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UPDATE 14(Vikrant...Priya aur sara.... Vikrant ki gadi me basement.....ki aur badh rahe the....
VIKRANT AUR RAJ AMNE SAMNE
Beetel bhi tezi se aage apni.... bike pe badh rahi thi....aur use baar baar.... Vikrant ka hi khayal aa Raha tha....
Vikrant ki baatein sunkar.....ab Beetel ke Mann me bhi....Kai sawal uth rahe the.....Beetel ko andar se... vishwas ho Raha tha.... Vikrant ne jho sawal uthaye hai.... Woh galat toh nahi hai....
Beetel soch rahi thi....agar Vikrant ne joh sawal kiye ....woh sahi hai....agar yeh sari reports galat hai....aur such much dr.jones.... mar chuke hai... Toh phir yeh reports....Kahan se nikal vaye.....
Beetel soch rahi thi....toh phir papa ne mujse jhooth kaha ki.....yeh reports unhe dr.jones ne diye....papa jhuth kyun bolenge.....aisi kaun si wajah thi......aur akhir kisne unko.... yeh reports diye honge.....
Ab sabse Pehle.... Beetel yeh jaana chahati thi.....us Empire State building me....akhir huva Kya tha....aur Surya zinda hai....aisa Vikrant kyun keh Raha hai.... Toh uske pass uska saboot Kya hai.....
Vikrant ko reh reh Kar.... Beetel ka khayal aa Raha tha......)
Vikrant- Priya Kya tumse Ek baat punchu.....(woh Beetel ke... bare me kuch puchna chahata tha....)
Priya- Beetel ke bare me agar hai....toh...please.....I am sorry....mujeh Abhi zinda rehna hai...
(aisa kehke woh Hasne lagti hai....yeh sunkar....vikrant bhi apna sawal badal deta hai.....)
Vikrant- Are nahi....me toh Sir ke bare me janna chahta tha....
Priya- Bola Kya Janna hai....tumhe....
Vikrant- Woh yeh team.... Vampire killers... kabse Chala rahe hai.....
Priya- Dekho Vikrant....Mujeh tumpe vishwas hai....par me Bina Sir ke ijazat ... tumhe team ke bare me nahi Bata sakti....... Baki tum unse Puch sakte ho....
Vikrant- Good.... achha laga yeh.... jhankar....is team ko....sir ke upar aur Sir ko is team par....kafi bharosa hai....
Priya- yakinan....Isliyeh hi Beetel....team ka hissa toh hai....par team se hamesha Durr rehti hai....Taki...koi uspar rok tok na Kar sake....
Vikrant- isliye hi woh.... basement se nahi nikli....tum Saab ki tarah......
Priya- waise Lagta hai...tumhe kafi chanbin ki hai...isliyeh tumh.... basement ka Rasta pata hai....
Vikrant- Han woh Sonia ne....jab msg Kiya tha.....sir ke phone se....uska signal Maine track Kiya tha....bus isliyeh pata hai....
(Priya Vikrant ko ishara karti hai....yahi shopping center ke...parking me Jana hai.....wahan shutter khulta hai....mohit Bahar aake dekhta hai.....pehle woh sochta hai.....yeh ice-Cream ki gadi.... Yahan kaise.... Tabhi Sara piche se....utarti hai...
Oh.....phir Mohit gadi ko.... andar Jane ka ishara karta hai....andar Jane ke baad....Mohit yahan wahan dekh ke confirm.... karta hai....aur phir andar jakar shutter....bandh karta hai....)
( Andar jakar.... Vikrant gadi rokta hai aur Priya aur Vikrant....gadi se Bahar aate hai.... Vikrant basement me... yahan wahan dekhkar...)
Vikrant- Priya se Kehta hai badi khufia.... jagah hai....Bahar se koi andaza nahi laga sakta....Sach much yeh sir ki hi soch ho sakti hai.....ab toh unse Milne ki ichha... aur badh rahi hai...
(Samne Sam aur Roy khade the.....Sam Roy se Kehta hai....yahi tirchi topiwala Vikrant hai.... Par Roy ki Nazar....sirf Priya par thi......woh anpne aap ko rok nahi..... Pata aur aage jake....Priya se kehta hai....)
Roy- Priya tum thik to ho.... tumhari kidnapping ka sunke....toh me ghabra hi Gaya tha.....us waqt....lekin jab Vikrant see sir ne baat ki....tab kuch rahat....mehsus huvi....
( Yeh dekh ke Saab chauk jate hai....Priya Roy ki is feeling ko dekh ke....shock ho jati hai...)
Priya- main toh thik hun.....par tum nahi lag rahe ho.....bhang toh nahi pee hai na....
( Roy ko ahsas Hota hai....ke usne Ek tarah se.....apni feelings Saab ke.....samne zahir Kar di hai.....woh sorry bol ke.....wahan se Chala jata hai....)
Vikrant- Priya apne boyfriend se is tarah.... Baat nahi karte....woh sirf tumhara halchal...Puch Raha tha....
Priya- yeh Saab ko tumhara hi virus laga hai.... Pehle Sara shuru.....ho gai....ab yeh Roy....patah nahi....aage kon hoga....aur Han....waise woh abtak Mera boyfriend nahi huva....
Sam Vikrant ke samne dekh ke.....
Sam- toh tum ho Vikrant....jisne Beetel ko jaal me fasaya......waise Ek baat toh maan Gaya...tumne apna challenge...akhir pura Kiya...
Beetel kabhi yahan.....nahi aati...koi bhi meeting me woh phone....se hi judti hai......par Aaj pehli bar....woh yahan aayi hai.....Maine use itna confuse....Pehle kabhi nahi dekha....aisa akhir Kya Kiya tumne....
Sara- Vikrant ne use....Prapose Kiya....
Sam- Kya Kiya....
Priya- Sam....tum Jane do....Sara pagal ho gai hai.....yeh batao sir Kahan hai....
Sam- woh andar hai.... Beetel se baat Kar rahe hai.....
Vikrant- toh chale....Sir ke pass...mujeh unse milna hai....
Sam- Chalo istaraf.....
( Lab me Beetel aur Raj....baat Kar rahe the.... Beetel ne Rock tower ki....sari baat Raj ko bataadi thi..... Vikrant ke lab me aate hi.... Raj Vikrant ki taraf....dekhta hai....aur Vikrant....Raj ki taraf....Ek dusre ki ankhen...takrati hai....
Vikrant ko aate dekh... Raj ke andar ek ajeebsa apna pan.... mehsus Hota hai.... Vikrant Raj ko dekhta hai....phir uski nazar Raj ki wheel chair par....padti hai....yeh dekh ke.... Vikrant chakit hojata hai....)
Raj- Vikrant ke samne....haath badhakar.... aao Vikrant....
(Raj Vikrant se....haath milakar.... Ek dum thum jata hai...woh sochta hai.... Mera Vicky.... Bada Hoke bilkul Vikrant ki.....tarah dikhta.....
Sabhi ki Nazar Raj par thi....sabhi ko lag Raha tha...kya sir Vikrant ko Pehle se jante hai....tabhi Raj apni feelings ko.... control karke.... Vikrant se Kehta hai.... )
Raj- tumhare chehre par ka tej.... bilkur tumhare naam ki.... tarah hai.... Aur jaisa Beetel ne....bataya....tum kaam bhi waisa hi karte ho....
(Beetel ko Raj ki...prashansha... aachi nahi lagti....)
Vikrant- Sir lekin...Mujeh yeh bilkul bhi andaza.... nahi tha....ki Koi wheel chair.... par baith ke.... Aisi team ko Chala sakta hai....
Mujeh aap par garv hai....Sach much Aap ki himmat aur aap ki yeh team ki.....joh takkat hai.....uski jeetni bhi tarrif karu....woh Kam hai....kyunki aap....Aise Dushman se lad rahe hai....jise Abhi bhi....duniya beh khabar hai....
Raj- Lekin tumhe Vampires....ke bare me...... Mere video ke send kar ne ke.... Pehle se khabar thi...kyun.....sahi Kahan....
Vikrant- sahi kaha....Sir Mujeh Vampires ke bare me....Pehle se pata tha....
Sam- Sir aapko kaise...pata Chala ki Vikrant Vampires ke....bare me janta hai....
Raj- Sam tumhe yaad hai....humne Sonia ko ya kisi ko bhi..... Vampires ki clip dikhai .... tab kisine bhi...humpe pura yakin nahi Kiya..... lekin Vikrant ne clip dekhte hi.... Bina koi sawal kiye hi.... Woh Mann Gaya.....
Tabhi Mujeh.... Shaq huva tha.... Aur jab usne Sonia ke dost.... Ko bachane me madad ke liye....Han Kahan... Tab Mera Shaq yakin me badal Gaya.... Ki Vikrant zarur.... Vampires ke bare me janta hai....
Beetel- (Vikrant ke samne dekhkar) aur yahi wajah se....tum is team ke saath..... yahan khade ho.... Taki hum un do masum.... Ladki ko baccha sake....
Vikrant- par Maine sunna hai.... tum pehli bar yahan Khadi ho....Varna toh sirf phone se hi contact Hota tha....
(Beetel gurr ke Priya aur Sara ke samne dekhti hai....Priya apna seer hilakar kehti hai maine nahi....aur Sam ki taraf.... ishara karti hai....Sam apna mobile nikal Kar.....)
Sam- hello Han.... credit card....Mujeh koi credit card nahi chahiyeh....
Dusri taraf... M.K ke basement me....sab club members....Stricker ki....baat sunkar ghabraye huve the....woh Saab apne....club ke head M.K ke samne dekhte hai...
Member 1- M.K ab Kya karenge....aisi team hai bhi ya phir... Stricker ko veham ho Raha hai... Koi Vampires ko Maar Raha hai.... Sach much....
Member 2- Ek Kam karte hai.... Stricker ki team ko....sabse Pehle dunte hai....kyunki use....Janna hai...us team ke saath Kya huva....
M.K- sahi kaha... Aur... Stricker ne kaha woh Sach hai.... kyunki mere bete...ko tadpa Kar Mara hai....iska Matlab koi toh hai....joh Vampires ke khilaf khada huva hai...
Member 3- Toh M.k kyun na hum do team banale....
M.K - Thik hai....hum do nahi....chaar team banayenge.... pehli team sirf.... Stricker ke diye details... ke hisab se uski team ko dhundhegee.... Aur is kaam me....koi bhi roke use.... Raste se hata do...
Dusri team- un sare hadso...ki jankari ekatha karegee....un sabhi hadse....agar Ek hi team ne kiye honge....toh kuch surag mil sakta hai....saare CCTV CAMERA check Karo....us waqt...kaun kaun si gadiyan....us road se guzri thi....
Teesri team- sabhi hadso ke...pass wale logon se patah kare....chahe logo ko marke yah paise dekkar.... unse ugalvavo Kya kisi ne bhi..... kisi ko dekha hai....
Chouthi team- un sabhi parcel jisko humne pakkda tha ...unke mobiles aur purse se check Kare...unke Ghar pe phone.... Kare...koi surag milta hai.....kyunki....agar aisa hai...toh hamare sabhi.... Parcel zinda honge.....
Ok team Abhi se kaam pe lag jao....apni team ko samjado....Hume dusra mauka nahi milega....kyunki agar humne unhe nahi dhundha.... Toh phir humme se koi bhi zinda nahi bachega.....ok...
TO BE CONTINUED..............
UPDATE 15Basement me... Vikrant aur Raj ke saath Puri team Khadi thi... Vikrant aur Raj Ek dusre ki prashansha....karte hai....
VIKRANT NE KHOLA APNA RAAZ
Raj- Han toh Vikrant.... Tum Sonia se mile... shayad Mujeh lagta hai.... Tum us se kafi.... Mahino se Nahi mile ho....
Beetel- itni bhi jaldi Kya hai Sir....Pehle yeh Hume saboot de....ki Surya zinda hai.... Kyunki agar woh zinda hota....toh aisa....nahi ho sakta ki.... Woh humse contact na Kare.... Uspar toh iski tarah.... Koi gaddari ka ilzam bhi nahi hai.....
Meri behen.... Surya ki maut se pagal.....ho gai aur usne apne hi....Chaat se kud ke....apni jaan de di....ab uski beti.....angel sirf 5 saal ki hai....
Us choti si bachi ke.... Upar ab maa baap ka saaya.... Nahi raha..... tumhari wajah se..... woh choti si bachi....jab bhi mujse apni mummy ke bare me....puchti hai.....mere pass uske koi bhi sawalon....ka jawab nahi Hota....
(Beetel ke ankho me se....ansu nikal rahe the lekin....saath me uski ankhon me angare....dahek rahe the.... Beetel ko is tarah rote....Pehle kisi ne nahi dekha tha...)
Beetel ki yeh halat dekh ke....Sam ke andar choopi....badle ki aag ko....jaise ek chingaree mili...woh turant aage aata hai....aur Kehta hai....
Sam- sir Mai Beetel...ki baat se sehmat Hun...humne iski bahen aur....uske doston ki jaan bachayi hai.....par Main Beetel aur Vikrant ki....ladai isliyeh rokna chahata tha....Taki main ise jaan saku....akhir wahan aisa Kya huva tha... Ki sirf yehi Bach Gaya aur Baki sare margaye....
Raj- Sam tumhari aur Beetel ki.....taklif me samajta Hun....jaise tum logone kisi apne ko.....khoya hai....waise Maine aur yahan hum Saab ne khoya hai....
Sam- par Vikrant ko is baat ki taklif nahi....isne kisi apne ko nahi khoya.... Balki dusro ko taklif di hai.....Sir Mujeh toh lagta hai....use goliyan nahi lagi thi....usne sirf....natak Kiya tha.... Kya saboot hai...ki tumhe goliyan lagi thi....goliyon ka nishan toh hoga na..... isliyeh yeh reports me nahi hai.... Tum galat ho.... Aur reports sahi hai....
Vikrant- hasta hai....sahi kaha mere pass naa goliyan hai.....aur nahi goliyan lagne ka nishan hai....mere pass is baat ka.... koi saboot nahi hai....ki mujeh goli lagi thi....
Raj- Vikrant agar goli....lagi hai...toh nishan hona hi chahiye....
(Vikrant apni jeb se....chauk nikal ta hai....apne black gloves....nikal Kar....woh apne hatheli par..... Chaku ki noke se.... V ka.... nishan banata hai.... Yeh dekh ke wahan sabhi....chauk jate hai....yeh Kya Kar Raha hai....pagal ho Gaya hai Kya....)
Priya- yeh Kya hai.. Vikrant....khoon nikal Kar.....Kya Saabit....karna chahate ho....
Vikrant Priya ki baat ka jawab....nahi deta aur woh kuch kehne lagta hai....
Vikrant- yeh tab ki baat hai....jab me Surya ke niche.... training me tha.... training ke doran.... Pehle Pehle ...Surya meri kabiliyat ki....kafi prashansha karta tha....
Lekin dheere... dheere mein jaise....hi Surya ke records.... Tod ta Gaya....Surya ki yeh prashansha....Ek jalan me badal ne lagi...
( Basement me Raj aur uski Puri team.... Vikrant ki baatein....sun rahe the...Saab yeh Jana chahate the..... .akhir vikrant kaun sa raaz khol Raha hai.....)
Vikrant aage Kehta hai.....Sabhi training me....yeh kehne lage the....Vikrant Surya sir se bhi....aage nikal jayega....yeh baat Surya....ke Kano me aate hi....uski joh jalan thi usne ab dushmani ka roop le liya........ Surya ke... shooting records....smart plan records.... Sword fight records..... Aur Kai sare records...tutne lage....
Surya ka record tha....usne 9 nishane ko 5 seconds me perfect target lagaya tha...mein ne woh records ko....tod Diya...Maine wahi targets 4 seconds... Main Kar Diya....ab Surya meri khamiyan dhundhne me lagaa tha....
Surya soch Raha tha.... Vikrant itna perfect kaise ho sakta hai....usne Meri perfection todne ke liye.....Meri training ke targets difficult....Kar diye....ab un targets ko achive karne ke....liye me din raat ek karna padta....lekin aisa kab Tak chalta.....
Phir Maine socha....main samne se hi Surya se....mafi manglu.... aur haar manlu....par tab me Surya ke irade nahi janta tha.....
Ek din me... raat ko training ke baad.... Surya ke training ke passwale.....guest house me use Milne Gaya... Tabhi wahan Bahar ek shandar gadi padi thi.... Woh ek special designed car thi....Main soch raha tha main darwaza toh khula hai....aur naukar nahi dikh raha.....andar ke room ka darwaza knock karu.....ya Kal aake Surya se milu....
Tabhi andar se.... Maine ek goli ki awaz suni..... Main darwaza kholne ki koshish... Kar Raha tha....ki zor se Hasne ki awaz aane lagi.....Main tab ekdum se chauk gaya...andar aakhir ho Kya Raha hai....
Meri jigyasa Mujeh khidki ki taraf le gai....main guest house ke piche ki taraf se....khidkin ke pass gaya....mene khidki mein se dekha....ek aadmi kale coat me tha....aur Surya uske samne bandook leke khada tha...
Woh aadmi ne Surya se kaha... Yeh lo silencer se goliyan Chalo aur Dekho....awaz nahin ayegi..... Pehle Mujeh lagaa....woh koi arms dealer hai.... par Surya ne silencer.... Laga ke.....usi kale coat wale aadmi par ek saath 3 goliyan Chala di...
Par uske baad joh huva.... Me uspe yakin nahi Kar paya....us aadmi ne itni tezi se apna bachav Kiya....aur ek pal me wahan se Surya ke....nazdik pohach Gaya.....aur woh aadmi fir ....zor se Hasne lagaa... aur Bola yeh goliyan agar Mujeh lagbhi jati toh.... Mujeh kuch nahi Hota.....
Surya bhi use aadmi ko Aise karte dekh achraj me tha....usne us aadmi se Kahan...
Surya- Thomas yeh tumne kaise Kiya....koi insan goliyon se kaise....Bach sakta hai...itni tezi se wahan se yahan....kaise aa sakta hai...
Thomas- kyunki main insan nahi Hun.... Aur agar tum chaho toh....Meri tarah ya mujse bhi zyada....tez.... takkat war....ban sakte ho.....tum sabse best ho.... isliyeh main tumhare pass....aaya Hun....tum aaj best ho....
Kal koi tumse bhi best aayega....tab tumhe bardaash nahi hoga....(us waqt yeh kehke Thomas ne Surya ki.....dukhti nuss dabadi thi...)
mera Kam tum jaise logon ko dhundhna hai....agar tum tyar nahi toh koi aur tayar ho jayega.....aur tum sebhi Bada takkatwar banjayega....yeh Mera card hai...( Tabhi Surya ko Shaq Hota hai.....use lagta hai... khidki ke pass koi hai...
Tabhi main Surya ko dekhkar....main turant wahan se nikal Gaya....
Aur apne room me pohach Gaya...Mujeh yeh samaj nahi aa Raha tha....woh aadmi insaan nahi tha toh kaun tha.....phir jab bhi main training me Surya ko dekhta....mere zehen me woh....baat aajati....
Us din Surya ne....hamari training li....ki agar aapke samne.... aapka dushman...kisi hathiyar jaise ki..... tez knife leke ho....toh unse kaise ladte hai....jab Meri bari aayi....toh mere samne Surya aagaya..... main Surya ke haar vaar.....se Bacch Raha tha....yeh dekh ke Surya ko....Puri team ke samne kamzor... Mehsus huva...
Surya control se Bahar....hokar mujse ladne lagaa....tabhi mere zahen me Thomas ka.....khayal aaya....aur Surya ka tez....chaku mere haathon ko chukar nikal Gaya.... Surya apni Jeet par Khush huva....Mera khoon dekh ke... Use rahat mili....
Me wahan se nikal Gaya...dusre din Surya mujse Milne aaya....
Surya- tum thode slow ho.... Vikrant... warna tum Jeet jate..... dikhao apna haath... Lao main dressing... Kar deta Hun.... Tumhe....
Vikrant- Maine Surya se kaha.....main thik Hun.....Main khud dressing kar.....lunga... Lekin usne kaha me tumhara... Ghav dekhna chahata Hun.....(asliyat me woh marham nahi....aur dard Dene aaya tha) main khada ho Gaya.... Nahi sir....
Surya - it's an order....( Aisa kehke usne....Mera purana dressing khola....aur kholte hi woh chauk Gaya....Surya sochne lagaa.....it's impossible....aisa kaise ho sakta hai....kal toh yahan....se khoon nikla tha aur aaj.....wahan par ghav ka koi nishan bhi nahi hai....)
Yeh kehkar Vikrant yahan basement me....Raj aur uski Puri team ke samne....apni haatheli dikhata hai....jahan usne V likhata aur khoon nikla tha....par ab wahanpar....koi ghav nahi tha....hatheli par koi... Kharoch Tak nahi thi...
( Raj....beetel aur Puri team ki....nazre sirf Vikrant ki haatheli par thi....woh Saab bhi Surya ki tarah.... chakit the....aisa kaise ho sakta hai....Vikrant hasta hai...aur aage bolta hai...)
(Vikrant aage bolta hai....Surya ko lagta hai....kahin Maine koi nakli skin toh nahi pehni....par woh dhyan se dekh ke....phir mujse Kehta hai....
Surya Vikrant se Kya tum Vampire ho...
Vikrant- Vampires....bhi hotel hai Kya....joh insano ka khoon piteh hai.....
Tabhi Surya ko kuch sujta hai....aur woh turant Mera haath pakkad Kar.... Mujeh dhoop me khada karta hai....par Mujeh kuch nahi Hota....par mein yeh samaj Gaya ki....yakinan Thomas ek Vampire hai....
Surya- Vikrant.....tum dhoop me khade reh sakte ho.....iska Matlab tum Vampire nahi ho...toh tum ho kaun......
TO BE CONTINUED.............
Sorry friends !!!!! For the delay !!!!
Kuch urgent kaam aagaya tha....
Raat late.... jagke update de diya hai.....
Sorry once again !!!!!!!