RAJIV SHAW
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Super updateUPDATE 3
PYARR KA AAKHRI KISSSS
Us khai ke pass.... pull ke beech me....Raj aur Reena dare hue khade the....pull ki bayi taraf....unke papa khade the.... aur dayi taraf woh shaitan khada tha.....
Kale kapdo me....usne apna sir Dhaka huva tha....Isliyeh us shaitan ka....chehera Nazar Nahi aaraha.....par chand ki chandani me....uski ankhen Nazar aarahi thi....joh gusse se Lal aur chamak rahi thi....
Woh shaitan.....cheekhkar....dono aur ki rassiyan zor se khichta hai....us shaitan ke kichne se aisa lag raha tha....jaise woh pull....joh jhuka huva tha..... woh ab upar us shaitan ki taraf....mud raha hai....
Papa samaj Nahi pa rahe the...yeh ruke huve hai....phir bhi yeh pull itna hill kyun raha hai....papa dhyan se....us chodh ke samne dekhte hai....unhe woh shaitan Nazar aata hai....use dekhte hi....papa sunn hojate hai...jaise unke upar koi bijli kadki ho....
Raj yeh pehle hi samaj jata hai....woh bacchne ke liye.... apna mobile chodh deta hai.....aur rassi ko kasskar....dono taraf se pakadta hai...par Reena darr se ghabra jati hai....woh Raj se lipat jati hai....
Reena apne dono haathon se....Raj ko kasskar pakkad leti hai....piche woh Vicky aur papa ke samne dekhti hai....
Raj- common Reena....yeh darrne ka waqt nahi hai.....
Par Reena darr ke mare....kuch samaj nahi paa rahi thi....ek taraf se khai me girne ka darr....aur dusri taraf woh shaitan ka darr....is wajah se uska dimag ghabra raha tha....
Woh shaitan.... ek jkatke se rassi ko dono taraf se chodh deta hai.... rassiyon ko chodte hi....woh pull niche ki taraf jhukta hai...jaise ki niche girnewala ho....rassiyon me khichav aata hai....aur ek zor ka jhatka aata hai.... Raj aur Reena apna balance kho dete hai....
Jhatke ke waqt....Reena apni ankhen bandh Kar leti hai....Raj aur Reena dono girte hai....Raj ne rassi pakdi huvi thi.....isliyeh woh ghutnoke ke Bal girta hai...aur sambhal jata hai....
Par Reena nahi sambhal pati..... aur peeth ke Bal girti hai......pull par takrane se lakdiyan tutjati hai...... aur Reena ka haath lakdi se chooth jata hai....aur woh khai ki aur sarakti hai....
Reena khai ki taraf girne hi wali hoti hai....usi waqt....Raj chalang lagata hai....aur Reena ke ek haath ko pakkad leta hai....Reena cheekhti hai....uski cheekh ki gunj khai ki gehrai mein gunjti hai....
Papa pull pe yeh dekhkar....andar se ghabra jate hai....aur Woh Mann hi Mann prathana karte hai....Vicky darr Kar rone lagta hai....papa ghutno ke Bal baithkar.....vicky ko apne sine se lagate hai.....
Reena Pull ke niche....latki huvi thi....reena niche dekhti hai.... khai ki ghehrai ke andhere ko dekhkar....reena aur ghabra jati hai....aur zor se sisakkne lagti hai.....
Raj apne pair turant....lakdi aur rassi ke beech me phasakar.....tight Kar deta hai....Taki woh Reena ke wazan se usko sambhal sake......
Raj- Reena daro mat....me tumhe kuch nahi honedunga....mujhpar bharosa rakho....me tumhe yaha se nikal lunga....
Raj ne ek haath se....Reena ki kalai pakdi huvi thi... Woh apna dusra haath aage badhata hai....aur use pakkad ne ko kehta hai....
Raj- common Reena....Mera haath pakodo.....
Reena koshish karti hai...par nahi pakkad pati....
raj- phire se koshish karo Reena....common Tum Kar sakti ho.....
Reena rone lagti hai....nahi ho payega mujse.....
Raj- Reena Tum haar nahi sakti....Vicky ke bare me socho.....uska Kya hoga tumhare Bina....dekho tumne agar....phir koshish nahi ki toh....humdono niche girenge.....
Reena Raj ki ankhon me....apne liye Pyaar dekhti hai....yeh pyaar dekhkar Reena ko thoda Josh aata hai....
Reena dusre haath se.... Raj ka haath pakkad ne ki koshish karti hai...par nahi Kar pati...woh phir se koshish karti hai....isbar kamyab hojati hai....Raj ab use upar khichta hai....
Upar khichte waqt....pull ki lakdi akkad ne lagti hai....aur rassi me khichav aata hai....yeh dekhkar papa ke dil me becheni hoti hai...
Papa- Raj ruko me aata Hun tumhari madad ke liye.....
Raj- Nahi dad.... aap wahi rahe.....apko Vicky ki kasam....aap yahan mat aana....
Papa ki zindgi me....Raj ke bacchpan ki kami ko.....Vicky ne pura Kiya hai....
Papa....Raj aur Reena ki madad ke liye.....wapas pull pe Jana chahate hai....par Vicky ko dekh Kar aage nahi baadhpa rahe the....
Raj apna pair.....lakdi aur rassi mein fasakar...ek dum zor se Reena ko khichta hai...Reena pull ke pass aati hi.... woh Raj ka ek haath chodkar...turant lakdi ka pull pakkad leti hai....
Raj- ab apne dusre haath se.... Reena ki qamar pakkad Kar....use upar chadhata hai....uske is dabav se....lakdiyan ek pal ke liye tedhi hojati hai....
Upar aate hi Reena...shaitan ke samne dekhti hai....woh shaitan ki Lal ankhein....jaise khoon ki pyaasi ho....andar hi andar use afsos hota hai.... woh sochti hai....ab thodi der me....yeh pull gir jayega....aur woh wapas niche gir jayegi....
Reena aur raj....us shaitan ki taraf dekhte hai...aisa lag raha tha Jaise....woh unko tadpa tadpakar.....maze le raha ho....woh shaitan wapas....rassi ke taraf haath badhata hai.....
Raj khade hone ki koshish karta hai....par uske dono pair atak jate hai....Reena ko bachate samay....khichav ke karan uske pair rassi aur lakdi ke beech mein faas gaye the...... woh apne pair khichta hai....par nikal nahi pata....raj Reena ke samne dekhta hai....
Reena- Raj koi fayda nahi koshish karne ka....woh shaitan Hume yaha se..... khade hokar jane nahi dega....Reena ke ankhon se asu nikal rahe the.....
Raj wahi lete apna sir pakkad leta hai....aur Mann hi Mann sochta hai....woh kisi tarah Kam se Kam Reena ko to bacha sake.....
Us taraf woh shaitan.... rassi khichkar apne kandho tak lata hai.... phir ek pair piche karta hai....aur phir khichta hai....isbar woh shaitan pull ko khichkar.... todh dena chahata hai....
Raj- kaash hum ....Vicky ko akhri bar dekh pate...yeh sunkar.....reena ke andar ek khalbalimachti hai......woh Rona bandhkarke yahawaha dekhti hai....jaise uski nazar kuch dhundh Rahi hai....
Raj- Kya dhund Rahi ho.....
Reena apni ankhe bandh karke.....Raj se lipat jati hai...woh Raj ki Taraf dekhti hai....aur Raj ke labon par ek kiss karti hai...
Reena raj ke Kano me kehti hai mujeh maaf kardena.....aur Raj ke sine pe baith jati hai....woh Raj ke dono haathon ko pakkadti hai......aur tuti lakdiyon ki jagah par.... latak rahi rassiyon ko khichkar.... Raj ke haathon ki kalai par kasske bandh deti hai....
Raj- yeh Kya Kar Rahi ho....
Reena koi jawab nahi deti aur....khadi hokar....usi rassi ko.....badi rassi se bandhdeti hai....
Raj- reena chodoh mujeh....pagal ho gai ho kya....
Raj Reena ko dekhkar chaukata hai.....uski ankhon me ansu nahi....balke chehre par halki si khusi thi.....
Raj uski yeh harkaton ko samaj nahi paa raha tha.....
Reena- Raj Tum zaroor Vicky ko dekh paoge....yeh ek patni ka vadaa hai apne pati se....woh yeh kehkar....Raj ki Jeb se bandook nikalti hai....woh ghumakar akhribar papa aur apne bete.....Vicky ko dekhti hai....
Ek pal ke liye....Reena Vicky ko dekhkar Khush hoti hai.....yeh sochkar ki woh safe hai....
Reena mudkar....pull ki rassi ki taraf nishanalagati hai...woh goli chalane ko hi thi....ke Reena ko achanak yeh ahsas hota hai...ki shaitan ne abtak rassi ko kyu nahi chodah....
Reena shaitan ke samne dekhti hai.....
Woh shaitan ek putle ki tarah....rassi pakkad Kar khada hota hai.....Reena samaj nahi paa rahi thi.... shaitan akhir kyu ruka huva hai......
Raj- Reena dekho aisa mat karo.....meri baat mano....goli mat chalana.... please Meri baat mano....
Abhi- bhi Reena rassi ki taraf nishana lagaye huve thi....woh andar hi andar soch rahi thi....woh Raj ko koi jawab nahi deti.....
Tabhi zor se aur Ek awaz aati hai....ruko reena....
Reena shaitan ki taraf dekhti hai....woh shaitan....Abhi bhi rassi ko khiche huve....putle ki tarah khada hai....
Raj bhi kuch samaj Nahi paya.....akhir ye kisne kaha.....
Tabhi us shaitan ke piche se ek saaya aage aata hai.....
TO BE CONTINUED.............
Khatarnak update haiUPDATE 4Raat ke us sanate mein..... Reena pull pe bandook taane….khadi thi….'Ruko Reena' yeh awaz sunke Reena chauk jati hai….akhir yeh kisne kaha….woh yaha waha nazar karti hai…..par use us shaitan ke alawa…..aur koi nazar nahi aa Raha tha....
KAALE BAG KA RAHASYA
Raj ka bhi yahi haal tha….woh bhi piche muh karke dekhta hai…yeh awaz kiski hai….tabhi ek saaya….us shaitan ek piche se aage aata hai…..aur pull ki taraf badhta hai…..
Jaise hi woh saaya aage aata hai....Reena aur Raj use gaur se dekhne lagte hai…..unhe pehle lagta hai…..yeh saaya koi shaitan to nahi…..par chand ki roshni mein…..woh dikhta hai….woh ek insan jaisa lag raha tha….. Reena sochti hai…..yeh kaun ho sakta hai….woh samaj nahi paa Rahi thi….
Woh aadmi pull pe chadhta hai….woh Reena aur Raj ki taraf aage badhta hai….jab woh aage badh raha tha….toh woh bina rassi ke sahare hi….chal raha tha….
Us shaitan ne woh pull….apne kandhe Tak khicha huva tha….is wajah se woh pull joh juka tha….woh sidha ho Gaya tha….aur niche ki lakdiyan ekdum tight ho gayi thi….
Aisa lag raha tha…..Jaise us pull par chalna asan ho Gaya tha….Aur us shaitan ne uske liye hi…..yeh pull khich ke rakha ho…..
Itna andaza lagate hi…. Raj yeh sochata hai….hey bhagwan…. itni musibat Kuch Kam thi…. Joh yeh nayi musibat aagai…....
Woh aadmi aage aata hai….woh kareeb 6.5ft ucha tha….aur usne Kale leather ( chamde) ki lambi poshak…..pehni thi….joh upar se….niche ghutno se bhi lambi thi…..
Uska chehra nahi dikhraha tha....kyunki usne Woh poshak….uske sir ke upar Tak pehna tha…..us shaitan ki tarah…woh sidha Reena ki aur…..aage badh raha tha….uske har ek kadamo ki aahat sunai de Rahi thi…..
Us aadmi ke piche bayi aur.....ek chamakta hathiyaar tha….jise yeh saaf pata chalta hai….ki yeh aadmi ladai me mahir hai….Us aadmi ke hav bhav se....pata chal Raha tha….. zaroor yeh us bade shaitan se bhi.....bada shaitan hai…..
Raj- Reena Mera pair nikalo….mujeh yeh kuch thik nahi lag raha…..yeh aadmi zaroor us shaitan ke saath hai….
Reena turant niche baithke.....Raj ka fassa pair nikalne ki koshish karti hai….pull ke khichne se.....rassi aur lakdiyan tight ho gai thi…. Reena pair nahi nikal pa Rahi thi…. Reena Raj ke haathon ki raasiyan khol deti hai…..
Woh aadmi thodi duri pe….jaha se lakdiyan tuti thi….wahi pe woh khada rehta hai….aur apne sir se kapda hatata hai…..
Us aadmi ke nazdik aate hi…. Reena khadi hoke uske samne bandook taann deti hai….
Uski ankhein neeli….aur uske lambe baal….uske kandhotak aate hai….use dekhkar aisa lagta hai…ki uski umra kuch 28 ya 30 saal ki hogi….
Woh aadmi Reena ko bandook taanne dekhkar….. hassne lagta hai….aur kehta hai….iska koi fayda nahi Reena…..inn goliyon ka mujhpar koi asar nahi hoga…..Reena phir bhi bandook nahi hatati….
Raj- Kaun ho tum aur Kya chahate ho….
Woh aadmi Raj se kehta hai….khud khadehone ki halat me nahi….aur mujse sawal Kar rahe ho….
Filhal Reena ko is waqt….apne kiye par afsos hota hai….par woh kuch nahi bol pati….woh us aadmi se wahi kehti hai….kaun ho tum….
Woh aadmi Reena ki taraf dekhta hai…. Mera naam Warlock hai….waise me ek vampire Hun.…aur tum log use toh mil chuke ho…..woh aadmi us shitan ki taraf ishara karta hai….woh Dreggo hai….
Reena ko yeh sunkar.....ekdum se ghussa aajata hai….uski ankhein…..ek khooni sherni ki tarah….ghusse se bhar jati hai….aur woh warlock se kehti hai….toh tumne hi is shaitan ko hamare piche bheja hai….akhir Kya chahate ho tum…..
Papa us chodh se sab dekh rahe the….woh sochte hai….yeh kaun hai….par unhe yeh andaza hojata hai….ki yeh us shaitan ke saath aaya hai….papa ke Mann me ab ek hi sawal bar bar aa raha tha…..akhir inloga ko Kya chahiye….joh woh Raj aur Reena ke piche pade hai….
Warlock-shant Reena shant…. Maine wahi lene aaya hun…..joh us Kale bag mein hai…..tum log isliyeh to zinda ho abtak…..waise me tum dono ko.....Kab se dekh Raha tha wahan se.…uffff Kya pyaar hai tum dono mein….tum dono ki tadapakar maza aa Raha tha…..
Reena ki yeh pyari Kissss…. Ummmmaaahhhh......Sach me….us waqt mujeh laga ki kaash tum mujeh…..kisss karti apne in rasiley honthon se…..
Yeh sunte hi Reena ko gussa aata hai....par uske bolne se pehle hi....Raj apna aaapa kho deta hai….aur woh zor se chilatah hai….kamine tujeh sharam nahi aati….kisi aur ki patni se aisi baat kar ke…..
Warlock Raj ki baat ko unsuna karta hai….uski nazre Reena ke honthon par tiki thi…..warlock- han toh mein Kaha tha…. tumhare honthon par…..hai na….
Reena koh bhi gussa aa raha tha…..par use warlock ki baatein ajeeb lag Rahi thi…. Reena ko yeh lagata hai ki warlock jaanbuchkar…..gussa dilane ki koshish kar Raha hai…..woh apni takkat se.....Hume darane ki koshish Kar Raha tha…..
Warlock- Raj ke samne dekhta hai aur kehta hai....Maine hi Dreggo ko tum dono ko…..zinda pakkad Kar lane ke liye bheja tha…..par bichme Tumhara baap aagaya…..aur tum log bachke bhaag nikle…..
Yeh sunte waqt Raj Reena ke samne dekhta hai….. Reena ka jo josh tha…..Kuch der pehle woh Jaise thanda pad Gaya tha…..aur Raj ki khud ki halat aisi thi…..joh thodi bohat ummeed thi….bachneki woh ummeed bhi ab tut chuki thi…..
Warlock- Mujeh Dreggo par tab bohat gussa aaya….par usne mujeh bataya ki….uske pyaade ne tum logon ko aage rok diya hai….. Maine socha Chalo.....jungle mein insan ka shikar karte hai….
Warlock- waise shukriya…..us bhediyeh par goli chalane ka….warna is sunnate mein…..tum logo ko dundhna mushkil hojata….jab hum yaha pohache….tum dono yeh pull cross Kar rahe the…. Dreggo ne turant hi Tum dono ko…..pull khichkar roka diya……
Jab yeh baatein chal Rahi thi…tab us pull ke chodh par....In Sab ke beech woh nanha 6 saal ka bacha....Vicky is jungle ke mahol me….bohot gabraya mehsus Kar Raha tha…..woh apne dada se puchta hai…. mummy aur Papa....waha kise baat Kar rahe hai…..woh yahan kyun nahi aarahe….mujeh yahan se Ghar jana hai….is andhere mein darr lag Raha hai……
Papa Vicky ke sir par haath pherte hai….daro mat beta….me hunna tumhare saath….papa mummy abhi aajayenge….aur phir hum Ghar chalenge.….yeh jhootha dilasa dete waqt….papa ke ankhon se ansu nikalte hai….woh Vicky ko apne sine se lagate hai…..
Vicky- dada mujeh pyaas lagi hai....
Yeh sunkar papa sochte hai...ab ise pani Kaha se du….. papa- ruko shayad bag mein ho….check karta hun….papa us bag ko kandhe se utarte hai…aur bag khol Kar dekhte hai…..are isme toh kapdon ke alawa Kuch nahi…..
Tabhi papa ko khyal aata hai…..Raj ne mujeh Vicky ka dhyan rakhne ka vadaa…..karte waqt yeh bag sambhal Ne ko Kaha tha……par is bag me toh.....Vicky ke kapdon ke alava Kuch nahi…..isme zaroor Kuch hona chahiye…..
Papa phir bag me…..haath dalkar dekhte hai…. Vicky ke kapdon ko check karte waqt….unhe koi kadak gaol jaisi…..cheez mehsus hoti hai….pehle unhe laga ki shayad…..yeh Vicky ka ball hai.…par jab Bahar nikalte hai toh…..woh chauk jate hai….
ek ball jaisi goal cheez chamakti huvi thi….Papa turant dusre haath se…..torch us ball ke upar dalte hai…..woh bilkul rubber se kehlne wale….ball ki size jitna….hota hai….
Vicky- Yeh to chaavi hai…..papa Vicky se puchte hai tumhe kaise pata….. vicky- papa jab mummy ko yeh chaavi dikha ke bol rahe the…..tab Maine sunna tha....
Papa us ball….joh koi dhatu ka hota hai …..ko gaur se dekhkar…..yeh chaavi Kaha se lag Rahi hai….papa us Ball ko hilate hai….use se koi awaz nahi aaati….us Ball ke bich me ek sui jitni jagah thi….papa us Ball ko beech me se khichte hai….par woh alag nahi hota….. phir woh ball ke….dono chodh pakkad kar…..beech me se ulti disha me ghumate hai……aur ek awaz aati hai khatak karke….aur woh dhatu ka ball….beech me se alag ho jata hai…..
Alag hote hi….papa ek hise ko bag me rakhte hai….aur dusre hise ko…..dhyan se dekhte hai….. uske upar…ek neele rang ka bhaag ubhar aata hai…. Papa sochte hai yeh kaise huva….woh neele rang ke bhaag ko dabate hai…..aur woh andar thas jata hai….
us aadhe dhatu ke ball me se….wapas awaz aati hai….aur nakhun barabar….char nokile chaku Bahar aate hai…..usme se ek papa…..ki ungli me dhaas jata hai…..aur papa ke haath se woh chaavi choot jati hai…..
Papa ke haath se khoon nikalta hai…..chaavi choot tehi…...woh Charo chaku wapas andar chale jate hai…..dhatu ka woh aadha ball pull pe Jake girta hai….
Us chaavi ki pull se takrane ki awaz…..aur khoon ki Mahek se…..warlock ki nazar pehle papa pe….phir us chamakti aadhi goal chaavi par....Jake ruk jati hai……
TO BE CONTINUED.............