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Fantasy VIKRANT.....The Vampire Killer (Mystery, Magic, Horror, Erotic, Suspense)
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एक नई कहानी शुरू करने के लिए,,,,,बेहतरीन कहानी लिखिए और छा जाइये भाई,,,,,
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Yeh Kahani ek kalpanic hai aur iska kisi Satya ghatna ya patra se koi wasta nahi, agar huva to woh ek sanjog hai.....
Update 1
GHANE JUNGLE ME
Update 1
GHANE JUNGLE ME
Ek badi si khai ke pass ....ek purane lakdi ke ghar se raat ke sanate mein achanak ek awaz aati hai....jaldi niklo yaha se woh Chaat se andar aa raha hai...usne Humko yaha dekhliya hai....achanak Ghar ka darwaza khulta hai aur 2 log ek bache ke saath gadi ki taraf daudte hai...
Raj-yeh lo Vicky ko aur jaldi se gadi me baith jao...
Reena- Vicky daro mat beta tumhe kuch nahi hoga...
Reena apne 6 saal ke bete ko kandho par uthati hai aur gadi ka darwaza khol Kar andar baith jati hai.....Raj turant chaavi lagake gadi start karta hai.... Par gadi start nahi hoti ..... Woh phir se koshish karta hai....lekin gadi start nahi hoti....Tabhi ek zor se awaz aati hai aur Ghar ka darwaza tut jata hai... Raj aur Reena chauk jate hai...ek Kale kapde se Dhaka 10feet uncha ek shaitan darwaza todkar bahar aata hai...woh shaitan gadi ki taraf dekhta hai aur zor se chikhtah hai....Vicky uski awaz sunkar darr ne lagta hai....Reena ghabrate have kehti hai Raj jaldi start karo woh aagaya hai...Raj zor se koshish karta hai lekin gadi start nahi hoti...woh shaitan gadi ke nazdik pochta hai aur gadi ke darwaze ko kichta hai...aur darwaza gadi se alag ho jata hai...Reena darr ke mare Vicky ko pakadleti hai...woh shaitan Raj ki Taraf dekta hai... Raj uski Lal khoon jaisi ankhon ko dekhta hai aur Apni jeb see bandook nikalkar goli chalane lagta hai...woh shaitan do kadam piche hatjata hai...par goliyon ka koi asar nahi hota...woh wapas chilata hai....aur Reena ki aur badhta hai....
Achanak Tabhi....ek dusri gadi zor se aati hai aur shaitan ko Dhaka deti huvi ghasitkar Kar leti huvi khai ke kinare pe ruk jati hai...Raj aur Reena gadi se bahar nikalte hai....us dusri gadi mein se Raj ke Papa bahar aate hai....sabh khai mein dekten hai par woh shaitan kahin Nazar nahi aata...Raj apne Papa ko dekhkar kush hojata hai...aapto yahan nahi anewale the toh aap yahan Kya Kar rahe hai..
Papa-Bus aap logon ko surprise Dene aaya tha khas Kar Vicky ko par yeh toh Ulta mein hi surprise ho Gaya....yeh itna lambasa kale kapdon mein rakshash kaun tha beta...
Reena- woh ek Pisaach tha, aur woh abhi bhi zinda hai, Hume yaha se turant nikalna chahiye...Raj - sahi Kaha, Papa aap gadi ki chabi dijyeh aur sab ko gadi mein baithneko kehta hai...Raj apni gadi mein se ek kala bag nikalta hai aur apne papa ki gadi me baith jata hai.... Vicky ghabraya huva apne dadaji ko dekhkar unke pass Chala jata hai... Dadaji...kuch nahi hoga daro mat beta...
Reena -vicky us shaitan ko dekhar dar Gaya hai....
Raj gadi ghumakar raste ki taraf badhta hai...khai ka Rasta sunsan jungle ke bich me se bahar shehar ki Taraf jata hai.... Reena- shukriya Papa aap waqt par aagaye... Raj- apne papako kala bag deta hai aur isko pehene ke liye kehta hai....papa ek vada kariye mujhse agar mujeh kuch bhi hota hai, toh aap Vicky ka khayal mujhse bhi jyada rakhenge...Papa- Raj aisi baatein mat karo tumhe kuch nahi hoga hum sab yaha se nikal jayenge surakshit...Daady- Par woh Pisaach yahan, tumhare piche kyun pada hai aur Kya chahata hai....Reena kuch nahi bolti aur Raj ki taraf dekhti hai...
Tabhi us Ghar ke pass khai mein se Ek bade nakhunowala haath upar aata hai aur phir dusra...woh shaitan Pisaach kinare pe se upar aata hai aur zor se dahadta hai....
Dusri taraf Reena ko andar se darr lag raha tha... woh yahan, is jungle se jald se jald nikalna chahati thi...Gadi tezi se andhere ko chirti huvi aage badh rahi thi.....
Reena- Raj ki taraf dekhti hai...Raj sabh samaj jata hai aur Reena se kehta hai ghabrane ki zarurat nahi sabh thik ho jayega....aaj nahi toh Kal mein is shaitan ko jarur rokunga...par ek baat Meri samaj me nahi aarahi us shaitan ko kaise patachala hum yahan par hai...achanak Reena kuch awaz sunti hai woh gadi ki khidki mein se dekhti hai use koi dikhai nahi deta...Raj gadi rok deta hai...
papa- Are beta gadi kyun rokdi.
Raj- samne Rasta bandh hai...aage pedh gira hai...
Papa- par mein jab aaya tab toh raste par koi ped nahi giratha....Reena yeh us shaitan ki chal hai....par usne yeh pedh giraya kaise......
Reena aur Raj gadi se utarte hai...woh dono us pedh ki taraf jate hai....Reena Raj sambhal Kar aage khatra ho sakta hai...reena bhi dhire dhire aage badhti hai... Reena pedh ka Kata tana dekhti hai aur Raj se kehti hai...yeh gira nahi is pedh ko giraya Gaya hai.... Tabhi wahan pe kisi ke pairon ki awaz aati hai....Raj- kaun hai wahan, achanak ek machine ki awaz aati hai zor se jaise koi kuch kaat raha hai....reena piche gadi ki taraf dekhti hai, gadi ki roshni mein use gadi ke upar ek pedh muda huva dikhta hai...woh samaj jati hai aur turant bhagti hai...aur chilati hai...papa bahar nikle gadi pe pedh girnewala hai....papaji Vicky ko apni gaud me lete hai, Reena gadi ka darwaza kholti hai aur teeno zameen pe late jate hai, pedh zor se gadi ke upar girta hai...aur gadi ko adhi kuchal deta hai...
pedh ka tana ekdum Reena ke seer se do inch ki duri par atak jata hai.....Raj gadi ke pass jata hai...Reena, Vicky aur Papa ko dekhta hai, woh teeno shurakshit hai...Raj ekdum se saans chodta hai aur bhagvan ka shukriya karta hai...phir woh jukar teeno ko bahar nikalta hai aur Vicky ko apne kandhe par utha leta hai...
Papa- Balbal bacche warna aaj toh maut hi thi....Raj- Reena Hume yaha par kisine fasaya hai...
Tabhi Reena ko phir se wahi pairo ki awaz aati hai , woh yaha waha dekhti hai par andhere mein kuch Nazar nahi aaraha tha, Raj Papa ke pass jakar unke bag me se ek torch nikalta hai aur dekhta hai ek forest guard hath me pedh katne ka machine liyeh unki taraf badh raha hai, Raj chauk jata hai, yeh yahan kaise aya...
Reena uski ankhon me dekhti hai, yeh us Pisaach ke vaash mein hai, isko zarur Pisaach ne humpar hamla karne se pehle Kata hoga....
Papa- toh Kya yeh zinda hai..
Reena-yeh ek Pisaach ban raha hai...par abhi Puri tarah se badla nahi hai....ek bar woh shaitan Pisaach kisi ko kaatle toh woh bhi Pisaach ban jata hai....
Woh forest officer pedh katne wali machine chalu karta hai aur unki taraf tez kadmo se badhta hai...Usi waqt papa Apni jeb se bandook nikal kar us forest officer ke sinepar goli marte hai, woh ruk jata hai par girta nahi....forest officer apna muh tedhakarke hasne lagta hai....aur unki taraf dekhta hai....
Papa- ispar toh koi asar nahi huva goli ka...
Raj- woh insan nahi raha dad, uske seer mein goli mare....
Woh forest officer wapas machine uthakar aur zor se aage badhta hai...papa dubara goli chalate hai...isbar uske seer ko nishana banakar....goli sidhi uske seer ke beechme lagti hai.... woh forest officer ghutnoke bal aage ki aur girjata hai...uska seer us machine par girta hai... Aur woh pedh katne wali machine uska gala cheerdeti hai aur uske gale se khoon behne lagta hai, Raj Vicky ki ankhon par se hath nahi hatata aur Vicky ghabrakar Raj ko kasskar pakad leta hai....
To be continued ...........
Toh friends please comment Kare agar galti huvi hai to bataye Taki
Next update mein woh repeat na ho...
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Nice bhai but aapne pishach or zombie ko mix ker diya, zombie ki mot sir p lagne se hoti h, lekin pishach ko marne k liye chandan , pipal ya bargad jese pavitra pedo ki lakdi se hi mara ja sakta h.