Appreciate your hard work bro
thanks very much Sushant bro
Appreciate your hard work bro
Awesome update
Vihan aur Ashita ko spain Seattle kra ke apni jimmewari puri ki Anirudh
Vivan aur ruchhi bhi apne mata pita ki hi trah nikale aur vihan aur Ashita ne bhi nahi roka
Ruchhi se bhi mulakt ho hi gayi uski beti Ashita
Ummid nahi tha ki etni jaldi yah khatam hogi par jo shuru hua hai usse khatam hona hi hai
Nice Ending
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Anirudh ke man me jo nafrat thi apne parivar ke liye wo dhul gyi sahi mayeno me anirudh ne apni family ko jana. Vihaan aur ashita dono settle ho gye khusi khusi rahne lge ruchi se aakhri mulakat hui vihaan ki anirudh aur suman ko apni mitti wapas khinch layi.. history fir se dohrayi ja rhi hai new generation me. Superb fantastic ending
Thanks very muchAwesome ending
You posted the last update of the story today. Where did the story begin and end. Your story is very amazing. You have written every single word of the story very beautifully. I like the happy ending in the story and you did it.
The hatred that Anirudh had about his family has come to an end today. Brother and sister graduation has also been completed. The happiest thing is that the two are now married. Finally, after 21 years, Ruchi and Vihaan met, that too for the last time and both of them also kept their promise. Anirudh's dream came true and he went back to his village. Ashita and Vihaan also had to go through a lot of trouble and then got a happy life.
The story is so good that it seems like it should never end, but one day the story was to end.
I want to thank you once again...
'Love' is the most precious gift given to man by nature. Love is the name of a beautiful feeling, such a pleasant experience that true love happens only once.
Bahot shukriya king bhai shuru se akhir tak saath dene k liyeapun ko bahut sad wala feeling ho rela hai
mujhe Vihaan Ashita se lagao ho gaya tha bidu
Ruchi se bhi, kab aur ek eisa story likhoge ab bidu?
plz aur ek eisi wali ishtory jarur likhna bidu
magar apun ko aur lamba chahiye the vihaan aur Ashita
anyway, jo start hota hai ek din ussko end to hona hota hai so ok no prob
bahut hi badhya kahani raha yeh Vihaan Ashita.
Bahut like kiya apun, har roj isska wait karta tha apun.
Bidu tumne sab kuch professionally kiya, har roj update bina miss kiye shuru mein double updates , weekends mein no update fir weekends mein bhi update dene lage, bahut fast chala yeh story readers logon ko wait nahin karna pada. agar sab writer aap jeisa hote to kia baat hota bidu
aap sabhi readers ko tuition dena ke keise update dete hein!
thanks very very much bidy itni achi kahani ke liye. you are an awesome writer
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Vah Shah bhai vah. Kia end kiya hai iss kahani ki aap ne. Shabaash bhai. Bahut hi mast, majedaar end hui hai.
Dil to chahta tha k ye kahani chalta rahe saalon tak aur humko har roj yahan ek update padhne ko mile. Ashita se aur Ruchi se jeise humko bhi ishk sa ho gaya tha. Iss pure parivar k sath judh gaye the hum to ek afsos ho raha hai k ab se wo har shaam ko ya raat ko iss thread ko kholna, Vihaan aur Ashita se milna, donon k khushi aur gham mein shaamil hona sab sn khatam ho gaye. Yehi afsos rahega Shah bhai.
Aap ka hum tehe dil se shukriya ada karte hein iss bahut khubsurat aur dilchasp kahani k liye bhai. Bahut hi achi kahani thi aur bahut behtareen updates diye hein aap ne ek se badhkar ek. Aur sabse badi baat yeh rahi k aap ne bina koyi break liye lagataar rozana updates dete rahe bina ruke. Teen mahine se kum mein aap ne ek full story shuru karke end bhi kar diyeaur dusri start bhi kar diye
Bahut bahut shukriya shah bhai. Ending wala last part kamaal ki hai. Jeise shuru hua tha veisa hi end hua. Shuru Vihaan aur Ashita ne kiye aur end inn donon ke beta aur beti ne kiye ussi andaaz mein![]()
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bahot baot shukriya nayan bhai shuru se ant tak saath dene ke liyeKahani khatam karne ki badhaiyan Casi bhai.
Bahut shaandaar end kiya hai aap ne kahani ki Casi bhai. Bilkool prodessional writer wala ending diya aap ne iss dilchasp kahani ko
3rd August ko shuru kiya aur 17th October ko 90 updates mein kahani ka khaatema kiya aap ne.
Matlab 79 din mein ek kahani ki the end. Bravo bhai taareef e kabil kaam kiya aap ne. Updates bhi chote mote updates nahin sabhi updates 2000 words k upar kabhi to 4000 words k upar jahan double updates hote the. 1 bhi update 1200 words se kum nahin. Shabaash Casi bhai. Hats off.
Hum aap ka shukrguzar hein humko itni behtareen kahani se nawaazne k liye.
Umeed hai aage chal kar bhi aap hamein issi tarah entertain karte rahenge.
:casi bhai.
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Beautiful ending if this marvellous story.
Loved this story from start to end all along.
You did a wonderful job.
Will expect more such stories in future from you bro.
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Thanks very much for being here broWonderful story with a beautiful end.
Hats off bro for writing such a lovely story. All is well that ends well.
Will expect more such tales from you.
Thanks very much. Very much appreciated.