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Thanks ABHISHEK TRIPATHI bhai for your valuable comments.Awesome update
Thanks ABHISHEK TRIPATHI bhai for your valuable comments.Awesome update
Thanks bhai for your valuable comments.Fantastic update waiting for next
Thanks aalu bhai for your valuable comments.Pooja aur roopa toh bari bechain hain, inhe kuchh jyada hi tharak chadh rahi hain, aaj sabke samne hi skhalit ho gayee, lekin baaki kee koi behne ne koi aapat-ti nahin jatayee, kya un shabke man mein bhi yahee vichar hain, lekin priya aur poonam didi ne toh abhi tak koi aisa sanket nahin diya.
Ab bua kee moch kee malish, dekhte hain moch tak hi rahti hain ya phir aur oopar jaati hain.
Thanks Soku74 bhai.koi baat nhi dost hota hai, but abb regularly update dete rahna.
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Buwa ji tow badi jaldi pat gayi chalo dekhte h kon kiski achche se malish kerta hUpdate dediya hai dosto ab next update Tuesday ko ayega.
Aaj ka update kuch chota hai samay ke karan zyada likh nahi paya sambhal lena
Bas update padhkar ji bhi apka review hai dil khol kar dena
And negative feedback bhi hai to zarur dena isse mujhe bhi help hogi apni kahani aur writing ko improve karne ke liye.
So read and give feedback whatever you feel.
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Main:yaha kya kar raha hai be
Bhaula:kuch nahi bhai bedi hi pine aya tha
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Bhaula:ab kuch thik hai bhai aur ghar par hi tha bhai abhi aya yaha par
Main:chal thik bedi to sulga
Meri Baat sunkar Bhaula ne bedi sulgai aur mujhe di main bhi bedi pite huwe Bhaula se baat karne laga
Main:aur suna kya chal raha hai aaj kal gaon mai
Bhaula:kuch khas to ho nahi raha bhai bas wahi humesha ka rona chal raha hai sab ka sambha se pareshan hai chaudhry ji ka khas admi hai par pata nahi wo kaise khamosh rehte hai iske aise karne se mana ki logon ne paise liye hai isse par humesha dara dhaamka ke byajh leta wo alag phir agar kisi karan na de paye to marta bhi hai ab chaudhry ji ke pass jakar Kehne se bhi darte hai sab ki kahi phir baad mai ye aur zyada pareshan karega
Main:ha be ye to humesha se chalta araha hai
Bhaula:ha bhai kuch ghar chodkar baki sab to sambha se paise lekar pareshan hai
Main:ab hum kar bhi kya sakte hai re
Bhaula:ha ye bhi sahi hai aur wo sambha hai bhi ek number ka saand admi usse kon panga lega
Main:hmm chal chalte hai ab ghar
Bhaula:thik hai bhai kal milta hu
Waha se nikal kar kuch der mai main ghar pahunch gaya sab log apne apne kamre chale gaye they shayad kuch to so bhi gaye they main bhi apne kamre mai jane laga tha ki mujhe bua ke pair ki malish ka yaad agaya phir sidhe mai bua ke kamre mai chale gaya bua andar ankhe band karke leti huwi thi main uske pass jakar baith gaya meri ahat se usne apni ankhe khol di
Bua:agaya beta dekh zyada Dard nahi hai rehne de to bhi jakar so ja din bhar kuch na kuch kaam karke thaka huwa hoga
Main:aisa kuch nahi bua to bas khamoshi se lete rahe aur bata tel kaha hai malish ka
Bua:nahi sonega na to meri baat dekh waha kone mai pada hai bua ne ek aor ishara karke mujhe dikhaya jaha tel ki katuri rakhi huwi thi
Main usey lekar phir se bua ke pair ke pass baith gaya bua is Waqt blouse aur petticoat mai thi main apne ek hath mai tel lekar dusre hath se bua ka pair apne gaud mai rakhliya aur tel lagane laga
Bua:aaahh aram se beta Dard Hai
Main:dekha itna Dard Hai aur abhi to keh rahi thi ki malish ki zaroorat nahi hai
Bua:nahi re tu bhi to thaka huwa hoga din bhar ka
Main:main itne kaam se nahi thakta bua aur waise bhi tujhe aise taqlif mai kaise chod sakta hu
Bua:tu na sach mai bohut pyaara hai jo apni is bua ka itna khayal rakhta hai warna hai ki kon hum maa beti ka sahara is duniya is ghar ke siwa
Main: aise kyu kehti hai bua to hum sab humesha tera khayal rakhenge
Bua: janti ho re to kitna pyaar karta hai sab ko
Main: Tum sab bhi to mujhe itna pyaar karte ho
Aise baat karte huwe main bua ki malish karne laga tha unko meri baato mai rehne se Dard Ka pata nahi chal raha tha isliye hi ab main dheere dheere unke gutne tak agaya tak malish karte huwe aur jab main unke jangho ko dekha to mere andar ki thark jagna chalo Hogayi kya jhange thi sali bua ki ye to khub ragad ragad kar chodne layak Maal hai ab mera pora Dhyaan bua ki jhango par hi tha aur main waha hi apne hath chala raha tha jab bua ne dekha ki main khamosh hogaya ho to wo meri aor dekhne lagi aur jab wo mujhe apni jhango ko kha jani wali nazar se dekhte huwe dekhne lagi to unko bhi hawas chadne lagi aur unko subah jo mera Lund dekha tha wo yaad agaya aur unki chut ne do boond pani chod diya
Bua: aise kya dekh raha hai beta
Unki baat sunkar mera Dhyaan ab unki aor gaya main bhi pori tharak mai
Main:kuch nahi bua teri jhange dekh raha tha kya mast hai
Bua:itra kar ab kaha beta ab to main bhudi Hogayi
Main:kya baat karti hai bua to aaj bhi mast dikhti hai agar to meri bua na hoti to main tujhse shadi hi kar leta
Meri bua se khush hogayi aur sharma bhi gayi
Bua:kyu jhot bolta hai re aur mujh mai aisa kya hai jo to mujhse shadi karta tere liye to sundar si dulhan laongi
Main:kya bua tumhare mai jo baat hai wo kisi aur main nahi ho sakti tum to apsara ho
Meri Baato se wo aur khush Hogayi
Bua:thik hai ab to kehta hai to Man leti ho keh kar hasne lagi
Ab bua ki jhango par mere is tarah hath chalne se bua kuch zyada hi garam ho rahi thi ek to itna saal se chudi nahi aur ab mere aisa kar ne se uski chudasi badne lagi par pair mai Dard rehne ke karan wo agey nahi bad sakti thi isliye wo sirf khamoshi jitna maza mil raha hai utna le rahi thi par ab mera Lund par kabu hatne laga tha to main bhi agey badne ka soncha shayad bua bhi chud jaye ye bhi pyaasi hi hogi ye hi sonch kar main bua se kaha
Main: ab kaise lag raha hai bua aram to hai na
Bua:ha beta tere hatho ki taqat se ab aram mil raha hai
Main: to kya main tere pore jism ki malish kardo
Meri is baat se bua samajh gayi ki main usey garm karke agey badna chahta ho par wo nahi chahti thi ki main ab hi agey bado pair ke Dard ke karan isliye usne kaha
Bua:nahi beta aaj to pair ki hi karde kal pore jism ki main tujh se ache se malish kara ongi
Main bhi bua ki baat samajh gaya ki aise mai kuch bhi nahi ho sakta
Main:thik hai bua kal phir main tere pore jism ko ache se ragdonga main tharki pane kaha
Bua:meri baat ka matlab samajhte huwe bhi kya matlab ragdonga
Main: arey mera matlab ke ragad kar malish karonga jisse tujhe bhi aram mil jayega aur maza bhi ayega
Bua:thik hai dekhte hai kal ki to mujhe sahi se ragad sakta hai ya nahi
Main bua ki baat sunke khush hogaya
Main:arey tu kal dekhti ja bua main kaise ragad ta ho tujhe
Bua:thik hai chal ab bas kar ja tu bhi soja aram se
Main:chal thik hai bua kal to main tere sath hi soanga
Bua:khushi se thik hai
Phir waha se nikal kar main apne room mai agaya aur kuch der baad Lund bhi shant hogaya aur main bhi maze mai sogaya ki kal to bua ko jaam kar chodunga sonchte huwe.
Lagta hai bhua Ji pehle se hi tayar thi, magar is chot ne 1din ki deri kardi. Item barhiya hogi to aur majja aayega.Update dediya hai dosto ab next update Tuesday ko ayega.
Aaj ka update kuch chota hai samay ke karan zyada likh nahi paya sambhal lena
Bas update padhkar ji bhi apka review hai dil khol kar dena
And negative feedback bhi hai to zarur dena isse mujhe bhi help hogi apni kahani aur writing ko improve karne ke liye.
So read and give feedback whatever you feel.