote bhi hai! If a review doesn’t point out any negatives, it’s probably full of sugarcoated words

Lekin wo reviews aur readers bhi utne he prescious hote hai! Unki koshish writer ko motivate rakhne ki hoti hai... Aur sach kahunga ke shuruaat mein mujhe un reviews ki he zaroorat thi

Honestly, I prefer comparison reviews over reviews for every single update! I don’t even remember a lot of what I wrote in the first update anymore

I want to know where I’ve improved, where I still need to work, and which parts were the most interesting

Ab tak ki story ke ek overall review ki tarha! I was actually expecting something like that from Samar_Singh since I had pretty high hopes.

But I guess I failed to hold his attention, so he left midway... Again

_ABHAY_Smarty_ ne ek aisa review diya tha! Lekin ab main dhoond ker uska link daalne se raha

Uski post search ker ke daikh lena agar daikhna ho to

I can’t force anyone to read my story, and I never will! I don’t read many stories myself, and I know that if I read something half-heartedly, I won’t enjoy it or truly understand what the writer was trying to convey.

That’s why I don’t promote my story anymore either

But I think you want to read it... you’re just not getting the time to do so! Main ek baar puri story padh ker uske baad review dene ke liye he kahunga

Maybe I can hope for a review like _ABHAY_Smarty_ who knows?

Woh sab theek hai... 2 month se thoda busy tha toh aapne abhi tak 5 update hi diye hai... Yeh sab nahi chalega salty bhai... Beech mai ek ARC bhi khatm ho gaya... Yaa ho sakta hai meri hi jayada hope thi socha tha ek saath update padunga ... BuT fir bhi Kaafi slow ho gaya hai matter...

Likes ki baat 4,5 like toh mai hi kar deta tha ID se abhi tha nahi mai isliye toh update late nahi ho rahe...

Itna faltu time kon waste karega salty bhai... Woh toh mai free tha jab aur har update mai main point likh leta tha note pad par... Isliye baaki detailing bharana... Kaafi time khota hoga isme...

Abhi latest review mai thoda late dunga 5 update ka ek saath jab ek do baar aur read kar lunga update abhi aise hi padhe hai review ke liye detailing mai jana padega.. mera bhi review pending rahega...

 

[_ABHAY_Smarty_]

Salty~Otaku Toh iss review ko hum past se start karenge update no.1 se kuch point present se link karenge kuch aane waale future mai humko dekhne ko milega saath hi kuch sawaal aur kuch blunders jo writer sahab se hui hai... Itni badi story likhe likhe ho jaati hai.... Thoda bhut chalta hai... Toh chaliye shuru karte hain....

1:-Aarav urvi ko doctor banana chahta tha...
( Jo ki abhi Urvi Doctor ban chuki hain )

2:- Aarav ko past mai uski maa use chod kar chali gayi thi...
( Lekin Avinash ne uski maa ko kaha tha ki aarav aur urvi ko woh uski maa ki hatya ka jimmedar samjhe... )

3:- Urvi ki best friend Kirti...
( Character start mai tha abhi missing hai... Baad mai kahi iska jikar tak nahi hua... )

4- Ek aadmi jo kankal ban chuka tha uske pass se aarav ko healing potion milta saath hi ek chitthi jisme stone manarch ko jaan se maar Dene ko kaha hai... Koi dushmani yaa dhokha diya gaya hoga..
( Aadmi ke baare mai abhi kuch pta nahi uski stone monarch se kya dushmani thi... Magar jaha tak lagta hai uski maut ke peeche stone monarch ka hath tha... Aarav ne stone monarch se dushmani bhi le li hai... Ab yeh aarav kyun kar raha hai... ?? Aage kya hoga abhi khulasa nahi hua... )


5- Normal users ke pass ek Unique ability hona bhi millions me ek hoti hai... Aarav ke pass 3 hai...
( Abhi aarav ke paas active 5 unique abilities hai jo unlock hai... Baki lock pata nahi... Magar hairaan kar dene ka waali baat hai kisi ke paas ek bhi nahi hoti aarav ke pass itni kaise... Soul binding uske pita se mili will to live uski jinda rehne ki chaah jo woh paida hote time lagbhag mar chuka tha... Aur memonise gaze shayad uski daadi se aur baaki... Baaki ?? )

6- Alpha se Aarav ko Devour mila saath hi uski special Unique ability. Limitless. Growth bhi Active ho gayi thi... Jo ki hidden thi...
( Limitless Growth kaam kaise karti hai abhi bhi confused hoon... Ek tarah se devour ke jaise hai magar usse jayada strong... Iska ek discription de Dena )

7- Aarti another character jisne Aarav ko maafi maangne ko kaha tha Neel se.... Jisse baad mai Aakash ne defend kiya... Magar Aadarsh ne Aarti aur Vansh se kuch baat ki jo pta nhi...
( Yeh Raaz bhi unhi ke saath chala gaya Aarav ke baare mai batya hoga usne Aakash ki kaise help ki... Aadarsh aur Special Aarti itni jaldi Mar gaye??? Abhi body unki mili nahi kisi ko... Kya pata woh bhi chup kar baithe ho Vanshika ke jaise... )

8-Aakash theek hone ke bad jab ghar wapis gaya toh aarav se door hone ke chalte woh emotionless ho gaya tha... Magar jab Aarav ek bar fir wapis aaya toh Aakash ke emotions wapis aa gye... Saath hi aakash apni maa Ko kehta hai Aarav Aur Vanshika ki Jodi kaafi aachi lagti hai... Maa bhi uska ishara samjh kehta haan kaafi aachi lagti hai...
( Aakash Ke baare mai kya hi bolo abhi iska character ke baare mai kuch pata nahi magar. Aarav ke liye jo pyaar aur dedication hai... Ufff dono ka bond Aakash Aarav... )

9- ek baar fir aarav ki hidden ability Limitless Growth ke chalte usne Tasubme se Ki active karna sekh liya jisse. Woh hairaan reh gayi. Koi itni jaldi kaise kar sakta hai magar aarav ko abhi bhi apni ability ke baare me nahi pta...
( Again Limitless Growth ne Aarav ki help ki Uski Ki energy ko Active karne mai... Need description ! )

10- maa ka sapna tha urvi doctor banne intresting yeh baat aarav ne khud urvi ko boli usko hospital mai admit krte waqt...
( Point Clear hai Aarav kyun urvi ko doctor banana chahta tha... Inko kisi ne 3 idiot movie nahi dikhayi kya... BC doctor ki beti doctor... Abhi Urvi Varsha ke saath reh rahi hai uske Doctor hone se jayada shock nahi laga hoga... )

11- Aakash chahta tha Aarav modelling kare usne director Sammy ko majboor Kiya jiske chalte usko Aarav ko shooting ke liye manana pada...
( Ek baar fir se Aakash Aarav... Aakash Aarav ko modelling mai daalna chahta tha... Aarav bhi khush tha )

12- Urvi ke baad Vanshika woh reason thi jiske liye aarav wapas Zinda aana chahta tha...
( Yeh thoda wrong Number tha Aakash ko dhoka diya aarav ne uska dil hi Tut Gaya hoga... Vanshika ke liye ek baar fir jeena chahta tha... Aur aakash ka kya )

13-Aarav ne issabella ko confess kiya ki uske dil me vanshika h...
( Aakash Aarav... Filhaal Vanshika kaha hai koi idea nahi... Magar jald hi mill hi Jani hai last Neel ne shaadi karke use torcher kiya tha jiski photo Aarav ne Vansh ke past mai dekh chuka tha... Aarav kaise wanha tak phunchta hai dekhne layak hoga ? )

14- Jaha sabka kehna tha spirit clan barbaad ho chuka hai... Wahi Daisuke ki maa Myuki ne use btaya ki spirit clan barbaad nahi hua... Bas unhone sabhi clan se khudko door kar liya hai.... WTF??
( Daisuke ki Maa Myuki ka koi na koi relation toh Hai Spirit clan se... Tasubme ne bhi kaha tha Wind clan sahi salamat uske peeche Spirit clan ka bhut bada haath hai )

15-Tasubme ke pita ne waqt aane par Aarav ko clan mai lane ke liye kaha tha... Qyuki woh dekhna chahte the jise Tasubme ne clan ki technique sikhayi hai woh uss kabil hai yaa nahi...
( Hmmm aarav Derek ke paas jarur jayega... Jo filhaal Japan mai Daisuke ke paas hi hai... Kya aarv ko koi test dena padega ?? )

16-wind clan ki pehli meeting mai 4th elder nahi chahti thi ki Daisuke leader bane... Next meeting mai 3rd elder uske jaise baat kar rahi I think yeh blunder hai...
( Yeh blunder hai chup sakta hai... Koi na hota hai... )

17- Jinhoo Ne Yoo-Jung se badla lene ke Vash ko kuch diya... Jisse Vash kisi Bade player ko backstab kar sake... Uske liye unme sabse shaktishali Yoo-Jung thi... Magar jab uska saamna aarav se hua uski power dekh use wanha se bhagna padd gya...
( Jinhoo ne Vansh ko Spirit water ki drops di thi... Jisko usne aarav ko inject kar diya... But Inn sabke peeche Jinhoo tha yeh abhi aarav ko pta kyun nahi... ??? Aarav ne Vansh ki memory check kar chuka hai ab shayad uska agla Target Jinhoo ho sakta hai... )

18-according to vanshika Vash pehle theek tha... Aur Uski Ek servent thi Jiska naam Beatrice tha... Fir ek din Vanshika ne Vansh ko Beatrice ke sath dekh liya... Uske baad uske Dad ne Beatrice ko kuch paise dekar door kar diya... WTF??? Beatrice ???
( Ho sakta hai do alag alag character ho... Naam same ho... Jaise story mai do Priya thi... But kaafi shocking cheez thi abhi Beatrice ka pata hone ke baad past mai usne kya Kiya... Agar kuch aisaa hai toh Writer sahab explanation chahiye isper... Haan Beatrice 22 saal ki jarur thi jab woh dubara aarav se mili thi... Jo soch raha hoon waisa na ho bas... )

19- Ek aur blunder aarav hexagon se ladne se pehle speech deta hai usme apne pita ka naam abhinav Arya bolta hai Avinash* ki jagh... Aur baad me bhi Ezra Abhinav Abhinav karti. H.... Kaafi confusing h new readers k liye character ka naam hi change kar diya... Perticular update mai...
( Yeh blunder bada hai usko jaake edit kar do kaafi confusing tha dusra naam.. )

20-soo-hyun fire clan se hai jisne Avinash ki madat ki... Jinho starting se hi dalla tha. Yeh toh pata padd hi gya... ELA ek actress thi...
( Soo-hyun , Jinhoo aur ElA abhi inke baare mai kuch nahi pata present mai... )

21- Avinash ne marne se pehle soo-hyun ki power ko apni forbidden technique se seal kar diya...
( ELA ne bhi dhoka diya, Soo- Hyun ki power seal hai... Aare waale arc mai Fire clan se ladai Tay hai )

22- Na-ri joki 4th elder thi usme Yoo-Jung ki Maa ko baazaru kaha sath hi uski behen Yoo-ri par bhi humla kar diya... Toh shayad iss wajah se dono fire clan se alag thi...
( Fire clan iska Raaz toh poora Arc deserve karta hai kaafi saare galat kaamo mai involve hai... Soo-hyun possibly fire clan leader ho sakta hai... Aur aisa dekhe toh Yoo-Jung Soo-hyun ki beti... )

23-Aarav ko jab chain se pakad kar world se expelled kiya jaa raha tha toh usko Slime aur Alpha ki woh. Yaadein dikhti hai jo usne pehle kabhi dekhi nahi thi... Jo lock thi...
( Ab yeh Raaz abhi tak saamne nahi aaya slime aur Alpha ki kon si Yaadein aarav ne dekhi thi ?? )

24- earth par aate hi aarav ke 75% stats seal kar diye gye... Aur saath hi mother spirit se contract sign hone ke baad woh system ke purane incharge jinhone aarav ko infinity prison me bheja saath hi... Aarav ke stat seal kiya unse disconnect hoke ab mother spirit uski manager ban chuki hai...
( Ab koi dubara aarav ko control yaa dubara prision mai nahi bhej sakta... Qki Ab Aarav ka manager khud spirit hai... Jisse woh sabhi ke system se alag ho gyaa hai... Jinhone usko saza di thi )

25-Mia ko dekh kar Aarav ko kisi purani party member ki yaad aa jati h lekin kiski... ???
( Mia , Michael ki beti purani party ki member??? Kon ho sakti hai... Ab Mia Aarav ki guild join karne waali hai... Iss character ka bhi Raaz jald khul jayega.. )

26- Meera ne sabko sujhaav diya Aarav ko uska beta aanouce karne ke liye....
( And guess what shit gone real... But kaise... Pehli meeting mai Aarav ko beta bana kar introduce karna... Meera mist clan se thi... But shayad woh Aarav aur veer ke connection ke baare mai jaanti thi... Usko ghar mai rookne ke liye usne aisa kiya... Baad mai Kunal ne bhi usse kaha ki hue Aarav ko veer ke baare mai bata dena chahiye... Ab veer ki story dekhne ko milegi lagta hai... )

27-Aarav Veer ke bunker jo usne aarav liye banaya tha waha phunch gya... Wanha use pta chala Veer ne khud ka naam Batman rakha aur uske jaise hi Den Aarav ke liye taiyar ki thi... Saath Mai Aarav ke haath ek file aati hai... Corpse naam se... The Kid who supposed to be die... ??
( Aarav ne veer ko pehli baar Batman keh bulaya tha... But yeh Aakash aur Aarav ke beech kyun aa raha hai... love triangle... Again the same file jiska kitni baar jikar ho chuka h... Aarav ne Varsha ka past dekhne se pehle yeh file padh li hogi... Isliye woh jayada hairaan nahi hua jaise use sab pata tha... Isme Aarav ke janam waali baat hi hogi )

28- Aarav ne Micheal ko Tower ke bahar barrier banane ka promise Kiya woh bhi ek saal ke ander...
( Yeh kaam karne Aarav Dubara ek baar Mumbai jayega association tower... Aage aane waale update mai dekhne ko milega... )

29- Aarav ko skeleton ke pass se ek book bhi mili thi jisse rune enclave karke woh mana stone ko battle stone yaa kuch aur bana sakta tha... Jo kaam stone monarch karta tha...
( Stone monarch... Abhi iske baare mai jayada nahi pata but aarav ka dushman ban chuka hai toh Fire clan ke baad agla no. Isi ka hona hai... )

30- Ishika ki soul damage h usko cure krne k liye aarav ko uske sath kuchi ku karna padega... Magar bina kisi bond ke aarav karna ni chahta...
( Ishika abhi hospital mai hai... Aarav opposite sex ki soul ko purify kar sakta hai... But ishika kya iske liye taiyar hogi... Isliye aarav unke beech bond banne ka wait kar raha hai... )

31- Soul clan barbaad hote time Aarav ki bua ko ek beti Hui thi...
( Iske baare mai abhi kuch bhi pata nahi hai... Ek Random guess karun toh yeh Aakash ki wife Saanvi ho sakti hai... Woh bhi soul binding use kar sakti hai )

32- Aarav ke pass do core hai.. jiski wajah se woh 25 saal ke baad bhi soul purifier hone ke baad bhi survive kar saka hai... Qkuki uske dono core power equally divide kar rahe the...
( Note karne waala point nahi nahi toh Varsha ne toh sab baad ke liye chod diya tha... Jo hoga dekha jayega... Isliye Aarav 25 ke baad bhi survive kar gaya hai... )

33- wind clan ki ek branch Paris mai bani hai jiska leader George hai...
( Paris = France Jaha Varsha ke saath Saath Aarav aur Aakash ne bhi New syani mention bana chuka hai... George?? Aage pata chalega )

34- Clan meeting mai sab leader Spirit clan ko khatam kar dena chahte the magar Tasubme ne sab ko saaf keh diya ki jo bhi spirit clan ke against jayega usko Wind clan se saamna karna padega... Jisse sun sab sant ho gye... Wohi Fire Clan leader chup kar sab sun raha tha aur sabki haalat par hass bhi raha tha...
( Confirm hai yeh chup kar sunne waala aur koi nahi Soo-hyun hi hai... Uski power seal hai shyad isliye chup raha ho... Magar ab cheezen saaf hai story Fire clan mai jaane waali hai... Jaha aarav bhi lawful banker Micheal aur association ki bhi madat karega... )

35- Barbie Darkness Clan ka leader candidate tha... Jisse Aakash ne uske clan se Haanah ke saath bachaya...
( Iski story abhi saamne aayi nahi hai... Possibly Hannah aarav ko sab btayegi... )

36- Elite Group ne Aakash aur Veer par humla kiya tha... Jiske baad undono ne uske half masters ko maar diya saath hi aakash ne leader ko bhi maar diya...
( Elite Group abhi tak nahi pata chala iske peeche kon hai mastermind... Saath hi aakash ne leader ko maar diya... Aage dekhna hoga isko bhi )

37- Tarun ke liye Uske pita jo Duniya me sabse shaktishali ban sate the unhone apni power chod di...
( Shayad Yaha Mother spirit ki baat kaha Tarun ne... Jo Shubham ne Tarun ke ander seal kar di thi )

38- Tasubme ko 5 spirit clan ke users ke baare mai pata hai 6 th uske hisaab se aarav hai...
( Tasubme 5 spirit clan user kon ho sakte hai... Maybe wohi ho jinhone wind clan ki madad ki thi... )

39- Evil God heart ko fill krne ke baad aarav ke status 34% unlock ho gye the saath hi dono core ko aarav ek saath use kar sakta hai...
( Yeh stat unlock kaafi confusing hai... 34+ 30= 64 % stats abhi aarav ke unlock hone chahiye... )

40- System Bazar ke monarch aarav ko 70% discount par saaman offer kiya but what cost??
( Iska abhi pta nahi... But Aarav ne deniy nahi kiya dekhte hai aarav se kaise madad leta hai )

41- protector guild Leader ko Aarav Arya naam se sapne aa rahe hai usne yeh baat Daisuke se cmfm ki... ??
( Sapne kiss tarah ke... Kunle Andrew ka beta... Jisko aarav ne apni family ko protect karne ke liye kaha tha ab aap oh har kisi ko protect kar raha hai... Isko bhi jara Limelight mai daalo... )

42- Spirit Clan ke kuch members ne Wind clan ka saath diya tha... Unki wajah se wind clan sahi salamat hai... ??
( Yeh flashback shayad Tasubme Aarav ko batayegi... Wahi sab cheezen clear hongi... )

43- Barbie ne Kunal ko bataya ke veer ke Marne waalon ka badla uska nahi hai... ?? Uske peeche Elite group tha na... ??
( Elite Group aakhir hai kon yeh... Isse bhi aarav ko badla lena hai.. isne aadmi bheje the Vansh ke pass hospital mai... )

44- Barbie aur Doc ka conversation Barbie ka usko khna dena... Saath me woh saf jahir kar deti h uski shaadi ho chuki h aur seen mai bacchi ko bhi dikhaya gaya hai...
( Aur woh Doc aur koi Nahi Urvi hai... Shaadi bacchi ?? Ab varsha yaa suhani ki ho nahi sakti bachi Urvi... Aarav kaise react karega... Jab use iss baare mai pata chalega... )

45- Kisi Aurat ne Vansh ko madad ki thi Aarav aur uski family ka naam deathpool mai daalne ke liye....
( Elite Group se koi ho sakta hai... Jiska aarav pata laga hi lega... Yaa koi aur hai iske peeche ?? )

46- Eliss aur Barbie ka kuchi ku tha Hannah ne Aakash se madat maangi thi syad... Vansh ne Hannah ko help ke badle Barbie ko free karne ka promise Kiya tha...
( Eliss yeh shayad wohi hai na Aadarsh ki assistant... Yeh story bhi Hannah aarav se discuss karegi )

47- Mohan Arora toh kaafi Shareef nikla usne Varsha ko saaf sabdo mai keh diya results chahiye no matter what cost... Uske liye Baccho ko cheed faad do yaa khud baccha paida Karo... WOW*
( Don't tell me ki Elite Group iska ho sakta hai... Just sochne ke liye bol diya baaki Arora Family full Villian wives aa rahi hai.. )

48- France mai Bharat ka koi friend rehta tha jisko usne leader ki beti de diya...
( Iska mai pakka nahi keh sakta but mera shakkk kaafi had tak Saanvi par jaa raha hai... Uski story sunker bhi aisa hi laga... )

49- Singh family ne Ankush ki madat ki unki band factory mai Lab banane ke liye...
( Possibly yeh wohi factory hai jo Veer ne aarav ke liye banayi thi usme Kaafi saare equipment ke saath rooms the... Medical rooms bhi... )

50*- Aakash ke power se soul manarch aarav bhi chonk gaya... Saath hi uske hath par koi symbol bana diya....
( Hmmm yeh aage dekhna Banta hai Aakash kiss hadd tak powerfull ho chuka hai... aarav ke puchne par usne nahi btaya ki woh akela Domain ke ander kaise aa gaya... Monarch bhi use amder dekh chonk gaya tha... )

abhi tak ki story ko ek review mai cover nahi kar sakta tha but jo bhi points mere dimaag mai aaye woh likh diye hai... Samar_Singh mera ho gya aap apna dekh lo.. Salty~Otaku iska reply ke liye bhi 2 din diye tumko...
baaki Waiting for next update...

Yeh raha isko review toh nahi but...
Highlight ( Points to be noted ) kaha Jaa sakta hai... Joki present mai story ko padhte waqt dhyaan mai rakhne ke liye har koi padh sakta hai... Aur kaafi prediction ke saath surprises bhi kam milenge ki yeh kaise ho gaya...

 

[abdulking]

Bhai Mera aik sawal he what is Akash siyani
Jaha tak mujhe yad he Akash arav ki maa ki lab me tha jaha pe arav ne Akash ko uske jurwa se Alag kr ke khud me absorve kr Lia tha phr Akash waha se siyani family me kaise pouncha or Akash ke pas kia skil ya ability he Jo wo cod me bhi Apne khufia bnde bhej deta he

 

[mistyvixen]

Salty~Otaku Toh iss review ko hum past se start karenge update no.1 se kuch point present se link karenge kuch aane waale future mai humko dekhne ko milega saath hi kuch sawaal aur kuch blunders jo writer sahab se hui hai... Itni badi story likhe likhe ho jaati hai.... Thoda bhut chalta hai... Toh chaliye shuru karte hain....

1:-Aarav urvi ko doctor banana chahta tha...
( Jo ki abhi Urvi Doctor ban chuki hain )

2:- Aarav ko past mai uski maa use chod kar chali gayi thi...
( Lekin Avinash ne uski maa ko kaha tha ki aarav aur urvi ko woh uski maa ki hatya ka jimmedar samjhe... )

3:- Urvi ki best friend Kirti...
( Character start mai tha abhi missing hai... Baad mai kahi iska jikar tak nahi hua... )

4- Ek aadmi jo kankal ban chuka tha uske pass se aarav ko healing potion milta saath hi ek chitthi jisme stone manarch ko jaan se maar Dene ko kaha hai... Koi dushmani yaa dhokha diya gaya hoga..
( Aadmi ke baare mai abhi kuch pta nahi uski stone monarch se kya dushmani thi... Magar jaha tak lagta hai uski maut ke peeche stone monarch ka hath tha... Aarav ne stone monarch se dushmani bhi le li hai... Ab yeh aarav kyun kar raha hai... ?? Aage kya hoga abhi khulasa nahi hua... )


5- Normal users ke pass ek Unique ability hona bhi millions me ek hoti hai... Aarav ke pass 3 hai...
( Abhi aarav ke paas active 5 unique abilities hai jo unlock hai... Baki lock pata nahi... Magar hairaan kar dene ka waali baat hai kisi ke paas ek bhi nahi hoti aarav ke pass itni kaise... Soul binding uske pita se mili will to live uski jinda rehne ki chaah jo woh paida hote time lagbhag mar chuka tha... Aur memonise gaze shayad uski daadi se aur baaki... Baaki ?? )

6- Alpha se Aarav ko Devour mila saath hi uski special Unique ability. Limitless. Growth bhi Active ho gayi thi... Jo ki hidden thi...
( Limitless Growth kaam kaise karti hai abhi bhi confused hoon... Ek tarah se devour ke jaise hai magar usse jayada strong... Iska ek discription de Dena )

7- Aarti another character jisne Aarav ko maafi maangne ko kaha tha Neel se.... Jisse baad mai Aakash ne defend kiya... Magar Aadarsh ne Aarti aur Vansh se kuch baat ki jo pta nhi...
( Yeh Raaz bhi unhi ke saath chala gaya Aarav ke baare mai batya hoga usne Aakash ki kaise help ki... Aadarsh aur Special Aarti itni jaldi Mar gaye??? Abhi body unki mili nahi kisi ko... Kya pata woh bhi chup kar baithe ho Vanshika ke jaise... )

8-Aakash theek hone ke bad jab ghar wapis gaya toh aarav se door hone ke chalte woh emotionless ho gaya tha... Magar jab Aarav ek bar fir wapis aaya toh Aakash ke emotions wapis aa gye... Saath hi aakash apni maa Ko kehta hai Aarav Aur Vanshika ki Jodi kaafi aachi lagti hai... Maa bhi uska ishara samjh kehta haan kaafi aachi lagti hai...
( Aakash Ke baare mai kya hi bolo abhi iska character ke baare mai kuch pata nahi magar. Aarav ke liye jo pyaar aur dedication hai... Ufff dono ka bond Aakash Aarav... )

9- ek baar fir aarav ki hidden ability Limitless Growth ke chalte usne Tasubme se Ki active karna sekh liya jisse. Woh hairaan reh gayi. Koi itni jaldi kaise kar sakta hai magar aarav ko abhi bhi apni ability ke baare me nahi pta...
( Again Limitless Growth ne Aarav ki help ki Uski Ki energy ko Active karne mai... Need description ! )

10- maa ka sapna tha urvi doctor banne intresting yeh baat aarav ne khud urvi ko boli usko hospital mai admit krte waqt...
( Point Clear hai Aarav kyun urvi ko doctor banana chahta tha... Inko kisi ne 3 idiot movie nahi dikhayi kya... BC doctor ki beti doctor... Abhi Urvi Varsha ke saath reh rahi hai uske Doctor hone se jayada shock nahi laga hoga... )

11- Aakash chahta tha Aarav modelling kare usne director Sammy ko majboor Kiya jiske chalte usko Aarav ko shooting ke liye manana pada...
( Ek baar fir se Aakash Aarav... Aakash Aarav ko modelling mai daalna chahta tha... Aarav bhi khush tha )

12- Urvi ke baad Vanshika woh reason thi jiske liye aarav wapas Zinda aana chahta tha...
( Yeh thoda wrong Number tha Aakash ko dhoka diya aarav ne uska dil hi Tut Gaya hoga... Vanshika ke liye ek baar fir jeena chahta tha... Aur aakash ka kya )

13-Aarav ne issabella ko confess kiya ki uske dil me vanshika h...
( Aakash Aarav... Filhaal Vanshika kaha hai koi idea nahi... Magar jald hi mill hi Jani hai last Neel ne shaadi karke use torcher kiya tha jiski photo Aarav ne Vansh ke past mai dekh chuka tha... Aarav kaise wanha tak phunchta hai dekhne layak hoga ? )

14- Jaha sabka kehna tha spirit clan barbaad ho chuka hai... Wahi Daisuke ki maa Myuki ne use btaya ki spirit clan barbaad nahi hua... Bas unhone sabhi clan se khudko door kar liya hai.... WTF??
( Daisuke ki Maa Myuki ka koi na koi relation toh Hai Spirit clan se... Tasubme ne bhi kaha tha Wind clan sahi salamat uske peeche Spirit clan ka bhut bada haath hai )

15-Tasubme ke pita ne waqt aane par Aarav ko clan mai lane ke liye kaha tha... Qyuki woh dekhna chahte the jise Tasubme ne clan ki technique sikhayi hai woh uss kabil hai yaa nahi...
( Hmmm aarav Derek ke paas jarur jayega... Jo filhaal Japan mai Daisuke ke paas hi hai... Kya aarv ko koi test dena padega ?? )

16-wind clan ki pehli meeting mai 4th elder nahi chahti thi ki Daisuke leader bane... Next meeting mai 3rd elder uske jaise baat kar rahi I think yeh blunder hai...
( Yeh blunder hai chup sakta hai... Koi na hota hai... )

17- Jinhoo Ne Yoo-Jung se badla lene ke Vash ko kuch diya... Jisse Vash kisi Bade player ko backstab kar sake... Uske liye unme sabse shaktishali Yoo-Jung thi... Magar jab uska saamna aarav se hua uski power dekh use wanha se bhagna padd gya...
( Jinhoo ne Vansh ko Spirit water ki drops di thi... Jisko usne aarav ko inject kar diya... But Inn sabke peeche Jinhoo tha yeh abhi aarav ko pta kyun nahi... ??? Aarav ne Vansh ki memory check kar chuka hai ab shayad uska agla Target Jinhoo ho sakta hai... )

18-according to vanshika Vash pehle theek tha... Aur Uski Ek servent thi Jiska naam Beatrice tha... Fir ek din Vanshika ne Vansh ko Beatrice ke sath dekh liya... Uske baad uske Dad ne Beatrice ko kuch paise dekar door kar diya... WTF??? Beatrice ???
( Ho sakta hai do alag alag character ho... Naam same ho... Jaise story mai do Priya thi... But kaafi shocking cheez thi abhi Beatrice ka pata hone ke baad past mai usne kya Kiya... Agar kuch aisaa hai toh Writer sahab explanation chahiye isper... Haan Beatrice 22 saal ki jarur thi jab woh dubara aarav se mili thi... Jo soch raha hoon waisa na ho bas... )

19- Ek aur blunder aarav hexagon se ladne se pehle speech deta hai usme apne pita ka naam abhinav Arya bolta hai Avinash* ki jagh... Aur baad me bhi Ezra Abhinav Abhinav karti. H.... Kaafi confusing h new readers k liye character ka naam hi change kar diya... Perticular update mai...
( Yeh blunder bada hai usko jaake edit kar do kaafi confusing tha dusra naam.. )

20-soo-hyun fire clan se hai jisne Avinash ki madat ki... Jinho starting se hi dalla tha. Yeh toh pata padd hi gya... ELA ek actress thi...
( Soo-hyun , Jinhoo aur ElA abhi inke baare mai kuch nahi pata present mai... )

21- Avinash ne marne se pehle soo-hyun ki power ko apni forbidden technique se seal kar diya...
( ELA ne bhi dhoka diya, Soo- Hyun ki power seal hai... Aare waale arc mai Fire clan se ladai Tay hai )

22- Na-ri joki 4th elder thi usme Yoo-Jung ki Maa ko baazaru kaha sath hi uski behen Yoo-ri par bhi humla kar diya... Toh shayad iss wajah se dono fire clan se alag thi...
( Fire clan iska Raaz toh poora Arc deserve karta hai kaafi saare galat kaamo mai involve hai... Soo-hyun possibly fire clan leader ho sakta hai... Aur aisa dekhe toh Yoo-Jung Soo-hyun ki beti... )

23-Aarav ko jab chain se pakad kar world se expelled kiya jaa raha tha toh usko Slime aur Alpha ki woh. Yaadein dikhti hai jo usne pehle kabhi dekhi nahi thi... Jo lock thi...
( Ab yeh Raaz abhi tak saamne nahi aaya slime aur Alpha ki kon si Yaadein aarav ne dekhi thi ?? )

24- earth par aate hi aarav ke 75% stats seal kar diye gye... Aur saath hi mother spirit se contract sign hone ke baad woh system ke purane incharge jinhone aarav ko infinity prison me bheja saath hi... Aarav ke stat seal kiya unse disconnect hoke ab mother spirit uski manager ban chuki hai...
( Ab koi dubara aarav ko control yaa dubara prision mai nahi bhej sakta... Qki Ab Aarav ka manager khud spirit hai... Jisse woh sabhi ke system se alag ho gyaa hai... Jinhone usko saza di thi )

25-Mia ko dekh kar Aarav ko kisi purani party member ki yaad aa jati h lekin kiski... ???
( Mia , Michael ki beti purani party ki member??? Kon ho sakti hai... Ab Mia Aarav ki guild join karne waali hai... Iss character ka bhi Raaz jald khul jayega.. )

26- Meera ne sabko sujhaav diya Aarav ko uska beta aanouce karne ke liye....
( And guess what shit gone real... But kaise... Pehli meeting mai Aarav ko beta bana kar introduce karna... Meera mist clan se thi... But shayad woh Aarav aur veer ke connection ke baare mai jaanti thi... Usko ghar mai rookne ke liye usne aisa kiya... Baad mai Kunal ne bhi usse kaha ki hue Aarav ko veer ke baare mai bata dena chahiye... Ab veer ki story dekhne ko milegi lagta hai... )

27-Aarav Veer ke bunker jo usne aarav liye banaya tha waha phunch gya... Wanha use pta chala Veer ne khud ka naam Batman rakha aur uske jaise hi Den Aarav ke liye taiyar ki thi... Saath Mai Aarav ke haath ek file aati hai... Corpse naam se... The Kid who supposed to be die... ??
( Aarav ne veer ko pehli baar Batman keh bulaya tha... But yeh Aakash aur Aarav ke beech kyun aa raha hai... love triangle... Again the same file jiska kitni baar jikar ho chuka h... Aarav ne Varsha ka past dekhne se pehle yeh file padh li hogi... Isliye woh jayada hairaan nahi hua jaise use sab pata tha... Isme Aarav ke janam waali baat hi hogi )

28- Aarav ne Micheal ko Tower ke bahar barrier banane ka promise Kiya woh bhi ek saal ke ander...
( Yeh kaam karne Aarav Dubara ek baar Mumbai jayega association tower... Aage aane waale update mai dekhne ko milega... )

29- Aarav ko skeleton ke pass se ek book bhi mili thi jisse rune enclave karke woh mana stone ko battle stone yaa kuch aur bana sakta tha... Jo kaam stone monarch karta tha...
( Stone monarch... Abhi iske baare mai jayada nahi pata but aarav ka dushman ban chuka hai toh Fire clan ke baad agla no. Isi ka hona hai... )

30- Ishika ki soul damage h usko cure krne k liye aarav ko uske sath kuchi ku karna padega... Magar bina kisi bond ke aarav karna ni chahta...
( Ishika abhi hospital mai hai... Aarav opposite sex ki soul ko purify kar sakta hai... But ishika kya iske liye taiyar hogi... Isliye aarav unke beech bond banne ka wait kar raha hai... )

31- Soul clan barbaad hote time Aarav ki bua ko ek beti Hui thi...
( Iske baare mai abhi kuch bhi pata nahi hai... Ek Random guess karun toh yeh Aakash ki wife Saanvi ho sakti hai... Woh bhi soul binding use kar sakti hai )

32- Aarav ke pass do core hai.. jiski wajah se woh 25 saal ke baad bhi soul purifier hone ke baad bhi survive kar saka hai... Qkuki uske dono core power equally divide kar rahe the...
( Note karne waala point nahi nahi toh Varsha ne toh sab baad ke liye chod diya tha... Jo hoga dekha jayega... Isliye Aarav 25 ke baad bhi survive kar gaya hai... )

33- wind clan ki ek branch Paris mai bani hai jiska leader George hai...
( Paris = France Jaha Varsha ke saath Saath Aarav aur Aakash ne bhi New syani mention bana chuka hai... George?? Aage pata chalega )

34- Clan meeting mai sab leader Spirit clan ko khatam kar dena chahte the magar Tasubme ne sab ko saaf keh diya ki jo bhi spirit clan ke against jayega usko Wind clan se saamna karna padega... Jisse sun sab sant ho gye... Wohi Fire Clan leader chup kar sab sun raha tha aur sabki haalat par hass bhi raha tha...
( Confirm hai yeh chup kar sunne waala aur koi nahi Soo-hyun hi hai... Uski power seal hai shyad isliye chup raha ho... Magar ab cheezen saaf hai story Fire clan mai jaane waali hai... Jaha aarav bhi lawful banker Micheal aur association ki bhi madat karega... )

35- Barbie Darkness Clan ka leader candidate tha... Jisse Aakash ne uske clan se Haanah ke saath bachaya...
( Iski story abhi saamne aayi nahi hai... Possibly Hannah aarav ko sab btayegi... )

36- Elite Group ne Aakash aur Veer par humla kiya tha... Jiske baad undono ne uske half masters ko maar diya saath hi aakash ne leader ko bhi maar diya...
( Elite Group abhi tak nahi pata chala iske peeche kon hai mastermind... Saath hi aakash ne leader ko maar diya... Aage dekhna hoga isko bhi )

37- Tarun ke liye Uske pita jo Duniya me sabse shaktishali ban sate the unhone apni power chod di...
( Shayad Yaha Mother spirit ki baat kaha Tarun ne... Jo Shubham ne Tarun ke ander seal kar di thi )

38- Tasubme ko 5 spirit clan ke users ke baare mai pata hai 6 th uske hisaab se aarav hai...
( Tasubme 5 spirit clan user kon ho sakte hai... Maybe wohi ho jinhone wind clan ki madad ki thi... )

39- Evil God heart ko fill krne ke baad aarav ke status 34% unlock ho gye the saath hi dono core ko aarav ek saath use kar sakta hai...
( Yeh stat unlock kaafi confusing hai... 34+ 30= 64 % stats abhi aarav ke unlock hone chahiye... )

40- System Bazar ke monarch aarav ko 70% discount par saaman offer kiya but what cost??
( Iska abhi pta nahi... But Aarav ne deniy nahi kiya dekhte hai aarav se kaise madad leta hai )

41- protector guild Leader ko Aarav Arya naam se sapne aa rahe hai usne yeh baat Daisuke se cmfm ki... ??
( Sapne kiss tarah ke... Kunle Andrew ka beta... Jisko aarav ne apni family ko protect karne ke liye kaha tha ab aap oh har kisi ko protect kar raha hai... Isko bhi jara Limelight mai daalo... )

42- Spirit Clan ke kuch members ne Wind clan ka saath diya tha... Unki wajah se wind clan sahi salamat hai... ??
( Yeh flashback shayad Tasubme Aarav ko batayegi... Wahi sab cheezen clear hongi... )

43- Barbie ne Kunal ko bataya ke veer ke Marne waalon ka badla uska nahi hai... ?? Uske peeche Elite group tha na... ??
( Elite Group aakhir hai kon yeh... Isse bhi aarav ko badla lena hai.. isne aadmi bheje the Vansh ke pass hospital mai... )

44- Barbie aur Doc ka conversation Barbie ka usko khna dena... Saath me woh saf jahir kar deti h uski shaadi ho chuki h aur seen mai bacchi ko bhi dikhaya gaya hai...
( Aur woh Doc aur koi Nahi Urvi hai... Shaadi bacchi ?? Ab varsha yaa suhani ki ho nahi sakti bachi Urvi... Aarav kaise react karega... Jab use iss baare mai pata chalega... )

45- Kisi Aurat ne Vansh ko madad ki thi Aarav aur uski family ka naam deathpool mai daalne ke liye....
( Elite Group se koi ho sakta hai... Jiska aarav pata laga hi lega... Yaa koi aur hai iske peeche ?? )

46- Eliss aur Barbie ka kuchi ku tha Hannah ne Aakash se madat maangi thi syad... Vansh ne Hannah ko help ke badle Barbie ko free karne ka promise Kiya tha...
( Eliss yeh shayad wohi hai na Aadarsh ki assistant... Yeh story bhi Hannah aarav se discuss karegi )

47- Mohan Arora toh kaafi Shareef nikla usne Varsha ko saaf sabdo mai keh diya results chahiye no matter what cost... Uske liye Baccho ko cheed faad do yaa khud baccha paida Karo... WOW*
( Don't tell me ki Elite Group iska ho sakta hai... Just sochne ke liye bol diya baaki Arora Family full Villian wives aa rahi hai.. )

48- France mai Bharat ka koi friend rehta tha jisko usne leader ki beti de diya...
( Iska mai pakka nahi keh sakta but mera shakkk kaafi had tak Saanvi par jaa raha hai... Uski story sunker bhi aisa hi laga... )

49- Singh family ne Ankush ki madat ki unki band factory mai Lab banane ke liye...
( Possibly yeh wohi factory hai jo Veer ne aarav ke liye banayi thi usme Kaafi saare equipment ke saath rooms the... Medical rooms bhi... )

50*- Aakash ke power se soul manarch aarav bhi chonk gaya... Saath hi uske hath par koi symbol bana diya....
( Hmmm yeh aage dekhna Banta hai Aakash kiss hadd tak powerfull ho chuka hai... aarav ke puchne par usne nahi btaya ki woh akela Domain ke ander kaise aa gaya... Monarch bhi use amder dekh chonk gaya tha... )

abhi tak ki story ko ek review mai cover nahi kar sakta tha but jo bhi points mere dimaag mai aaye woh likh diye hai... Samar_Singh mera ho gya aap apna dekh lo.. Salty~Otaku iska reply ke liye bhi 2 din diye tumko...
baaki Waiting for next update...

Seriously iska word count disclose karo koi WTF!!!

Salty~Otaku sorry sorry itna nhi likh paungi main but last mein jake saare reviews ko jod ke isse badha ho jayega

 

[_ABHAY_Smarty_]

Bhai Mera aik sawal he what is Akash siyani
Jaha tak mujhe yad he Akash arav ki maa ki lab me tha jaha pe arav ne Akash ko uske jurwa se Alag kr ke khud me absorve kr Lia tha phr Akash waha se siyani family me kaise pouncha or Akash ke pas kia skil ya ability he Jo wo cod me bhi Apne khufia bnde bhej deta he

Kya baat kar rahe ho bhai... Aakash LAB mai kyun tha theek hone ke liye... Jab Arav ne uske twin ko usse alag kar diya toh obviously woh theek ho gaya... Ab hospital se chutti Kara ke aadmi apne ghar toh jata hai... Aakash ne kaafi Koshish ki Aarav ko dhoodne ki but baad mai woh apni family mai chala gaya... Rahi baat apne puchi kaise pahuncha?? Taxi karke... @salty-otaku likhna bhool gaye shayad... Tension bhut hai na story complete karne ki isliye hota hai kabhi kabhi aisa...

Aakash khud mai bhut kuch hai... Baaki aap enjoy kariye dhere dhere sab pata chal jayega Aakash ke baare mai...

 

[Salty~Otaku]

Rahi baat apne puchi kaise pahuncha?? Taxi karke...

WTF? Pune se New York gaya tha to taxi per kaise gaya ho ga?

Spoiler

Obviously rickshaw per gaya tha

 

[_ABHAY_Smarty_]

WTF? Pune se New York gaya tha to taxi per kaise gaya ho ga?

Spoiler

Obviously rickshaw per gaya tha

Taxi driver Ajay D vgn tha...