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Fantasy Vijaynagar — A Journey Beyond Time

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UPDATE – 4 [ Council ka nirmarn]

Vijayanagara Samrajya ka itihas ek badi aur vishal praja wala desh ka tha, jisme 6 lakh square kilometer ka kshetra tha aur croreon log baste the.Lekin, apni vishalta ke baavajood, yeh samrajya unnati aur sena ki pragati mein kai chunautiyon ka samna kar raha tha.

Is vikas mein rukawat ka ek bada karan tha logon ki jeevan shailee ka uchit star ka na hona.** Is wajah se prashikshit aur pratibhavan log ki kami hui, jo ki pradesh ke samruddh sansadhanon ka upyog karke desh ko majboot bana sakte the.

Iska parinaam yeh tha ki Vijayanagara Samrajya pashchim jagat ke vikas ke saamne pichhad gaya aur ab bhi Europe ke madhyakalin yug ke star par atka tha.

*Vijay ka Nayapan aur Uska Sapna*

Naye raja Vijay ne apni zimmedariyon ka bojh mehsoos kiya aur bhavishya ke liye yojnaein banana shuru kiya.

"Uncle Ravi, kya aap mujhe un logon ki list laa sakte hain jo hamare pariwar ke prati wafadar hain aur apne kshetra mein kuch khaas uplabdhiyaan prapt ki hain? Aur haan, unke paas paryapt anubhav bhi ho," Vijay ne kaha.

"Bilkul, Maharaj," Ravi ne turant jawab diya.

Vijay ne faisla kiya ki ek **Imperial Council** ka gathan kiya jaye jo uski madad kare aur uska bojh halka kare. Lekin, Vijay ke man mein ek alag yojna thi—uska lakshya tha ek aisi vyavastha sthapit karna jisme woh niyuktiyon aur nishedh ke liye sampoorn veto shakti rakhe.

"Council ke alag-alag vibhaag hone chahiye—jaise jeevika, antarik suraksha, sena, arthik vibhaag, dharmik aur sanskritik kshetra, nyayik kary, aur vyapaar," Vijay ne socha aur fatafat apne vichar ek parchment par likh daale.

*Interviews aur Chunavi Prakriya*

**Jeevika Vibhaag ke liye Interview:**
Vijay ne Ayurveda ke anubhavik chikitsak Vinay aur ek prashikshit physician Lokesh ka interview liya.

"Vinay, aapke hisaab se hum apne logon ki jeevika aur swasthya ko kaise sudhaar sakte hain?" Vijay ne pucha.

"Maharaj sahi shiksha aur jaagrukta karyakramon ke zariye logon ko swasth jeevan jeene ke liye prerit karna chahiye," Vinay ne jawab diya.

Lokesh ne kaha, "Safai aur swachh jal ke prabandhan ke madhyam se hum rog aur bimariyon ko rok sakte hain." Vijay ne Lokesh ke holistic approach ko pasand kiya aur usse council mein shamil karne ka faisla kiya.

**Antarik Suraksha Vibhaag ke liye Interview:**
Is vibhaag ke liye, Vijay ne Arjun, ek sainik se baat ki.

"Arjun, aap apne anubhavon ke aadhar par antarik suraksha ke liye kya yojna banayenge?" Vijay ne poocha.

Arjun ne jawab diya, "Maine kabhi bhi logon ki suraksha ke aage kuch nahi rakha. Mujhe lagta hai ki pehredari, sainik prashikshan, aur samuday ke saath bharosa banane se shanti aur suraksha banayi rakhi jaa sakti hai." Vijay ne is approach ko saraha aur Arjun ko team mein shamil karne ka faisla kiya.

**Vyapaar Vibhaag ke liye Interview:**

Ant mein, Vijay ne Rajesh ka interview liya, jo Bangalore ko ek chhoti basti se ek vyapaarik kendra mein badalne ke liye prasiddh tha.

"Rajesh, hum apne samrajya mein arthik vikas aur samruddhi kaise laa sakte hain?" Vijay ne pucha.

Rajesh ne kaha, Maharaj agar hum rajyon ke beech ke shulk hata den toh aapsi vyapar ko badhava milega aur arthvyavastha mazboot hogi."

Vijay ko Rajesh ke vichar pragatisheel lage aur usne Rajesh ko council mein shamil kar liya.

**Nayi Council ka Gathan Aur Bhavishya**

Ab council ke sabhi sadasyon ka chayan ho gaya tha. Vijay ko apne naye sapne ko pura karne mein safalta ka vishwas hone laga. Samrajya ke samaksh kai chunautiyan thi, lekin Vijay ko yakeen tha ki ek majboot team ke saath woh Vijayanagara Samrajya ko naye unchaiyon tak le ja sakta hai.
 

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UPDATE – 5 [ council ka nirmarn 2]

**Ab tak saat mein se teen council members ka chayan ho chuka tha.**
Baaki ke chaar pad Vijay apne hi vishwast logon ko dena chahta tha, kyunki yeh jagahain bahut mahatvapurn thi aur unhe bahari logon ko dena samajhdari nahi hoti.

**Military Department ke liye ek aise vyakti ki zarurat thi jo sena aur rajniti ka gyata ho, lekin jis ke paas asli shakti na ho, sirf sena mein bahut prabhav ho.**

Vijay sochne laga aur ek naam uske dimaag mein aaya, “Ah, mujhe samajh aaya. Military Department ke liye sabse sahi vyakti Lokanandha Senapati hai, jo ek 60 saal ke military general hain. Unhone mere pita ke saath kaam karte hue kai chunautiyon ko safalta se paar kiya hai.”

“Halanki wo ab apni umar ke karan retire ho chuke hain, unka anubhav, takniki gyata, aur wafadari unhe is pad ke liye perfect candidate banata hai,” Vijay ne khud se kaha.

**Finance Department ka Chayan**
Finance Department ke liye Vijay ke liye faisla lena asaan tha. Uske dimaag mein ek hi naam aaya—Uncle Ravi, uska vishwasniya butler.

“Uncle Ravi toh hamesha se hi hamare pariwar ke khazane ko sambhalte aaye hain, jo asal mein poore samrajya ka khazana tha. Unka anubhav aur wafadari unhe is pad ke liye best candidate banati hai,” Vijay ne socha.

**Religion aur Cultural Department ka Chayan**
Religion aur Culture ke liye Vijay ko ek aise vyakti ki zarurat thi jo naye vicharon ke liye khula ho aur samaj mein uncha darja rakhta ho. Sochte-sochte uske dimaag mein *Raghavendra Bhat* ka naam aaya, jo ek Shiva Mandir ke mukhya pujari hain aur jinhone Vijay ke rajyaabhishek mein bhi bhaag liya tha.

“Raghavendra Bhat ek Brahmin parivaar se hain aur samaj mein unka darja bahut uncha hai. Bachpan mein apne pita ke nidhan ke baad unhone apne pariwar ki zimmedariyan uthaayi aur ek samajhdaar vyakti ke roop mein vikshit huye,” Vijay ne likha.

*Judicial Department ka Chunav**
Nyayik vibhaag ke liye Vijay ko kaafi parishani hui. Uske paas is pad ke liye koi upyukt vyakti dikhai nahi diya. Thak-haar kar usne Uncle Ravi ko bula kar apna vichar vyakt kiya.

“Uncle Ravi, mujhe aapko apna butler ka kaam chhodne ke liye kehna padega aur…” Vijay ki baat adhuri hi thi ki Ravi ne zameen par gir kar rona shuru kar diya.

“Maharaj, mujhe maaf kijiye agar maine koi paap kiya ho! Kripya mujhe apne paas hi rakhiye,” Ravi rote hue bola.

Vijay ne ek pal ke liye gussa kiya, lekin phir uska chehra naram ho gaya.

“Uncle Ravi, meri baat suno. Main aapko saza nahi de raha, balki tumhe samrajya ke finance ka mukhiya bana raha hoon. Tumhari yogyata ka yeh sahi upyog hoga,” Vijay ne samjhaya.

Ravi ne apne aansu pochhte hue jawab diya, “Maharaj, aapka bharosa mere liye sab kuch hai. Lekin mujhe ek baat chinta mein daal rahi hai—mere bina aapka dhyan kaun rakhega?”

Vijay muskura kar bola, “Uncle, ab to mujhe khud hi apna dhyan rakhna padega. Aap bas rajya ke arthik karyon ko sambhaliye.”

**Nyayik Vibhaag ke Liye Bhuvan**
Ravi ne ek vyakti ka naam Vijay ko bataya—**Bhuvan**, jo kabhi Vellore mein nyay prashasan sambhalte the lekin apne kathor swabhav ke karan kai rajnayik logon se anban ho gayi thi.

Bhuvan ke bare mein sun Vijay ne pucha, “Nyay gyaan aur buddhi maangta hai. Tum ek aise case ko kaise handle karoge jisme ek nobleman apradh kare?”

Bhuvan bola, “Maharaj, main nyay ka samarthak hoon aur sabko barabar manta hoon. Nyay ka palan karte hue rank ka koi matlab nahi rakhta.”

Vijay Bhuvan ke jawab se prabhavit hua aur kaha, “Main tumhe temporary council member banata hoon. Tumhe apne vicharon ko sacchai mein badalte hue dekhna chahta hoon.”

Yeh kehte hue, Vijay ne apne naye team ke sabhi members ko agle din ek council meeting ke liye bulaaya. Uske sapne ko anjam dene ka yeh agla kadam tha.
 

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UPDATE – 6 [COUNCIL KA NIRMARN 3]

Ek bade bargad ke ped ke neeche, ek budha aadmi, jiski shakal par thakawat ke nishan aur gahan daadhi thi, ek talaab ke paas baitha machhli pakad raha tha. Ye aadmi **Lokanandha Senapati** ke naam se jana jata tha.

Woh apni saathveen dasak (60th) mein dikhai deta tha, lekin uska mazboot sharir aur atmvishwas uske fauj ke anubhav ka praman tha. Uska naam "Senapati" uski purani padvi ka pratik tha, jab woh Vijayanagar Samrajya ke sena ka sarvchh kaman tha.

Aajkal, apne retirement ke din woh machhli pakadne jaise saral kaamon mein khushi dhoondhta tha.

Jab woh apne dhaage par machhli ka jhatka mehsoos karne ki koshish kar raha tha, ekdum se shaanti ko todti hui ek awaz aayi. Ek sevak, ghas par daudta hua, uski taraf aa raha tha. Lokanandha ne gusse se uski taraf dekha, kyunki uski machhli haath se chhoot gayi thi.

"Jab mei machli pakadne hi wala tha, tabhi aap aa gaye," Lokanandha ne thoda chirchiraapan dikhate hue kaha.

"Swami, yeh Maharaj ka aadesh hai rajdhani se," sevak ne fatafat kaha aur ek rajmudra laga hua khat uske samne rakha.

Jab Lokanandha ne rajmudra dekhi, toh uska gussa shaanti mein badal gaya. Usne khat khola aur dhyan se pada.

"Toh samrajya ko abhi bhi mere purane haddiyon ki zarurat hai," usne halki si muskaan ke saath kaha.

———

* SHIV MANDIR, HAMPI

Shiv mandir ke ek kone mein, **Raghavendra Bhat** dhyaan mein baithe the, apni aankhein band kiye bhakti mein leen. Mandir ke mukhya pujari hone ke naate, unka kartavya tha ki woh bhagwan ke saath jurein aur logon ko dharmik margo par prerit karein.

Mandir ki diwaron par suljhe hue nakash aur rangeen resham ke vastron ke sajawat ne poore sthaan ko ek adhyatmik aura se bhar diya tha.

Jab woh apne dhyaan mein gehre the, ek sahayak unke paas aaya aur sankoch ke saath unka dhyaan tod diya. Apni aankhein kholte hi, unhone use daantne ka mann banaya, lekin uske haathon mein rajmudra se sja parchament dekh kar unki jijnyasa badh gayi.

“Swamiji, maharaj ka aadesh lekar aaya hoon,” sahayak ne kaha, apni awaaz mein gahanata aur mahatvapurnta samjhane ki koshish karte hue.

Bhat ne parchament liya aur dhyan se uska paath kiya. Yeh aadesh dharmik aur sanskritik vibhaag se judi baaton ke liye tha, jiska samna unhone pehle kabhi nahi kiya tha.

Kuchh samajhne ki ichha ke saath, unhone socha ki woh Vijay se swayam mil kar is baare mein spasht karenge.

———

* ROYAL PALACE, HAMPI

Rajmahal ke ek vishal hall mein kai log baithkar kisi ka intezaar kar rahe the. Kuchh log sankoch mein the, jabki doosre apne aatmvishwas ke saath khade the, jaise yeh unka roj ka kaam ho. Yeh sabhi Vijay ke sandesh par yahaan ikattha hue council ke naye sadasya the.

Darwaze shaan se khule aur **Vijay Deva Raya**, Vijayanagar Samrajya ke maharaj, ka pravesh hua. Sabhi log turant apni jagah se khade ho gaye aur "Maharaj ki jai ho! Vijayanagar ki jai ho!" ke naare lagaye.

Vijay ne apne haath ke ishaare se sabhi ko baithne ko kaha aur apni nigahein sabhi par daali. Unka roop majboot aur shant tha.

“Aaj hum yahaan rajya ki **Imperial Council** ka udghatan karne ke liye ikattha hue hain,” Vijay ki awaz me ek gahri ghanata thi.

“Yeh council samrajya ki neev hogi, jo nayi niti aur yojnao ko roop dene mein meri madad karegi,” unhone kaha.

Sabhi council members unki baat dhyan se sun rahe the, ek taraf maan ka ehsaas aur doosri taraf daayitva ka bojh.

“Par yaad rahe,” Vijay ki nazrein sabhi par tik gayi, “Aap sirf mere pratinidhi hain, shakti ke maalik nahi. Zarurat padne par main kisi ko bhi uske pad se hata sakta hoon.”

Unki is baat ne poore hall mein ek shaanti bhar di, lekin sab samajh gaye ki unka daayitva kitna mahatvapurn tha.

Fir Vijay ne council ke naye sadasyon ka parichay diya:

• Lokanandha Senapati, Military Affairs Department ke mukhiya,” Vijay ne kaha. Lokanandha apne seat se uthe aur sabhi • sadasyon ko muskaan ke saath pranaam kiya.

• Raghavendra Bhat, Religious and Cultural Department ke mukhiya,” Vijay ne kaha. Raghavendra ne apne haath jod kar “Namaste” kaha.

• Lokesh, Livelihood Department ke pramukh,” Vijay ne kaha. Lokesh, jo ek gyata chikitsak the, apne sadasyon se saral roop se milte dikhai diye.

• Arjun, Internal Affairs Department ke head,” Vijay ne kaha. Arjun, ek anubhavshali afsar, apne sharirik dasha ke saath unka swagat kiya.

• Rajesh, Business Department ke pramukh,” Vijay ne kaha. Rajesh ek dostana muskaan ke saath apne sadasyon se mile.

• Ravi, Finance Department ke naye head aur mere purane butler,” Vijay ne kaha. Ravi apni seat se uthe aur vinamr bhaav se sabhi ka swagat kiya.

• Aur antim mein, **Bhuvan**, Judiciary Department ke mukhiya,” Vijay ne kaha.

Aise naye council ki sthapna hui, jo samrajya ke naye yug ka aarambh thi.
 
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UPDATE – 7 [ VIJAY NIKLA VIJAYANAGARA GHOOMNE ]

Council ke sthaapna ko kuch din beet chuke the. Ab jab Vijay ne Vijayanagara ke chhote-chhote kaamon se apne haath chhuda liye the, toh usne socha ki apne sudhaar shuru karne se pehle ek baar samrajya ka daura kiya jaye. Kitabi gyaan toh uske paas tha, par asli zindagi ka anubhav nahi.

“Vinod, jo kuchh zaruri ho, sab taiyaar karo. Main Vijayanagara ka daura karne ja raha hoon.”

“Jo aapka aadesh ho, Maharaj,” ek naujawan ne jawab diya. Uske kaale baal, kaale aankhon aur khubsurat chehre mein ek garima thi. Vinod ek 30 saal ka yuva tha, jo ek anath hone ke baad shahi parivaar ke dwara pala gaya tha. Wah Uncle Ravi ka shishya tha, aur isi wajah se Ravi ke retirement ke baad Vijay ka butler bana. Uski wafadari nishchit thi.

Ek chhoti si mandli, jo vafadar salaahkaaron aur suraksha ke sipaahiyon se bani thi, Vijay ke saath subah-subah ek ghode wali gaadi mein nikli. Hampi ki bheed-bhaad bhari galiyon se guzarate hue log apne raja ko dekh kar ascharay se bhare.

Pehle gaon mein, jahan Vijay gaya, wahan ke logon ne dar ke maare haath jod kar unka swagat kiya. Vijay ne kheton mein mehnat karte kisanon se baat ki aur unke paani ki kami aur zamindaron ke kar ki samasya ke baare mein jaana. Vijay ko pata chala ki gareeb kisano se liye jaane wale kar zamindaron ke paas ja rahe the, rajya ke khazane mein nahi.

Jahan Vijay ke pita ne zyadatar kar adhikaar vaapas le liye the, wahan bhi kisaan apne upaj ka 60-70% anaj apne sthaniye zamindaron ko dete the, aur khud ke liye mushkil se kuch bacha pate the. Vijay gusse mein apna haath itna kas gaya ki uspar chot lag gayi.

Vijay system ko turant samapt karna chahte the, par apne aap ko rokte hue socha, **"Abhi samay nahi aaya hai."** Usne apna haath hila kar gaon walon ko vishwaas diya ki woh iska samadhan zarur nikalenge, aur ek garam muskaan ke saath unhe santusht kiya.

Jaise-jaise Vijay apne daure par aage badhe, unhone apne logon aur riti-riwazon ke baare mein aur gyaan prapt kiya. Unhone ek badi samasya ka bhi samna kiya – jaati pratha. Pehle unhone iske baare mein kitabon mein pada tha, lekin ab unhone dekha ki kaise yeh samaj ko tukdo mein baant rahi hai.

Brahmin (purohit aur vidvaan) sabse upar, phir Kshatriya (yodha), Vaishya (vyapari), aur Shudra (mazdoor) the. In sabke neeche Dalit the, jinhe samaj ke bahar maana jaata tha aur jo atyachaar ke shikar hote the.

Vijay apne daure mein Vishakhapatnam ke tatvarti gaon mein pahuche, jahan Nagappa us gaon ka pramukh tha. Yeh unka purane jeevan ka ek prasiddh South Indian port tha. Vijay ne socha, **"Yeh ek vyavsaayik port banane ke liye perfect hoga."**

Phir unhone machhuaaron ko dekha jo apne chhoti-si tuta-futa naav mein jeevan ke liye sangharsh karte the. Vijay ne poocha, **"Nagappa, bade jahaaz kyun nahi hain? Kya hum ek bade machhli pakadne wale jahaaz nahi bana sakte?"**

Nagappa ne kaapti awaaz mein jawab diya, **"Maharaj, hum bade jahaaz bana sakte hain, lekin bade jahaaz jo samundar mein jaate hain, kabhi wapas nahi aate. Humein lagta hai ki bade jahaazon par shaap hai."**

Vijay ne is afwah par vishwas nahi kiya, par logo ki chinta door karte hue kaha, **"Thik hai, hum Varun Devta ke liye ek vishal yagya karwayenge."**

Nagappa rahat ki saans lete hue Vijay ko dhanvaad diya.

Vijay jab Bengaluru aaye, toh apne pichhle jeevan ki yadein taza ho gayi. Unhone socha ki yahaan ki sthiti aur vyavastha samrajya ke naye rajdhani ke liye uchit hai. Bengaluru samast South India ke mukhya rajyo ke paas tha aur ek kendriya sthaan par tha, jo shaasan aur connectivity ke liye perfect tha.

Hampi ke mahatva ko samajhte hue bhi, Vijay ko laga ki Mughal rajyaon ke nazdeek hone ke karan yahaan rajdhani banana risky hoga.

Vijay ne vyapariyon, kalaakaron, aur shilpiyon se baat ki. Unhone sheher ki samriddhi dekhi, lekin gareebi aur amir logon ke beech ka antar unke dil ko chhoo gaya.

Unhone dekha ki Dharmik jeevan samriddh tha, par Islam aur Isai missionaries ke aane se kuchh samasyaayein ubhar rahi thi. Vijay ko dono dharmon se pareshani thi, kyunki unka maana tha ki yeh ek jaise hain – dono apne Bhagwan ko sabse shreshth maante hain, aur jo unka vishwas nahi karte, unhe baahar ka samajhte hain.

Hindus sabhi Bharatiyon ko apne log maante hain, jaise Sai Baba ko ek Sufi sant maankar sabhi poojte hain. Vijay ne socha ki yeh dharmik vyavastha ko sudharna hoga, lekin shanti se, bina kisi bal ka prayog kiye.

Vijay ne apne daure mein logon ke dukh-sukh ko samjha. Unhone aam logo ke saath bhojan kiya, adivasi samuday ke saath nacha, aur vriddh logo ki kahaniyan suni.

Mahine bhar ke is safar ke baad, Vijay Hampi wapas aaya, ek naye sankalp aur uddeshya ke saath.
 

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UPDATE –8 [ Sena ka punargathan ]

Vijay ko apne daure se wapas aaye kuch din ho gaye the, aur ab unki pehli prathmikta sena ke sudhar par thi. Unhe pata tha ki samrajya ko samriddh banane ke liye pehle uski suraksha ko mazboot karna zaroori hai. Ek subah, jab suraj ki roshni study room mein pad rahi thi, Vijay sena ke sudhar ke raste par soch rahe the.

“Vinod, Lokananda Senapathi ko bulao, mujhe unse baat karni hai,” Vijay ne apne butler se kaha. Vinod ne haan mein sir hilaaya aur turant jaake Senapathi ko bulane nikal gaya.

Thodi der baad, Lokananda Senapathi, ek saadharan kapdon mein, lekin garima se bhare, Vijay ke saamne aaye. Unhone shraddha se jhukkar kaha, “Aapka aayu lamba ho, Maharaj.”

“Lokananda Senapathi, mujhe sena mein sudhar karna hai,” Vijay ne bina kisi formal baat-cheet ke seedhe mudde ki baat ki. Lokananda ise sun kar zyada aashcharya nahi hue; unhe pata tha ki Maharaj ke irade mahan hain.

“Sena ki ab ki takat kya hai, Senapathi?” Vijay ne poocha.

“Prabhu, ab hamare paas 1 lakh senik hain, jo do divisions mein bante hain, har ek ek general ke adheen,” Senapathi ne jawab diya.

“Kitne zamindar aur raj gharane ke log sena mein hain?” Vijay ne agla sawal poocha.

Senapathi thoda chauk gaye, lekin turant bole, “Prabhu, sirf 10,500 noble households hain.”

Vijay ka chehra bigad gaya, “Itne kam kyon? Kya nobles ka sena mein koi bada prabhav nahi hai?”

Senapathi ne samjhaya, “Yeh sab aapke pita ke samay ke bade saaf-safai ke kaaran hua hai, Maharaj. Unhone sena mein bharti hone aur oonche pad par pahunchne ke liye qualifications ko badha diya tha, jiski wajah se kai aalsi nobles sena se nikal diye gaye the.”

“Main iske baare mein kyon nahi jaanta? Koi virodh nahi hua?” Vijay ne fir poocha.

“Virodh kaafi kam tha, Prabhu. Aapke pita ne kuch grains ke taxation rights nobles ko de diye the, jisse is parivartan ko asaan banaya gaya. Kahi log apne jeevan ki chinta ke kaaran is parivartan ko maan gaye. Ab sirf yogya log hi sena mein bache hain.”

Yeh sun kar Vijay ne man hi man apne pita ko salute kiya. Kabhi-kabhi unhe lagta tha ki unke pita bhi unki tarah punarjanm le kar aaye hain, kyunki unke vichar ek jaise lagte hain. Lekin woh tasalli karte hain ki aisa nahi hai, kyunki is samay koi badi advancement nahi hui thi; unka dhyan sirf zaruri reforms par tha.

“Thik hai, Senapathi. Mujhe ek naye reform plan ka draft tayar karna hai. Mera focus ek disciplined aur high-quality sena banane par hoga,” Vijay ne kaha. Unhone aage bola, “Mujhe ek aisi sena chahiye jo 1 lakh hone ke baawjood 5 lakh ki sena ka samna kar sake. Har senik ke liye general banne ka chance ho aur ek aisi sena jo zarurat pade to aag se bhi guzar jaye.”

Senapathi Vijay ke junoon se prabhavit ho gaye. “Mujh par chhod dijiye, Maharaj,” unhone utsah ke saath jawab diya. Vijay ne unki peeth thapthapate hue kaha, “Mujhe tum par bharosa hai, purane general. Apna best do.”

Tabhi Vijay achanak neeche gir gaye. Chaukate hue, Senapathi ne unhe uthane ki koshish ki, darte hue bola, “Maharaj! Maharaj!”

Vijay ne haath hila kar aswasan diya, “Koi baat nahi, Senapathi. Main bas kaam ki thakan se gir gaya hoon.”

Senapathi ne rahat ki saans lete hue mahal se bahar jaakar apne kaam ki shuruaat kar di.

Mahal mein:

“Itna sab kuch ek saath karna mushkil hai,” Vijay ne apne aap se kaha, ek halki muskaan ke saath. Unhone 18th century ke military knowledge ko Senapathi ke saath share kiya tha, jo unke andar ki saari urja le gaya tha. Fir bhi, unki aankhon mein ek chamak thi, ek aise sena ke sapne ke liye jo apne samay se 100 saal aage ho.

Senapathi ka POV:

Senapathi ghar wapas aaye to unka chehra khushi se chamak raha tha, jaise unhe kisi ne chicken blood inject kar diya ho. Tabhi ek sevak jo bade gunny bags le ja raha tha, unse takra gaya.

Sevak thande paseene mein tha, sochta hua ki ab unhe daant ya maar padne wali hai. Lekin chhote hue, unhone sirf suna, “Agle baar dhyan se chalna.”

Poore mahal ke sevak choonk gaye. “Yeh Senapathi hain ya koi aur?”

Senapathi ne ek parchment utha kar planning shuru karne ki koshish ki, lekin jaisi hi kalam rakhi, unki muskaan chali gayi. “100,000 ki sena kaise 500,000 ko hara sakti hai? Uniform aur high-quality sena ka kya matlab hai?” yeh soch-soch kar unka dimag kharab hone laga.

Tabhi ek sevak chai lekar aaya. Gusse mein Senapathi chilaye, “Kisne andar aane ko bola? Bahar jao!”

Raat ko, unhe sapna aaya. Ek aisi sena jo discipline, professionalism aur unity ka example ho. Subah hote hi, Senapathi ne maatha thoka aur bola, “Shiva, shukriya!” Aur turant apne study mein kaam karne chale gaye.
 
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Dosto sorry ke mujhe ye story beech mei hi rokni pad gayi thi mai ise fir se continue karne ki soch raha hu
 
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