Thriller Waah! Life Ho Toh Aisi - All Hell Broke Loose (Completed)

[Black water]

Waiting bhai

 

[Tripuri chakraborty]

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[Mathur]

AP bhai ek baat bolu bura mat man na par ab story maine pehle jaise dum nahini raha pehle iss story maine ek bonding tha... Baar baar padhne ko maja aata tha.. Jab xp pe ye story start hua even yanha pe bhi starting ke kuch update abhi bhi baar baar padhne ko dil karta hai par.. Ab story maine uss tarha ka maja na raha...

i can understand bhai app shayad

Bhai aap ek kam karo wo story pado jisme hero apne hi maa baap, Bhai bahan se nafrat karta ho ya apne hi ghar m apne sage bahan ki maa se sex karta ho..or puri update sirf aawazo m hi nikal jaye...but yaha apko wo masala nahi milega...sorry...

Ha ha ha ha bhai aap pehle mere comment padho maine kya likha hai phir comment karna.. Maine bola pehle part jaisa aur iss part ke starting jaisa feel ab nahini aaraha hai.. Ab jara mujhe bato iss baat pe kanha se sex seen ka jikar hai...... Aap pata nahini kya samajh liya mere baton ka... Iss story Maine kabhi sex seen aayi hi nahini hai.. Wo jo bhi first part Maine tha thoda bohat.. Wo bhi uss time jis time story establish ho rahi thi uss time jada se jada reader catch karna tha.. Isiliye AP bhai ne daal diya.. Ek baar unko unki base reader mil gaye uske baad uss seen ka kya jaroorat... Aur haan bhai har story Maine kuch bonding hoti hai.. Jaroori nahini ho sex seen ka hi ho.. Wo emotional bhi ho sakti hai friend ship bhi ho sakti hai family sentiment bhi ho sakti hai love emotion bhi ho sakti hai... Aap khud ek baar agar Pdf available ho to xp pe janha tak story chali thi wo aur yanha pe bhi first ke kuch update padho... Uss time story Maine ek feel tha. Ek bonding tha jo aapko story Maine invest karne pe majboor kar ta tha.. Mere hisab se jo lag raha hai ki uss time AP apne power ke bina khud maidaan Maine jaata tha.. Jab se vertigo aaya hai.. AP dimag game pe chala gaya.. Par ab wo khud jada tar piche rehte raha hai maine samajh raha hun ye ek character buildup hai.. Par problem yeh hai baki seen khali hai.. Sirf AP pe hi story ghoom rahi hai.. Shayad mujhe isiliye ab waisa feel na aaraha hai... Story sab ko sath leke chalti hai... Ab pichle part Maine jo villian the sab ap ke aas pass the to harwaqt story Maine kuch na kuch chalta tha.. Ab jo main chiz lack kar rahi hai story dhang ki villian ki.. Kyun ki Rj saamne hi nahini aaraha hai.. Na hi story uske prospective ko dikha rahi hai ki wo kya kar raha hai.. Etc etc.. Aur jo naye politicians family aayee wo bhi kafi had tak silence hai.. To mere bhai jab story one dimensional ho jayegi to maja kaise aayega.... Ye meri taraf se suggestion tha AP BHAI KE Liye... Aur waise aur ek baat jis tarha ke story ki aap baat karte ho na.. Uss story wale yanha pe timepass nahini karte...... Kyun ki iss tarha ke alag hi fanbase hai.....

Calm down guys sabke alag alag views hotey hain sabke alag alag passand hoti hain.. Its ok agar Rbcl.007 bhai ko story passand nahi aarahi hai I mean main samjh shakta hun part 1 se kaafi alag hai issiliye passand nahi aarahi.. Or mujhe koi problem nahi hai ki unko passand nahi aarahi..

But dikkat ye hai iss part mein last part se jyaada family bonding hai or ye bahot baar dikhaya hai.. I think tum Romantic bonding caahtey ho but usko time lagega aane mein.. Secondly agar AP k pass vertigo hai team hai abtoh Ami and Chang bhi hai toh woh kyun befaltu khud risk lega badi picture dekho bhai AP ab chindi chor log ko nahi pakkadta ab level bahot jyaada uppar jaa chuka hai.. . Or villains Red John he akela 5 surendra k baraabar hai.. Or past part surendra k uppar utana nahi tha jitana uske Bandon k uppar tha.. Surendra khud 2 updates tikka hoga last mein usase pehle Raja, Mohan, Sunil balram wagairaah he they.. Yahaan Red John ki gang itani badi nahi hai issliye ek ek karke saamne nahi aarahe...

Or Haan characters introduce hogaya iska matlab ye nahi ki woh seedha lead villain role mein aajaaega jaise woh politician family unko issliye abhi laaya kyunki agar ekdum time par laata toh log samjhtey villain naa millrahe toh uthake kissi ko bhi daaldiya... Tabtak inka character buildup hoga or ye shayad ek better villain ban paalein..

Or rahi baat part 1 sex scenes ki toh nope mera jo reader base tha wohlog starting se he mere sath they jinlog ko main jaanta tha whatsapp wagairaah par yaa jinko stories main padhta tha yaa jinko mere reviews passand aatey they toh free promotion hojaati thi issliye mujhe reader base k liye sex scene nahi daalne paddey actually woh issliye they ki starting mein AP ki personality playboy ki dikhaani thi jispar pura part tikka tha toh sex scenes issliye they..

Or Rahi baat difference ki toh bhai maine pura dum lagaaya story ko part 1 se kaafi alag banaane k liye main nahi caahta tha same old stuff padho tumlog so issliye Part1 waali feel nahi aaegi..


But I hope jaise jaise aage badhenge aapko story passand aaegi.. Tabtak k liye sorry bhai.. Keep supporting as always..

well bhai log vaise mamla shant hai yeh aur shant rahe toh jyada acha hai but kuch points jo main add karna chahta hoon simple hain

well purana part no doubt awesome tha hai rahega as usme school life thi AP ki aur sabschool life hi miss karte hain toh story mai humne khud ko AP ki jagah imagine kiya awesome

aur Rbcl.007 bhai shayad voh time miss kar rhe hain jab AP pehli baar deeply love mai pada tha aur vo scene BC kya romantic tha aur vahan jo bhi enemies they like RIYA ke DAD vagarh vo sab dur na they known they aur DEVA bhai se darte they toh hipe thi hi story ki aur AP hamesha uljha hua tha har kissi ke sath as vo enjoy kar rha tha tab toh usse jhant bhar ki tention na thi koi

but ab vo college mai hai aur uska level badh gya hai aur AP 316 bhai ne apni writing se bta diya hai ki yeh story ka level na high hua hai balki hum readers ka bhi level high hua hai toh aap sab samjh skte hain ki ab purani jaisi baat kyun na hai as hum readers ka bhi level high hua hai aur ab sabhi main characters well known hai aur hum unki capacity jante hain naye characters aur AP ko chor kar

main bus yehi kehna chahta hoon ki writer bhai hume apno writing se all in one feel karana chahte hain first part mai humne love, pain, bakchodi , family love bahut feel kiya aur ab humare dimag ki bhi gand tod kasrat honi hai issliye bas change ke hissab se dhal jana shi hai aur bhai i am damn sure ki koi bhi regular reader writer bhai se disappoint na hoga chahen vo koi bhi matter ho as vo itni awesome story likh rhe hain

kehna simple hai ki mujhe bhi bich mai story thodi odd lagi but ab time big picture ka hai toh aise mai kissi aur chis par dhyaan ja nhi skta believe me recent update phadne ke baad sala mai sapne mai soch rha tha ki ab AP kya karega???kaise vapas aayega??? kaise AMI yan baaki log usse handle karenge??? kya time aa gya hai 1.5 saal ke back ko batane ka???

well yeh sab issliye kaha maine kyunki ab story apne main plot par hai jo pichli bar bhi crime par tha aur ab bhi so i just can't wait BC ki aage kya hoga

well maine aise kuch toh nhi kaha jiss se koi offend ho but still agar mai kissi ki baat ko galat samjh bhetha hoon toh mujhe correct karen

YOUR FRIEND
...MATHUR

 

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[Black water]

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[Yuvi2890]

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[Raj142]

Aur kitna intzar kar na pdega bhai

 

[Baba Mechanchiii]

Still waiting bro.....

 

[Clasher]

UPDATE mangta hai bhai

 

[janu2016]

AP 316, Bhau aaj sham ka vaada tha

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