Fantasy War of Gods

Shanu · Aug 11, 2021

Beautiful update bhai

NewWriter23 · Aug 11, 2021

Bhupinder Singh said:
Nice update

Shanu said:
Beautiful update bhai

Thank you

Ajay · Aug 11, 2021

Waiting for next update bhai

(( DEVIL KING )) · Aug 11, 2021

NewWriter23 said:
Thank you Mahiirathore, brother abhi se story slow hogi

Bhai aise mat bolo . Itni achi story mushkil se milti hai .

Sky07 · Aug 11, 2021

NewWriter23 said:
Update 10

Veer aab apne ghar mai tha, aur idhar Master Li, apne cabin mai, aur master Li bethe bethe Veer ke baare mai hi soch rahe thy ki unka cabin ka darwaje pe knock hota hai, to master unko ander aane ko kehte hai jo bhi knock kar raha tha.

Wo ek admi tha ye wanhi admi tha jo Veer ke upar nazar gadaye hua tha market mai, jaab veer wapas apne ghar gaya to ye admi bhi master se milne ke liye aagaya.

Admi : hello master Li….

Master Li : aap….

Admi : ham ek dusre se na mile huye 20 saal se bhi upar go gaye hai. Aur mai tumhe mujhe na pehchanna ke liye blame nahi kar raha hun, kyun ki mera jo abhi appearance hai hardly hi koyi pehchan sakta hai.

Ye kehke apna face pe jo kapda Dhaka hua tha wo hata deta hai fir,
Mai Mohan hun.

Ji han ye Veer ke papa hi thy jo ki Veer ke piche kayi mahino uske upar nazar rakhe huye thy.

Master Li : Mohan? Aap…..aap… Heaven……

Mohan : past ke baate na kare to behtar hoga. Mai yanha apne bete ke bare mai baat karne aaya hun.

Master Li : apka beta, matlab veer..... Per wo to ghar chala gaya hai per aap yanha kyun hai.

Mohan : wo ghar gaya mai hai isiliye mai yanha hun. Aur mai janta hun tumne usko apna disciple ke tour pe le liya hai isiliye mujhe aur chinta nahi hai uska, kyun ki mujhe pata hai ki tum uska ache se khyal rakhoge.
Aur wese bhi wo mere sath kabhi khush nahi reh payega, usne apna path choose kar liya hai, mujhe pata hai wo acha path nahi hai, fir bhi mujhe uske upar bharosha (believe) hai. Isiliye mai ja raha hun mera chiz wapas lane ke liye.

Master Li : mujhe saab bate to nahi pata jo apke sath hua tha, per aap Veer ko yese kese chod ke ja sakte hai, aur apke jane ke baad wo dukhi bhi ho sakta hai, aur yese wo apne path se bhatak bhi sakta hai, apko nahi lagta ye uske liye sahi nahi hai.

Mohan : mere sath rehna hi uske liye sahi nahi hai, baas mujhe aur kuch nahi kehna hai baas uska khayal rakhna aur ye baat kabhi nahi bhulna ki wo mera beta hai, ye baat Mohan ne serious tone mai kahi thy.

Ye kehke mohan uss kamre se jane lagta hai aur jate jate Master Li ko ek level 6 ka martial soul hall ka token de deta hai aur wanha se chala jata hai hamesha ke liye. Aur baas itna keh jata hai ki Veer ka ache se khayal rakhna.

Master bhi wo token ko apne hath mai pakad ke dekhne lagte hai. Aur Mohan ke bich jo baate huyi unke sath uske baare mai sochne lagte hai.

Idhar Veer ghar ka kaam karke fir se bahar beth jata hai aur apne papa ke baare mai sochne lagta hai, aur Zara bhi uske paas mai beth ke usko samajhane lagti hai.

Zara : Veer yese dukhi maat ho, tumhare papa baas temporarily hi kahi gaye hai, wo tumhe mil jayenge future mai. Aur yesa bhi ho sakta hai ki wo tumhe chod diye hai, jesse ki tum strong ho sako akele, aur wo ye dekhna chahte ho.

Aur tum yese dhuki bethoge to unka jo bharosha hai tumpe ki tum strong banoge wo down ho jayega.

Veer : sayad, per wo yese mujhe kyun chod ke gaye. Mere papa hi mere family thy, unke siwa aur koyi nahi hai. Unke siwa ye ghar bhi ghar Jessa nahi lag raha hai.

Zara : mai to hun na tumhari friend, aur mujhe tum apni family maan sakte ho.

Veer Zara ki baat sunke kafi haad taak thik ho chuka tha aur wese bhi wo samajhdar bhi tha.

Veer : wo baad mai dekhenge abhi mere sath chalo mujhe tumhe kuch dikhana hai.

Zara bhi han mai apna sar hila deti hai to Veer Zara ko leke pahad pe chala jata hai janha pe wo roj meditation karta tha.

Jaab uss pahad ke upar dono pahunchte hai to pura pahad ke upar abhi phool hi phool thy charo aur rang birange jo uss pahad ko aur bhi sunder bana raha tha. Zara baas charo aur dekhti rehti hai, aur wo jagah ki sunderta ko apni anko mai samayi ja rahi thy.

Veer : Zara ye wanhi jagah hai janha pe mai roj apni martial art practice aur meditation wagera karta tha. Thoda time rok ke, Zara ek question puchunga tumhe aur mujhe asha hai ki uska answer tum soch samajh ke dogi.

Zara : Veer tumhe pata hai tum abhi bilkul school mai jo wo old men hai na hamesha serious ussi ki tarah dikh rahe ho, hehehe…..

ye bate Zara ne iss liye kahi thy ki Veer wo baate thode serious look ke sath pucha tha Zara ko.

Veer (serious hoke) : Zara abhi kuch der pehle jo tumhe kaha ki mai tumhe apna family ka hissa mann lu kya sach mai tumne wo baat seriously bola tha ki baas yese hi mere dil rakhne ke liye.

Zara kuch nahi bolti baas Veer ko dekhe ja rahi thy aur kuch soch rahi thy,

Veer : mai tumhe kuch bhi nahi de sakta hun, na power na money per ek chiz mai promise kar sakta hun, hamesha mai tumhe protect karunga, tumhe ek kharoch bhi aane nahi dunga, chahe uske liye meri jaan hi kyun na chali jaye.

Zara baas kuch der Veer ko dekhti rahi aur kuch sochte huye,

Zara : aagar ek din mujhe bahut se log marne ke liye aaye aur tum unhe hara na pao to tum kya karoge.

Veer : unko pehle mujhe marna hoga tumhe chune ke liye.

Zara Veer ke baate sunke baas unse ankho mai dekhne lagti hai jesse ye janne ki kossis kar rahi thy ki Veer ki kahi huyi baato mai kitni sachayi hai, aur wese bhi Zara bhi samajhdar thy bilkul Veer ke jesse.

Fir Zara bhi han keh deti hai wo uska family ka hissa banegi, jisse Veer bhi khush ho jata hai, aur khush kyun na ho kaal tak jo uske family mai 2 member thy aaj usme ek aur member add ho gayi hai.

Fir dono wanhi pe dono beth jate hai aur dhalta hua suraj ko dekh rahe thy aur uss khubsurati ka mazza le rahe thy.

Zara : Veer aab mai tumhe kya bulau…jaab mai hum ek hi family mai aagaye hai.

Veer : jesse aaj tak bulati aayi ho Veer wanhi bulana.

Fir achanak Veer ko kuch yaad aata hai to wo khada ho jata hai, aur usko yese khade hote huye dekh ke Zara bhi khadi ho jati hai, aur idhar Veer apne hath ke sleeve pe laga arrow shooter bahar nikal ke Zara ke taraf kar deta hai.

Veer : ye lo ye tumhare liye hai.

Zara : ye kya hai.

Veer : ye sleeve arrow shooter hai, ye ek tarah ka hidden weapon hai, jaab tum ye trigger pull karogi to iske ander jo arrow hai wo shoot ho jayega.

Veer ye saab kehte huye Zara ke sleeve mai ye set bhi kar deta hai aur Zara ka hath upar kar deta hai aur ek aur nishana bana deta hai.

Veer : iska lunch ka sound bahut kaam hota hai to ashani se notice mai bhi nahi aayega, jisse tum tumahre enemy pe sneak attack kar sakti ho.

Zara bhi usko dekhti hai fir veer se,

Zara : per maine tumhe isko kabhi use karte huye nahi dekha hai, jaab bhi haam fight karte taab.

Veer : pagal ladki, mai kesse iss dangerous weapon ko tumhare upar use kar sakta hun.

Fir veer ko ek mosquito dikh jata hai to Veer Zara se,

Veer : wo dekho ek mosquito, mai uska left wing ko hit kar sakta hun usko maare bina iss weapon ki help se.

Zara : tum mazak kar rahe ho na?

Veer : nahi.

Ye kehke Zara ka hath pakad leta hai aur apna Purple demon eye bhi active kar leta hai fir arrow lunch kar deta hai,

Veer ne Jessa hi kaha tha thik wesa hi uss mosquito ke left wing mai arrow laga hua tha aur wo arrow mosquito ko leke ek ped pe jake laga tha. Wo mosquito aab bhi jinda tha. Ye baat Zara ne notice kiya jaab wo uss ped ke paas pahunch ke dekhne lagi thy taab.

Veer : ye secret weapon ke baare mere papa bhi nahi jante hai. Mai iss liye tumhe ye bataya ki mai tumhe protect karne ke liye capable hun to tumhe chinta karne ki jarurat nahi hai kuch bhi thik hai.

Zara : thank you Veer, aur ye weapon majedar lag raha hai, kya tum mujhe ye chalana sikhaoge.

Veer : nahi

Zara : please Veer, please….

Zara baas bacho ki tarah aab Veer ke piche padi huyi thy wo weapon chalana shikne ke liye.

Veer : Jessa tumhara violent behaviour hai aagar tumne ye sikh liya to bahut loog iska sikhar honge.

Zara : please Veer….

Bahut baar Zara ke manane ke baad Veer maan jata hai to Zara bhi khush ho jati hai firse dono wanhi pe beth jate hai.

Veer (mann mai) : papa, aap dar rahe thy na ki mai strong nahi banuga jaab mai apke sath hounga to aap fikar na kare, mai hard se hard training karunga ek real man ki tarah. Aur ek din aap mujhe pe garv karenge.

Mysterious clan se nikale huye mujhe 6 saal ke upar ho gaye hai per mai Mystrious clan ka hi rahunga hamesha ke liye. Aur iss land mai Mystrious clan banake usko hi aage badhaunga ge wada hai mera clan leader, aur ye mai promise karta hun heaven aur earth se.

Yese hi dekhte dekhte 5 saal beet jate hai, veer aur Zara apne training karte masti majak karte, aab wo dono kafi karib bhi aagaye thy.

5 saal baad,

Tian Dou Empire, Barak kingdom, Sou Tou City.

Veer aur Zara aab 12 saal ke ho gaye hai. Aur abhi Zara aur Veer Sou Tou City mai thy, aur market ke bicho bich chale ja rahe thy. Bahut jyada chalene ss Zara bilkul thak si gayi thy, aur thaki huyi awaj mai hi.

Zara : uuufffff…finally Sou Tou City mai ham pahunch gaye. Mujhe nahi pata hai master Li ke dimag mai kya chal raha hai. Bahut se middium level school hame recruite karne ke liye bethe hai wo bhi bina kissi condition ke, per unka kehna hai ki hamme Sherk School mai enroll karna chahiye. Sherk school iska rank kya hai, maine iske bare kabhi suna bhi nahi hai.

Veer : master Li ne mujhe kaha hai enroll karne ke liye tumhe nahi, to tum itna complaint kyun kar rahi ho.

Zara : acha to tumhe pata nahi hai mai kyun kar rahi hun. Ye saab tumhare liye kyun ki ham ek hi family ke hisse hai. Wese bhi uss school ka entrance 2 din baad hai to ham kya iss city mai 2 din rahenge. Aur wese bhi mai chalte chalte bahut thak gayi hun chalo na Veer kahi pe rukh jate hai.

Veer : thik hai nautanki

Yese chalte chalte Zara ko ek hotel dikhti hai jiska naam Rose hotel tha to Zara yanhi pe rehna ka kehti hai jisse Veer bhi nahi talta hai aur dono ander chale jate hai, room lene ke liye.

Aur ye dono reception ke paas jake apne liye room bhi book kar lete hai, aur unke paas baas ek hi kamra bacha tha jo ki aab Veer aur Zara ne le liya tha, wo receptionist abhi unko unka kamre ki key de hi raha tha ki piche se awaj aati hai.

Awaj : wo mera kamra hai kya tum yanha pe naye ho jo mere kamre ko unko de rahe ho. Fir wo awaj wala ladka uss receptionist ke paas pahunch ke, mujhe tumhara manager se milna hai.

Veer aur Zara uss ladke ko dekh rahe thy, uss ladke ke sath abhi 2 ladkiya bhi thy aur wo ladka dikhne mai bahut arrogant bhi lag raha tha.

Veer : buddy, haam pehle aaye hai aur ye kamara hamne book kiya hua hai.....

Ladka (Veer ke bato ko bich mai kat te huye) : to kya hua, mai hamesha uss kamre mai hi rehta hun to mera personal kamra hi hua.

Zara : to....abhi wo kamra hamara hai.

Ladka : to usse kya hota hai, fir wo ladka Zara aur Veer ke taraf dekhte huye, mujhe lagta hai ki tum dono soul masters ho. Chalo tum dono ko ye chance deta hun, aagar tum dono milke mujhe hara doge to mai yanha se chala jaunga warna tum dono yanha se chalte banna.

Zara uss ladke ki baat sunke gusse mai aage badh hi rahi thy ki Veer usse rok deta hai, itne mai uss hotel ka manager bhi wanha aajata hai.

Manager : Mr. Duke, shant ho jayiye aap.

Duke : manager, isko aap explain kese karenge.

Manager : sorry Mr. Duke ye naya staff hai jo apke bare aur uss room ke bare mai nahi janta hai. I am sorry Mr. Duke.

Fir Veer aur Zara ke taraf mud ke,

Manager : I am also sorry mister, ye room Mr. Duke ke liye reserved rehta hai, jo ki mere staff ko pata nahi tha jiske chalte wo room apko de diya hai, aap kahi aur chale jayiye.

Zara : aur aagar ham na gaye to? Kya kar lega ye, hoga kahi ka hot-shot per hamare samne nahi.

Duke : kya…..

Manager : sorry….mr. Duke, fir Veer aur Zara ke taraf dekh ke, please aap mr. Duke se maafi mang lijiye…..

Duke : apni bakwas band karo manager, jo bhi nukshan hoga tumhara wo pay kar dunga abhi yanha se niklo tum.

Manager bhi wanha se chala jata hai, aur Duke ready ho jata hai Veer aur Zara se fight karne ke liye,

Veer bhi Zara ko rok ke khud aage aajata hai ye kehke ki wo usse hara dega, aur usse acha khasa maja chakhayega.

Zara bhi maan jati hai aur baas Veer ko yanhi bolti hai ki ache se sabak sikhana isko.

Ye dono apne mai lage huye thy ki Duke ek aur baar in dono ko bolta hai,

Duke : apne mai fight karna band karo aur tum dono aasakte ho mere se fight karne ke liye.

Veer bhi smile ke sath Duke ke samne aajata hai. Aab dono bilkul ready thy ek dusre ke upar attack karne ke liye.

Superb update NewWriter23 bhai, I have read many stories on this forum and as per my experience your story is one of the best story of this forum with attractive storyline and interesting content and it is gaining momentum with each updates. Bhai I have a small request to you that please give regular updates.

Jaguaar · Aug 11, 2021

NewWriter23 said:
Update 10

Veer aab apne ghar mai tha, aur idhar Master Li, apne cabin mai, aur master Li bethe bethe Veer ke baare mai hi soch rahe thy ki unka cabin ka darwaje pe knock hota hai, to master unko ander aane ko kehte hai jo bhi knock kar raha tha.

Wo ek admi tha ye wanhi admi tha jo Veer ke upar nazar gadaye hua tha market mai, jaab veer wapas apne ghar gaya to ye admi bhi master se milne ke liye aagaya.

Admi : hello master Li….

Master Li : aap….

Admi : ham ek dusre se na mile huye 20 saal se bhi upar go gaye hai. Aur mai tumhe mujhe na pehchanna ke liye blame nahi kar raha hun, kyun ki mera jo abhi appearance hai hardly hi koyi pehchan sakta hai.

Ye kehke apna face pe jo kapda Dhaka hua tha wo hata deta hai fir,
Mai Mohan hun.

Ji han ye Veer ke papa hi thy jo ki Veer ke piche kayi mahino uske upar nazar rakhe huye thy.

Master Li : Mohan? Aap…..aap… Heaven……

Mohan : past ke baate na kare to behtar hoga. Mai yanha apne bete ke bare mai baat karne aaya hun.

Master Li : apka beta, matlab veer..... Per wo to ghar chala gaya hai per aap yanha kyun hai.

Mohan : wo ghar gaya mai hai isiliye mai yanha hun. Aur mai janta hun tumne usko apna disciple ke tour pe le liya hai isiliye mujhe aur chinta nahi hai uska, kyun ki mujhe pata hai ki tum uska ache se khyal rakhoge.
Aur wese bhi wo mere sath kabhi khush nahi reh payega, usne apna path choose kar liya hai, mujhe pata hai wo acha path nahi hai, fir bhi mujhe uske upar bharosha (believe) hai. Isiliye mai ja raha hun mera chiz wapas lane ke liye.

Master Li : mujhe saab bate to nahi pata jo apke sath hua tha, per aap Veer ko yese kese chod ke ja sakte hai, aur apke jane ke baad wo dukhi bhi ho sakta hai, aur yese wo apne path se bhatak bhi sakta hai, apko nahi lagta ye uske liye sahi nahi hai.

Mohan : mere sath rehna hi uske liye sahi nahi hai, baas mujhe aur kuch nahi kehna hai baas uska khayal rakhna aur ye baat kabhi nahi bhulna ki wo mera beta hai, ye baat Mohan ne serious tone mai kahi thy.

Ye kehke mohan uss kamre se jane lagta hai aur jate jate Master Li ko ek level 6 ka martial soul hall ka token de deta hai aur wanha se chala jata hai hamesha ke liye. Aur baas itna keh jata hai ki Veer ka ache se khayal rakhna.

Master bhi wo token ko apne hath mai pakad ke dekhne lagte hai. Aur Mohan ke bich jo baate huyi unke sath uske baare mai sochne lagte hai.

Idhar Veer ghar ka kaam karke fir se bahar beth jata hai aur apne papa ke baare mai sochne lagta hai, aur Zara bhi uske paas mai beth ke usko samajhane lagti hai.

Zara : Veer yese dukhi maat ho, tumhare papa baas temporarily hi kahi gaye hai, wo tumhe mil jayenge future mai. Aur yesa bhi ho sakta hai ki wo tumhe chod diye hai, jesse ki tum strong ho sako akele, aur wo ye dekhna chahte ho.

Aur tum yese dhuki bethoge to unka jo bharosha hai tumpe ki tum strong banoge wo down ho jayega.

Veer : sayad, per wo yese mujhe kyun chod ke gaye. Mere papa hi mere family thy, unke siwa aur koyi nahi hai. Unke siwa ye ghar bhi ghar Jessa nahi lag raha hai.

Zara : mai to hun na tumhari friend, aur mujhe tum apni family maan sakte ho.

Veer Zara ki baat sunke kafi haad taak thik ho chuka tha aur wese bhi wo samajhdar bhi tha.

Veer : wo baad mai dekhenge abhi mere sath chalo mujhe tumhe kuch dikhana hai.

Zara bhi han mai apna sar hila deti hai to Veer Zara ko leke pahad pe chala jata hai janha pe wo roj meditation karta tha.

Jaab uss pahad ke upar dono pahunchte hai to pura pahad ke upar abhi phool hi phool thy charo aur rang birange jo uss pahad ko aur bhi sunder bana raha tha. Zara baas charo aur dekhti rehti hai, aur wo jagah ki sunderta ko apni anko mai samayi ja rahi thy.

Veer : Zara ye wanhi jagah hai janha pe mai roj apni martial art practice aur meditation wagera karta tha. Thoda time rok ke, Zara ek question puchunga tumhe aur mujhe asha hai ki uska answer tum soch samajh ke dogi.

Zara : Veer tumhe pata hai tum abhi bilkul school mai jo wo old men hai na hamesha serious ussi ki tarah dikh rahe ho, hehehe…..

ye bate Zara ne iss liye kahi thy ki Veer wo baate thode serious look ke sath pucha tha Zara ko.

Veer (serious hoke) : Zara abhi kuch der pehle jo tumhe kaha ki mai tumhe apna family ka hissa mann lu kya sach mai tumne wo baat seriously bola tha ki baas yese hi mere dil rakhne ke liye.

Zara kuch nahi bolti baas Veer ko dekhe ja rahi thy aur kuch soch rahi thy,

Veer : mai tumhe kuch bhi nahi de sakta hun, na power na money per ek chiz mai promise kar sakta hun, hamesha mai tumhe protect karunga, tumhe ek kharoch bhi aane nahi dunga, chahe uske liye meri jaan hi kyun na chali jaye.

Zara baas kuch der Veer ko dekhti rahi aur kuch sochte huye,

Zara : aagar ek din mujhe bahut se log marne ke liye aaye aur tum unhe hara na pao to tum kya karoge.

Veer : unko pehle mujhe marna hoga tumhe chune ke liye.

Zara Veer ke baate sunke baas unse ankho mai dekhne lagti hai jesse ye janne ki kossis kar rahi thy ki Veer ki kahi huyi baato mai kitni sachayi hai, aur wese bhi Zara bhi samajhdar thy bilkul Veer ke jesse.

Fir Zara bhi han keh deti hai wo uska family ka hissa banegi, jisse Veer bhi khush ho jata hai, aur khush kyun na ho kaal tak jo uske family mai 2 member thy aaj usme ek aur member add ho gayi hai.

Fir dono wanhi pe dono beth jate hai aur dhalta hua suraj ko dekh rahe thy aur uss khubsurati ka mazza le rahe thy.

Zara : Veer aab mai tumhe kya bulau…jaab mai hum ek hi family mai aagaye hai.

Veer : jesse aaj tak bulati aayi ho Veer wanhi bulana.

Fir achanak Veer ko kuch yaad aata hai to wo khada ho jata hai, aur usko yese khade hote huye dekh ke Zara bhi khadi ho jati hai, aur idhar Veer apne hath ke sleeve pe laga arrow shooter bahar nikal ke Zara ke taraf kar deta hai.

Veer : ye lo ye tumhare liye hai.

Zara : ye kya hai.

Veer : ye sleeve arrow shooter hai, ye ek tarah ka hidden weapon hai, jaab tum ye trigger pull karogi to iske ander jo arrow hai wo shoot ho jayega.

Veer ye saab kehte huye Zara ke sleeve mai ye set bhi kar deta hai aur Zara ka hath upar kar deta hai aur ek aur nishana bana deta hai.

Veer : iska lunch ka sound bahut kaam hota hai to ashani se notice mai bhi nahi aayega, jisse tum tumahre enemy pe sneak attack kar sakti ho.

Zara bhi usko dekhti hai fir veer se,

Zara : per maine tumhe isko kabhi use karte huye nahi dekha hai, jaab bhi haam fight karte taab.

Veer : pagal ladki, mai kesse iss dangerous weapon ko tumhare upar use kar sakta hun.

Fir veer ko ek mosquito dikh jata hai to Veer Zara se,

Veer : wo dekho ek mosquito, mai uska left wing ko hit kar sakta hun usko maare bina iss weapon ki help se.

Zara : tum mazak kar rahe ho na?

Veer : nahi.

Ye kehke Zara ka hath pakad leta hai aur apna Purple demon eye bhi active kar leta hai fir arrow lunch kar deta hai,

Veer ne Jessa hi kaha tha thik wesa hi uss mosquito ke left wing mai arrow laga hua tha aur wo arrow mosquito ko leke ek ped pe jake laga tha. Wo mosquito aab bhi jinda tha. Ye baat Zara ne notice kiya jaab wo uss ped ke paas pahunch ke dekhne lagi thy taab.

Veer : ye secret weapon ke baare mere papa bhi nahi jante hai. Mai iss liye tumhe ye bataya ki mai tumhe protect karne ke liye capable hun to tumhe chinta karne ki jarurat nahi hai kuch bhi thik hai.

Zara : thank you Veer, aur ye weapon majedar lag raha hai, kya tum mujhe ye chalana sikhaoge.

Veer : nahi

Zara : please Veer, please….

Zara baas bacho ki tarah aab Veer ke piche padi huyi thy wo weapon chalana shikne ke liye.

Veer : Jessa tumhara violent behaviour hai aagar tumne ye sikh liya to bahut loog iska sikhar honge.

Zara : please Veer….

Bahut baar Zara ke manane ke baad Veer maan jata hai to Zara bhi khush ho jati hai firse dono wanhi pe beth jate hai.

Veer (mann mai) : papa, aap dar rahe thy na ki mai strong nahi banuga jaab mai apke sath hounga to aap fikar na kare, mai hard se hard training karunga ek real man ki tarah. Aur ek din aap mujhe pe garv karenge.

Mysterious clan se nikale huye mujhe 6 saal ke upar ho gaye hai per mai Mystrious clan ka hi rahunga hamesha ke liye. Aur iss land mai Mystrious clan banake usko hi aage badhaunga ge wada hai mera clan leader, aur ye mai promise karta hun heaven aur earth se.

Yese hi dekhte dekhte 5 saal beet jate hai, veer aur Zara apne training karte masti majak karte, aab wo dono kafi karib bhi aagaye thy.

5 saal baad,

Tian Dou Empire, Barak kingdom, Sou Tou City.

Veer aur Zara aab 12 saal ke ho gaye hai. Aur abhi Zara aur Veer Sou Tou City mai thy, aur market ke bicho bich chale ja rahe thy. Bahut jyada chalene ss Zara bilkul thak si gayi thy, aur thaki huyi awaj mai hi.

Zara : uuufffff…finally Sou Tou City mai ham pahunch gaye. Mujhe nahi pata hai master Li ke dimag mai kya chal raha hai. Bahut se middium level school hame recruite karne ke liye bethe hai wo bhi bina kissi condition ke, per unka kehna hai ki hamme Sherk School mai enroll karna chahiye. Sherk school iska rank kya hai, maine iske bare kabhi suna bhi nahi hai.

Veer : master Li ne mujhe kaha hai enroll karne ke liye tumhe nahi, to tum itna complaint kyun kar rahi ho.

Zara : acha to tumhe pata nahi hai mai kyun kar rahi hun. Ye saab tumhare liye kyun ki ham ek hi family ke hisse hai. Wese bhi uss school ka entrance 2 din baad hai to ham kya iss city mai 2 din rahenge. Aur wese bhi mai chalte chalte bahut thak gayi hun chalo na Veer kahi pe rukh jate hai.

Veer : thik hai nautanki

Yese chalte chalte Zara ko ek hotel dikhti hai jiska naam Rose hotel tha to Zara yanhi pe rehna ka kehti hai jisse Veer bhi nahi talta hai aur dono ander chale jate hai, room lene ke liye.

Aur ye dono reception ke paas jake apne liye room bhi book kar lete hai, aur unke paas baas ek hi kamra bacha tha jo ki aab Veer aur Zara ne le liya tha, wo receptionist abhi unko unka kamre ki key de hi raha tha ki piche se awaj aati hai.

Awaj : wo mera kamra hai kya tum yanha pe naye ho jo mere kamre ko unko de rahe ho. Fir wo awaj wala ladka uss receptionist ke paas pahunch ke, mujhe tumhara manager se milna hai.

Veer aur Zara uss ladke ko dekh rahe thy, uss ladke ke sath abhi 2 ladkiya bhi thy aur wo ladka dikhne mai bahut arrogant bhi lag raha tha.

Veer : buddy, haam pehle aaye hai aur ye kamara hamne book kiya hua hai.....

Ladka (Veer ke bato ko bich mai kat te huye) : to kya hua, mai hamesha uss kamre mai hi rehta hun to mera personal kamra hi hua.

Zara : to....abhi wo kamra hamara hai.

Ladka : to usse kya hota hai, fir wo ladka Zara aur Veer ke taraf dekhte huye, mujhe lagta hai ki tum dono soul masters ho. Chalo tum dono ko ye chance deta hun, aagar tum dono milke mujhe hara doge to mai yanha se chala jaunga warna tum dono yanha se chalte banna.

Zara uss ladke ki baat sunke gusse mai aage badh hi rahi thy ki Veer usse rok deta hai, itne mai uss hotel ka manager bhi wanha aajata hai.

Manager : Mr. Duke, shant ho jayiye aap.

Duke : manager, isko aap explain kese karenge.

Manager : sorry Mr. Duke ye naya staff hai jo apke bare aur uss room ke bare mai nahi janta hai. I am sorry Mr. Duke.

Fir Veer aur Zara ke taraf mud ke,

Manager : I am also sorry mister, ye room Mr. Duke ke liye reserved rehta hai, jo ki mere staff ko pata nahi tha jiske chalte wo room apko de diya hai, aap kahi aur chale jayiye.

Zara : aur aagar ham na gaye to? Kya kar lega ye, hoga kahi ka hot-shot per hamare samne nahi.

Duke : kya…..

Manager : sorry….mr. Duke, fir Veer aur Zara ke taraf dekh ke, please aap mr. Duke se maafi mang lijiye…..

Duke : apni bakwas band karo manager, jo bhi nukshan hoga tumhara wo pay kar dunga abhi yanha se niklo tum.

Manager bhi wanha se chala jata hai, aur Duke ready ho jata hai Veer aur Zara se fight karne ke liye,

Veer bhi Zara ko rok ke khud aage aajata hai ye kehke ki wo usse hara dega, aur usse acha khasa maja chakhayega.

Zara bhi maan jati hai aur baas Veer ko yanhi bolti hai ki ache se sabak sikhana isko.

Ye dono apne mai lage huye thy ki Duke ek aur baar in dono ko bolta hai,

Duke : apne mai fight karna band karo aur tum dono aasakte ho mere se fight karne ke liye.

Veer bhi smile ke sath Duke ke samne aajata hai. Aab dono bilkul ready thy ek dusre ke upar attack karne ke liye.

Awesome Update

darkoxx · Aug 11, 2021

Nice update

parkas · Aug 12, 2021

waiting for the next update..

NewWriter23 · Aug 12, 2021

Devil The Kiñg said:
Awesome Update

Sky07 said:
Superb update NewWriter23 bhai, I have read many stories on this forum and as per my experience your story is one of the best story of this forum with attractive storyline and interesting content and it is gaining momentum with each updates. Bhai I have a small request to you that please give regular updates.

darkoxx said:
Nice update

Thank you

Silentreader0 · Aug 12, 2021

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