Incest Vihaan Aur Ashita - Bhai Behen ki kahani - Exclusively written for XFORUM(COMPLETED)

[Suparseupar]

donon updates faadu hein bhai
behtareen likha hai aap ne

 

[Durrani]

Update 5
Boht hi acha update tha casi bhai
Jo cheez baap ko nahi dikhi woh maa ko dikh gayi aur aage kya hona hai ye dikh gaya unko. Isi wajah se unhone bed alag kiya.
Vihaan emotionally blackmail kar rha tha ashita ko aur ashita ho bhi rhi thi. Ab dekhna ye hai k raat ki ye judai inko kitna door karti hai aik dusre se.
Aisa lag rha hai is story ka villain inki maa hi hai

 

[king cobra]

Update 17 At The Hospital​

“Kia ho gaya mere bhai ko? Mere Vihaan ko kia ho gaya? Nahin eisa nahin ho sakta; papa mujhe abhi uss se milna hai mujhe uss se bahot kuch kehna hai, mummy abhi issi waqt chalo mujhe bhai se bahot kuch kehna hai, mujhe uss se maafi maangni hai, main ne uss par bahot zulm kiye hein,bahot sitam dhaaye hai main ne, main ne ussko bahot dukh diye hein papa mujhe jaldi hospital lechalo mujhe apne Vihaan se milna hai abhi issi waqt!!!!!!”

Ussko uss tarah se rote dekh kar donon maa aur baa rone lage…..

Ab aguey….

Hospital jaate waqt taxi mein Ashita behaal thi, bahot hi roti jaa rahi thi. Ashita ke dimaagh mein sab wo pal ghumne lague jo ussne Vihaan ke saath guazare hein, khaas kar weh pal ek movie ki flash back ki tarah usske dimaagh mein ghum rahe jinn dinon donon kitne pyar mein doobe rehte the, bed par kiss karte, ek dusre ko baahon mein bharke sote the, aur kiss tarah Vihaan usske jism ke har kone ko chumta chussta tha, kiss tarah wo sab Ashita passand karti thi…. Yeh sab sochte hue Ashita aur bhi ziada ro rahi thi.

Phir usske enkhon ke saamne weh drisht dikhne lage ke kiss tarah se ussne Vihaan par sitam dhaaye hein, kiss tarah se Vihaan ussko baahon mein bharne ke liye tadapta raha, kiss tarah se usske saath pics lene ke liye minatein karta raha, kiss tarah se usski berukhi ne Vihaan ko pareshan aur dukh diya… sab kuch Ashita soch rahi thi aur ab sochne lagi ke kahin agar Vihaan mar gaya to wo uss se maafi bhi nahin maang paegi, agar Vihaan chala gaya to wo bhi mar jaegi yeh sab kuch sochne lagi thi Ashita car mein hospital jaate waqt.

Hospital pahunch kar, jaldi se ward ka number liya gaya magar uss waqt andar jaane ki ijazat nahin thi kissi ko, magar Ashita daudte hue us ward ke taraf jaane lagi aur ek wardboy ne zor se kaha,

“ey ladki wo mard ka ward hai agar koyi nanga soya hoga tab gali hospital walon ko doge tum log; kyun jaa rahi ho ek male ward mein iss waqt raat ko tum?!”

Ashita ki maa ne oonchi awaaz mein Ashita ko roka magar, wo apni maa ki awaaz ko ansuni karke badhti gayi ward ke taraf aur wahan jaa bhi pahunchi.

Anirud ne kaha,

“jaane do kum se kum uss se humko pata to chal jaega ke Vihaan serious hai ke nahin, hum yahin wait karte hein. Subha ke 4 baj chuke the aur koyi dikh hi nahin raha tha, nah nurse nah doctor nah koyi aur, ashita andar daakhil hui to dekha seinkron bed hein, kuch bed khali hein magar ziada tar beds par log soye hue hein, kuch logon ki tadapne ki dhimi dhimi awaazein sunaayi de rahe the, hospital wale woh badbhu jo naak ke nasson ko aur ziada khol deta hai uss bhu se Ashita naawakif thi kyunke usske dimaagh mein kuch aur chal raha tha….

Ashita ek ek karke sabhi bed ke patients ko dekhte hue chal rahi thi tez dil ki dhadkan ke saath, thoda hanffte hue, apne ensoo ponchte hue, aur ek patient ko bed par baithe hue paaya, jo ek budha dikh raha tha uss se Ashita ne pucha,

“Abhi kissko iss ward mein bharti kiya gaya kuch der pehle? Wo kiss bed par hai mujhe batao please wo mera bhai hai”

To uss budhe ne ungli se ishara karte hue door last bed ko dikhaya Ashita ko phir wo tez kadmon se chalte hue udhar gayi to dekha Vihaan ke sar par patti bandhe hue hein aur wo jeise neend mein hai, usske baazu ke nass mein ek sui dhanssaya gaya hai jiss se serum usske nass mein katra katra karke jaa raha hai….

Ashita lipat gayi Vihaan se, ussko baahon mein bharr liya aur usske munh mein kiss karne lagi rote hue…. Koyi bhi dekh nahin paa rahe the kyun ke wo last bed tha, ek kone mein tha aur Ashita ne sab se peeth kiya hua tha, to agar koyi dekhta bhi to sirf Ashita ki peeth dikh rahi thi aur sirf ussne patient ko baahon mein bhara hua hai eisa hi nazar araha tha….

Ashita Vihaan ke munh kholne ki koshish kar rahi thi apni jeeb se, apni jeeb daalne ki koshish kar rahi thi Vihaan ke munh ke andar, magar Vihaan jeise behosh tha aur munh nahin khol raha tha, phir Ashita ne ussko bahot zor se apne seene se lagaya, apne boobs par Vihaan ke sar ko dabaya, aur uss se baat karne lagi ussko jagaane ke liye,

“bhai, mere pyare bhai utho nah, dekho main aayi hoon tumhein dekhne, tumhara girlfriend aayi hai bhai, kia hua mere boyfriend ko? Mera boyfriend kyun ab mujhse baat nahin kar raha, kuch bolo nah bhai, mujhe tumhari awaaz sunna hai bhai kuch to bolo mujhse please bhai, dekho tumhara chehra mere boobs par hai, daba hua hai, mujhko smell karna passand karte ho nah, to smell karo nah bhai, iss mauke ka faeda uthao bhai koyi hamein nahin dekh raha, mujhko kiss karo bhai, apna munh kholo nah please bhai please bhai, utho nah bhai!! Mujhko apne baahon mein bhar lo nah bhai” aur Ashita zoron se rone lagi jab Vihaan ne koyi response nahin diya…

Ward ke dusre kone mein jahan se Ashita andar daakhil hui thi, nurses ke ek office hota hai usske andar ekaat male nurse soye hue the aur Ashita ki rone ki awaaz sunkar ek nurse utha aur Ashita ko dekh kar jaldi se wo usske taraf badhte hue oonche awaaz mein kaha,

“Kaun hai? Kaun hai udhar? Hello tum kia kar rahi ho iss waqt male ward mein? Yeh visiting hours nahin hai chalo niklo yahan se subha 6.30 ko ana, uss waqt aadhe ghante ki visiting time hai aur shaam ko 4 se 5.30 tak visiting hours hein abhi niklo yahan se….”

Tab tak nurse Ashita ke paas aa pahuncha tha to Ashita ne uss se pucha,

“Issko kia hua, yeh kyun kuch nahin bol raha hai?”

Uss male nurse ne Ashita ko niche se upar tak dekhte hue pucha,

“Kaun hai yeh? Aap ki pati hai kia? Aap ko dekh kar lagta to nahin aap shadi shuda ho? boyfriend hai kia yeh?!”

Ashita ne dil mein kaha, “haan mera boyfriend hai, aur jawaab diya, yeh mera bhai hai aap bataiye nah kia hua issko?”

Nurse: “ghabraane ki koyi baat nahin, abhi sedative ka effect hai iss liye samajh lijiye ussko hosh nahin, aur ekaat haddi toote hein, aur sar mein choat aayi hai, kal pata chal jaega agar koyi farcture hui hai to, magar ap please abhi baahar jaiye der ghante baad wapas ajana.”

Ashita ne binatti kiye ke ussko Vihaan ke paas rehne dein visiting time tak. Magar Nurse ne araam se samjhaya ke male ward hai iss liye wo ussko ijazat nahin de sakta, agar female ward hota to reh sakti thi, ek ladki hokar kissi male ward mein wo nahin reh sakti thi kyunke koyi bhi kissi bhi waqt kapde badal sakta tha ya kissi patient ko kapde pehenna hi mana tha operation vaghaira ki vajah se, uss haal mein kuch bhi dikh sakta hai iss liye Ashita ko jabran baahar kiya gaya…

Apne mummy papa ke paas aakar Ashita phir rone lagi unn donon ko bataate hue ke Vihaan ke haddiyan toote hein aur shayad fracture hua hai sar mein baad mein isska confirmation kiya jaega…. Aur bata diya ke 6.30 ko visit kar sakte hein ussko.

Maa ne kaha ke wo wapas ghar jaakar kuch paka ke laegi Vihaan ke liye aur baap ne kaha police station jaakar pata lagaega ke kia hua aur keise hua. Magar Ashita ne kaha wo wahin rahegi aur 6.30 ko andar jaegi apne bhai ko dekhne, uss se baat karne.

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Anirud ko police station mein pata chala ke kissi car ne thok diya Vihaan ko raaste mein jab wo ghar wapas jaa raha tha cyrbercafe se nikal kar, aur shaayad wo nashe mein tha aur raasta paar kar raha tha.

Suman ghar pahunch kar jaldi se kuch khaane ke chizon ko tayaar kiya aur wapas hospital ke liye nikli.

Udhar thik 6.30 ko Ashita ward mein ghuss gayi aur Vihaan se dard bhari awaaz mein baat kiye jaa rahi thi rote hue. Vihaan ka haath chum rahi, usske gaal chumti ja rahi thi baar baar, usske gardan ko chuma, aur halke se chussa, usske honton ko chussa, aur jeeb usske munh mein daalne ki laakh koshish karti rahi magar Vihaan munh nahin khol raha tha usska jabda jeise ek dusre se kissi chiz se joda gaya tha aur kholna naamumkin tha….

Ashita ne chaadar hatta kar dekha ke Vihaan ke ghunton par khoon lage hue aur usske kamar aur chaati par bhi khoon the, wo ghabraayi hui thi wo sab dekh kar, aur Vihaan ke kadmon ko chumne lagi, usske kadmon ko apne gaal se lagaya Ashita ne, ussko sehlaya, phir Vihaan ke gaal par apna hath ferra, ussko chuma, apne sar ko usske chaati par rakh kar usske dil ke dhadkanon ko suna aur kaha,

“Ey mere bhai ke dil ke dhadkanon mere bhai ko batado, ke mere dil ke dhadkanein usske dil ke dhadkanon ko chahte hein, mere bhai ko bolo enkhen khole aur mujhse baat kare, boldo main uss se beinteha pyar karti hoon, kehdo ke main uss ke bina adhuri hoon, boldo ke main uss se maafi maang rahi hoon, kehdo ke mujhse wo baat karein, boldo ke main usske bina marr jaungi, ey dil ke dhadkanon mera message pahuncha do mere bhai ko please!”

Aur Ashita wahin Vihaan ke chaati par sar rakh kar roti gayi. Aur usske peeth par usski maa ne haath thapthapaate hue ussko hattne ko kaha, ab wo apne bete se baat karna chahti thi, aur Anirud khada apne patni aur beti ko rote hue dekh raha tha wahin bed ke paas.

Visiting time khatam hua aur kuch samajh mein nahin aya kissi ko. Kayi family log apne apne ghar ke admitted members ko dekhne aaye the, ward bhara hua tha achanak. To Ward se nikalte waqt ek aadmi ne Anirud se pucha ke Vihaan ko kia hua, aur uss aadmi se baat karne ke baad Anirud ke samajh mein aya ke din ke 10 baje doctors ward mein aate hein apne apne patients ko dekhne to uss se pata chalega ke exactly kia hua hai Vihaan ko.

Finally, Anirud ne decide kiya ke wo bank mein phone karke bata dega ke late aega kyunke ussko hospital jana hai, doctor se milna hai, yeh sunkar Ashita ne kaha ke wo bhi college nahin jaegi, aur wo bhi apne papa ke saath doctor se milne jaegi, ussko bhi jaanna tha ke aakhir hua kia hai Vihaan ko. Sab ne decide kar liya ke aaj sab hospital jayenge doctor se milne.

Ghar pahunch kar Ashita apne kamre mein khud ko bandh karke aur bahot der tak roti rahi apne saare sitam ko yaad karte hue jo ussne Vihaan par kiye itne dinon tak. Aur khud ko kosste hue apne aap ko galiyan dene lagi thi. Khud behad pyar karti thi Vihaan se magar pata nahin kyun uss se door hone ki koshish kar rahi thi itne dinon se…..

Magar ab Ashita ne decide kar liya ke ab apni jaan chirkegi apne bhai par aur uss se bilkool bhi door nahin hogi, aur raat ko usske paas wapas sone jaegi pehle ki tarah, bahot miss kiya Ashita ne unn raaton ko jo donon ek saath guzara karte the, takriban do saal door rahi nahin der saal tak doorie rakhi ussne Vihaan se, aur ab usske paas wapas jaane ka waqt agaya tha….

Ashita ne khud se kaha,

“papa ne sex karne ko tab mana kiya tha, magar ab to main 18 ke upar ki ho gayi hoon, aur ab to Vihaan bhi mujhse bada hai to ussko aur mujhko bhi pata hai control keise karna chahiye ke main pregnant nah ho jawun, matlab ab Vihaan ke saath reh sakti hoon, yeh ab Vihaan ko bhi announce karna hoga….”

Yeh sab kehkar Ashita ko ek sukoon haasil hua, usske dil ke andar araam, feel hua aur socha ke Vihaan kitna khush hoga yeh jaan kar ke ab main wapas usske saath sone aungi, apne aap se khush hote hue Ashita apne kamre mein zor se chilaayi “woohoo, yaaaaayyyyy!!!” aur thoda sa kamar matkaate hue Khushi se jhoomne lagi…..

To be continued immediately in the next post….

kia likha hai bidu, ab to buss aap rulate jaa rahe ho
Ashita ab rula reli hai hai udhar vihaan rula rela tha
sab rulto hein aur apun ko bhu rolto bane rela hai kia re!
Update ekdum kjhakaas likha hai fir bhi

 

[king cobra]

Update 18 Ashita Restless​

10 baje sab ke sab hospital mein doctor ka intezaar karne lage. Ek jagah par unn sab ko baithne aur intezaar karne ko kaha gaya jahan ek office tha, consultation bhi wahin tha aur doctor mariz ko ward mein dekhne ke baad wahan unn logon se milenge aur patient ke bare mein baatein ho sakte hein. Vihaan ke family ke ilawa kuch aur family members the wahan doctors se milne ke liye.

Ashita ne socha jab tak doctor nahin aate wo kyun nah ward ke paas jaa kar baahar se hi Vihaan ko ward ke andar dekhe. Aur wo gayi bhi. Seikhron kirkiyan the ward mein takriban har ek bed ke paas ek khirki tha, magar jahan Vihaan soya hua tha wahan ki khirki bandh tha kyunke wo to neendh mein tha ya pata nahin kuch coma jeisa hoga shayad, abhi tak saaf kuch pata nahin chala tha ke ussko hua kia tha kuch haddiyan tootne ke ilawa…. Ashita opposite ke khirki se ussko dekh rahi thi, aur ek mariz se darkhwast kiye ke wo jaakar Vihaan ke paas wala khirki khol dein taake wo waha jaakar karib se Vihaan ko dekh sake aur baat kar sake. Wo mariz aaj discharge hone wala tha iss liye ghum phir raha tha to ussne jaakar Vihaan ke bed ke paas wala khirki ko khol diya aur Ashita ko uss taraf jaane ko kaha.

Ashita ke ilawa kayi aur khirki se kuch log marizon se baatein kar rahe the. Jab visiting hours nahin hote the aur jo log late aate the to ussi tarah se milte the uss hospital mein.

To Ashita ne awaaz diya Vihaan ko, kayi baar phukara ussne,

“Bhai? Hello bhai? Sun rahe ho kia? Hello boyfriend, look your girlfriend is here, please talk to her.

Koyi bhi response nahin hua Vihaan ke taraf se. Kaafi der tak Ashita wahin khadi rahi aur fikar karne lagi ke aakhir Vihaan ko hua kia hai kyun wo nahin jaag raha? Ussko darr lagne laga ke kahin koyi khatre wali baat to nahin, aur wapas jaa kar apne mumy papa ko bataya.

Anirud ne Ashita ko wapas wahin bheja yeh kehkar ke doctor wahan jaega Vihaan ko dekhne tab khidki se hi Ashita uss doctor se baat karen aur puche ke kyun Vihaan abhi tak jaaga nahin hai. Ashita ne wohi kiya, aur doctor assal mein aya Vihaan ke paas, usske reports dekhe aur nurse se kuch baatein kiye doctor ne dhimi awaaz mein. Ashita khauff bhare nazron se doctor ke chehre mein usski expression ko padhne ki koshish mein thi aur jab doctor jane wala tha to Ashita boli,

“Doctor sir, please mujhe bataiye kyun mera bhai abhi tak jaaga nahin hai? Wo kab enkhen kholega? Please I want to talk to him….”

Doctor ne Ashita ko upar se niche dekha aur pucha,

“tum akeli aayi ho kia apne bhai ke liye?”

Ashita: “no, sir mummy papa bhi hein wo aap ka wait kar rahe hein wahan aap ke consultation ke paas.”

Doctor:”okay tum bhi wahin mera wait karo main buss 5 minat mein wahan ata hoon.”

Ashita wapas agayi aur apne mummy papa se kaha ke doctor ane wala hai.

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Doctor ke office ke andar, sab baithe aur doctor ne Vihaan ke file ko khol kar apne table par rakh kar usski xray ko examine kiya aur ek ecography ki film bhi dekhne laga aur report par nazar daudaate hue kaha,

“kuch bhi ziada serious nahin hai filhaal, usski chaati par choat lagi hai aur peyr ki ek haddi fracture hue hein, ghutnon paar halki choat lage hein, magar haan police ke report mein likha hai ke usska sar, road ke pavement se takraya tha jiss se usske sar par shayad ziada choat lagne ki vajah se wo ek coma jeisi gehri needh mein hai upar se dard kum karne ke liye sedative par hai issi liye ussne abhi tak enkh nahin khole hein, wo sedative 8 ghante kaam karta hai to abhi to subha ke 4 baje se sirf 6 ghante hue hein, ab barah bajne ke baad wo jaagega. Aur haan jaagne par agar usske sar mein ziada dard hota hai to scan karna padega dekhne ke liye ke sar ke andar ziada gehri choat to nahi lage hein ussko. Xray se to fracture nahin nazar araha hai magar khopri ke andar seinkron nasein hote hein, agar unn mein kuch bigra hoga to wo sirf scan se pata chalega, iss liye abhi ussko jaagne ka intezaar karna padega, aur din ke 2 ya 3 baje ussko scan karaane ko lejaya jaega, tab result ane ke baad pata chalega ke ussko kia treatment dena hoga.”

Wo doctor jawaan tha aur baar baar Ashita ko dekhe ja raha tha. phir jab batein ho gayi to Ashita nikal rahi thi tab doctor ne Anirud ko andar rukne ke liye kaha, Ashita mudh kar piche unnko dekhne laga to ussne kaha,

“aap ke father se ek private baat karni hai so please excuse us.”

To Ashita aaur usski maa baahar nikle aur Ashita bahot worried hokar apni mummy se kaha,

“maa zaroor koyi buri khabar hai issi liye doctor ne papa ko akele andar roka, kuch bad news hai mum!” yeh kehkar Ashita rone lagi.

Tabhi darwaza khula aur Anirud ne Ashita ki maa ko bhi andar bulaya. Ashita aur ziada ghabra gayi wo bhi andar jaana chahti thi magar ussko roka gaya baahar hi…. Ashita bench par baith gayi rote hue.

Andar baat yeh hui ke doctor ne Anirud se pucha,

“kia aap ki beti ki shaadi ho gayi?”

Anirud: “nahin wo abhi padh rahi hai”

Doctor: “kia aap usski shaadi mujhse karoge? Mujhe wo bahot passand aayi”

Tabhi Anirud ne Suman ko bhi andar bulaya. Aur andar doctor suman se bhi yehi batein kar raha tha.

Suman ko koyi eitraaz nahin tha aur ussne haan kaha. To doctor ne kaha ke Vihaan ho thik ho jaane diya jaaye tab wo officially inform karega donon ko.

Sab wapas ghar jaane lage aur Ashita sawaal pe sawaal kiye jaa rahi thi ke doctor ne kia kaha, kyun unn donon ko akele bulaya kia hua tha Vihaan ko vaghaira vaghaira. Ussko koyi jawaab nahin diya gaya.

Bus mein suman aur anirud ek saath baithe aur suman ne kaha, “ek taraf ek buri baat ho gayi hamare Vihaan ka accident ho gaya aur ek taraf itna acha rishta mil gaya Ashita ke liye, ek doctor, kitni Khushi ki baat hai nah?”

Anirud ne kaha,

“yeh sab shayad bhagwan ki planning thi. Vihaan ka accident hona hi tha tab nah doctor humse milte, tab nah wo Ashita ko dekhta aur usska haath mangta”

Suman ne kaha,

“haan usska khel bhi nirala hai, hamare bache ke haddi todwa kar Ashita ka rishta bhejna tha uss upar wale ko!”

Donon sirf uss rishte ke baare mein baat karte gaye ghar tak. Vihaan ko jeise bhool hi gaye, aur Ashita sirf aur sirf Vihaan ke bare mein sochti gayi, bahot udaas thi baar baar usske enkhon se ensoo beh rahe the.

Anirud ne rishte ko lekar yeh bhi kaha ke abhi Ashita shaadi ke liye nahin maanegi, abhi padh rahi hai tez hai, aur padhna chahegi. To suman ne kaha ke doctor ne keh to diya ke ussko padhne degi, ek roka karega, phir mangni aur shaadi 3 ya 4 saal baad karega, tab tak donon milte rahenge, romance karenge, sab kaha nah doctor ne? to iss mein kia ghalat hai?

Ghar ke andar aate hi Ashita apne kamre mein nahin balke Vihaan ke kamre mein usske bed par gayi aur bed par leyt kar vihaan ko smell karne lagi…. Wo jo Vihaan karta aya tha itne saalon se, aaj Ashita kar rahi thi. Vihaan ki aadat thi Ashita ko smell karna, jab wo paas nahin hoti to Ashita ke kapdon ko sunghna, usske nighty ko sunghna, Ashita bed par jahan soti hai uss jagah ko sunghna, usski takiye mein usski baal ki khushbhoo ko sungna yeh sab Vihaan kiya karta tha, aaj Ashita ki baari thi….. aur kuch der tak Vihaan ko tassavur mein usske saath bed par feel karne ke baad, Ashita uth kar Vihaan ke unn kapdon ko liya jo kal pehna tha aur abhi tak dhula nahin tha, aur ussko sunghne lagi, uss mein se Vihaan ke khushbhoo arahe the, usski deodorant aur pasine ki mix khushbhoo arahe the aur Ashita ussko sughnte hue utejit hoti jaa rahi thi, ussko bahot ziada mann kar raha tha Vihaan ke bahon mein hone ko, ussko feel karne ko, ussko kiss karne ko, aur uss se kiss karwaane ko….. Ashita dhire dhire apne boobs ko dabaati gayi aur dhire se apne haath ko apne peth par ferrte hue apne peth ke niche tak ungliyon ko ferra aur haath ko apne panty tak kiya to khud ko gila paaya Ashita ne, usski saansein raftaar pakadne lagi thi aur usski dil ki dhadkanein aur ziada tez hone lage the Vihaan ko mann mein basaaye hue Ashita apne bhai ke aghosh mein kho jana chahti thi…. Usske munh se yeh words tadapti awaaz mein nikle,

“Bhai, kab aoge, I love you bhai, mujhe tumse bahot pyar karna hai, missing you like hell my dear loving boyfriend, tumko chhune ko mann karta hai, tumhare taangon mein pehle ki tarah apne tangon ko jakarne ka mann kar raha hai, tumhare kapde utaarne ka mann kar raha hai, aur khud ko nangi karke tumhare nange jism par chadhne ka mann kar raha hai, jaldi wapas aao bhai ab mujhse aur saha nahin jaega, uffff!”

To be continued………. (3800 words from both updates)

bahut hi bada update diyela hai baap
maja agaya yeh jaan kar ke ashita ab diwani ho reli hai apne bhai ki
saali ne itne din tak ussko dukh diya ab marrne lagi hai uss par
anyway yeh to hona hi tha - pata tha mujhe ke ashita ki shadi ki baat chalegi lo ab ho rela hai, kia doctor paagal ho gaya ashita ko dekh kar
bahut mast update hai bidu bahut maja aya apun ko
thanks

 

[Durrani]

Update 6
Uodate thoda ajeeb laga mujhe
Ajeeb ye laga k kaise suman anirud se apne beti k jism k bare mein baat kar rhi thi aur fir anirud ka uske sath sex karte waqt ashita ko imagine karna aur guilt feel na karna. Kahi ye khatre ki ghanti to nahi hai
Baki jo cheez pasand aya woh dono ki bonding. Jo ab aur strong hota jaa rha hai. Ab dekhte hai dono ko alag karti hai ya nahi suman.
Aap ne aik jagah ashita ki jagah anisha likua hai plz correct kijiye

 

[Durrani]

Update 7
Aik dam hot update tha casi bhai
Pehle to jhatka diya k maa ko dono pe shak hai jiski wajah lovebites hai aur fir dono ka closeness.
Dekhte hai agle update me kya hai

 

[Savi]

Donon updates padh liya.
Bahut hi shaandaar, lajawab likha hsi asp ne Casi ji.
Aap itni gehraayi me keise chale jaate ho ye main nahin samajh paati. Aap ek mard hokar ek ladki ki bhi jajbaaton ko keise itni sahi tarike se describe karte ho ye heyran karne wali baat hai mere liye. Main eise hi heyraan hui thi jab YBMHH padhi thi. Jiss tarah se aap uss mein Aisha ki feelings ko describe kiye the, usske lines likhe the main bahut heyraan hui thi. Lo ab yahan bhi aur chawla mein sanjana aur saanvi ki bhi.....
Aap auraton k dil ka haal keise pata karte ho Casi ji? Yeh secret mujhe batana.
Jo kuch main ne kaha matlab k aap ne behtareen likha hai aur update fantastic aur mind blowing hein.
Umeed hai k uss doctor ka sapna bahut jald chakna churr ho jaye.
: Casinar

 

[Raaz1886]

Badhiya update bhai.... vihaan ko kuch na ho...
Ab dono fir se pyar ke sagar me msti krnge....
But Ashita ka sadi ka rishta kahi fir se dono ko dur na kr de....

 

[Aakash.]

Vihaan is hurt but Ashita is in pain, maybe this is called love. Seeing such condition of her brother, Ashita remembers every moment spent with him and the tears of his eyes are not stopping by remembering those memories again and again and Ashita has decided that she will forget everything and love Vihaan as before. So far nothing has been known about Vihaan's condition doctor has also said that nothing can be said till Vihaan comes to his senses. No one can separate Ashita and Vihaan because there is so much love in both of them. Understand Ashita's feelings and take the doctor out of the story. It was a very good update, you are writing very well. Brother, now I am telling you that your story has won my heart, let's see what happens next in the story, till then waiting for the next part of the story. Thank You...

 

[Husein Ali]

aaj ki update ka intejaar hai casi bhai, iss kahani ko baar baar padhne ka mann karta hai
abhi abhi shuru se puri story full padh dale hum ne, age padhne ki utsukta ho rahi casi bhai