Update 1
Ek badbe se Mahal jaise dikhne Wale Ghar
Jaha rahna har kisi ki khwaish hota hai jgha jagh light flor pe sunder se sunder kalin(mat) bhicha hua Diwali pe mahngi se mangi penting jo ki is pure ghar ki ruank badha rahe the tabhi kisi kamre me kisis ki subake hi awaj AA Rahi Rahi thi Sssss
Ye koi or nahi tha ye tha iss ghar ke akela Malik jo dikhne me karib 22se 24 sal ka ye nawjawan uwak tha or hamri kahani ka mukhya patr(hero) vikarm veer thakur jo ki kamre ek ek kone me ghutno ko more apna sar niche kiye roye Jaa raha tha Or kuch Barbara raha tha
Vikram: maine mara hai unhe inhi hatho se sara kshoor mera hai meri wajah se sab mare hai. Kaun kar liya maine uss kamine ki bato pe bharosa agr Maine uski bate nahi mani hoti to ajj sab jinda hote, unki jagah mujhe hona chahiye, main hi shrapit hu maine jaha jaha kadam rakha hai keval aur keval narsanhar hi hua hai sab meri galti hai mujhe to maar Jana chahiye.
Ki tabi use Jani pahchai kisi ki awaj ati hai
[App khud ko bekar me dosh de rahe hai boss apki jagah koi aur hota to oo bhi uske bato pe bharosa kar leta ye Samy abhi marne aur marne ka nahi balki unke sath rahne ka hai jo abhi sirf apke liye jinda hai]
Par ye kaya yaha pe to koi nahi tha fir ye awaj kisis hai or Kun hai jiske karn ye vikram ki akho me ansu the
To chaliye jaha se iss kahani ki shuruaat hoti hai waha se dikhte hai ki akira hua kaya tha
Ye kahni suru hoti hai ajj ke 4 saal pahle bihar ke ek chate se jila motihari ke ek gaw se vishwaspur se jaha ek parivar rahta hai ye yaha ke mul nivasi nahi the bus ye yaha pe Kam ki wajh se aye the Mumbai se jaha inke family ke anya sadasya rahte hai ya ye kahna thik hoga oo family hi nahi hai q ki jaisa unhone Kara tha oo to family kahlane layak to tha nahi ye bad me dekhnge pahle chale hai apne hero ke Ghar
Hero ke papa (veer thakur) age 45 to 47 dikne me fit : jinki wajh se ye yaha rah rahe hai veer thakur ek sarkari school me adhyaksh jis ki wajh se yaha vikram or uski family ko ana pada hai jo ki nursery se 8 Tak ke bachoo ko padhate haii aur fir uske baad oo ek coching padhate hai jis se ye ghar ka karcha nikalte hai aur apne pariwar ko palte hai
Saam ke 7 baj rahe the gahr ke darwaje pe ki ki dastak hoti hai
Jise kholne ke liye ek khubsurat si ladki jo ki dikne me 17 se 18 saal ki thi oo Jaa kar darwaja kholti hai or samne kahare saksk ko pair Chu kar parnam karti hai
Veer : jeete raho beta rhuhi mai tumse kini baar kaha hai ki hamre yaha pe ladkiya pair nahi chuti
Rhuhi : kaya papa ek beti apne papa se asirwad nahi le sakti hai pair Chu kar
Veer : acchaa baba chale abb andar bhi ane dogi ya fir bahr hi rakhna hai apne iss bapp ko
Rhuhi apne papa ko andar ane deti hai
Or apne papa se unka bag le kar wahi paas me legi ankal me tang deti hai
Rhuhi : papa app muh haat dhoiye mai Pani le kar atai hu
Veer : thik hai or tumhari maa or choti bahan kaha hai
Rhuhi: papa maa aur kirti pados me hi sumitra aunty ke pass Gaye hai unke Ghar pe Pooja thi iss liye
Chalo thik hai oo janab kaha hai ajj bhi apne awara dosto ke saath bahar Gaya hai kaya ane do use use to mai batata hu
Tabhi piche se darwaza se sawrna ati hai
Sawrna age 40 year dinkne me madhayam size ki mahila jo ki bahut hi khubsurat thi
Sawrna: ate hai ho Gaye mere jigar ke tukade ke bare me bolna kaya oo kuch Samay apne dosto ke sath ghume bhi nahi Jaa sakta kaya
Veer : tumhari wajah se oo bigad raha hai oo,muje suna raha ho naa ajj kal school jata hai naa hi ghar pe usko padhte dekhta hu mai
Sawrna:Padh lega na abhi uski Umar hi kaya hai
Veer: kahti raho or apne sar pe chadha ke rakho jub Puri tarh se bigad jayega tab pata chalega tume
Sawrna : aacha thik hai mai usko samjati hu ane do acha ye lo parshad lo
Veer : abhi aa rha hu haat muh dho kar
Veer chala jata hai
Sawrna: rhuhi tumhe kaha tha na ki apne bahi ke school aate hi use mere pass bej Dena
Rhuhi: maa maine to use kaha tha par meri oo sunta hai kaha hai
Sawrna: aacha ane do use mai dekhti hu
Tumne ke khana bana liya ki nahi
Rhuhi : abhi Jaa Rahi thi to papa aa Gaye Jaa Rahi hu banae
Sawrna:achaa chalo mai bhi ati hu tumhari madad ke liye
Sawrna : Kirti chalo jawo aur haat muh dho kar padhai Karo
Kirti :ji maa
Sawrna or rhuhi chale jate hai Kahan banane or kirti chali jati hai apne kamre me wahi veer hall me baith kar tv par news dekhne lagtha hai karib 20 min bad Vikram ghar ata hai
Vikram hero age 17 se 18 saal iski or rhuhi ki age same hai q ki ye done dizygotic twins(judwa) hai dikhe ne hatha kahta jawan ladka jo ek bar kisis ko maar de to uth naa paye dubara
Vikram dkhta hai ki uske papa sofe pe baith kar tv dekh rahe hai to ahista se bacha ke Jane lagta hai apne karme
Tabhi
Veer : aa Gaye janab abb bolo kaha Gaye the
Vikram: papa oo mai mai dost ke pass padhne Gaya tha
Veer : to phir batawo kaya kaya padha or tumhare paas to koi book bhi najar nahi AA Rahi hai na copy
Tabhi sawrna kitchen se ati hai tu agya tuje to ajjj batati ti hu mai kaha Gaya tha Jaa kar muh hath dho le or dinar pe aa Kaha ke use jaane ka isara deti hai
Vikram : abhi aya mammy papa (ajj to mom ne bacha liya nahi ajj to wat lagne wali thi ) or chala jata hai kamre ki tarf
Veer : dekho ajj bhi bacha liya or abhi to kah Rahi thi uski khabr lene ke liye
Sawrna : app bhi naa chahiye khane ka wakt ho gaya hai
Vikram sidha pane kamre me ja hi Raha tha ki tabhi uski Nazar kirti or rhuhi ke kamre parti hai jaha kirti padha Rahi thi
Vikram: are meri kiti kaya padh Rahi hai or ye tum din bahr bass padhti hi Rahi to kabhi bahr bhi ghumna chaiye
Kirti : bhiyaa app hi ghumo muje nahi ghumna hai or waise ye app meri dost Suman ko kaise jante maine to kabhi usse milwaya bhi nahi apko
Vikram : kun ... Suman ma... mai mai kisis Suman ko nahi janta (isko kaisa pata chala Suman or mere bare me )
Kirti: dekho mujse joot mat bolo
Vikram: mai koi jhoot nahi bol Raha hu or haa chal kar khana kaha le or mere phone mat chua kar
Kirti: haaa haa or mai Jaa hi Rahi thi app bhi chalo nahi to pata hai na ki didi apke bagair kahna nahi kahi hai
Vikram : haa mai ataa hu 5min me fresh ho kar
Vikram apne kamre me jata hai or drower se kapde naikal kar sidha bathroom me ghus jata hai fresh hone ke liye
Yaha sabhi uska kahne pe intejar kar rahe the ki abhi Tak nahi ayaa ye ladka to sawrna rhuhi ko use bulane ke liye bejti hai
Rhuhi jaisi ki gate khol kar andar jati hai waise hi vikarm bhi bathroom ka ghate khol kar ataa hai jise dekh rhuhi ki to ankhe khuli ki khuli rah jati hai q ki vikram sirf underwear me hi bathroom se bahar ata hai naa to koi tawl tah sath me na kuch jais hi dono ki najre apas me takrati hai waise hi vikram daud kar tawl lapeta hai
Vikram : ye kaya didi app bhi naa door knok kar ke to anaa chaiye Kam se Kam abb mai bada ho gaya hu
Rhuhi: dikh raha hai ki tu kitna bada hogaya hai or ajj kal body se jayada padhai pe dhyan de samja
Vikram : dii app bhi na chaliye mai ata hu
Rhuhi

baap re ye insan hai ya janwar maine kabhi gaur hi nahi Kiya )
Vikram: didi apne kuch kaha kaya
Rhuhi: na..nahi to Maine kaha kuch kaha or haa jaldi aa ham wait kar rahe hai
Kah kar rhuhi chali jati hai or whaha vikram sochne lagta hai ki ajj didi ko kaya hua aise ku bihave har Rahi thi kapde pahna kar chala jata hai niche
Veer : aaiye kab Tak bhuke rakhna hai hame khud to khaa kaha kar body bana Li hai
Vikram:
Sawrna: acha chalye abb aa Gaya abb khaiye bhi
Sabhi kahana kahate hai
Veer : vikram ye awara gardi chor do nahi to ek din bahut pachtwage samje
Vikram: jii papa
Veer : oo school roj q nahi ja rahe ho kal tumhare teacher ka massage ayaa tha
Vikram : jii papa
Veer : ye kaya jii papa jii papa laga raha hai
Vikram: ji papa
Tabhi rhuhi vikarm ke pair pe chuti karti hai
Vikram harbara ke
Vikram : ha haa papa apne kuch kaha kaya
Veer : kaha hai tumare dhaya kab se kuch kah Raha hu sunai de draha hai ya nahi
Kirti : sayad bhaiya kisi ka sapna dekh rahe hai khuli akho se
Vikram ghoor kar kirti ko dekhta hai
Veer :sudhar jawo samje ki nahi
Sabhi kaha khatam kar ke kuch der aise hi bate karte hai idhar udhar ki
Uske bad sabhi sone ke liye sone chale jate hai
Vikram jaise hi upar jata hai kirti ke ka Baal pakad leta hai
Kirti: aaahaa ! Bhaiya choro Baal dukh Raha hai
Vikram : kaya bol Rahi thi niche tu sapna dekh Raha hu
Kirti:thik hi to bol Rahi thi sapna hi to dekh
rahe the fir (dhimee) awaj me Suman ka
Vikram : kaya kayaa kaha tumne
Tab tak kirti apna Baal chura kar apne karme chali jati hai or kamra band kar leti hai
Vikram : ruk tu subah me mil tu school me tuje to mai batata hu
Kah kar apne kamre chala jata hai or bistar pe let kar apna phone ke kar chat karne lagta hai
Vikram: hii kaisi ho
Kuch min baad udhar se reply ata hai
:thik hu aap kaise hai ajj school nahi aye the
Vikram: mai thik hu or kuch kaam tha to school nahi aa paya tha suman
Suman : par kriti to kah Rahi thi ki aap school aye the to mujse jhoot bol rahe ho app
Vikram: (iss kriti ka kuch karna padega ) haa oo mai aya tha but mai fir school fan kar bahr dosto ke sath chala Gaya tha ghoomne
Suman:ye aap kaya kah rahe hai Maine kaha tha na ki us Ravi or Nilesh ka sath chor dijiye oo ache ladke nahi hai
Vikram: are yar tum bhi na choro uki bate or ye batawo ki kriti ko kaise pata chala hamre bare me
Suman: oo usne subha mere se phone manga tha to Maine use de Diya tha sayad usse use pata chal Gaya ho
Vikram : Maine kaha tha na ki chat ko lok kar Dena ya fir delete kar Dena chat karne ke baad
Suman :acha galti ho gai sorry maaf kar do please
Vikram :aise kaise maaf kar du
Suman: achaa thik hai ye lo
Tabhi gate khool kar rhuhi sidha kamre me gusti hai Or Vikram ke haat ke phone chhin leti hai tabhi massage notification ata hai
Suman : uuuumah uuuumah


Jise rhuhi dekh leti hai
Isis bhich Vikram phone chhin leta hai
Rhuhi : Kun hai kun hai ye mujhe phone de muje dekhna hai kisse baat kar rahe the
Vikram: k k kkoi nahi nahi hai or Maine kaha tha na didi ki knock kar ke aya Karo kamre me or phone lock kar deta hai
Rhuhi Bina kuch kahe uth ke Jane lagti hi maausa sa chehara le kar ke
Vikram jise dekh kar duki ho jata hai or rhuhi ka haat pakd leta hai
Rhuhi

: choro vikram muje or I am sorry age se tumhare kamre me knock kar ke aaya karungi
Vikram: aacha sorry muje maaf kar do didi mujse galti ho gai lo kaan pakdta hu
Rhuhi: choro muje muje sone Jana hai nind AA Rahi hai
Vikram: sorry sorry didi apne vikram ko maaf nahi karogi achaa aap ko nind AA Rahi hai to yahi mere sath so jaao
Rhuhi : ek shart pe maaf karungi uska naam bato jisse tum baat kar rahe the
Vikram: didi that's don't fair
Rhuhi : thik hai muje choro mai Jaa Rahi hu Karo usse se baat muje kaya kunsa tum mujhe payar karte ho bus mai hi hu jo tumhari har cheez ki cinta karti hu
Vikram : didi that's don't fair aap emotional kar ke mujse sub kuch pata kar leti ho
Achaa thik hai Suman naam hai uska
Rhuhi: oohh to iss liye body bana rahe ho or Suman se to mai kal school me baat karti hu
Vikram: Aisa kuch nahi hai didi we are just friends or saam ke liya sorry aap achanak hi aa gai muje pata hi nahi chal
Rhuhi : it's ok or koi friend kisi ko kiss nahi deti hai mai murkh nahi huu
Vikram : Aisa kuch nahi dii bus we are just friends
Rhuhi: Thik hai to fir muje bhi ek kiss di mai bhi to tumari didi Kam friend hi hu
Vikram: kaya didi aap bhi majak kar Rahi hai
Rhuhi : i am serious
Vikram : kayaaaaaaa!
Rhuhi : kaya kaya achaa thik hai mai majak
Kar Rahi hai
Vikram: muje to laga aap sach me serious hai
Rhuhi:
Vikram: kaya hua didi app kuch soch Rahi hai
Rhuhi : nahi kuch nahi mai bol kar AA Rahi hu kriti ko ki ajj mai tere room me soungi
Vikram : thik hai
Kuch der bad rhuhi ati hai or vikram ke bed pe aa kar let jati hai or fir dono nind ki vadiyon me chale jate hai har roj ki tarah subah 4 baje vikram ki nind khuli or jub apne bagl me soo rahi rhuhi ko apne haath ke upar sar rakh kar soya hua dekhta hai or uske masum chehre ki mukskan ko dekh kar use bahut sakun sa mahsus hota hai oo ahista se apna haath rhuhi ke sar ke niche se nikata hai or uski jagh pe takiya (cusion) rakh kar chala jata hai fresh hone fresh ho kar oo sidha ghar se nikal kar runing ke liye cala jata hai or karib 6 baje ghar ata hai or tiyar ho kar school ke liye nikalne hi wala hota hai ki rhuhi use apna bag le kar school Jane ke liye kahti hai to vikram ha me sar hila kar ke uska bag le Kar chal deta hai school ke liye uske Jane ke baad kuch samay bad rhuhi or kirti bhi school ke li apne cycle pe Cali jati hai
Vikram school gate ke pass pahucha hi tha ki piche se use raj or pranjal use awaj dete hai
Raj : or bahi kaya hal hai or ye tu kab se kooli ban Gaya
Vikram : badhya bahi chal class me chalte hai or ye bag didi ka hai unhone kaha tha le kar ane ke liye to le aya
Raj or pranjal: ha chal nahi to mis fir se bolungi
Vikram rhuhi ka bag uske class me rakh kar apne classe chala jata hai
Vikram or rhuhi deno ke paas ek hi subject tha but uske pass ek exta subject bio tha iss liye oo dusre class me baithti thi
Vikram Raj or pranjal muj Masti karte huye class me guste hai or Jaa kar last desk pe ja kar baith kar bate karne lagte hai itne me unki class teacher vidiya ma'am enter karti hai
Vidiya : good morning everyone and sit down
Sabhi baith jate hai
Vidiya : all the students today I have a bad news for those students who don't do there homework kal ptm hai or sabhi ko apne parents ke sath ana hai
And specially Vikram tumhare parents muje jarur chahiye kal na to tum rooj school ate ho or na hi homework karte ho or school bhi ate ho to din bahr bate karte rahte ho sari teacher tumahari complent karti hai abhi bhi mauka hai sudhar jawo last year hai school ka or board bhi hai
Vikram :
Vidiya : it's that clear
Vikram: ok ma'am
Uske baad class hoti hai or rescues voa time hota hai vikarm lunch karne le liye apni didi rhuhi se luch box lene jata hai
Luch kar Ne ke baad tino apas me baat karne lagte hai
Vikram : yaar meri to waat lag gai agr mai papa ko le kar aya to muje to Ghar pe bahut sunya jayega
Raj : mera bhi wali hal hai
Pranjal: are chor na dekh udar Sunan tuje dekh Rahi hai Vikram kahi tum dono ke beech kuchi hai to nahi na
Vikram : aisi bakwas bate maat Kara kar mere Ghar pe pata chal Gaya na to Ghar se bahr kar denge muje
Raj : jhoot mat bool muje sab pata hai tere or uske bare me chal time khaatm hone wala hai Or agla period math ka hai or suna hai koi or ayega padhane Rekha ma'am ke alawa
Vikram :chalo bacha Gaya ajj mai homework nahi Kiya tha math ka
Raj or pranjal : kayaaaa! Gaya bahi ajj tu to
Vikram :kun
Raj : q ki jo teacher aa aya hai oo male teacher hai or suna hai bahut strict hai commerce Wale section me 3-4 ladko ko bahut mara hai homework nahi karne pe
Vikram : bahi Dara q raha hai ek to waise hi kal ptm hai or tu or Dara raha hai
Uske baad sub class me jate hai to math ke new teacher ( ramakant sir) kuch der baad ate hai or aa kal sub ko apna introduction dete hai or sabhi se introduction lete hai
Ramakant sir: jin students ne ajj ka homework nahi Kiya hai oo kahre ho Jaye apne seats pe sabhi ko char kar ek vikram hi tah jo khara tha baki sabhi baite huye the
Vikram : (sala kaisa din ja Raha hai ajj ka kal ptm ki khabr or ajj new teacher ke samre first impression hi bad impression ban Gaya )
Ramakant sir: to tum ho iss class ke sabse harami bache jiski charcha pure teacher karte hai
Vikram: nahi sir sorry sir oo mai ajj copy Lana bhul Gaya
Ramakant sir : Kam se Kam bahana to sahi banaya Karo or ajj mere first and last warning hai Puri class ko agr tumne mere subject ka homework or padahi me koi bhi sikayat Hui to mujse bura koi nahi hoga
Or Mr. Vikram ye mera tumhare liye last warning hai nahi to commerce Wale section se mere bare me puch lene sabhi bacho se mere bare me sit down or kal se homework kar ke le kar ana
Sabhi class lete hai or aise hi chuti ka Samy ho jata hai jub oo class se nikal raha tha to use rhuhi or suman or kirti baat karte huye najar AA Rahi thi
Vikram jaldi se school se nikal jata tha q ki agr use rhuhi dekhti to jarur bulati Suman ke samne ooo school se nikal kar sidha ghar ki tarf chalne lagta hai raj or pranjal ko bey bol kar
Ghar pahuncte hi khana kaha kar ke sambse baphle to oo apna ajj ka homework karta hai or fir uske baad haat muh dho kar ke haal me chal ajata hai jata pe use uske papa tv dekhte huye milte hai
Veer : to ajj bahr ghomne nahi Gaye kaya
Vikram:
Sawrna : kaya app bhi hamesa taana marte rahte ho
Vikram: oo papa kal apko school chalna hai oo kal ptm hai
Veer: oo to issliye ajj janab ghar pe padh rahe the
Vikram : nahi papa oo bus exam ane wale hai or board hai to padhai pe dhyan to Dena hi hoga Naa
Veer : thik hai
Uske baad sub khana kahte hai or apne apne kamre me sone chale jate hai
Vikram Suman ko massage kart hai
Vikram : hii Suman kaisi ho
Kuch der baad Suman ka reply ata hai
Suman : Thik hu
Vikram : didi se kaya baat ho Rahi thi School me
Suman :kuch nahi bus aise hai app kaise hai
Vikram :haa mai thik hu
Aise hi do char min abte karne ke baad Vikram so jata hai roj ki tarah subah uth kar vikram fresh ho kar runing ke liye nikal jata hai ghar aa kar nasta kar kar school ke liye ready ho jata hai or apne bahan or papa ke saath school ke liye taiyar ho jata hai q ki ajj ptm tha tha uske school me to sub saath hi school Gaye
School pahunchane ke baad Vikram sidha uske class me chala jata hai or uski uske papa uske bahno ke saath unke class me chale jate hai teacher me Milne ke liye
Kuch der baad uske papa or uski class teacher vidiya ma'am ke sath baith kar bate karne lagte hai
Vidiya : i am sorry to say but your son is only one student who don't do homework not coming school regularly not much serious about his Owen carrier always mis behave with other children in class
Veer : soory Maan age se Aisa nahi hoga
Vidiya : soory se kaya ho sir kuch samjaye iske board najdik hai pata nahi kaise paas hoga ye
Veer : mai ghar pe baat karta hu isise
Vidiya : apki done beti class me top karti hai or ek ye hai Jo muskil se pass hote hi Kam se Kam app apne beti hi kah Diya Karo isse pane saath me baitha kar pahdye
Kul mila kar iss 15 -20 min ke meating ke Vikram ki Gand mari jati hai or uske baad oo apne papa ke sath ghar aaa jata hai
Ghar ate hi veer guse me swarna pe chilane lagta hai
Veer : ajj ke baad iska bahr Jana band ye sirf school jayeg or Ghar pe aa kar padhi karega
Sawrna : kaya hua app itne gusse me q hai
Veer : pucho inse kaya hu or isme tumhari gati hai or chado apne sar pe isi wajah se ajj iske class teacher ke samne itni beijjati mahsus ho rahi thi ki poochho mat
Vikram:
Swarna:
Veer : rhuhi ajj se tum ise apne saath hi padhana hai or school me bhi sath me ana Jana hai samji
Rhuhi: ji papa
Veer

r tum bhi sun lo agr muje abb kahi se bhi sikayat ayi to samj Lena tum
Vikram:
Rhuhi : khada q hai chal room me chal kar padh ( rhuhi usi waha se daat kar apne room me Jana ka isara karti hai )
Veer: or rhuhi tum bhi sun lo agr kuch bhi tumahari tarf se laprwahi Hui dekh Lena tum
Rhuhi : ji papa mai dhyana rakhungi uska
Uske baad rhuhi sidha Vikram ke kamre me jati hai jaha pe vikram apne study table par baita hua tha.
Rhuhi : mai tumse baar baar kahti kai tu nahi samjte ho ye sab chor kar padhi pe dhyan
do dekha ajj tumahari wajah se papa kitna gusa the or tumari wajah se mummy ko bhi daat bad gai
Vikram bus mon raha
Rhuhi: chalo chal kar khana kahaa lo haat mooh dhor kar niche awo jaldi
Vikram :muje bhookh nahi hai app Jaa kar khana kha lijiye or mom ko soory bol Dena
Rhuhi : ye kaya baat Hui bahla jaldi se awo muje kuch nahi sunna hai
Uske baad rhuhi chali jati hai or vikram waise. hi baitha rah Update 1