Thriller Waah! Life Ho Toh Aisi - All Hell Broke Loose (Completed)

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Mostly @ap story ka update subah hi deta hai isliye wait till morning.

 

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[AP 316]

Update-108(Its Time)

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Ye Sab 11:00 am par suru hua Ektaraf Varsha or uski team Yogeshwar k piche lag gayi or idhar humlog Unka wait kar rahe they Jiya Ami or Jack Haweli aachuke they or sahi bataaun toh sab kaafi gussa they hona bhi caahiye... Humein ab wait karna tha uss bhosdk Yogeshwar k bina nahi jaaunga main munh uthake.. Bhenchod "Hum Sareef Kya hue Puri duniya Maadarchod hogayi" ... Bc harr koi halke mein leraha hai jabse aaya hun matlab agar chain se baitha hun tab bhi baithney nahi doge.. Or uppar se bhenchod ye Abeer Or Ami kuch karne nahi detey jab bhi gussa hota hun khud matter solve karke nikal letey hain bc itana gussa ikkatha hoke kissi naa kissi ki gand maardega or yahaan mujhe woh kissi naa kissi Yogeshwar lagraha hai... Lekin Baat Abeer or Ami ki bhi sahi hai agar main aise chindi choron k khilaaf apna gussa nahi rouk shakta yaa fir apne aap ko control nahi kar shakta toh bhenchod kya faayda itane time takk gand marwaane kaa choti picture ye hai lekin mereko badi Picture offer hui hai uske baare mein sochana caahiye woh 1.5 saal woh Vertigo kaa paglaaya AP woh AP Jisko lawda farak nahi padta tha kon Marr raha hai kon nahi... Kisko thokana hai kisko nahi.. But still agar yahaan woh waala AP aaya toh bhenchod bahot log marenge isliye faayda issi mein Hai ko control karna seekhun warna yahaan aane kaa koi faayda hai nahi Abhi toh Red John bhi 1% nahi hua hai uske baad Sanjay bhi hai jo Red John se bahot badi cheej hai... So iss pure paragraph kaa saar yahi hai ki Control AP control... Ye thodi naa Keh raha hun main ki ekdum chutiya banjaa gussa kar surely kar lekin itana nahi ki dikkat hojaae...

Main-Kitana bolta haibe dimag tu maadarchod chain se baithney bhi nahi deta... Chupkar lawde sab samjh gaya main... Shanti rakh ab...

Ab 11 baje k baad seedha 1.30 pm par mere pass Varsha kaa call aaya...

Main-Yo...

Varsha-Yogeshwar ki location milgayi hai 100% pakki khabar hai sathmein 3 se 5 bandey ho shaktey hain.. Toh tumhe uske alaawa koi jinda caahiye...? Kyunki information k hissab se woh sab k sab Wanted criminals hain or Humaari list mein pehle se hain..

Main-bilkul bhi nahi Mujhe bus wahi caahiye unsabka credit tumlog lelo... Credit toh iska bhi lelena mujhe farak nahi padta bus ek baar isko meri location par le aana or ye dikhaawaa karna woh Bhaag gaya...

Varsha-Got it... Jaise he package milta hai main call karti hun...

Call disconnected..

Abeer-kya hua...?

Main-bus sab sahi raha toh jald miljaaega woh bus bc cross firing mein woh Marr naa jaae warna pure swag ki gand marrjaaegi..

Jiya-So ab kya karein... Wait...??

Main-Yep..

Or thodi he derr baad Varsha kaa call aaya firse...

Var-Got him boss...

Main-Brilliant awesome.... Suno Yamunanagar pohanchney mein kitana time lagega tumhe...

Var-3 Hours... I guess..

Main - Brilliant Main ek Location bhejta hun wahaan leke pohancho usko...

Var - ok boss...


Call disconnected..

Abeer- Milgaya...?

Main-hell yeah Bola toh Tha Varsha Kaam ki cheej hai...

Jiya-Woh wahin jaaenge kya...?

Main-Haan chalo humlog bhi Nikaltey hain... JACK bandey ready hain...

Jack-Bilkul Sir...

Main-Tumlog follow karna humein...

Jack - OK sir..

Maine Apni dono Deagels Lee or Maserati bahaar nikaali...220 kms tha or jaldi pohanchana tha toh Maserati se better kya hai bc..

Main, Abeer Ami or Jiya maserati mein aaye... Humaare piche 15 gaadiyaan or thi jisme 60 - 65bandey they woh bhi with weapons and fully geared up... Sathmein Jack Or Vinnie..

Humlog ne Gaon se nikaltey he speed pakad Mast Highway tha toh gaadi 130+ takk jaarahi thi humlog 160 kms aachuke they 4 baje takk.... ki tabhi Bhai kaa call aagaya Woh or Babhi abeer k aatey he Yamunanagar k liye nikal gaye they..

Main-Ji bhai... Sab theek hain...?

Deva-haan abhi hospital se he aaya hun main Sam Or Rohit ko sath le liya Tha rajat or Pooja ko kuch time rakhenge Hospital mein... Lekin chinta ki baat nahi hai...

Main-chalo thank god..

Deva-Sun abhi Haweli mein hun main Or ye thakur bolraha hai ki ye humein Unko maarney ki permission nahi dega keval arrest karo yaa fir deal khatam... Bhaad mein gayi aisi seats family always comes first humein ghanta farak nahi padta... Isko bataane waala hun main kon hun bc..

Main-naa naa mere pass or bhi better idea hai.. Aaraha hun usko bolo AP k pass saare jawaab hain thoda wait kare..

Deva-Ok kitani derr...?

Main-1 ghanta maximum lagega...

Deva-Ok...

Call disconnected...

Or hum 4.45 takk unke gaon mein enter kar gaye or theek 5.00pm par hum unki haweli k saamne they guards ne Abeer ko dekh gate khola unki gand fatt gayi itani gaadiyaan dekh kar hum seedha lawn mein line se enter hue Maserati uske baad Audi's BMW's Mercedes.. Apne khass Bandon kaa khass khayaal rakhtey hain humlog...

Ab Sablog wahaan hall mein he they Bhai, Babhi, Mangal, Anjali, Ravi, Sam or Rohit... Unke alaawa Thakur Dilip Singh, uska Mla pota or Poti Gunjan woh Kidnapping waala thakur Baldev Singh Uske alaawa 3no Mla's... Woh sab Chairs par baithey they Or Humein dekh sab apni apni jagah khadey hue sabse pehle Maserati mein se humlog uttare or sath sath sab bandey uttare ek ek kar bhenchod ekdum South movies waala scene tha sab k Pass apni Legal Pistols...

So ek second kaa break letey hain thoda logic samjhaadeta hun sabko... Humaare pass 3 type k bandey hain No. 1 Jo humaari personal security Agency k hain jo humaare business, Ghar, Farmhouse yaa humaari party k important neta log ko security provide kartey hain yaani jo legally privileged hain iss kaam k liye ye numbers mein bahot jyaada hain Yaani humaari khudki Security agency hai Jisse Rishi Dekhta hai...Inko humaare Security Guards bol shaktey hain.. Second Woh bandey Jo Gang members type hain yaani Jab koi lafda hota hai yaa kissi ko tapakwaaney kaa hota hai tab bahaar aatey hain yaani humaare personal gundey ye log bhi normal Security Guards he hain lekin time aane par ye log khoonkhaar banjaatey hain inmein se jyaada tar uss time k hain jab bhai Gangstar roop mein aagaye they.. Bhai badal gaye uppar se toh ye log bhi uppar se badal gaye... Inko Jack dekhta hai....no.3 hain Abeer k bandey yelog ko bhi bhai he leke aae they jab lekin jab Abeer ko haryana se Mumbai Jaana padda toh yelog uske sath nikal gaye Ye sabse khatarnak hain reason hai Ki in sabki training abeer k under hui hai ab jab trainer he jaanwar hoga toh yelog bhi jaanwar he honge. Ye sab k sab pichle 10+ saal se humaare liye kaam Kar rahe hain.... Ye special trained log hain bole toh ek dum danger log bc cheer faad detey hain weapons expert, Vehicle expert, tech expert wagairaah wagairaah Inki jarurat bahot Kam padti hai mereko abtak 3 baar he jarurat paddi hai inki I guess Pehli baar jab Mohan ne Mujhe or baaki ko kidnap kiya tha or Abeer ki entry hui thi tab uske sath inmein se kuch snipers they... Uske baad Jab Fake Rishi Waala kand hua tha yaani Vijay ne dhoka diya tha tab Or uske baad last mein jab Surendra k Bandon se figth hui thi tab bhi inmein se kuch bandey they... Yaani point ye hai yelog jab burri waali gand marrti hai tab he bahaar nikaltey hain.. Or fir aake sabki gand maarke waapis so jaatey hain...

Back To Present:-

Haweli kaa scene ye tha ki Thakur Family aankhein faadey humaari taraf he dekhrahi thi Varsha thodo derr mein yahaan pohanchney waali thi bus fir Bang Bang...

Continued..

 

[AP 316]

Thanks Bhailog For All The Love and support keep supporting as always...

Update Posted Jaldi jaldi Badhiya Se Reviews dedo taaki next update jaldi aajaae..

 

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Nice but laga tha ki is update mei kuch scene dekhne ko milega but yaha to @ap ke security guards ko dekhna pada. Lagta hai Red John ya Sanjay ke case mei inka important role hone wala hai. Very good situation handled by @ap's brain warna abhi se hi pagal hoke ghumega to Red John ko kaise rokega but here comes one doubt. Why Sanjay is more important that Red John. I think Red John ka apna alag level hai aur Sanjay ka apna alag aur wo usi ke hisab se @ap ko taklif denge to i dont think ki dono ka comparison karna is good but in the end u r the writer. If it's please u then so be it.

 

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And a little suggestion. (Please use full stops.) Qki kayi bar padhte padhte dursi line kab shuru ho jati hai pta nahi chalta n then dono line ka gobar ho jata. Aur unhe fir se padh ke samjhna padta hai. So please if you can do it, it will help us to read and understand updates more easily

 

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Nice but laga tha ki is update mei kuch scene dekhne ko milega but yaha to @ap ke security guards ko dekhna pada. Lagta hai Red John ya Sanjay ke case mei inka important role hone wala hai. Very good situation handled by @ap's brain warna abhi se hi pagal hoke ghumega to Red John ko kaise rokega but here comes one doubt. Why Sanjay is more important that Red John. I think Red John ka apna alag level hai aur Sanjay ka apna alag aur wo usi ke hisab se @ap ko taklif denge to i dont think ki dono ka comparison karna is good but in the end u r the writer. If it's please u then so be it.

First of all thanks for a wonderful review yahaan baat AP ko takleef dene ki nahi hai actually AP k point of view se dekho Red John Is a serial killer beshak woh Sanjay Se Jyaada experienced ho yaa yaa usase jyaada smart ho but at the end of the day woh ek serial killer hai... Lekin Sanjay Is a Don Woh logon ko maarta hai marwaaega hai then uske businesses Yaani drugs Extortion kidnappings basically Woh pure Desh ko khohala kar raha hai or uppar se uski Manpower uski gang uppar se clean hai woh...Isliye AP usko aage rakh raha hai..

But again Red John Is smarter Faster And way more experienced hai.. Toh Dekhtey jaao kya kya hota hai..

 

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And a little suggestion. (Please use full stops.) Qki kayi bar padhte padhte dursi line kab shuru ho jati hai pta nahi chalta n then dono line ka gobar ho jata. Aur unhe fir se padh ke samjhna padta hai. So please if you can do it, it will help us to read and understand updates more easily

Actually most of the times use hota hai comas full stops kaa but jyadatar hota ye hai ki flow flow mein ek pura paragraph leekha jaata hai lekin woh bhi final edit mein edit hojaata hai lekin kuch lines rehjaati hain so I hope next time dhyaan rakhenge..