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Thriller Waah! Life Ho Toh Aisi - The Merchant Of Death ( COMPLETED )

Which type of ending do you want for this part?


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A.B.KING

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So guys most probably kal updates nahi dunga main, kyunki mujhe Jaby plot end karna hai ek sath or 2-3 updates ready bhi hain but unmein maja nahi aaya mujhe so yeah ek sath 5-6 updates he dunga main. Most probably 2-3 din or lagenge because main end likh raha hun currently story kaa or usko chhodke flow nahi bigaadunga, but ye scene and is week kaa quota dono pura kardunga main Sunday se pehle.
Waiting sir g.
 
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Abhishek Kumar98

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So guys most probably kal updates nahi dunga main, kyunki mujhe Jaby plot end karna hai ek sath or 2-3 updates ready bhi hain but unmein maja nahi aaya mujhe so yeah ek sath 5-6 updates he dunga main. Most probably 2-3 din or lagenge because main end likh raha hun currently story kaa or usko chhodke flow nahi bigaadunga, but ye scene and is week kaa quota dono pura kardunga main Sunday se pehle.
Chalo koi baat nahi AP Bhai aur 2-3 din ka wait karte hai bas aap apna time lo likhne ka
 
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Rajesh

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Update-562(Lab)

562

Jaby ka antidote mere uppar kaam kar gaya tha or main wahaan behosh ho chuka tha uske baad mere sath kya hua kya nahi uska mujhe koi idea nahi, haan bich bich mein mujhe honsh jarur aaraha tha kuch seconds k liye lekin turant he mujhe waapis drug de rahe they woh toh main turant waapis behosh ho jaa raha tha, last cheej mujhe yaad thi ki main ek badi van mein tha or mere hath pair bandhe they uske baad mujhe ek bahot badi facility mein lejaaya gaya and uske baad main permanently behosh hogaya tha, meri body k liye bhi ye overdose hogayi thi and uske baad next time main utha toh maine khudko ek bed se bahot jagah bandha hua paaya, meri aankhein wahaan ki roshni k hissab se kaafi derr mein adjust hui and mujhe finally kuch dikhne laga tha theek se..

Ye ek bahot bada hall tha jisme jagah jagah beds and other medical equipments rakhe they meri body mein filhaal 1 needle lagi thi jisme se mera blood i guess nikaala jaa raha tha... Wahaan bahot saare log they jisme se mostly doctors type he they..Main bahot jyaada weak and dizzy feel kar raha tha and that was scary.. Maine khudko free karna caaha but main kaafi places par bandha tha or mere ye karne se unko pata jarur chal gaya ki main honsh mein hun issliye turant ek doctor aaya, nahi aayi woh ek female doctor thi and ussne mujhe ek injection laga diya and ek smile mujhe di.. Ok..Lekin abki baar main turant behosh nahi hua haan hone waala jarur tha main lekin kuch minutes baad.. Iss bich 2 behosh logon ko wahaan uthaake laaya gaya and unko mere left and right bed par letaaya gaya, jisme se ek toh mujhse direct blood chaddhaaaya gaya and dusare ko meri he bottle se.

What the fuck is going on, This is bad not only bad but terrifying kuch toh karna padega bhenchod, lekin kya?? Or kaise?? Main aage kuch soch paata usase pehle main behosh hogaya again..

Fucking hell aise toh game over hai fir.. Like literally.. Lekin main or kar bhi kya shakta tha, mere uppar kuch bhi nahi tha main khudse hill bhi nahi shakta tha .Issliye ab mera jo tha woh meri team he thi, mera pura viswas unke uppar tha ab, but woh bhi hard tha obviously issne ye itana sab kiya hai toh yun he toh kiya naa hoga obviously pura dum lagaake hidden rehke kiya hoga or isko dhund paana kissi bhi angle se easy nahi hone waala tha but still i know wohlog dhund lenge mujhe i know for sure.. But hopefully jaldi dhund lein because main yahaan harr second marr raha tha itane drugs mujhe diye jaa rahe they jo mere liye bhi handle kar paana impossible ho raha tha or unke effect mere dimag k sath games khel rahe they and i dont like that i really don't..

Abki baar mujhe doobara honsh aaya toh mujhe kuch loud awaajein sunaai di jo speakers se aarahi thi, or abki baar maine smart khelne kaa socha issliye maine meri aankhein bus thodi c kholi toh maine paaya ki mere left or right waale dono bandey dead they, jinhe mera blood diya gaya tha kyunki monitor par unki pulses 0 thi.. Uske alawa mere right side mein ek bahot badi screen thi jiske uppar ek conference Call chal rahi thi usme 5 log they or wahaan mere saamne Jaby khadda unse baat kar raha tha.. Un 5 mein se 4 k chehre mujhe dikh rahe they 2 females and 2 males they and usme se 2no females Indians type they like Indian Asians type like Indian, Pakistani, Bangladeshi, Srilankans, Nepali Etcetera.. And woh 2no aadmi Chinese they like Japanese yaa Chinese.. 5th aadmi kaa koi clue nahi tha wahaan uski screen par bus andherra he andherra tha or kuch nahi..

Jaby-That's what i am saying, boss this is not working out, we have done this process on 16 healthy individuals out of them 13 died on the spot and rest 3 are in a coma and i dont think they'll recover from that..This is simply just not working..

"This is my plan and it will surely work. Of course weak people will die in this experiment because a normal human body can't handle this and it just breaks and they die or go inside a Coma. You just need to be more careful about how much you give them.. Remember this kid is our only hope to take back what was ours and if you fail this mission you will fail me and you know what happens when you fail me ".

Ye uss blank screen waale 5th bandey ne bola apni bhayanak weird awaaj mein..Toh ye iska boss tha but ye hai kon?? Ye i guess wahi hoga jisase millke Jaby ne ye plan banaaya hai.. But hai kon ye exactly?? Yahi important question tha..

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Fantastic update bro
Fantastic update bro
 

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Update-563(Experiment)

563

Jaby -I'll try my best boss don't worry I'll get more people to test this on..

Aadmi 2 - But won't it effect his body??? Like you are extracting too much out of his body.. Will it effect him? Can he die from this??

Jaby-Oh Don't worry about him his body is regenerating blood 4 times faster then normal human body, it takes us 36-48 hours to replace our blood Volume or Plasma you can say but his body is doing it in 9-12 hours max so we can continue doing it..

Aadmi 1-But It is still not a success we had 16 casualties and 0 success so what's happening with that..

"Time* It takes time to achieve great results, so just wait and trust me your money won't be wasted.."
Woh 5th fir bola..

Aadmi 1-Ok...

Jaby-I have a stock of 20 new and healthy humans coming today, they were tested beforehand so hopefully we can get positive results in the next 24 hours..

Women 1-We certainly hope so..

" Remember This should stay inside Asia do not involve anyone outside of Asia we don't want anything from them we focus on Asia only"

Jaby-Ofcourse boss.. Ok guys I'll contact you then.. Good bye..

Ye bolke woh call over hui.. Maadarchod.. Maadarchod mujhe sachmein lab rat bana diya tha maadarchod ne, Mujhe bahot gussa aaraha tha lekin again bhenchod main kar bhi kya shakta tha.. 16 log marr chuke they and hopefully baaki bhi marr he jaaein taaki ye mission kabhi successful naa ho.. Maadarchod fir dekhunga kya karta hai..

"He Is active."

Woh same lady doctor mere pass aake chilaayi and mujhe firse dose dene he waali thi ki Jaby mere pass aaya..

Jaby-Wait..

Woh doctor rukki and wahaan se piche hatt gayi..

Jaby-Hey.. you see ne?? Heyy... Here.. Look at me.. You hear me??

Main-Oh i hear you clearly Jaby i hear you..

Jaby-Kaise?? Kaise harr baar active hoke uthta hai tu?? Itane drugs k baad bhi harr baar aise he uth jaata hai tu..

Main-Tujhe maalum hona chahiye ye sab...

Jaby-I know but i am still surprised..

Main-You know kitani badi galati kar raha hai tu?? Trust me i will erase you from existence and everything associated with you..

Jaby-Hahaha.. Woh kaise karega yahaan se?? Haan?? Just shut up and take it. Tujhe nahi pata kitana paisa time and log lage hain isme..But ab Success durr nahi hai I am very close..

Main-Your success will lead to your death belive that..

Jaby-Ok you are boring me, doctor give him the drugs..

Ye sunte he uss lawdi ne fir mujhe injection diya and main unimaginable pain ko sehtey hue behonsh hogaya.. Meri body ab jawaab de rahi thi, mere har body part mein bhayanak pain tha jo harr injection k sath increase he ho raha tha..

Saamne lagi watch k according main 36 hours se yahaan tha or iska harr ek second moutt k barabar tha i dont know meri body kaise survive kar rahi thi but jo bhi tha miracle he tha.. Iss bich maine harr baar hosh mein aake information ikatha ki thi uske according Jaby ne ye experiment total 58 logon par try kar liya tha jisme se 49 marr chuke they and baaki bache 9 indefinite Coma mein they yaani Jaby kaa plan flop ho raha tha or iss wajah se Jaby bahot gusse mein tha.. Lekin usase kahin jyaada gusse mein main tha main explain nahi kar shakta tha mere anger ko aajtak itana gussa main kabhi hua nahi tha or itani weakness k kaaran 3.0 takk nahi aa shakta tha kyunki woh aaya toh meri body literally tutt jaaegi and i will die.. Obviously ek baar main yahaan se bahaar nikala toh main iss Lab mein mojjud harr ek shaks or uske wajjud ko khatam kardene waala tha i was about to kill each and every single one of them and there families main inke cehre he yaad kar raha tha or kuch nahi or inhe dhundana hard bhi nahi tha hard tha yahaan se bahaar nikalna honestly meri umeed ab kam hoti jaa rahi thi.. Kya meri team sachmein mere bina kuch nahi thi?? Kyunki no doubt mera harr member apne apne field mein best tha Lekin unke leader k bina woh baar baar maat khaa rahe they or yahaan bhi wahi horaha tha or ye main afford nahi kar shakta tha.. Kyunki agar ye agle 2-3 din or chalta raha toh most probably main bhi permanently Coma mein jaane waala tha and uske baad koi recovery nahi thi.. Yes i was loosing hope because i had no other options..

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Lovely update bro
 

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Update-564(Kevin The Beast)

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Meri umeed tutt chuki thi main khudko trapped feel kar raha tha jo main tha bhi paani sirr se bahot uppar jaa chuka tha or i dont know main kabtak ye seh paunga lekin jyaada derr takk nahi.. Or abtak toh koi close takk nahi aaya tha mere yaani abhi mujhe or bahot ladna tha lekin itani fighting spirit mere andar thi nahi..

Lekin finally after almost 40 hours of immense torture meri dua kabool hui.. Actually hua ye ki main honsh mein aaya he tha ki uss lab mein panic situation thi log idhar udhar bhaag rahe they, Jaby bhi wahin tha or abki baar ussne mujhe honsh mein aatey he dekh liya or woh hanste hue mere pass aaya..

Jaby-Hey there, finally tumhaare friends mere pass takk pohanchey hain.. Dekhna caahoge??

Ye bolke ussne saamne lagi woh screen on ki or uspar kai cctv footages live chaalu hui jisme se ek bahaar ki thi i think jahaan 5 gaadiyan rukki thi or 20-25 log with weapons khaddey they wahaan and usme sabse aage Kevin tha mera Kevin.. Finally bhenchod finally finally..

Jaby-Khuss matt ho woh yahaan aa jarur gaye hain but tumhe kabhi dhund nahi paaenge kyunki humlog iss 6 floor ki building k basement mein hain jiska koi visible entrance yaa door nahi hai ye basically exist he nahi karti.. Haahaha. So Tumhe yahaan se koi nahi lejaane waala.

Ye sunke mujhe fir laga ek or jhatka, chilla main shakta nahi tha kyunki lab sound proof thi andar se.. Lekin mujhe Kevin par pura bharosa tha I Trained him, woh dhund lega mujhe i am sure..

Kevin and uski team andar enter hue or unka search mission suru hua or yahaan niche ekdum shanti hogayi sablog bus uss screen ko he dekh rahe they kyunki ye unhe bhi maalum tha agar yelog mill gaye toh ye sab marrne waale they.. Search operation kareeb 20 minute chala or unhone puri building chaan maari lekin kuch bhi nahi mila unhe milta bhi kahaan se humlog niche they..

Search k baad wohlog wahaan se jaane lage they or idhar meri aakhiri ummeed tutt rahi thi.. Mujhe confirm pata tha inke yahaan se jaane k baad mujhe koi bachaane nahi aane waala tha or mujhe yahi marrna tha.

Come on Kevin Come on kuch toh Notice kar please.. Something.. Dhyaan dey aas pass kuch toh hoga please kuch toh hoga.. Find something..

Kevin akela piche rukka ussne ek phone kiya and phone cut karke woh ek baar piche mudda and waapis bahaar chala gaya..

"Nooooooo"

Jaby-Hahahahaha told you.. Tujhe yahaan se koi nahi leke jaane waala this is your life now.. Get used to it..

Main almost rone ko hogaya tha lekin roya nahi main kyunki bhenchod marrna he hai toh atleast die like a thug.. Rone dhone mein kya rakha hai..

Main-Yi... Ou canttt.. Hiddde.. Behind these d... Oors you'll die... I promise you that..

Jaby - Hahaaha..Ye thi teri team?? Haan?? Ye loosers??

Doctor - Boss, You have a call..

Ye sunke woh waapis uss screen k pass gaya and ussi din ki tarah conference call chaalu hui jisme wahi same log they 4 jinke chehre dikh rahe they and 5th jiske wahaan keval darkness he darkness thi.. I know mere jaane k baad meri team Jaby ko thok degi i was sure of that but ye 5 bach jaaenge inka kya..

Hey AP stop thinking Like that bhosdk bhagwan hai tu, aise he nah marr shakta samjha..Fight fight fight until you die...

I will i will because that's what i fucking do..

"Everything Good???"

Woh 5th banda bola..

Jaby-Yeah.. his friends were here but too bad because they were too stupid to find us..They fa....

Woh aage kuch bol paata usase pehle mere right corner mein hua ek blast jo bahot loud tha blast hotey he uss taraf ki saari lights off hogayi but iss taraf ki lights still on thi maine udhar dekha toh uss blast ne ek chedd bana diya tha bahot bada and wahaan log kuch samjh paate usase pehle uss taraf se assault rifles ki goliyaan chalate hue guards andar ghussne lage and jo Jaby k bandey they wohlog apni - 2 positions le paatey usase pehle wahaan laashein bichhney lagi thi guards mein sabse aage Tha Kevin.. My fucking boy i knew ye dhundlega mujhe..

Main-Jabbbb..yyy...That's my teamm.. Run bitch Run.. Don't die.. Because Only i will kill you.. I will.. So run away and wait for me because i will come i will..

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Awesome update bro
 

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Update-565(Saved)

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Jaby or kuch doctors wahan se opposite side mein bhaage, and dusri side ek elevator se jaane lage.. Idhar meri team ne wahaan literally sabko bhund diya tha.. Jo 15-20 bhaage unko chhodke wahaan literally 30-40 guards and doctors ki dead bodies paddi thi..

Kevin bhaagte hue mere pass aaya or mere galle se milla..

Main-My fucking boy..

Kevin-I got you boss..

Ye bolke Kevin ne apne knife se woh sab leather kaata jisase main bandha tha or main badi he muskill se uthke baitha meri body bahot jyaada weak thi and mera dimag still ghum raha issliye Kevin ne mujhe sahaara deke uthaya.. Woh screen k uppar baaki 4 callers left kar chuke they bus woh 5th banda baaki tha Jaby kaa boss..

Main-I... I. Will.. Ffffind you.. Trust me you.. Hhaaave nnnnn.. No idea what you did. You mmmessed with the wrong person.. I'll ruin your life..

Kevin - Yeah bitch you are dying.. Whoever you are..

"Goodluck".

Ye boltey he ussne call cut kardi.. Ye bhi marega.

Main-My fucking boy.. I can't believe tune kya kardiya..

Kevin-Anything for you boss anywhere anytime.. I don't give a fuck kya karna hai..

Main-Mujhe pata tha tu dhund lega yahaan mujhe..

Kevin-Chutiye ne rotating cameras laga rakhe hain jabki inko monitor koi nahi kar raha?? Chutiya samjha hai kya.. Main samjh gaya ki basement hai then maine thermals use karwaaye toh bhayanak heat milli niche se toh bus seconds k hissab se blueprints mangwaae building k and bam pata chal gaya ki basement kaa ek entrance side waale mansion k niche se hai so wahin se uda diya..

Main-What a fucking beast..

Main Kevin k sahaare bahaar takk aaya and wahaan takk he mujhe realize hogaya ki mujhe minimum 4-5 din bed rest caahiye hoga, because main bahut jyada weak tha khudse 4 kadam takk nahi chal paaya main.. Khair wahaan se Kevin mujhe High Command k hospital mein leke aaya jahaan mujhe admit kiya gaya puri team and masters wahaan pohanchey wohlog alag alag teams k sath search operation mein lage they and finally unhone mujhe dhund liya tha. Mujhe for a fact pata tha yahaan toh mujhe dhund he lenge yelog or wahi hua.. Maine unhe bataaya ki kya chal raha tha mere sath jisse sunke wohlog bawle hogaye they, woh sab shocked they ki aisa bhi ho shakta hai..

Kevin-Boss 49 dead bodies milli hain udhar humare alawa..

Main-I know.. 9 bandey Coma mein bhi mille honge..

Kevin-Nahi aisa toh kuch nahi milla..

Main-What?? Kal takk toh wohlog wahin they, oh i see i see unhe shift kiya gaya tha mujhe dhundla dhundla kuch yaad hai, bahaar bhej diya gaya unko kahin..

Kevin-Maybe, kyunki wahaan toh nahi they wohlog..

Main-Don't worry about it.. Also woh puri lab permanently destroy kardo kuch bhi nahi bachan caahiye wahaan bus doctors related files hon unhe lelena.. And guys suno abhi rest lo proper rest Jaby wagairaah kissi ko matt dhundo kuch bhi nahi karoge tumlog. Jaby mera shikaar hai or usse main he maarunga or uske sath sath orr bahot log hain jo marrenge..

Sab-Ok Boss...

Ab as expected mujhe 1 week kaaa bed rest bataaya jisme se 2 din mujhe hospital mein rakha gaya or doctors kaa kaam keval itana tha ki mujhe behosh karne k liye jo drugs daala gaya hai usse mere sareer se bahaar nikaalna, baaki mujhe koi issue nahi tha.. Hospital se 2nd day waapis Istanbul headquarters aaya main or main abhi better feel kar raha tha but still thoda or rest caahiye tha mujhe so next 5 din maine wahi kiya subah shyaam Gym and exercise and baaki pura din full heavy diet and rest..Din ba din main waapis apni normal self mein aagaya tha. Weakness ab meri body mein bachi nahi thi koi, main fit tha ekdum or ab time tha waapis action mein aane kaa, mere gusse ko store karke rakha tha maine or iska hissab kai log chukaane waale they i was about to kill a lot of people a lot lot..

Mere sath itana sab karne k badle unhe jinda toh nahi chhodne waala tha main unhe kya unke ass pass waalon takk ko jinda nahi chodunga.. Jiske liye Master Mogui and Norman takk raaji nahi they but still unhone decision mere uppar chhoda tha ki main itane logon ko maarun yaa nahi.. Orr main maarunga he sabko i dont give a fuck "NAHI" kaa toh option he nahi tha, i dont care master mujhe sunaaenge iske liye main sunane ko taiyaar hun but log toh marrenge or bahot saare marrenge..

Ab main "I DON'T GIVE A FUCK" 2.0 Tha like ab no joking around ab 2.0 bus seriousness or Aggression kaa symbol hoga i wont mess around. From now on i will just kill kill and Kill..

Continued..
Brilliant update bro maza aa gaya hai
 
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