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Thriller Waah! Life Ho Toh Aisi - The Merchant Of Death ( COMPLETED )
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Nice update bhaii bhit Awla Maza Aya gya par Kar ab next part Ka intazar ha
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Bahut jabardast tareeke se end kiya hai bhai isliye wo do bhai me se ek ki chhod diya AP ne kyunki wo hi sirf prison me se transfer karwa sakte hai kisi ka bhi aur unhi prison me ek me Chole madam gayi hai case haarne ke baad jo ki shayad China me hai aur isiliye Bovice itna jyada gussa hai AP se
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Woww extraordinary updates sir gSo this was it guys, this was it. After almost 850 days, Almost 600 Updates, More than 20000 Comments, Almost 4 Million views and Millions of emotions this part is ending. I can't express how happy I am that i am finishing another part of this masterpiece. This is easily the biggest non erotic story to ever exist on the internet, and this is all thanks to you guys. You guys are the reason i am still writing this beautiful story. You guys are insane with the support and love. This is not my story this is our story because without you guys there is no WLHTA so again thanks to you guys for sticking by.
About Part 4 so I'll be starting it hopefully this year, if not then next month because uske liye bahot saara kaam baaki hai that will be huge, part 4 will be the best out of them all it will be bigger and better it'll be massive, and iss sab k liye i need time so bear with me and I'll provide you with another masterpiece..
Hello Ap brother ..sorry sorry sorry sorry AP brother 
. Waise mera first and last name ka pehla word bhi A & P hi hai. I registered here just for comment on your story because if agar main aisa nhi krta to ye apki writing skills and creativity ki insult hoti jo main nhi chahta . Story is not only just a timepass thing , sometime it teach you how to behave with others , some time teach you how to handle the "Ajeeb "situation and some time teach you how to live life and many more but it depends upto you - what and how you gain knowledge from the story.
Now whats are in your story to gain obviously from my point of view -
1. Attitude - Ye ek tarika hai khud ke jeene ka jisse apne bhut hi ache se describe kiya in every part of your story fir chahe wo part 1 me ho as a school going student mast mola bina kisi dar ke like bhak bhenchod sab handle kr lunga aa kise aana hai and also 18 din ke pyar ke liye 18 saal ke pyar ko nhi chora ja skta there is no chance not a single chance(pta nhi wo kon log hote hain jo 20 din ke pyar ke liye 20 saal ke parivaar ke pyar ko chor dete hain , I can't mar jaunga main to) . In part 2 as a college going student ignore it uski aukaat nhi hai and also as a police adviser as your word if you guys are with me I can kill Sanjay Das definitely. And obviously agar apki family , apke friends sath ho to anyone can fucking win the whole world. In part 3 as a member of underworld you shown everyone that you are just you , some are better then you but no one can replace you.
2. Believe on you friends - Ye apne ek baar nhi kai baar show kiya hai fir chahe wo Ami par bharosa krke kisi ke saamne just khada ho jana jo apko jaan se maarne aa rha ho (In manali jab AP par attack hua tha hotel me) fir chahe Ravi aur Sam ya fir Abeer ya fir underworld ke friends par. Obviously believe matters.
3. Family always comes first - Yes, definitely family is family. Family is a only word with full of emotions , cares , loves ,fight and so on.
And your word - After at the end of the day , it is family.
Above 3 point are must but aur bhi hai lekin utna nhi likha skta kyunki agar likha to do page likh skta hun.
Now come to the story : -
Bhai apki story ki jo standard hai na wo each and every update increase ho rhi hai jo ye proof krta hai ki apki imagination aur creativity kis level par hai. No comment on your imagination and also writing skills because I have no words to describe it. Bhai maine na bahut sari hollywood movies dekhi hai aur usme underworld ke baare me bhi dikhaya gya hai wo bhi bahut hi ache se lekin koi bhi film ne us level ko touch nhi kiya jahan ye btaya ja sake ki underworld kaisa ho sakta ya kaisa hona chahiye but apne na sirf btaya balki ye proof bhi kiya ki underworld kaisa ho skta hai - The khouf , The bloodlust, power, paisa , position, drug har ek chiz was on the another level. No one fucking no one or any movie writer has been able to touch this level till now.
AP bro apne apni story ka jo naam rakha hai na use apne bilkul bhi najarandaj nhi kiya . Your story name give a think that what can be in your story specially from 2nd part .
Come to the story character : -
AP bro apne jo har character ko naam diya aur use apne itne khubsurti se define kiya ki apne har character ko justify kr diya aur character ke sath justification krna kisi bhi story ki sabse important part hota hai jo decide krta hai ki story kis level par ja rhi hai.
Now come to Dialogue and Entry : Bhai apne jo har situation me AP ki entry karwayi hai wo har time ek goosebumps deti hi fir chahe aap us entry ko repeat mode me hi kyu na padho and dialogue uski to level hi alag hai . Again no comments on dialogue I don't have words to give comment.
Bhai there is only 1 question from my side : bhai underworld se ho kya aap kyunki jis tarah se apne underworld ko define kiya hai , yahan present kiya wo baat hi alag hai, bollywood ki to aukat hi nhi. bollywood me kewal sex , love and dhoka means SLD ke alawa kuch nhi hai aur hollywood us level ki underworld story dikhayi nhi hai abhi tak. Just Kidding.
Bhai ek aur comment likh rha hun on few most top character but abhi use post krne me time hai kafi time hai.
Now come to myself, Bhai main chahta to hun ki apke har update par comment kru but mere paas abhi bilkul bhi time nhi hai ( main apki story 4-6 mahine me padhta hun jab travel krta hun) ya fir ye bolun ki pichle 2 saalon se bahut busy hun aur aage 2 - 3 saal aur busy rehne wala hun because I'm a Data Scientist so meri job aisi hai ki main 8 - 10 hr job par rehta hun plus main last 2 years se apne ek personal model par kaam kr rha hun jiski accuracy 6 months pehle 66 % thi aur 6 months me kewal 2 % increase hui hai wo bhi kafi time dene ke baad, kafi dimag lgane ke baad , DATA ko kafi todne marodne ke , bahut sare algorithm use krne ke baad and it hurts me sometime but thik hai lga hun 80 % tak le jane ke liye aur ek baar 80 % pahuch gya to fir PATENT krwa kr industry world me launch krna hai isiliye kafi busy life chal rhi hai meri jiske karan 16 - 17 hr laptop ke saamne baithne ke baad bilkul bhi man nhi krta ki fir se laptop ya phone screen ke saamne apni aakhon ko laaun. I hope aap meri problem samajh sako lekin haan aage fir time nikal kr comment krunga not immediately but definitely. Ab apke itne bade story ko sirf 4-6 line me comment nhi krna chahta tha isiliye 2 months se ye comment likh rha hun. life me first time kisi story par review de rha hun ummid hai apko pasand aaye .
Aur haan apke reply ka wait krunga main.
#Love you brother #NoHOMO
. Waise mera first and last name ka pehla word bhi A & P hi hai. I registered here just for comment on your story because if agar main aisa nhi krta to ye apki writing skills and creativity ki insult hoti jo main nhi chahta . Story is not only just a timepass thing , sometime it teach you how to behave with others , some time teach you how to handle the "Ajeeb "situation and some time teach you how to live life and many more but it depends upto you - what and how you gain knowledge from the story.Now whats are in your story to gain obviously from my point of view -
1. Attitude - Ye ek tarika hai khud ke jeene ka jisse apne bhut hi ache se describe kiya in every part of your story fir chahe wo part 1 me ho as a school going student mast mola bina kisi dar ke like bhak bhenchod sab handle kr lunga aa kise aana hai and also 18 din ke pyar ke liye 18 saal ke pyar ko nhi chora ja skta there is no chance not a single chance(pta nhi wo kon log hote hain jo 20 din ke pyar ke liye 20 saal ke parivaar ke pyar ko chor dete hain , I can't mar jaunga main to) . In part 2 as a college going student ignore it uski aukaat nhi hai and also as a police adviser as your word if you guys are with me I can kill Sanjay Das definitely. And obviously agar apki family , apke friends sath ho to anyone can fucking win the whole world. In part 3 as a member of underworld you shown everyone that you are just you , some are better then you but no one can replace you.
2. Believe on you friends - Ye apne ek baar nhi kai baar show kiya hai fir chahe wo Ami par bharosa krke kisi ke saamne just khada ho jana jo apko jaan se maarne aa rha ho (In manali jab AP par attack hua tha hotel me) fir chahe Ravi aur Sam ya fir Abeer ya fir underworld ke friends par. Obviously believe matters.
3. Family always comes first - Yes, definitely family is family. Family is a only word with full of emotions , cares , loves ,fight and so on.
And your word - After at the end of the day , it is family.
Above 3 point are must but aur bhi hai lekin utna nhi likha skta kyunki agar likha to do page likh skta hun.
Now come to the story : -
Bhai apki story ki jo standard hai na wo each and every update increase ho rhi hai jo ye proof krta hai ki apki imagination aur creativity kis level par hai. No comment on your imagination and also writing skills because I have no words to describe it. Bhai maine na bahut sari hollywood movies dekhi hai aur usme underworld ke baare me bhi dikhaya gya hai wo bhi bahut hi ache se lekin koi bhi film ne us level ko touch nhi kiya jahan ye btaya ja sake ki underworld kaisa ho sakta ya kaisa hona chahiye but apne na sirf btaya balki ye proof bhi kiya ki underworld kaisa ho skta hai - The khouf , The bloodlust, power, paisa , position, drug har ek chiz was on the another level. No one fucking no one or any movie writer has been able to touch this level till now.
AP bro apne apni story ka jo naam rakha hai na use apne bilkul bhi najarandaj nhi kiya . Your story name give a think that what can be in your story specially from 2nd part .
Come to the story character : -
AP bro apne jo har character ko naam diya aur use apne itne khubsurti se define kiya ki apne har character ko justify kr diya aur character ke sath justification krna kisi bhi story ki sabse important part hota hai jo decide krta hai ki story kis level par ja rhi hai.
Now come to Dialogue and Entry : Bhai apne jo har situation me AP ki entry karwayi hai wo har time ek goosebumps deti hi fir chahe aap us entry ko repeat mode me hi kyu na padho and dialogue uski to level hi alag hai . Again no comments on dialogue I don't have words to give comment.
Bhai there is only 1 question from my side : bhai underworld se ho kya aap kyunki jis tarah se apne underworld ko define kiya hai , yahan present kiya wo baat hi alag hai, bollywood ki to aukat hi nhi. bollywood me kewal sex , love and dhoka means SLD ke alawa kuch nhi hai aur hollywood us level ki underworld story dikhayi nhi hai abhi tak. Just Kidding
.Bhai ek aur comment likh rha hun on few most top character but abhi use post krne me time hai kafi time hai.
Now come to myself, Bhai main chahta to hun ki apke har update par comment kru but mere paas abhi bilkul bhi time nhi hai ( main apki story 4-6 mahine me padhta hun jab travel krta hun) ya fir ye bolun ki pichle 2 saalon se bahut busy hun aur aage 2 - 3 saal aur busy rehne wala hun because I'm a Data Scientist so meri job aisi hai ki main 8 - 10 hr job par rehta hun plus main last 2 years se apne ek personal model par kaam kr rha hun jiski accuracy 6 months pehle 66 % thi aur 6 months me kewal 2 % increase hui hai wo bhi kafi time dene ke baad, kafi dimag lgane ke baad , DATA ko kafi todne marodne ke , bahut sare algorithm use krne ke baad and it hurts me sometime but thik hai lga hun 80 % tak le jane ke liye aur ek baar 80 % pahuch gya to fir PATENT krwa kr industry world me launch krna hai isiliye kafi busy life chal rhi hai meri jiske karan 16 - 17 hr laptop ke saamne baithne ke baad bilkul bhi man nhi krta ki fir se laptop ya phone screen ke saamne apni aakhon ko laaun. I hope aap meri problem samajh sako lekin haan aage fir time nikal kr comment krunga not immediately but definitely. Ab apke itne bade story ko sirf 4-6 line me comment nhi krna chahta tha isiliye 2 months se ye comment likh rha hun. life me first time kisi story par review de rha hun ummid hai apko pasand aaye .
Aur haan apke reply ka wait krunga main.
#Love you brother #NoHOMO
