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Update 95 | 30th October 11:30 PM |
Update 96 | 3rd November 11:30 PM |
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UPDATE 65
(Hope)
(Hope)
****
Level Up Tower
Floor 71 ~ 11:59 AM
“Tarun....Tarun.....Aankhe band nahi karo”
Malia ne Tarun ki aankhe band hoti daikh ker usko awaaz lagayi, Lekin tab tak Tarun Unconscious ho chuka tha, Usko healing potion bhi de diya gaya tha, Lekin phir bhi wo Unconscious ho gaya.
Mia: Damn it! Ye sab ho kya raha hai? Orc's hum per ambush ker rahe hai, Tower baahir nahi jaane de raha ab aur kya baaki hai?
Mia ko ab fikar hone lagi thi, Tower me aur bhi Player's the, Sab ko madad chahiye thi, Lekin wo udhar se peeche nahi ja sakte the.
Mia(Exhale): Fuuuu ~ Hamay kuch karna ho ga, Hum 80th Floor se baahir nahi nikal sakte, Ab hamay 100th Floor clear karna he ho ga, Uske baad hum Association ko puri situation bataye gye.
*Grrrrooowwr*
Ek awaaz ne sabhi ka dhayan ek taraf kheench liya, Mia ne saamne daikha to aage 4 Dzanum khare huwe the, Unko daikhte he Mia khari ho gayi larne ke liye.
Mia: Ap sab Tarun ko sambhaliye! Dzanu-
*Slash*
Mia aage badhne lagi thi ke ek Dzanum ka sar cut ker hava me urte huwe neeche gir gaya, Dzanum ke sar kate sharir ke paas Akansha sword liye khari thi, Uski sword se khoon ki bunden tapak rahi thi.
Akansha(Furious): Hum nahi sirf ap ruke gi! Main Aarav ko lene ke liye waapis ane wali hu.
*Grrrrr*
Ek Dzanum ke girte he baaki Akansha ki taraf rukh ker ke khare ho gye, Lekin darne ki bajaye Akansha ne aage badhte huwe ek aur Dzanum ko kaat giraya.
[Level Up]
[Player successfully reached Level 40]
[Congratulations, player! You have ranked up from F rank to E rank]
[Player successfully reached Rank Up, allowing her to utilize her stats more smoothly and efficiently]
[As a rank-up reward! the player is getting a new Ability/Skill]
[The Player has Acquired a new skill (Swordsman)]
[Level 1 Unlocked!]
【Novice's Grasp】
[You have taken the first steps in mastering the way of the sword. Your strikes, though still unrefined, carry the potential for greatness.]
【Skill Enhancements】
[Sword Proficiency: Your sword attacks deal 10% more damage.
Improved Stance: You receive a 5% reduction in damage taken while wielding a sword]
【Passive Abilities】
[Steady Grip: Your chance to critically hit with sword attacks is increased by 4%.
Heightened Awareness: You gain 3% increased movement speed while a sword is drawn]
【New Techniques Learned】
[Slash: Deliver a basic sword strike to your target.
- Parry: Expertly block an incoming attack, leaving the enemy vulnerable]
[Continue your training, young swordsman. Strengthen your resolve, and one day your name shall echo through the ages.]
****
*Gasping*
Ek jagha puri andhere me doobi huwi thi, Har taraf sannata tha agar koi awaaz thi to wo Tarun ki sanson ki thi, Tarun neeche gira huwa lambi lambi sanse le raha tha.
Uski aankhe puri khuli huwi thi, Lekin usse saamne sirf andhera dikh raha tha, Lekin usko andhere se koi farak nahi padh raha tha.
“Aise laite rehne se kya mile ga?”
Ek awaaz ne sannate ko khatam kiya aur agle he lamhe ek taraf halki roshni ho gayi, Uske saamne seeshe ki bani deewar thi aur deewar ki dusri taraf mother spirit khari huwi thi.
Mother Spirit: Tch Tch! Kya halat bana li hai tum ne khud ki? Kya huwa? Tumhare karan ek baar dobara tumhara maalik khatre me padh gaya?
Tarun ne halka sar hila ker uski taraf ker liya aur usse daikhne laga, Mother Spirit chehre per ek muskurahat sajaye khari huwi thi, Unke beech ki deewar Aarav ki banayi seal thi.
Mother Spirit(Sigh): Huh, Ab kya usko maro gye he? Bilkul jaise tumhare karan se tumhara baap mara tha?
Tarun(Whisper): Mere Karan?
Mother Spirit: Haan, Tumhare karan! Agar sirf tab tum na hote to ab tak tumhara baap ye shaktiyan prapt ker chuka hota aur duniya ka sab se shaktishali vyakti ban gaya hota, Lekin usne khud se pehle tumhe chunna, Agar sirf tum na hote to aj tumhara baap zinda hota.
Tarun(Whisper): Agar sirf main na hota?
Tarun ki aankhon me aansu aa gye aur usne mutthi bheench li, Usko khud per he gussa aa raha tha.
Mother Spirit: Lekin abhi sab kuch badal sakta hai! Agar sirf tum mera saath do gye, Kya kehte ho?
Tarun(Sob): Kya sach me sab kuch badal sakta hai?
Mother Spirit: Haan, Ye sab kuch sirf huwa kyu ke tum kamzor the! Lekin agar tum mujhe apna sharir de do gye to tum shaktishali ban sakte ho, Uske baad hum tumhare maalik ko bhi bacha sakte hai, Sirf tumhe marna ho ga.
Tarun: Kya tum sach me boss ki madad karo gi?
Mother Spirit: Bilkul, Ek spirit kabhi bhi apni kahi baat se nahi phirti, Agar tum haar maan lo gye to main Aarav ki madad zaroor karungi.....Ab yanha aa ker ye seal khol do.
Tarun: Huh?
Uski baat sun ker Tarun khare hone lag gaya, Ye daikh ker Mother Spirit khush ho gayi, Ladkhadate kadmon ke saath Tarun seal ki taraf badhne laga.
*Thud*
*Thud*
*Thud*
Uske har badhte kadam ke saath Mother Spirit ke chehre ki muskurahat aur bhi gehri ho rahi thi, Tarun seedhe seeshe ki deewar ke saamne khara tha.
Mother Spirit: Haan, Ab sirf ye deewar hata do! Uske baad sab kuch sahi ho jaye ga.
Uski baat sun ker Tarun ne apna haath uthaya aur seal ke upar rakh diya, Uske haath rakhte he deewar ke upar pattern chamakne laga.
Mother Spirit: Yes, Ab sab kuch sahi ho jaye g-
*Zghhhh*
Ek tez jhatke ke saath Tarun uchalte huwe peeche gir gaya, Pattern ek baar dobara gayab ho gaya.
[You do not have the authority to unseal the Mother Spirit]
Tarun ko kuch bhi samajh nahi aa rahi thi ke ye kya huwa hai, Mother Spirit bhi ye daikh ker heraan thi, Lekin agle he pal uske chehre per gusse ke bhav aa gye.
Mother Spirit(Frustrated): Damn it! Usne sab kuch socha huwa tha? Wo ladka meri soch se zyada sar dard hai....Ughhhh ...... Usko tum per bharosa nahi hai.
Ek pal ke liye Tarun bilkul heraan baitha raha, Lekin usse bhi samajh aa gayi ke kya huwa hai, Seal ki authority sirf Aarav ke paas thi, Usko Tarun per bhi bharosa nahi tha.
Tarun: Huh? Lekin Bos-.....Huh, Yaani ap tab sach keh rahe the? *Smile*
Tarun kuch kehne wala tha lekin kuch soch ker chup ker gaya, Uske chehre per halki si muskurahat aa gayi.
****
18 Hours Ago.....,
*Tick-tock*
*Tick-tock*
*Tick-tock*
Ship ke ek kamre me Tarun bed per sar latkaye baitha huwa tha, Uski nazar uske haath per thi, Uska ghav bhar chuka tha lekin abhi bhi halka nishan baaki tha.
*Knock-Knock*
Kamre ke darwaze per dastak huwi to Tarun seedha ho ker baith gaya, Darwaza khula aur Aarav andar aa gaya, Andar ate he Aarav ne sab taraf daikha aur aa ker Tarun ke paas baith gaya.
Aarav: Huh, Kya scene hai? Akele kyu baithe ho?
Tarun: Kuch bhi nahi huwa! Aise he akele baithne ko mann ker raha tha.
Tarun abhi bhi Aarav se aankhe chura raha tha, Aarav ko sab samajh bhi aa raha tha.
Aarav(Sigh): Huh, Tarun! Tumhe pata hai main yanha kya kuch daikh ker aya hu?
Tarun: Huh?
Aarav: I've seen bad things! I was betrayed, deceived, hurt and lost everything i ever loved, Believe me when I say I've already crossed through hell, Lekin phir bhi main yanha tumhare saamne khara hu.
Aarav ke shabd sun ker Tarun kuch bhi bolne ke layak nahi raha, Wo bus Aarav ke chehre ko daikhta raha, Usko pehli baar Aarav ke chehre per koi asli bhav daikhne ko mil rahe the.
Tarun: Lekin Boss......Agar mere karan dobara kisi ko kuch ho gaya to?
Tarun ne himmat ker saval kiya, Usne khud ko rokna chaha, Lekin usko mehsoos ho raha tha ke agar koi uski madad ker sakta hai to wo Aarav he hai.
Aarav: Phir kya huwa? Aisa nahi hai ke tum ne hum se kuch chhupaya hai? Lekin sab kuch pata hone ke baad bhi tumhe saath rakhne ka nirnay mera hai, Agar kuch bhi huwa to uska pura dosh mere per ho ga.
Tarun: Lek-
Aarav: Shhhh ~ Tarun main tumhe sirf kisi taras ki wajha se paas nahi rakh raha, Tumhe saath rakhne me mera svarth bhi shamil hai, Agar tumhe mere liye kuch karna hai to sirf zinda rehne ki koshish karte raho, Khud ke liye nahi to mere liye survive karna, Agar tum moat ke saamne bhi khare ho to zinda rehne ki koshish karna, Kyu ke abhi tumhe mere liye bohat kuch karna hai, Agar tum samay se pehle haar maan gye to tumhen narkh me bhi chen se rehne nahi dunga, So please, Survive!
****
Level Up Tower
Floor 77 ~ 1:43 PM
“Akansha dodge”
Malia ki awaaz sunte he Akansha neeche hote huwe side ho gayi, Ek Dzanum seedhe Akansha ke upar se guzar gaya.
*Slash*
Peeche hote huwe Akansha ne Dzanum ka sar kaat diya, Sabhi aage to aa gye the, Lekin sirf un teeno ke liye ab itne Dzanum se ladna mushkil ho raha tha.
Malia: Abhi kitne aur reh gye hai?
Mia: Abhi bohat rehte hai! Hamay ladte huwe aage badhna ho ga.
Akansha bhi ab exhaust honi shuru ho gayi thi, Uski fatigue bohat badh gayi thi, Usne sirf skill use ki thi lekin phir bhi uski halat kharab ho rahi thi.
*Swishhh*
*Clang*
Akansha ne ek aur ko kaatne ke liye sword se attack kiya, Lekin Akansha ke attacks me speed kam ho gayi thi Dzanum ne muh kholte huwe daanto se Akansha ki sword ko pakad liya.
Akansha: Unghhhh! Mil-
*Grrrrooowwr*
Akansha kisi ko madad ke liye pukar sakti ke uss se pehle he ek aur Dzanum peeche se uski taraf ane laga, Akansha ke dono haath sword pakde huwe the, Uske paas dodge karne ke liye time nahi tha.
*Grrrrr*
Akansha: Huh?
Akansha ki taraf badhta Dzanum beech me he neeche gir gaya, Uska sharir bilkul dubla ho gaya.
*Thud*
Akansha ki sword ek dum se dheeli per gayi, Akansha saamne daikha to uske aage ka Dzanum bhi neeche gir chuka tha aur uski halat bhi waisi he thi.
“10 Meter”
Ek awaaz ne Akansha ka dhayan uski taraf kheench liya, Uske saamne Tarun khara huwa tha, Uske haath me dono Dzanum ka Mana levitate ker raha tha.
Akansha: Tarun!!!
Tarun ka badan pasine se bheega huwa tha, Uska badan halka kaanp bhi raha tha, Lekin uske chehre per ek muskurahat saji huwi thi.
“Ye kya ker rahe ho? Aise tum sab kuch barbad ker do gye, Bewakoof vyakti ruk jao”
Tarun ko uske andar se Mother Spirit ke chillane ki awaaze sunayi de rahi thi, Tarun khud ko push ker raha tha, Usne seal ke beech me se Mother Spirit ki powers ko nikalna shuru ker diya tha.
Lekin ye uske liye khatarnak tha, Lekin phir bhi Tarun dar nahi raha tha, Uske andar ek naya aatmavishwas aa gaya tha.
Tarun(Smile): Shut up bitch! The only one who can give me order is boss.
*Grrrrooowwr*
Ek Dzanum aur bhaagte huwe Tarun ki taraf ane laga, Tarun shaanti se khara raha aur jaise he Dzanum uski 10 meter ki range me aya to Tarun ne haath aage ker diya.
*Zzzooooppp*
Dzanum ek dum se ruk gaya aur uske andar se Mana nikalne laga, Dzanum sikudna shuru ho gaya, Uska Mana khatam hote he Dzanum neeche gir gaya.
[Converting Mana into experience]
[Level Up]
[Level Up]
[Level Up]
[Player successfully reached Level 40]
[Congratulations, player! You have ranked up from F rank to E rank]
[Player successfully reached Rank Up, allowing her to utilize her stats more smoothly and efficiently]
[As a rank-up reward! the player is getting a new Ability/Skill]
[The Player has Acquired a new skill (Mana Leech)]
[Mana Leech]
[Range: 10 meters]
[Function: Allows the user to drain mana/magical energy from targets within range and absorb it into their own reserves]
[Mechanics: The user can activate Mana Leech, targeting any creatures or entities with a mana/magical energy pool within 10 meters.
•When once activated, the user begins leeching a percentage of the target's mana over time, draining it into their own internal mana reserve.
• The user's mana reserve has a capacity of 250 mana points.
• As the user's mana reserve fills up to the 250 point capacity, the leeched mana will start to become unstable]
[If the mana reserve is completely filled to 250 points, the user must either:
1) Expend the stored mana by using it to cast spells or abilities.
2) Release the excess mana, which causes a burst of magical energy to be expelled in the user's vicinity]
[Drawbacks: Mana Leech requires concentration to maintain, limiting the user's other actions while it is active.
• Draining mana from unwilling targets may aggravate them and cause retaliation.
• Letting the mana reserve overfill and explode can damage the user and those around them if not managed properly]
****
Level Up Tower
Floor 70 ~ 11:44 PM
*Slash*
*Thud*
*Stab*
Sabhi Orc Aarav ki taraf hathiyar uthaye bhaag rahe the, Aarav bhi haath me sword pakde ek ek ko ghayal karte huwe peeche hota raha.
Aarav(Sigh): Huh, Main sach me impress hu! Ab tak purane ghav bhare nahi hai, Huh, Lekin ye bhi acha he huwa, Ab mujhe extra work nahi karna ho ga.
Abhi bhi orc's Aarav se badla lena chah rahe the, Uske karan unhone unka king aur unki Axe bhi khoyi thi, Aarav unke liye unka natural enemy ban gaya tha.
*Thud*
Ek Orc ne ek bada patthar utha ker Aarav ki taraf phenk diya, Aarav ne dodge to ker liya, Lekin ab wo uski limit ko pohanchne laga tha.
Aarav ne peeche hote huwe orc's se thori distance bana li, Aarav ne haath aage kiya to neeche mana behne laga.
Aarav: Summon......Shadow!
*Grrrrooowwr*
Neeche beh rahe Mana ke beech me se Shadow nikal ker baahir aa gaya, Uske ate he Orc's ke badhte kadam ek pal ke liye ruk gye.
Aarav bhi Shadow ke saath khara ho gaya, Lekin abhi Shadow gusse se bhara huwa tha, Uske saamne Orc's uske Alpha ko target ker rahe the, Ye usko gussa dila raha tha.
Aarav: Shadow, Calm Down! Abhi hamare paas ladne ke liye samay nahi hai.
Uski baat sunte he Shadow shaant hone laga, Shadow ke ane se Orc's kuch bhi karne se dar rahe the, Shadow ek Red Level Beast tha.
Uske liye sabhi Orc's se ladna bilkul bhi mushkil nahi tha, Lekin Aarav ke orders ke baad wo unhe kuch bhi nahi keh sakta tha.
Aarav: Good, Ab tumhe kuch karna ho ga! Sab se pehle Tower ko lock ker do.
****
Wind Clan
Japan ~ 8:27 AM
“Lady Tsubame!!”
Ek ladki ne kamre ke darwaze per khare hote huwe kaha, Ye ladki clan ki member aur Tsubame ki direct servant bhi thi, Uske ate he Tsubame ne usse ane ka ishara ker diya.
Ladki seedhe Tsubame ke bed ke paas aa ker khari ho gayi, Tsubame book padh rahi thi, Usne book band ki aur seedhe ho ker baith gayi.
Tsubame: Kya huwa hai?
Ladki(Bow): Abhi hamay informers ki taraf se message aya hai! Fire clan ne move karna shuru ker diya hai, Unhe Spirit User ki talash hai.
Tsubame(Sigh): Huh, Meri koshish thi ke hum fire clan ko alag rakh sake! Lekin ab unhone ne bhi dhayan spirit clan ki taraf ker li hai, Ab hamare liye mushkilen badhne lagi hai.
Ladki: I'm sorry Lady Tsubame! Lekin kya hamay sach me interfere karna chahiye bhi kya? Kyu ke fire clan sab se strong hai, Hum unhe enemy banana afford nahi ker sakte.
Tsubame: Agar hum soche to ye sahi nahi ho ga! Lekin hamay interfere karna ho ga he, Kyu ke Spirit clan ke saath hamare kuch naye relations bane hai, Agar hamay uske liye Fire clan ko enemy bhi bana per gaya to hum taiyar hai.
Ladki: Leki-
Tsubame: Enough!!
Tsubame ke ek shabd se ladki seham ke reh gayi, Uske rongte khade ho gaye, Uski halat daikh ker Tsubame bhi normal ho gayi.
Tsubame: I'm sorry! Lekin hum abhi nirnay nahi le sakte, Daisuke ke waapis ane ka samay ho raha hai, Uske ane tak hum sirf khamosh rahe gye.
Ladki: Behtar, Lady Tsunade! Kya sach me Spirit clan ke user abhi bhi hai? Kyu ke hamay ye he lag raha tha ke pura spirit clan khatam ho gaya tha.
Tsubame: Haan, Lekin sabhi chupe huwe hai ya unhe shaktiyon ka abhas he nahi hai, Hamay abhi tak 5 Users ka pata hai.
Ladki: 5? Lekin Baakiyo ko to sirf 1 ki bhanak lagi hai?
Tsubame: Haan, Lekin koi 1 bhi unke haath nahi lagna chahiye! Unke upar nazar aur bhi logo ko rakhne ke orders de do.
Tsubame ne ladki ko kuch aur baate batayi aur ladki udhar se chali gayi, Tsubame ek baar dobara book khol ker baith gayi, Lekin uska dhayan book me nahi lag raha tha.
Tsubame(Sigh): Huh, 5? Kaash ye sach me 6 ho, Kaash tum he wo user ho......Aarav!
****
Level Up Tower
Floor 39 ~ 1:17 AM
*Grrrrrr*
39th Floor per demon wolves shaanti se ghoom rahe the aur baby wolves khel rahe the, Kuch Wolves shikar ke liye nikle huwe the.
*Shgggg*
Demon wolves ke beech me shadow reverse summon hone laga, Uske saath ki presence sense karte he sabhi Demon wolves uske paas ane lage, Demon Wolves me ek naya josh janam lene laga.
*Awoooo*
Sabhi wolves ek saath howl karne lage aur baaki wolves bhi udhar ane lage, Agle he lamhe unke saamne Shadow ke upar baithe huwe Aarav unke saamne aa gaya.
Sabhi wolves dobara Alpha ko daikh ker khush ho gye, Tower climb karte huwe Wolves unke saamne nahi aye, Lekin ab wo ache se Alpha ka swagat ker sakte the.
Tinkerbell: Ye kitna shor karte hai? Alpha he to aya hai.
Aarav: Tumhe jalan ho rahi hai kya?
Tinkerbell: Buuuu ~
Aarav(Smile): Jaise tumhe sahi lage! Lekin abhi hama-
“Master!!!”
Ek awaaz dur se Aarav ko bulate huwe uski taraf ane lagi, Aarav kisi vyakti ki awaaz sun ker heraan ho gaya, Usko 29th Floor per kisi ke hone ki umeed nahi thi.
*Thud*
*Thud*
Tez kadmon ki awaaz se Aarav chaukanna ho gaya, Uske saamne pedon ke beech se ek hulk ki tarha bada vyakti nikal ker baahir aa gaya, Uske sharir ka har muscle tight aur giant tha.
Tinkerbell: Ye danav kon hai?
Usko daikhte he Tinkerbell bhi ek pal ke liye hil gayi, Lekin uske kareeb ane per Aarav shaant hone laga, Uske saamne ka vyakti bhi uske paas aa ker ruk gaya.
Aarav: Rahul?
Aarav ke muh se naam sun ker Tinkerbell chaunk gayi, Usko khud ki aankhon per vishwas nahi ho raha tha, Uske saamne Rajesh aur Sushmita ka beta Rahul tha.
Rahul ko jab unhone akhri baar daikha tha tab wo haddiyo ka dhancha tha, Lekin abhi unke saamne bilkul he alag vyakti khara huwa tha.
Aarav ko bhi vishwas nahi ho raha tha, Lekin uski senses usse bata rahi thi ke ye Rahul he hai, Lekin ab unke liye dikkat thi ke Rahul chahta kya hai? Kya usko uske baap ka badla chahiye?
Aarav uske reaction ke liye taiyar tha, Usko kuch pal Rahul aise he daikhta raha aur ek pal ke baad uske saamne ghutnon per baith gaya.
“Master”
Aarav: Huh?
Rahul: Master! Dhanyavad, Yanha ane se pehle mera jeevan bilkul veran tha, Main zinda to tha, Lekin meri zindgi ka kuch bhi uddeshy nahi tha, Lekin yanha ane ke baad mujhe jeene ke liye karan mila hai, Yanha ane se meri zindgi badal gayi hai, Uske liye ap ka bohat shukriya.
Aarav aur Tinkerbell dono he Rahul ki baate sun ker heraan the, Aarav ke liye Rahul sirf ek bali ka bakra tha jise usne summon ability check karne ke liye use kiya tha.
Lekin anjane me he usne Rahul ko bilkul badal diya tha, Uske haatho ki ungaliyon me abhi bhi monster ke khoon ke nishan the.
Aarav: [Ye kya hai?]
Tinkerbell: [I think mujhe pata hai!]
Aarav: [Sach me?]
Tinkerbell: [Haan, Rahul ko yanha aye ek month se upar ho gaya hai! Usko zinda rehne ke liye khaane ki zaroorat rahi ho gi, Mujhe lagta hai ke Rahul ne monsters ko khaya hai]
Aarav: [Hmm ~ Monster's ko khana har koi bardasht nahi ker sakta, Even ke main bhi lambe samay tak chal nahi saka tha monster's khaane ke baad, Lekin agar Rahul ne khaya hai aur usne usko endure ker liya hai to Rahul ab ek sadharan vyakti nahi hai]
Tinkerbell: [Exactly ~ Ye ladka ab sadharan nahi hai, Ye ab ek Beast Human hai, Agar main sahi hu to Rahul abhi kisi B rank player ke barabar hai]
Aarav ne socha tha ke agar Rahul summon survive ker bhi gaya to uske liye tower ke andar survive karna possible nahi ho ga, Lekin usne ye result kabhi bhi nahi socha tha.
Aarav: Good, Aise he shaktishali bante raho! Agar bhavishya me mujhe tumhari zaroorat huwi to tumhe bulaonga.
Aarav ki baat sunte he Rahul khush ho ker uth ker chala gaya, Aarav usko test karna chahta tha, Lekin usko abhi kuch aur kaam tha.
Aarav: Alright! Ab hum apne kaam per focus karte hai.
Aarav Wolves se thoda alag ho ker baith gaya, Aarav Mother Spirit ki power se bane core ko sahi karne wala tha, Uske paas ek plan tha, Lekin uske liye usko ek shaant area chahiye tha.
Aarav ko result per bharosa nahi tha, Ye he karan tha ke Aarav ne Demon Wolves ke paas core ko apna banana sahi samjha aur sab ko le ker tower aa gaya.
Aarav dhayan ki halat me baith gaya aur focus karne laga, Agle he lamhe uske sharir se dark aura nikalna shuru ho gaya.
****
Level Up Tower
Player's Association Building ~ 3:39 PM
*Click-Clack*
Caroline tez kadmon ke saath aage badh rahi thi, Association me har taraf bhaag daur machi huwi thi, Caroline seedhe Michael ke room me chali gayi.
Caroline: Sir-
Caroline kuch kehne wali thi, Lekin saamne Michael ko uth ker khare daikh ker Caroline chup ker gayi, Michael saamne screen per sab halat daikh raha tha.
Caroline: S-Sir, Tower lock ho gaya hai! Hum andar contact karne ki koshish ker rahe hai, Lekin kisi se bhi contact nahi ho raha.
Michael(Nod): Hmm ~
Caroline (Gulp): Hum ne tower lock hone se pehle baahir aye Kuch player's se baat ki hai! Unka kehna hai ke Aarav ki party 50th floor se aage chali gayi hai.
Michael: Baaki tower ki kya report hai?
Caroline: Lekin sir Mia bhi to-
Michael: Caroline, Agar mujhe uske upar vishwas nahi hota to main usko kabhi tower enter he nahi karne deta! Mia meri beti hai, Lekin saath me wo ek honoured player bhi hai, Usko life me aisi situations baar baar face karni ho gi, Har baar main bakiyo per usko importance nahi de sakta.
Caroline: Sorry Sir!
Michael(Sigh): Ab sab taiyariyan shuru ker do! Becky ko rescue team le ker taiyar rehne ke liye keh do, Healers bhi sabhi ko inform ker do.
Caroline: Okay Sir!
Caroline orders milte he udhar se chali gayi, Uske nikalte he Michael ke kadam ladkhada gye, Uske haath kaanp rahe the, Uski nazar bed ke saath rakhi uski aur Mia ki picture per chali gayi.
Michael: Main tum per vishwas ker raha hu Aarav! Please, Sab zinda waapis ana.
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[Mana flow unstable]
[QI flow Unstable]
Aarav ek baar dobara uske core ke saamne tha, Lekin uske saamne ka drishya bilkul he alag tha, Uska Mana aur Qi dono he bina kisi order ke beh rahe the.
Uske core aur Qi block thi, Lekin phir bhi neeche bana Mother Spirit ka core unke andar se mana aur Qi ko kheenchne chah raha tha, Uske karan andar ki halat bohat buri thi.
Tinkerbell: Ye sab hamay abhi sahi karna ho ga! Ye to tumhari bardasht bohat hai agar koi aur hota to ab tak chalne se bhi reh gaya hota.
Aarav: Hmm ~ Mana aur Core ko khol do, Uske andar se Mana aur Qi behne do, Hum Qi core ke khaali hote he dono Core ko alag ker de gye.
Aarav Qi se bhare cores ko ek dusre se alag nahi ker sakta tha, Ye uske liye ek opportunity bhi thi, Neeche bana naya core uske liye ek trash bin ki tarha kaam ker sakta tha.
Tinkerbell: Lekin ek baar core khulne ke baad hum usko dobara lock nahi ker sake gye! Phir kya?
Aarav: Udhar hum gamble karne wale hai! Neeche bana core limitless nahi ho ga, Lekin uski limit kya hai ye hum pata nahi ker sakte, Umeed hai ke dono core khaali karne ke baad third core kuch stable ho jaye ga.
Ye ek bohat bari gamble thi, Aarav ko kuch ho bhi sakta tha, Ye he karan tha ke usne ye karne ke liye tower ko chunna.
Tinkerbell: Let's do it!
Tinkerbell ke kehte he Aarav ke dono core khul gye aur Mana bhi behna shuru ho gaya, Lekin unexpectedly uska mana uski soch se bhi tezi se third core ke andar jaane laga.
Aarav(Groaning): Aghhhh!!!!!
Tinkerbell: Aarav!!!
Aarav sirf andar se nahi baahir se bhi buri halat me tha, Uska sharir pura laal hone laga uska mana baahir girne laga, Uski halat daikh ker Demon Wolves bhi dar gye.
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[Player's Mana and Qi Core have been fully drained]
[Player will die within the next 30 seconds due to Mana and Qi depletion]
[Immediate action required to restore Player's Mana and Qi levels]
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[Aj ke liye itna he, Ye update 5k words ka tha, I know ke late hai aur main bina bataye gayab ho gaya tha, Uske liye sorry, Next update bada update ho ga 24th May ko, Umeed karta hu ap ko update pasand aye ga, Target hamara wohi hai 90 Likes ke liye, Mile gye agle update per tab tak ke liye, Sayonara!!!]
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First of all , Welcome Back Brother
Ye story iss forum ki meri one of the favorite story me se hai to itne din isse wapas dekh kr kafi shi lga
As always a very brilliant update
Ye update whi se suru hua jha se pichla update khatam hua tha yani Level up tower me....Well bhut din bad padhne ke karan mai ye bilkul bhul gya tha ki Mia kon thi , to maine guide sama ki help li aur wha pe Mia ke intro me likha tha Michael's daughter....To most probably Michael ne hi Mia ko Aarav ke sath bheja hoga taki wo Aarav ko observe kr ske aur uski jitni ho ske utni information Michael ko de...Aur sayad ye bhi ek karan ho ki Aarav kyu khud fight me involve nhi ho rha tha tower ke andar....Maybe wo apne powers ko jitna ho ske utna hide krna cahta hai Mia ke samne...
Iss update se ye bhi pta chala ki jb Aarav infinite prison me gya tha tb system ne kewal usse related memory ko sbke dimag se erase hi nhi kiya tha balki kuch memories ko edit bhi kiya tha , kyuki tb hi to sbko ye lgta hai Yoo-Jung ne Hexarion ko mara tha....Jo bhi ho Michael hai kafi intelligent kyuki usne ek chote se incident se hi kafi kuch shi shi guess kr liya hai...Michael se abhi tk to kisi bhi tarah ka negative vibe nhi aa rha
"10 saal pehle pura Sayani parivar khatam ho gaya tha"
Iss line ka kya mtlb tha?? Archana, Vanshika ye sb kha gyi??...Abhi itni jldi kaise khatam ho skti wo sb , Abhi to un sbse badla lena baki hi hai
Orcs aur Aarav ke relation to suruwat se hi shi nhi rhe hai aur ek bar fir se whi hua...Maybe beasts kisi person ko phle hi sense kr skte hai like jaise demon wolves Aarav ko kr lete hai usi tarah Orcs ne bhi Aarav ko sense kr liya hoga aur ye sb trap use fasane ke liye set kiya hoga...Khair dekhte hai ab kya hota hai kyuki Aarav filhal abhi kafi weak hai aur bina Orcs ko haraye wo ja nhi skte as maybe 70th level ke guardian ne tower ko lock kr diya hai...Let's see kya hota hai
KEEP WRITING...
WAITING FOR NEXT...
Excellent update Bhai
Nice
Welcome backdear bro
, as is your won't. Congrats
for giving us an excellent update
. Eagerly
waiting for your upcoming exciting and adventurous updates
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finally
Bhai welcome back . Bahot romaanchak aur majedaar update de diya bhai. Bahot jabardast update tha. Next update ka intajaar rahegaa
Ok
break k bad ek light update acha hai zeyada dimagh nai lgana para. bas itna bta dena ye mia kno hai main bhul chuka hun is k barey mein. lag to koi important hi rhi hai jis tarah front line pe fight kar rhi hai.
vansh ki to phatti pari hai jo arav ne glimpse dikhaya hai. inventory ka kya scene hai; kya inventory just un players k pas hai jinho ne tower survive kiya hai(jis towser mein arav wagera gaye the us tower ka naam bhul geya hun shyd tutorial tower tha)?
michael kam ka banda lag rha hai arav ko kafi faida ho sakta hai is se.
tannu ka character bhi kafi cute hai. ye lagta hai urvi ki kami puri kar de gi.
elite group k sath vansh ka hi to koi link nahi hai. jab akash ne usey markey ki koshish ki thi us k bad us ne esa kuch karne ki sochi ho gi k arav k sath akash ko bhi nipta diya jaye agar esa hai to zrur is k pichey is ki maa ka hi hath ho ga kya naam tha us ka main bhul geya hun. akele to is gandu se itna kuch nahi tha hona. aur kya in ki maa bhi mar chuki hai? esa nahi karna us se bhi to ache wala badla lena hai bisi itna bara dhoka diya tha us sali ne bhi.
abhi tak agar hum baat karein monsters ki to arav ko sb se zeyada orc's ne hi shyd nuksaan ponchaya hai. tower mein ek team member mara geya aur ab ambush. lekin is mein bhi koi arav ka hi plan to nahi. aur shadow & co. nahi nazar aye tower mein. jese jese floor empty ja rhe the maine to socha tha k shyd shadow & co. clear kar rhe hain arav k liye lekin yahan to arc's game khel rhe hain. ye sb kahin is liye to nahi ho rha arav ne in k leader ko tower mein mara tha aur us ki jo axe thi wo arav k pas hai? itni der k bad read krne se kafi cheezein dimagh se nikal chuki hain. agar kuch galat likh dun to correct kar dena qk mujhy lag rha hai k main koi 2 stories ko mix kr rha hun
khair readers k comments dekh kar lagta hai k ap ne phir se koi schedule related commitment tori hai. i can understand ap ki apni personel life bhi hai. life mein kuch bhi unexpected ho sakta hai so hope you'll be free soon and hit the update.
keep rocking & keep writing
waiting for the next update
peace out!
eagerly waiting DUDE,.....
Inteha hogayiintezaar
Update 65 has been posted Guys!!! 
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