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Gajab BC gajab sala ab aaya juch dhmake vaala scene varna vahi sukhi khani pad rhi thi
Well aapne iska reason bhi ache se bta diya ki kis vajah se vo YAMUNANAGAR ki bakchodi se dur rehna chahta tha well vo GANDU pakda gya hai aur VARSHA usse pekar aa jayegi av agle update mai faadu dialogues hone vaale hain
RJ ek serial killer jiska main motive jyada se jyada logon ko marna hai well aisa jaruri nhi ki vahi maare yeh kaam kisi aur tarike se bhi kiya ja skta hai well yeh point apke aaj ke update ki starting mai AP ke dimag ki bakchodi se aaya hai
But mujhe yeh point toh galat lgta hai ki koi AP ko iss haad tak bhi nhi uksa skta ki vahi aisa kaand kar de so yeh ek bekar point bhi ho skta hai
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Well aapne iska reason bhi ache se bta diya ki kis vajah se vo YAMUNANAGAR ki bakchodi se dur rehna chahta tha well vo GANDU pakda gya hai aur VARSHA usse pekar aa jayegi av agle update mai faadu dialogues hone vaale hain
RJ ek serial killer jiska main motive jyada se jyada logon ko marna hai well aisa jaruri nhi ki vahi maare yeh kaam kisi aur tarike se bhi kiya ja skta hai well yeh point apke aaj ke update ki starting mai AP ke dimag ki bakchodi se aaya hai
But mujhe yeh point toh galat lgta hai ki koi AP ko iss haad tak bhi nhi uksa skta ki vahi aisa kaand kar de so yeh ek bekar point bhi ho skta hai
Well update was for just creating next scene.
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Rbcl007
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Nice bhai kuch din se tabiyat bohat kharab thi isiliye regularly update ko follow nahini kar paa raha tha... Mast update aaya he dono... Mujhe lag raha he aap kuch bada plot ko soch ke bethe ho par usse sync nahini kar paa rahe ho story se properly.. Shayad last moment plot maine koi changes ki bajaha se... Ab tak ki story ki hisab se to lag raha he jo bhi plot sochi hogi kamal ki hone wali he.. Barna apne security ke itne details maine describe ye AP sirf tabhi karega jab kuch likhne ka samajh nahini aa raha ho aur time paas karna ho ( just kidding bro ) ya phir kisiki solid bajni wali ho... Par mujhe nahini lagta ye itna bada buldup sirf thakur ke liye he.. Ya toh koi badi machhli he jisse AP thakur bahane talne wala he.. Ya phir Redjohn ya sanjay ko ek message ki" Stay out"
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