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Thriller Waah! Life Ho Toh Aisi - The Merchant Of Death ( COMPLETED )

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Nadan Dill

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Update-262(2.0)

Main bata nahi shakta tha ki how great i was feeling.. I was finally totally free after a long long time.. Maine apni typical angadaai lee and then ye situation samjhne laga ki yahaan hua kya.. Piche mudda toh Chang or Ami apne ghutano par they.. Mere ishare se woh khaddey hue..

Main-Arjun?? Tu hai??

Arjun-yy. Y.. Yee. Ess..

Main-First things first maine thodi derr pehle jo bola woh sab bhull jaa 1% chance bhi nahi hai tum mein se kissi k jinda bachne kaa. I am about to kill all of you right here right now..

Arjun-TT. Tt. Tum...

Main-Yeah the one and only.. Lets go let's finish this quick.. Kya deal di thi maine tumhe??

Chang-Fight you vs 3 of them.. If they win well woh hoga nahi so bataake kya faayda..

Main-Exactly.. So here you go..

Maine Apna ek chaaku Arjun ko diya woh le nahi raha tha maine jaan bujh k uske hath mein diya chaaku.. Chang ne apna ek chaaku Pawan ko or Dusara Omar ko diya... Ab Pawan or Arjun wahin thehre rahe wohlog maano marr gaye they wahin.. Lekin Omar aage aaya obviously usse nahi pata tha yahaan kya chal raha hai iske baap ko jarur pata hai lekin isko nahi bataya lagta hai... Omar 6"6 feet kaa ek hatta katta banda tha woh mere saamne aaya..

Omar-You.. You fucking ruined months of my planning.. You will pay for this..

Main-Interesting.. Ok make me pay..

Ye sun ussne chaaku se Pehla waar kiya mere galle k Uppar jisase main bahot easily bacha uske waar karne se pehle predict karliya tha maine. Again ussne waar kiya main again bacha..

Main - Ye kaam nahi karega..

Omar-What??

Main-Tu piche meri shotgun uthana caah raha hai
. Nahi pohanchey dunga wahaan takk not a fucking chance..

Ye sun uska munh khull gaya..

Main - Don't worry i know i am smart.. I can see right through you..

Iss bich ussne chaaku fir chalaaya abki baar mere chesr ki taraf lekin main fir piche hatt kar easily bachgaya..

Main-You don't understand?? I can see your future do something unpredictable.. Come on..

Ye sun ussne mujhe laat maarni caahi jisase fir bacha main..

Main-Ok you are wasting my time..

Ye bolke maine maari usko laat uske pait mein, ab ussne woh laat expect karli thi but itani speed se laat aaegi ye expect nahi ki thi woh piche ko hua and then gusse mein mujhpar jhapta lekin bhull gaya tha ki chaaku hai mere pass jo hath aage laa raha tha usspar he cut diya maine usko jisase woh chilaaya..

Main-Anger doesn't help.. Never, unless it is me who is angry..

Ye sun abki baar woh chaaku leke aage badha but main again bacha..

Main-Told you..You are just wasting my time..

Ye bolke main jhapta uske Uppar pehle waar se woh bacha piche hattke but same speed se mera dusara waar hua jisase bachna toh durr react takk naa kar paaya woh or chaaku ghonp diya maine uske pait mein uski cheekh andar he bandh hogayi and turant he maine chaaku nikaala uske pait se and then again ghonp diya and again nikala and again ghonp diya ye maine tabtak kiya jabtak uski body se saari jaan chaaku k sath bahaar naa aagayi total 11 baar to be precise.. Mera pura right hand khoon se bharr gaya tha.. Ab uski dead body girri niche jisse dekh Pawan or Arjun kaa darr or badh gaya..

Main-Come on lets go itana time nahi hai.. Hurry the fuck up..

Arjun-Ww. W. E don't want to fight.. Just kill us.

Main-What the fuck do you mean just kill us i am not running a fucking charity here.. Lets go.

Arjun-No... No.. Humein ek gun dedo we'll just shoot ourselves..

Main-Oh Hell No..You can't just commit suicide in front of me itani easy death bhi deserve nahi kartey tumlog..

Pawan - Please.. Please.. Let us be..

Main - No No No.. You have to fight.. You have to.. Listen to me tujhe ek chance deta hun. Kyunki main ab tujhe maarunga toh trust me maine tere betey ko dekha hai garam khopdi kaa hai woh i know for a fact woh badla lene aaega mere piche or ye baat tujhe bhi pata hai woh aaj nahi toh kal aaega he.. But tujhe ye bhi pata hai ki he doesn't stand a chance in front of me. Isliye tere pass mouka hai abhi kill me i know you cant but try toh karna padega tere betey ki jindagi kaa sawaal hai tum dono k toh fir bhi chance hain mere against lekin tere betey kaa kya?? Usko itani bhayanak mout dunga main ki tu soch bhi nahi shakta..

Pawan-You bastardddd..

Ye bol woh chaaku leke aage badha and main hansa because my manipulation was successful. Ab gussa bhalla kiss kaam ka woh bhaagta hua aage aaya mujhe chaaku maarna caaha ussne jisase main side mein hoke bacha but mere chaaku se woh nahi bach paaya kyunki uska dhyaan keval mujhe maarne par tha bachne par nahi maine chaaku seedha uske pait mein ghonp diya ek dum on point woh wahin par freeze hogaya uske hath se chaaku niche girra ye dekh Arjun bhaaga meri taraf but maine maara usse chaaku faink k or woh chaaku itane pace se gaya ki uski chest mein jaake dhanss gaya Arjun kaa munh khull gaya or woh wahin girra apne ghutano par.. Arjun se kuch nahi caahiye tha mujhe uske pass khone ko kuch nahi tha usse maarne mein mujhe kuch nahi millne waala tha so why waste my time bhenchod issliye maine chaaku faink k maara usko.. Then maine Pawan kaa chaaku uthaaya woh khadda - 2 kaanp raha tha bechara..Maine uska munh pakad k uppar kiya..

Main-Dekh, look me in my eyes.. Ye shaitaan ki aankhein hain samjha you can't just kill me you don't have a fucking chance.. Ab tere betey k sath bhi aisa he karunga main usse kuttey ki mout maarunga..

Ye sun ussne mujhe maarne k liye apna hath uthaya lekin maine woh chaaku uske shoulder mein ghonp diya woh bhayanak chilaaya or piche hattne laga or piche jaake deewar se satt gaya..

Main-What happened?? Dard hua?? Rukk dard kam kardeta hun..

Ye bolke maine chaaku khinch k nikala jisase or dard hua usse and agle he pall maine woh chaaku uske pait mein ghonp diya woh fir chilaaya but jaise he maine chaaku waapis nikala uska chilaana bandh hua but then maine woh chaaku se uske galle par cut diya ab woh apne ghutano par aake girra or piche deewar se satt kar padda reh gaya.. Or dekhtey he dekhtey ussne dum todd diya.. Oh i love it i love it..


Ye bolke main Arjun ki taraf mudda jo apne ghutano par baitha vibrate horaha tha kyunki uski chaati mein ek chaaku dhansa hua tha main uske pass aaya or niche baitha..

Main-You know what was your biggest mistake?? Trying to hurt my family.. This was your biggest mistake you fucked up you fucked up bad.. Teri moutt kaa countdown ussi din suru hogaya tha jab tune mere bhai ko maarne ki supari lee you were dead at that moment.. Or tu caahta tha main tujhe ashaan mout dun?? Haan?? Le ashaan moutt deta hun tujhe..

Ye bolke maine woh chaaku uski gardan par rakha pressure lagaaya but jyaada nahi.. And then ek dum precisely uska galla kaat diya woh kuch nahi kar paaya or piche ko girr padda.. Uski aankhon se aanshu nikal gaye..

Main-Don't worry marra nahi hai tu abhi 30 seconds hain tere pass lekin 30 seconds mein tu itana dard mehsoos karega ki marrne se pehle tu baar baar marrega.. You can't do anything you have to die.. You will die...

Or agle 30 seconds maine ussko marrtey hue dekha struggle kartey hue dekha tadaptey hue dekha.. Woh hillna caah raha tha but hill nahi paa raha tha woh sans lena caah raha tha but theek se sans bhi nahi le paa raha tha woh marrna caah raha tha lekin khudse marr bhi nahi shakta tha woh and finally tadaptey-2 uski body se uski jaan nikal gayi.. Oh my god this is good.. Ye nasha, there is nothing like this.. Nothing..

Main-No one hurts My family and lives..

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Nick bhi nikal gaya wahaan se ab wahaan bache Main Randy Chang Ami and Rose Norman Bovice and Sara..

Bovice - Finally finally.. Oh i liked that entrance..

Main unke saamne jukha and uske baad Norman Bovice and Sara teeno aake mujhse galle mille..

Norman - You came back..

Main-Aana padda, no one hurts my family and lives and you guys are my family..

Bovice -You Are by far the most loyal person i have ever seen..

Norman-You look angry very very angry what happened??

Main-Let's not talk about that.. So what's happening i need details from start to end..

Bovice - Uppar baithke baat kartey hain..

Hum sab uppar ek room mein aae and sofas par baith gaye.. Oh i miss this place..

Main-So talk to me..

Bovice - So ye suru hua jab main league k 3 respected retired members se meeting kar raha tha AK, Shane and Brian.. Remember them??

Main-Oh yeah mere saamne ek sath retire hue they teeno..

AK, Shane and Brian teeno he league k old members hain 55-60 age hogi teeno ki and teeno he retired hain lekin jab Bovice ko advice ki jarurat hoti hai woh unse milne chala jaata hai yaa unhe yahaan bula leta hai..

Bovice - So meeting k baad humne dinner kiya Brian kaa fast tha toh ussne dinner nahi kiya Main Ak or Shane dinner kar rahe they ab poison khaane mein tha mujhe bichmein feel hua toh maine Ak or Shane ko roukka and thankfully humlog theek time par rukk gaye warna you know i was dead.. So hum teeno he directly coma mein chale gaye uske baad mujhe hosh aagaya kuch weeks pehle but Shane or Ak still coma mein hain..Mere coma mein jaane k baad kya hua woh Randy sahi se bata shakta hai..

Randy-Yeah. So Ab obviously shakk sabse pehle Brian k uppar jaaega and dusara number tha chef kaa jissne khaana banaaya tha..

Main-Oh you dumbass.. Brian ne 35 Saal spent kiye hain yahaan tujhe kya lagta hai usse ye karna hota toh woh fast kaa bahaana banaata?? Usse pata tha seedha shakk uske Uppar he jaaega.. No way.

Randy-But dusara koi option nahi tha..

Main-Chef?? Maybe maybe.. Mujhe millna hai unse.. Chef and Brian dono se..

Randy-Hospital mein hain woh..

Main-Torture kiya unko??

Rose - Yeah..

Main-Bol shaktey hain??

Randy-Little bit..

Main-Let's go then..

Humlog uthe wahaan se sab k sab and chale bahaar ki taraf..

Norman - What about your brother he alright??

Main-Yeah he'll be out of coma sooner or later..

Bovice - Good to hear..

Main-By the way Pankaj Pandey ne aapka order nahi maana boss... Aapne mana kiya tha ki do not touch my family but he still did..Or Ye matt bolna usse hit milli thi?? Kyunki ye aapko bhi pata hai hit most probably fake thi..

Norman -I know he shouldn't have done that.. I'll..

Main-Oh aap chinta matt karo i got him.. I'll erase him from existence once i am done here..

Rose-That's the AP i like.. Straight to business..

Main-Shut up..

Humlog bahaar aaye toh hospital saamne he tha main nervous tha kyunki wahaan Niharika hogi or Kevin ki death k baad mere or Niharika k relations kaafi kharaab he rahe hain..As i mentioned earlier Kevin Niharika kaa bhai tha. Isliye main bahaar he rukk gaya..

Norman-You'll be fine come on.. Niharika might not be here..

Norman ne pakkad liya mujhe again he is just better.. Maine Norman ko ghurra and ussne bina bole he mujhe bahot kuch samjha diya he just knows..

Main-Yeah..

Humlog andar aaye hospital mein as usual patients doctor bahot they wahaan par.. Rose humein leke uppar ek room mein aai jahaan bed par ek patient tha uska pura sareer mummy ki tarah pattiyon and plaster se bharra tha.. Keval uska munh theek tha ye tha Chef jo Town hall mein kaam karta tha.. Main janta tha isko. Bahot jyaada torture kiya gaya tha isko.. Mujhe dekhtey he woh halchal karne laga bolne ki koshish karne laga lekin uske munh par oxygen mask laga tha jiski wajah se woh bol nahi paaya or hath uske tuttey hue they so hata woh shakta nahi tha..

Main-Don't worry i know tum innocent ho you'll be fine don't worry.. You'll be fine..

Ye bolke main bahaar aaya or mere sath-2 baaki sab bahaar aae..

Main-He is innocent..

Randy-How do you know that??

Main-Because i am not stupid like you.. Isko kitane saal se janta hai tu??

Randy - like almost forever. jyada baat cheet nahi but humesaa he milta raha hun isase..

Main-Yeah. Toh ye bhi jaanta hoga ki kitana bada darpok hai ye tune isko itana torture kiya agar isse pata hota kuch toh ye abtak 1000 baar tujhe bata chuka hota...Like i dont know how dumb you can be..

Randy-Rose ne torture kiya not me..

Main-You both are dumb.. Brian kahaan hai??

Rose-Idhar..but woh half paralysed hai..

Humlog 2-3 rooms chhodke aage aaye toh wahaan ek bed par almost same haalat mein tha ek 54-55 saal kaa aadmi ye tha Brian.. Brian mujhe bahot ache se jaanta hai or ye prove tab ho gaya jab mujhe dekhtey he woh pura kaanpney laga usase connected machines sound karne lagi woh bolna caah raha tha but again oxygen mask tha uske munh k uppar bhi.. Tab Ek nurse or Niharika bhaagte hue wahaan aae.

Niharika-what haaaaaaaa.....

Niharika k words bichmein he rukk gaye kyunki ussne mujhe dekh liya wahaan woh wahin par blank hogayi.. Uski aankhon mein almost aanshu agaye they but ussne aane nahi diye mujhe apna sab maanti thi woh she is family to me i know humaare relations theek nahi they but still the bond we shared was unmatchable.. Woh bahot khuss thi mujhe wahaan dekh k but again ussne show nahi kiya but maine padh liya usko..

Niharika-What happened here..?

Bovice-AP is here to meet Brian..

Niharika - I don't think Brian koi help kar paaega.. Uski lower body 90% paralysed hai uski jaw broken hai toh he can't speak properly.

Lekin iss bich Brian ne apna pura dum lagaake apne left hand se woh oxygen mask thoda saa hataya or badbadaane laga...

Nurse-How is this even possible??

Niharika-Fear.. Fear makes you do things that you don't want to do..

He was scared of me usse pata tha main kya karunga aage. Jaise main Bovice k darr se Coma se bahaar aaya tha wahi yahaan hua ye toh coma mein bhi nahi tha. Humlog Brian k pass gaye uski baat samjhne k liye..

Brian-Pppppleasse. E. E. I. Iii... I ammmm.. Iiiinnncent..

Main-I know you are innocent.. I know trust me..

Brian-Ppp. P. P pp please d. D. D. Don't hurtt... Mmmmyyy ffffffammmmmilyyyy...

Main - Why would i hurt your family i know you are innocent.. I am not joking i know you are innocent.. I won't do anything to you i promise.. Just get well soon..

Ye sun Brian ki aankhon mein aanshu aagaye..

Brian-Ii.... I. I... Am ss. S. S. S. Cared of you...

Main-I know everyone is..

Brian-I.. Wasssss... Waitiiiing... Forrrrrr... Youuuu.... I.... Knew. W. W. W. W..... You wwwwwillllll ppppppprove mmememem.Me innocent ..N.n.now iiiiii caaannnn ddieeee peacefully..

Ye thi loyalty League ki loyalty marrtey time bhi log league kaa hokar he marrna caahtey they.. Loyalty runs deep in The League..

Main-Marroge nahi tum you'll be fine...

Brian-T.. Tt. T. Hannkkkkyyyyyouuuu...

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Update-266(Got'em)

Brian se milke humlog bahaar nikale..

Randy-Let ne guess he is also innocent..

Main-What happened to you guys?? Let me guess Bovice ko kuch hua toh tum bhokla gaye samjh mein nahi aaya kya karein and tumne pagalon ki tarah jo aage aaya usko lapet liya. Kyunki i know for a fact tum dono itane bewkuff nahi they kabhi..

Randy-Yeah kind of...

Main-Boss aap kahaan they??

Norman-Berlin..

Main-Tabhi toh, inko samjhaane waala koi tha nahi you dumb fucking idiot Randy..

Bovice - Now??

Main-Now let's meet AK and Shane..

Randy-Woh dono coma mein hain unka kya karna hai??

Ispar maine Randy ko ghurra..

Randy - Ok lets go..

Humlog ek floor niche aaye and ek room mein enter hue jo normal rooms se bada tha and uske andar 2 beds they jinke uppar Shane or Ak ko rakha gaya tha.. Dono he coma mein they Bovice k sath he gaye they yelog coma mein.. Wahaan ek male doctor mojjud tha already Niharika bhi humaare sath he aai wahaan..

Main-What's the situation doctor..

Ye sun doctor ne mujhe dekha and sabki tarah uska bhi same shocking reaction milla mujhe...

Doctor-They both are in a coma poison ki wajah se inko ek stroke aaya jissne inko coma mein bhej diya it's hard to recover from an stroke induced coma.. Ab ye aapko sun shaktey hain samjh shakte hain but kuch react nahi kar shaktey..

Main pehle Ak k pass gaya or uske kaan mein jaake aaram se bola...

Main-I know you did it i'll prove it and then I'll hurt you in ways you can't even imagine.. After that I'll go after your family I'll find them and I will make there life a living hell and then I will just kill them..

Ispar Ak k left side lagi ek machine beep - 2 karne lagi and 2 seconds mein he rukk gayi..

Main-Kya hua isko??

Doctor-He tried to respond to you. 0.5% react kartey hain ye pain and shock k Uppar..

Ab main aaya Shane k pass or uske kaan mein bola..

Main-I know you did it you son of a bitch and i will prove it and then I'll hurt you in ways even you can't imagine.. After that I will find your family and i will make there life living hell and then I'll give them the most painful death possible..

Iske baad Shane se lagi machines beep karne lagi i dont know konsi kyunki wahaan bahot saari machines thi.. Abki baar machines beep - 2 he karti rahi..

Doctor-What are you doing??

Main-Kya hua isko??

Doctor - His brain is trying to Conway the message but is unable to..

No no no there is something wrong here something is not adding up here.. Something fishy is going on here.. Maine room kaa jaayjaa liya medicines and machines k alawa wahaan kuch nahi tha.. Main 2 minutes takk wahan khadda raha..

Randy - You ok..

Oh fuck it all make sense now it all does...Oh it does..
Main apne dimag se bahaar nikala and uss doctor ko ghurra maine..

Doctor - What??

Ye sun maine usse ek smile di and ussi second ussne apne hath mein liya injection mujhe maarna caaha lekin maine uska hath pakada apne left hand se and right hand se uski gardan ko dabocha or usse piche deewar se satta diya..

Main-I am smarter..

Maine usska galla jorr se dabaya uska dum ghutne laga usske hath se woh injection niche girra tab maine usko chhoda or woh khaanstey hue niche girra..

Bovice - What is happening?? AP??

Main - Here i present to you the First culprit and the second culprit boss... Shane and this doctor..

Ye sun sabke munh khull gaye..

Randy-What??

Main-Yeah.. Actual mein Shane coma mein hai he nahi.. I mean coma mein hai woh but khudse nahi ye doctor usse rakh raha hai coma mein drugs deke..

Sab-What??

Main-Yeah.. Ye dekho ye jo dawaai hai jiska injection diya jaata hai dono ko he ye dono ki bottles toh same hai but Shane ki bottle expired date ki hai almost 2 saal Pehle expire ho chuki hai ye dawaai shocking right?? Kyunki ye original bottle hai he nahi. And then bahaar se tumlog dekh nahi shaktey but bottle ko open karke dekho toh dono mein dawaai he alag hai or drugs se itana familiar toh hun main ki smell se difference bata shakun ye dono ko alag - 2 dawaai di jaa rahi hai same bottle mein.Farak sirf itana hai Ak ko Coma se nikaalne ki dawaai di jaa rahi hai and Shane ko coma mein rakhne ki.. Am i right doctor.. Bol be.. Bitch i give you 3 seconds to talk uske baad i swear to God aisi moutt dunga jo tune sochi bhi nahi hogi.. Hurry the fuck up now...

Doctor - Mamamiene kuch nahi kiya i promise main bus Shane ko coma mein rakhta tha.. Ye sab hone se pehle Shane mere pass aaya tha ussne mujhe bataya sab or bahot saare paise and retirement offer kiya mujhe. Main nahi maana toh dusara koi option nahi diya mujhe.. Shane ne food mein poison milaya tha lekin apne food mein quantity bahot kam milaai jisase woh keval coma mein he jaae or mera kaam tha uske baad usse jyada se jyada din coma mein rakhna taaki kissi ko shakk naa ho uske Uppar.. Lekin khaane k time Bovice ko Shakk hogaya or khaana unhone kam he khaaya jisase Bovice bhi keval coma mein he gaya.. Shane ko maine still coma mein he rakha.. This is called medically induced coma..

Main-I don't give a fuck What it is called bitch.. You know what i want to do?? First i want to know ab ye hosh mein kab and kaise aaega??

Doctor - Agar next 3-5 din k bich inhe injection nahi milla toh ye hosh mein aa jaaenge..

Main - Ok.. Then i want to know are you scared of me??

Ye question suntey he mere piche khaddey Randy and baaki sab samjh gaye ki kya hone waala hai issliye wohlog piche ko hattne lage..

Main-Jawaab dey..

Doctor-Yeyeyesss..

Main-Tujhe pata tha main aaunga?? Still tune iske saamne darr k iska sath diya.. Nonono no.. You are not supposed to do that..

Ye bol maine usse gardan pakkad k uthaaya lekin iss bich ussne niche se injection utha liya tha jo ussne mere shoulder mein ghonp diya and empty bhi kardiya..

Main-Damn you are fast, doctor.. But yeah this won't effect me..

Or ye bolke maine usse gardan se pakkad k again piche deewar se satta diya or uska galla ghotney laga.. Woh chatpataaya naakhoon chalaae mere hath mein but no way main jaane dene waala tha usko.. Uski aankhein bahaar aane ko hogayi kaanpney laga woh or uska chatpataana kam hone laga or kam hotey - 2 kuch seconds baad bandh hogaya.. Tab maine usko chhoda toh woh munh k ball niche girra..He was dead.. He was long gone..

Main-You should have known better...

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