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Thriller Waah! Life Ho Toh Aisi - The Merchant Of Death ( COMPLETED )

Which type of ending do you want for this part?


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Super nova

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Bhai saab kya hi update tha like litrally kya hii update tha
So ye tha magnificent 7 ka magnificent plan like litrally its a masterplan but one thing we have the super master counter planner
So ab dekhna hai k AP kese in chaaron ko marta hai aur kya ab will bhaiya se dhoka khane k baad AP un ko direct marega ya hand to hand fight karega ?? Aur kya AP bhaiya ka monster phir se activate hojayega ya half monster kaafi hai in chaaron k liye ??aur kya kevin issi fight mai marjayega?? ya woh mission next hoga and wo very exciting moment rahega jab AP BHAI k team k member marjayega aur AP kuch nahi karpayegaa
Aur aik aur baat kya punarlima mai ap ki mulaqaat Harris se hogi? kya wo AP ko warn karega? kya AP back off hojayega?
Aur aik cheez aur
And the most awaited moment of mine kya KYA AP THE GREAT EMO ko dekh payega ??
It is the biggest suspense of this story

And aik aur sawaal ye sawaal mera writer se hai
K KYA kabhi AP K MONSTER KO MAARNEY K LIYE KYA the great mogui and the great emo aik honge agar haa to kab agar nahi to phir AP k monster ko kon sambhalegaa ????
most awai
I think monster ka role final me jada hoga
 
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Super nova

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There are possibilities

a.) 1.0 aur 2.0 ko aksar unka mind directions suggest karta h to probably vo 3.0 ho jo unko suggestion deta ho

b.) AP ki 3 personality h
Jisme
1.0 Anna ko pasand karta h
2.0 Sara ko pasand karta h
3.0 probably riya ko pasand karta h (jab AP ko vertigo diya gaya tha tab AP bohat violent hone lag gaya tha jo ki 3.0 ka birth tha aur may be 3.0 tab active tha, aur power full ho raha tha, tab AP ki life me Riya thi. Vertigo se pehle se hi AP Riya se pyar karta tha per 3.0 ka first love Riya hai.
Is hi liye AP jab bhi Riya ko dekhta h to freez ho jata h, pehle to ashish ki birthday party me aur fir basketball court me jab AP un ladko ko ruthlessly maar raha tha to sirf Riya ki awaj se ruka tha)

Jab 3.0 action me ata h tab 1.0 and 2.0 behosh ho jate h unko yaad nahi rehta ki kya hua tha
Riya ke sath break up ke baad bhi AP black out hua tha jiska sirf ek scene AP ko yaad h jisme usko league ka invitation mila per baki ke wakt me kya hua koi nahi janta


To AP bhai kya Riya firse se story me ayegi 3.0 ko sambhalne?



Story me kuch jagah hint diya tha AP bhai ne ki wo underworld ko rule karna chahta h kyuki AP ko Deva bhai ka sapna pura karna h to kya AP ka plan league HOD and HC ko mitane ka h ager nahi to fir AP kese aur kya karke deva bhai ka sapna pura karega



AP bhai past bohat ache se portray kia h apne per ab jo main time line h usme AP ke Revenge ka kya hoga kyuki abhi AP unconscious h aur us hi unconsciousness me past chal raha h to unconsciousness se uthne ke baad AP ka time league me bhi spend hoga to AP ke revenge me bohat time h aur sabko revenge chahiye AP ka revenge

Aur AP ki family ko jaldi se story me wapas lao bhai un sabki ki presence story ko aur acha bana deti h
 

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Maine un prisoners ko dhamki di lekin uska ashar mostly bando par nahi hua..

Main-I repeat i will kill you guys.. And you can't go outside..Last warning motherfuckers I'll add 10 more years to your sentence if you don't get back right now..

"We will take our chances"

Ye bolke unmein se kuch meri taraf bhaage maine guns ki taraf jaane ki koshish ki lekin usase pehle ek bandey ne maara mujhe dhakka or main girra durr jaake..

Main-Ok maadarchod ye cahiye toh ye he sahi..

Main waapis khadda hua woh 4 log they or jissne mujhe dhakka maara woh aage tha toh woh sabse pehle mere saamne aaya ussne mujhe punch maarna caaha toh maine uska hath pakkada or ulta usko diya pait mein ek bhayanak punch jisko lagtey he woh thoda piche hua or piche hotey he maine maari ek laat uske lawde k uppar jo lagtey he woh apne ghutano par girra or ghutano par girte he dusari laat maari maine uski khopdi k uppar jisase woh sapaat lait gaya wahin par ye dekh baaki bandey ek second k liye rukk gaye..

Main-Aao naa maadarchod..

Ye sunke wohlog fir aage badhne lage..

Main-Oh fuck..

Lekin woh aage aa paate usase pehle, aage waale bandey ko lagi khopdi mein goli or woh wahin girra and uske girrtey he baaki sabne bhaagte-2 he apne hath uppar karliye.. Main piche mudda toh piche Claire Sara Master Boe and Master Norman khaddey they or goli Claire ne chalaai thi..

Main-What are you guys doing here?? Gate khola aap log ne?

Sara-Nahi.. Humlog Warden room k secret entrance se andar aaye hain.. Kissi ko nahi pata uske baare mein.. Or naa he koi open kar shakta even explosive se bhi nahi..

Main-Master we are fine here don't stress it we got this..

Norman - AP baat stress ki nahi baat league ki ijjat ki hai aajtak kabhi kissi ki itani himmat nahi hui hai ki woh yahaan attack karne k baare mein soche bhi so baat ab humaari reputation ki hai so let's do it..

Main-Good kyunki i could use some help..

Norman - That's why we are here..

Main-Claire ye saari guns ko Gayab kar..

Claire - Got you..

Main-Baaki come with me..

Hum sabne wahaaan se pistols uthaai and uss taraf gaye jahaan Will bhaaga tha..

Main-Will idhar bhaaga tha toh most probably woh A block ki back side gaya hoga kyunki back wall se kaafi cells ko sath access kar shaktey hain wohlog..

Or wahi hua mujhe A block side ek blast sunaai diya or humlog bhaage ussi taraf wahaan saamne seedhiyon par Randy and Kevin goliyaan chala rahe they saamne matlab yahaan prisoners already bahaar they toh blast kahaan hua bhenchod.. Fuck it filhaal toh Randy and Kevin ko help ki jarurat thi issliye humlog udhar he gaye..

Main-Wassup..

Randy - Bhosdk darra diya abhi thokdeta.. Maasteer..Aap..

Main-Situation bata..

Randy - 8-10 prisoners ne gun uthaai hain baaki cells mein he hain..

Main-Sab ye saamne he hain??

Randy - Yep..

Main-Toh ek kaam kar yahin rukko main or Master Boe back side waali seedhiyon se inke piche aatey hain..

Randy - Ok..

Main-Bus aaplog dhyaan apni taraf rakho inka..

Ye bolke main or Boe piche ki side bhaage or piche aaye toh saamne durr dikha mujhe Will jo piche deewar mein explosives laga raha tha or mujhe dekhtey he woh bhaaga wahaan se kyunki uske pass gun nahi thi or humlog usko thokne he waale they..

Main-Maadarchod bhaagega kahaan rukk teri maa ki chut..Ek baar Randy ko free karwaadein fir isko dekhunga main..

Boe - Woh stairs hain??

Main-Yep.. Lets go..Yahaan se unke piche aaenge humlog..

Boe-Tumhara prison mein rehna aaj kaam aaraha hai..

Main-Maa kasam sahi bole aap agar main yahaan raha nahi hota toh no fucking way humlog jeet rahe hotey abhi.. Ab thankful hun main ki mujhe jail bheja..

Ye sach tha bhenchod mujhe kona kona maalum tha prison kaa literally harr jagah main issi wajah se he jeet raha tha warna gand marr jaati..

Humlog seedhiyon se uppar aaye or hallway se hotey hue unke piche aaye..

Main-Right mere left aapke..

Ye boltey he humne firing suru kardi pistol thi toh ek ek karke maine 4 ko goli maari lekin 2 he Marre baaki injured they jo kaafi tha ab wohlog humaari taraf firing karne lage toh udhar se Randy wagairaah seedhiyon se uppar aagaye and woh bechare bichmein fans gaye sabko thokdiya wahin k wahin..

Boe-I'll need a new pistol..

Main - (Chilaake) Randy ye weapons thikane laga Sara Master aalog niche jaake left side jaao Chang millega wahaan udhar firing horahi hai..

Unko samjhaake Main or master Boe waapis niche aaye or aage gaye jahaan Will bhaaga tha Will yahaan se aage he jaa shakta hai waapis nahi jaa shakta humein dikhe bina so main sure tha ki woh aage millega issliye pehle usko he dhundne main A block k dhobi ghaat side aaya dhobi ghaat open mein hai bus chote chote stalls type bane hain wahaan jo mujhe easily dikh rahe they or woh clear they issliye main aage aaya master piche they kyunki unki pistol mein bullets nahi thi.. Ab main aage jaa he raha tha ki ek stall mein se aake lagi mujhe laat actually mere hath par lagi laat jisase meri gun durr jaake girrii.. Ye tha Will jo bhenchod bilkul niche padda tha toh mujhe dikhna toh impossible tha..

Main-Bhenchod kaise fit hua tu yahaan par?? Woh chhod ye bata niche paddey paddey jump leke laat kaise maardi tune..

Will-Abhi jaantey kahaan ho tum mujhe..

Main-Cool.. Chal koi naa aaja waise he dekhlunga tujhe toh main.Master aap Sara ki side jaao..

Will - Well unfortunately woh option nahi hai main tum dono ko he nahi jaane de shakta..

Main-Tu hum dono se fight karega??

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Main-Tu hum dono se fight karega???

Will-You'll be surprised..

Ye sunke main or master dono hanse.. Or meri hansi k bich ussne mujhe maara punch jisase main piche hatta..

Main-Master jaao aap..

Ye bolke master jaane lage lekin Will woh stalls se jump karta hua master ki taraf gaya or flying kick maarni caahi ussne master ko lekin ulta usko kick jadd di master ne or woh wahin girra niche, ussi time hua aage waale block mein ek loud blast maine udhar dekha toh yahaan se kuch najar naa aaya mujhe...

Boe-You go AP I'll take care of this peasant..

Main-Arrey aapko kahaan takleef dunga master..

Boe - You know this prison better then me main aage jaake kuch nahi kar paaunga you go..

Main-Ok as you say..

Ye bolke main jaane laga or Will meri taraf bhaagne laga lekin master ne pehle he maari uske pairon mein laat or woh munh k ball girra wahaan iss bich maine side mein jaake apni Pistol uthaai. .Udhar Will master k saamne firr khadda hua or ek punch khaake waapis piche ko hatta.

Main-Oye hello.. Hello idhar beta..

Maine pistol taani uske uppar..

Will-Oh so you can't fight like a man..

Main-Haan abhi dekha maine like a man tera, kaise bhaaga tha tu... Or bhosdk i know tu time waste kar raha hai yahaan humaara.. Good bye..

Ye bolke maine uski khopdi kholdi or apne phone mein ek photo Lee uski dead body ki or chal paddey humlog wahaan se..

Main-Chutiya sala.. 4 down 3 more to go.. Lets go master..

Ye bolke humlog aage ki taraf badhe jahaan firing bahot jyaada badh gayi thi matlab aage humaari team kaa koi toh tha jo ulta firing kar raha tha warna akele prisoner itani firing kiske uppar karenge.. Khair humlog aage ki taraf gaye toh main sahi tha saamne Chang Sara Master Norman Randy Ami Kevin and Claire firing kar rahe they, bc sablog yahin they.. Matlab baaki saari prison clear thi.. Hell yeah..

Khair hum dono aage aaye toh left side puri humaare control mein thi or humaare saamne pura hallway, open gym and prison library par prisoners kaa kabja tha..

Main-Sablog yahaan kya kar rahe ho??

Ami-Baaki sab clear hai boss..

Chang - Clear hai for now prisoners k pass guns nahi hain lekin prisoners mostly khulle he hain or woh 4 kahin nahi dikhe mujhe unka kya plan hai i dont know but unhone prisoners ko firse ikkatha kar diya toh we are fucked..

Main-Yahaan kya situation hai??

Ami- Ye block kaa lunch late hota hai toh mostly prisoners kitchen mein they Matt aaya tha yahaan bag fainkne 15-20 armed prisoners hain yahaan..

Main-Matt kidhar gaya..

Ami-Piche ki side nikalta hua dekha tha maine usko..

Main-Yahaaan se piche kahaan jaaega bc..Tumlog sambhaalo main aata hun..

Sara-I'll come with you..

Main or Sara piche ki side gaye..

Main-Yahaan kahaan gaya woh, yahaan toh kuch bhi nahi hai.. Unless woh yahaan se puri tarah ghumke aage front ki side gaya ho..

Sara-Ustaraf kya hai..

Main-Hai toh uss taraf bhi kuch nahi.. Wait a second. Udhar deewar hai.. Main deewar.. Usko toddne waala hai kya woh..

Sara- deewar 2-3 feet thick hai Uske liye toh bahot explosives caahiye honge..

Main-And inke pass bahot se bhi jyaada explosives hain.. Lets go..

Matt kaa plan samjh gaya tha main ek baar woh bahar or andar ko ek kardega yaani bahaar jaane kaa raasta dikhayega prisoners ko or jab unhe khulle dwaar dikhenge toh unhe koi nahi roukk shakta kyunki jyaadatar yahaan 30-40 saal yaa umar kaid yaa even fansi waale hain or unhe farak nahi padega agar unhe chance milta hai toh woh chance lenge waise bhi marna he hai.. Haan jinhe kam saja milli hai wohlog risk nahi lenge.. But wohlog kam he hain.. Issliye main un bache hue 3 ko dhund raha tha woh important tha..

Main pura block cross karke front side mein aaya deewar k pass or finally mujhe dikha Tyler magnificent seven kaa 3rd member... Tyler ne mujhe dekha or meri taraf dekh k muskuraaya woh.. Uske hath mein ek box tha kaafi bada jo explosives kaa box tha 100% and waise he 3 box ussne already deewar mein laga diye they..

Main-(Chilaake) Kya kar raha hai bawligand khud udd jaaega itane explosives mein tu..

Tyler - Dekhtey hain..

Tab aaye wahan Matt Sir ek or explosives kaa box uthaye ussne mujhe dekha..

Matt-AP AP AP kya karun tera main..

Main-Kuch matt kar tu main kardunga.. Bhenchod bola tha naa dhund lunga tujhe..Ab bol..

Matt-Mujhse pehle mere kuch dost bolenge..

Ye bolke ussne ek detonator nikaala or button press kiya toh humse thoda durr saamne laga block kaa gate tutta or andar se 7-8 prisoners nikalke aaye jinke pass guns thi..

Matt - (Chilaake) Good luck AP..

Ye bolke woh waapis boxes lagaane laga or woh prisoners aage aaye guns point kiye humne cover liya woh prisoners bhi kaafi aage aagaye humaare..Pehli goli Sara ne chalaai jo unko lagi nahi but unko roukk jarur diya ek baar k liye..

Prisoner1-"Woh Sara Hai"

Prisoner 2-Kon??

Pris1-"Sara Mogui ki beti usko kuch hua na toh tere sath - 2 tere pure khaandan ko jala denge yelog"

Prisoner 3-What are you guys talking about?"

Prisoner 1-"That girl shooting us is Sara daughter of Mogui.."

Prisoner 3-"So." This is our only chance..

Prisoner 1-"So teri maa ki chut humlog nahi kar rahe kuch".

5 prisoners ne guns aage ki taraf fainki or wohlog hath uppar karke aage aaye..

Prisoner1-We surrender.. We surrender.. Maarna nahi..

Wohlog aage aane lage toh piche se Matt ne maari unmein se ek ko goli toh baaki mein machi bhagdad ab woh bache 2 prisoners and then Matt or Tyler.. Matt or Tyler jaldi jaldi boxes lagaane lage explosives k or idhar ab bache 2 prisoners fanse, Sara goli chalatey hue aage badhi or main uske piche piche, ab woh prisoners ko piche hattna padda.. Or piche hotey time ek ko lagi Sara ki goli woh wahin girra ab ye dekh dusare ne apni gun fainki or waapis ussi gate mein ghuss gaya jisase bahaar aaya tha ab hum badhe Tyler and Matt ki taraf toh unhone boxes chhode or firing suru ki humaare uppar humlog firing kar nahi shaktey they kyunki kya maalum koi box ko lag jaae or bhenchod explosion hojaae, humaari haar or jeet k bich ye deewar he bachi thi bus ye agar fatti toh prisoners bahaar village mein enter hojaaenge beshak bahaar guards hon lekin andar prisoners k numbers bahot jyaada they, in short bahot log marrne waale they jo main hone dene waala tha nahi..

Continued..
 
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