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Fantasy Vengeance ~ Revenge is sweet [ᏚᎩᏚᎢᎬᎷ]
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Shandar update Bhai
To aakash ne aarav ko chod ke bare me bhut hi sari bate or jankariya batake bheja hai jiska aarav ko fayda bhi hi ho raha hai
Aarav ko kunle ke bare me pahle hi aabash ho gaya tha or usne kunle ko bachane ke liye malphas se hi deal kar li
Or is game master ki to bhut hi bure tarike se Mari hai aarav ne is ko lag raha tha ye game khel Raha hai lekin isko kaha pata tha ki aarav iske sath suru se hi game khel raha hai
Idhar yoo jung ki adavo par death watchers hi nahi aarav bhi Fida ho gaya hai
Akir me aarav ne death watchers ko use challenges Dene ko kaha or aarav un mission ko pura karke bhut hi badhiya matra me dungeon points kama sakta hai
To aakash ne aarav ko chod ke bare me bhut hi sari bate or jankariya batake bheja hai jiska aarav ko fayda bhi hi ho raha hai
Aarav ko kunle ke bare me pahle hi aabash ho gaya tha or usne kunle ko bachane ke liye malphas se hi deal kar li
Or is game master ki to bhut hi bure tarike se Mari hai aarav ne is ko lag raha tha ye game khel Raha hai lekin isko kaha pata tha ki aarav iske sath suru se hi game khel raha hai
Idhar yoo jung ki adavo par death watchers hi nahi aarav bhi Fida ho gaya hai
Akir me aarav ne death watchers ko use challenges Dene ko kaha or aarav un mission ko pura karke bhut hi badhiya matra me dungeon points kama sakta hai
What an outstanding update. Har baar aisa lagne lagta hai ki ab Aarav ki team ko nuksan pahunchega, lekin weh bach jata hai. He has to remain focussed and emotionless.UPDATE 106 ~
(DUNGEON POINTS)
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Takahashi's Residence
Wind Clan ~ 2 Days Ago...!
“Dungeon Points?”
Aakash ne Aarav aur Yoo-Jung ko C.O.D ki kuch aur Information dene ke liye uske kamre mein bulaya tha. Aarav ne Tinkerbell ko bhi uski human form mein unke saath baithne ke liye keh diya tha.
Aakash (Nod): Haan, Dungeon Points...! Dungeon Points bhi tumhare C.O.D ke andar survival ke liye bohat important hai.
Aarav ko dungeon points ke baare mein Michael ne bhi bataya tha. Lekin usko bhi ache se pata nahi tha ke unka kya use hai. Aarav unko dhayan mein to rakh raha tha. Lekin ek saath bohat kuch sochne ke kaaran wo bhi unke upar kuch khaas dhayan nahi de saka.
Tinkerbell (Murmured): Dungeon Points... Main ne bhi unke baare mein suna hai! Dungeon Points se player host se kisi bhi tarha ki request ker ke deal ker sakta hai. Lekin uski deal ke according uske paas enough Dungeon Points bhi hone chahiye hai.
Aakash: Exactly, Mostly sab players ko ye he lagta hai ke unhe ye points jeetne ka baad paison mein withdraw karne ke liye diye gye hai! Lekin ye baat Deathwatchers ko batayi jati hai ke Dungeon Points ki kya value hai.
Tinkerbell: Lekin uske liye to hamare paas already Deathwatchers hai na? Unke support se hum kisi bhi tarha ki request ko accept karwa sakte hai na?
Aakash: Nahi... Deathwatchers udhar sirf players ko tadapte huwe daikhne ke liye hote hai! Lekin ab agar Deathwatcher kisi ko personally help karne ki koshish kare gye to suspicious lage gye.
Aarav: Hmm ~ Deathwatchers ka support give and take relationship ki tarha hai! Unse kisi bhi tarha ka support lene ke liye uske andar unke liye bhi kuch na kuch hona he chahiye hai.
Aarav ki baat sun ker ab sab ko Aakash ki baat ka matlab samajh aya tha. Deathwatchers usko direct help nahi ker sakte the aur uske liye Aakash unhe Dungeon Points ke baare mein bata raha tha.
Aakash (Nod): Haan, Isiliye Aarav tumhe bhi sab ka intrest banaye rakhna ho ga! Kyu ke bina kisi intrest ke Dungeon Points bhi gift kiye to bhi carnival ko shak ho sakta hai... Isiliye tumhe difficult task lene ho gye kuch na kuch karte rehna ho ga.
Tinkerbell: Lekin Aarav ko Dungeon Points ke liye itni mehnat karne ki kya zaroorat? Aarav ko sab ko safe rakhne ki koshish karni chahiye na ke kisi bhi danger task se sab kuch risk mein daalna chahiye hai... Aarav uske limited stats ke saath bhi kisi S ranker se zyada strong hai.
Yoo-Jung: Nahi... Aakash sahi keh raha hai! Aarav strong hai aur khud ki strength se Aarav khud ko to bacha sakta hai. Lekin... Lekin ye zaroori nahi hai ke Aarav dusron ki bhi hamesha bacha sake ga.
Yoo-Jung ne Tinkerbell ki baat sunte he fauran keh diya. Yoo-Jung ko ache se andaza tha ke aisi bhi situation ho sakti thi ke power hote huwe bhi ap khud ko powerless mehsoos karte ho.
Aakash: There is no battle that you can't win! And there is no battle you'll win for sure.
Tinkerbell: Huh?
Aakash (Nod): Haan, Aarav strong zaroor hai! But, Strength alone isn’t always enough to win a fight... Victory comes from using every resource, every opportunity, and every advantage at your disposal.
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Carnival of Death
Dungeon ~ Stage 2 (North Gate)
Day 17th ~ Wave 34th
“Luna”
Aarav unchi awaaz mein kehte huwe Yoo-Jung ke paas chala gaya aur usko cover karne laga. Uske paas aur bhi zyada Undeads aa rahe the aur Aarav ke liye Yoo-Jung khud ko weak dikhane ki koshish ker rahi thi.
[Wave 34 Cleared]
[Survivors: 267 players remaining]
[Time until the next wave: 2 hours]
[All players are advised to regroup, recover, and prepare]
[Team (Protector): 5 survivors remaining (Odd number)]
[Choice Matched with the captain's selected number (Odd)]
[No penalty]
Aarav: Are you alright?
Aarav ne Yoo-Jung ko uske saamne khadi kiya aur uske haath ko daikhne laga. Yoo-Jung abhi bhi sirf uske ek haath ka Use ker rahi thi. Aarav waves ke beech mein Yoo-Jung ko check karne ka dikhava ker raha tha.
Yoo-Jung (Nod): Haan, Lekin mere liye one handed swordsmanship thodi mushkil hai! Lekin main har wave ke saath improve ker rahi hu.
[34th Wave Survival Reward: +10 Dungeon Points]
[Red Rose has sponsored (Corpse) with 60 Dungeon Points]
[Big Billy has sponsored (Corpse) with 200 Dungeon Points]
[Luna has transferred 130 Dungeon Points to Corpse's wallet]
[Total sponsorship received: 4270 dungeon points]
Yoo-Jung: [Itne kaafi ho gye na?]
Aarav ki team ko wave clear karte he sponsorship mein dungeon points milne lage aur Yoo-Jung ne bhi uske points Aarav ko de diye. Aarav ke paas ab 4270 Dungeon Points aa gye the.
Aarav (Nod): [Haan, Lekin ab tumhe sab ka dhayan mujhse hatana ho ga]
Yoo-Jung: *Nod*
Aarav ke kehte he Yoo-Jung bhi uski body stretch karne lagi. Lekin sab ka dhayan khud ki taraf karne ke liye Yoo-Jung sexy poses ke saath stretch ker rahi thi.
[Patrick has sponsored (Luna) with 150 Dungeon Points]
[Patrick admires Luna's flawless figure and alluring curves]
Yoo-Jung: [Aarav!]
Yoo-Jung ne sabhi Deathwatchers ka dhayan uski taraf kheench liya tha. Aarav bhi ek pal ke liye usko daikh ker daikhta he reh gaya. Yoo-Jung ne uska naam telepathically liya to Aarav hosh mein aya.
Aarav[Huh? Haan, Right]
[Corpse has requested a private meeting with Host Malphas]
[Cost: 150 Dungeon Points]
Aarav ne Yoo-Jung ke sab ke dhayan ko apni taraf khinchate he Malphas ke saath ek private meeting ki request ker di. Aarav ke request karte he Aarav first round wale cube mein aa gaya.
Malphas: Kekekeke, Ek lambay samay ke baad kisi ne private meeting ke liye bulaya hai! Lekin tum ne mujhe bhi hairan ker diya ke bina bataye tume carnival ke rules ke baare mein pata hai. Kekeke... Lagta hai yanha tum puri taiyari ke saath aye ho.
Aarav ke saamne he cube ke baahir se Malphas bhi andar aa gaya. Host ke saath private meeting sirf host ke saath he hoti thi aur private meeting mein huwi koi bhi baat Dungeon Master ko bhi nahi batayi jati thi.
Malphas: Ab batao ke kyu bulaya hai tum ne mujhe private meeting ke liye?
Aarav (Smug): Kyu bulaya hai uska to ab tak tumhe bhi andaza ho he gaya ho ga! Lekin tum agar sab kuch mujhse he bulwana chahte ho to theek hai... Main ne tumhe ek deal karne ke liye bulaya hai.
[Corpse offers 4,000 Dungeon Points for the deal]
Aarav ne baat puri karte he Malphas ko ek offer ker di. Aarav ki ye harkat daikh ker Malphas bhi hansne laga.
Malphas: Kekekeke, 4,000 Dungeon Points deal ke liye aur wo bhi details batane se pehle he? Lagta hai kaam kuch zyada he bada hai? Mujhe lag to nahi raha ke tumhe nahi pata ho ga, Lekin phir bhi ek baar deal ke rules ko padh lo....!
*Snap*
[Deal Terms & Conditions]
[Remember these rules when making a deal]
[• Every deal request will cost 100 Dungeon Points and can be rejected by the host, with no refund given.
• You cannot request changes to the Carnival rules or stage rules.
• You cannot request any information about the Carnival.
• You cannot make any requests that could harm the Carnival.
• The host will not reveal the details of the deal to anyone]
Malphas ke chutki bajate he Aarav ke saamne deal ki term and conditions aa gayi. Aakash se usko iski bhi information mil gayi thi. Lekin uske baad bhi Aarav ne usko ek baar aur padh liya.
Aarav: Alright, Ab shuru ker sakte hai kya?
Malphas: Kekekeke, Yes...!
Aarav: Tumhe mere liye west gate ko guard karna ho ga...!
Aarav ki baat ko sun ker Malphas ke chehre per ayi hu muskurahat khud he khatam ho gayi. Usko nahi laga tha ke Aarav aisi kuch request kare ga.
Malphas: Hain, Really?.... Huh, Lekin main tumhare liye Undeads ko nahi rok sakta! Ye game ke rules ke against ho ga. Main andar ate kisi Undead ko rok-
Aarav: Lekin tumhe kisi ko andar ane se rokne ke liye kis ne kaha?
Malphas: Huh?
Aarav (Smug): Haan, Tumhe kisi ko andar ane se nahi, kisi ko baahir jaane se rokna hai...!
Malphas: Kekekeke, Tum chahte ho ke main kisi ko next stage ke liye city se baahir jaane se roku kya?Interesting... Lekin ye bhi game ke rules ko change ker raha hai.
Aarav: Nope, Rules ke according city ko leave karne ke liye gate se 100 meter ki distance per jana ho ga! Lekin main tumhe kisi ko gate se 10 meter ki distance se aage badhne se rok raha hu aur puri team ko nahi sirf kisi ek teammate ko rokne ke liye keh raha hu.
Aarav ki baat ko sun ker Malphas ke chehre per ek baar dobara muskurahat aa gayi. Aarav 10 meter ki distance se uske gate ke defense ko weak ker raha tha kyu ke uska teammate gate se baahir aa he nahi sakta tha.
Lekin uske saath sirf ek teammate ko select karne se Aarav ek tarha ki bet laga raha tha. Uske agar kisi dusre teammate ne city leave karni chahi to Malphas interfere nahi karne wala tha.
Malphas: Lekin ye tum per backfire bhi ker sakta hai! Uske baad bhi tum ye karna chaho gye kya?
Aarav (Smile): Yes...!
Malphas: Kekekeke, Lekin kis teammate ko mark karo gye tum?
Malphas Aarav ke javab ka intezar karne laga ke wo kis ko mark ker ke rokne wala hai. Aarav agar galat player ko mark ker deta to uske liye risk badhne he wala tha.
Aarav: Jisko tum sab ne mark kiya tha... Protector (Kunle)...!
[Malphas agrees to the terms of the deal]
[The deal is officially sealed, meaning both parties are bound to the agreement]
Aarav ki baat sunte he Malphas ne bhi deal ko accept ker liya aur muskurane laga.
[Deal Details]
[• Malphas will guard the West Gate and prevent Protector(Kunle) from moving beyond 10 meters outside the gate.
• Malphas will not interfere with Protector until he attempts to move beyond the 10-meter boundary.
• Malphas will decide the method to stop Protector from going further.
• Anyone other than Protector is allowed to pass the 10-meter boundary freely.
• Malphas is not allowed to disclose the details of this deal to anyone]
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Carnival of Death
Dungeon ~ Stage 2 (West Gate)
Day 199th ~ Wave 397th
*Ghk! Ghk!*
Kunle uske kaanpte haatho se Malphas ki pakad se nikalne ki koshish ker raha tha. Lekin Malphas uske gale ko pakad ker pura chok ker raha tha aur Kunle ke liye ab saans lena bhi mushkil ho raha tha.
“Malphas!?”
Malphas ne ek awaaz sun ker uske side per daikha to usko udhar Game Master khada dikhayi diya aur wo uski taraf he daikh raha tha. Game Master ko daikh ker Malphas ne muskurate huwe halka sa tilt hote huwe haath wave karne laga.
Malphas (Smile): Hi...!
Game Master: Malphas, Yanha kya ho raha hai?
Malphas: Ye?... Main isko aage badhne se rok raha hu...!
Game Master: Aur wo kyu?
Malphas Game Master ko seedhe javab nahi de raha tha uske baad bhi Game Master bina kisi bhi reaction ke khada uske saath baat ker raha tha. Lekin uski calm voice mein bhi Malphas ko pata lag raha tha ke wo kitna annoyed ho chuka hai.
Malphas: Kyu ke main ne team ke captain ke saath deal ki hai! *Grin* 4,000 Dungeon Points ke liye...!
Game Master: Hmm ~ That's why...!
Malphas ki baat sun ker Game Master uske Kunle ko rokne ka kaaran samajh gaya. Lekin uske baad bhi wo santusht nahi tha. Uske haatho se uska shikar chinn chuka tha.
Malphas: Usne mujhe isko rokne ke liye to kaha hai! *Grin* Lekin kaise rokna hai ye usne nahi bataya... Ab main maar to sakta nahi hu per...!
Malphas ne kehte huwe ek haath se Kunle ke haath ko pakad liya aur muskurane laga.
Malphas: Lekin 1-2 haddiyon ko to tod he sakta hu na? Kekekeke....!
“Aur tumhe lagta hai main ye hone du ga?”
Malphas: Huh?
Malphas ne abhi Kunle ke haath ko pakda he tha ke ek haath uske kandhe per bhi aa gaya. Usko haath ko pehcanane ke liye ghumane ki bhi zaroorat nahi thi. Uske peeche Aarav khada huwa tha.
[Malphas has begun carrying out the requested action...]
Aarav abhi Midnight Ravens se he lad raha tha ke uske saamne notification aa gaya tha. Aarav ne Midnight Ravens ko handle karne ke liye Yoo-Jung ko udhar chhod diya aur khud Kunle ke paas aa gaya tha.
[Flash Steps]
*Woooosh*
Aarav ne ek jhatke mein Kunle ko Malphas ki pakad se chhudwa liya. Game Master aur Malphas dono he usko daikhte he reh gye.
[Malphas has fulfilled his task. The deal is complete]
[4,000 Dungeon Points Transferred]
Aarav ne Kunle ko bachate he deal ko complete bhi ker diya. Ab Malphas Kunle ko kuch bhi nahi ker sakta tha. Lekin uske baad bhi Malphas muskura he raha tha. Usne bhi itna to expect kiya he huwa tha.
Kunle (Gasping): Haah....Haah.... Hghh.... Haah...! *Cough*
Kunle udhar he neeche gir ker khansane laga. Uski aankhon mein aansu bhi the. Lekin ye aansu dard ke kaaran nahi pachtawe ke aansu the. Usko khud per vishwas nahi ho raha tha ke wo kaise kisi ke bhi kehne per sab ko dhokha dene ke liye taiyar ho sakta hai.
Kunle ne himmat ker ke upar daikha to Aarav uski taraf he daikh raha tha. Kunle Aarav se nazre bhi mila nahi saka aur usne dobara nazre neeche ker li.
Kunle: Huh?
Kunle ne nazre neeche ki he thi ke ek haath Aarav ne uske sar per rakh diya. Kunle uska haath sar per mehsoos ker ke chaunk gaya.
Kunle (Sobbing): [Kyu? Kyu bachane aye ap mujh jaise ek looser ko?]
Aarav: [Haan, Tum se galti huwi hai aur tumhara guilty feel karna bhi banta hai! Lekin tum abhi bhi zinda ho aur ye he kaafi hai... Andrew ne bhi meri itni badi galti ke baad bhi mujhe maaf kiya tha... aur ab main bhi wo he ker raha hu... Agar tum looser ho to main tum se bhi bada looser hu]
Aarav ki baat sun ker bhi Kunle ki wo guilty feeling khatam to nahi huwi. Lekin usne dobara uthne ka nirnay le liya. Kyu ke uska abhi tootna uski team ke liye dangerous ho sakta tha.
Malphas: Kekekeke, Kaisa lag raha hai tumhe?
Malphas ne Game Master ke paas ate huwe usse saval kiya. Uske saval per Game Master bhi thoda hairan ho gaya.
Game Master (Grin): Kaisa lagna chahiye hai? Main uski team ko todne mein successful raha... Khud ki team ko bachane ke liye bhi usko apna sab kuch he lagana per gaya.
Malphas: Kya tumhe sach mein lagta hai ke tum jeete ho?
Game Master: Huh?
Malphas (Grin): Usko shuruaat se na sirf uski team ke weak link ke baare mein pata tha! Usko ye bhi pata tha ke tum usko kab aur kaise Use karne wale ho aur usne shuruaat se he uski taiyari bhi ker li thi... He saw through all your tricks...! Kekekeke...!
Malphas kehte huwe hanste huwe udhar se chala gaya. Lekin peeche se ab Game Master Aarav ko daikh ker aur bhi gussa ho raha tha. Lekin kuch soch ker wo muskurane laga.
Aarav ne Kunle ko uthne mein madad ki aur uske saath Gate ke andar chala gaya. Aarav ne udhar Yoo-Jung ki taraf daikha to usne already sab ke sab midnight raven ke logo ko kaat ker neeche gira diya huwa tha.
Aarav aur Kunle ko andar ate daikhte he sab unke paas aa gye. Aarav ne un sab ko Kunle se kuch bhi kehne se rok diya aur sab ko healing potion de ker unhe heal hone ke liye keh diya.
Aarav: Luna.
Yoo-Jung: Haan?
Aarav Yoo-Jung ko le ker thoda side per chala gaya aur usne pocket se ek locket de diya. Yoo-Jung bhi usko daikh ker thodi hairan ho gayi.
Aarav: Ye tumhe sambhal ker rakhna ho ga! Agar mujhe yanha kuch bhi huwa to tumhe ye safely baahir le ker jana ho ga... Okay?
Aarav ne Yoo-Jung ko kandhon se pakad ker uski aankhon mein daikhte huwe kaha to Yoo-Jung bhi ek pal ke liye uski aankhon mein kho gayi.
Yoo-Jung: [Main ne tumhe bataya hai kya ke tumhari aankhe abhi bhi tumhari real aankhe he hai? Khubsurat...!]
Aarav: Huh?
Yoo-Jung (Nod): Haan, Main isko sambhal ker apne paas rakhungi.
Aarav (Smile): Thank You...!
“Corpse”
Aarav aur Yoo-Jung abhi udhar baat ker he rahe the ke Becky ne Aarav ko chillate huwe bula liya. Aarav aur Yoo-Jung bhi fauran he bhaagte huwe udhar chale gye aur saamne he unhe Caroline aur Kunle dono khade dikh gye.
Aarav: Kya huwa?
Aarav ne udhar ate he Kunle se saval kiya to Kunle ne uski dar se faili huwi aankhon se saamne ki taraf daikhte huwe udhar ishara ker diya. Aarav ne udhar daikha to uski bhi aankhe hairani se khul gayi.
Aarav: Arthur?
Aarav ke saamne Arthur khada huwa tha. Lekin wo ek insaan ke roop mein nahi balki wo ek Undead ban chuka tha. Aarav ne uske peeche khade Game Master ki taraf daikha to wo udhar khada muskurate huwe Aarav ko daikh raha tha.
Game Master: Ohooo, Kya main ye batana bhool gaya tha? *Grin* Contestant bhi marne ke baad ek Undead ban sakte hai.
Aarav ko bhi pata tha ke Game Master keh raha hai to ye ek rule ho ga. Lekin usko ye bhi pata tha ke Game Master ne Arthur ko sirf Aarav ko takleef dene ke liye Undead banaya tha.
Yoo-Jung (Worried): Corpse?
Aarav (Sigh): Huh, I can't help it...!
[Flash Steps]
*Boooom*
Game Master (Stunned): Huh?
Aarav ek jhatke ke saath aage badha aur usne apni sword ko Arthur ki chhati mein ghusate huwe usko Game Master ke paas he ek ped ke saath pin ker diya. Arthur ke khoon ki chhinte udte huwe Game Master ke mask per gir gayi.
Aarav (Whisper): You gonna regret it...!
Game Master (Grin): Let's see...!
Aarav ne ek baar uski taraf daikha to Game Master bina kisi reaction ke ek muskurahat ke saath udhar khada huwa tha. Aarav ne ek pal ke liye usko daikha aur khud bhi muskurane laga aur seedha khada ho gaya.
Aarav: My dear Deathwatchers...!
Game Master: Huh?
Aarav ke achanak Deathwatchers se baat karne per Game Master bhi chaunk gaya. Aarav ne ek baar uski taraf daikha aur dobara unse baat karne laga aur aisa lag raha tha ke jaise Game Master ki jagha per Aarav he stream ker raha tha.
Aarav: Ab tak Altheron city mein ho raha sab kuch daikh ker sab bore ho rahe ho gye! Aisa he hai na my dear Deathwatchers?
[Red Rose Nodded]
Aarav: Lekin ab main game ko thoda aur interesting banane wala hu! My dear Deathwatchers... Ap sab yanha per game sirf daikhne nahi usko control karne ke liye aye ho. Lekin ab tak ki games ko ap sirf daikh ker he enjoy ker rahe the.
[The Deathwatchers have turned their eyes to Corpse]
[A twisted sense of excitement fills the Spectators’ Room]
Aarav: Lekin ab main usko change ker raha hu! Ab koi bhi Deathwatcher mujhe stage 2 per kisi bhi tarha ka challenge de sakta hai aur jab tak usmein mujhe meri team ko harm na karna huwa tab tak main unhe accept karta rahu ga.
Game Master: Huh?
Aarav ki baat sun ker Deathwatchers ke beech bhi ek halchal si mach gayi. Game Master bhi uski boldness ko daikh ker hairan tha. Lekin hairani se zyada usko gussa aa raha tha.
[The Spectators’ Room falls silent for a moment]
[The Deathwatchers are now completely focused on Corpse]
[Deathwatchers interest has skyrocketed]
[Multiple challenges are being created at once.]
Game Master: Huh?
[Challenge: Mass Execution]
[Issued by: Red Rose]
[Objective: Kill 10,000 undead using only your own strength. No outside help is allowed]
[Reward: 1300 Dungeon Points]
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[Challenge: Starvation Endurance]
[Issued by: Big Billy]
[Objective: Survive and fight for three full days without consuming any food]
[Reward: 1700 Dungeon Points]
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[Challenge: One-Handed Warrior]
[Issued by: Iron Tyrant]
[Objective: From now on, fight using only one hand. Switching hands is not allowed]
[Reward: 950 Dungeon Points]
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[Challenge: Undead Magnet]
[Issued by: Gluttony]
[Objective: All undead within Altheron City will be drawn toward you and your team]
[Reward: 1200 Dungeon Points]
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[Challenge: Absolute Protection]
[Issued by: Spectral Jester]
[Objective: Survive until the end of this stage without allowing a single teammate to die]
[Reward: 1000 Dungeon Points]
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[Challenge: Ruthless Conqueror]
[Issued by: Blood Fiend]
[Objective: Eliminate another player’s team and take their supplies]
[Reward: 800 Dungeon Points]
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[Challenge: Poisoned Struggle]
[Issued by: Venom Mistress]
[Objective: Every wound you receive will be laced with a slow-acting poison that weakens your body. Continue fighting under this condition]
[Reward: 2000 Dungeon Points]
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[Challenge: Sleepless Survival]
[Issued by: The Silent Watcher]
[Objective: Survive for five consecutive days without sleeping]
[Reward: 900 Dungeon Points]
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[Corpse has received multiple challenge offers from Deathwatchers]
[Corpse may accept or decline any challenge]
****
Takahashi's Residence
Wind Clan ~ 2 Days Ago...!
“Challenge?”
Aakash (Nod): Haan, Dungeon Points ko earn karne ke 2 raaste he hai! Ek ya to tum Deathwatchers ko unka entertainment yaani tumhari team mein aye dukh ko enjoy karne do... Ya tum Deathwatchers ke diye Challenges ko accept ker sakte ho.
Deathwatchers ko enjoy karne ka ek raasta ye he tha ke unko wo dikhaya jaye jo wo daikhne ke liye aye hai. Players ki tadap aur unka gidgidana aur unki maut ye he unko daikhni thi. Lekin Aarav uske liye uski team ko sacrifice nahi karne wala tha.
Aarav: Lekin wo kitne he challenge de sakte hai?
Aakash (Smile): Ye he to baat hai ke unhe challenge dene ki zaroorat he nahi hoti hai kyu ke players unko reject ker dete hai! Lekin tumhe unko Challenge dene ke liye push karna ho ga aur unko tumhare push karne ke baad andar se push bhi ker diya jaye ga.
Aarav (Nod): Hmm ~ I think, I can use them...!
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Carnival of Death
Dungeon ~ Stage 2 (South Gate)
Day 313th ~ Wave 625th
[Ability (Colossus Strike) Activated]
*Ka-booooom*
*Panting*
Eren ne bhaagte huwe uski team ki taraf ate huwe Undeads ko khatam ker diya. Lekin ab wo khud aur uski team bohat thak chuki thi. Unka khana bhi lagbhag khatam he ho chuka tha aur udhar ab sirf Eren ki he team bachi thi.
Lekin unke liye sab se zyada mushkil unke healing potions ka khatam hona tha. Unke saath ayi huwi Healer to mar gayi thi. Lekin ab unko heal karne ke liye kuch bhi nahi tha.
Mira: Eren, Are you alright?
Eren (Panting): Haah.... Haah... *Nod* Haan...! Aur tum sab?
Mira ne ek baar uski team ki taraf daikha to wo sab haar maan he chuke the. Unke saath ke baaki sab survivor mar chuke the aur ab tak stage ke clear hone ka ek bhi sigh unhe dikhayi nahi de raha tha.
Mira (Sigh): Huh... Hum bhi theek hai...!
Eren: *Nod*
[Wave 625 Cleared]
[Survivors: 18 players remaining]
[Time until the next wave: 2 hours]
[All players are advised to regroup, recover, and prepare]
[Team (Dragonheart): 5 survivors remaining (Odd number)]
[Choice Matched with the captain's selected number (Odd)]
[No penalty]
Mira: Eren, Kya huwa?
Wave clear hone ke baad sabhi rest karne ke liye baith gye. Lekin Eren khada huwa city ke andar dur se Undeads ko ek taraf badhate huwe daikh raha tha.
Eren: Main bohat dinon se daikh raha hu! Undeads yanha kam aa rahe hai aur city ke andar West gate ki taraf badh rahe hai.
Mira ne Eren ki baat sun ker udhar daikha to Undeads sach mein ussi taraf ja rahe the.
Mira (Sigh): Huh, Jo bhi hai.... Lekin ye hamare liye acha he hai! Hum abhi kam Undeads ko he handle ker le utna he kaafi hai.
Eren: Huh? *Nod* Haan, Abhi hamay sirf hamare survival ke baare mein sochna chahiye hai...!
Carnival of Death
Dungeon ~ Stage 2 (North Gate)
Day 418th ~ Wave 836th
“Diego, Ab tum ye kyu ker rahe ho? Hum ne tumhe sab kuch to de diya hai... Ab kam se kam hamay jeene to de sakte ho na tum?”
Ek budha aadami neeche gira huwa Diego ke aage gidgida raha tha. Uske saath uski team ke 2 aur log bhi Diego ke kadmon mein gire huwe the aur unki jaan ki bheekh maang rahe the.
Lekin Diego unse unki sab supplies chheen lene ke baad bhi ab unko maarne ke liye aa gaya tha. Unko yun gidgidate daikh Diego bhi aur khush ho raha tha.
Diego: Agar tumhe maar du to kya pata ke sab ke sab Deathwatchers khush ho jaye? Unke khush hone ka matlab hai hamare survival ke aur bhi high chances *Grin*
Diego ne muskurate huwe kaha aur buddhe ke paas jaane laga. Usko daikh ker Budha rengate huwe peeche jaane laga. Usko yun bachne ke liye koshish karte daikh Diego bhi muskurane laga.
Diego (Grin): Kitna he dur chale jao gye aise tu- Huh??
Diego abhi uski keh he raha tha ke usne ek killing intent feel ki aur uski rooh kaanp gayi. Diego ne city ke andar daikha to usko andheri galiyon ke andar ek vyakti khada huwa dikhayi diya.
Usko daikh ker ti Diego ki bhi halat kharab ho rahi thi. Lekin Diego ne ek baar uske teammates ki taraf daikha to sab usko he hairani se daikh rahe the ke ek S ranker kaise dar raha tha.
Diego (Sigh): Huh, Lagta hai ab ek aur ko khatam karne ho ga....!
Diego ne uska sword stance liya aur ek gehri saans le ker uski taraf bhaag gaya. Lekin usko saamne se ate daikh bhi vyakti hilne ka naam he nahi le raha tha.
[Ability (Predator’s Instinct) Activated]
*Clang*
Diego ne uske senses ki madad se khud ko cover karte huwe ek attack kiya. Lekin uske saamne khade vyakti ne usko easily block ker liya.
Diego: Huh, Corpse?
Diego uske saamne Aarav ko daikh ker hairan ho gaya ke Aarav uska gate chhod ker yanha kya ker raha tha? Lekin uska saval puchne ka mann bilkul bhi nahi ker raha tha.
Diego: Left...! Ughhh ~
Diego ne left se Aarav ka ek haath ate sense kiya to wo left ko block karne laga. Lekin Left se kuch bhi nahi aya aur Aarav ne uska ghutna Diego ke pait mein maar diya.
*Cough Blood*
Aarav ka attack itna zor ka tha ke Diego bhi uska pait pakad ker udhar he ghutnon per gir gaya.
Diego: Ughhh ~ Corpse, Ek baar meri baat to su-
*Stab*
Diego kuch keh sakta Aarav ne usse pehle he usko maar diya. Ek S ranker ko khud ke saamne itne easily marte daikh baaki sab bhi dar gye.
Aarav ne aur kisi per dhayan nahi diya aur Diego ki supplies ko utha liya.
[Challenge Completed!]
[Challenge: Ruthless Conqueror]
[Issued by: Blood Fiend]
[Objective: Eliminate another player’s team and take their supplies]
[Reward: 800 Dungeon Points Granted]
Aarav ke supplies uthate he usne challenge ko bhi pura ker diya. Aarav supplies ko le ker ghoom ker udhar se jaane laga to Lion guild ke ek aur player ko gussa aa gaya.
“Ter”
*Woooosh*
“Ughhhh”
Uske kuch kehne se pehle he Aarav ne Diego ki sword ko uthaya aur kisi bhale ki tarha usko phenk diya. Sword seedhe uss player ke muh ke andar ghus gayi aur wo udhar he gir gaya.
Old Man: H-Huh?
*Stab*
*Slash*
Un sab ko aise khoye huwe daikhte he Old man ke teammates ne Lion guild per surprise attack ker diya aur 2 aur members ko maar diya. Ye daikhte he Old man bhi khada ho gaya aur un teeno ne he Lion guild ke last member ko gher liya aur usko bhi maar giraya.
*Panting*
Usko maar ker old man bhi udhar baith ker he saans lene laga aur dur jaate huwe Aarav ko daikhne laga.
Old Man: Thank You...!
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[Aj ke liye itna he, Ye update 5K words ka tha aur iske saath he hum 2 update pehle ka target daikhne ka silsila shuru ker rahe hai. Umeed karta hu ke ap ko ye update bhi pasand aya ho ga aur pasand aya hai to like karo. Like target hamara ab bhi wohi hai 130 Likes ke liye. Umeed karta hu ap ko update pasand aya ho ga ab milte hai agle update per aur tab tak ke liye, Sayonara!!!]
<Aakash (Nod): Haan, Dungeon Points...! Dungeon Points bhi tumhare C.O.D ke andar survival ke liye bohat important hai.>
<Tinkerbell (Murmured): Dungeon Points... Main ne bhi unke baare mein suna hai! Dungeon Points se player host se kisi bhi tarha ki request ker ke deal ker sakta hai. Lekin uski deal ke according uske paas enough Dungeon Points bhi hone chahiye hai.>
Aakash aur Tinkerbell ki C.O.D. ke baare me jaankari bahut kaam aayi, uske bina Aarav ki team ko bachna mushkil ho jata.
<Yoo-Jung (Nod): Haan, Lekin mere liye one handed swordsmanship thodi mushkil hai! Lekin main har wave ke saath improve ker rahi hu.>
Ufff... Yoo-Jung ka character anokha hai, out of the world.
<Aarav ke kehte he Yoo-Jung bhi uski body stretch karne lagi. Lekin sab ka dhayan khud ki taraf karne ke liye Yoo-Jung sexy poses ke saath stretch ker rahi thi.>
Hahaha...
<Malphas: Ab batao ke kyu bulaya hai tum ne mujhe private meeting ke liye?>
<Aarav: Jisko tum sab ne mark kiya tha... Protector (Kunle)...!>
What advance planning, with element of risk... How well Aarav knew all weak points of his team. Aur yeh deal Aarav ne Day 17th (Altheron ke) ko hi kar li thi, jiska advantage usko day 199th me mila.
<Malphas: Lekin 1-2 haddiyon ko to tod he sakta hu na? Kekekeke....!
“Aur tumhe lagta hai main ye hone du ga?”>
Wah... Aarav ne Kunle ko pura bacha liya, bina kisi nuksan ke. Kunle ko cheen kar turant deal complete kar li. Great.
<Yoo-Jung: [Main ne tumhe bataya hai kya ke tumhari aankhe abhi bhi tumhari real aankhe he hai? Khubsurat...!]
Aarav: Huh?
Yoo-Jung (Nod): Haan, Main isko sambhal ker apne paas rakhungi.>
A touch of pure romance.
<Aarav ek jhatke ke saath aage badha aur usne apni sword ko Arthur ki chhati mein ghusate huwe usko Game Master ke paas he ek ped ke saath pin ker diya. Arthur ke khoon ki chhinte udte huwe Game Master ke mask per gir gayi.>
Game Master ko laga tha ki weh Aarav ko weak kar dega, lekin aisa kuch nahi hua, alag se Aarav usko dhamka gaya.
<Aarav: Lekin ab main usko change ker raha hu! Ab koi bhi Deathwatcher mujhe stage 2 per kisi bhi tarha ka challenge de sakta hai aur jab tak usmein mujhe meri team ko harm na karna huwa tab tak main unhe accept karta rahu ga.>
Kya tactics kheli hai... Aarav aur Dungeon points bhi le lega, apni team ke liye khana bhi aur kuch opponents ko bhi khatam kar dega. Diego ke marte hi ek strong opponent khatam ho gaya aur Aarav ko uski team ki bhi sahanubhuti mil gayi. Ab South Gate per Eren hi bacha hai.
Again a great update.
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Jisko hum last update me cheating keh rhe the vo to actual me arav ka master strock tha
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UPDATE 106 ~
(DUNGEON POINTS)
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Takahashi's Residence
Wind Clan ~ 2 Days Ago...!
“Dungeon Points?”
Aakash ne Aarav aur Yoo-Jung ko C.O.D ki kuch aur Information dene ke liye uske kamre mein bulaya tha. Aarav ne Tinkerbell ko bhi uski human form mein unke saath baithne ke liye keh diya tha.
Aakash (Nod): Haan, Dungeon Points...! Dungeon Points bhi tumhare C.O.D ke andar survival ke liye bohat important hai.
Aarav ko dungeon points ke baare mein Michael ne bhi bataya tha. Lekin usko bhi ache se pata nahi tha ke unka kya use hai. Aarav unko dhayan mein to rakh raha tha. Lekin ek saath bohat kuch sochne ke kaaran wo bhi unke upar kuch khaas dhayan nahi de saka.
Tinkerbell (Murmured): Dungeon Points... Main ne bhi unke baare mein suna hai! Dungeon Points se player host se kisi bhi tarha ki request ker ke deal ker sakta hai. Lekin uski deal ke according uske paas enough Dungeon Points bhi hone chahiye hai.
Aakash: Exactly, Mostly sab players ko ye he lagta hai ke unhe ye points jeetne ka baad paison mein withdraw karne ke liye diye gye hai! Lekin ye baat Deathwatchers ko batayi jati hai ke Dungeon Points ki kya value hai.
Tinkerbell: Lekin uske liye to hamare paas already Deathwatchers hai na? Unke support se hum kisi bhi tarha ki request ko accept karwa sakte hai na?
Aakash: Nahi... Deathwatchers udhar sirf players ko tadapte huwe daikhne ke liye hote hai! Lekin ab agar Deathwatcher kisi ko personally help karne ki koshish kare gye to suspicious lage gye.
Aarav: Hmm ~ Deathwatchers ka support give and take relationship ki tarha hai! Unse kisi bhi tarha ka support lene ke liye uske andar unke liye bhi kuch na kuch hona he chahiye hai.
Aarav ki baat sun ker ab sab ko Aakash ki baat ka matlab samajh aya tha. Deathwatchers usko direct help nahi ker sakte the aur uske liye Aakash unhe Dungeon Points ke baare mein bata raha tha.
Aakash (Nod): Haan, Isiliye Aarav tumhe bhi sab ka intrest banaye rakhna ho ga! Kyu ke bina kisi intrest ke Dungeon Points bhi gift kiye to bhi carnival ko shak ho sakta hai... Isiliye tumhe difficult task lene ho gye kuch na kuch karte rehna ho ga.
Tinkerbell: Lekin Aarav ko Dungeon Points ke liye itni mehnat karne ki kya zaroorat? Aarav ko sab ko safe rakhne ki koshish karni chahiye na ke kisi bhi danger task se sab kuch risk mein daalna chahiye hai... Aarav uske limited stats ke saath bhi kisi S ranker se zyada strong hai.
Yoo-Jung: Nahi... Aakash sahi keh raha hai! Aarav strong hai aur khud ki strength se Aarav khud ko to bacha sakta hai. Lekin... Lekin ye zaroori nahi hai ke Aarav dusron ki bhi hamesha bacha sake ga.
Yoo-Jung ne Tinkerbell ki baat sunte he fauran keh diya. Yoo-Jung ko ache se andaza tha ke aisi bhi situation ho sakti thi ke power hote huwe bhi ap khud ko powerless mehsoos karte ho.
Aakash: There is no battle that you can't win! And there is no battle you'll win for sure.
Tinkerbell: Huh?
Aakash (Nod): Haan, Aarav strong zaroor hai! But, Strength alone isn’t always enough to win a fight... Victory comes from using every resource, every opportunity, and every advantage at your disposal.
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Carnival of Death
Dungeon ~ Stage 2 (North Gate)
Day 17th ~ Wave 34th
“Luna”
Aarav unchi awaaz mein kehte huwe Yoo-Jung ke paas chala gaya aur usko cover karne laga. Uske paas aur bhi zyada Undeads aa rahe the aur Aarav ke liye Yoo-Jung khud ko weak dikhane ki koshish ker rahi thi.
[Wave 34 Cleared]
[Survivors: 267 players remaining]
[Time until the next wave: 2 hours]
[All players are advised to regroup, recover, and prepare]
[Team (Protector): 5 survivors remaining (Odd number)]
[Choice Matched with the captain's selected number (Odd)]
[No penalty]
Aarav: Are you alright?
Aarav ne Yoo-Jung ko uske saamne khadi kiya aur uske haath ko daikhne laga. Yoo-Jung abhi bhi sirf uske ek haath ka Use ker rahi thi. Aarav waves ke beech mein Yoo-Jung ko check karne ka dikhava ker raha tha.
Yoo-Jung (Nod): Haan, Lekin mere liye one handed swordsmanship thodi mushkil hai! Lekin main har wave ke saath improve ker rahi hu.
[34th Wave Survival Reward: +10 Dungeon Points]
[Red Rose has sponsored (Corpse) with 60 Dungeon Points]
[Big Billy has sponsored (Corpse) with 200 Dungeon Points]
[Luna has transferred 130 Dungeon Points to Corpse's wallet]
[Total sponsorship received: 4270 dungeon points]
Yoo-Jung: [Itne kaafi ho gye na?]
Aarav ki team ko wave clear karte he sponsorship mein dungeon points milne lage aur Yoo-Jung ne bhi uske points Aarav ko de diye. Aarav ke paas ab 4270 Dungeon Points aa gye the.
Aarav (Nod): [Haan, Lekin ab tumhe sab ka dhayan mujhse hatana ho ga]
Yoo-Jung: *Nod*
Aarav ke kehte he Yoo-Jung bhi uski body stretch karne lagi. Lekin sab ka dhayan khud ki taraf karne ke liye Yoo-Jung sexy poses ke saath stretch ker rahi thi.
[Patrick has sponsored (Luna) with 150 Dungeon Points]
[Patrick admires Luna's flawless figure and alluring curves]
Yoo-Jung: [Aarav!]
Yoo-Jung ne sabhi Deathwatchers ka dhayan uski taraf kheench liya tha. Aarav bhi ek pal ke liye usko daikh ker daikhta he reh gaya. Yoo-Jung ne uska naam telepathically liya to Aarav hosh mein aya.
Aarav[Huh? Haan, Right]
[Corpse has requested a private meeting with Host Malphas]
[Cost: 150 Dungeon Points]
Aarav ne Yoo-Jung ke sab ke dhayan ko apni taraf khinchate he Malphas ke saath ek private meeting ki request ker di. Aarav ke request karte he Aarav first round wale cube mein aa gaya.
Malphas: Kekekeke, Ek lambay samay ke baad kisi ne private meeting ke liye bulaya hai! Lekin tum ne mujhe bhi hairan ker diya ke bina bataye tume carnival ke rules ke baare mein pata hai. Kekeke... Lagta hai yanha tum puri taiyari ke saath aye ho.
Aarav ke saamne he cube ke baahir se Malphas bhi andar aa gaya. Host ke saath private meeting sirf host ke saath he hoti thi aur private meeting mein huwi koi bhi baat Dungeon Master ko bhi nahi batayi jati thi.
Malphas: Ab batao ke kyu bulaya hai tum ne mujhe private meeting ke liye?
Aarav (Smug): Kyu bulaya hai uska to ab tak tumhe bhi andaza ho he gaya ho ga! Lekin tum agar sab kuch mujhse he bulwana chahte ho to theek hai... Main ne tumhe ek deal karne ke liye bulaya hai.
[Corpse offers 4,000 Dungeon Points for the deal]
Aarav ne baat puri karte he Malphas ko ek offer ker di. Aarav ki ye harkat daikh ker Malphas bhi hansne laga.
Malphas: Kekekeke, 4,000 Dungeon Points deal ke liye aur wo bhi details batane se pehle he? Lagta hai kaam kuch zyada he bada hai? Mujhe lag to nahi raha ke tumhe nahi pata ho ga, Lekin phir bhi ek baar deal ke rules ko padh lo....!
*Snap*
[Deal Terms & Conditions]
[Remember these rules when making a deal]
[• Every deal request will cost 100 Dungeon Points and can be rejected by the host, with no refund given.
• You cannot request changes to the Carnival rules or stage rules.
• You cannot request any information about the Carnival.
• You cannot make any requests that could harm the Carnival.
• The host will not reveal the details of the deal to anyone]
Malphas ke chutki bajate he Aarav ke saamne deal ki term and conditions aa gayi. Aakash se usko iski bhi information mil gayi thi. Lekin uske baad bhi Aarav ne usko ek baar aur padh liya.
Aarav: Alright, Ab shuru ker sakte hai kya?
Malphas: Kekekeke, Yes...!
Aarav: Tumhe mere liye west gate ko guard karna ho ga...!
Aarav ki baat ko sun ker Malphas ke chehre per ayi hu muskurahat khud he khatam ho gayi. Usko nahi laga tha ke Aarav aisi kuch request kare ga.
Malphas: Hain, Really?.... Huh, Lekin main tumhare liye Undeads ko nahi rok sakta! Ye game ke rules ke against ho ga. Main andar ate kisi Undead ko rok-
Aarav: Lekin tumhe kisi ko andar ane se rokne ke liye kis ne kaha?
Malphas: Huh?
Aarav (Smug): Haan, Tumhe kisi ko andar ane se nahi, kisi ko baahir jaane se rokna hai...!
Malphas: Kekekeke, Tum chahte ho ke main kisi ko next stage ke liye city se baahir jaane se roku kya?Interesting... Lekin ye bhi game ke rules ko change ker raha hai.
Aarav: Nope, Rules ke according city ko leave karne ke liye gate se 100 meter ki distance per jana ho ga! Lekin main tumhe kisi ko gate se 10 meter ki distance se aage badhne se rok raha hu aur puri team ko nahi sirf kisi ek teammate ko rokne ke liye keh raha hu.
Aarav ki baat ko sun ker Malphas ke chehre per ek baar dobara muskurahat aa gayi. Aarav 10 meter ki distance se uske gate ke defense ko weak ker raha tha kyu ke uska teammate gate se baahir aa he nahi sakta tha.
Lekin uske saath sirf ek teammate ko select karne se Aarav ek tarha ki bet laga raha tha. Uske agar kisi dusre teammate ne city leave karni chahi to Malphas interfere nahi karne wala tha.
Malphas: Lekin ye tum per backfire bhi ker sakta hai! Uske baad bhi tum ye karna chaho gye kya?
Aarav (Smile): Yes...!
Malphas: Kekekeke, Lekin kis teammate ko mark karo gye tum?
Malphas Aarav ke javab ka intezar karne laga ke wo kis ko mark ker ke rokne wala hai. Aarav agar galat player ko mark ker deta to uske liye risk badhne he wala tha.
Aarav: Jisko tum sab ne mark kiya tha... Protector (Kunle)...!
[Malphas agrees to the terms of the deal]
[The deal is officially sealed, meaning both parties are bound to the agreement]
Aarav ki baat sunte he Malphas ne bhi deal ko accept ker liya aur muskurane laga.
[Deal Details]
[• Malphas will guard the West Gate and prevent Protector(Kunle) from moving beyond 10 meters outside the gate.
• Malphas will not interfere with Protector until he attempts to move beyond the 10-meter boundary.
• Malphas will decide the method to stop Protector from going further.
• Anyone other than Protector is allowed to pass the 10-meter boundary freely.
• Malphas is not allowed to disclose the details of this deal to anyone]
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Carnival of Death
Dungeon ~ Stage 2 (West Gate)
Day 199th ~ Wave 397th
*Ghk! Ghk!*
Kunle uske kaanpte haatho se Malphas ki pakad se nikalne ki koshish ker raha tha. Lekin Malphas uske gale ko pakad ker pura chok ker raha tha aur Kunle ke liye ab saans lena bhi mushkil ho raha tha.
“Malphas!?”
Malphas ne ek awaaz sun ker uske side per daikha to usko udhar Game Master khada dikhayi diya aur wo uski taraf he daikh raha tha. Game Master ko daikh ker Malphas ne muskurate huwe halka sa tilt hote huwe haath wave karne laga.
Malphas (Smile): Hi...!
Game Master: Malphas, Yanha kya ho raha hai?
Malphas: Ye?... Main isko aage badhne se rok raha hu...!
Game Master: Aur wo kyu?
Malphas Game Master ko seedhe javab nahi de raha tha uske baad bhi Game Master bina kisi bhi reaction ke khada uske saath baat ker raha tha. Lekin uski calm voice mein bhi Malphas ko pata lag raha tha ke wo kitna annoyed ho chuka hai.
Malphas: Kyu ke main ne team ke captain ke saath deal ki hai! *Grin* 4,000 Dungeon Points ke liye...!
Game Master: Hmm ~ That's why...!
Malphas ki baat sun ker Game Master uske Kunle ko rokne ka kaaran samajh gaya. Lekin uske baad bhi wo santusht nahi tha. Uske haatho se uska shikar chinn chuka tha.
Malphas: Usne mujhe isko rokne ke liye to kaha hai! *Grin* Lekin kaise rokna hai ye usne nahi bataya... Ab main maar to sakta nahi hu per...!
Malphas ne kehte huwe ek haath se Kunle ke haath ko pakad liya aur muskurane laga.
Malphas: Lekin 1-2 haddiyon ko to tod he sakta hu na? Kekekeke....!
“Aur tumhe lagta hai main ye hone du ga?”
Malphas: Huh?
Malphas ne abhi Kunle ke haath ko pakda he tha ke ek haath uske kandhe per bhi aa gaya. Usko haath ko pehcanane ke liye ghumane ki bhi zaroorat nahi thi. Uske peeche Aarav khada huwa tha.
[Malphas has begun carrying out the requested action...]
Aarav abhi Midnight Ravens se he lad raha tha ke uske saamne notification aa gaya tha. Aarav ne Midnight Ravens ko handle karne ke liye Yoo-Jung ko udhar chhod diya aur khud Kunle ke paas aa gaya tha.
[Flash Steps]
*Woooosh*
Aarav ne ek jhatke mein Kunle ko Malphas ki pakad se chhudwa liya. Game Master aur Malphas dono he usko daikhte he reh gye.
[Malphas has fulfilled his task. The deal is complete]
[4,000 Dungeon Points Transferred]
Aarav ne Kunle ko bachate he deal ko complete bhi ker diya. Ab Malphas Kunle ko kuch bhi nahi ker sakta tha. Lekin uske baad bhi Malphas muskura he raha tha. Usne bhi itna to expect kiya he huwa tha.
Kunle (Gasping): Haah....Haah.... Hghh.... Haah...! *Cough*
Kunle udhar he neeche gir ker khansane laga. Uski aankhon mein aansu bhi the. Lekin ye aansu dard ke kaaran nahi pachtawe ke aansu the. Usko khud per vishwas nahi ho raha tha ke wo kaise kisi ke bhi kehne per sab ko dhokha dene ke liye taiyar ho sakta hai.
Kunle ne himmat ker ke upar daikha to Aarav uski taraf he daikh raha tha. Kunle Aarav se nazre bhi mila nahi saka aur usne dobara nazre neeche ker li.
Kunle: Huh?
Kunle ne nazre neeche ki he thi ke ek haath Aarav ne uske sar per rakh diya. Kunle uska haath sar per mehsoos ker ke chaunk gaya.
Kunle (Sobbing): [Kyu? Kyu bachane aye ap mujh jaise ek looser ko?]
Aarav: [Haan, Tum se galti huwi hai aur tumhara guilty feel karna bhi banta hai! Lekin tum abhi bhi zinda ho aur ye he kaafi hai... Andrew ne bhi meri itni badi galti ke baad bhi mujhe maaf kiya tha... aur ab main bhi wo he ker raha hu... Agar tum looser ho to main tum se bhi bada looser hu]
Aarav ki baat sun ker bhi Kunle ki wo guilty feeling khatam to nahi huwi. Lekin usne dobara uthne ka nirnay le liya. Kyu ke uska abhi tootna uski team ke liye dangerous ho sakta tha.
Malphas: Kekekeke, Kaisa lag raha hai tumhe?
Malphas ne Game Master ke paas ate huwe usse saval kiya. Uske saval per Game Master bhi thoda hairan ho gaya.
Game Master (Grin): Kaisa lagna chahiye hai? Main uski team ko todne mein successful raha... Khud ki team ko bachane ke liye bhi usko apna sab kuch he lagana per gaya.
Malphas: Kya tumhe sach mein lagta hai ke tum jeete ho?
Game Master: Huh?
Malphas (Grin): Usko shuruaat se na sirf uski team ke weak link ke baare mein pata tha! Usko ye bhi pata tha ke tum usko kab aur kaise Use karne wale ho aur usne shuruaat se he uski taiyari bhi ker li thi... He saw through all your tricks...! Kekekeke...!
Malphas kehte huwe hanste huwe udhar se chala gaya. Lekin peeche se ab Game Master Aarav ko daikh ker aur bhi gussa ho raha tha. Lekin kuch soch ker wo muskurane laga.
Aarav ne Kunle ko uthne mein madad ki aur uske saath Gate ke andar chala gaya. Aarav ne udhar Yoo-Jung ki taraf daikha to usne already sab ke sab midnight raven ke logo ko kaat ker neeche gira diya huwa tha.
Aarav aur Kunle ko andar ate daikhte he sab unke paas aa gye. Aarav ne un sab ko Kunle se kuch bhi kehne se rok diya aur sab ko healing potion de ker unhe heal hone ke liye keh diya.
Aarav: Luna.
Yoo-Jung: Haan?
Aarav Yoo-Jung ko le ker thoda side per chala gaya aur usne pocket se ek locket de diya. Yoo-Jung bhi usko daikh ker thodi hairan ho gayi.
Aarav: Ye tumhe sambhal ker rakhna ho ga! Agar mujhe yanha kuch bhi huwa to tumhe ye safely baahir le ker jana ho ga... Okay?
Aarav ne Yoo-Jung ko kandhon se pakad ker uski aankhon mein daikhte huwe kaha to Yoo-Jung bhi ek pal ke liye uski aankhon mein kho gayi.
Yoo-Jung: [Main ne tumhe bataya hai kya ke tumhari aankhe abhi bhi tumhari real aankhe he hai? Khubsurat...!]
Aarav: Huh?
Yoo-Jung (Nod): Haan, Main isko sambhal ker apne paas rakhungi.
Aarav (Smile): Thank You...!
“Corpse”
Aarav aur Yoo-Jung abhi udhar baat ker he rahe the ke Becky ne Aarav ko chillate huwe bula liya. Aarav aur Yoo-Jung bhi fauran he bhaagte huwe udhar chale gye aur saamne he unhe Caroline aur Kunle dono khade dikh gye.
Aarav: Kya huwa?
Aarav ne udhar ate he Kunle se saval kiya to Kunle ne uski dar se faili huwi aankhon se saamne ki taraf daikhte huwe udhar ishara ker diya. Aarav ne udhar daikha to uski bhi aankhe hairani se khul gayi.
Aarav: Arthur?
Aarav ke saamne Arthur khada huwa tha. Lekin wo ek insaan ke roop mein nahi balki wo ek Undead ban chuka tha. Aarav ne uske peeche khade Game Master ki taraf daikha to wo udhar khada muskurate huwe Aarav ko daikh raha tha.
Game Master: Ohooo, Kya main ye batana bhool gaya tha? *Grin* Contestant bhi marne ke baad ek Undead ban sakte hai.
Aarav ko bhi pata tha ke Game Master keh raha hai to ye ek rule ho ga. Lekin usko ye bhi pata tha ke Game Master ne Arthur ko sirf Aarav ko takleef dene ke liye Undead banaya tha.
Yoo-Jung (Worried): Corpse?
Aarav (Sigh): Huh, I can't help it...!
[Flash Steps]
*Boooom*
Game Master (Stunned): Huh?
Aarav ek jhatke ke saath aage badha aur usne apni sword ko Arthur ki chhati mein ghusate huwe usko Game Master ke paas he ek ped ke saath pin ker diya. Arthur ke khoon ki chhinte udte huwe Game Master ke mask per gir gayi.
Aarav (Whisper): You gonna regret it...!
Game Master (Grin): Let's see...!
Aarav ne ek baar uski taraf daikha to Game Master bina kisi reaction ke ek muskurahat ke saath udhar khada huwa tha. Aarav ne ek pal ke liye usko daikha aur khud bhi muskurane laga aur seedha khada ho gaya.
Aarav: My dear Deathwatchers...!
Game Master: Huh?
Aarav ke achanak Deathwatchers se baat karne per Game Master bhi chaunk gaya. Aarav ne ek baar uski taraf daikha aur dobara unse baat karne laga aur aisa lag raha tha ke jaise Game Master ki jagha per Aarav he stream ker raha tha.
Aarav: Ab tak Altheron city mein ho raha sab kuch daikh ker sab bore ho rahe ho gye! Aisa he hai na my dear Deathwatchers?
[Red Rose Nodded]
Aarav: Lekin ab main game ko thoda aur interesting banane wala hu! My dear Deathwatchers... Ap sab yanha per game sirf daikhne nahi usko control karne ke liye aye ho. Lekin ab tak ki games ko ap sirf daikh ker he enjoy ker rahe the.
[The Deathwatchers have turned their eyes to Corpse]
[A twisted sense of excitement fills the Spectators’ Room]
Aarav: Lekin ab main usko change ker raha hu! Ab koi bhi Deathwatcher mujhe stage 2 per kisi bhi tarha ka challenge de sakta hai aur jab tak usmein mujhe meri team ko harm na karna huwa tab tak main unhe accept karta rahu ga.
Game Master: Huh?
Aarav ki baat sun ker Deathwatchers ke beech bhi ek halchal si mach gayi. Game Master bhi uski boldness ko daikh ker hairan tha. Lekin hairani se zyada usko gussa aa raha tha.
[The Spectators’ Room falls silent for a moment]
[The Deathwatchers are now completely focused on Corpse]
[Deathwatchers interest has skyrocketed]
[Multiple challenges are being created at once.]
Game Master: Huh?
[Challenge: Mass Execution]
[Issued by: Red Rose]
[Objective: Kill 10,000 undead using only your own strength. No outside help is allowed]
[Reward: 1300 Dungeon Points]
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[Challenge: Starvation Endurance]
[Issued by: Big Billy]
[Objective: Survive and fight for three full days without consuming any food]
[Reward: 1700 Dungeon Points]
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[Challenge: One-Handed Warrior]
[Issued by: Iron Tyrant]
[Objective: From now on, fight using only one hand. Switching hands is not allowed]
[Reward: 950 Dungeon Points]
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[Challenge: Undead Magnet]
[Issued by: Gluttony]
[Objective: All undead within Altheron City will be drawn toward you and your team]
[Reward: 1200 Dungeon Points]
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[Challenge: Absolute Protection]
[Issued by: Spectral Jester]
[Objective: Survive until the end of this stage without allowing a single teammate to die]
[Reward: 1000 Dungeon Points]
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[Challenge: Ruthless Conqueror]
[Issued by: Blood Fiend]
[Objective: Eliminate another player’s team and take their supplies]
[Reward: 800 Dungeon Points]
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[Challenge: Poisoned Struggle]
[Issued by: Venom Mistress]
[Objective: Every wound you receive will be laced with a slow-acting poison that weakens your body. Continue fighting under this condition]
[Reward: 2000 Dungeon Points]
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[Challenge: Sleepless Survival]
[Issued by: The Silent Watcher]
[Objective: Survive for five consecutive days without sleeping]
[Reward: 900 Dungeon Points]
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[Corpse has received multiple challenge offers from Deathwatchers]
[Corpse may accept or decline any challenge]
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Takahashi's Residence
Wind Clan ~ 2 Days Ago...!
“Challenge?”
Aakash (Nod): Haan, Dungeon Points ko earn karne ke 2 raaste he hai! Ek ya to tum Deathwatchers ko unka entertainment yaani tumhari team mein aye dukh ko enjoy karne do... Ya tum Deathwatchers ke diye Challenges ko accept ker sakte ho.
Deathwatchers ko enjoy karne ka ek raasta ye he tha ke unko wo dikhaya jaye jo wo daikhne ke liye aye hai. Players ki tadap aur unka gidgidana aur unki maut ye he unko daikhni thi. Lekin Aarav uske liye uski team ko sacrifice nahi karne wala tha.
Aarav: Lekin wo kitne he challenge de sakte hai?
Aakash (Smile): Ye he to baat hai ke unhe challenge dene ki zaroorat he nahi hoti hai kyu ke players unko reject ker dete hai! Lekin tumhe unko Challenge dene ke liye push karna ho ga aur unko tumhare push karne ke baad andar se push bhi ker diya jaye ga.
Aarav (Nod): Hmm ~ I think, I can use them...!
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Carnival of Death
Dungeon ~ Stage 2 (South Gate)
Day 313th ~ Wave 625th
[Ability (Colossus Strike) Activated]
*Ka-booooom*
*Panting*
Eren ne bhaagte huwe uski team ki taraf ate huwe Undeads ko khatam ker diya. Lekin ab wo khud aur uski team bohat thak chuki thi. Unka khana bhi lagbhag khatam he ho chuka tha aur udhar ab sirf Eren ki he team bachi thi.
Lekin unke liye sab se zyada mushkil unke healing potions ka khatam hona tha. Unke saath ayi huwi Healer to mar gayi thi. Lekin ab unko heal karne ke liye kuch bhi nahi tha.
Mira: Eren, Are you alright?
Eren (Panting): Haah.... Haah... *Nod* Haan...! Aur tum sab?
Mira ne ek baar uski team ki taraf daikha to wo sab haar maan he chuke the. Unke saath ke baaki sab survivor mar chuke the aur ab tak stage ke clear hone ka ek bhi sigh unhe dikhayi nahi de raha tha.
Mira (Sigh): Huh... Hum bhi theek hai...!
Eren: *Nod*
[Wave 625 Cleared]
[Survivors: 18 players remaining]
[Time until the next wave: 2 hours]
[All players are advised to regroup, recover, and prepare]
[Team (Dragonheart): 5 survivors remaining (Odd number)]
[Choice Matched with the captain's selected number (Odd)]
[No penalty]
Mira: Eren, Kya huwa?
Wave clear hone ke baad sabhi rest karne ke liye baith gye. Lekin Eren khada huwa city ke andar dur se Undeads ko ek taraf badhate huwe daikh raha tha.
Eren: Main bohat dinon se daikh raha hu! Undeads yanha kam aa rahe hai aur city ke andar West gate ki taraf badh rahe hai.
Mira ne Eren ki baat sun ker udhar daikha to Undeads sach mein ussi taraf ja rahe the.
Mira (Sigh): Huh, Jo bhi hai.... Lekin ye hamare liye acha he hai! Hum abhi kam Undeads ko he handle ker le utna he kaafi hai.
Eren: Huh? *Nod* Haan, Abhi hamay sirf hamare survival ke baare mein sochna chahiye hai...!
Carnival of Death
Dungeon ~ Stage 2 (North Gate)
Day 418th ~ Wave 836th
“Diego, Ab tum ye kyu ker rahe ho? Hum ne tumhe sab kuch to de diya hai... Ab kam se kam hamay jeene to de sakte ho na tum?”
Ek budha aadami neeche gira huwa Diego ke aage gidgida raha tha. Uske saath uski team ke 2 aur log bhi Diego ke kadmon mein gire huwe the aur unki jaan ki bheekh maang rahe the.
Lekin Diego unse unki sab supplies chheen lene ke baad bhi ab unko maarne ke liye aa gaya tha. Unko yun gidgidate daikh Diego bhi aur khush ho raha tha.
Diego: Agar tumhe maar du to kya pata ke sab ke sab Deathwatchers khush ho jaye? Unke khush hone ka matlab hai hamare survival ke aur bhi high chances *Grin*
Diego ne muskurate huwe kaha aur buddhe ke paas jaane laga. Usko daikh ker Budha rengate huwe peeche jaane laga. Usko yun bachne ke liye koshish karte daikh Diego bhi muskurane laga.
Diego (Grin): Kitna he dur chale jao gye aise tu- Huh??
Diego abhi uski keh he raha tha ke usne ek killing intent feel ki aur uski rooh kaanp gayi. Diego ne city ke andar daikha to usko andheri galiyon ke andar ek vyakti khada huwa dikhayi diya.
Usko daikh ker ti Diego ki bhi halat kharab ho rahi thi. Lekin Diego ne ek baar uske teammates ki taraf daikha to sab usko he hairani se daikh rahe the ke ek S ranker kaise dar raha tha.
Diego (Sigh): Huh, Lagta hai ab ek aur ko khatam karne ho ga....!
Diego ne uska sword stance liya aur ek gehri saans le ker uski taraf bhaag gaya. Lekin usko saamne se ate daikh bhi vyakti hilne ka naam he nahi le raha tha.
[Ability (Predator’s Instinct) Activated]
*Clang*
Diego ne uske senses ki madad se khud ko cover karte huwe ek attack kiya. Lekin uske saamne khade vyakti ne usko easily block ker liya.
Diego: Huh, Corpse?
Diego uske saamne Aarav ko daikh ker hairan ho gaya ke Aarav uska gate chhod ker yanha kya ker raha tha? Lekin uska saval puchne ka mann bilkul bhi nahi ker raha tha.
Diego: Left...! Ughhh ~
Diego ne left se Aarav ka ek haath ate sense kiya to wo left ko block karne laga. Lekin Left se kuch bhi nahi aya aur Aarav ne uska ghutna Diego ke pait mein maar diya.
*Cough Blood*
Aarav ka attack itna zor ka tha ke Diego bhi uska pait pakad ker udhar he ghutnon per gir gaya.
Diego: Ughhh ~ Corpse, Ek baar meri baat to su-
*Stab*
Diego kuch keh sakta Aarav ne usse pehle he usko maar diya. Ek S ranker ko khud ke saamne itne easily marte daikh baaki sab bhi dar gye.
Aarav ne aur kisi per dhayan nahi diya aur Diego ki supplies ko utha liya.
[Challenge Completed!]
[Challenge: Ruthless Conqueror]
[Issued by: Blood Fiend]
[Objective: Eliminate another player’s team and take their supplies]
[Reward: 800 Dungeon Points Granted]
Aarav ke supplies uthate he usne challenge ko bhi pura ker diya. Aarav supplies ko le ker ghoom ker udhar se jaane laga to Lion guild ke ek aur player ko gussa aa gaya.
“Ter”
*Woooosh*
“Ughhhh”
Uske kuch kehne se pehle he Aarav ne Diego ki sword ko uthaya aur kisi bhale ki tarha usko phenk diya. Sword seedhe uss player ke muh ke andar ghus gayi aur wo udhar he gir gaya.
Old Man: H-Huh?
*Stab*
*Slash*
Un sab ko aise khoye huwe daikhte he Old man ke teammates ne Lion guild per surprise attack ker diya aur 2 aur members ko maar diya. Ye daikhte he Old man bhi khada ho gaya aur un teeno ne he Lion guild ke last member ko gher liya aur usko bhi maar giraya.
*Panting*
Usko maar ker old man bhi udhar baith ker he saans lene laga aur dur jaate huwe Aarav ko daikhne laga.
Old Man: Thank You...!
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[Aj ke liye itna he, Ye update 5K words ka tha aur iske saath he hum 2 update pehle ka target daikhne ka silsila shuru ker rahe hai. Umeed karta hu ke ap ko ye update bhi pasand aya ho ga aur pasand aya hai to like karo. Like target hamara ab bhi wohi hai 130 Likes ke liye. Umeed karta hu ap ko update pasand aya ho ga ab milte hai agle update per aur tab tak ke liye, Sayonara!!!]
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Maja aa raha hai padhkar....
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Maja aa raha hai padhkar....
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As I promised, here's my first review jitna kuch smjh mein aaya likh diya
I'll be honest ke mujhe kahin pe bhi pehle 10 chapter padhne mein itna jor padha hoga...do baar padh ke sab smjh aaya
Ek cheez meri bahut bada doubt hai kabhi story real life mein chalte hai fir beech mein level up tower seedhe...shyad woh scene past ka tha...?
Yahan bhi thoda confusing tha...Will to live was not activated? Also, woh pichla wala doubt abhi bhi hai ke do jagah ke scenes kyu chal rhe hai Aarav ke...pehle toh halat bahut kharab hai hero ke. Urvi mein main khudko self insert kar chuki hoon...isliye pls usko kuch mat karna atleast lol
Bear mar gya lekin Wolf ke battle stone ke chapet mein aa gya. Nice twist matlab...stones, mana, potions bilkul classic litrpg ban gye hai...bahut din baad hi padh rhe hoon aisa kuch. Will to live wali ability wali bhi abhi ke liye Gray Zone mein hi rkhungi...matlab ke koi isse kabhi mein musibat mein use kar ke bach skta hai...sach bolu toh aise abilities thode cheats se hi lagte hai. Story mein magic hai to uske upar kuch rules bhi hone chaiye nhi toh log chamatkar bolte hai usse.
Iss wale update mei writings skills bhi pehle wale se jayda upar chale gye thoda. Nice!
hinglish mein padhne mein thoda jor toh padhta hai kyuki litrpg padhne ke aadat english mein hi hai. Skill, abilities, unique abilities...man you have done your research. Thode starting mein characters jayda hai aur sabka alag diaspora hai...Daisuke from China...no Japan lol. Yoo Jung from K-pop.
Isabelle doctor hai? Aur kon tha fir bhul gye.
Jokes aside mast chapter tha.
Aarav ka past kuch jayda hi dark ho gya hai... let's see how the Vengeance starts but pls usse family ke against mat bana dena....that's why I avoid family dramas...aapas mein hi ladte rhenge.
So, team Aarav banke taiyar hai actually...Isabelle healer hai, Yoojung Archer, Daisuke Swordsman plus tank...Andrew ka main bhul gye ka role tha. One thing Aarav wahan cave mein pehle pahucha fir woh Alpha wala scene baad mein kyu kiya?
Also Will to live ab Devour main badal chuke hai...this skill is a even bigger cheat matalab ab koi tik hi nhi payega saamne. Cards ache banaye hai...sab ke skills yaad kaise rkhungi dekhte hai...naam hu yaad mushkil se ho rhe hai. One request ke sabke cards aur jo bhi sill vagarh hai first page mein mention kar do pls...taaki ref mil sake.
Finally we are about to get the Orc King.
So, Andrew tank hai ab clear ho rha hai team formation. Yeh shadow ke peeche kya raaz...khair Isabelle ko toh bacha liya.
What? Andrew died? Mujhe laga uska aur bhi role hoga story mein
Demon wolf evolve ho gya...Aarav general...yeh thoda upar se gya pls explain. Ek baat ismein powers bahut jayda jaldi badh rhe hai...Maine jitne bhi padhe hai first season thoda slow lene ke koshish karte hai taaki readers ko bhi foundation ka smjh mein aa jaye. But anyway yahan kuch smjh nhi aaya toh direct author se hi contact kar skte hai.
Urvi ka scene bahut emotional tha usko laga ke usne apne bhai ko kho hi diya hai, (my favourite character, I read somewhere from spoilers ke tum usse maar doge seriously man why the cold heart
) aur yeh kya Team US yahan uske ghar kaise pahuch gye? Behind the scenes bhi alag hi chal rha hai.
Abhi isse aage nhi padh paaye kyuki mere dimag mein bahut saare doubts the. Pehle inko clear Karo pls. Shayd hi Maine jitne litrpgs padhe usmein itne fast plot dekhe hoge starting mein, why the rush...?!
I feel ke yahan 20 chapters toh easily ban skte the events ko aur detail mein likhte toh.
Khair koi nhi ek arc toh dete hi hoon main kise bhi story ko smjhne ke liye. Let's see how you gon build up from here, story ache but I'll give my honest rating at the end abhi starting mein bas writing skills ache hai itna bol skte hoon. Also, count this as my first review!
I'm at chapter 10 currently iirc. This will be my bookmark for later ref.
I'll be honest ke mujhe kahin pe bhi pehle 10 chapter padhne mein itna jor padha hoga...do baar padh ke sab smjh aaya
Ek cheez meri bahut bada doubt hai kabhi story real life mein chalte hai fir beech mein level up tower seedhe...shyad woh scene past ka tha...?
Yahan bhi thoda confusing tha...Will to live was not activated? Also, woh pichla wala doubt abhi bhi hai ke do jagah ke scenes kyu chal rhe hai Aarav ke...pehle toh halat bahut kharab hai hero ke. Urvi mein main khudko self insert kar chuki hoon...isliye pls usko kuch mat karna atleast lol
Bear mar gya lekin Wolf ke battle stone ke chapet mein aa gya. Nice twist matlab...stones, mana, potions bilkul classic litrpg ban gye hai...bahut din baad hi padh rhe hoon aisa kuch. Will to live wali ability wali bhi abhi ke liye Gray Zone mein hi rkhungi...matlab ke koi isse kabhi mein musibat mein use kar ke bach skta hai...sach bolu toh aise abilities thode cheats se hi lagte hai. Story mein magic hai to uske upar kuch rules bhi hone chaiye nhi toh log chamatkar bolte hai usse.
Iss wale update mei writings skills bhi pehle wale se jayda upar chale gye thoda. Nice!
hinglish mein padhne mein thoda jor toh padhta hai kyuki litrpg padhne ke aadat english mein hi hai. Skill, abilities, unique abilities...man you have done your research. Thode starting mein characters jayda hai aur sabka alag diaspora hai...Daisuke from China...no Japan lol. Yoo Jung from K-pop.
Isabelle doctor hai? Aur kon tha fir bhul gye.
Jokes aside mast chapter tha.
Aarav ka past kuch jayda hi dark ho gya hai... let's see how the Vengeance starts but pls usse family ke against mat bana dena....that's why I avoid family dramas...aapas mein hi ladte rhenge.
So, team Aarav banke taiyar hai actually...Isabelle healer hai, Yoojung Archer, Daisuke Swordsman plus tank...Andrew ka main bhul gye ka role tha. One thing Aarav wahan cave mein pehle pahucha fir woh Alpha wala scene baad mein kyu kiya?
Also Will to live ab Devour main badal chuke hai...this skill is a even bigger cheat matalab ab koi tik hi nhi payega saamne. Cards ache banaye hai...sab ke skills yaad kaise rkhungi dekhte hai...naam hu yaad mushkil se ho rhe hai. One request ke sabke cards aur jo bhi sill vagarh hai first page mein mention kar do pls...taaki ref mil sake.
Finally we are about to get the Orc King.
So, Andrew tank hai ab clear ho rha hai team formation. Yeh shadow ke peeche kya raaz...khair Isabelle ko toh bacha liya.
What? Andrew died? Mujhe laga uska aur bhi role hoga story mein
Demon wolf evolve ho gya...Aarav general...yeh thoda upar se gya pls explain. Ek baat ismein powers bahut jayda jaldi badh rhe hai...Maine jitne bhi padhe hai first season thoda slow lene ke koshish karte hai taaki readers ko bhi foundation ka smjh mein aa jaye. But anyway yahan kuch smjh nhi aaya toh direct author se hi contact kar skte hai.
Urvi ka scene bahut emotional tha usko laga ke usne apne bhai ko kho hi diya hai, (my favourite character, I read somewhere from spoilers ke tum usse maar doge seriously man why the cold heart
) aur yeh kya Team US yahan uske ghar kaise pahuch gye? Behind the scenes bhi alag hi chal rha hai. Abhi isse aage nhi padh paaye kyuki mere dimag mein bahut saare doubts the. Pehle inko clear Karo pls. Shayd hi Maine jitne litrpgs padhe usmein itne fast plot dekhe hoge starting mein, why the rush...?!
I feel ke yahan 20 chapters toh easily ban skte the events ko aur detail mein likhte toh.
Khair koi nhi ek arc toh dete hi hoon main kise bhi story ko smjhne ke liye. Let's see how you gon build up from here, story ache but I'll give my honest rating at the end abhi starting mein bas writing skills ache hai itna bol skte hoon. Also, count this as my first review!
I'm at chapter 10 currently iirc. This will be my bookmark for later ref.
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