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Mohan : kabhi nahi !!!! Ye kafi jor re kahi thy mohan ne….
Jise sunke jack ko bahut gussa aagaya…..
Jack : kya? Tumhe pata hai ye itna precious chance hai Veer ke liye. Ye hamare village ki khush nasibi hai, kyun ki hamare village ne ek soul saint master diya hai iss kingdom ko isiliye haam haar saal ek bache ko school bhej sakte hai padhne ke liye wo bhi free mai. Warna dusre village kitne muskil ka samna karte hai ye pata bhi hai tumhe. Samajh rahe ho na tum ?
Ye chance ko agar Veer ache se use kare to Veer future mai ek successful person ban sakta hai.
Mohan : successful hone se kya hoga ? Aur Veer ke jane ke baad mera khane ka kya hoga, koun dega mujhe ? Aur sabse badi baat blue silver plant ko train karke kya fayeda. Ye to baas ek useless martial soul hai aur hamesha rahega.
Ye sari baate mohan ne jack ko bina dekhe hi keh raha hota hai.
Jack : per Veer full soul power ke sath born hua hai. Jitna jaldi wo apna pehla soul ring pa lega, agar wo kamjor bhi kyu na ho, usko train kiya ja sakega aur wo soul warrior se soul master baan jayega.
Soul master, samajh rahe ho na.
Aur ye kayi saal ho gaye hai jaab hamara village mai pehli baar koi soul master banega. Warna to koi soul worrior hi ban jaye wo badi baat hogi.
Mohan : to tumhara maksad iske piche ye tha, mai sahi keh raha hu na? Maine mana kiya na wo nahi jayega. Aab tum ja sakte ho.
Jack (jor se) : mohan……
Mohan : mai sun sakta hun, tumhe chilane ki koi jarurat nahi hai. Aab tum ja sakte ho.
Veer : grandpa jack, gussa mat hoyiye, papa sahi keh rahe hai. Blue silver plant ek useless martial soul hai. Aur mai bhi ye soch raha hun ki yahi acha hoga ki mai na padhu martial soul ability ke baare mai.
Thank you grandpa jack aapne itna saab kiya mere liye….
Jack : Veer, mai gussa nahi hun….thik hai mujhe abhi jana chahiye. Fir jack jane lagte hai Veer ke ghar ke bahar aur Veer bhi unke sath hi tha unko chodne ja raha tha.
Jack jate jate darwaje ke paas rukh jate hai aur wapas palat ke mohan ko,
Jack : mohan sayad tumne pehle hi ye decide kar liya hai ki yese hi rahoge, per Veer abhi bacha hai, kya tum Veer ke baare nahi soch sakte ek baar bhi, usko sikhna chahiye aur ye uske liye jaruri bhi hai jine ke liye, aur jine ke liye kuch to skills pata hona chahiye.
Usse roko nahi, agar tum wo na de sako to….jisse ke liye future mai kabhi Veer tumhe galat samajhega ye hone na do.
Mai abhi ja raha hun aagar tum apna mind change karte ho to mujhe aake mil lena. Abhi bhi 3 months hai school mai registration ke liye.
Fir jack chale jate hai aur Veer unhe ghar ke bahar chod ke ander aajata hai.
Jaab Veer ander aata hai to uska dad abhi beth ke pi rahe hote hai….
Mohan : Veer mere liye aur leke aao….
Veer bhi bina kuch kahe jake ek bottle utha ke le aata hai aur mohan ka glass bharne lagta hai jaab glaas bhar jata hai mohan ek hi jhatke mai usse khatam kar deta hai.
Mohan : kya tum disappointed ho mere decision se? Kya tum soul master banna chahte ho?
Veer : nahi papa mai blacksmith banna chahta hun aapki tarah. Ham usse hi to jite hai mai usse kese chod sakta hun. Aur aapne promise bhi kya hua hai….mujhe sikhayenge farm tools banna.
Mohan : soul master ka kya use hai pata hai? Aur useless martial soul ko apne dimag mai se nikal ke batao aur yesa socho ki tumhare paas best martial soul hai.
Ye sari baate mohan gusse mai puch raha hota hai jiska effect uske ghar mai pad raha hota hai, sari chize hil rahe thy. Aur Veer usse saaf mehsus kar raha hota hai.
Veer : papa gussa may kijiye, mujhe soul master banna hi nahi hai, mai hamesha apke sath hi rahunga, aur mai isme hi khush hun aur hamesha apke liye khana bhi banaunga.
Mohan : mujhe dikhao tumhara martial soul.
Veer : thik hai….
Ye kehke Veer apna martial soul release kar deta hai, uska blue silver plant baki ke blue silver palnt se alag tha jo saaf dekh sakta tha mohan.
Jaab mohan ne ye dekha to face pe ek smile aagayi, per usse show hi nahi kiya,
Mohan (mann mai) : ye same hai uske Jessa….
Aur ek hi jhatke mai khada ho jata hai, aur mohan ko iss tarah se khade hone se Veer bhi do kadam piche chala jata hai.
Veer : papa…?
Mohan khade hoke ander ke kamre ki aur chala jata hai ye kehke ki mujhe koi distrub nahi kare.
Mohan ke jane baad Veer uske piche,
Veer : per mere paas ek aur martial soul hai. Fir apna left hand aage karke wo hammer ko summon karta hai.
Pata nahi keese mohan sayad uska yehsaas paake kamre se bahar aajata hai. Aur Veer kodekhne lagata hai aur apne atit ke pane mai kho jata hai,
Kuch loog thy jo Chal ke uske samne se aarahe thy, aur mohan ghayal hua pada tha, aur ek mahila kuch bol rahi hoti hai.
Mahila : unhe jane do, mai tumhare sath chalungi.
Aur wo mahila bhi wanhi mohan ke samne hi khadi thy, aur uske hath mai ek bacha tha. Fir wo bache ko mohan ke hath mai thama deti hai, mohan bhi usko pakad leta hai.
Mohan : nahi….
Mohan : nahi….Sital….
Fir wo mahila agae badh jati hai aur asaman ki taraf hath karke uska martial soul ko summon karti hai, ye bhi blue silver palnt hi tha per alag yesa lag raha tha ki ye sabse last evolve tha, jo ki bade se tree ke jesse nazar aaraha tha.
Aur uss mahila ke charo aur ek red colour ka ring ghum raha tha.
Jaab wo mahila ye kar rahi thy to wo sare admi jo inke taraf aarahe thy wo bhi hamala kar diya.
Mohan : nahi…..sital…..nahi…..
Fir apne hosh mai aake wo aage badh ke veer ka left hath ko pakad leta hai….
Mohan : ye….
Veer : kya kuch galat hai papa?
Mohan : ye twin martial soul hai. Ye twin martial soul hai. Beta….
Ye kehke mohan Veer ko kash ke gale laga leta hai.
Veer : papa….
Ye pehla din tha jaab veer ke papa ne usse hug kiya hua tha, usko kafi acha lag raha tha.
Veer : wait, mera inner power yese increase kese ho raha hai? Kya ye saab iss hammer ki wajah se ho raha hai. Aagar yese hi chalta raha to mai papa ko hurt kar dunga.
Veer : papa mai aapko aur hug nahi kar sakta.
Kyun ki abhi wo hammer ki wajah se pura ghar hilna suru ho gaya tha.
Mohan bhi Veer ko chod deta hai.
Mohan : isse wapas lelo….
Veer bhi usse wapas rakh leta hai to saab rukh jata hai.
Mohan : ye hamesha yaad rakhna, tum apna plant protect karna hammer ki madat se. Hamesha.
Veer apna dono hath ko dekhte huye : papa mai promise karta hun.
Dopeher ka time tha…..
Tan..tan….tan….
Veer ek lohe ko tukde ko jo garam tha ek hammer se mare ja raha tha,
Veer (mann mai) : iss duniya mai twin martial soul rare hai. Isiliye dad ne yesa bola ki hammer soul ko na dikhaun kisiko.
Abhi Veer hammering kar hi raha hota ki mohan bhi kamre se bahar nikal aata hai aur ek nazar Veer pe deke wo jake beth jata hai.
Veer bhi ek nazar apne pita ko dekh ke wapas apne kaam mai lag jata hai….
thodi der baad,
Mohan : ruko….
Fir mohan khade hoke veer ke paas aajata hai. Aur Veer ke hath se hammer le leta hai aur usko wanha se side mai kar deta hai….
Mohan : agar tum yese hi kaam karte rahe to tum isse kabhi bhi bana nahi sakte
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Veer : to mujhe kya karna chahiye?
Mohan : dekho….
Ye kehke mohan hammering karne lagta hai. Aur Veer usse ache se dekhne lagta hai.
mohan : dekh liya maine kitne baar mai ye kiya.
veer : papa ye 81 strike hai...
mohan veer ke jawab sunke : right....(mann mai ; isne ek pal bhi apni ankhe nhi jhapkayi aur pehli baar mai hi thik answer de diya, ye sach mai talented hai)
Fir veer hammering wese hi karne lagta hai to usse ho nahi pa raha tha to mohan usse apne hatho se sikhane lagta hai.
Ye Veer ke jivan mai sabse acha din tha jaab uske dad ne uska hath pakad ke kuch sikhaya tha.
Yese hi kayi din nikal gaye aur Veer bhi aab ache se hammering karne lag jata hai bilkul apne papa ki tarah per abhi tak wo 81 strike pura nahi kar paya tha aur issi bich wo apne mystrious Clan ka kuch chota mota hidden weapon bhi bana diya tha.
Veer : finally, kuch to hidden weapon ban hi gaya hai. Aab mere pas kuch jyada material nahi hai jisse mai jyada se jyada aur behetar hidden weapon bana saku. Aagar kahi se jugad ho jayega to mai ek arrow shooter bhi bana sakunga.
Inn 3 mahine se papa baas mujhe sikha hi rahe hai apna hammering skill, aur aab maine 24 time strike kar sakta hun ek hi baar mai, abhi 81 strike bahut dur hai.
Per aab ye baad ki baat hai abhi mujhe mere skill ke bare mai kuch sochna hoga
Fir uthke kitchen ki taraf chala jata hai aur khana nikalna lagta hai veer, fir apne papa ko bulane lagta hai,
Veer : papa aajao khate hai….
Per mohan aaya hi nahi,
Veer : aam tor pe to papa aajate thy itne waqt mai, kya wo bimar pad gaye hai?
Abhi Veer uss kamre mai jane hi wala tha ki, mohan main door se ander aata hai.
Veer : papa kanha gaye thy itne subha ye apne mann mai sochta hai fir, papa chalo khate hai.
Mohan : thik hai.
Fir Veer apna aur apne pita ka khana laake table pe rakh deta hai,
Mohan : Veer aaj tumhe hammer train karne ki koi jarurat nahi hai. Tum apna luggage pack kar lo, kal tumhe jack Nouding city le jayenge.
Veer : Nouding city? Kis liye?
Mohan : kya tum padhna nahi chahte ho martial soul ke baare mai. Aur tumhe banna nahi hai soul master? Jack tumhe chod aayega beginner soul master school mai. Tum wanha padh sakte ho jo tumhe chahiye.
Veer : papa aapne aapka mind kyun change kiya?
Mohan : tum jana chahte ho ya nahi ?
Veer (mann mai) : to issliye papa subha subha chale gaye thy, kyun ki unko grandpa jack se milna tha.
Veer : aagar mai chala jaunga to apka khane ka kya hoga.
Mohan : tumhe sach mai lagta hai ki mujhe tumhara jarurat hai? Tum jao….tumne ye path chuna hai, sirf wanhi hammering technique use karna jo maine tumhe sikhaya hai aur wanha ka blacksmith shop mai apprentice ban jana, wo kafi hoga tumhara income ke liye.
Mai tumhe itne ashani se Nouding city nahi bhejunga, jane se pehle promise karo mujhe kuch.
Veer : mai promise karta hun.
Mohan : tumne ye pucha hi nahi mai kya chahta hun aur tum pehle hi promise kar diye. As a men kabhi bhi tumhara promise break maat karna.
Veer : aap kahe aur wo mai na maan ye kabhi nahi hoga. Kyun ki aap jo bhi kahenge wo mere bhale ke liye hi hoga.
Mohan : thik hai, mai ye promise chahta hun ki,
mujhe usse kuch farak nahi padta ki tum kese tumhara soul power train karte ho, kabhi bhi koi bhi soul ring iss hammer mai add nahi karoge, aur koi bhi iska existence bhi jese na jaan paye, aur koi bhi ye na jaan paye ki tum ek twin martial soul ke malik ho.Kya tum ye kar paoge?
Veer : blue silver plant ka kya?
Mohan : wo tum kabhi bhi use kar sakte ho, jesse chahe.
Veer : iska matlab mai sirf blue silver plant use kar sakta hun, right?
Mohan : yes….
Veer : thik hai papa….mai ye promise karta hun apse, koi bhi ye nahi jaan payega ki mai twin martial soul owner hun.
Mohan : thik hai chalo khana khate hai….
Jaab Veer jane wala tha school ussi din subha subha jack bhi aajate hai veer ke ghar Veer ko lene ke liye.
Jack Veer ke ghar ke ander jaake,
Jack : Veer, tumne tumhara saman pack kar liya hai?
Jaab Veer wo sunta hai to,
Veer : ssssshhhh, ye bahut loud hai grandpa jack, papa ko disturbance pasand nahi hai jaab wo sote hai taab.
Jack : Veer, aab bhi tum tumhare dad ke baare mai soch rahe ho, tumhare school jane ke wajaye.
Veer : grandpa jack mujhe aur kuch samay de.
Fir Veer bhi chup chap apna saman lata hai aur jack ke sath chala jata hai bina apne pita ko bataye, kyun ki pichle raat ko hi wo bata diya tha aur mohan ne bhi han kar di thy aur mohan ne ye bhi bola tha ki subha subha usse disturb na kare.
Per Veer jane se pehle ek letter chod deta hai, jo ki jaab mahan utha taab wo padha.
Letter,
Papa mai grandpa jack ke sath ja raha hun, aap apna khyal rakhna, bhulna maat, khana bana diya hai kha lena.
Aaj mohan veer ko bahut miss kar raha tha wo khana ko dekhte huye, aur Veer ke baare mai soch raha tha, per Veer jane se pehle hi mohan ne usse keh diya tha,
Mohan : Veer, aagar kabhi bhi ye lage ki ye decision galat hai to wapas aake blacksmith ban jana. Aur jo bhi ho mai tumhare sath hun.
Raste mai Veer aur jack,
Jack : Veer, tum jyada village ko miss karoge….ya apne piyakad pita ko….
Veer : dono ko…. Grandpa jack, kya aap mujhe school ke baare mai kuch bata sakte hai? Aur aas paas ke area ke baare mai bhi?
Jack : han..han..kyun nahi..kya janna chahte ho?
Veer : papa ne kaha hai ki mujhe blacksmith shop mai kaam karna hai school ke baad.
Jack : kya kaam karna hai blacksmith shop mai? Wo pagal ho gaya hai kya? Tum aabhi bahut chote ho uske liye. Tum baas apne padhayi pe dhyaan do.
Yese hi baate karte karte dono Nouding city pahunch gaye, Veer to baas city ko hi dekh raha hota hai, bade bade alishan ghar, unchi unchi building bhi thy, aur bahut hi jyada khubsurat tha, wo dono ek market ke ander se chale ja rahe thy school ke aur.
Bahot behtareen shaandaar update bhai
 

Luffy

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Update 3
Mohan : kabhi nahi !!!! Ye kafi jor re kahi thy mohan ne….
Jise sunke jack ko bahut gussa aagaya…..
Jack : kya? Tumhe pata hai ye itna precious chance hai Veer ke liye. Ye hamare village ki khush nasibi hai, kyun ki hamare village ne ek soul saint master diya hai iss kingdom ko isiliye haam haar saal ek bache ko school bhej sakte hai padhne ke liye wo bhi free mai. Warna dusre village kitne muskil ka samna karte hai ye pata bhi hai tumhe. Samajh rahe ho na tum ?
Ye chance ko agar Veer ache se use kare to Veer future mai ek successful person ban sakta hai.
Mohan : successful hone se kya hoga ? Aur Veer ke jane ke baad mera khane ka kya hoga, koun dega mujhe ? Aur sabse badi baat blue silver plant ko train karke kya fayeda. Ye to baas ek useless martial soul hai aur hamesha rahega.
Ye sari baate mohan ne jack ko bina dekhe hi keh raha hota hai.
Jack : per Veer full soul power ke sath born hua hai. Jitna jaldi wo apna pehla soul ring pa lega, agar wo kamjor bhi kyu na ho, usko train kiya ja sakega aur wo soul warrior se soul master baan jayega.
Soul master, samajh rahe ho na.
Aur ye kayi saal ho gaye hai jaab hamara village mai pehli baar koi soul master banega. Warna to koi soul worrior hi ban jaye wo badi baat hogi.
Mohan : to tumhara maksad iske piche ye tha, mai sahi keh raha hu na? Maine mana kiya na wo nahi jayega. Aab tum ja sakte ho.
Jack (jor se) : mohan……
Mohan : mai sun sakta hun, tumhe chilane ki koi jarurat nahi hai. Aab tum ja sakte ho.
Veer : grandpa jack, gussa mat hoyiye, papa sahi keh rahe hai. Blue silver plant ek useless martial soul hai. Aur mai bhi ye soch raha hun ki yahi acha hoga ki mai na padhu martial soul ability ke baare mai.
Thank you grandpa jack aapne itna saab kiya mere liye….
Jack : Veer, mai gussa nahi hun….thik hai mujhe abhi jana chahiye. Fir jack jane lagte hai Veer ke ghar ke bahar aur Veer bhi unke sath hi tha unko chodne ja raha tha.
Jack jate jate darwaje ke paas rukh jate hai aur wapas palat ke mohan ko,
Jack : mohan sayad tumne pehle hi ye decide kar liya hai ki yese hi rahoge, per Veer abhi bacha hai, kya tum Veer ke baare nahi soch sakte ek baar bhi, usko sikhna chahiye aur ye uske liye jaruri bhi hai jine ke liye, aur jine ke liye kuch to skills pata hona chahiye.
Usse roko nahi, agar tum wo na de sako to….jisse ke liye future mai kabhi Veer tumhe galat samajhega ye hone na do.
Mai abhi ja raha hun aagar tum apna mind change karte ho to mujhe aake mil lena. Abhi bhi 3 months hai school mai registration ke liye.
Fir jack chale jate hai aur Veer unhe ghar ke bahar chod ke ander aajata hai.
Jaab Veer ander aata hai to uska dad abhi beth ke pi rahe hote hai….
Mohan : Veer mere liye aur leke aao….
Veer bhi bina kuch kahe jake ek bottle utha ke le aata hai aur mohan ka glass bharne lagta hai jaab glaas bhar jata hai mohan ek hi jhatke mai usse khatam kar deta hai.
Mohan : kya tum disappointed ho mere decision se? Kya tum soul master banna chahte ho?
Veer : nahi papa mai blacksmith banna chahta hun aapki tarah. Ham usse hi to jite hai mai usse kese chod sakta hun. Aur aapne promise bhi kya hua hai….mujhe sikhayenge farm tools banna.
Mohan : soul master ka kya use hai pata hai? Aur useless martial soul ko apne dimag mai se nikal ke batao aur yesa socho ki tumhare paas best martial soul hai.
Ye sari baate mohan gusse mai puch raha hota hai jiska effect uske ghar mai pad raha hota hai, sari chize hil rahe thy. Aur Veer usse saaf mehsus kar raha hota hai.
Veer : papa gussa may kijiye, mujhe soul master banna hi nahi hai, mai hamesha apke sath hi rahunga, aur mai isme hi khush hun aur hamesha apke liye khana bhi banaunga.
Mohan : mujhe dikhao tumhara martial soul.
Veer : thik hai….
Ye kehke Veer apna martial soul release kar deta hai, uska blue silver plant baki ke blue silver palnt se alag tha jo saaf dekh sakta tha mohan.
Jaab mohan ne ye dekha to face pe ek smile aagayi, per usse show hi nahi kiya,
Mohan (mann mai) : ye same hai uske Jessa….
Aur ek hi jhatke mai khada ho jata hai, aur mohan ko iss tarah se khade hone se Veer bhi do kadam piche chala jata hai.
Veer : papa…?
Mohan khade hoke ander ke kamre ki aur chala jata hai ye kehke ki mujhe koi distrub nahi kare.
Mohan ke jane baad Veer uske piche,
Veer : per mere paas ek aur martial soul hai. Fir apna left hand aage karke wo hammer ko summon karta hai.
Pata nahi keese mohan sayad uska yehsaas paake kamre se bahar aajata hai. Aur Veer kodekhne lagata hai aur apne atit ke pane mai kho jata hai,
Kuch loog thy jo Chal ke uske samne se aarahe thy, aur mohan ghayal hua pada tha, aur ek mahila kuch bol rahi hoti hai.
Mahila : unhe jane do, mai tumhare sath chalungi.
Aur wo mahila bhi wanhi mohan ke samne hi khadi thy, aur uske hath mai ek bacha tha. Fir wo bache ko mohan ke hath mai thama deti hai, mohan bhi usko pakad leta hai.
Mohan : nahi….
Mohan : nahi….Sital….
Fir wo mahila agae badh jati hai aur asaman ki taraf hath karke uska martial soul ko summon karti hai, ye bhi blue silver palnt hi tha per alag yesa lag raha tha ki ye sabse last evolve tha, jo ki bade se tree ke jesse nazar aaraha tha.
Aur uss mahila ke charo aur ek red colour ka ring ghum raha tha.
Jaab wo mahila ye kar rahi thy to wo sare admi jo inke taraf aarahe thy wo bhi hamala kar diya.
Mohan : nahi…..sital…..nahi…..
Fir apne hosh mai aake wo aage badh ke veer ka left hath ko pakad leta hai….
Mohan : ye….
Veer : kya kuch galat hai papa?
Mohan : ye twin martial soul hai. Ye twin martial soul hai. Beta….
Ye kehke mohan Veer ko kash ke gale laga leta hai.
Veer : papa….
Ye pehla din tha jaab veer ke papa ne usse hug kiya hua tha, usko kafi acha lag raha tha.
Veer : wait, mera inner power yese increase kese ho raha hai? Kya ye saab iss hammer ki wajah se ho raha hai. Aagar yese hi chalta raha to mai papa ko hurt kar dunga.
Veer : papa mai aapko aur hug nahi kar sakta.
Kyun ki abhi wo hammer ki wajah se pura ghar hilna suru ho gaya tha.
Mohan bhi Veer ko chod deta hai.
Mohan : isse wapas lelo….
Veer bhi usse wapas rakh leta hai to saab rukh jata hai.
Mohan : ye hamesha yaad rakhna, tum apna plant protect karna hammer ki madat se. Hamesha.
Veer apna dono hath ko dekhte huye : papa mai promise karta hun.
Dopeher ka time tha…..
Tan..tan….tan….
Veer ek lohe ko tukde ko jo garam tha ek hammer se mare ja raha tha,
Veer (mann mai) : iss duniya mai twin martial soul rare hai. Isiliye dad ne yesa bola ki hammer soul ko na dikhaun kisiko.
Abhi Veer hammering kar hi raha hota ki mohan bhi kamre se bahar nikal aata hai aur ek nazar Veer pe deke wo jake beth jata hai.
Veer bhi ek nazar apne pita ko dekh ke wapas apne kaam mai lag jata hai….
thodi der baad,
Mohan : ruko….
Fir mohan khade hoke veer ke paas aajata hai. Aur Veer ke hath se hammer le leta hai aur usko wanha se side mai kar deta hai….
Mohan : agar tum yese hi kaam karte rahe to tum isse kabhi bhi bana nahi sakte
.
Veer : to mujhe kya karna chahiye?
Mohan : dekho….
Ye kehke mohan hammering karne lagta hai. Aur Veer usse ache se dekhne lagta hai.
mohan : dekh liya maine kitne baar mai ye kiya.
veer : papa ye 81 strike hai...
mohan veer ke jawab sunke : right....(mann mai ; isne ek pal bhi apni ankhe nhi jhapkayi aur pehli baar mai hi thik answer de diya, ye sach mai talented hai)
Fir veer hammering wese hi karne lagta hai to usse ho nahi pa raha tha to mohan usse apne hatho se sikhane lagta hai.
Ye Veer ke jivan mai sabse acha din tha jaab uske dad ne uska hath pakad ke kuch sikhaya tha.
Yese hi kayi din nikal gaye aur Veer bhi aab ache se hammering karne lag jata hai bilkul apne papa ki tarah per abhi tak wo 81 strike pura nahi kar paya tha aur issi bich wo apne mystrious Clan ka kuch chota mota hidden weapon bhi bana diya tha.
Veer : finally, kuch to hidden weapon ban hi gaya hai. Aab mere pas kuch jyada material nahi hai jisse mai jyada se jyada aur behetar hidden weapon bana saku. Aagar kahi se jugad ho jayega to mai ek arrow shooter bhi bana sakunga.
Inn 3 mahine se papa baas mujhe sikha hi rahe hai apna hammering skill, aur aab maine 24 time strike kar sakta hun ek hi baar mai, abhi 81 strike bahut dur hai.
Per aab ye baad ki baat hai abhi mujhe mere skill ke bare mai kuch sochna hoga
Fir uthke kitchen ki taraf chala jata hai aur khana nikalna lagta hai veer, fir apne papa ko bulane lagta hai,
Veer : papa aajao khate hai….
Per mohan aaya hi nahi,
Veer : aam tor pe to papa aajate thy itne waqt mai, kya wo bimar pad gaye hai?
Abhi Veer uss kamre mai jane hi wala tha ki, mohan main door se ander aata hai.
Veer : papa kanha gaye thy itne subha ye apne mann mai sochta hai fir, papa chalo khate hai.
Mohan : thik hai.
Fir Veer apna aur apne pita ka khana laake table pe rakh deta hai,
Mohan : Veer aaj tumhe hammer train karne ki koi jarurat nahi hai. Tum apna luggage pack kar lo, kal tumhe jack Nouding city le jayenge.
Veer : Nouding city? Kis liye?
Mohan : kya tum padhna nahi chahte ho martial soul ke baare mai. Aur tumhe banna nahi hai soul master? Jack tumhe chod aayega beginner soul master school mai. Tum wanha padh sakte ho jo tumhe chahiye.
Veer : papa aapne aapka mind kyun change kiya?
Mohan : tum jana chahte ho ya nahi ?
Veer (mann mai) : to issliye papa subha subha chale gaye thy, kyun ki unko grandpa jack se milna tha.
Veer : aagar mai chala jaunga to apka khane ka kya hoga.
Mohan : tumhe sach mai lagta hai ki mujhe tumhara jarurat hai? Tum jao….tumne ye path chuna hai, sirf wanhi hammering technique use karna jo maine tumhe sikhaya hai aur wanha ka blacksmith shop mai apprentice ban jana, wo kafi hoga tumhara income ke liye.
Mai tumhe itne ashani se Nouding city nahi bhejunga, jane se pehle promise karo mujhe kuch.
Veer : mai promise karta hun.
Mohan : tumne ye pucha hi nahi mai kya chahta hun aur tum pehle hi promise kar diye. As a men kabhi bhi tumhara promise break maat karna.
Veer : aap kahe aur wo mai na maan ye kabhi nahi hoga. Kyun ki aap jo bhi kahenge wo mere bhale ke liye hi hoga.
Mohan : thik hai, mai ye promise chahta hun ki,
mujhe usse kuch farak nahi padta ki tum kese tumhara soul power train karte ho, kabhi bhi koi bhi soul ring iss hammer mai add nahi karoge, aur koi bhi iska existence bhi jese na jaan paye, aur koi bhi ye na jaan paye ki tum ek twin martial soul ke malik ho.Kya tum ye kar paoge?
Veer : blue silver plant ka kya?
Mohan : wo tum kabhi bhi use kar sakte ho, jesse chahe.
Veer : iska matlab mai sirf blue silver plant use kar sakta hun, right?
Mohan : yes….
Veer : thik hai papa….mai ye promise karta hun apse, koi bhi ye nahi jaan payega ki mai twin martial soul owner hun.
Mohan : thik hai chalo khana khate hai….
Jaab Veer jane wala tha school ussi din subha subha jack bhi aajate hai veer ke ghar Veer ko lene ke liye.
Jack Veer ke ghar ke ander jaake,
Jack : Veer, tumne tumhara saman pack kar liya hai?
Jaab Veer wo sunta hai to,
Veer : ssssshhhh, ye bahut loud hai grandpa jack, papa ko disturbance pasand nahi hai jaab wo sote hai taab.
Jack : Veer, aab bhi tum tumhare dad ke baare mai soch rahe ho, tumhare school jane ke wajaye.
Veer : grandpa jack mujhe aur kuch samay de.
Fir Veer bhi chup chap apna saman lata hai aur jack ke sath chala jata hai bina apne pita ko bataye, kyun ki pichle raat ko hi wo bata diya tha aur mohan ne bhi han kar di thy aur mohan ne ye bhi bola tha ki subha subha usse disturb na kare.
Per Veer jane se pehle ek letter chod deta hai, jo ki jaab mahan utha taab wo padha.
Letter,
Papa mai grandpa jack ke sath ja raha hun, aap apna khyal rakhna, bhulna maat, khana bana diya hai kha lena.
Aaj mohan veer ko bahut miss kar raha tha wo khana ko dekhte huye, aur Veer ke baare mai soch raha tha, per Veer jane se pehle hi mohan ne usse keh diya tha,
Mohan : Veer, aagar kabhi bhi ye lage ki ye decision galat hai to wapas aake blacksmith ban jana. Aur jo bhi ho mai tumhare sath hun.
Raste mai Veer aur jack,
Jack : Veer, tum jyada village ko miss karoge….ya apne piyakad pita ko….
Veer : dono ko…. Grandpa jack, kya aap mujhe school ke baare mai kuch bata sakte hai? Aur aas paas ke area ke baare mai bhi?
Jack : han..han..kyun nahi..kya janna chahte ho?
Veer : papa ne kaha hai ki mujhe blacksmith shop mai kaam karna hai school ke baad.
Jack : kya kaam karna hai blacksmith shop mai? Wo pagal ho gaya hai kya? Tum aabhi bahut chote ho uske liye. Tum baas apne padhayi pe dhyaan do.
Yese hi baate karte karte dono Nouding city pahunch gaye, Veer to baas city ko hi dekh raha hota hai, bade bade alishan ghar, unchi unchi building bhi thy, aur bahut hi jyada khubsurat tha, wo dono ek market ke ander se chale ja rahe thy school ke aur.

Awesome update
 

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Update 3
Mohan : kabhi nahi !!!! Ye kafi jor re kahi thy mohan ne….
Jise sunke jack ko bahut gussa aagaya…..
Jack : kya? Tumhe pata hai ye itna precious chance hai Veer ke liye. Ye hamare village ki khush nasibi hai, kyun ki hamare village ne ek soul saint master diya hai iss kingdom ko isiliye haam haar saal ek bache ko school bhej sakte hai padhne ke liye wo bhi free mai. Warna dusre village kitne muskil ka samna karte hai ye pata bhi hai tumhe. Samajh rahe ho na tum ?
Ye chance ko agar Veer ache se use kare to Veer future mai ek successful person ban sakta hai.
Mohan : successful hone se kya hoga ? Aur Veer ke jane ke baad mera khane ka kya hoga, koun dega mujhe ? Aur sabse badi baat blue silver plant ko train karke kya fayeda. Ye to baas ek useless martial soul hai aur hamesha rahega.
Ye sari baate mohan ne jack ko bina dekhe hi keh raha hota hai.
Jack : per Veer full soul power ke sath born hua hai. Jitna jaldi wo apna pehla soul ring pa lega, agar wo kamjor bhi kyu na ho, usko train kiya ja sakega aur wo soul warrior se soul master baan jayega.
Soul master, samajh rahe ho na.
Aur ye kayi saal ho gaye hai jaab hamara village mai pehli baar koi soul master banega. Warna to koi soul worrior hi ban jaye wo badi baat hogi.
Mohan : to tumhara maksad iske piche ye tha, mai sahi keh raha hu na? Maine mana kiya na wo nahi jayega. Aab tum ja sakte ho.
Jack (jor se) : mohan……
Mohan : mai sun sakta hun, tumhe chilane ki koi jarurat nahi hai. Aab tum ja sakte ho.
Veer : grandpa jack, gussa mat hoyiye, papa sahi keh rahe hai. Blue silver plant ek useless martial soul hai. Aur mai bhi ye soch raha hun ki yahi acha hoga ki mai na padhu martial soul ability ke baare mai.
Thank you grandpa jack aapne itna saab kiya mere liye….
Jack : Veer, mai gussa nahi hun….thik hai mujhe abhi jana chahiye. Fir jack jane lagte hai Veer ke ghar ke bahar aur Veer bhi unke sath hi tha unko chodne ja raha tha.
Jack jate jate darwaje ke paas rukh jate hai aur wapas palat ke mohan ko,
Jack : mohan sayad tumne pehle hi ye decide kar liya hai ki yese hi rahoge, per Veer abhi bacha hai, kya tum Veer ke baare nahi soch sakte ek baar bhi, usko sikhna chahiye aur ye uske liye jaruri bhi hai jine ke liye, aur jine ke liye kuch to skills pata hona chahiye.
Usse roko nahi, agar tum wo na de sako to….jisse ke liye future mai kabhi Veer tumhe galat samajhega ye hone na do.
Mai abhi ja raha hun aagar tum apna mind change karte ho to mujhe aake mil lena. Abhi bhi 3 months hai school mai registration ke liye.
Fir jack chale jate hai aur Veer unhe ghar ke bahar chod ke ander aajata hai.
Jaab Veer ander aata hai to uska dad abhi beth ke pi rahe hote hai….
Mohan : Veer mere liye aur leke aao….
Veer bhi bina kuch kahe jake ek bottle utha ke le aata hai aur mohan ka glass bharne lagta hai jaab glaas bhar jata hai mohan ek hi jhatke mai usse khatam kar deta hai.
Mohan : kya tum disappointed ho mere decision se? Kya tum soul master banna chahte ho?
Veer : nahi papa mai blacksmith banna chahta hun aapki tarah. Ham usse hi to jite hai mai usse kese chod sakta hun. Aur aapne promise bhi kya hua hai….mujhe sikhayenge farm tools banna.
Mohan : soul master ka kya use hai pata hai? Aur useless martial soul ko apne dimag mai se nikal ke batao aur yesa socho ki tumhare paas best martial soul hai.
Ye sari baate mohan gusse mai puch raha hota hai jiska effect uske ghar mai pad raha hota hai, sari chize hil rahe thy. Aur Veer usse saaf mehsus kar raha hota hai.
Veer : papa gussa may kijiye, mujhe soul master banna hi nahi hai, mai hamesha apke sath hi rahunga, aur mai isme hi khush hun aur hamesha apke liye khana bhi banaunga.
Mohan : mujhe dikhao tumhara martial soul.
Veer : thik hai….
Ye kehke Veer apna martial soul release kar deta hai, uska blue silver plant baki ke blue silver palnt se alag tha jo saaf dekh sakta tha mohan.
Jaab mohan ne ye dekha to face pe ek smile aagayi, per usse show hi nahi kiya,
Mohan (mann mai) : ye same hai uske Jessa….
Aur ek hi jhatke mai khada ho jata hai, aur mohan ko iss tarah se khade hone se Veer bhi do kadam piche chala jata hai.
Veer : papa…?
Mohan khade hoke ander ke kamre ki aur chala jata hai ye kehke ki mujhe koi distrub nahi kare.
Mohan ke jane baad Veer uske piche,
Veer : per mere paas ek aur martial soul hai. Fir apna left hand aage karke wo hammer ko summon karta hai.
Pata nahi keese mohan sayad uska yehsaas paake kamre se bahar aajata hai. Aur Veer kodekhne lagata hai aur apne atit ke pane mai kho jata hai,
Kuch loog thy jo Chal ke uske samne se aarahe thy, aur mohan ghayal hua pada tha, aur ek mahila kuch bol rahi hoti hai.
Mahila : unhe jane do, mai tumhare sath chalungi.
Aur wo mahila bhi wanhi mohan ke samne hi khadi thy, aur uske hath mai ek bacha tha. Fir wo bache ko mohan ke hath mai thama deti hai, mohan bhi usko pakad leta hai.
Mohan : nahi….
Mohan : nahi….Sital….
Fir wo mahila agae badh jati hai aur asaman ki taraf hath karke uska martial soul ko summon karti hai, ye bhi blue silver palnt hi tha per alag yesa lag raha tha ki ye sabse last evolve tha, jo ki bade se tree ke jesse nazar aaraha tha.
Aur uss mahila ke charo aur ek red colour ka ring ghum raha tha.
Jaab wo mahila ye kar rahi thy to wo sare admi jo inke taraf aarahe thy wo bhi hamala kar diya.
Mohan : nahi…..sital…..nahi…..
Fir apne hosh mai aake wo aage badh ke veer ka left hath ko pakad leta hai….
Mohan : ye….
Veer : kya kuch galat hai papa?
Mohan : ye twin martial soul hai. Ye twin martial soul hai. Beta….
Ye kehke mohan Veer ko kash ke gale laga leta hai.
Veer : papa….
Ye pehla din tha jaab veer ke papa ne usse hug kiya hua tha, usko kafi acha lag raha tha.
Veer : wait, mera inner power yese increase kese ho raha hai? Kya ye saab iss hammer ki wajah se ho raha hai. Aagar yese hi chalta raha to mai papa ko hurt kar dunga.
Veer : papa mai aapko aur hug nahi kar sakta.
Kyun ki abhi wo hammer ki wajah se pura ghar hilna suru ho gaya tha.
Mohan bhi Veer ko chod deta hai.
Mohan : isse wapas lelo….
Veer bhi usse wapas rakh leta hai to saab rukh jata hai.
Mohan : ye hamesha yaad rakhna, tum apna plant protect karna hammer ki madat se. Hamesha.
Veer apna dono hath ko dekhte huye : papa mai promise karta hun.
Dopeher ka time tha…..
Tan..tan….tan….
Veer ek lohe ko tukde ko jo garam tha ek hammer se mare ja raha tha,
Veer (mann mai) : iss duniya mai twin martial soul rare hai. Isiliye dad ne yesa bola ki hammer soul ko na dikhaun kisiko.
Abhi Veer hammering kar hi raha hota ki mohan bhi kamre se bahar nikal aata hai aur ek nazar Veer pe deke wo jake beth jata hai.
Veer bhi ek nazar apne pita ko dekh ke wapas apne kaam mai lag jata hai….
thodi der baad,
Mohan : ruko….
Fir mohan khade hoke veer ke paas aajata hai. Aur Veer ke hath se hammer le leta hai aur usko wanha se side mai kar deta hai….
Mohan : agar tum yese hi kaam karte rahe to tum isse kabhi bhi bana nahi sakte
.
Veer : to mujhe kya karna chahiye?
Mohan : dekho….
Ye kehke mohan hammering karne lagta hai. Aur Veer usse ache se dekhne lagta hai.
mohan : dekh liya maine kitne baar mai ye kiya.
veer : papa ye 81 strike hai...
mohan veer ke jawab sunke : right....(mann mai ; isne ek pal bhi apni ankhe nhi jhapkayi aur pehli baar mai hi thik answer de diya, ye sach mai talented hai)
Fir veer hammering wese hi karne lagta hai to usse ho nahi pa raha tha to mohan usse apne hatho se sikhane lagta hai.
Ye Veer ke jivan mai sabse acha din tha jaab uske dad ne uska hath pakad ke kuch sikhaya tha.
Yese hi kayi din nikal gaye aur Veer bhi aab ache se hammering karne lag jata hai bilkul apne papa ki tarah per abhi tak wo 81 strike pura nahi kar paya tha aur issi bich wo apne mystrious Clan ka kuch chota mota hidden weapon bhi bana diya tha.
Veer : finally, kuch to hidden weapon ban hi gaya hai. Aab mere pas kuch jyada material nahi hai jisse mai jyada se jyada aur behetar hidden weapon bana saku. Aagar kahi se jugad ho jayega to mai ek arrow shooter bhi bana sakunga.
Inn 3 mahine se papa baas mujhe sikha hi rahe hai apna hammering skill, aur aab maine 24 time strike kar sakta hun ek hi baar mai, abhi 81 strike bahut dur hai.
Per aab ye baad ki baat hai abhi mujhe mere skill ke bare mai kuch sochna hoga
Fir uthke kitchen ki taraf chala jata hai aur khana nikalna lagta hai veer, fir apne papa ko bulane lagta hai,
Veer : papa aajao khate hai….
Per mohan aaya hi nahi,
Veer : aam tor pe to papa aajate thy itne waqt mai, kya wo bimar pad gaye hai?
Abhi Veer uss kamre mai jane hi wala tha ki, mohan main door se ander aata hai.
Veer : papa kanha gaye thy itne subha ye apne mann mai sochta hai fir, papa chalo khate hai.
Mohan : thik hai.
Fir Veer apna aur apne pita ka khana laake table pe rakh deta hai,
Mohan : Veer aaj tumhe hammer train karne ki koi jarurat nahi hai. Tum apna luggage pack kar lo, kal tumhe jack Nouding city le jayenge.
Veer : Nouding city? Kis liye?
Mohan : kya tum padhna nahi chahte ho martial soul ke baare mai. Aur tumhe banna nahi hai soul master? Jack tumhe chod aayega beginner soul master school mai. Tum wanha padh sakte ho jo tumhe chahiye.
Veer : papa aapne aapka mind kyun change kiya?
Mohan : tum jana chahte ho ya nahi ?
Veer (mann mai) : to issliye papa subha subha chale gaye thy, kyun ki unko grandpa jack se milna tha.
Veer : aagar mai chala jaunga to apka khane ka kya hoga.
Mohan : tumhe sach mai lagta hai ki mujhe tumhara jarurat hai? Tum jao….tumne ye path chuna hai, sirf wanhi hammering technique use karna jo maine tumhe sikhaya hai aur wanha ka blacksmith shop mai apprentice ban jana, wo kafi hoga tumhara income ke liye.
Mai tumhe itne ashani se Nouding city nahi bhejunga, jane se pehle promise karo mujhe kuch.
Veer : mai promise karta hun.
Mohan : tumne ye pucha hi nahi mai kya chahta hun aur tum pehle hi promise kar diye. As a men kabhi bhi tumhara promise break maat karna.
Veer : aap kahe aur wo mai na maan ye kabhi nahi hoga. Kyun ki aap jo bhi kahenge wo mere bhale ke liye hi hoga.
Mohan : thik hai, mai ye promise chahta hun ki,
mujhe usse kuch farak nahi padta ki tum kese tumhara soul power train karte ho, kabhi bhi koi bhi soul ring iss hammer mai add nahi karoge, aur koi bhi iska existence bhi jese na jaan paye, aur koi bhi ye na jaan paye ki tum ek twin martial soul ke malik ho.Kya tum ye kar paoge?
Veer : blue silver plant ka kya?
Mohan : wo tum kabhi bhi use kar sakte ho, jesse chahe.
Veer : iska matlab mai sirf blue silver plant use kar sakta hun, right?
Mohan : yes….
Veer : thik hai papa….mai ye promise karta hun apse, koi bhi ye nahi jaan payega ki mai twin martial soul owner hun.
Mohan : thik hai chalo khana khate hai….
Jaab Veer jane wala tha school ussi din subha subha jack bhi aajate hai veer ke ghar Veer ko lene ke liye.
Jack Veer ke ghar ke ander jaake,
Jack : Veer, tumne tumhara saman pack kar liya hai?
Jaab Veer wo sunta hai to,
Veer : ssssshhhh, ye bahut loud hai grandpa jack, papa ko disturbance pasand nahi hai jaab wo sote hai taab.
Jack : Veer, aab bhi tum tumhare dad ke baare mai soch rahe ho, tumhare school jane ke wajaye.
Veer : grandpa jack mujhe aur kuch samay de.
Fir Veer bhi chup chap apna saman lata hai aur jack ke sath chala jata hai bina apne pita ko bataye, kyun ki pichle raat ko hi wo bata diya tha aur mohan ne bhi han kar di thy aur mohan ne ye bhi bola tha ki subha subha usse disturb na kare.
Per Veer jane se pehle ek letter chod deta hai, jo ki jaab mahan utha taab wo padha.
Letter,
Papa mai grandpa jack ke sath ja raha hun, aap apna khyal rakhna, bhulna maat, khana bana diya hai kha lena.
Aaj mohan veer ko bahut miss kar raha tha wo khana ko dekhte huye, aur Veer ke baare mai soch raha tha, per Veer jane se pehle hi mohan ne usse keh diya tha,
Mohan : Veer, aagar kabhi bhi ye lage ki ye decision galat hai to wapas aake blacksmith ban jana. Aur jo bhi ho mai tumhare sath hun.
Raste mai Veer aur jack,
Jack : Veer, tum jyada village ko miss karoge….ya apne piyakad pita ko….
Veer : dono ko…. Grandpa jack, kya aap mujhe school ke baare mai kuch bata sakte hai? Aur aas paas ke area ke baare mai bhi?
Jack : han..han..kyun nahi..kya janna chahte ho?
Veer : papa ne kaha hai ki mujhe blacksmith shop mai kaam karna hai school ke baad.
Jack : kya kaam karna hai blacksmith shop mai? Wo pagal ho gaya hai kya? Tum aabhi bahut chote ho uske liye. Tum baas apne padhayi pe dhyaan do.
Yese hi baate karte karte dono Nouding city pahunch gaye, Veer to baas city ko hi dekh raha hota hai, bade bade alishan ghar, unchi unchi building bhi thy, aur bahut hi jyada khubsurat tha, wo dono ek market ke ander se chale ja rahe thy school ke aur.

very nice update bhai
 

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