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Mohan : kabhi nahi !!!! Ye kafi jor re kahi thy mohan ne….
Jise sunke jack ko bahut gussa aagaya…..
Jack : kya? Tumhe pata hai ye itna precious chance hai Veer ke liye. Ye hamare village ki khush nasibi hai, kyun ki hamare village ne ek soul saint master diya hai iss kingdom ko isiliye haam haar saal ek bache ko school bhej sakte hai padhne ke liye wo bhi free mai. Warna dusre village kitne muskil ka samna karte hai ye pata bhi hai tumhe. Samajh rahe ho na tum ?
Ye chance ko agar Veer ache se use kare to Veer future mai ek successful person ban sakta hai.
Mohan : successful hone se kya hoga ? Aur Veer ke jane ke baad mera khane ka kya hoga, koun dega mujhe ? Aur sabse badi baat blue silver plant ko train karke kya fayeda. Ye to baas ek useless martial soul hai aur hamesha rahega.
Ye sari baate mohan ne jack ko bina dekhe hi keh raha hota hai.
Jack : per Veer full soul power ke sath born hua hai. Jitna jaldi wo apna pehla soul ring pa lega, agar wo kamjor bhi kyu na ho, usko train kiya ja sakega aur wo soul warrior se soul master baan jayega.
Soul master, samajh rahe ho na.
Aur ye kayi saal ho gaye hai jaab hamara village mai pehli baar koi soul master banega. Warna to koi soul worrior hi ban jaye wo badi baat hogi.
Mohan : to tumhara maksad iske piche ye tha, mai sahi keh raha hu na? Maine mana kiya na wo nahi jayega. Aab tum ja sakte ho.
Jack (jor se) : mohan……
Mohan : mai sun sakta hun, tumhe chilane ki koi jarurat nahi hai. Aab tum ja sakte ho.
Veer : grandpa jack, gussa mat hoyiye, papa sahi keh rahe hai. Blue silver plant ek useless martial soul hai. Aur mai bhi ye soch raha hun ki yahi acha hoga ki mai na padhu martial soul ability ke baare mai.
Thank you grandpa jack aapne itna saab kiya mere liye….
Jack : Veer, mai gussa nahi hun….thik hai mujhe abhi jana chahiye. Fir jack jane lagte hai Veer ke ghar ke bahar aur Veer bhi unke sath hi tha unko chodne ja raha tha.
Jack jate jate darwaje ke paas rukh jate hai aur wapas palat ke mohan ko,
Jack : mohan sayad tumne pehle hi ye decide kar liya hai ki yese hi rahoge, per Veer abhi bacha hai, kya tum Veer ke baare nahi soch sakte ek baar bhi, usko sikhna chahiye aur ye uske liye jaruri bhi hai jine ke liye, aur jine ke liye kuch to skills pata hona chahiye.
Usse roko nahi, agar tum wo na de sako to….jisse ke liye future mai kabhi Veer tumhe galat samajhega ye hone na do.
Mai abhi ja raha hun aagar tum apna mind change karte ho to mujhe aake mil lena. Abhi bhi 3 months hai school mai registration ke liye.
Fir jack chale jate hai aur Veer unhe ghar ke bahar chod ke ander aajata hai.
Jaab Veer ander aata hai to uska dad abhi beth ke pi rahe hote hai….
Mohan : Veer mere liye aur leke aao….
Veer bhi bina kuch kahe jake ek bottle utha ke le aata hai aur mohan ka glass bharne lagta hai jaab glaas bhar jata hai mohan ek hi jhatke mai usse khatam kar deta hai.
Mohan : kya tum disappointed ho mere decision se? Kya tum soul master banna chahte ho?
Veer : nahi papa mai blacksmith banna chahta hun aapki tarah. Ham usse hi to jite hai mai usse kese chod sakta hun. Aur aapne promise bhi kya hua hai….mujhe sikhayenge farm tools banna.
Mohan : soul master ka kya use hai pata hai? Aur useless martial soul ko apne dimag mai se nikal ke batao aur yesa socho ki tumhare paas best martial soul hai.
Ye sari baate mohan gusse mai puch raha hota hai jiska effect uske ghar mai pad raha hota hai, sari chize hil rahe thy. Aur Veer usse saaf mehsus kar raha hota hai.
Veer : papa gussa may kijiye, mujhe soul master banna hi nahi hai, mai hamesha apke sath hi rahunga, aur mai isme hi khush hun aur hamesha apke liye khana bhi banaunga.
Mohan : mujhe dikhao tumhara martial soul.
Veer : thik hai….
Ye kehke Veer apna martial soul release kar deta hai, uska blue silver plant baki ke blue silver palnt se alag tha jo saaf dekh sakta tha mohan.
Jaab mohan ne ye dekha to face pe ek smile aagayi, per usse show hi nahi kiya,
Mohan (mann mai) : ye same hai uske Jessa….
Aur ek hi jhatke mai khada ho jata hai, aur mohan ko iss tarah se khade hone se Veer bhi do kadam piche chala jata hai.
Veer : papa…?
Mohan khade hoke ander ke kamre ki aur chala jata hai ye kehke ki mujhe koi distrub nahi kare.
Mohan ke jane baad Veer uske piche,
Veer : per mere paas ek aur martial soul hai. Fir apna left hand aage karke wo hammer ko summon karta hai.
Pata nahi keese mohan sayad uska yehsaas paake kamre se bahar aajata hai. Aur Veer kodekhne lagata hai aur apne atit ke pane mai kho jata hai,
Kuch loog thy jo Chal ke uske samne se aarahe thy, aur mohan ghayal hua pada tha, aur ek mahila kuch bol rahi hoti hai.
Mahila : unhe jane do, mai tumhare sath chalungi.
Aur wo mahila bhi wanhi mohan ke samne hi khadi thy, aur uske hath mai ek bacha tha. Fir wo bache ko mohan ke hath mai thama deti hai, mohan bhi usko pakad leta hai.
Mohan : nahi….
Mohan : nahi….Sital….
Fir wo mahila agae badh jati hai aur asaman ki taraf hath karke uska martial soul ko summon karti hai, ye bhi blue silver palnt hi tha per alag yesa lag raha tha ki ye sabse last evolve tha, jo ki bade se tree ke jesse nazar aaraha tha.
Aur uss mahila ke charo aur ek red colour ka ring ghum raha tha.
Jaab wo mahila ye kar rahi thy to wo sare admi jo inke taraf aarahe thy wo bhi hamala kar diya.
Mohan : nahi…..sital…..nahi…..
Fir apne hosh mai aake wo aage badh ke veer ka left hath ko pakad leta hai….
Mohan : ye….
Veer : kya kuch galat hai papa?
Mohan : ye twin martial soul hai. Ye twin martial soul hai. Beta….
Ye kehke mohan Veer ko kash ke gale laga leta hai.
Veer : papa….
Ye pehla din tha jaab veer ke papa ne usse hug kiya hua tha, usko kafi acha lag raha tha.
Veer : wait, mera inner power yese increase kese ho raha hai? Kya ye saab iss hammer ki wajah se ho raha hai. Aagar yese hi chalta raha to mai papa ko hurt kar dunga.
Veer : papa mai aapko aur hug nahi kar sakta.
Kyun ki abhi wo hammer ki wajah se pura ghar hilna suru ho gaya tha.
Mohan bhi Veer ko chod deta hai.
Mohan : isse wapas lelo….
Veer bhi usse wapas rakh leta hai to saab rukh jata hai.
Mohan : ye hamesha yaad rakhna, tum apna plant protect karna hammer ki madat se. Hamesha.
Veer apna dono hath ko dekhte huye : papa mai promise karta hun.
Dopeher ka time tha…..
Tan..tan….tan….
Veer ek lohe ko tukde ko jo garam tha ek hammer se mare ja raha tha,
Veer (mann mai) : iss duniya mai twin martial soul rare hai. Isiliye dad ne yesa bola ki hammer soul ko na dikhaun kisiko.
Abhi Veer hammering kar hi raha hota ki mohan bhi kamre se bahar nikal aata hai aur ek nazar Veer pe deke wo jake beth jata hai.
Veer bhi ek nazar apne pita ko dekh ke wapas apne kaam mai lag jata hai….
thodi der baad,
Mohan : ruko….
Fir mohan khade hoke veer ke paas aajata hai. Aur Veer ke hath se hammer le leta hai aur usko wanha se side mai kar deta hai….
Mohan : agar tum yese hi kaam karte rahe to tum isse kabhi bhi bana nahi sakte
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Veer : to mujhe kya karna chahiye?
Mohan : dekho….
Ye kehke mohan hammering karne lagta hai. Aur Veer usse ache se dekhne lagta hai.
mohan : dekh liya maine kitne baar mai ye kiya.
veer : papa ye 81 strike hai...
mohan veer ke jawab sunke : right....(mann mai ; isne ek pal bhi apni ankhe nhi jhapkayi aur pehli baar mai hi thik answer de diya, ye sach mai talented hai)
Fir veer hammering wese hi karne lagta hai to usse ho nahi pa raha tha to mohan usse apne hatho se sikhane lagta hai.
Ye Veer ke jivan mai sabse acha din tha jaab uske dad ne uska hath pakad ke kuch sikhaya tha.
Yese hi kayi din nikal gaye aur Veer bhi aab ache se hammering karne lag jata hai bilkul apne papa ki tarah per abhi tak wo 81 strike pura nahi kar paya tha aur issi bich wo apne mystrious Clan ka kuch chota mota hidden weapon bhi bana diya tha.
Veer : finally, kuch to hidden weapon ban hi gaya hai. Aab mere pas kuch jyada material nahi hai jisse mai jyada se jyada aur behetar hidden weapon bana saku. Aagar kahi se jugad ho jayega to mai ek arrow shooter bhi bana sakunga.
Inn 3 mahine se papa baas mujhe sikha hi rahe hai apna hammering skill, aur aab maine 24 time strike kar sakta hun ek hi baar mai, abhi 81 strike bahut dur hai.
Per aab ye baad ki baat hai abhi mujhe mere skill ke bare mai kuch sochna hoga
Fir uthke kitchen ki taraf chala jata hai aur khana nikalna lagta hai veer, fir apne papa ko bulane lagta hai,
Veer : papa aajao khate hai….
Per mohan aaya hi nahi,
Veer : aam tor pe to papa aajate thy itne waqt mai, kya wo bimar pad gaye hai?
Abhi Veer uss kamre mai jane hi wala tha ki, mohan main door se ander aata hai.
Veer : papa kanha gaye thy itne subha ye apne mann mai sochta hai fir, papa chalo khate hai.
Mohan : thik hai.
Fir Veer apna aur apne pita ka khana laake table pe rakh deta hai,
Mohan : Veer aaj tumhe hammer train karne ki koi jarurat nahi hai. Tum apna luggage pack kar lo, kal tumhe jack Nouding city le jayenge.
Veer : Nouding city? Kis liye?
Mohan : kya tum padhna nahi chahte ho martial soul ke baare mai. Aur tumhe banna nahi hai soul master? Jack tumhe chod aayega beginner soul master school mai. Tum wanha padh sakte ho jo tumhe chahiye.
Veer : papa aapne aapka mind kyun change kiya?
Mohan : tum jana chahte ho ya nahi ?
Veer (mann mai) : to issliye papa subha subha chale gaye thy, kyun ki unko grandpa jack se milna tha.
Veer : aagar mai chala jaunga to apka khane ka kya hoga.
Mohan : tumhe sach mai lagta hai ki mujhe tumhara jarurat hai? Tum jao….tumne ye path chuna hai, sirf wanhi hammering technique use karna jo maine tumhe sikhaya hai aur wanha ka blacksmith shop mai apprentice ban jana, wo kafi hoga tumhara income ke liye.
Mai tumhe itne ashani se Nouding city nahi bhejunga, jane se pehle promise karo mujhe kuch.
Veer : mai promise karta hun.
Mohan : tumne ye pucha hi nahi mai kya chahta hun aur tum pehle hi promise kar diye. As a men kabhi bhi tumhara promise break maat karna.
Veer : aap kahe aur wo mai na maan ye kabhi nahi hoga. Kyun ki aap jo bhi kahenge wo mere bhale ke liye hi hoga.
Mohan : thik hai, mai ye promise chahta hun ki,
mujhe usse kuch farak nahi padta ki tum kese tumhara soul power train karte ho, kabhi bhi koi bhi soul ring iss hammer mai add nahi karoge, aur koi bhi iska existence bhi jese na jaan paye, aur koi bhi ye na jaan paye ki tum ek twin martial soul ke malik ho.Kya tum ye kar paoge?
Veer : blue silver plant ka kya?
Mohan : wo tum kabhi bhi use kar sakte ho, jesse chahe.
Veer : iska matlab mai sirf blue silver plant use kar sakta hun, right?
Mohan : yes….
Veer : thik hai papa….mai ye promise karta hun apse, koi bhi ye nahi jaan payega ki mai twin martial soul owner hun.
Mohan : thik hai chalo khana khate hai….
Jaab Veer jane wala tha school ussi din subha subha jack bhi aajate hai veer ke ghar Veer ko lene ke liye.
Jack Veer ke ghar ke ander jaake,
Jack : Veer, tumne tumhara saman pack kar liya hai?
Jaab Veer wo sunta hai to,
Veer : ssssshhhh, ye bahut loud hai grandpa jack, papa ko disturbance pasand nahi hai jaab wo sote hai taab.
Jack : Veer, aab bhi tum tumhare dad ke baare mai soch rahe ho, tumhare school jane ke wajaye.
Veer : grandpa jack mujhe aur kuch samay de.
Fir Veer bhi chup chap apna saman lata hai aur jack ke sath chala jata hai bina apne pita ko bataye, kyun ki pichle raat ko hi wo bata diya tha aur mohan ne bhi han kar di thy aur mohan ne ye bhi bola tha ki subha subha usse disturb na kare.
Per Veer jane se pehle ek letter chod deta hai, jo ki jaab mahan utha taab wo padha.
Letter,
Papa mai grandpa jack ke sath ja raha hun, aap apna khyal rakhna, bhulna maat, khana bana diya hai kha lena.
Aaj mohan veer ko bahut miss kar raha tha wo khana ko dekhte huye, aur Veer ke baare mai soch raha tha, per Veer jane se pehle hi mohan ne usse keh diya tha,
Mohan : Veer, aagar kabhi bhi ye lage ki ye decision galat hai to wapas aake blacksmith ban jana. Aur jo bhi ho mai tumhare sath hun.
Raste mai Veer aur jack,
Jack : Veer, tum jyada village ko miss karoge….ya apne piyakad pita ko….
Veer : dono ko…. Grandpa jack, kya aap mujhe school ke baare mai kuch bata sakte hai? Aur aas paas ke area ke baare mai bhi?
Jack : han..han..kyun nahi..kya janna chahte ho?
Veer : papa ne kaha hai ki mujhe blacksmith shop mai kaam karna hai school ke baad.
Jack : kya kaam karna hai blacksmith shop mai? Wo pagal ho gaya hai kya? Tum aabhi bahut chote ho uske liye. Tum baas apne padhayi pe dhyaan do.
Yese hi baate karte karte dono Nouding city pahunch gaye, Veer to baas city ko hi dekh raha hota hai, bade bade alishan ghar, unchi unchi building bhi thy, aur bahut hi jyada khubsurat tha, wo dono ek market ke ander se chale ja rahe thy school ke aur.
Badiya update hey
 

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Sabhi bache abhi baat kar hi rahe thy ki piche se ek pyari si awaj aati hai, jaab saab piche mudd te hai to ek ladki khadi thy,
Pink dress, badi badi ankhe, lambe baal, kamar pe ek rabbit ka purse, aur sar mai rabbit ka kaan ka clip jo hawa mai hil raha tha, aur hath mai rabbit ka pink bag, yesa lag raha tha ki wo ladki ko rabbit bahut jyada pasand hai.
Veer baas usse hi dekhe ja raha tha isiliye,
W Veer ke kaan ke paas : mixed-gender housing hamare school mai allowed hai. Haam abhi bache hai aur hamara school dorm gender neutral hai.
Per hamesha ye intermediate school ke hostel mai hota hai per iss baar junior hostel mai suru ho gaya pata nahi kyu? Ye baat bahut ajib hai.
Jaab W aur Veer baate kar rahe thy to wo ladki aage ki aur chalte chalte Veer ke samne aake khadi ho jati hai.
W : pichle saal hamme ek bhi apprentice join nahi hua tha, per iss saal 2 new apprentice join huye hai.
Boss, jao apna kuch skill dikhao…..
Veer : mai?
W : yes…wo ek newbie hai hame uski abilities test karna hoga. Aab jao….
Ye kehke piche se ek Dhaka de deta hai Veer ko jisse Veer aage ki aur jhuk ke aage badh jata hai, Veer abhi uss ladki se takrane wala tha ki khud ko sambhalne mai kamiyab ho jata hai aur wo ladki bhi Veer ko yese aage aate huye dekh ke rukh jati hai.
Veer bhi rukhne ke baad us ladki ko dekhke ek weird sa smile deta hai aur apna hath apne sar ke piche leke apna sar khujane lagta hai, wo ladki baas Veer ko dekh rahi thy.
Veer uss ladki ko dekhte huye W se : mujhe lagta hai ye necessary nahi hai.
Wo ladki bina kisi ke parwah kiye apna intro dene lagti hai,
Ladki : hello everyone, mera naam Zara hai. Mai yanha nayi hun iss dorm 7 mai.
Veer : hi, mai Veer hun…iss dorm ka chief….tum mujhe mera naam se bula sati ho.
Kya mai Jaan sakta hun tumhara martial soul ke bare mai?
Zara : apni sar mai lagi rabbit ear ko hila ke, yes....mera martial soul ek rabbit hai white rabbit.
Tumhara kya hai?
Veer : mera martial soul tumhara martial soul ka khana hai Blue Silver Plant.
Blue Silver Plant ke naam sunke Zara apni munh pe hath rakh ke hasne lagti hai. Fir,
Zara : ye majedaar hai, kya mai iss dorm mai welcome hun.
Zara ki baat se Veer kuch hadbada jata hai, fir…
Veer : wo baat ye hai ki….wo…dorm 7 ka kuch rule hai, jo naya aata hai to wo apna martial souls ability ko dikhata hai aur dorm boss ke sath ek friendly fight karta hai.
To mai iss dorm ka boss ke tour pe tumhare sath ek friendly fight ladhna chahta hun.
Veer ki baate sunke Zara smile karte huye,
Zara : kya tum sure ho iss baare mai?
Veer : han….
Zara : ok….
Ok kehke apna hath mai pakda pink rabbit bag wanhi paas ke ladke taraf kar deta hai, Wo ladka bhi thodi der ke liye kuch samajh nahi pata hai ki Zara ne uske taraf bag kyun badhya hai, fir jaab samajh gaya to wo Zara ke hatth se bag le leta hai. Bag ladka le jane ke baad,
Zara : to suru kare….ye kehke kuch 5-6 step piche le leti hai aur jake calmly khadi ho jati hai.
Veer bhi usse dekhne lagta hai. Thodi der ke liye koyi kuch nahi karta hai baas dono ek dusre ko dekhne lagte hai.
Fir ek smile ke sath Zara wanha se gayab ho jati hai asal wo gayab nahi huyi thy wo kafi speed se move ki thy aur uski movement ko baas Veer hi dekh pa raha wo bhi apne purple demon eye ki wajah se.
Jaab Zara gayab huyi taab hi Veer ne apna skill use kar liya tha.
Zara wanha se gayab hoke ek kick jadd deti hai Veer ke face pe jisse Veer apni hath ko jod ke bach jata hai, Zara itne mai nahi rukhti hai wo immediately apna body bend kar leti hai aur Veer ke leg ko target karke marti hai, per Veer satark tha to back flip mar ke thoda piche chala jata hai, per jaab Veer piche land karta hai zara taab tak ek aur kick ghuma di thy jisse Veer apne body ko back side bend karke bach jata hai aur apna hath ke sahar ek back flip marke thoda dur chala aata hai.
Jaab Veer back flip maar raha tha Zara bhi front flip marke Veer ke upar ek aur kick jaad deti hai jisse ki Veer firse apna hath ke sahare block kar deta hai.
Yese hi pata nahi kitne move Veer aur Zara ke bich mai exchange ho chuka tha Veer baas block kar raha tha aur Zara baas Veer ke upar hamla kar rahi thy aur usko piche ki aur khiska rahi thy.
Zara ne hawa mai hi ghum ke ek kick marti hai Veer ko jisse Veer rokh leta hai aur uss ka impact se paas mai chal raha candles bhi bujh jata hai.
Jaab Zara ka ye kick bekar hota hai to Zara back flip marke thoda piche aajati hai,
Zara : are you ok? Ye baat Zara ne issliye boli thy ki unse iss attack mai apna 60-70% power use kiya tha.
Veer kuch nahi bolta per dorm ke baaki bache W ke sath boss…boss..ki awaj lagana suru kar dete hai, aur Veer ko motive karne lagte hai.
Aab Veer bhi apna martial art dikhana suru kar deta hai jo sikha tha pichle jindegi mai, Zara baar baar uske punches aur kicks se bach rahi thy aur jo Zara mar rahi thy Veer ko Veer Ghostly Trace aur purple demon eye ke help se bach raha tha, aur wo dikne mai yesa laag raha tha ki Veer Sutter ho raha tha.
Sayad Zara ko aur khelne ke mood mai nahi thy to usne apna best move show karti hai, kafi speed se wo Veer ke taraf bhagti hai, Veer usse punch marne hi wala hota hai ki Zara uska hath pakad ke uske piche chala jata hai aur jaab veer usko piche pakad ne ke liye hath badhata hai to Zara Veer ka right hand pakad ke hawa mai upar ho jati hai per Veer ki hath ko chodti nahi fir hath ko sarka ke veer shoulder pe dono hath rakh leti hai aur hawa mai ghum ke pet pe ek kick de marti hai wo bhi soul power ke use se, jisse Veer dur jake girta hai munh ke baal.
Dorm 7 ke sare bache herani se dono ko dekh rahe thy, dono ne kafi acha ladhe thy. Abhi bhi Zara ke face ek pyari si smile thy jesse pehle thy, fir wo aage badh ke Veer ke paas chali jati hai.
Veer wanhi niche pade pade hi badbadaye ja raha tha : sayad mai dorm 7 ka sabse kaam samay ka boss raha hun. Fir apna sar ko jhatka deta hai.
Zara : Veer tum thik to ho na?
Veer khada hoke Zara ko dekhta hai fir,
Veer : mai haar gaya. Kya tum mujhe bata sakti ho, ye konsi skill tumne use kiya hai abhi?
Zara : sure..ye Rou skill hai…ye skill mai hamare body ka softness aur flexibility jyada use hoti hai. Fir wapas uss ladke pe paas chali jati hai jisko apna bag pakadaya hua tha.
Veer : Rou skill….(mann mai : sabhi famous clan martial world mai including Mystrious clan, maine kabhi bhi yesa martial art nahi dekha hai. Ye skill behed hi powerful lagti hai sath mai risky bhi.
Kesse mai usko pakad nahi pa raha tha aagar mera Speed response acha hota to sayad kuch aur result hota.)
W paas ke khade ek aur student se : iss saal naye students kafi skillful hai na?
Veer Zara se : dorm 7 ke rule ke hisab se tum jiti, aab se tum iss dorm 7 ki leader which means tum hamara new boss ho.
Sabhi bache : that’s right.
Zara : boss…. Interesting….ok to mai tumhara boss hun aab se.
Sare bache jhuk jate hai aur Zara unke bich mai chalti huyi aage chali jati hai. Jaab Veer kuch nahi karta hai to W usse khinch ke apne side khada kar deta hai aur usko jhuka deta hai Zara ke samne.
Zara apne bed ke paas pahunch ke,
Zara : ye thik hai, aab dismiss.
Jaab Veer dusre bed ke taraf jata hai aur apna saman rakh deta hai to Zara bhi uske paas ke bed ke paas chali jati hai, uss bed pe pehle se hi ek ladka betha hua tha jaab Zara uss bed ke paas gayi to wo ladka wanha se uth ke chala gaya.
Zara bhi Veer ke bed ke side apna saman rakh ke usme beth jati hai.
Zara Veer ko dekh ke : Veer, tumhara soul power level kya hai? Jaab mai tumse ladh rahi thy mujhe yesa laga tum strong ho per mere se thoda kaam.
Veer apna saman lagate huye : mai full soul power ke sath born hua hun. Isi wajah se sayad tumhe ye laga hoga.
Saare bache : kya full soul power?
W (mann mai) : isiliye wo mujhse jyada powerful hai.
Tabhi wanha ek admi aata hai,
Admi : Veer koun hai?
Veer bhi uss admi ko dekh ke : ji mai….
Wo admi bhi Veer ke paas aajata hai,
Admi : mera naam Mo hai, ye new bedding (isme ek bedsheet aur blanket tha) apko master ne diya hai.
Veer bhi wo le leta hai,
Veer : thank you Mr. Mo….
Mo iss hostel ke teacher thy, Veer ko bedding dene ke baad sabhi bacho ke taraf mud jate hai,
Mr. Mo : Veer aur Zara iss year new student hai asha hai aap sabhi inke sath dosti karenge. Fir Veer aur Zara ko dekhte huye tum dono field ke paas wala garden ke South side ka incharge ho usme tumhe kaam karna hai, tumhe tumhare kaam ke 10 copper soul coin har roj milenge, aagar tumne laparwahi ki to tum fail bhi ho sakte ho.
Veer : thik hai….
Mr. Mo : kal opening ceremony hai school mai. Tumhe apna kaam suru karna hai parsho se. Mai check karne bhi aata rahunga kabhi kabar.
Aagar kuch question hai to tum W se puch sakte ho.
Veer and Zara : thik hai….
Fir Mr. Mo chale jate hai. Zara baas Veer ki bedding ko hi dekh rahi thy kyun ki uske paas nahi tha.
W aur kuch kuch ladke apne bedding le aate hai aur Zara ko offer karte hai.
Per Zara sabhi ke bedding ko dekhti hai fir Veer ke paas aajati hai.
Zara : Veer chalo iss matter ko discuss karte hai. Tumhara bedding bada hai aram se do loog isse use kar sakte hai.
Kya kehte ho, hamara dono ka bed ko ek karke ye ek hi bedding ham use kare.
Veer : kya…sath mai…kya ye thik rahega, haam dono ko karib aana.
Zara sidhe Veer ke paas jake uske chest pe ungli rakh deti hai fir veer ke ankho mai dekh ke bolti hai,
Zara : mai ek ladki hoke aagar mind nahi kar raha hun to tum kyun mind kar rahe ho.
Zara ki baate sunke sare bache ek dusre ko dekhne lagte, aur idhar Zara baar baar Veer ke chest mai ungli maar rahi thy,
Zara : tum kis liye wait kar rahe ho? Jaldi….mera bed ko tumhara bed se connect karo…
Pata nahi kyun per Veer bhi Zara ki baat manke Zara ki bed ko move karne lagta hai per ho nahi pa raha tha.
Zara : maine socha tha tum strong honge…yese hi baate karti rahi aur Veer ko motive karte rahi,
Akhir kaar Veer ne bed ko move karke do bed ko milake ek kar diya. Aur thak ke wanhi bed niche farsh pe beth jata hai,
Zara aage badh ke kaman sambhal ti hai, bedding ko ache se dono bed pe use karti hai jesse ki bedsheet ko bed pe ache se set kar deti hai fir blanket ko bhi ache se saza deti hai, fir apne bag ko bicho bicho rakh ke,
Zara : abhi se ye hamara border hoga. Aagar tum border paar kare to mujhse bura koi nahi hoga, ye baate bolte time Zara apni muthi ko dikhati hai.
Veer Zara ko dekh ke ek gehri sanse chod ke wanhi betha rehta hai aur apna sar ko naa mai hilata rehta hai.
Fir veer aur Zara, W ke sath khana khane ke liye hostel ke canteen mai jate hai,
Zara : woooow kitna bada hai….ye pehla word nikla tha Zara ke munh se jaab wo canteen dekhi to,
Canteen bahot bada aur sunder tha.
Fir charo aur ghum ke dekhne lagti hai. Sabhi bache hostel ke wanha khana kha rahe thy.
W : iss canteen mai 300 se bhi jyada students aur teachers kha sakte hai ek hi baar mai, beshak ye bahut bada hai.
Zara : chalo chalte hai mujhe bahot joro se bhuk lagi hai.
Abhi ye teeno W, Veer aur Zara aage badhne hi wale thy ki unke kaan mai kuch baate padti hai jo ki 1st floor se kisine kahi thy,
Awaj : aare dekho to kon aaya hai, W aur uska poor gang….
Jaab Veer upar dekhta hai 3-4 ladke khade thy. Aur unme se jo unka leader tha wo iss baat ko bola tha wo ladka itne mai bhi nahi rukhta hai baas bolte jata hai,
Ladka : aagar tum poor ho to hamesha poor hi rahoge. Inke liye first floor mai aake khana impossible hai.
Uss ladke ki baat sunke W apni muthi kass leta hai gusse se. Jisko Zara ne dekh liya tha to,
Zara : tum kon ho? Aur first floor isme itna acha kya hai?
Ladka : wow, tum sach mai pretty ho little girl, per ye baat bhi buri hai ki tum sirf ek apprentice ho.
W Zara ko : first floor pe aap personally kuch bhi order kar sakte hai aur kha sakte hai, aur uska price bhi high hai, jisse haam afford nahi kar sakte.
Ladka W se : W, mai abhi khane ja raha hun, iss baar tumhe jane de raha hun.
ye ladka hamesha W aur uska gang ko bully karta hai.
Zara bhi uss ladke ki baat sunke gusse mai thy jaab ladka yesa bola to Zara uske upar chilane hi wali thy ki taab tak wo ladka ja chuka tha, to Zara apna gussa mai apna pair patak ke aage jane lagti hai uss ladke ke piche, to Veer aage badh ke Zara ka hath pakad leta hai,
Wo itne speed se gaya tha ki W bhi ek baar heran ho jata hai,
W (mann mai) : Veer wo kaab paas hua mere side se wo bhi itne fast….
Veer : bura maat mano…haam yanha Khana khane aaye hai.
Zara : tum darte ho trouble se.
Veer kuch nahi bolta baas apni previous life ke clan kr rule ko yaad karne lagta hai, pata nahi Zara ko kya hota hai, jo wo gussa thy usko bhul jati hai Veer ke ankho mai dekh ke.
Veer (mann mai) : mere clan ke hisab se pehle hame koyi bhi trouble create nahi karna chahiye.
Zara : never mind, chalo khana khate hai pehle, baad mai unko sabak sikhayenge.
Ye kehke apna hath chuda ke wanha se chali jati hai khana khane aur W bhi uske sath jata hai.
Veer (mann mai) : aagar koyi tumpe pehle attack karta hai to hame fight back karna hai wo bhi hamara full potential ke sath.
Fir Veer bhi Zara ke piche piche chala jata hai. Abhi ja hi rahe thy ki Veer apne master ko dekhta hai, to unke paas chala aata hai,
Veer : master, aap bhi yanha khane ke liye aaye hai.
Master : hmm…kya tumne apna saab kuch thik kaar liya hai?
Veer : hmm…thank you apne jo bedding diya hai uske liye.
Master : mere sath aao first floor pe khane ke liye, aur iss jagah ko ache se bhi dikha deta hun tumhe mai.
Veer master ki baate sunke Zara aur W ke taraf dekhta hai, jo abhi khana ko dekh rahe thy.
Sabhi khana ko dekh ke Zara ke munh se baas Woooow hi nikal ta hai.
Zara : kya isme se jo bhi hai ham kha sakte hai to mai Khana suru kar raha hun ye itna delicious dikh raha hai ki mai aur control nahi kar sakti.
Per jaab Veer ko dekhti hai to master ke sath baat kar raha tha to Zara wapas Veer ke taraf aajati hai.
Veer : thank you master, per mai mere dorm mates ke sath hi khana chahta hun.
Master : good, aap ek awara (maverick) ke tarah act nahi kar rahe hai. Mera intezar karna canteen entrance ke paas khana khane ke baad.
Veer : thik hai master….
W Veer ke paas aake : kya tum master ko jante ho?
Veer : wo mere teacher hai.
W : kya tumne master ko apna teacher bola? Fir sushti bhari sans chod ke,
Unki ability average hai. Unke bare mai ek rumored hai ki unka principal ke sath acha relationship hai isiliye wo guest teacher ke tour pe kaam karte hai yanha.
Maine suna hai ki wo almost 50 ke aas paas hai fir bhi wo big soul master level mai hi hai, unka martial soul level sirf 29 hi hai.
Wo isse upar ja hi nahi sakte kabhi bhi.
W ki baate sunke Veer usko pehle ghurta hai fir,
Veer : ye first time hai aur mujhe asha hai ye hi apka last time bhi hoga, agar aap mere sath fight nahi karna chahte hai to, kabhi bhi mere teacher ke upar kisi bhi tarah ki comments maat karna.
Aur mujhe acha laga apki good intentions ke liye.
Aur fir bahar ki aur chala jata hai bina kuch khaye….
Chalte hai thoda mohan Veer ke papa ko dekh ke aate hai,
Mohan apne ghar mai bethe bethe baas Veer ke baare mai hi soch raha tha,
Jaab Veer hammering kar raha tha jaab galti karta to Mohan uske paas jake uska hath pakad ke usse sikhata tha.
Jaab Veer ne Mohan ke kahe anusar 10000 time hammering complete kiya tha taab Mohan ko badi herani huyi thy kyun ki Veer ka hath ek daam sahi salamat tha bina kissi chale ke isiliye usko herani huyi thy.
Fir Mohan ko yaad aata hai jaab Veer chala gaya tha school to wo dukhi ho jata hai.
Wapas school chalte hai,
Idhar master Veer ko apne cabin mai le aate hai khana khane ke baad.
Master ke cabin mai charo aur baas book hi book thy aur ek side ek bed pada tha aur ek table and chair.
Master ander aane ke baad Veer ko kuch khane ke liye de dete hai jaab Veer bina khaye wapas aagaya tha canteen se to master ne bhi dekh liya tha.
Master : ye lo kha lo, tum abhi growth kar rahe ho tumhe abhi khana ache se khana chahiye.
Veer : master…..
Master : jaldi karo, kha lo jaab khana garam hai taab. Khane ke baad baat karte hai.
Veer khana khane taak master baas usse hi dekh rahe thy, khana khane ke baad,
Master : mujhe tumhara dusra martial soul dekhna dikha sakte ho.
Veer : thik hai master, aur master apko mujh se permission lene ki jarurat nahi hai aap mujhe order kar sakte hai, mai apka student ke tour pe ussa pura karne ka pura prayas karunga.
Fir apne left hand ko aage kar ta hai aur apna martial soul ko yaad karta hai.
Veer ke left hand ke palm mai dhire dhire ek hammer aajata hai ghumte huye.
Master ne jaab dekha to wo apne seat se khade ho jate hai.
Master : ye….ye….
Thik hai isse withdraw karlo. Aur yaad rakho isse kabhi bhi dusre ke samne maat lana aur na hi kisi dusre ko dikhana.
Mere permission ke bina tum kabhi bhi isme koyi bhi soul ring add maat karna.
Veer : papa ne bhi yanhi kaha tha.
School aane se pehle,
Fir veer batata hai ki mohan ne kya kaha tha usse,
Mohan : mujhe tumse ye bhi promise chahiye, no matter tum kesse apna soul power ki practice karte ho per kabhi bhi koyi bhi soul ring apne hammer martial soul mai add nahi karoge.
Aur sabse jyada jaruri kabhi kisi dusre ko apna ye soul nahi dikhaoge aur kabhi bhi ye maat batana ki tumhara twin martial soul hai. Kya tum ye kar sakte ho?
Master ne Veer ki baate sunke,
Master : tumhare papa kya job karte hai?
Veer : wo blacksmith hai village mai.
Master : blacksmith? Fir ek thandi si sanse chod ke apne seat pe wapas beth jate hai,
Blacksmith and hammer dono kafi ache jodi daar hai.
Veer : master mai iss martial soul mai kyun soul ring aad nahi kar sakta?
Master : abhi wo time nahi aaya hai ki tumhe wo baat bata saku. Tum apne dimag mai baas yr rakh lo ki ye tumhara future ke liye hai, thik hai.
Veer apne left palm ko dekh ke papa ne jo baat bole thy master ne bhi wanhi samne baat bole.
Veer : thik hai master mai yaad rakhunga ye baat.
Master : thik hai, to kaal subha mai tumhe le chalunga tumhara pehle soul ring pane ke liye jo tumhara blue silver plant ko suit ho. Jisse ki tum soul master level mai ajaoge.
Veer (mann mai) : soul ring ke help se mai mera skill mai bhi progress kar sakta hun, per….
Veer : kaal to school opening ceremony hai na.
Master : wo mai sambhal lunga tumhare liye. Aab ye batao ki tumhara view kya hai blue silver plant ke bare mai.
Veer : saab sochte hai ki ye ek useless martial soul hai. Per mai ye sochta hun ki sabhi ka apna apna speciality hota hai. Janta hun ki ye har jagah mil jata hai per iska kuch to reason hoga jiske liye ye exist karta hai.
Master : good, apke age mai yesa insights hona sach mai kafi rare hai. Chalo mai apko martial soul ka developmenpath ke bare mai bata ta hun.
Veer : martial soul development path?
Master : chalo suru karte hai martial soul ke categories se, martial soul ko mainly do categories mai divide kiya gaya hai ek beast soul aur dusra tool soul.
Beast soul ye human ke sath martial soul ka merge hona hota hai. Isme beasts power ko apne hisab se utilise karna hota hai.
Uss tak pahunchne ke liye jisme human body aur soul ek ho usko haam martial soul shield body kehte hai. Aur isme ashani se aap war soul master ban sakte hai aagar aap ache se practice karte hai to.
Wese hi tool soul beast soul se alag hota hai kafi alag. Jyada tar tool souls body se bahar nikalna padta hai use karne ke liye, tool souls beast soul ke compare mai ye ek auxiliary ki tarah hai.
Inke alawa kuch martial soul hai jo food hai.
Veer : kya ham martial soul ko kha sakte hai?
Master : yes….jo bhi martial soul food branch se hai usko khaya ja sakta hai. Wo ek tarah ke energy hote hai.
Veer : iska matlab ye hai ki tool souls support ke liye hota hai. Right?
Master : tumhara assumption 100% sahi nahi hai. Jesse ki tumhe pata hai beast soul mai war soul master ho sakte hai wese hi kuch tool martial soul bhi war soul master ho sakte hai. Each soul master ka apna path hota hai jisme wo chalte hai.
Tool soul mai Food branch soul, investigation branch soul, combat branch soul, healing branch soul, aur bhi bahut se brach hai jo tool soul mai jate hai.
Veer : master mai kis path ki aur jaun?
Master : bahut se loog sochte hai ki blue silver plant useless hai. Lekin saalo ka research ke baad mujhe ye pata chala hai ki usme bhi takat hai. Aur wo usefull bhi hai,
Pehla cause ye thodi hi soul power consume karta hai
Dusra ye har jagah pe milta hai ya ye keh sakhte ho ki ye har jagah ugge huye hai.
Tisra iska development ke liye alag path hai. Aur ye martial soul koyi soul ring ko easily repel (piche hatana) nahi karta .
Veer : repel?
Master : that’s right….Aagar apki martial soul, soul ring se match nahi karega to soul ring ko soul repel kar sakta hai. Aur isme 4th cause tumahare upar kaam karega.
Veer : mere upar?
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Master Ma aur Veer jaab uss darwaje ke ander gaye to wo ek hall tha bahut bada hall.
Veer : grandpa Ma kya aap mujhe martial soul hall ke bare mai kuch bata sakte hai.
Master Ma : han kyun nahi, haar baat to nahi per jo jaruri hai wo bata sakta hun, aur wese bhi mujhe jyada kuch pata nahi hai, kyun ki mai level 1 martial soul hall mai hun.
Ye sabse lowest level martial soul hall hai, aur ye sub-branch hall ke naam se jana jata hai, inka level 1 hota hai. Koyi city jinta bhi chota kyun na ho wanha pe level 1 ka sub-branch hall rehna jaruri hai. City jitna bada hoga martial soul hall ka level bhi utna bada hoga, aur hamme bhi level 2 sub-branch hall ko report karna padta hai. Sirf level 4 martial soul hall jisse ham Main hall kehte hai wo sirf In dono kingdom ke capital mai hi hai.
Level 4 ke upar bhi ek aur level hai wo level 5 isko sacred temple kaha jata hai. Aur ye sabse holiest place hai martial soul hall ka.
Levels of Martial soul hall
Level 1 – sub-branch hall
Level 2 – sub-branch hall
Level 3 – branch hall
Level 4 – main hall
Level 5 – scared temple.
Level 6 – legendary soul hall
sacred temple ke upar bhi ek aur level hai jisse legendary soul hall kaha jata hai uss level ke martial soul hall mai jane ke liye ek soul master ko highest soul level ka hona jaruri hai. Aur wo sabhi soul master ka dream hota hai Wanha jana.
Veer : thank you grandpa Ma itna saab kuch batane ke liye. Kya haam aab suru kar sakte hai.
Master Ma : ok suru karte hai, tumhara soul power test.
Fir master Ma apni ankh band karke kuch karne lagte hai fir unke dono hath ke bicho bich ek yellow colour ka ball aajata hai. Fir veer ko uska martial soul ko bahar nikal ne ke liye kehte hai.
Veer bhi apna martial soul bahar nikal leta hai uska blue silver plant uska right hand palm mai aajata hai jisse dekh ke,
Master Ma : kya ye Blue Silver Plant hai?
Veer : han..kya isme kuch problem hai grandpa Ma?
Fir dhire dhire yellow soul ring bhi veer ke charo taraf ghumne lagti hai.
Master Ma : ye 100 year soul ring hai. Isiki wajah se Blue Silver Plant mai itna changes aagaya hai. Ye iss baat prove hai ki tum ek ache teacher ko follow kar rahe ho Nouding school mai. Per dukh iss baat ka hai ki blue silver plant ka development bahut low hota hai.
Chalo chodo wo baat ko aab tum apna soul power ke upar concentrate karo, aur isme hath rakho.
Veer bhi wesa hi karta hai pehle apna soul power ke upar concentrate karta hai fir master Ma ke hath mai rakha yellow ball ke upar hath rakhta hai thodi der ke liye fir apna hath wanha se hata leta hai.
Veer ke hath hatane ke baad jaab master ma uss ball mai dekhte hai to wo heran reh jate hai.
Master Ma : ye….ye….
Wo baas kabhi Veer ko to kabhi uss ball ko hi dekh rahe thy, unki ankho mai herangi saaf dekha ja sakta tha, thodi der baad,
Master ma : tumhara soul power level 13 hai!!!!ye kese ho sakta hai, tumne 2 level kesse skip kiya, tumhara level 10 tha aur tumhe soul ring hassil ki to tumhara level 11 hona chahiye tha per ye level 13 hai. Kesse?
Veer kya tum mujhe bata sakte ho ki tumne konsa soul beast ko hunt kiya tha soul ring ke liye.
Veer : Datura snake
Master Ma : kya? Datura snake? Datura snake to beast soul hai. Plant branch kesse animal branch ka soul ring use kar sakta hai? Ye kesse possible hai?
Veer : ye possible hai grandpa Ma, mere teacher isse Martial soul Mimicry kehte hai.
Master Ma : tumhara teacher...kon hai wo?
Veer : sabhi unhe master kehte hai.
Master Ma : master? Li…… ye wanhi hai jisne ye theory diya tha kafi saal pehle martial soul hall ko, per sabhi isko galat bata diye aur iska majak bhi udaya aur Li ko martial soul hall se expelled bhi kar diya gaya tha.
Veer (mann mai) : master ka naam Li hai, aur wo martial soul hall se nikale gaye hai unki theory ki wajah se.
Master ma : Veer, kya tum hamare martial soul hall mai join honge.
Veer : grandpa Ma mai yanha iss liye nahi aaya tha.
Master ma : mera matlab wo nahi tha, aagar tum join karte ho martial soul hall mai, to tum martial soul hall ke exclusive soul master banoge. Aur tumhara aage ki padhayi martial soul hall ke special school mai hoga, jisse tumhara future aur bhi acha ho jayega, aur ye bhi ho skata hai ki tum future mai ek bahut acha soul master baan sako.
Veer : per grandpa Ma ye possible nahi hai. Mai already Nouding school mai padh raha hun.
Master ma : ohh…sayad ye baat ko bahut deri (late) ho gayi hai. Ye sach hai ham martial soul hall hai per iska matlab ye nahi ki haam kisiko dusre school se snatch karle.
Aur mujhe daar bhi iss baat hai ki aagar haam wo kar bhi le to bhi master Li sayad iss baat se agree ho ki tum hame join karo.
Ye saab Max ki galti hai, wo tumhe directly martial soul hall le aana chahiye tha.
Veer : aap yesa nahi keh sakte hai grandpa Ma, aagar mai pehle yanha aajata to, mujhe ye acha soul ring kesse milta?
Master Ma : ye bhi sahi hai. Wo saab chodo, mai tumhe officially welcome karta hun soul master team mai. Aap abhi se soul master ke tour pe honored hai iss Tian Dou Empire mai.
Fir veer wanha se chala aata hai, per master ma ke mann mai ek afsos reh jata hai ki Max ki wajah se Veer ke Jessa genius martial soul hall ke hatho se fisal gaya.
Veer bhi market mai ghumte ghumte ek blacksmith shop ki aur chal pada, uss shop mai se baas Tan…tan…ki awaj aarahi thy Veer ko awaj sunke uske papa se kiya hua wada yaad aajata hai ki Nouding city mai jake ek blacksmith shop mai apprentice ban jana. Isiliye Veer uss shop mai aagaya tha.
Veer ko shop ki aur aate dekh ke,
Admi : boy, ye place dangerous hai yanha se chale jao. Aagar tumhe kuch kharidna hai to kisi bade ke sath aao.
Veer directly uss admi se puchta hai, wo admi hi iss blacksmith shop ka leader tha.
Veer : hello sir kya yanha koyi apprentice ki jarurat hai.
Veer ki yesi baat sunke wo admi bhi apna kaam rok ke veer ko dekhta hai,
Admi : kid, khud ko dekho, tum ek blacksmith ke jesse lag bhi nahi rahe ho.
Veer : sorry apka time waste kiya, aap mujhe kuch time dijiye mai abhi aata hun.
Ye kehke veer wanha se chala jata hai, to sare worker Veer ke upar haste hai kyun ki unhe lag raha tha ki ye bacha unke sath majak kar raha tha.
Veer wanha se jake ek dress ki dukan mai jata hai aur ek aproon aur gloves karidta hai fir wapas aajata hai uss blacksmith shop pe.
Veer : sir, kya aab mai blacksmith ke Jessa dikh raha hun.
Admi : boy, kya tum mera majak uda rahe ho. Jao yanha se aagar yesi baat hai to.
Veer : sir, mai Nouding school mai apprentice hun, mere paas har afternoon ko time free rehta hai. Mere papa bhi ek blacksmith hai, aur mai unke paas se forging sikhi huyi hai, aur mere papa ne hi kaha tha ki koyi blacksmith shop mai jake apprentice ban jana jisse tum har din forging ki practice kar pao aur usse ache se nikhar sako aur jo paisa milega usse tum apna school ka aur khudka kharcha nikal sako.
Admi : aagr tumhe lagta hai ki tum ye kar loge to aajao, aur hamme ek apprentice ke roop mai serve kar sakte ho tum. Per tumhara salary inta high nahi hoga, per mai tumhe khane ko de sakta hun aur 50 soul coin ye kesa rahega?
Veer : mujhe manzur hai.
Veer ki baate sunke sabhi worker Veer ke upar hasne lagte hai aur ye sochne lagte hai ki ek chota bacha kya kaam karega, aur kya sach mai isko forging aati hai.
Admi : chup ho jao sabhi aur apna kaam karo. Aur aagar sabhi aajka kaam khatam kar diya to mere taraf se sabhi ko treat.
Sabhi : thanks leader, fir saab apne kaam mai busy ho jate hai.
Admi Veer se : tumhe kaha tha tum forging sikhe ho apne papa se. Wo tumhe kya sikhaye hai jaab ki tum abhi bhi itne chote ho.
Veer : forging aur kya, bhale hi mai chota hun per mai strong hun.
Wo admi baas Veer ko dekh raha tha jesse ye janne ki kosis kar raha ho ki kya ye bacha jo bol raha hai wo sach hai ya jhut. Sayad Veer bhi ye admi ki dil ki baat samajh jata hai.
Veer : sayad apko mere baat pe yakin nahi hai to mujhe kuch try karne dijiye jisse aapko believe aajaye mere baat pe.
Admi jo apne hath mai hammer pakda hua tha usko Veer ke samne kar deta hai,
Admi : aagar tum ye hammer ko carry kar sakte ho to mai tumhare bato per believe kar lunga.
Veer ke dimag mai to kuch aur hi chal raha tha, uss admi ke samne pade iron ko dekh ke,
Veer : kya aap iss iron se uska impurities remove kar rahe thy?
Admi : hmm
Fir veer wo garam iron ke tukde mo utha leta hai aur aag mai leke rakh deta hai, wanha le ek ladke ko,
Veer : kya aap isse aur jyada garam kar sakte hai, kyun ki ye itna garam nahi hai jitna mujhe chahiye.
Wo ladka bhi Veer ki baat sunke uska leader ko dekhta hai uska leader bhi han mai apna sar hila deta hai to wo ladka bhi Veer ki baat manke forge ko aur garam kar deta hai jitna Veer ko chahiye tha.
Iron ke garam hone tak Veer apne papa ke baare sochne lagta hai ki kesse uske papa ne usko forging sikhayi, aur kya kya karwaya wo sari baate.
Jaab wo iron sahi se garam ho jata hai to Veer usse bahar nikal ke work zone mai le aata hai, aur wo hammer jo uss admi ne uske samne kiya tha, usko dekhta hai fir uske upar hath rakh deta hai,
Dekha issliye kyun ki wo hammer uska height se baas 1 feet chota tha aur weight mai usse sayad 2-3 times jyada.
Veer uss hammer ke upar hath rakh ke usko ek hi jhatke mai hi hawa mai utha leta hai, aur uss iron ko hammering karne ke liye bilkul ready ho jata hai.
Veer ka uss hammer ko utha na hi un sabhi worker ko heran kar deta hai, wo to baas pehla shock tha, jaab veer hammering start karta hai unsabhi ko pehle wale se bhi jyada shock lagte hai.
Jaab Veer uss iron ka sara impurities hata deta hai aur hammer jammin pe rakh deta hai to samne aur charo aur dekhta hai ki sabhi usko hi dekh rahe thy.
Veer : kya hua?
Admi : ye continuous hammering hai random skill of hammering ka. Aur maine suna hai ki sabse jyada 81 times hi hammering kiya gaya hai, aur sabse best skill hai blacksmithing ka.
Random skill of hammering iss land ki best skill hai koyi iron ka impurities remove karne ke liye. Isko sirf kuch hi masters ne mastery ki hai. Aur maine sirf iske baare mai suna tha aaj dekh bhi liya.
Ye baate kar rahe thy ki Veer ko yesa laga koyi uske upar nazar rakh raha per jaab wo uss aur dekhta hai to wanha koyi bhi nahi tha. Per ye baat sach thy, jaab se wo iss market mai hai taab se koyi baas Veer ke upar nazar gadaye betha hai. Jo bhi hai apna presence se leke apna face taak saab kuch chupake rakha hua hai.
Veer ka wo skill dekh ke wo leader Veer ko apprentice ke roop mai rakh leta hai ek achi khasi paid karke, ye Veer ka kehne ke baad hua tha kyun ki usko jo lease time milta hai wo usme hi shop pe jayega, warna wo shop leader to Veer ko permanently rakhna chahta tha.
Yese hi Veer ka saal beet ta gaya, school se shop fir training fir school ka kaam, isi bich Veer aur Zara ki bhi achi khasi dosti ho gayi thy. Dekhte dekhte 1 saal bhi beet gaya, aab term bhi khatam ho chuka tha aur sabhi ko apne apne ghar jana tha, Zara to apne ghar gayi nahi pata nahi kyun per Veer ghar jane ke liye excited tha, Zara ne Veer se bhi pucha kya wo uske sath Veer ke ghar mai ja sakta hai to Veer bhi maan jata hai, fir Veer aur Zara Veer ke ghar ke liye nikal jate hai.
Bahut chalne ke baad,
Zara : Veer, aur kitna chalna padega tumhara village aane mai.
Veer : baas thoda aur....
Yese hi chalte chalte, Veer aur Zara Veer ke ghar pahunch jate hai,
Veer : papa mai wapas aagaya, aap kese hai?
Ye keh ke jaab ander ghusa to charo aur nazar gayi wo place Jessa tha wesa hi hai abhi bhi bilkul messy. Fir Zara ko bhi welcome karta hai aur aage badhke apna bag ek table pe rakh ke ander ka kamre ki aur chala jata hai janha uske papa hamesha rest karte thy.
Jaab wo uss aur ja raha tha uss kamre se uske papa to nahi per grandpa jack bahar nikal te hai,
Veer : grandpa jack….
Grandpa jack : Veer, tum akele kyun wapas aaye.
Veer : grandpa jack mera sath Zara bhi aayi hai.
Zara : hello grandpa jack.
Grandpa jack : hello little girl
Veer : grandpa jack mere papa kanha hai.
Grandpa jack : mai bhi tumhare papa ko leke jane wala tha tumhe pick karne ke liye. Per wo ye chod ke kanhi chale gaye hai.
Ye kehke ek letter Veer ke taraf badha dete hai.
Veer wo letter leke padhne lagta hai,
Mohan : Veer, jaab tum ye letter padh rahe honge taab taak mai ja chuka honga. Mujhe kabhi dhundna maat wo tumhare baas ke bahar hai.
Jesse ek eagle jyada uncha udta hai taab jaab wo independent hota hai. Tumhe bhi wesa hi udna hai bahut upar. Per mai ek useless hun jo ki kabhi bhi tumhara madat nahi kar paya. Tumne apna path choose kar liya hai, aur tum ussi pe hi focus karna, aur mai issliye ja raha hun ki mera kuch chiz hai kisike paas wo lena hai mujhe kisi bhi kimat mai.
Mere bare mai sochna maat, aur tension maat lena tum tumhare path pe aage badhte jana ham ek din jarur milenge. Ye wada raha mera aur aagar ye letter padh ke aagar tum tumhare path se bhatak gaye to sayad hi haam kabhi mil paye.
Veer, tumhara blue silver plant tumari maa ki martial soul thy, aur mujhe tumpe believe hai ki usko ek yesi uchayi pe le jaoge ki tum per tumara maa aur mai garv kar sakenge.
Aur ek baat jo maine taab bhi kaha tha aur aab bhi, tumhe kabhi yesa laga ki soul master path ek good occupation nahi hai to wapas aajana saint soul village, aur mere jesa blacksmith ban jana.
Mujhe miss maat karna aur dukhi bilkul bhi mat hona, aur tum mere bete ho iss baat ka garv hai mujhe. Bye Veer.
Veer wo padhke behed dukhi ho jata hai, kyun ki uska papa usko chodke kahi chale gaye thy. Zara bhi aage badh ke Veer ke kandhe pe hath rakh deti hai jesse usse ye keh rahi ko ki dhuki maat ho tum aur tumhare papa jarur ek na ek din miloge. Grandpa jack bhi wanha se chale jate hai Wanha se ye kehke ki kabhi bhi kuch jarurat hai to mujhe yaad kar lena. Veer bhi wapas apne ghar ke kaam mai laag jata hai jisme Zara bhi uski madat kar rahi thy, Veer apne apko sambhal liya tha akhir sambhale kyun na, ek 7 saal ke bache ke ander 36 saal ka admi ka dimag jo tha.
Wanhi mohan ek safar pe nikal chuka tha apna chiz lene ke liye kisi se jisko wo bahut saal pehle diya tha.

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Jo koyi bhi picha kar raha tha uska sense master ko ho gaya tha isiliye master ne apna beast soul ko activate kar diya,
Master : Come out, Pao…..
Ye bolne ke baad apna soul ring ko activate karte hai, master ke charo aur yellow colour ki do ring ghumti hai, wo dono ring sirf yellow lights se chamak nahi rahi thy un dono ring se thoda sa purple light bhi nikal rahi tha wo alag tha.
Master ka soul, beast soul tha, per sabhi se alag, sabhi apne soul ko bulane pe wo uss soul master ke sar ke upar bante hai per master ke case mai nahi wo soul ek animal ke roop mai samne aajata hai aur master ke pair ke paas aake khada ho jata hai.
Master ka soul beast thoda bahut dog ki tarah dikh raha tha. Veer bhi usko dekh ke kafi existed lag raha tha.
Master : Veer, ye mera martial soul hai Pao. Aap bhi isse Pao hi bula sakte hai.
Veer : master, kya ye apka martial soul hai? Per ye to martial soul possession ka usual expression nahi hai? Ye yesa kyun hai….
Master : kyun ki mera martial soul mutated martial soul hai. Tumhe yaad hai maine bola tha ki mutated martial soul kya hota hai? Pao usme se ek hai.
Lekin iska mutation ek galat ya buri direction ki aur hai. Jaab ye awaken hua tha mere soul power sirf adhi rank pe tha matlab soul power 5 tha. Agar mera soul power kaam hota to yesa nahi hota. Mai jitna bhi kosis kar lun mera soul power kabhi bhi level 30 ke upar ja nahi sakti. Isiliye maine baas martial soul theory hi padh sakta hun.
Veer : master aap martial soul mai itne persistent (dhrudh) hai, lekin Pao….I sorry master maine apka sadness ko firse mention karne ke liye.
Master : it’s all right. Chalo tumahara introduction kar deta hun Pao ke sath. Ye jo awaj produce karta hai ussi ke liye iska naam Pao pada hai. Aur ye apna attack baas 3 time hi lunch kar sakta hai.
Pao, lead the road.
Pao bhi master ki baat manke Jungle ke road mai aage chalne lagta hai aur master aur Veer uske piche piche.
Aage aane ke baad Pao ek jagah rukh jata hai aur upar ek ped mai dekhke awaj nikal ne lagta hai, jaab master aur Veer upar dekhte hai to,
Master : ye ek 10 year old tabby cat hai. Pao isko disturb mat karo.
Fir aage chal dete hai aur thodi dur aake bhi Pao ek baar aur awaj nikal ta hai,
Master : ye bhi 10 year old solitary bamboo hai, iska feature toughness hai. Iska attack weak hai per ye defensive jarur hai. Ye tumhara blue silver plant ke liye suitable hai.
Veer : kya....
Master : per iska age bahut kaam hai. Chalo aage dekhte hai. Agar kuch acha na mila jo tumhare liye suitable ho to fir iss bare mai sochenge.
Veer : mai age kesse pata kar sakta hun?
Master : mainly tumhe observe karna hoga colour ko jaab wo attack kar rahe honge. Soul beast ka colour same hai unke soul ring ke tarah jaab wo attack karte hai.
10 year soul beast ka white soul power hota hai, jabki 100 year ki yellow soul power wese hi 1000 year ka purple, 10000 year ka black, 100000 year soul beast ka red soul power hota hai.
Halaki, 100 year aur 900 year beast mai ek hi colour ka soul ring hai, per additional attributes ka jo gap hai wo bahut jyada hai. Mere research ke through, first soul ring ki limit 423 year hona chahiye. Aur mujhe hope hai ki tumhara pehla soul ring iske ke ass paas hogi. Aur ek outstanding soul master ke liye ye required bhi hoti hai.
Veer : yes, master.
Master : abhi ke liye itna hi, aap future mai soul ring ki power ko ache se use kar sakoge mere theories se.
Yese hi ghumte ghumte sham ho jati hai to master ne wanhi paas mai ek ped ke paas rehne ka decide karte hai fir kuch powder sa nikal ke apne charo aur ek ghera bana lete hai. Aur dono wanhi beth jate hai,
Master : pata hai maine ye power kyun dala hamare charo aur.
Veer : ye hamara body smell ko chipane aur snakes, rats, worms, ants, aur bhi bahut se chote chote jiv se chutkara pane ke liye bhi hai.
Master : hmm, ye snakes to repellent karta hai. Soul beasts forest mai aag (fire) ka istemal karne ka kossis na kare, halaki jyadatar soul beasts ko fire se darr lagta hai lekin kuch soul beasts yese bhi hai jinko fire pasand hai. Aagar haam unse mile, jaab tak ki apki soul power powerful na ho to aap surely maare ja sakte hai.
Abhi aage ye kuch aur baate karte Pao jo abhi tak unke side hi so raha tha wo uth jata hai aur alert ho jata hai, aur charo aur dekhne lagta hai, aur apna awaj nikalne lagta hai,
Ye wanhi thy jo inka picha kar rahe thy subha se, charo aur bahot se green eyes ghum rahe thy aur gurrahat ki awaj….
Guuurrrrrr….Guuuuuurrrrrr……
Master : ye Ghost Wolf hai. Veer yanhi khade rehna koyi bhi movement mat karna.
Veer bhi master ki baate manke wanhi khada rehta hai per wo apni nazar in wolf ke upar hi kar leta hai aur apne purple demon eye ke madat se unko dekhne lagta hai un sabhi ka movements ko.
Master : ye ek pack hai sabhi 10 years ke hai ya usse kaam, Inki himmat kese huyi hamme disturb karne ki.
Wo karib karib 5 wolf ka pack tha wo sabhi abhi in dono ke samne khade huye thy aur in dono ko dekh ke guuuurrrraaa rahe thy.
Master ne bhi apni soul ring ko active karte hai aur unke charo aur do yellow soul ring ghumne lagti hai, aur uska power se Pao bhi chamakane lagta hai,
Master : farting like thunder, attack pao…
(Pao ka fart se hi attack karta hai)
Aur fir ek yellow ring Pao ke charo aur aajati hai jo ki master ki pehli ring thy wanhi, aur sath hi Pao hawa mai upar uthne lagta hai aur fulne bhi lagta hai. Master ne apne liye aur Veer ke liye mask bhi nikal liya tha aur Veer ko de diya lagane ke liye, aur idhar Pao ne bhi attack kar diya, aur uss thunder fart attack ka impact itna tha ki ek hi attack mai wo sare wolves kayi meter dur jake pade thy koyi ped se takraya tha to koyi jamin pe pade thy aur jakhmi bhi thy.
Master : wolves and dogs ye dono ka body structure similar hoti hai, bronze head, steel bone and weak waist. Inka waist hi inka weak point hota hai.
ye baate master un wolves ke taraf jate huye bol rahe thy,
Fir ek knife nikal ke master ne un sare wolf ko mar dete hai jo ki adhmare aur jakhmi halat mai pade huye thy.
Master : aab dhyaan se dekho Veer, soul ring kabhi bhi appear ho sakti hai.
Jesse mi master ne bola tha un 5 wolves mai se 3 wolves ke upar dhire dhire karke white colour ka ring aane lagta hai aur ghumna suru kar deta ha.
Master : jaab soul ring appear hoga to tumhe apne soul power ka use karke usko apne paas lana hai aur jaab wo tumhare martial soul ke upar aajayega to tumhe Meditation karke Soul ring ko absorb karna hoga.
Mera soul power aab advance nahi ho sakta hai isiliye mai isse absorb nahi kar sakta. Aur jaab koyi ring absorb nahi hota to wo 2 ghante baad apne aap hi fade (gayab) ho jata hai.
Ye saab kehte huye master usko karte huye bhi Veer ko dikha rahe thy.
Master : Veer aab mujhe 2 radishes (muli) de do.
Veer bhi bina kuch kahe apne 24 moonlight belt se nikal ke de deta hai, uss uske belt mai wo sari chize thy jo master aur Veer leke aaye thy hunting ke time.
Master wo radishes ko leke pao ko de dete hai jo ki usko maje se khata hai.
Master : Pao sirf 3 attack hi kar sakta hai aur every attack ke baad wo thak jata hai aur usko time chahiye hota hai gas banane ke liye. Aur radishes usme help karti hai.
Veer : master kya Pao sirf radish hi khata hai.
Master : tumhe dekh hi hoga, Pao ka attack sirf fart hai, aur other food radish ke jesa gas nahi bana sakte jisse Pao ko help mil sake.
Aur 2 radish ke sath pao 1 hour ke baad ek aur attack karne ke liye kabil ho jata hai.
Ye log abhi baate kar hi rahe hote hai ki Pao samne ke taraf dekh ke awaj nikal ne lagta hai, aur jaab ye dekhte hai to unke charo taraf green smoke ka badal mandra rahe thy.
Veer : ye poison hai.
Veer aage jane ko hua ki master ne uska hath pakad ke apne piche le aaye. Aur apna ring active kar ke uska power ko Pao ke ander transfer kar dete hai. Veer bhi aage na jake apna purple demon eye use karke poisonous gas ke ander dekhne lagta hai, uske ander ek bahut bada snake tha jiske sar ke dono side do wings bhi thy.
Fir ek aur ishara karke,
Veer : master wo iss taraf hai.
Master bhi ek torch ko uss taraf phenk dete hai aur jaab wo snake uss torch ke light se dikhta hai to,
Master : ye Datura snake hai. Iss tarah ke soul beast forest ke outside mai kesse asakte hai?
Kyun ki master aur Veer forest ke outer side mai hi thy jitna ander jayenge unta acha aur powerful soul beast milenge.
Master : baas yanhi umid karna ki iska age jyada na ho. Aagar 100 saal ke upar hua to usko harana difficult hoga. Ye attack nahi kar raha hai, wo ek acha sa timing dekh raha hai.
Veer : master aab ham kya kare.
Master : Datura snake ka venom bahut jyada toxic hota hai. Isme sirf paralytic effect hi nahi hota ye nerve system ko bhi damage kar sakta hai. Ye one of the most Terrifying beast hai pure poisonous soul beast ke ander. Aur sabse muskil baat ye hai ki ye incredibly fast hote hai aur body extremely tough.
Isko ek aam sword se jakham (hurt) dena bahut muskil hota hai. Iska sirf munh aur ankh hi do chize hai jo kamjor hai, per ye hamesha usko ache se protect karta hai.
Datura snake bhi in dono ke bilkul karib tha karib karib 6-7 meter ke duri pe, aur baas inhe hi dekh raha tha aur apna wing ko spread kar raha tha jesse warning de raha ho in dono ko.
Master : maine abhi tumhe ek theory batata hun…jaab tumhare paas jyada rings ho to tum jyada powerful attack kar sakte ho aur apne opponent ko hara sakte ho, same rule tumhare opponent ke upar bhi lagu hota hai, uske paas agar jyada ring hai tumhare paas se to wo tumpe havi ho sakta hai, Ye hota hai jyada soul ring hone ka fayeda. Mai agli baar tumhe soul bone ke bare mai bataunga. Aur kabhi yesa situation aaye jaab tumhara soul ring kaam paad jaye to bina hesitation se bhag jana….
Farting like thunder, blast Pao….
Pao bhi bina deri kiye gas chod deta hai Datura snake pe, ye ek chalava tha wanha se bhagne ka Veer aur master ka, aur ye dono uska fayeda bhi utha te hai aur wanha se dur bhagne lagte hai per Datura snake bhi sambhal jata hai aur unke piche aajata hai.
ye umid thy master ki ki unka attack datura snake ke upar kaam nahi karega aur wanhi hua.
Bhagte huye,
Master : Datura snake apne thousand year evolve se pehle, ye har saal 1 cm lamba hota hai. Ye dikhne mai kam se kaam 4 meter ke aas paas lamba hai to ye kam se kaam 400 saal ke aas paas ya uske upar hai.
Veer bhagte huye bhi datura snake ko hi dekh raha hota hai aur baas yahi soch raha hota hai ki master ke itne powerful attack se bhi uska kuch nahi hua hai.
Master : Hypnosis Pao….smoke gas….
Pao master ki baat maanke smoke gas release kar deta hai per ye bhi bekar hi jata hai,
Master : jyadatar beasts Usme se Datura snake bhi jinme patience nahi hota hai jyada wo bahut, wo jaldi hi haar maan jayega, aage chal ke kahi rukh jate hai.
Pao stop that…..
Pao bhi Datura snake ke upar directly hamla kar deta hai per Datura snake pao ko apne munh mai pakad leta hai, yesa situation dekh ke master usko wapas bula lete hai wo bhi gayab hoke master ke paas ajata hai.
Master : Veer pehle bachne ka mouka dhund te hai, mai isse baad mai nipat lunga.
Per iss baar Veer ka mood kuch aur hi tha, fie veer piche mudta hai aur ek jump marke apna hidden arrow ko release kar deta hai Datura snake ke ankho ko aim kar ke, per Datura snake usko dekh ke hath jata hai aur wo arrow uske body se takra ke niche gir jata hai.
Wo arrow Steel ka bana hua tha aur jaab Datura snake ke body se takraya to tan..tan..ki awaj aane laga jesse Datura snake ki body bhi pure steel ki hi bani ho.
Veer (mann mai) : snake ka defence kafi strong hai.
Fir kuch der taak Datura snake ke sath Veer khelne lagta hai matlab fight karta hai, aur usko apne bare hand se hi rok raha tha yesa lag raha tha per wo apne Jade Hand se uss snake ko rokne mai kamiyab ho raha tha. Apna jade hand ke sath wo apna ghostly Trace bhi use kar raha tha aur snake ke sath ladh ne mai.
Aur baas ek sahi mouka ki talash kar raha tha thodi der baad wo mouka bhi milata hai aur Veer ne apne jade hand se ek knife pakda aur sidhe Datura snake ko stabbed kar deta hai jisse wo snake chatpatane lagta hai, aur Jade hand mai koyi bhi poison kaam nahi karta hai. Isiliye wo snake ke munh mai hath ander karke stabbed karta hai jisse knife sidha datura snake ke niche taraf ghus jata hai, aur jade hand ke wajah se Veer koyi khatra nahi tha.
Master bhi ye saab dekh rahe thy aur wo bhi heran thy ki ek 6 saal ka ladka bina soul ring ke aur bina martial soul ke ek 400 year ke beasts se ladh raha hai.
Jaab stab karne ke baad Veer master ke paas lout aata hai to master Veer ke hath pakad ke ache se dekhne lagte hai, ki kanhi chot ya snake ke katne ka nisan to nahi hai. Jaab saab thik laga to.
Master : Veer…kese…..
Veer : master maine usko stabbed kar diya hai, per….
Master : koyi nahi wo uska weakspot hai janha pe tumne stabbed kiya hai aab wait karte hai thodi der.
Veer (mann mai) : ye bahut karib tha, mujhe jald se jald jitna ho sake hidden weapon banana hoga aur powerful hidden weapon bhi warna yese situation mai nikalna kafi difficult hoga.
Datura snake bhi thodi der chatpatane ke baad shant ho jata hai aur uske upar ek yellow colour ka ring aajata hai aur ghumne lagta hai.
Master : Veer, ye perfect hai tumhara first soul ring ke liye, ye 422 years ka hai, aur tumahare full soul power ke sath isko absorb karna muskil nahi hoga.
Veer : master mera soul plant hai, kya ye conflict (sangharsh) nahi karegi.
Master : plant martial soul ke liye plant soul beast ring ko absorb karna jaruri nahi hai na hi ye jaruri hai ki beast martial soul sirf beast soul ring ko absorb kar sakega. Kuch paristhiti mai dono ass paas mai absorb kar sakte hai matlab plant martial soul beast soul ring ko aur beast martial soul plant soul ring ko absorb kar sakte hai.
Maine tumhe pehle hi bata chuka hun blue silver plant ka advantages kya hai, aur ye kamzor hone ka karan ye kisi bhi soul ring ka additional attributes ko reject nahi karta.
Aur kya apko yaad hai ki haam kis tarah ka soul ring dhund rahe thy.
Veer : yes master pehla toughness aur dusra Toxic (poison), that’s right, Datura snake mai ye dono characteristics hai.
Master : hmm, kya aap pehla insaan banna chate ho jo mere theory ko test karna chahega, kyun ki isko koyi bhi soul master chahe wo aam ho ya martial soul hall se ho wo ye baat nahi mante hai ki Plant martial soul beast soul ring ko aur beast martial soul plant soul ko adsorb kar payenge.
Sabhi to isse padhte hai per koyi iska practice nahi karte hai to saab mere pith ke piche haste bhi hai aur mera majak udate hai kyun ki koyi prove hi nahi hai aur na hi kabhi mai prove kar paya.
Veer : mujhe aapke upar pura bharosha hai master, mai pehle wala inshaan banna chahta hu jo apki theory ko practice karna chahta hun.
Master : thik hai, chalo suru karte hai.
Veer aur master dono wo datura snake ke paas chale jate hai jo ki mar chuka hota hai aur uska soul ring hawa hai ghum raha tha.
Veer (mann mai) : mera pehla soul ring, aab tum hi decide karogi ki kya mai mystrious Clan ki peerless talent (jade hand, Ghostly Trace, purple demon eye) ko practice kar sakta hun ki nahi, aur ye bhi ki master jo asha rakhte hai mujhpe wo aage badha pata hun ki nahi.
Fir veer wanhi jamin pe beth jata hai aur apne soul power ki help se soul ring ko apne paas le leta hai, aur wo soul ring bhi thik Veer ke charo taraf ghumne lagta hai. Aur Veer bhi blue silver plant ko yaad karta hai aur meditation mai beth ke usko absorb karna start kar deta hai.
Master : soul ring ki power tumhare body pe jitne bhi pain de tumhe ye karna hoga aur sath hi behosh maat hona, jagte rehna.
Jaab soul ring Veer ke body mai absorb hona start hota hai veer ko bhi yesa lagta hai ki uska skill jo bottleneck mai stop ho gayi thy wo bhi advance hone lagi hai, aur dekhte dekhte wo usko stoppage ko bhi todh deta hai aur ek light ray charo taraf chali jati hai.
Subha taak Veer wanhi meditation mai betha rehta hai aur soul ring ko absorb karne lagta hai, aur usko ye bhi mehsus ho raha tha ki uska blue silver plant evolve ho raha hai, subha ki pehli kiran ke sath Veer bhi apne meditation se uth jata hai aur khud ko pehle se bhi jyaada powerful mehsus karne lagta hai, fir apne blue silver plant ko bhi yaad karta hai to uske charo taraf ek yellow ring bhi aajati hai.
Wo uss blue silver plant mai difference saaf dekh raha tha, jo pehle baas patla sa 2-3 branches ka tha wo aab kafi powerful dikh raha tha aur uska branches bhi kafi mote mote thy aur pehle se jyada branches thy. Apna iss achievement se Veer khush tha aur apna pehla soul ring ka bhi. Jaab master ki aur dekha to,
Veer : master…apko kya hua hai….ye kehke unke paas aajata hai jo wanhi jamin pe pade huye thy.
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Jaab Veer master ke paas pahunchta hai to master ke right hand mai snake bite ke nisaan thy, aagar koyi tumhare Martial soul ko nukshan pahunchayenge to wo impact aap pe bhi dikhega aur master ke sath yanhi hua tha, jaab Datura snake ne jaab Pao ko apne munh aur danto se pakada tha to wo bite ke nishan master ke hath mai bhi pada. Sayad pakadte time Datura snake poa ko bite kar diya tha.
Aur datura snake ke bite mai jo toxic hota hai to wo toxic bhi master ke body mai chala gaya tha jiss ke wajah se wo behosh ho gaye hai aur marne ke karib bhi jake gaye.
Per Veer kesse unhe marne deta, apne pichle jindegi mai Veer bahut se poison ke bare mai janta tha aur unko handle bhi kiya tha to wo isko bhi handle karta hai, pehle master ke hath mai ek chota sa cut lagata hai, fir apne soul power ki madat se uss poison ko spread hone se suppress karne lagta hai. Aur us cut ke through wo poison ko bahar nikal leta hai, fir ek kapda usme ache se tightly bandh deta hai.
Thodi der baad master ko hosh bhi aajata hai aur Veer ko pani mangte hai Veer bhi unhe pani pilata hai aur ache se betha deta hai.
Thodi de rest lene ke baad,
Master : Veer tumne mujhe bachaya?
Veer : yes master, mere papa ne bata diya tha thoda bahut ki kesse poisonous wound ko treat karte hai. Master aap abhi bhi weak hai aap wait kijiye mai ham dono ke liye kuch khane ko banata hun.
Master : wait Veer, kya tumne soul ring completely absorb kar liya hai.
Veer master ki baat sunke apna blue silver plant ko yaad karta hai, aur uska martial soul uske right hand mai aajata hai. Master bhi usko dekh ke khush thy wo ye bhi dekh sakte hai ki pehle ke mukawale ye wala bahut alag hai.
Master : iska toughness kesa hai, aur iska soul skill kya hai.
Veer usko demonstrate karta hai, blue silver plant ka kuch branches nikal ke charo aur fail jati hai aur ek ped ko jakad leti hai, jisse Veer ne target ke roop mai select kiya tha.
Veer : mai abhi 50 meter ki radius mai kahi pe bhi attack kar sakta hun. Aur iska skill baas winding hai.
Master : ye feature controlling branch’s soul master ka hai aur iska toughness bhi acha hai. Agar mai galat nahi to, isme datura snake ki toxin bhi add hai.
Veer : yes master. Per sirf paralytic effect datura snake ki toxicity nahi hai.
Master : Ye dono winding and paralytic combination bhi thik hai. Jaab tak apke opponent ke paas aapse do soul ring se jyada na ho iss winding se bachna ashan nahi hoga. Chalo aab jaldi karo haame school bhi louta na hai.
Veer : per master….
Master : mai abhi thik hun Veer, chalo chalte hai….
Fir dono nikla jate hai forest se aur school pahunch jate hai fir Veer master ko unke cabin mai chodne Jata hai aur master ko unke bed pe leta ke,
Veer : Master aap ache se rest kijiye aagar kuch bhi jaruri ho to mujhe batana mai kar dunga apne aap ko takleef mat dena.
Master : maine kabhi ye socha nahi tha ki iss baar mai bach jaunga. Mai bahut jald recover bhi kar lunga. Per tumhara practice interrupted nahi hona chahiye. Mujhe wo second book ko lake do jo bookshelf ke third row ke left side mai hai.
Veer wo book jake nikal leta hai,
Master : isko apne paas rakho, ye book mai mere research hai soul power practice ke upar. Tum isse pura padh lena aur practice bhi karna. Per abhi ke liye jake Nouding city martial soul hall mai register karlo. Iske baad tum haar mahine soul master allowance milta rahega. Aur tumhe apprentice hone ke jarurat bhi nahi hai.
Veer : thik hai master, aap abhi rest kijiye, mai jata hun.
Fir veer master ke cabin se bahar nikal aata hai, jaab wo bahar aata hai to school close hone ka bell bhi bajta hai,
Veer : class khatam ho gaya hai, chalo chalte hai Zara aur W aur baki sabhi dorm 7 dosto se milte hai. Ye sochte huye Veer nikal jata hai Wanha se.
Per yanha school mai hala macha hua tha sabhi mai baas ek hi baat pe aaj charcha ho rahi thy, ki koyi apprentice boss Joe ke sath fight karne wali hai. Aur wo sabhi iss fight ko dekhne ke liye bade utable thy.
Aur ek ground mai do group khade huye thy ek Joe ka aur ek Zara ka, dono amne samne thy.
Joe : little girl, tum abhi bhi piche hat sakti ho.
Zara : kyun tum dar gaye ho ek choti ladki se har jaoge isliye, agar yesa hai to fir mere follower ho jao.
Joe : kya kaha mai dara hua hun aur tumse…hun….aur tum samajhte kya ho mujhe. W ye apprentice pagal ho gayi hai kya mujhse fight karne ke bare mai soch rahi hai.
Zara : tumhara ye bekar ki baate band karo, fight karna hai to karo.
Joe : maine suna hai ki tumhara martial soul Rabbit hai. Aagar tum harna chahti ho to, mujhe bura nahi lagega tumhe apna pet banane mai.
Tum bhi 10 admi ho aur ham bhi 10. Battle ground mai ek ke baad ek entry karenge jo jite ga wo next opponent ke sath battle karega aur jo last mak khada rahega wo jitega.
Zara : thik hai, aajao jo bhi pehle aana chahta hai.
W : boss….
Joe (mann mai) : little girl, tum strong ho to kya hua baki saab to trash hai. Lagatar battle karne se tumhara energy jyada consume karega aur tum ashani se haar jaogi.
Fir Joe ek ladke ko aage bhej deta hai, idhar se Zara aage ane lagti hai to W usse rok deta hai.
W : boss, mujhe pehle jane do.
Zara : kya tum sure ho.
Ladka : loser, W aagar mai tumhe aaj hara na diya to mera surname Liu nahi hoga.
W bhi confident ke sath uss ladke ke samne aake khada ho jata hai,
W : agar tum haar jaoge, to future mai tumhara fallen angel naam hoga.
Ye kehke W apna martial soul bahar nikal leta hai W ka martial soul beast soul tha, ye ek Red Tiger tha. W ke baad wo ladka bhi apna martial soul bahar nikal ta hai uska martial soul ek danda (monkey King dekha hai na monkey king ka hatiyar Jessa)tha.
W bina deri kiye uss ladke ke upar attack kar deta hai, wo ladka bhi W ka attack ko block karke W ko piche ke taraf phenk deta hai, W bhi piche aane ke baad fir se ek baar aur attack karne lagta hai per wo ladka ne apne martial soul se W ke pet pe marta hai jisse W firse piche ke taraf jake padta hai.
Fir bhi W har nahi manta hai, wo ek aur baar uthke uss ladke ke upar attack kardeta hai per iss baar jaab ladka W ko marne wala tha ki W ne uska danda pakad leta hai apne hath se. Per wo ladka bhi ye dekh ke hasta hai fir danda uska hath se gayab ho jata hai aur wo ladka anti clock wise ghum jata hai aur ghumne ke time hi uska danda ek baar wo uske hath mai aajata hai jisse wo W ke back pe ek jabardast maar jaad deta hai. Jisse W udte huye Apne team mate ke paas padta hai aur uska martial soul bhi gayab ho chuka tha.
Aur idhar Veer bhi ye news sun ke tayar hoke inke taraf hi aaraha tha.
Idhar Joe khush tha aur Zara baas gusse mai dikh rahi thy. Aur Veer ye saab dekh chuka tha matlab W ka fight.
Veer : W bahut impulsive hai aur wo amne samne fight mai kabhi bhi jit nahi sakta hai usko close fight leni hogi jitne ke liye.
Zara jaab uss awaj sunti hai to piche mudti hai to wanha Veer khada tha.
Zara : Veer tum wapas aagaye. Kya, aab tum ye maat bolna ki mai bhi impulsive hun, ye kehke apna munh fula leti hai.
Veer : nahi tum sahi ho, haam apprentice hai iska matlab ye nahi hai ki haam hamesha hi bully ho. Per tumhe mera wait karna chahiye tha jaab taak mai wapas na aajata taab taak.
Zara : mai kyun wait karu? Aur mai kesse janungi ki tum kaab wapas aaoge? Aur wo to pehle se hi haame bully karne ke liye aagaye. Aur wo ladka khud ko boss Joe kehta hai. Aur mera martial soul ko wo apna pet banna chahta hai.
Idhar W ek baar aur uth ke Uss ladke ke sath fight karne lagta hai aur W baas maar kha raha tha. Per Veer aab W ko maar khate huye nahi dekh sakta tha to wo secretly W ki madat karta hai, apne 24 moonlight belt se kuch chote chote pathar bahar nikal ta hai aur apne soul power ke help se uss opponent wale ladke ki sabhi 4 joints (hath ka 2 leg ka 2) ko marta hai jisse wo piche ke taraf chala jata hai, aur W ko ye mouka mil jata hai, to W usko marne lagta hai aur maar maar ke usko Out kar deta hai battle ground se. Aur wo ladka bhi out hoke wanhi behosh ho jata hai, aur isiki sath W pehla match jit leta hai.
W : I won….I won……I won….yaaaaahoooooo……yaaaahhhoooo…..
Zara : Joe haar maan jao, aur mere follower ban jao mai tumhe maaf kar sakta hun.
Zara ki baate sunke Joe gusse mai laal ho jata hai aur uska team ka do bande ko bhej deta hai gira hua banda ko lane ke liye wo dono bhi jake uss ladke ko le aate hai,
Joe (gusse se) : ham hamara pehla battle har gaye hai, Lee aab tum jao.
Lee ko dekh ke Veer Zara ke kaan mai kuch kehta hai,
Zara : W aap wapas aajao, iss battle mai Veer ko jane do.
W bhi Zara ki baat maan ke battle ground se bahar aajata hai aur uski jagah Veer jake khada ho jata hai.
Lee bade hi confidence ke sath battle ground mai khade hoke Veer ko ghur raha tha, kehte hai na confidence thik per over confidence galat hai yanha bhi wanhi hua Lee thoda over confidence ho gaya jisse chalte uske uska martial soul bhi use nahi kiya aur sidha Veer pe attack kar deta hai, per Veer ne usko koyi mouka hi nahi diya usne apna jade hand ka use karke Lee ka attack ko block karta hai aur Lee ke upar ek punch jaad deta hai apna jade hand se jisse Lee dur jake girta hai aur behosh ho jata hai.
Joe ki gang ka sabhi member including Joe saab munh fade Veer ko dekh rahe thy,
Joe gang : ye kya tha?
Veer : next….
W : ye kessa tha Joe? Tumhe kuch problem hai isse? Veer ne apna martial soul aur soul power use hi nahi kiya hai. Tumhe abhi isiwaqt haar maan leni chahiye jisse ki tum baad mai koyi pareshani na ho.
W ki baat sunke Joe khud battle ground mai aane ka faisla karta hai per pehle do ladke ko bhej ke Lee ko battle ground se bahar le jata hai aur fir wo khud entry leta hai.
Joe : Joe, martial soul Red Wolf, eleventh rank war soul master ek soul ring ke sath.
Ye kehke apna martial soul bahar nikal leta hai aur uske charo taraf ek white soul ring aajati hai, aur uske sar ke upar ek red wolf.
Veer : Veer, martial soul Blue silver plant.
Joe and gang : kya!!!!blue silver plant?
Ye kehke sabhi hasne lagte hai.
Veer : eleventh rank tool soul master.
Baas yahi baat thy ki saab chup ho gaye.
Joe : tumne abhi kya kaha?
Veer : eleventh rank tool soul master ek soul ring ke sath.
Ye kehke ke apna martial soul Blue silver plant ko bahar aane deta hai, aur uske charo taraf ek yellow soul ring aajati hai aur fir uske right palm mai Blue Silver Plant ka 2nd evolve bhi.
Abhi jo munh fade khade thy wo sabhi soul ring dekh ke aur bhi munh faad lete hai.
Joe (mann mai) : ye hundred year soul ring hai. Ye kesse ho sakta hai. Ek apprentice jo pehle saal hi aaya hai to wo war soul master kesse ban sakta hai.
Joe gang : boss Joe haara do isse….ye baas blue silver plant hai. Uske paas bhale hi powerful soul ring hai per uska martial soul useless hai.
Joe : shut up!!! Stupids....
(Mann mai) Ye ladke ka background kya hai? Iska pehla soul ring hi 100 years ka hai. Kya ye koyi badi family se belong karta hai? Fir Joe ka nazar Veer ke belt pe jati hai jo Veer ke kamar mai lagi huyi thy,
Ye jo belt hai koyi aam apprentice (matlab jo kissi sifarish se school mai admission lete thy) isko kabhi bhi afford nahi kar sakta hai.
Veer se,
Kya tum sach mai apprentice ho?
Veer : yes, kya ham aab fight suru kar sakte hai.
Joe : thik hai. Ye kehke wo attack kardeta hai veer pe.
Veer (mann mai) : amne samne ki fight thik hai aajao.
Joe (mann mai) : ye kid mere sath face to face fight karne ke bare mai soch raha hai, aur usne apna Martial soul bhi withdraw kar liya hai iska dimag mai kya chal raha hai.
Ye soch te huye Joe ne apna pehla attack Veer pe kar deta hai, Veer bhi Joe ki attack ko apne jade hand ki madat se rok deta hai, aur Joe ko piche ke taraf kiska deta hai. Fir aage badh ke uska ek hath pakad leta hai Joe abhi bhi sambhal nahi pata tha Veer ke through jaab piche kiska diya gaya tha, fir Veer Joe ko apne tarf khinch leta hai aur Joe ki pet mai ek punch jaad deta hai.
Joe uss punch ke impact se piche ke taraf jake padta hai. Per wo immediately khada bhi ho jata hai. Uska sare team mate apne munh pe hath rakh diye thy jaab Joe maar khaya tha wo bhi opponents se ek yesa opponent jo apna martial soul aur soul power bhi use nahi kiya tha.
Veer : mujhe aur bhi kuch kaam hai jo abhi karna hai, to isse jald se jald khatam karna hai mujhe.
Ye kehke apna martial soul ek aur baar yaad karta hai aur martial soul mai apna soul ring ki power transfer karta hai fir,
Veer : blue silver plant, winding….
Joe gang : boss….
Ye issliye kyun ki Veer ke kehte hi uska blue silver plant ke branches aage badh jate hai aur Joe ko jakad lete hai jisse Joe chatpatane lagta hai.
Joe gang : ye kid normal nahi hai.
Joe : ye kya hai? Mai hil bhi nahi pa raha hun.
Veer : tum isse nikal nahi sakte, to usko break karne ke bare mai sochna bhi mat warna khud ko hi takleef hogi. Aur mera blue silver plant mai Datura snake ki toughness hai aur Datura snake ki thodi toxicity bhi hai. Aur aagar tum ye soch rahe ho ki tum aur ladh paoge mujhse to mai bura nahi manuga tumhe isse bhi jyada punish karne mai.
Joe : nahi nahi…mai apna haar manta hun mujhe nikalo isse.
Joe ki baat sune Zara ki gang mai khusi ki leher doud jati hai sabhi Veer naam leke chilane lagte hai aur Joe ki gang ka sar niche ho jata hai.
Veer : thik hai jaab tum haar gaye ho to, tum wanhi karna jo tumne Zara se wada kiya tha.
Joe : mai tumhe apna boss kahu ya fir usse.
Veer : tum Zara ko hi boss kahoge kyun ki mai bhi Zara ko hara nahi paya hun warna to mai hi dorm 7 ka boss hota.
Zara bhi Veer ke side aagayi thy aur uske kadhe pe hath rakh ke,
Zara : thank you very, tumhe acha kaam kiya hai.
Veer : thik hai mujhe abhi jana hai to yanha ka baki ka kaam tum sambhal lena. Aur mujhe lagta hai ki future mai tum iss pure school ki bacho ki boss ban jaogi.
Zara : thik hai, aab tum ja sakte ho jo bhi tumhara kaam hai wo karne ke liye.
Zara : aur tumhe Joe, tumhe kuch problem hai mujhe apna boss kehne mai, chalo pehle mai apne bare mai bata deta hun.
Mera naam Zara hai, iss year ki apprentice, mera martial soul Rabbit hai, twelve level beast war soul master ek soul ring ke sath.
Joe : kya?
Fir Zara apni martial soul ko yaad karti hai per sab se iska alag tha iska koyi bhi soul iske sar ke paas nahi aaya balki ye khud kuch kuch rabbit ki tarah dikhne lagi thy per sabhi ki tarah iske charo aur bhi ek yellow ring aajati hai.
Sabhi apne maan mai baas yahi soch rahe thy ki iss year ke apprentice kissi Demon se kaam nahi hai.
Joe : boss Zara, mai ye manta hun ki aaj se aap mere boss ho aur aap future mai iss Nouding school ka bhi boss banegi. Sabhi aage aajao aur boss Zara ko greet karo.
Joe gang ke sare bache Joe ki baat maan ke Zara ke samne aake apna sar jhuka lete hai aur boss Zara..boss Zara kehne lagte hai.
Zara Veer ke taraf dekhke : Veer tumhe kuch kaam tha na to tum yanha kya kar rahe ho.
Veer aab taak baas Zara ko dekhe ja raha tha, fir aage badhke Zara ke rabbit ear ko sahlane lagta hai,
Veer : Zara, tum sach mai ek rabbit ho kya?
Zara Veer ki baate sunke kuch sochti hai fir apna munh fula leti hai aur gusse se,
Zara : kya? Tumme mujhe rabbit kesse kaha.
Aur Veer ko marne ke liye aage badhti hai ki Veer wanha se bhag jata hai, Veer bhag ke school ke bahar aajata hai aur aage chalne lagta hai wo abhi Nouding city ke bicho bich ja raha tha janha Martial soul hall moujud hai.
Veer (mann mai) : akhir kaar mai mera skill ko breakthrough karke next level mai le aaya aur wo problem bhi solve ho gaya aur mai mera pehla soul ring bhi pa liya.
Aur master kehte hai ki iss land mai bahut se clan hai. Kya mai iss land mai ek naya clan Mystrious clan bana sakta hun.
Yese hi kafi kuch sochte sochte Veer martial soul hall ke paas pahunch jata hai aur uske ander jane lagta hai ki usko guards usko rok deta hai.
Guard : ruk jao kid. Ye martial soul hall isme tum bina wajah entry nahi le sakte ho.
Veer : hello, mai mera martial soul ko advanced identification ke liye aaya hun yanha.
Guard : thik hai ander aajao aur first floor ke reception mai jake master Ma se mil lo.
Veer bhi entry Kar leta hai aur ander jane lagta hai ki usko Max mil jata hai to Max bhi Veer ka Martial soul hall aane ka reason puchta hai to Veer bhi usko wanhi batata hai jo usne bahar Guard se kaha tha.
To Max Veer ko ek room ke paas le jata hai aur usko thodi der wait karne ka kehke ander chala jata hai janha pe master Ma moujud thy ander aake Max, master Ma ko Veer ke baare mai bata te hai aur fir bahar jake Veer ko ander le aata hai.
Veer : hello mister Ma.
Max, master Ma ko : yehi wo kid mai jiske baare mai maine apko abhi bataya, aur ye full soul born ke sath hi paida hua hai, per iska martial soul Blue silver plant hai.
Master Ma : Max, tum sure ho ki ye kid yanha apna martial soul ki advanced identification ke liye aaya hai, na koyi martial soul Awaken ke liye.
Max : maine khud iska martial soul awaken kiya hai.
Master Ma : thik hai.
Max : Veer master Ma tumhe le jayenge wanha tumhara advanced identification ke liye. Mujhe kuch kaam hai to mai ja raha hun abhi.
Veer : bye mister Max.
Fir Max wanha se chale jate hai aur uss room mai abhi baas Veer aur Master Ma hi thy.
Master Ma : Veer mere sath aao.
Veer : thik hai mister Ma, aur sorry apko takleef dene ke liye.
Master Ma : mujhe tum mister na bulao ye awkward lagta hai tumhara munh se.
Veer : to fir grandpa Ma kesa rahe ga.
Master : han ye thik rahega, tum mujhe grandpa Ma bula sakte ho.
Fir master Ma aur Veer aage badh jate hai ek kamre ki aur jo uss kamre ke akhir mai tha.
Best tha bhai
 

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Master Ma aur Veer jaab uss darwaje ke ander gaye to wo ek hall tha bahut bada hall.
Veer : grandpa Ma kya aap mujhe martial soul hall ke bare mai kuch bata sakte hai.
Master Ma : han kyun nahi, haar baat to nahi per jo jaruri hai wo bata sakta hun, aur wese bhi mujhe jyada kuch pata nahi hai, kyun ki mai level 1 martial soul hall mai hun.
Ye sabse lowest level martial soul hall hai, aur ye sub-branch hall ke naam se jana jata hai, inka level 1 hota hai. Koyi city jinta bhi chota kyun na ho wanha pe level 1 ka sub-branch hall rehna jaruri hai. City jitna bada hoga martial soul hall ka level bhi utna bada hoga, aur hamme bhi level 2 sub-branch hall ko report karna padta hai. Sirf level 4 martial soul hall jisse ham Main hall kehte hai wo sirf In dono kingdom ke capital mai hi hai.
Level 4 ke upar bhi ek aur level hai wo level 5 isko sacred temple kaha jata hai. Aur ye sabse holiest place hai martial soul hall ka.
Levels of Martial soul hall
Level 1 – sub-branch hall
Level 2 – sub-branch hall
Level 3 – branch hall
Level 4 – main hall
Level 5 – scared temple.
Level 6 – legendary soul hall
sacred temple ke upar bhi ek aur level hai jisse legendary soul hall kaha jata hai uss level ke martial soul hall mai jane ke liye ek soul master ko highest soul level ka hona jaruri hai. Aur wo sabhi soul master ka dream hota hai Wanha jana.
Veer : thank you grandpa Ma itna saab kuch batane ke liye. Kya haam aab suru kar sakte hai.
Master Ma : ok suru karte hai, tumhara soul power test.
Fir master Ma apni ankh band karke kuch karne lagte hai fir unke dono hath ke bicho bich ek yellow colour ka ball aajata hai. Fir veer ko uska martial soul ko bahar nikal ne ke liye kehte hai.
Veer bhi apna martial soul bahar nikal leta hai uska blue silver plant uska right hand palm mai aajata hai jisse dekh ke,
Master Ma : kya ye Blue Silver Plant hai?
Veer : han..kya isme kuch problem hai grandpa Ma?
Fir dhire dhire yellow soul ring bhi veer ke charo taraf ghumne lagti hai.
Master Ma : ye 100 year soul ring hai. Isiki wajah se Blue Silver Plant mai itna changes aagaya hai. Ye iss baat prove hai ki tum ek ache teacher ko follow kar rahe ho Nouding school mai. Per dukh iss baat ka hai ki blue silver plant ka development bahut low hota hai.
Chalo chodo wo baat ko aab tum apna soul power ke upar concentrate karo, aur isme hath rakho.
Veer bhi wesa hi karta hai pehle apna soul power ke upar concentrate karta hai fir master Ma ke hath mai rakha yellow ball ke upar hath rakhta hai thodi der ke liye fir apna hath wanha se hata leta hai.
Veer ke hath hatane ke baad jaab master ma uss ball mai dekhte hai to wo heran reh jate hai.
Master Ma : ye….ye….
Wo baas kabhi Veer ko to kabhi uss ball ko hi dekh rahe thy, unki ankho mai herangi saaf dekha ja sakta tha, thodi der baad,
Master ma : tumhara soul power level 13 hai!!!!ye kese ho sakta hai, tumne 2 level kesse skip kiya, tumhara level 10 tha aur tumhe soul ring hassil ki to tumhara level 11 hona chahiye tha per ye level 13 hai. Kesse?
Veer kya tum mujhe bata sakte ho ki tumne konsa soul beast ko hunt kiya tha soul ring ke liye.
Veer : Datura snake
Master Ma : kya? Datura snake? Datura snake to beast soul hai. Plant branch kesse animal branch ka soul ring use kar sakta hai? Ye kesse possible hai?
Veer : ye possible hai grandpa Ma, mere teacher isse Martial soul Mimicry kehte hai.
Master Ma : tumhara teacher...kon hai wo?
Veer : sabhi unhe master kehte hai.
Master Ma : master? Li…… ye wanhi hai jisne ye theory diya tha kafi saal pehle martial soul hall ko, per sabhi isko galat bata diye aur iska majak bhi udaya aur Li ko martial soul hall se expelled bhi kar diya gaya tha.
Veer (mann mai) : master ka naam Li hai, aur wo martial soul hall se nikale gaye hai unki theory ki wajah se.
Master ma : Veer, kya tum hamare martial soul hall mai join honge.
Veer : grandpa Ma mai yanha iss liye nahi aaya tha.
Master ma : mera matlab wo nahi tha, aagar tum join karte ho martial soul hall mai, to tum martial soul hall ke exclusive soul master banoge. Aur tumhara aage ki padhayi martial soul hall ke special school mai hoga, jisse tumhara future aur bhi acha ho jayega, aur ye bhi ho skata hai ki tum future mai ek bahut acha soul master baan sako.
Veer : per grandpa Ma ye possible nahi hai. Mai already Nouding school mai padh raha hun.
Master ma : ohh…sayad ye baat ko bahut deri (late) ho gayi hai. Ye sach hai ham martial soul hall hai per iska matlab ye nahi ki haam kisiko dusre school se snatch karle.
Aur mujhe daar bhi iss baat hai ki aagar haam wo kar bhi le to bhi master Li sayad iss baat se agree ho ki tum hame join karo.
Ye saab Max ki galti hai, wo tumhe directly martial soul hall le aana chahiye tha.
Veer : aap yesa nahi keh sakte hai grandpa Ma, aagar mai pehle yanha aajata to, mujhe ye acha soul ring kesse milta?
Master Ma : ye bhi sahi hai. Wo saab chodo, mai tumhe officially welcome karta hun soul master team mai. Aap abhi se soul master ke tour pe honored hai iss Tian Dou Empire mai.
Fir veer wanha se chala aata hai, per master ma ke mann mai ek afsos reh jata hai ki Max ki wajah se Veer ke Jessa genius martial soul hall ke hatho se fisal gaya.
Veer bhi market mai ghumte ghumte ek blacksmith shop ki aur chal pada, uss shop mai se baas Tan…tan…ki awaj aarahi thy Veer ko awaj sunke uske papa se kiya hua wada yaad aajata hai ki Nouding city mai jake ek blacksmith shop mai apprentice ban jana. Isiliye Veer uss shop mai aagaya tha.
Veer ko shop ki aur aate dekh ke,
Admi : boy, ye place dangerous hai yanha se chale jao. Aagar tumhe kuch kharidna hai to kisi bade ke sath aao.
Veer directly uss admi se puchta hai, wo admi hi iss blacksmith shop ka leader tha.
Veer : hello sir kya yanha koyi apprentice ki jarurat hai.
Veer ki yesi baat sunke wo admi bhi apna kaam rok ke veer ko dekhta hai,
Admi : kid, khud ko dekho, tum ek blacksmith ke jesse lag bhi nahi rahe ho.
Veer : sorry apka time waste kiya, aap mujhe kuch time dijiye mai abhi aata hun.
Ye kehke veer wanha se chala jata hai, to sare worker Veer ke upar haste hai kyun ki unhe lag raha tha ki ye bacha unke sath majak kar raha tha.
Veer wanha se jake ek dress ki dukan mai jata hai aur ek aproon aur gloves karidta hai fir wapas aajata hai uss blacksmith shop pe.
Veer : sir, kya aab mai blacksmith ke Jessa dikh raha hun.
Admi : boy, kya tum mera majak uda rahe ho. Jao yanha se aagar yesi baat hai to.
Veer : sir, mai Nouding school mai apprentice hun, mere paas har afternoon ko time free rehta hai. Mere papa bhi ek blacksmith hai, aur mai unke paas se forging sikhi huyi hai, aur mere papa ne hi kaha tha ki koyi blacksmith shop mai jake apprentice ban jana jisse tum har din forging ki practice kar pao aur usse ache se nikhar sako aur jo paisa milega usse tum apna school ka aur khudka kharcha nikal sako.
Admi : aagr tumhe lagta hai ki tum ye kar loge to aajao, aur hamme ek apprentice ke roop mai serve kar sakte ho tum. Per tumhara salary inta high nahi hoga, per mai tumhe khane ko de sakta hun aur 50 soul coin ye kesa rahega?
Veer : mujhe manzur hai.
Veer ki baate sunke sabhi worker Veer ke upar hasne lagte hai aur ye sochne lagte hai ki ek chota bacha kya kaam karega, aur kya sach mai isko forging aati hai.
Admi : chup ho jao sabhi aur apna kaam karo. Aur aagar sabhi aajka kaam khatam kar diya to mere taraf se sabhi ko treat.
Sabhi : thanks leader, fir saab apne kaam mai busy ho jate hai.
Admi Veer se : tumhe kaha tha tum forging sikhe ho apne papa se. Wo tumhe kya sikhaye hai jaab ki tum abhi bhi itne chote ho.
Veer : forging aur kya, bhale hi mai chota hun per mai strong hun.
Wo admi baas Veer ko dekh raha tha jesse ye janne ki kosis kar raha ho ki kya ye bacha jo bol raha hai wo sach hai ya jhut. Sayad Veer bhi ye admi ki dil ki baat samajh jata hai.
Veer : sayad apko mere baat pe yakin nahi hai to mujhe kuch try karne dijiye jisse aapko believe aajaye mere baat pe.
Admi jo apne hath mai hammer pakda hua tha usko Veer ke samne kar deta hai,
Admi : aagar tum ye hammer ko carry kar sakte ho to mai tumhare bato per believe kar lunga.
Veer ke dimag mai to kuch aur hi chal raha tha, uss admi ke samne pade iron ko dekh ke,
Veer : kya aap iss iron se uska impurities remove kar rahe thy?
Admi : hmm
Fir veer wo garam iron ke tukde mo utha leta hai aur aag mai leke rakh deta hai, wanha le ek ladke ko,
Veer : kya aap isse aur jyada garam kar sakte hai, kyun ki ye itna garam nahi hai jitna mujhe chahiye.
Wo ladka bhi Veer ki baat sunke uska leader ko dekhta hai uska leader bhi han mai apna sar hila deta hai to wo ladka bhi Veer ki baat manke forge ko aur garam kar deta hai jitna Veer ko chahiye tha.
Iron ke garam hone tak Veer apne papa ke baare sochne lagta hai ki kesse uske papa ne usko forging sikhayi, aur kya kya karwaya wo sari baate.
Jaab wo iron sahi se garam ho jata hai to Veer usse bahar nikal ke work zone mai le aata hai, aur wo hammer jo uss admi ne uske samne kiya tha, usko dekhta hai fir uske upar hath rakh deta hai,
Dekha issliye kyun ki wo hammer uska height se baas 1 feet chota tha aur weight mai usse sayad 2-3 times jyada.
Veer uss hammer ke upar hath rakh ke usko ek hi jhatke mai hi hawa mai utha leta hai, aur uss iron ko hammering karne ke liye bilkul ready ho jata hai.
Veer ka uss hammer ko utha na hi un sabhi worker ko heran kar deta hai, wo to baas pehla shock tha, jaab veer hammering start karta hai unsabhi ko pehle wale se bhi jyada shock lagte hai.
Jaab Veer uss iron ka sara impurities hata deta hai aur hammer jammin pe rakh deta hai to samne aur charo aur dekhta hai ki sabhi usko hi dekh rahe thy.
Veer : kya hua?
Admi : ye continuous hammering hai random skill of hammering ka. Aur maine suna hai ki sabse jyada 81 times hi hammering kiya gaya hai, aur sabse best skill hai blacksmithing ka.
Random skill of hammering iss land ki best skill hai koyi iron ka impurities remove karne ke liye. Isko sirf kuch hi masters ne mastery ki hai. Aur maine sirf iske baare mai suna tha aaj dekh bhi liya.
Ye baate kar rahe thy ki Veer ko yesa laga koyi uske upar nazar rakh raha per jaab wo uss aur dekhta hai to wanha koyi bhi nahi tha. Per ye baat sach thy, jaab se wo iss market mai hai taab se koyi baas Veer ke upar nazar gadaye betha hai. Jo bhi hai apna presence se leke apna face taak saab kuch chupake rakha hua hai.
Veer ka wo skill dekh ke wo leader Veer ko apprentice ke roop mai rakh leta hai ek achi khasi paid karke, ye Veer ka kehne ke baad hua tha kyun ki usko jo lease time milta hai wo usme hi shop pe jayega, warna wo shop leader to Veer ko permanently rakhna chahta tha.
Yese hi Veer ka saal beet ta gaya, school se shop fir training fir school ka kaam, isi bich Veer aur Zara ki bhi achi khasi dosti ho gayi thy. Dekhte dekhte 1 saal bhi beet gaya, aab term bhi khatam ho chuka tha aur sabhi ko apne apne ghar jana tha, Zara to apne ghar gayi nahi pata nahi kyun per Veer ghar jane ke liye excited tha, Zara ne Veer se bhi pucha kya wo uske sath Veer ke ghar mai ja sakta hai to Veer bhi maan jata hai, fir Veer aur Zara Veer ke ghar ke liye nikal jate hai.
Bahut chalne ke baad,
Zara : Veer, aur kitna chalna padega tumhara village aane mai.
Veer : baas thoda aur....
Yese hi chalte chalte, Veer aur Zara Veer ke ghar pahunch jate hai,
Veer : papa mai wapas aagaya, aap kese hai?
Ye keh ke jaab ander ghusa to charo aur nazar gayi wo place Jessa tha wesa hi hai abhi bhi bilkul messy. Fir Zara ko bhi welcome karta hai aur aage badhke apna bag ek table pe rakh ke ander ka kamre ki aur chala jata hai janha uske papa hamesha rest karte thy.
Jaab wo uss aur ja raha tha uss kamre se uske papa to nahi per grandpa jack bahar nikal te hai,
Veer : grandpa jack….
Grandpa jack : Veer, tum akele kyun wapas aaye.
Veer : grandpa jack mera sath Zara bhi aayi hai.
Zara : hello grandpa jack.
Grandpa jack : hello little girl
Veer : grandpa jack mere papa kanha hai.
Grandpa jack : mai bhi tumhare papa ko leke jane wala tha tumhe pick karne ke liye. Per wo ye chod ke kanhi chale gaye hai.
Ye kehke ek letter Veer ke taraf badha dete hai.
Veer wo letter leke padhne lagta hai,
Mohan : Veer, jaab tum ye letter padh rahe honge taab taak mai ja chuka honga. Mujhe kabhi dhundna maat wo tumhare baas ke bahar hai.
Jesse ek eagle jyada uncha udta hai taab jaab wo independent hota hai. Tumhe bhi wesa hi udna hai bahut upar. Per mai ek useless hun jo ki kabhi bhi tumhara madat nahi kar paya. Tumne apna path choose kar liya hai, aur tum ussi pe hi focus karna, aur mai issliye ja raha hun ki mera kuch chiz hai kisike paas wo lena hai mujhe kisi bhi kimat mai.
Mere bare mai sochna maat, aur tension maat lena tum tumhare path pe aage badhte jana ham ek din jarur milenge. Ye wada raha mera aur aagar ye letter padh ke aagar tum tumhare path se bhatak gaye to sayad hi haam kabhi mil paye.
Veer, tumhara blue silver plant tumari maa ki martial soul thy, aur mujhe tumpe believe hai ki usko ek yesi uchayi pe le jaoge ki tum per tumara maa aur mai garv kar sakenge.
Aur ek baat jo maine taab bhi kaha tha aur aab bhi, tumhe kabhi yesa laga ki soul master path ek good occupation nahi hai to wapas aajana saint soul village, aur mere jesa blacksmith ban jana.
Mujhe miss maat karna aur dukhi bilkul bhi mat hona, aur tum mere bete ho iss baat ka garv hai mujhe. Bye Veer.
Veer wo padhke behed dukhi ho jata hai, kyun ki uska papa usko chodke kahi chale gaye thy. Zara bhi aage badh ke Veer ke kandhe pe hath rakh deti hai jesse usse ye keh rahi ko ki dhuki maat ho tum aur tumhare papa jarur ek na ek din miloge. Grandpa jack bhi wanha se chale jate hai Wanha se ye kehke ki kabhi bhi kuch jarurat hai to mujhe yaad kar lena. Veer bhi wapas apne ghar ke kaam mai laag jata hai jisme Zara bhi uski madat kar rahi thy, Veer apne apko sambhal liya tha akhir sambhale kyun na, ek 7 saal ke bache ke ander 36 saal ka admi ka dimag jo tha.
Wanhi mohan ek safar pe nikal chuka tha apna chiz lene ke liye kisi se jisko wo bahut saal pehle diya tha.
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Bahut badiya update Bhaii

Veer ki soul power 13 dekhkar grandpa Ma bhii chok gye

Master Li ki theory ko sabne majak banaya tha but ab pta chala ki theory sach m bahut badiya thi

Blacksmith k bha bhii kam mil gya hammering ki training bhii sath sath chalti rahegi

Veer k father ka jana Veer k abhii shii h apni tranning par pura focus rakh payega ha thode din dukhi ho sakta h lekin aage to badan hi hoga

Veer jab Blacksmith k vha gya tab koi na koi spy kar rha tha aage jake pta chalega kon tha or irada kya tha

Next update ka wait rahega ....
 
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