Fantasy Vengeance ~ Revenge is sweet [ᏚᎩᏚᎢᎬᎷ]

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Schedule​

UPDATE#​	DATE​
Update 117 ​	November 28th 11:30 PM​
Update 118​	December 6th 11:30 PM​
Update 119​	December 10th 11:30 PM​
Update 120​	December 14th 11:30 PM​
Update 121​	December 19th 11:30 PM​

 

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Bhai apki writing to bhut umda hai
kya aap ki koi or story hai ?

Ye first storie hai meri, Lekin last nahi ho gi iss ke baad Ek romance aur Incest storie likhne ka irada hai and

 

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Very nice update

 

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End bahot badhiya likha ap ne bhi

 

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Superb awesome fantastic mind blowing update

 

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Chalo ye khatam ab family drama hoga nice update bhai

Yup

 

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Mast super

 

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Bohat maze ka update tha....Alpha aur ice bear ke beech larayi shuru ho chuki hai Arav ko bhi Weapons mil gye hai aur wo ek plan bana ker khud ko bachane ke liye larne wala hai.... Bohat ache se ap ne scenes ko dikhaya hai aise tha jaise sab kuch ankho ke saamne he ho raha ho.... Nice update with great writing skills

Bohat maze ka review umeed karta hu ap jald he storie ke current Updates per aa jaye gye

 

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Bechara Andrew mara gaya wo bhi aarav ki jaldi pane ki wajah se ... Lekin ye dard ab aarav ko jine nhi dega .... Or Andrew to tha hi aisa ki wo kisi bache ko to marne deta nhi ab USS latter me kya hxi uski family Tak kaise pahunchega wo to dekhna padega

Bilkul sahi kaha jab ap ka koi apna mare to uss ka dukh he bohat hota hai lekin jab wo ap ki galti se mare to wo dard puri zindagi khatam nahi hota

Or orc ke marte hi sab usi halat me apne apne jagah lout gaye .... How?

First Update me rewards ko dobara parh le ap ko pata chal jaye ga!!!

Tumne inn panch dino me urvi ki kya halaat the bade short me nipta diye ye thoda detail me hona chahiye ...... Jab aarav ko itna dard tha bichhdne ka to urvi ka bhi to kuchh hoga hi

Short me nahi nipta raha lekin zada likhta to wo bore ho jata, Emotions dikhe gye lekin un ko over nahi karu ga!!!

Baki ka mast update tha .... Likhte raho

Umeed karta hu ap ka saath aise he bana rahe ga and

 

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Lajawab update waiting for more

 

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Nice update bro