Incest Vihaan Aur Ashita - Bhai Behen ki kahani - Exclusively written for XFORUM(COMPLETED)
- Thread starterCasinar
- Start date
- 3,398,455
Stone cold
Well-Known Member
- 3,052
- 4,481
- 143
Agree with you bro
Casi Bhai aisa jhulm na Karna abhi to ye story Ka 1 update padne Aya tha aur ye kya Bhai as ye Bhai Behan ki story hai to ismai koi 3rd party ko add math Karna bhale hi wo baap ho ya maa.
Ise bas ek Pure Love Story Rakhna Bhai
Mithilesh373
Active Member
- 903
- 1,196
- 123
Maine bhi issi liye to reading start kiya lekin casinor sir ji se isse jyada kya expecte kar sakte hai.... Inhone galti kar diya story title ka naam waisa de kar... Jisse dekh kar bahut pure incest reader yaha pe visit kiye hai... Aur abb casinor bhai ko un sabka jawab dena hoga hi... Yaha pe Hamlog apna klpd karwane nahi aaye the...
- 18,429
- 125,413
- 259
This is your own and PERSONAL conclusion right?
kahani abhi khatam nahin hui hai.
teaser kia hota hai pata hai bhai? the last update was a teaser update, kayi readers samajh gaye aur last update ko teasing update keh chuke hein, kahani ki end jab tak nah ho aap apni conclusion jo aap ki hai, de rahe ho to main uss par kia keh sakta hoon. iss mein aur kissi ne bhi ashita ke saath kuch bhi nahin kiya hai..... ab hoga ya nahin main abhi to kuch nahin bataunga.....
natija tab tak mat nikalo jab tak kahani end nah ho mere bhai!
Last edited:
- 18,429
- 125,413
- 259
aap bhi bhai?
kahani khatam ho gayi kia bhai? abhi to aap ne ek hi update padhe hai, baki ke 9 updates padho yaar tan natije par ana nah yaar?
dusre reader ke opinion ko apna opinion to mat bano dost
- 18,429
- 125,413
- 259
main updates sirf monday to Friday deta hoon bhai.....
ab monday ko new update aega
Weekend for family time
Rowdywa
Banned
- 1,133
- 5,151
- 143
Superb update casi bro.
very very well written and narrated with great descriptions.
I really felt sad for Ashita while her mother almost abused her, and the saddest part was Vihaan was not there to support her while he had said earlier in the morning that he will be there if ever his mother would raise her hand on her, but the mother raised her hand on Ashita but vihaan was not her to come in between as he had said, that was very sad.
thanks the dad intervened and saved Ashita from his wife, but things were about to turn sour and Anirud managed very well to handle the situation from turning to worst.
the dad-daughter bonding was emotional and with love the dad was able to make Ashita confess and what was that she really told the truth to him? REALLY? oh no!1 so what now?
I never thought that she will be lured by her dad and say all to him.... will he not now go mad nd tell all to his wife?
let me read ahead to see what happened..
loved this update, you are too good man
Mithilesh373
Active Member
- 903
- 1,196
- 123
Sir ji chahe ye mera conclusion hoThis is your own and PERSONAL conclusion right?
kahani abhi khatam nahin hui hai.
teaser kia hota hai pata hai bhai? the last update was a teaser update, kayi readers samajh gaye aur last update ko teasing update keh chuke hein, kahani ki end jab tak nah ho aap apni conclusion jo aap ki hai, de rahe ho to main uss par kia keh sakta hoon. iss mein aur kissi ne bhi ashita ke saath kuch bhi nahin kiya hai..... ab hoga ya nahin main abhi to kuch nahin bataunga.....
but I am 100% sure that they will be happened.. And one more thing I noticed that whatever you write for your incest reader i mean personally for your incest reader but they are not objecte you for anything. So that's why i am 1000% sure that my conclusion going to be executed... And you will got entire of appreciation through your so called incest(adaultry) reader....
And i am going to read your all update because i want to know i am right or wrong...
Rowdywa
Banned
- 1,133
- 5,151
- 143
Woooooooooooow
What an update man, after all its a mega update, pheeeeeeewwww!!
breathtaking update..... got to breathe hard to come back to normal after the read of this one....
Where do I start with? let me start from beginning and go till the end....
you have written "Ashita ki confession sunne ke baad Anirud ka pasina chhuth gaya aur usska sar chakra sa gaya ek pal ke liye. Usske maathe se chand boond pasine ke nikal pade aur usske samajh mein nahin aya ke ab Ashita ko kia jawaab de!"
So for me, this line is enough to understand that the father got so much worried and troubled by learning the truth, otherwise he would not have perspired and get a turning head sensation.
and its true you wrote it well that when the mother is strict the dad normally always support in such cases.
you have narrated everything in such details and so meticulously that its a pleasure to read casi bro.
the moment the dad walked out you described ho Ashita thought he was now going to tell her mother and held his hand asking him not to tell her mother but fortunately for her the dad said he was just checking either she did not hear what she just confessed.... to give such small detail is the calibre of a great writer only i i dearly appreciate for all your scripts. hats off bro.
Really hard for a dad to ask a daughter either she had sex with her brother... but Anirud did it boldly and was so relieved to know that they have not had sex..... very very well managed this update bro.... you really are a genius to manage it this way... hats off again...
And the way the dad comforted her asking her to stop worrying and not to get stressed.... parents are ike that, you portrayed a real dad comforting his kid to ease her pain.
But then came the parts which are really teasing; you as a cunning writer want to put in our brain that the dad could also have feelings to get Ashita now since she is easy prey, isn't it? hehehehe Casi I will not fall in your words trap buddy.....
you are a very cunning writer and you know how to make readers work out their imaginations to make us think dad with daughter now.... I know this is just a teaser... you used para of words to lure us into your words, but i bet it is nothing like that... you know how to create such situation that will make us fall in a trap..... but if there would have been anything between them you would not have STOPPED the update that way, you would have stopped it by a better sexual approach between Ashita and her father but you did not show anything as such, so I believe there will be nothing between them. the dad has something else to talk about with her, i am pretty sure it is not about his lust for her but something else.....And yes i am also happy that Vihaan finally got a mobile gifted from his nice boss and the young man is walking back home.....
but will Ashita not be in her parent's room at that hour of the night? her bed is there now so will vihaan see her? or will Ashita still be doing homework waiting for her beloved bro?
waiting for Monday now casi bro......
I am sorry for the delays to reply my dear, was rally very busy past few days.
thanks very much for this beautiful story casi bro, keep it up and keep going casi bro.
- 18,429
- 125,413
- 259
Mithilesh bhai, main kahani ke beech mein yeh batana passand nahin karta ke kahani mein aguey kia hone wala hai.
main readers ko guess karne ke liye chorrta hoon. ab aap ka guess sahi hai ya nahin yeh kahani ko aguey padhne ke baad hi pata chalega.
ab aap shaayad iss liye eisa keh rahe ho taake main ab weisa nah likhun jo likhna chahta hoon aur aap ke liye issko change karun, weisa to bilkool nahin hoga, chaahe koyi bhi readers apne khushi liye kuch bhi kahe.
rahi baat kissi ki objection ki to khud dekh lo kitne readers ne object kiya hai ke main kissi aur ko Ashita se kuch nah karne doon yeh sab comments dekhlo khud hi kia yeh objections nahin hein bhai? to aap ne ekeise keh diya ke koyi objection nahin karta?
aur bhi kayi eise comments hein kahani ki start hone ke waqt.....