Romance Waqt (वक़्त) ..Short Story...

[Dr. Zeus]

bahut badhiya.....

Jindgi me use apnao jo apko ahmiyat de....

thank bhai ...

aapne sahi kaha life unconditional hai ...isme har kadam nayi problem tyaar hai ..per agar koi sathi sath ho toh sab kuch thik hai ..or sathi agar aapko samjhne wala ho toh or acha hai ...
or jab female smart hain to ladkon ko bhi smart banna hoga ...kyuki apna wahi hai jo apke sath har haal me khada hai ...

waise aapko yahan dekhkar dil se khusi hui ...thank kamdev99008 bhai..

 

[Dr. Zeus]

Wow beautiful story bhai

thanks bhai ...aapko achi lagi yahi bahut hai ...

 

[Dr. Zeus]

Bhai bhot jaldi main katam kiye the kuch update le lete

thanks bhai ....

sorry per yeh ek short story hai ...so isko sirf do update me khatam karne ka hi socha tha ...

 

[Dr. Zeus]

Bhai aap ne aaj Woh jakham ko fir se khol dia jisko bhulne ke liya Yash se Yash 420 ho Gaya main sayad kahani mere upper Nahi hai lakin issai milta julta gum hum nai bhi khaya hai aaj bhi Woh din bhulane se bhi Nahi bhulta hai
Bhai ,
Dard se rista hai mera
Khushi mere nasib main Kahan
koi humse pyar kare
Itna khushnaseeb hum Kahan
Dil se Sukriya Bhai aap ko is kahani ke liya

thanks bhai ...jab story ka plot socha tha tab main lead ka naam nahi soch paya tha ..per pata nahi kaise jab kahani likne betha to main lead me Yash naam acha laga ..or bhai agar is kahani se aap kisi bhi tarah juda mehsoos karte hain toh yeh kahani aapko hi samarpit hai...waise to socha nahi tha kuch aisa likhne ka per ..real life me kisi or ko dekha toh ..socha is per bhi kuch likh dun ...kahani har us ladke ki hai jo dil se kisi ladki ko chahta hai ..or ladki use kisi or ke liye thukra deti hai ...kahani me bas main lead ka naam badal do toh har koi iska main lead hi hai..

yeh kahani aajkal badi comman hai ...mostly ladke ,,,ladkiyon ke wish ka target ban jaate hain ...har ladki buri nahi hoti ..per har ladki achi bhi nahi hoti ...or tutne ke baad ladke ka haal jaane ke liye ladki kabhi piche palat kar dekhti bhi nahi hain ...ab ladka ya toh us dukh me jiye ya mare unki life me toh choice ka option har pal tyaar hai ..per ladke ka kya ..jisne dil se chaha tha use ...use thokar markar kisi or ke sath ghumna fashion ban chuka hai ...old gf ko is baat ki parvah nahi ki uska old bf dukhi hai ..per samne se agar uske wohi bf agar khush dikhe toh ..use yeh bhi dikkat hai ..ki banda khush kaise hai ..are use toh manju bana chahiye tha ...
yahan mera yeh kahani likhne ka means bas itna hai ...ki agar koi ladki aapse majnu banne ki ummid pale toh khud bhi laila bane ...verna jaise unki life me option hain ...waise hi aap bhi is dunia me akele nahi hai ...kisi mod per koi aapke liye bhi hai ...jo suche pyaar ki kadar nahi karte waqt unko apne aap samjha deta hai ...

so be ready to face the battle of love ...

 

[Dr. Zeus]

Osm ? short story hai brother.....maan gye guru aap long story to likh rhe ho par apki ye short story bhi sach me kabiletarif hai hats off brother ....bhai aaj kal bf gf , sacha pyaar ,sirf naam ke hote hai ... jyadatar me sirf hawas hoti hai or jis tarah apne is story me dikhaya sach me aisa lga jaise ye sab meri aakho ke samne ho rha ho .....ek baat sach kahi aapne yaara waqt hai badal jayega ...or waqt kab badal jaye kisko pta ....
I hope yaara aap hamare liye aisi story likhte rhe ....

thanks bhai ....aapko achi lagi bas mehnat safal hui ...
mujhe na view ki chinta hai na reaction ka laalch ..yeh story bhi real life se inspire hai ...dekha tha kisi ko tut te hue so dil kiya likh dun ..shayad kisi or ko sikh mil jaye ...kahani se kisi ek ko bhi sahi sikh mil jaye toh kaafi hai....kyuki dil toadna asaan hai...per us tute hue dil ke sath jina ..kitna muskil hai ...yeh kisi or ke dekha toh samjh aaya ...or waqt toh bas waqt hai..

waqt hai toh badalega jaroor ...jab acha nahi rehta .....toh bura bhi nahi rahega ...

 

[Dr. Zeus]

oh kahte hai na...
DIL RO RAHA HAI MERA PAR ANKH NAM NAHI
kuch waisa hi hal hain ye story padhake.
dr. bhai rula diya yar..
but end acha waha rote rote thodi muskrahat dedi.???????

thanks aapko achi lagi ...or sorry ki aapko rula diya...
per koi baat nahi shayad kabhi mouka mila toh koshish rahegi ki aapko muskurane ki koi or wajah bhi kisi or story ke sath de paun ..

 

[Dr. Zeus]

Lajabab story brother

thanks bro....

 

[Dr. Zeus]

Nice par yeh story kaafi elaborate bhi ho sakti hai?

thanks bro... haan manta hun story me bahut kuch or add ho sakta tha ..per short story sochi thi ...so jada kuch add nahi kiya bro...koi nahi ..
kabhi or yeh kami puri kar denge next time ...next story ...with diffrent idea ...with differnt perception..

 

[Sanjay335]

Mindblowing...

 

[Yash420]

thanks bhai ...jab story ka plot socha tha tab main lead ka naam nahi soch paya tha ..per pata nahi kaise jab kahani likne betha to main lead me Yash naam acha laga ..or bhai agar is kahani se aap kisi bhi tarah juda mehsoos karte hain toh yeh kahani aapko hi samarpit hai...waise to socha nahi tha kuch aisa likhne ka per ..real life me kisi or ko dekha toh ..socha is per bhi kuch likh dun ...kahani har us ladke ki hai jo dil se kisi ladki ko chahta hai ..or ladki use kisi or ke liye thukra deti hai ...kahani me bas main lead ka naam badal do toh har koi iska main lead hi hai..

yeh kahani aajkal badi comman hai ...mostly ladke ,,,ladkiyon ke wish ka target ban jaate hain ...har ladki buri nahi hoti ..per har ladki achi bhi nahi hoti ...or tutne ke baad ladke ka haal jaane ke liye ladki kabhi piche palat kar dekhti bhi nahi hain ...ab ladka ya toh us dukh me jiye ya mare unki life me toh choice ka option har pal tyaar hai ..per ladke ka kya ..jisne dil se chaha tha use ...use thokar markar kisi or ke sath ghumna fashion ban chuka hai ...old gf ko is baat ki parvah nahi ki uska old bf dukhi hai ..per samne se agar uske wohi bf agar khush dikhe toh ..use yeh bhi dikkat hai ..ki banda khush kaise hai ..are use toh manju bana chahiye tha ...
yahan mera yeh kahani likhne ka means bas itna hai ...ki agar koi ladki aapse majnu banne ki ummid pale toh khud bhi laila bane ...verna jaise unki life me option hain ...waise hi aap bhi is dunia me akele nahi hai ...kisi mod per koi aapke liye bhi hai ...jo suche pyaar ki kadar nahi karte waqt unko apne aap samjha deta hai ...

so be ready to face the battle of love ...

Bhai Sahi Kaha aap ne lakin duniya main aise hi bahat si gum he Jo bhulane se bhi Nahi bhulta hai
khair main toh us ke liya suicide tak bhi ker liya tha lakin baad main pata chal ki mere parents ke pyar ke aage Woh Kuch bhi Nahi tha
baki thoda dukh toh hota hai na Bhai
kyun ki aap ek Baar dhokha kha Gaye toh dusri Baar yeh kadam uthane se pehle dus Baar sochoge
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