Thriller Waah! Life Ho Toh Aisi - The Merchant Of Death ( COMPLETED )

[AP 316]

WLHTA - The Serpent Of Underworld

Thread is Live. Updates soon.

 

[Naik]

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First update on 7th August 2020..

bahot besabri se intizar rehega bhai

 

[Sunilgupta]

Welcome back AP
AP2.0.......

 

[Boby]

Welcome back AP bro nice to see you back. messages se to aapne khud hi bataya ki log kitna wait kar rahe hae 3rd parts ka but bro aapne dhyan diya bina kisi update ke BC 7 page up ho gaye matlab with update kitne thousand pages jayege u cant imagine lets start bro what r u waiting for Christmas ? best of luck dude.

 

[AP 316]

u cant imagine

I can imagine Bro I know all of this will happen once I open the thread ye toh kuch nahi hai .. Itna toh experience hogaya hai itane saal mein..

what r u waiting for Christmas ?

No. Date di toh hai 7th August.

 

[Voldimort]

Big fan bro ..Ummed kerta hoon Story thory reality jese lagy Part 1 ke tarah jis mein reader apne apko AP imagine ker sakta hae but part 2 mein toh bohot south indian ho gaye ap .. anyway ur writing skills are OP ..Goodluck for this part

 

[AP 316]

bohot south indian ho gaye ap ..

South Indian nahi dekhta bhai main kitani baar sunoge ek he baat thoda logic bhi lagaao Thoda Google use karo thodi knowledge badhaao then doobara padho fir dekho farak hai yaa nahi. Or Haan thoda South Indian dekhna bandh karo toh thoda mind fresh hoga harr jagah South Indian dikh raha hai.. Logic use karo next time thoda.. Thank-you..

 

[Shyam Singh]

.... Waiting for updates..

 

[Vipul]

I can imagine Bro I know all of this will happen once I open the thread ye toh kuch nahi hai .. Itna toh experience hogaya hai itane saal mein..

No. Date di toh hai 7th August.

Bhai kuchh din bad to shayad century bhi puri ho jaye abhi story bhi nai aayi hain story ke name se view mil insane bhai

 

[Ganabhai77]

Hi friends....ye Mera first reply hai xforum site pe or wo bhi AP Bhai ki story pe .....mene 5 years se story read ki hai ....magar AP Bhai ki Tarah koi Nahi likhta....AP Bhai ke story ka first part bohot hi jabardast thaa....ek dam dhasu ....mai to pankha ho Gaya AP Bhai ka .......ek dam Naya concept thaa story ka ...... Second part bhi bohot jabardast thaa ....red John ki vajah se bhi bohot Maja Aaya story me .......and 2.0 wo to ek dam Naya avatar dikhaya Aapne .....aap ki gadi ki knowledge and guns ki knowledge se story ek dam dhasu ban gayi ........and my favourite thing of in the second part that is HOD and League..... Shayad Aapne Hollywood movie John Wick dekhi ho to aap samajh jaoge mai kya kehena chahata hu ......magar Aapne John Wick se bhi behetar Likha aur describe Kiya ....aap ke supporting characters ek dam dhasu ban gaye hai ...... like a abeer , ami , Anjali, Chang , Sam ,Ravi , Bhai , and other ........ ...........mere ko ummid hai ke aap es 3rd part me HOD and League ko zada involve karoge ......AP 2.0 ka past bhi dikhav ........and last thing ye part bhi bohot jabardast likhoge ...................ye Mera first and last comment hai es forum pe because i am silent reader........... Maine sirf Aapke story pe comment Karne ke liye account creat Kiya tha ............ best of luck......... keep writing and posting.......Thank You.

 

[Rajesh]

Congratulations bro for part 3