Incest WAQT KI DHAAR (Incest + Adultery)

[Rajesh Sarhadi]

So many twists in one update.
Marvelous

keep enjoying

 

[Rajesh Sarhadi]

Agla update aaj hi aayega

 

[Sukhi Choudhry]

Waiting for next update

 

[Rajesh Sarhadi]

Waiting for next update

likhna shuru kar diya hai, raat ko update aa jayega

 

[amita]

Agla update aaj hi aayega

Will wait

 

[Rajesh Sarhadi]

Will wait

Socha tha ek lamba update dun, par likhte likhte kuch aur hi dimag mein aa gaya isiliye abhi ka update rokte hue use yahin tak de raha hun baaki agle update mein.

 

[Rajesh Sarhadi]

Update 10

Andar Komal apni saheli ke gam aur apni paristhiti ki vajah se bahut pratadit thi, is waqt use sakun chahiye tha, aur ye sakun shayad use Vimal hi de sakta tha, kyunki Vimal ke bachche ki maa thi vo, aur dekha jaaye to Komal par Vimal ka adhikaar jayada tha na ki Ramesh ka. Ruh ke bandhan tak dhumil pad jaate hain jab badan pe kisi aur ka haq ho jata hai, aur jab ye badan us badan ke saath naye jeevan ki utpatti karta hai to bas ek bandhan reh jaata hai – parivaar jismein pita, maata, aur santaan hote hain, aur Komal ka ye parivvar Vimal se banta tha, Ramesh to bas naam ke liye tha.

Komal ne apna sar Vimal ke kandhe pe tika diya. Aur anken band kar li, Vimal jo khud pratadit tha use bhi sakun chahiye tha jo Komal ka alingan use de raha tha, uski banhen Komal ke ird gird kasti chali gayi, Komal ne apni ankhen kholi, dono ek dusre ko dekhne lage aur dono hi ek dusre ki ichcha ko samajhte hue apne labon ko ek dusre se mila baithe. Ek madham chumban pragad hota chala gaya.

Jiski dhwani bahar khade Raj ke kaanon mein pighle shise ki tarhaha padne lagi. Ab vo itna chota bhi nahi tha ki ye na samajh paaye ye dhwani kyun aur kis liye aa rahi hai. Ek devi ka roop jo uski antaraatma mein samaya hua tha vo chin bhinn hone laga aur ankhon se krodh aur dukh paani ka roop le behne lage.

Tangon mein jaise jaan hi na rahi. Uski devi swaroop maa aur dost roopi chacha uske pita ke piche ye sab… aage sochne ki usmein himmat na hui, parde ko aise dekhne laga jaise ek tuffan us parde ke piche hai jo abhi bahar aayega aur uske vajood ko mita daalega. Ab usmein shayad himmat nahi thi apni maa ki ankhon mein jhankne ki na hi apne chacha ke gale lagne ki.

Adhura sach hamesha ghatak hota hai, par Raj ko poora sach kahan se pata chalta, itni himmat to usmein na thi ki haal mein ghuss jata aur apni maa aur chacha pe sawallon ki bochaar kar deta, ya shayad vo himmat uske sankaron ke bhoj tale dab ke reh gayi thi, vo sanskaar jo use uski maa aur pita ne diye the, unsanskaron ka bhoj use aur tod raha tha. Waqt apni dhaar paini kar raha tha, jismein Raj ka ubharta hua navyovan jhulasne laga, aurat ki chavi jo uske mastisk mein thi vo chavi lupt ho gayi aur uski jagah use aurat bas ek vyabhicharika ke roop mein dikhne lagi. Umra ke is padaav mein jab vo na bachcha tha na hi purn yuvak, waqt ne use jis disha mein moda vo mud gaya, uske dagmagate kadam apne kamre ki taraf badne lage, and Samar besudh soya hua tha, use dekh Raj dar gaya agar uski jagah aaj Samar ne sab dekh liya hota to kya hota.

Aage sochne ki himmat usmein na thi. Bas chup chaap apna bag nikala aur apne kapde aur dusra saman pack karne laga, aane wali subah bahut kuch apne andar samete hue thi.

Raat bhar vo baitha kursi pe apni ankhon se ansoo bahata raha.

Is baat se bekhabar ki Waqt unki jindagi aur badalne wala hai, Komal aur Vimal ek dusre ki banhon mein lipite ek dusre ko choom rahe the ab to Vimal ke haath Komal ke jism pe thirakne lage.

Komal saans foolne lagi to vo Vimal se alag ho apni sanson pe kaabu pane lagi, Vimal ne use apni taraf fir khincha to vo uth khadi hui, “ yahan nahi, chalo Ramesh ke study room mein chalet hain, kahin Raj idhar na aa jaye”

Vimal ko uski baat thik lagi aur is baat se bekhbar ki Raj dono ko apattijanak aalingan mein dekh chukka hai, unke chumban ki mohak par uske liye angare wali dwani ko bhi sun chukka hai. Dono bagal mein Ramesh ke study room mein chale gaye jahan Ramesh ne ek bed bhi rakha hua tha, jab kaam karte hue bahut der ho jaati thi to vahin so jata tha.



Kamre ke andar pahunch Vimal ko daaru ki bottle dikhayi di to usne fatafat apne liye peg bana liya aur Komal se pooch, “aap bhi logi kya”

Komal : Husn ka jam tumhare samne hai fir bhi tumhen sharab ki jarurat pad gayi

Vimal : Husn ka jam to kabhi kabhi milta hai, ab to lagta hai jindagi bas sharab ke jam ke saath hi gujar paayegi. ( aur ek hi ghnut mein glass khaali kar dusra bana liya)

Vimal ke andar ki chupi narajgi Komal samajh gayi, ye sab uski vjah se hi to hua tha, par aaj shayad Komal badal chuki thi, aaj vo khul ke jeena chahti thi, apni galtiyon ko sudharna chahti thi.

Komal balkhati hui uske pass gayi, uske gale mein banhon ka haar pirote hue boli “ main tumhari bhi gunahgaar hun, ho sake to maaf kar dena, ab main tumhen kabhi khud se door nahi karungi, bas is baat ka dhayaan rakhna ki Raj ko na pata chale varna pata nahi kya hoga.

Vimal : Sach ko jitna chupaao vo utna jehreela hota jaata hai. Raj bada ho chukka hai, use sach bata do, vo ham logon ke haalat ko samajh jaayega.

Komal : nahi nahi, main ye risk nahi le sakti. Tumhen meri kasam use kabhi kuch nahi bataoge.

Vimal : Main to chup rahunga, lekin waqt kya kar de kuch pata nahi.

Komal : Ab ye chhodo mere pass aao

Itna keh Komal ne apne honth vimal ke honthon se jod diye Dono ek dusre ko aise chumne lage jaise pehli baar chumna seekha ho, aur uski practice kar rahe hon.

Vimal ke liye Komal ke andar chupa hua pyaar bahar nikalne laga aur vo apne badan ko Vimal ke badan ke saath ragadte hue use apne honthon ka jam pilane lagi.

 

[amita]

Update 10

Andar Komal apni saheli ke gam aur apni paristhiti ki vajah se bahut pratadit thi, is waqt use sakun chahiye tha, aur ye sakun shayad use Vimal hi de sakta tha, kyunki Vimal ke bachche ki maa thi vo, aur dekha jaaye to Komal par Vimal ka adhikaar jayada tha na ki Ramesh ka. Ruh ke bandhan tak dhumil pad jaate hain jab badan pe kisi aur ka haq ho jata hai, aur jab ye badan us badan ke saath naye jeevan ki utpatti karta hai to bas ek bandhan reh jaata hai – parivaar jismein pita, maata, aur santaan hote hain, aur Komal ka ye parivvar Vimal se banta tha, Ramesh to bas naam ke liye tha.

Komal ne apna sar Vimal ke kandhe pe tika diya. Aur anken band kar li, Vimal jo khud pratadit tha use bhi sakun chahiye tha jo Komal ka alingan use de raha tha, uski banhen Komal ke ird gird kasti chali gayi, Komal ne apni ankhen kholi, dono ek dusre ko dekhne lage aur dono hi ek dusre ki ichcha ko samajhte hue apne labon ko ek dusre se mila baithe. Ek madham chumban pragad hota chala gaya.

Jiski dhwani bahar khade Raj ke kaanon mein pighle shise ki tarhaha padne lagi. Ab vo itna chota bhi nahi tha ki ye na samajh paaye ye dhwani kyun aur kis liye aa rahi hai. Ek devi ka roop jo uski antaraatma mein samaya hua tha vo chin bhinn hone laga aur ankhon se krodh aur dukh paani ka roop le behne lage.

Tangon mein jaise jaan hi na rahi. Uski devi swaroop maa aur dost roopi chacha uske pita ke piche ye sab… aage sochne ki usmein himmat na hui, parde ko aise dekhne laga jaise ek tuffan us parde ke piche hai jo abhi bahar aayega aur uske vajood ko mita daalega. Ab usmein shayad himmat nahi thi apni maa ki ankhon mein jhankne ki na hi apne chacha ke gale lagne ki.

Adhura sach hamesha ghatak hota hai, par Raj ko poora sach kahan se pata chalta, itni himmat to usmein na thi ki haal mein ghuss jata aur apni maa aur chacha pe sawallon ki bochaar kar deta, ya shayad vo himmat uske sankaron ke bhoj tale dab ke reh gayi thi, vo sanskaar jo use uski maa aur pita ne diye the, unsanskaron ka bhoj use aur tod raha tha. Waqt apni dhaar paini kar raha tha, jismein Raj ka ubharta hua navyovan jhulasne laga, aurat ki chavi jo uske mastisk mein thi vo chavi lupt ho gayi aur uski jagah use aurat bas ek vyabhicharika ke roop mein dikhne lagi. Umra ke is padaav mein jab vo na bachcha tha na hi purn yuvak, waqt ne use jis disha mein moda vo mud gaya, uske dagmagate kadam apne kamre ki taraf badne lage, and Samar besudh soya hua tha, use dekh Raj dar gaya agar uski jagah aaj Samar ne sab dekh liya hota to kya hota.

Aage sochne ki himmat usmein na thi. Bas chup chaap apna bag nikala aur apne kapde aur dusra saman pack karne laga, aane wali subah bahut kuch apne andar samete hue thi.

Raat bhar vo baitha kursi pe apni ankhon se ansoo bahata raha.

Is baat se bekhabar ki Waqt unki jindagi aur badalne wala hai, Komal aur Vimal ek dusre ki banhon mein lipite ek dusre ko choom rahe the ab to Vimal ke haath Komal ke jism pe thirakne lage.

Komal saans foolne lagi to vo Vimal se alag ho apni sanson pe kaabu pane lagi, Vimal ne use apni taraf fir khincha to vo uth khadi hui, “ yahan nahi, chalo Ramesh ke study room mein chalet hain, kahin Raj idhar na aa jaye”

Vimal ko uski baat thik lagi aur is baat se bekhbar ki Raj dono ko apattijanak aalingan mein dekh chukka hai, unke chumban ki mohak par uske liye angare wali dwani ko bhi sun chukka hai. Dono bagal mein Ramesh ke study room mein chale gaye jahan Ramesh ne ek bed bhi rakha hua tha, jab kaam karte hue bahut der ho jaati thi to vahin so jata tha.



Kamre ke andar pahunch Vimal ko daaru ki bottle dikhayi di to usne fatafat apne liye peg bana liya aur Komal se pooch, “aap bhi logi kya”

Komal : Husn ka jam tumhare samne hai fir bhi tumhen sharab ki jarurat pad gayi

Vimal : Husn ka jam to kabhi kabhi milta hai, ab to lagta hai jindagi bas sharab ke jam ke saath hi gujar paayegi. ( aur ek hi ghnut mein glass khaali kar dusra bana liya)

Vimal ke andar ki chupi narajgi Komal samajh gayi, ye sab uski vjah se hi to hua tha, par aaj shayad Komal badal chuki thi, aaj vo khul ke jeena chahti thi, apni galtiyon ko sudharna chahti thi.

Komal balkhati hui uske pass gayi, uske gale mein banhon ka haar pirote hue boli “ main tumhari bhi gunahgaar hun, ho sake to maaf kar dena, ab main tumhen kabhi khud se door nahi karungi, bas is baat ka dhayaan rakhna ki Raj ko na pata chale varna pata nahi kya hoga.

Vimal : Sach ko jitna chupaao vo utna jehreela hota jaata hai. Raj bada ho chukka hai, use sach bata do, vo ham logon ke haalat ko samajh jaayega.

Komal : nahi nahi, main ye risk nahi le sakti. Tumhen meri kasam use kabhi kuch nahi bataoge.

Vimal : Main to chup rahunga, lekin waqt kya kar de kuch pata nahi.

Komal : Ab ye chhodo mere pass aao

Itna keh Komal ne apne honth vimal ke honthon se jod diye Dono ek dusre ko aise chumne lage jaise pehli baar chumna seekha ho, aur uski practice kar rahe hon.

Vimal ke liye Komal ke andar chupa hua pyaar bahar nikalne laga aur vo apne badan ko Vimal ke badan ke saath ragadte hue use apne honthon ka jam pilane lagi.

Raj is perturbed by the sounds coming out from the room and his thoughts and perceptions about his respected nears were dashed without knowing the truth.
On the other hand Komal was ignited by the thoughts of her friend and she changed herself and allowed Vimal to enjoy whenever he feels to do so.
Well one can't hide Truth for ever, it has to come out.

Superb emotional writing.

 

[Rajesh Sarhadi]

Raj is perturbed by the sounds coming out from the room and his thoughts and perceptions about his respected nears were dashed without knowing the truth.
On the other hand Komal was ignited by the thoughts of her friend and she changed herself and allowed Vimal to enjoy whenever he feels to do so.
Well one can't hide Truth for ever, it has to come out.

Superb emotional writing.

Emotions are the crux of any story, if a reader could relate and understand them in the context of the story then the writer feels proud. And I feel proud today that I was able to convey the thoughts of the characters properly. Thanks for appreciating.

 

[Naik]

Bahot shaandaar lajawab update bhai