Incest Vihaan Aur Ashita - Bhai Behen ki kahani - Exclusively written for XFORUM(COMPLETED)

[Casinar]

bhai bahut hi dardnak update hai magar bahut jabardast likha hai aap ne
ekdun faaadddduuuuu, jhakaaasssss
aap ki writing ka diwana to the hi ab aur jiada fan ho gaya, vah bhai vah kia likhte ho aap
aap ke jeisa koyi bhi emotion ko iss tarah se bayaan karta hi nahin forums par
shuru se end tak yeh update bahut mazbut aur taqatwar raha.
emotion se bharpur, eknehn nam ho gaye bhai jiss tarah se aap ne vihaal ka haal kikha hai
aur kia kahin aap sach mein genius ho bhai

bahot shukriya indian bhai

 

[Casinar]

aap ka koyi jawaab nahin casi bai aur update lajawaab hai
ab aega nah maja, sala itne takliff diya bhai ko, pyar ko ke bechara hospital tak jaa baitha
#ab kia ro rahi hai ashita
ofo yeh to kahani hai main bh beh gaya jajbaaton mein
wonderful update hai bhai bahut achah laga padhke ke Ashita ka dil ab rone laga aur bhai ke liye tarap uthi hai
mindblowing update casi bhai

shukriya mere dost

 

[Siraj Patel]

bahot shukriya Siraj bhai aao ko wapas thread par dekh kar bahot khushi hui,
saath dete rehna Siraj bhai

Bilkul bhai main hamesha aapke Sath hoon

 

[Casinar]

When you look at the mirror in pieces, you see your face in every piece, in the same way Vihaan's heart is also broken, but only Ashita lives in every piece of heart.
Vihaan's condition is slowly deteriorating without Ashita's love, due to these conditions Vihaan does not feel like studying, even he has started drinking alcohol.
Ashita also loves a lot, but does not show Vihaan. Vihaan has an accident and he is admitted to the hospital. God bless him, he will not be hurt much.
Casinar bro you are writing a very good story, it was a very emotional update. Now let's see what happens next in the story. While waiting for the next part of the story. Thank You....

thanks very much for the appreciative words Akash bro.
you are perfectly right, ashita does love him a lot but does not show, but she will surely show lot more now on, feels like that isnt it?
thanks bro keep reading and appreciating my friend.

 

[Casinar]

About Update 13 & 14

Dono hi update badiya tha.
Vihaan se zyada dukh Ashita ko ho raha hai.Dono hi raat me thik se so nahi paye.
Ashita ne Vihaan se duri bana rakha.Aur ye Vihaan ko dukh pauncha raha hai.Update 13 me Vihaan ko thaapad marne ka scene sabse best tha.
Kiu Vihaan ka din kaise jaye ga ye subah ki us thaapad ke jariye ek purvavs tha.
Vihaan bechara ki halat kharap ho gya aur Ashu ki behaviour se ek ke bad ek jhatka hi kha raha hai.

Nice update....
Dekhte hai aagle update me kia intejaar kor raha hai....

thanks very very much Friday bhai
aap ke iss appreciation ke liye bahot shukriya dost, aap ne do last update nahin padhe

 

[Casinar]

Kya kahe yaar..i have no words to express my feelings...apne pyar me positivity lane ke chakkar me vihaan is kadar tak tut chuka hai..ye ashita ko dikhai nahi diya ki vihaan ne apni kya haalat kar rakkhi hai..sharab, berukhi wo is kadar tut gaya hai ki ab accident ho gaya..ab shayad ashita ko realise hoga ki usne kya khoya hai aurkya kiya hai...ab dekhte hai ki vihaan kya karta hai jab ashita usse maafi mangegi. Itni jaldi ashita ko maafi nahi dilwana..use bhi to feel hone do vihaan ke dard ka ki wo kaise jiya hai ab tak til - til markar Ashita ne vihaan ki jaan nikal ke jinda chor diya.

thanks very much for the appreciation Yash bhai, mujhe behad khushi hai ke aap ko updates passand aaye, saath dete chalna bhai

 

[Casinar]

Kya jaandaar love incest story h bhai
Or mostly update emotional kr deta
Dekhte h vihan ka kya hoga or wo kaise behave krta h
Aapki ye story khamoshiyan loverboy ki yaad dilati h

iss thread par aap ka swagat hai bhai.
mujhe achah laga ke aap ko kahani passand aaye.
mujhe nahin pata ap kiss kahani ke bare mein keh rahe ho
magar yeh story mera apna likha hua hai, aur sab mere dimaagh ki paidaayish hai dost.
padhte chalo aur saath banne rehna yaara

 

[Casinar]

Ya brother I'm also agree..she should have to explained reason of her ignorance, rudeness to vihaan

yes bro but then the story she could have explained, but if i would have written that the track of the story would have gone to other direction, the pain of vihaan would have decreased and there would not have been the impact it has at this moment, right bro?

 

[Casinar]

Casi dear thanks very very much for update 15 &16. They are just PHENOMENAL. Wonderful updates my dear.
You got my eyes filled with tears with both these updates. You have wriiten with perfection. Very well narrated and described. Not everyone can write and describe emotion that well. You are too good in that.
Vihaan suffered a lot. Too much. And now Ashita got a blow when she realised that life is so short and she could suddenly lose Vihaan in a matter of seconds. Now she realises that she has made him suffer and wants to apologise.
Well lets see how you develop this ahead. So far you hv been doing too good. Awesome script, awesome writing.
Hats of Casi

i get to thank you for the appreciation dear Savi. keep reading dear

 

[Casinar]

Casi bhai maar dala yaar, iss update ne maar dala sach mein.
Bahut dard bhara update hai bhai, phir bhi aap ki daat deta hoon yaar kia likha hai aap ne. Shabash yaar. Eise likhna asaan kaam nahin hai. Itne emotions likh kar bayaan karna mamooli baat nahin aur aap sab kuch itne ache se likh kar humare dil tak pohnchaya isske liye thanks very very much casi bhai.
Vihaan ki haalat ne enkhon ko bhigo diya yaar. Bechara.
Ashita uss se door rehkar ussko kitna takliff ponhcha rahi hai isska ashita ko koyi andaza bhi nahin. Apne baap.ki baat ko maan kar bhai ko taklif deti jaa rahi hai. Poor Vihaan, feeling deeply sorry for him.
Reading the nxt one.

bahot bahot shukriya iss appreciation keliye nayan bhai