Thriller Waah! Life Ho Toh Aisi - All Hell Broke Loose (Completed)

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[AP 316]

Update-213(Done And Dusted)

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Main-Mereko woh guards se milna hai jinhone awaaj suni thi or body discover ki..

Anjali-Andar chalo tum main bulaake laati hun..

Main doobara andar aaya piche k gate se toh andar ab Keval Bhai, Jack, SP uncle, Jiya, Raajan, Anaa, Tara or unka Manager woh Mandeep he they.. Woh log sofas par baithey they..

Raajan-I mean jaruri thodi Hai Red John ki gang kaa he kaam ho koi or bhi toh ho shakta Hai.. I mean koi bhi kar shakta Hai ye toh lots of people are my enemies..

Main- Naa... Aisa konsa enemy hai aapka jo itana risk leke yahaan aaega woh bhi keval ek knife leke..itana sab risk planning wohi log kar shaktey hain then uppar se forensics ne confirm kardiya Hai...

Raajan-Then this is very bad..

Main-Yeah kind of..

SP-Ye hath mein kya lag gaya itani derr mein..?

Anjali-Deewar kudd k dekh raha tha kanch lag gaya..

Raajan-Deewar kyun kudd rahe they bhai..?

Anjali-Yahi dekhne k liye ki killer kaise aaya gaya hoga he is a practical person...

Main-Ye jo piche kaa room hai ye kiska hai..? First floor.. Balcony waala..

Raajan-Mera he hai..

Main - Then woh surely aapke liye he aaraha tha..

Raajan-Ofcourse agar aaya toh mere liye he aaya hoga or kiske liye aaega..

Main just abhi bolne waala Tha Anaa k liye bhi aa shakta Hai kyunki woh meri setting hai matlab kehne k liye.. Last time par chupp hogaya warna 1.0 ki love story start se pehle end hojaati.. And I think ki Red John itana chuttad aadmi nahi hai jo aise third person k piche bhejega apne Bandon ko..i am sure Raajan k liye he aaya hoga..

Anjali ne Mouka bhaanpa or bol paddi...

Anjali-Ye guards they AP...


Mere saamne 2 guards khadey they kaafi experienced they kyunki bhenchod itani purely situated body maine bahot Kam dekhi thi.. Uppar se bc full security uniform.. Hand placement gadgets wagairaah wagairaah..

Main-Good Morning Sir..

Guard1 &. 2-Very Good Morning Sir..

Main-So thodi walk karna passand karenge mere sath..

Guard1-Sure sir.. Why not..

Main-Perfect...

Main Anjali Jiya or Woh dono guards bahaar aaye..

Main-So mujhe puri details caahiye kya hua tha kya nahi.. Ek ek second ki details....

Guard1-So Sir humlog 4 guards they andar duty par main gate k pass... Main Or Ramesh (Jo Marra hua tha) dono shift kar rahe they or baaki 2 rest le rahe they.... Ab Sir Ramesh ko Shayad Peshaab karna tha ya fresh hona tha woh bola main aata hun kyunki humaara jo Washroom hai sir woh idhar hai piche he woh dekho wahaan..

Main-OK ok..

Guard1-issliye Sir woh chala gaya or main wahi chair par baitha tha.. Lekin kuch 2 he minute mein mujhe halki si awaaj aai.. Kya kahaa gaya kyun kahaa gaya uska koi hint nahi Milla sir issliye maine isse bulaaya Mahender ko (Guard2) jo rest leraha tha wahin par.. Ye mere sath utha maine bataaya ki kuch awaaj aai.. Ab aisi koi awaaj nahi thi jo darrne yaa daraane laayak ho simple conversation hoti hai waisa kuch tha.. Issliye humne bus check karne kaa socha issliye ye Mahender Idhar left side se torch leke nikala or Main right side se yaani udhar se nikala... Yahaan se Mahender ne Ramesh ko pukaaarna suru kiya lekin koi jawaab nahi aaya ab hum hue thode chokkaney guns nikaal Lee or maine Bluetooth par guards ko inform kiya toh wohlog bhi bahaar se or andar se sab aane lage humaari taraf tabtak hum dono ahista - 2 harr corner check kartey hue aage badhe or fir Mahender ko body milli thi sir or uske kuch seconds baad main aa he gaya tha sir..


Main-Body wagairaah kaise milli Mahender..

Mahender - Sir open mein he paddi thi toh torch jaise he gayi iske uppar toh turant millgayi koi halchal nahi thi sir body mein main pohancha tabtak Marr chuka tha Ramesh.. Uske baad sab fail gaye or police ko inform kiya gaya and then baaki sab aapke saamne hai sir..

Main-Toh aapne Yahaan se kissi ko kuddtey hue dekha..

Mahen-Ji nahi sir even jab hum suru mein Ramesh ko dhundatey hue aaye they tab humne ye bhi nahi notice kiya ki yahaan se fencing kaati gayi hai.. Woh toh baadmein dekha sir.. Kyunki uss time par Ramesh par focus tha..

Main-Ok ok..

Ye dono ki story kaafi sahi thi believe karne laayak mujhe kuch juth nahi lagi.. Or i dont think ye dono killers ho shaktey hain reason ye ki inki height actually kam hai killer se kyunki ghaav k according killer ki height 6"3-6"6 rahi hogi or uske hath lambe rahe Honge...then Ye jo fencing hai woh fresh kaati gayi hai like Kal he raatko woh bhi bahaar ki side se toh iska matlab koi andar aaya tha or gaya tha or I am 100% sure bhenchod inki height k hissab se yelog nahi Chadd paaenge iss deewar par or uppar se inka body weight jyaada he hai.. Uppar se inki story fully matching hai toh I don't think ye killer hain..

Main-OK ok.. Jaa shaktey ho tumlog...

Wohlog chale gaye wahaan se..


Main-Bahaar ki side se deewar check ki kissi ne..??

Anjali-Haan aake main he gayi thi first time kyunki bahot jaldi aagayi thi hum dono like call k 20 minutes baad he toh guards se pehle humlog he gaye they bahaar.. Deewar mein thoda si jagah Banaa rakhi hai bricks k bichmein jisase koi lohe ki Plate andar daal ke support liya jaa shake or uske uppar khadey hoke fencing kaati gayi thi shayad..

Main-Interesting.. Waapis chalein..

Anjali-Sure..

Main-by the way inke yahaan kuttey hotey they woh kidhar hain??

Anjali - Veterinary clinic mein Hain 1 week se food poisoning kaa issue tha toh treatment chal raha hai..

Main-achaa hua bc warna yahaan chutiya Katt jaata mera.

Ye bolke humlog lawn se he hotey hue bahaar ki side chal paddey.. Main gate par aae toh abhi police bahot Kam thi.. Humlog bahaar aaye or ghum k aaye deewar ki side.. Bungalow k Side mein jagah khaali thi Kaafi badi-2 ghass hogayi thi udhar well maintained thi lekin Gardner wagairaah kuch hoga.. Or subah k mossam ki sabse gandu cheej ye hoti hai ki ghass mein Osh( ओस)(Dew) kaafi hoti hai and I hate that I fucking hate that.. Uppar se Slippers mein tha main.. Lekin still ek Mast jump maarke main deewar k pass aaya jahaan se fence katti hui thi idhar light kam thi toh Anjali or Jiya phone ki light on kiye they.. Anjali ne sahi kahaa tha 2 brick k bich mein jo space hota hai usme lohe kaa kuch fansaaya gaya tha taaki uppar uthke woh fence Kaat shakke..smart plan.. Maine dekhi situation as expected idhar se bhi kudd k dekha maja nahi aaya bc..

Anjali-Tu fir hath naa katwaa liyo..

Main-Chal...

Humlog bungalow k gate ki side aaye toh wahaan jo constables or 1 SI mojjud tha unse baatein ki then andar aaye toh Abhi sab guards wahin khadey they or Raajan kuch instructions deraha tha unko total 6 guards they 3 jo andar they or 3 jo bahaar they.. Main unke pass se aage aaya..

Deva-What's the situation AP..

Main-A bhai guard kya naam hai tera..?

Guard3-Ji sir Aman...

Main-khadey - 2 laat maardega mereko...??

Aman-Wait what..??

Deva-AP..?

Main-What..? Mereko dekhna hai guards eligible hain yaa nahi..

Aman-Lag jaaegi sir aapko...

Main-uski chinta Matt Kar maar toh...

Raajan-AP this is not a joke..

Main - same here.. Jaldi karbe..

Woh banda piche hatta or mujhe laat maarni caahi jo gardan k pass takk pohanchi full speed maanana padega athletics hai banda.. Lekin maine uski taang pakkadi or chhod di..

Ye dekh main jor jor se hassne laga..

Main-You are so so so dumb so dumb.. Literally the dumbest criminals ever..

Aman-What..?

Main-I know tune maara hai uss Guard ko overacting ki jarurat nahi hai..

Ye sunke sab jhatke se khadey hue sabke munh khulke niche girrne ko hogaye....

Aman-What are you even talking about.. Main apni duty par tha bahaar..

Main-Chal jutha.. I know for a fact tu he killer hai. Tere gloves takk mill gaye bhai abhi unka dna hojaaega fir saamne aajaaega..pagal samjha hai kya..


Ab uss bandey ne jhatke se apni pistol nikaali or humlog kuch samjh paatey usase pehle Tara par jhapta woh or usko pakkadke uske piche khopdi par gun taan di.. Ye dekh sabki gand fatt gayi.. Jack ne turant bhai ko apne piche liya.. Anjali or Jiya ne SP uncle or Anaa ko piche kiya... Mandeep (Raajan kaa manager) ne Raajan ko cover kiya or baaki guards ne uss guard k uppar gun taani.. Raajan Anaa or Mandeep ko bhayanak jhatka laga tha..

Raajan- Aman what are you doing... Please... Leave her ill do anything you want..

Aman-Back - 2 stay away from me I'll kill her...

Main-Thanks for confirming me.. Kya faayda???

Aman-I will kill her..?

Main-Kyun lekin?? Kaahe??chain of Command toddoge apna..? Tareeka badloge..? Apni spirit bhoolgaya aise harr kissi ko thodi maarega tu..

Aman-Nahi stay away.. Agar koi humaare mission k bich mein aata hai toh woh caahe koi ho usse maar shaktey hain hum.. Or humein code Matt seekhaa AP tune mere sab sathiyon ko aise he maara hai..

Main-Debatale...Keh shaktey hain..

Tara-P. P. Please..


Main-Abe uss bechari ki gardan toh chhod de Marr jaegi.. Fir itani goliyaan maarunga main tujhe ki soch nahi shakta tu..

Ussne gardan par pakkad dheeli ki..


Main-I mean caahta kya hai tu?? Yahaan se Jaana??? Kahaan jaaega??? Pehchaan gaya hun tujhe Paataal se bhi dhund nikaalunga tujhe... uppar se Insab k baad Red John accept nahi karega tujhe Infact tujhe dekhtey he khud maardega woh.. Tujhe toh maalum he hona caahiye ye sab..

Aman-Toh tu konsa jinda chhodega mujhe..

Anjali-Ofcourse chhodenge tum Tara ko chhod k surrender kardo hum puri tarah cooperate karenge tumhaare sath bus tum humaari help karo hum Tumhaari karenge....

Aman-Main kuch nahi bataane waala tumlogon ko..

Main-chal tu kuch Bataana bhi nahi teri information caahiye bhi nahi bus surrender kardey tu..

Aman-I don't trust you or marrne se darr nahi lagta mujhe... Ek baar jo kaam liya hai woh agar nahi kiya toh marrna manjuur hai mujhe..


Main-Toh tujhe kya caahiye..? Tara ko maarke faayda kya agar tujhe marrna he hai toh befaltu saari life jo Naam kamaaya hai usko dubaalega..

Aman-i don't care.. A Raajan teri beti ki Jaan baksh dunga tere badle.. Saamne aa...

Raajan-ok ok... Please usse kuch Matt karna...

Tara-N.. Nnahi papap.... Nooo..

Mandeep-Nahi sir... No..

Ye bol Mandeep ne Raajan ko pakad liya..

Raajan-Let me go Mandeep..

Main-Ek minute ek minute Kamaal kartey ho yaar ye family drama ki jarurat he kya hai.. Sun bhai Aman I mean jo bhi real naam hai tera.. Dekh Raajan sir ko maardega tu ok maan liya..? Lekin faayda kya..? Tu toh marrega he..

Aman-Mujhe farak nahi padta.. Ek baar aga kaam pura hojaae bus.. Yaa fir Deva ko maarunga..

Jack-Iss taraf gun bhi nahi karna majaak mein bhi nahi kyunki I don't care tere pass hostage hai yaa nahi...dont even try bro..


Main--Ok i have a better deal for you.. Sun Raajan ok Governor of Haryana Raajypaal hain big deal i know then Deva Partaap Singh.. Ok big deal North India kaa sabse bada cehra 1 minute agar socha jaaye toh nahi Deva bhai ko nahi maarna caahta tu nope Tumhaari list mein he nahi hai bhai kaa naam toh ye befaltu mujhe uljhaane k liye try bhi naa kar bhai kaa naam .. Rahi baat Raajan sir ki toh theek hai governor hai.. Lekin mere pass usase bhi better Person hai tere liye..

Aman-Usse marrna he hoga.. He must die.. He should die and he will die.. I will kill him I don't care main nahi toh koi or maarega usko lekin maarega jarur..

Main-Oh shit iska matlab tujhe usase important naam nahi caahiye.. Jisko tapkaa shakta Hai Tu..


Aman-kon???

Main--Main be or kon..

Deva-AP no...

Ami-Bro don't even try turning your gun on AP.. I will open your skull in a heartbeat... AP ki taraf dekhna bhi nahi..

Main-Chill chill .. Guns niche karo tumlog put your guns down..


Main-Haan Tu Sun be Merese bada Naam kiska lega tu..?mujhe maarke marrega toh Even Red John teri din raat Pooja karega.. Sotey jaagtey tera ehsaan nahi chukka paaega woh.. Soch k dekh Tere Bhagwaan kaa sabse bada kaanta nikaal shakta Hai Tu ek second mein... Soch k dekh think.. literally maine tere 6 bhai bandhuon ko tapkaa diya like brutally.. Marrtey time woh sab k sab yahi bole they ki mere sathi humaara badla lenge... I mean 6 k 6 k last words yahi they.. Bechaare kitane tadap-2 k marre they tu imagine bhi nahi kar shakta bhai sahaab.. Saari hawa nikal gayi thi unki.. Serial killers legendary serial killers blah blah blah last mein bus ek dead body they woh... Ahahahaha.. I am so sick dude.. Mujhe maarke jab tu uppar narak mein jaaega tab tere friends jo tera wait kar rahein hai woh kitane khuss honge soch unke killer ko maarke aaya tu.. Tara.? Uss bechari mein kya nikaalega tu..? Usko theek se ye naa maalum ki Red John kon hai.. Shakal dekh bechari kitani cute hai.. Dum hai toh mujhe maar dekh sabki guns bhi niche hain abhi toh.. Yaa tu bhi kaayar hai tere baaki 6 doston k jaise yaa kuttey ki mout he passand hai tujhe bhi unki tarah..???

Aman-You Bastardddddd.d.d.d..d

Ye sunke Woh gusse mein fadfadaaya or meri taraf karne laga gun ab main thehra kutta aadmi mera toh hath he meri gun par tha main manipulate kar raha tha usko... Uski khopaddi k sath khel raha tha.. Ab uski gun hatti Tara se or Tara k gardan k around hoke meri taraf aane lagi... Lekin Again main thehra god like reflexes waala banda.. Maine seconds mein nikaali gun or uska hath meri taraf ho paata usase pehle meri deagle ki goli uski khopaddi mein jaa dhansi or woh girra piche ki taraf.. Bhenchod pura hall gunnj utha deagel ki awaaj se.. Tara ki gand fatt gayi.. Ussne Aanw dekha naa taanw bhaagke mere Galle se lipat gayi.. Woh puri kaanp rahi thi bc.. Mout ko chuu k aagayi thi woh.. Uski heartbeat mujhe meri body par feel horahi thi itani Darri hui thi woh..

Main-Its ok its ok.. Ananya...

Anaa bhaagke meri taraf aai..

Main-Take her away...

Anaa usko Leke ek corner mein chali gayi.. Or baaki sab abhi bhi barf k maafik Jamme khadey they...

Continued..

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[AP 316]

Update-214(How???)


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Raajan-How..? Kaise pata chala tumhe..? Itana jaldi..?

Main-Yahi toh kaam Hai mera sir.. Hua kya actually suruwaat se bataata hun.. Actually jab ye guard ne bataaya ki ussne Ramesh yaani jo maara gaya uss guard ki awaaj suni jo awaaj darri hui yaa fir shocked nahi thi normal awaaj thi.. Iska matlab ye hua ki wahaan usse jo koi bhi Milla tha usse woh jaanta tha yaani ye confirm tha ki killer aap he ki team mein se koi hai.. Ab option tha keval ek kyunki Police waale sab yahaan lambe time se they issliye woh nahi ho shaktey they yaani bache aapke private guards unmein se jo andar they woh ho nahi shaktey they kyunki wohlog apni jagah par he they.. Yaani bache bahaar waale 3 guards ab main gaya bahaar ki side jahaan ghass wagairaah hai or mitti gilli thi.. Tab mujhe wahaan dikhe shoes k nishaan then main waapis andar aaya police guards se baat ki toh unhone mujhe bataaya ki andar se awaaj aai toh sablog turant andar aaye lekin ye jo bhaisahaab hain ye last mein pohanchey.. Then jab ye yahaan aaye toh maine Isko laat maarne ko kahaa tab maine iska shoe dekha jiske niche halki halki mitti or ghass laga tha or police k according abhi takk deewar k uss side koi guard nahi gaya lekin ye bhai saab k pairon mein toh full saboot tha uske baad last saboot mujhe Milla jab maine iski pant dekhi ghutano k uppar se toh wahaan color laga tha halka saa bilkul halka ussne saaf karliya tha woh lekin still thoda bahot color laga tha jo tab laga jab woh andar se deewar kuddke bhaaga..bus fir kya tha baaki sab aapke saamne hai..

Mandeep-Lekin woh gloves kaa kya jo Milla tumhe..

Main-Konse gloves mujhe koi gloves naa Mille woh toh bus usse uljhaane k liye kaha maine.. Gloves 100% pehney they ussne maartey time apne pass rakhega nahi surely fainke yaa chupaaye he honge maine chaara daala kutta sunghta hua aagaya..

Raajan - You are something else AP...

Main-I know don't worry..


Niche forensic wagairaah waale aagaye toh Raajan Humein leke uppar ek room mein aaya..

Uss Room mein Main, Bhai, Anjali, Jack, Jiya, Ami, Raajan, Mandeep Or SP uncle mojjud they..

Raajan-Dekhiye Deva ji subah hotey he logon ko pata chalna suru hoga ki kya hua bahot badi situation hone waali hai usase kaise nipatana hai ye aapse better koi nahi jaanta..

Deva-Don't worry main dekhlunga ye Sab aap bus family k sath rahein don't worry.. Aapke private guards sab hataadiye jaaenge or aaj raat takk mere personal guards unki jagah lelenge uske baad aapko chinta karne ki koi baat nahi hai..

Raajan-Lekin kabtak Deva ji kabtak..? I mean I know ki AP and team steady progress kar rahi hai John k case mein uske Sathi Marr rahein hain Lekin aise kabtak uske sathi he marrtey rahenge kab usse pakkada jaaega..? Or Agar tabtak derr hogayi toh??

Main-Nahi hogi.. Woh main dekhlunga...aap bus safe rahiye.. Shyaam takk ki he baat hai uske baad Guards aajaaenge... Unhone kahaa hai ki woh nahi toh koi or maarega aapka marna jaruri hai blah blah.. So aap number 1 priority hain filhaal..

Raajan- Ussi kaa toh darr hai ab toh aisa lagta hai hum kissi ko trust bhi nahi kar shaktey..

Deva-Humaare Bandon par aap mujhse jyaada bharosa kar shaktey ho..

Raajan-Lekin woh toh raat takk aaenge tabtak kya..? Mujhe meri betiyon or meri Maa ki chinta hai naaki khudki...

Deva-Chinta matt kijiye Jaisa AP ne kahaa ki aap filhaal no. 1 priority hain toh raat takk AP rukkjaaega yahaan par aapki security k liye..

Main-Wait what the fuck..? Main kyun..?

Deva-raat takk ki he baat hai we don't want any problems..

Main-Lekin main kyun..?

Anjali-AP rukkjaaega no problem at all..

Jiya-Yep.. Or usase better aapko kuch mill bhi nahi shakta..

Main-Can i talk to you guys for a second..

Ye bolke Main Jiya Bhai or Anjali bahaar aaye..

Main-What the fuck is wrong with you guyss main kyun rukkunga..

Anjali-Jyaada maska Matt laga we know you like Anaa and you Want to protect her issiliye bola humne..

Main-Wait what..?

Deva- koi nahi koi nahi sharma raha hai no problem araam se rukk Jaana.. Take good care of her...

Ye bolke bhai Andar chale gaye waapis.. What the fuck is wrong with these people.. Oh wait fuck.. Anaa AP ki setting hai.. Issiliye bhenchod aise react kar rahe hain yelog..

Main-Okk rukkjaaunga..

Or jaise he ye word mere munh se nikala main samjh gaya ki 1.0 100% mere dimag mein active hai kahin naa kahin.. Kyunki ye mera decision nahi tha no fucking way main kissi or k ghar rukkunga aise.. Fuck me dude.. Ye bolke woh log bhi andar chale gaye.. Main bahaar he rukka bore nahi hona tha andar 2 minutes baad mujhe pairon ki awaaj sunaai di piche mudda toh Anaa khaddi thi..

Anaa-AP..?

Main-Yeah hello..

Anaa-Can I talk to you for a second...

Main-Sure..

Ye bolke woh uss room k saamne waale room mein leke aai mujhe Tara bhi wahin thi Ek chair par baithi thi kambal odh k woh abhi bhi kaanp rahi thi..

Anaa-Thank You So so so much for all this AP..

Main-No problem at all..

Anaa-tumne apni life khatre mein daali di k liye..

Main-Frankly speaking mujhe maalum tha mujh takk nahi pohanch paaega woh..

Anaa-But still tumne risk liya..

Main-Kind of.. What happened to her???

Main Tara ki taraf ishaara kartey hue bola..

Anaa-Di is scared as hell.. She doesn't like to see people get hurt or else..

Ye bolke main Tara k saamne baitha.. Maine uski aankhon se aankhein milaai..

Main-Let me tell you something I am good at.. You know ye sab rona dhona darrke baith Jaana blah blah.. This is just straight up bullshit.. Specially aaj k time mein jab harr minutes log marrtey hain.. He tried to kill you so I killed him as simple as that.. There is nothing to be scared of.. Thats How Karma works.. And now it depends on you that how tough of a person you are.. Iss time mein you are supposed to take care of your sister and your grandmother.. Balki yahaan opposite horaha hai ye Tumhaari care kar rahi hai...

Tara-I. I. Can't erase his face from my mind.. Uska cehra mere saamne baar-2 aaraha hai..

Main-Mast idea deta hun.. Uske face ki jagah tum apne papa kaa face imagine karo woh bhi dead.. Then tumhe realise hoga agar woh nahi marrta toh uski jagah tumhe apne papa kaa face dikhta yaa fir Anaa kaa woh phsyco tha kuch bhi kar shakta tha.. Remember one thing "You have to face your fears Face them like you own them"... Mujhe ye baat seekhne k liye apna sab kuch gawaana padda tha literally everything my family, my friends, my life sabkuch chhodna padda tha mujhe 1.5 saal takk tumhe toh 1 minute mein samjhaa raha hun.. Samjh jaao it'll be good for you and your family..


Main aage kuch bolta usase pehle Ami andar aagayi..

Ami-Boss you are staying here..

Main--no i am not..

Ami-Yes you are.. You need to provide them security jabtak guards nahi aajatey..

Main-Nope..you can stay here..

Ami-I have trouble understanding hindi so I'll be unable to make contact with other guards and police so you have to stay with me..

Tara-AP please stay please..

Ab ye dekho bakchodi hai khair jo hai so hai.. Thoda kaam bhi nipat jaaega.. Cool cool cool..

Main-OK..

Tara - Thank-you so much..

Main-Welcome..

Ye bolke main bahaar aaya toh Bhai wagairaah Sab nikal rahe they..

Main-Me and Ami will stay..

Deva-Great.. Take care sabkuch set karke aana..

Main-Sure..

30 minutes takk main or Ami bahaar ghumrahe they sab check kar rahe they tabtak andar saaf safaai chal rahi thi..

Ami-So what's the plan?

Main-nothing much kuch samjh nahi aaraha ussi ko process kar raha hun..

Ami-wait tumhe kya lagta hai ye case solve nahi hua..

Main-I don't think so abhi bhi koi toh hai idhar.. Kuch toh hai.. Something is missing...

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Iss writer ne 2015 se stories likhi he, xossip contest me winner reh chuka, iske stories baki legendary writers padh ke isse bhi bade reviews dete aaye he. And all of the above he DOES NOT HAVE TIME to reply even his commenters.
Baki stories me aisa kai baar dekha he ke kese koi writer views badhane ke liye khud he 2ri id use kar ke comments karta he (yes we know that, we're the admin team.) Aur ham cross check tak kar sakte he ke kiski kaun si alias id he, kitni alias id he etcetera etcetera.
Bina wajah ke writer pe ilzaam na lagao, story padho, reviews do, Demotivate usko kar sakte jiski motivation dusre hote he, is insan ki motivation wo khud he, tum kya Demotivate karoge

Arre wah prabhu jo ham nahi dhundh paaye wo aap ne dhundh liya aap to mahaaan ho
Point pe aata hu, iss forum pe 2018 se aise kai members jo sirf iss story ke 2nd part ke join hue the. Mere pm box me 100+ PM's he jisme members Waah life ho to aisi 1st part ke pdf maangte the.
There are hundreds of members who just joined forum because of one story, they just come when get notifications of update on what's app or xf and they read updates, they give their response and then they gone !
This is how it works.
Hope you have understood this.

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