Incest Voh Sham Kuch Ajeeb Thi - Emotions at War ( with some new flavours)

[Rajesh Sarhadi]

Rajesh bhai mai aapki ek story hai Andhi naam se jiske aap kewal 2 ya chaar update dete ho bas fir band kar dete ho aaj tak wo story chaar update se aage na badhi baat chahe jahan ki ho kya mai ummid karun ki aap us story ko yahan bhi suru karoge ya fir andhi ko bhul jaun mai

Bhai Aandhi ka maine koi backup nahi rakha, abhi jo likh raha hun pehle vo puri kar lun fir dekhenge

 

[Vijay2309]

once again

 

[Rajesh Sarhadi]

Bahut khub , saare problem ki jad samar ka abhi tak entry nahi hua , lekin writer bro agar ap yeh story rewrite kar rahe ho kuch changes ke saath toh fir update bhi jaldi jaldi dena ....

Samar ka character yaad hai . Kuch changes honge lekin vo mid aur end ki taraf honge aur story ab lambi chalegi, jahan pehle band hui thi vahan band nahi hogi, kuch naye characters aayenge aur kuch adultery part bhi aayega.

 

[Sp bala]

Bilkul , samar ki hi toh wajah se story mai incest add hua , suman ki life mai jitni bhi problem aya hai uska main reason samar hi toh hai , chahe uske judua bete ko paida hote hi suman se alag karna ho yah suman ko sexually exploit karna ho , samar is main pillar of the story ....

 

[Rahul]

Bhai Aandhi ka maine koi backup nahi rakha, abhi jo likh raha hun pehle vo puri kar lun fir dekhenge

koi baat nahi bhai achcha bahana hai jish story ke chaar update bhi na hue uska backup kaun rakhta bas wo story achchi thi ishiliye bola mai aur rahi baat is story ki to mai isko padh bhi chuka har update to milte aapki nayi story par

 

[Rajesh Sarhadi]

koi baat nahi bhai achcha bahana hai jish story ke chaar update bhi na hue uska backup kaun rakhta bas wo story achchi thi ishiliye bola mai aur rahi baat is story ki to mai isko padh bhi chuka har update to milte aapki nayi story par

is story mein kaafi changes bhi honge, Andhi ko baad mein dekhenge, uska plot yaad hai mujhe lekin baad mein develop karunga

 

[humtum]

Good

 

[Damha]

for starting new thread

 

[Rajesh Sarhadi]

hot update

keep enjoying

 

[Casinar]

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Maldives ke ek 6 sitara hotel ke beech pe baithi Sonal samundra ki lehron ko taak rahi thi - kaise kaise uski jindagi ne rang badle ye soch kar kabhi kabhi vo kanp jaati thi - kitna asahaye mehsus kiya karti thi jab se uske pita ka nidhan hua - par uska chota bhai ek chattan ki tarha ubhar ke samne aaya - jiski usne kabhi apeksha bhi nahi kari thi. Aaj bhi vo sham jab bhi dimag mein gunjti hai uske rongte khade ho jaate hain. Kaise Sunil ne apni jaan ka daanv laga kar uski raksha kari thi - kitna jhakhmi ho gaya tha vo par hosh khone se pehle use surakshit ghar tak le ke aaya tha. Vo sham wakye mein kuch ajeeb thi jisne jindagi ke mayne hi badal daale the. Kya hua tha us sham ko - aur kaise Sonal ki jindagi ke maiyne badal gaye - ye jaanne ke liye saath bane rahiyega..

(Ye story bahut pehle Xossip pe likhi thi apni RS id se, fir se ek baar is story ko la raha hun kuch badlaav ke saath, lekin ye slow chalegi kyunki abhi sara focus Waqt Ki Dhaar pe hai.)

hahaha so you succeeded to stop that moron to cnp your written story here.
good.
now I won't be coming here as I have already read this the days you were writing at XP, but would ask you one thing why don't you now change your id straight to Rajesh Sarhadi?
that will suit better with the story and people will know you are the real and true author of this masterpiece.
If you want to get back your username just pm admin that you want to change the actual username into that of Rajesh and it will be done, but if you prefer the actual one then it's okay. but personally I would like to see you in your real id just like I am in mine

would ask you one thing though = you were keenly following my Chawla family and responding but you suddenly disappeared when things did not go the way you had expected? you did not reply till the end why