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Fantasy VIKRANT.....The Vampire Killer (Mystery, Magic, Horror, Erotic, Suspense)
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Bus thodi der me....next update....
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UPDATE 10
KAUN HAI YEH KIDNAPPER
Suzi M.K ko ambulance aur uske bete ke maut ke.... bare me batati hai....aur phir Rakaa ko kehti hai.....apne aadmiyon ko bol M.K ke.....ghar pe uske bete ki body leke pohache....uska message aaya hai ....aur Raka ko gadi M.K ke ghar ki taraf.....jane ke liye kehti hai....Rakaa phone karke....apne aadmiyon ko M.K ke....ghar pohachne ke liye kehta hai.....KAUN HAI YEH KIDNAPPER
Suzi- Rakaa....mujeh lagta hai....hume is mauke ka faydaa uthana chahiye....Yahi sahi waqt hai....mahan banneka.....
Rakaa- Suzi....mein kuch samja nahi....
Suzi- Rakaa ko ek....pyari kisss karti hai....aur kehti hai ab dekho me kya karti Hun....
Phir suzi striker....ko phone karti hai....yeh dekhkar....Rakaa chauk jata hai....iske pass striker ka no. Kaise aaya.... zaroor M.K ke mobile se churaya hoga.....
Suzi- Sir....me suzi bol Rahi hun....
Striker- kaun Suzi.....
Suzi- Sir....me M.K ke liye....kaam karti hun....
Striker- Teri himmat....kaise huvi mujeh phone karne ki....M.K kahan margaya hai....ab uske aadmiyon se....me baat karunga.....
Suzi- Sir....aap Ek baar Meri baat... suniye...aur agar faltoo lage toh maut ki saza....
Striker- Teri aakhri baat Bata....Kya bolna chahati hai....
Suzi- M.K ne aapko Nahi.... bataya par woh parcel wali ambulance....jalke khaak hogai hai....aur M.K ke bete ko....kisi ne kaat ke....mardala.....hai....
Striker- Aisi buri khabar...dene ke liye...toh saabse pehle...toh tuje marna chahiye.... Bhaad me Gaya...M.K aur uska beta....
Suzi- Sir... Puri baat toh sunye......
Striker- mujeh ye... Rona-dhona nahi...chahiye.....Meri izzat jayegi.... Agar delivery Nahi hogi.... tab me kisi ko zinda nahi chodunga....
Suzi- Sir....isliye Toh aapko.... phone Kiya hai....me aapko nayi delivery de sakti Hun....
Striker- Tu pakka Bata rahi hai ya.... dikhava Kar rahi hai ...
Suzi- me pakka bata rahi hun....aur kuch der me....photo...bhi bhej sakti hun.....par maine M.K ko Nahi bataya......
Striker-thik hai kaam....pura Kar....toh tuje Meri Seva...karne ka mauka milega.....
Suzi- kaam khatam samjoh...
Striker- or agar nahi....ho paya....toh samajana.... Tere zinda...tukde karke...apne kutton ko....khilanunga....
Phone cut hojati hai...
Rakaa- Suzi...Tu Kya pagal ho gai hai....maut ko....samne se nahi bulate.....hum vampires he lad sakte hai....par striker se ladna bewakufi hai......
Suzi- meri jaan....ladna kise hai....
Rakaa- toh naye ladke aur ladkiyan....kaha se milenge....
Suzi... hasti hai aur Rohan ko phone lagati hai....
Yahan dusri taraf.....Sonia ki Puri baatein....suneke baad.... Raj kuch soch me padjata hai....
Priya- Kya huva Sir...
Raj- oh...kuch nahi.....sonia....kya....tum aaram karna chahti ho.... ya aur kuch..... chahiye
Sonia- Nahi mein thik Hun....
Raj- Common Team... Board Lao....Mujeh tum saab ke sawal....board par chahiye....
Sonia- Sir....me aap se....kuch puchna... chahati hun.... vampires ke bare me.....
Raj- ok pucho....
Sonia- Yeh log vampires.... Kyu bante hai....
Raj- Yahan sab ko takkatwar....banna hai...... agar koi vampire kisi...insan ko Kate....aur zinda....chod de....toh woh...... vampire banjata hai..... kai...log.....mahan hone ke liye....vampires bante hai....Taki woh.... salon Saal zinda reh sake....
Sonia- koi vampire....achha Nahi ho sakta....
Raj- ho sakta hai...lekin vampires Bina....khoon piye...nahi reh sakte.....aur bhookha vampire....kisi par bhi hamla... Kar sakta hai....us waqt uski....acchayiyan bhi use rok nahi payegee...apno ko maar Kar khoon....peene se....
Aur Bure logon ke....bitch me rehna hai..... toh bura hi bana....padta hai.....
Raj- sonia....me janta Hun... tumhare Mann me....abhi kai sawal hai.....par is waqt...tum ne joh...bataya...uspar gaur karna.....zaruri hai.....
Tabhi Mohit Ek bada white board....Ek stand ke upar lagata....hai.....
Raj- Priya tum likhogi....saare sawal....joh bhi... hamari team kahegi.....ok....
Priya- ok sir....
Raj- Sonia ki....yeh club ki baatein sunkar.....Kya lagta hai....hume Kya karna chahiye.....
Sam- yeh Jawan aur khoobsurat...ladke aur ladkiyon ko bechte hai..... toh Hume sabse....pehle us Rohan jaise logon ko pakkadna hoga...
Raj- ok good....par aise toh Kai Rohan honge....aur yeh toh... Kai naye Rohan bana sakte hai.....
Shyam- Sir....yeh dhandha....chalane wale....aur kharidar vampires...ki channel todni hogi....
Raj- ok....
Sara- Sir...yeh sex ke saath- saath...in Jawan ladke ya ladki ke taze garam.... khoon se apni pyaas bujate hai.......aur takkat war bante hai.....toh Hume inki yeh takkat...todni hogi.....
Raj- yeh toh....humne kiya....
Sam- Sir....abtak....unko ambulance ke...bare me pata chal gaya...hoga...
Raj- Han....isliye....me soch Raha Hun....unka agla step....kya hoga...
Shyam- woh vampires....hume dhundenge....
Raj- common...shyam unhe haumare....bare me Nahi pata....unko ambulance ka...jalna Ek hadsaa lagega....
Priya- Toh woh....naya shikar karenge....
Raj- par naya shikar....asani se kaise....milega....oh shit....oh shit.... oh shit!!!! Yeh Maine.... pehle...kyun Nahi socha.....
Priya- Kya huva sir.....
Raj- hum log... Sonia ki do friends...joh hotel me hai....use bhul Gaye....woh dono....unka asan shikar hai.....
Sonia yeh sunkar....darr jati hai...
Raj- Sonia....tumhe apni friend ka no. Yaad hai....
Sonia- Nahi...
Raj- Hotel...me contact Karo....Priya...net se hotel ka no. Dhundho...aur room no...me baat karao sonia ki...fast fast...
Priya- yeh Raha...hotel... Sunrise ka no...
Priya no dial karti hai....lekin koi uthata Nahi....
Sonia- yeh 5 star hotel hai....24 hrs service hoti hai ... zaroor uthaenge....phir se try Karo....room no...309 me.. Kiran se contact karna...
Priya- ok...woh phir koshish karti hai....samne se phone Ek ladka... uthata hai....
Yes.... Sunrise hotel me aapka swagat hai....
Priya- me Prachi bol Rahi...Hun...Meri beti ki booking hai...room no 309 me...mujeh use baat karni hai....aap line transfer karenge....
Sunrise hotel Reception- madam hum...itni raat ko kisi...guest ko disturb nahi...Kar sakte.... sorry...aap mobile try kijye....
Priya- Are beta.... emergency hai.... hospital me Hun.... please...
Sunrise hotel Reception- Ok madam...Kya room no. Aur naam....
Priya- room no...309 aur naam.... Kiran...
Sunrise hotel Reception- par madam...miss Kiran aur unke saath miss Payal....abhi 5 min....pehle Yahan se...bahar Gaye...
Priya- Kya...kiske saath...kaun the....
Sunrise hotel Reception- Pata nahi....koi ladka tha....undono ka Friend lagraha tha....
Yeh sunkar.... Priya phone...cut karti hai....aur sabko... yeh baat batati hai....
Sonia- woh friend kaun hoga....sare toh Yahan hai... behosh....
Raj- Rohan....yeh Rohan ka kaam hai....... dammmmm it !!!!!!
Raj- Sonia Rohan kaha...rehta hai...koi address usne... bataya hai....
Sonia- Nahi...
Raj- common sam....tum aur Priya....club pe... nazar...rakho... Roy tum... Sonia ko leke hotel Jao aur... CCTV footage... check Karo... Rohan hi tha ya koi aur....mohit...shyam...aur Sara... tum saab.... Rohan ko dhundho... coffee shop ....ya jahan usne shopping karvai thi....har jagaah....
Priya- Rohan ki photo....
Raj- Roy tum hotel ki CCTV se... Rohan ya koi bhi ho ...uski Ek image Saab ko send Karo....go go go... common... Hume woh dono... ladkiyon ko bachana hai.....
Raj apne haath me mobile leke.... Beetel ka no dial karne ki koshish karta hai... agar Maine Beetel ko bulaya.... Toh use..... vikrant ke bare me...pata chal....jayega....
Lekin....is waqt....woh ladkiyon ko bachana...jyada important hai....Raj Beetel ko phone lagata hai....
Raj- Beetel ko....saari baat batata hai....sivay iske ki Sonia.... vikrant ki bahen hai....
Beetel- Sir....me Puri.... koshish karungi....par sir... aapko to pata hai....subah hote hi..... vampires...aisi jagaah par....chup jaate hai.....ki koi unhe dhundh nahi sakta.....ok sir....
Raj ekdum pareshan... hokar baitha tha....kareeb ek ghanta...ho Gaya tha..
Par koi....khabar nahi aayi..... Tabhi...Raj ka phone bajta hai....
Raj- bolo Priya.....
Priya- Yahan club...bandh hai....humne watchman ko paise khilakar pucha....toh usne kaha.... Malik ke bete ko aur....uske saathiyon ko kisine mar Diya hai.... isliye Club bandh hai.....aur sir is club ka Malik M.K hai....toh hum Wahan Jaye.... shayad kuch mile.....
Raj- Nahi....ghayal Sher....jyada khatarnak... ho sakta hai.....tum aur sam wapas aajao....
Kuch der baad....Roy aur Sonia aate hai.....
Roy- Sir.... Maine nakli... police ID batake.... CCTV footage le liya hai....woh Rohan hi tha.... Maine uski photos sabko bhej di hai....aur sir....hum sonia aur uske doston ka sara saman... lekar aagaye....
Raj- ok roy....Sonia... tumhare doston ko....hosh aagaya hai... Maine lab ko lock karke rakha hai....woh kabse chilarahe hai....tum Shanti se unko samjana....
Roy- Chalo Sonia....me tumhari help karta Hun.....
Sonia aur Roy lab me jate hai....par Raj ko woh do ladki ki fikar ho Rahi thi.... use.....pata tha....jitna zyada samay jayega.... utna hi un dono ka milna.... mushkil.....ho jayega....
Tabhi raj ka phone bajta hai..... phone pe Sam ka naam tha.... Raj speaker on karta hai....
Sam- Sir.... Priya kidnap ho gai hai....
Raj- Kya....kaise....
Sam- Sir...woh Roy ne Rohan ki photo.... bheji thi.... Hum wapas aa rahe the..... Toh Maine waise hi kapdon me .... Ek ladke ko...dekha....toh Maine Priya ko gadi me....rukne ko kaha.....aur Me dekhne....gaya....kahin woh Rohan hai.....par woh koi aur tha....
jab me wapas aaya.....toh gadi bhi nahi thi na Priya..... Maine yahan wahan....bhaag ke dundha...par woh kahin nahin.....mill rahi hai....uska phone pe ring ja rahi hai....par woh utha nahi rahi.....
Raj- ek kam karo....tum wahi...dhunte raho.... main Roy se kehke....uska phone trace karta Hun....ok....
Phone cut hote hi.... Raj sochata hai.....yeh joh.....koi bhi hai.... vampires Nahi hai....kyunki unko...abtak hamari bhanak nahi lagi....toh yeh ab....kaun ho sakta hai.....
Raj Roy ko batata hai aur priya ka mobile....track karne ko kehta hai.... Roy computer se.... Priya ka mobile no. track.....karta hai....
Roy- Sir milgaya....yeh toh S.G Road pe bata Raha hai....mall me...
Raj- woh move ho Raha hai aage....ya wahin hai...
Roy- yeh wahin hai.....
Raj turant Sam ko call...lagata hai....
Raj- Sam....priya ka mobile track ho Gaya hai.....woh tumse 5 min duri par hai...S.G road pe...jaldi pohacho..... Wahan mall ke parking me....jao....
Sam turant wahan se...ricksha me baith ke....S.G road pe pohachta hai... Phir woh ricksha se utarkar...mall ke parking me jata hai....
Sam yaha Wahan dhundhta hai ... Tabhi use gadi... dikhti hai....woh gadi ke pass jata hai...gadi me koi nahi tha....sirf Priya ka mobile hai......
Sam- Sir gadi hai aur sirf....Priya ka mobile hai....par priya ka kuch pata Nahi....
Raj- tum dhundho....wahin pe....me.... tabtak kuch sochata Hun....
Raj ke phone rakhte hi.... Roy ka phone bajta hai....phone shyam ka tha....
Roy- bolo shyam.... Rohan ka kuch pata Chala....
Shyam- Rohan toh Nahi Mila...Par...
Roy- Par kya....shyam
Shyam- Roy se kehta hai....Sir....kahan he....Kab se unka phone busy...aaraha hai.... mujeh unse urgently baat karni hai....
Roy Raj ko phone.....dekar kehta hai....sir shyam ka phone hai....bohat tension me lag Raha hai....
Sir- bolo shyam....
Shyam- Sir.....Sara kidnap ho gai....
Raj- Kya.....
Yeh sunkar Raj ko jhatka....lagta hai...yeh kaun log hai...joh ek ek karke....sabko.... kidnap kar rahe hai....yeh ho kya raha hai.....
TO BE CONTINUED...............
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RAJIV SHAW
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Fantastic update
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