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UPDATE 4:- The Mighty Dragon Transformation Skill



LONG is time bhut gusse mein tha, wo abhi ke abhi AK ko maarna chahta tha. LONG, JAIN, GYAN ko aaj AK ne bewkoof bana diya tha. Keval ek cheez LONG ko samajh nahi aa rahi thi ki ye useless itna smart kaise ho gaya hai.



Lekin ab kuch bhi badlne ya karne mein bhut der ho chuki thi ab to LONG bas ek hi umeed rakh sakta ki JIYA ek beautiful aur gentle ladki ho. Agar aisa hua to fir uska mood kuch hadd tak thik ho sakta hai.



Kuch time baad purple dress mein ek ladki andar chalte huye aayi, jiske piche 2 MU Family ke Guards they. Jab LONG, JAIN aur AK ne us ladki ki taraf dekha jo unki taraf hi aa rahi thi to unki face ki smile chali gayi.



Bang!



JAIN jis glass se drink kar raha tha wo uske hath de chhut ke niche gir gaya. Jo usne dekha wo uske liye bhi shocking tha. JAIN jor se khaasne laga. Jo ladki uske saamne khadi thi wo 8 feet tall thi. Aur wo apne Father ki tarah hi bhut jada mascular thi. Aur itna hi nahi wo kisi strong Man ki tarah dikh rahi thi, jiska weight kam se kam 300 pound ho.



"Mascular body hona fir bhi chal jaata hai lekin isne apne hair ko sky ki taraf kyu baandh rakha hai. Aur ye face bilkul oily hai, aur iski skin bhi kitni moti aur rough hai, aur iske Lips bhi kitne mote aur bade hai. Yukkkk!"



AK apne dimag mein hi vomit kar raha tha. Wo beshak past life mein ek Greatest Saint tha aur usne almost sab kuch dekha tha, lekin itni ugly ladki usne Kabhi nahi dekhi thi. Haa ye Saint Origin ki sabse Ugly ladki AK ke opinion mein aur iska naam jiya tha, jo sabse bada joke tha.


AK ka face bilkul red chuka tha, usko apni hasi rokne mein kaafi dikkat ho rahi thi. Lekin apne mann hi mann mein wo bhut tez has raha tha.



"LONG, This is karma."


AK mann hi mann GYAN ki tareef kar raha tha kaise usne apne saare genes apni beti ko de diye the aur uska naam bhi JIYA rakh diya tha aur uske body se match nahi ho raha tha.



JAIN "Jaldi se miss JIYA ko unki seat pe baithao"



JAIN ne apne shocking expression ko dabate huye kaha. Jo JAIN abhi tak thoda dukhi tha wo ab khus tha ki sahi hua jo is ladki shaadi karne wala AK nahi hai aur ye bhi achi baat thi ki LONG MU Family mein marriage kar raha tha iski wajah se is ladki ko Mayor Mansion mein nahi rehna hoga. Mann hi mann JAIN AK ko Thanks bol raha tha.



GYAN "hahaha, JIYA jaldi idhar aao aur apne Future Husband se milo."



JIYA jaldi se chalti huyi aayi aur LONG ke saamne khadi ho gayi, LONG ko dekhte hi JIYA ki aanke chamakne lagi kyuki LONG Fragrant Sky City ke geniuses mein ek tha aur handsome to tha hi. JIYA ne jaldi se LONG ke arm ko tightly pakad liya aur boli.



JIYA "Dear Husband, Main Mayor Mansion mein pehli baar aayi hu kya aap mujhe Mansion dikha denge."



AK ke muh se almost blood nikalne ko ho gaya tha. Usey aisa lag raha tha ki uske internal organs bhi bahar aa jaayenge 'miss JIYA' ki soft awaz sunke jo kisi Animal ke dhadane jaisi thi. JIYA ki awaz sunke AK ko apni spine mein coldness feel hone lagi thi. Lekin wo bhut jada enjoy kar raha tha is moment ko.


"Kisey pata LONG apne mann mein kya soch raha hoga, mere hisab se to wo bas soch raha hoga ki kisi bhi tarah se Death ho jaaye uski."



JAIN "Jaao LONG jaake JIYA ko Mansion dikha do."



LONG "yes Father!"



LONG ki awaz is time kaamp rahi thi, Main hall mein majood har koi yeh dekh sakta uske face bilkul red ho chuka tha lekin QI JING REALM ke 9th Level pe hone ke baad bhi JYA usey khichte huye Main hall se bahar le gayi.


AK "Father, Uncle, mujhe lagta hai humey jaldi se marriage ki date fix kar leni chahiye."



GYAN " thik hai kal ki Date main hum Marriage kar lenge."


LONG jo waha se abhi nikla hi tha ki ye sunne ke baad to uska Heart uske Muh se bahar nikalne ko ho gaya tha.



AK " Uncle aap sahi keh rahe hai aise khusi ke mauke ke liye jyada din rukna nahi chahiye. Chalo aap log baate kijiye main bhi chalta hu."



AK ki back ko dekhte huye JAIN soch mein pad gya tha ki AK kyu LONG ko Frame karna chahta hai. jAIN itna to intelligent tha ki wo AK ki baato se matter samajh gaya tha lekin usey reason pata nahi tha iske piche ka. Kyuki Dono Brothers ke bich ka relationship abhi tak bhut acha tha. Aur sabse jyada chaukane wali baat ye thi ki AK usey bilkul different person lag raha tha.



AK Mansion se nikal ke sidha apne Mansion mein aa gaya tha. AK ko pata tha ki ye badla LONG ke loye kaafi nahi hai wo to usey Jaan se maarna chahta tha aur past Life mein ek Greatest Saint hone ki wajah se AK apne kisi bhi enemy ko second Chance nahi deta tha. Jo uska enemy hai usey sirf Death hi milegi aur kuch nahi.



Lekin abhi jo sabse important kaam tha wo thi Training. Saint Origin mein jo Strong hai wo Great hai aap kahi bhi chale jaao log aapko Admire karenge chaahe aap kaise bhi ho bas strong hone chahiye. Past Life mein AK ek Great Saint tha lekin abhi wo sirf ek weakling tha jo ki sirf QI JING REALM ke 8th level pe tha.



AK apne room mein pahuch ke apne bed pe leg cross karke baith gaya.




Cultivation ke path pe sabse jada jaroori cheez thi skill. Jitna Higher Level hoga Skill utna hi aapki achievement high hogi aapki.


Apni past Life mein ek Greatest Saint hone ki wajah se AK ke paas Filhal 1000 se bhi jyada skill thi aur sabhi ke sabhi high level ki thi, 30% skill to aisi thi jisey wo HEAVENLY CORE REALM mein BREAKTHROUGH karne ke baad bhi use nahi kar sakta tha. Agar AK apne paas se sabse low level ki skill bhi nikal ke dikha de to puri Fragrant Sky City ke people us skill ke liye mar mitenge.



Saint Origin Universe mein Skill Four categories mein divide hoti hai :- Mortal ,Earth, Heaven, Saint. AUR AK ke paas abhi 5 Skill thi Jo Saint Category ki thi. Yaha tak ki Divine Continent ke Big Ancient Clans ke pass bhi Aisi Skills nahi hongi.



Lekin AK ne decide kar liya tha ki wo in 5 mein se koi bhi Skill Cultivate nahi karega, apni past life mein bhi usne in 5 Skills ki taraf dekha bhi nahi tha.


Is cheez ka ek hi reason tha "The Dragon Transformation Skill"


AK ne ye Skill apni past Life mein kisi Ancient ruins se milli thi. Ye Skill Ancient times se Belong karti hai aur almost 10000 years old hai.



AK ke hisaab se The Dragon Transformation Skill ka potential Saint Category se bhut upper hai.



Lekin is Skill ko use karne ki ek bhut hi badi condition hai. Wo ye hai ki is Skill ko beginning se Practice karna padta hai. Jab AK ko ye Skill past Life mein mill thi tab wo isko Practice nahi kar paaya tha kyuki is skill ko Practice karne ke liye usey apna Saint cultivation destroy karke QI JING REALM se start karna padta. Beshak Past Life mein AK ka Heart as a Saint kitna hi hard ho lekin apna cultivation destroy karne jitna bhi nahi tha. Uski past Life ka doosra sabse bada regret yahi tha ki wo is Skill ko Cultivate nahi kar paaya tha lekin ab baat kuch aur thi. Ab doobara reborn hone ki wajah se Uska current Realm QI JING tha aur wo is opportunity ko waste nahi hone dene wala tha.



Abhi tak AK ki QI Sea aur Mortal Core form nahi huye they to ye best time tha The Dragon Transformation Skill Cultivate karne ka.



AK ne Dragon Transformation Skill ki script ko yaad kiya aur uske single thought se saari script uske dimag mein chalne lag gayi.


The Dragon Transformation Skill bhut powerful thi. Script ke according is Skill ko practice karne ke baad aap Saint Origin ki kisi bloodline se merge ho sakte ho. Aur aisa nahi hai ki aap sirf ek bloodline se merge ho sakte ho app chahe to 10,000 bloodline se bhi merge ho sakte ho aur un bloodline ki ability bhi aapke sath merge ho jaayegi. aur bas itna soch ki AK ke face pe ek smile aa gayi thi.


Jo The Dragon Transformation Skill ko Cultivate karte hai unki DANTIAN mein Dragon mark banne lagte hai. Ek dragon mark user ke punch ki strength 10,000 Pound tak badha deta hai. Dragon marks ka maximum number 108,000 hai, isse jada Dragon Marks aap form nahi kar sakte.


Script ke According agar ek baar Dragon Mark bann gaya to wo puri life mein kabhi gayab nahi hoga. Aur agar 108,000 marks ban gaye to user apne will se Dragon mein Transform ho sakta hai wo Dragon ki puri ability ke sath.



El Dragon Mark 10,000 pound strength badhata hai agar 108,000 Dragon marks Complete ho jaate hai to aapki strength kitni hogi ye koi imagine bhi nahi kar sakta, yaha tak Saint Realm ke Warrior bhi aapke koi Match nahi honge. Ye sab soch ke hi AK ko apni body mein Cold mehsoos hone laga tha aur wo bhut jada excited ho gaya tha. Agar AK is Life mein is level pe pahuch jaata hai to wo Ek Strike mein Saint Origin Universe ko destroy kar sakta hai.



The Dragon Transformation Skill Body ko bhi bhut effective way mein refine karti hai aur end tak aate aate user ki body ki Dragon ki Body jitni Tough ho jaati hai. AK ki body mein beshak bhut saari PILLS thi lekin Un sabko refine karne ke baad bhi AK ki body abhi bhut jyada weak thi. AK abhi thoda unsure tha ki kahi uski body Dragon Transformation Skill ko sehen na kar paaye.



Lekin apni past Life mein ek Greatest Saint tha to uska will kisi mountain se bhi jada bada tha usne saare thoughts ko apne mind se nikala aur Dragon Transformation Skill ko Cultivate karne laga. Jaise hi usne Cultivation start kiya waise hi usey apni body mein Yuan Power flow hoti huyi feel hone lagi.



AK ne control apne hath mein lete huye apni body ke ander 2 region create kare, first region mein usne Yuan Energy ko clockwise direction mein flow karwaya aur second region mein usne Yuan Energy ko anti- clockwise direction mein flow karwaya.


Uske aisa karte hi uski body kisi machine ki tarah kaam karne lagi ek frightening speed aur bina pause ke.


Pong!


Dono separate region full speed se ek dusre ke sath collide ho gaye, aur aisa hote hi dono different force ki wajah se ek Whirlpool create ho gaya aur wo AK ke poori body mein failne laga.


Ughh!



Is impact ki wajah se AK ke mouth se Blood nikalne laga, sath hi uski puri body mein pain hone laga jaise wo kisi hellfire mein baitha ho. Jo uske mouth se blood nikal raha tha uska colour black tha. Ye sab impurities thi uski body ke ander ki jo Dragon Transformation Skill ki wajah se ekdum se bahar aane lagi thi.


AK "Dragon Transformation Skill sach mein bhut powerful hai abhi to ye first step hi hai aur ye hi mujhe itna pain de raha hai. Lekin ye mujhe manjoor hai effect ko dekhte huye. Meri body ki saari impurities lagbhag bahar aa gayi hai. Let's continue."



Apni past life mein Saint hone ki wajah se uska will bhut strong tha to usko ye pain sehen karne mein koi takleef nahi thi aur Saint hone ki wajah se uske paas Cultivation ka bhut jada expérience tha jo ab uske bhut kaam aa raha tha.



Dragon Transformation Skill AK ke mind mein flow ho rahi thi, aur Cultivation ki wajah se usey bhut pain ho raha tha jo uske liye kuch bhi nahi tha.



4 Hours Later!



Crack!



Ek clear Crack ki sound AK ki body se suni jaa sakti thi. Jo Whirlpool tha wo AK ki poori body mein Refine ho gaya tha aur AK QI JING REALM ke 9th Level mein Breakthrough kar gaya tha.




TO BE CONTINUED....
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UPDATE 5:- Let's Calculate Our Debt



Yaha tak ki AK ne bhi nahi soch tha ki The Dragon Transformation Skill itni strong hogi. Sirf 4 hours cultivate karne se hi wo QI JING REALM ke 9th Level pe pahuch gaya tha.



Sath hi sath uski Yuan Energy badhne ki wajah se uski body bhi strong ho gayi thi aur isliye AK ki strength aur Defense mein kaafi fark pada tha.



The Dragon Transformation Skill ko Cultivate karte time ek baar firse 2 whirlpool ek doosre ke opposite create ho gaye they. Dono whirlpool AK ki body mein flow hote huye uski DANTIAN mein enter kar gaye aur ek Red Colour ka Dragon Mark form karne lage.



Waise abhi jo Mark form hua tha wo abhi bhut fika tha ek dum bright Red hone se kaafi dur tha. AK ki single thought se Red Dragon Mark bhut jor se shake hone laga.


HAA!



AK ne jor se chillate huye hawa mein ek bhut fast punch maara, punch ka pressure itna tha ki Air mein bhi friction hone lagi thi aur fir ek dum se BOOM ke sound ke sath samne ki Wall crack ho gayi.



"Good, mere punch ki power abhi 5000 pound thi, halanki abhi first Red Dragon Mark half complete hua hai. Ek baar Red Dragon Mark complete ho jaaye to mere har punch ke pich 10,000 pound ka force hoga. QI JING REALM 9th Level ke ordinary cultivators ke punch mein 3000 pound force hota hai, aur Genius hote hai unke punch ke piche 4000 pound hota hai. Lekin The Dragon Transformation Skill se mein sirf Half Red Dragon Mark ke hote huye bhi 5000 pound ke punch throw kar sakta hu. Incredible!"




{ Writer Note:- jo bhi punches aur uske force ki baat huyi hai wo sirf ek mark ki jaise jaise mark badhte jaayenge force badhta hai jaayega.}




Ek lambi saans lete huye AK ne Cultivate karna rok Diya. Usey Cultivation ke baare mein is world mein sabse jyada Knowledge thi, aur usey ache se pata tha ki Fountain ko Strong karna kitna Important hai. Usko sab kuch step by step karna hoga bina ek dum se aage badhe. Usne abhi The Dragon Transformation Skill Cultivate karna start ki hai aur usey half Red Dragon Mark mil gaya hai aur wo is result se abhi ke liye khus hai. Kyuki Fragrant Sky City kuch bhi nahi hai.



{ SAINT ORIGIN UNIVERSE mein 5 Continent hai.
1. Northern Continent.
2. Southern Continent.
3. Western Continent.
4. Easter Continent.
5. Divine Continent.
Jisme sabse strong Divine Continent hai jisme Pichli Life mein AK Saint tha aur wo issi Continent se tha. Sabse Weak Eastern Continent hai jisme Filhal AK hai.
Eastern Continent mein 30 provine hai jisme sabse Strong Martial Saint Dynasty hai Aur Sabse weak QI Province hai jisme Filhal AK hai.
QI Province ke baare mein aage detail mil jaayegi Proper.

QI Province ka outer part hai jaha QI Province ke Log bhi dhyan nahi dete waha pe 28 City hai. Isme sabse Strong hai Red City aur sabse Weak hai Fragrant Sky City jisme filhal AK hai. }



Ek warrior ko Cultivate karne ke Liye PILLS, POTIONS, ELIXIRS ki jaroorat padti hai. The Dragon Transformation Skill ko practice karne ki liye ko Sabse jada jaroorat padegi kyuki Ye skill kisi bhi Bloodline kisi bhi Soul ko Absorb kar sakti hai. World Mein bhut saare Demon Beast hai, jinme se kaafi kam Rare Bloodline ke hote hai aur kuch to Ancient Time ke Rare Beast bhi hote hai, agar kisi rare Bloodline ke Demon Beast ki Soul ko Absorb karta hai to The Dragon Transformation Skill ki Wajah se usey use Beast ki Ability bhi millegi.



"Main 100 years se Dead tha is time mein bhut kuch badal gaya hoga. Agar meri Memory sahi hai to Fragrant Sky City Sabse small City hai QI Province ki, pata nahi Divine Continent yaha se kitni dur hoga. Past life mein The GREATEST SAINT hone ki wajah se maine kabhi is Small Eastern Continent pe dhyan nahi diya tha kyuki Meri aankho mein ye kuch bhi nahi tha."



AK apne Mansion se Nikal ke apne Father ke Mansion mein aa gaya aur sidha unke Room mein bani Library mein ghus gaya. Yaha pe kisi ko aane ki izzazt nahi thi yaha tak ki LONG bhi bina permission ke enter nahi kar sakta tha lekin AK ki baat alag thi wo Mayor ka eklauta beta tha to wo pure Mayor Mansion mein kabhi bhi kahi bhi jaa sakta tha.



AK ne waha pe rakhi Martial Arts Skill ki books ko dekha bhi nahi kyuki usey pata is universe ki sabse small city mein Trash hi millega. Isliye wo sidha ek book ki taraf badh gaya jiska naam tha "History of Saint Origin"




Is Book mein saare History events se they Pure Saint Origin ke aur saari geographical condition.
AK ne jaisa hi first Chapter khola uske Face pe smile aa gayi. kyuki jo first Chapter tha wo Ek Greatest Saint ke baare mein tha jisne Apni Big Sword ki Ek Strike mein Heaven ko kaatte huye Immortal Realm ke Gate khol diye they 100 years pehle. Unfortunately wo Greatest Saint us din usi SAINT CLIFF pe khatam ho gaya.




100 year pehle AK ne apni Saint Blood ki last drop ko Use karte huye Immortal Realm ke gate khol diye aur wo iske backlash se wahi khatam ho gaya tha. Uske baad kya hua usey kuch nahi pata. Usne aisa isliye kiya tha kyuki Saint Origin Universe mein koi bhi person Saint Realm ke aage Cultivate nahi kar paata lekin AK ko pata tha ki Saint Realm ke baad bhi Realm hai jo is Universe mein possible nahi hai, isliye usne apni saari strenght ko use karke doosre Universe ka Gate khol diya tha Jiska naam hai Immortal Origin Universe ya Immortal Realm jisme Immortals rehte hai.



History ke according us event ke baad bhut kuch badal gaya tha. Jab AK ne Immortal Realm ke Gate khole to Jo baaki ke Saint they jo AK ko aisa karte dekh rahe they wo AK ki Death ke baad Gate se Us Realm mein enter kar gaye. Aur aisa hone se is Universe mein ek bhi Saint nahi bacha aur Saints ki protection hatne ke baad is Universe mein. Monsters, Beasts, Devils, Demon har jagah badh gaye they. Aur jo Clan Saint ki protection aur management they unme War start ho gayi thi aur uski Wajah se kayi Ancient Clan completely Wipe Out ho gaye they Aur New Clan ban gaye they.



Ek Smile ke Sath AK ne Book band kar di Usey pata tha wo is life mein ek baar firse Divine Continent mein apne kadam rakhega aur Fir Apne past Records ko todte huye Immortal Realm mein chala jaayega aur aisa hone ke liye abhi bhut lamba time tha kyuki abhi wo ek weakling tha aur uski age bhi abhi 16 years hi thi, uske paas puri life thi suru se start karne mein. AK ki life ka sabse bada regret tha ki wo immortal Realm mein enter nahi kar paya.



Library se nikalne ke Time Raat ho chuki aur AK apne Mansion ki Opposite direction mein jaa raha tha kyuki usey kisi se milna tha.



AK ko pata tha ki LONG na to Jiya se Shaadi karega aur na hi MU Family mein. AK confident tha kyuki wo bhi ek Man tha Long ki tarah. Ye bhut simple tha Jiya se shaadi karne se acha LONG suicide kar lega.



Kal Wedding Ceremony hai aur agar AK ka guess correct hai to LONG aaj ki raat hi usko maarne aayega.



LONG ke jaisa person jiska Hard Work destroy ho gaya ho wo itni asaani se jaane nahi dega. Wo AK se nafrat karta tha, sirf AK se hi nahi balki Mayor Mansion ke har member se Nafrat karta tha. Uske Talent ko dekhke wo Is City ko Chod bhi dega to wo ek achi life ji sakta tha.


Lekin AK apne kisi bhi enemy ko bhaagne ka, surrender ka aur maaf karne ka mauka nahi deta. Kyuki usey pata hai baad wo hi enemy strength gain karke wapis Revenge lene aa sakta hai. Aur jis Path pe AK jaane wala hai uspe uske Countless enemy honge aur wo ek ko bhi jinda chodne ka risk nahi lega.




LONG ne is time ek black outfit pehna hua tha aur moon ki taraf dekh raha tha uski eyes bilkul snake jaisi lag rahi thi jo strike karne ke liye kabhi bhi taiyar ho.



"AK tumne mere saare plan waste kar diye, aaj tumhe maarke yaha se nikal jaaunga aur strong hone ke baad is Mayor ko bhi maar dunga aur MU FAMILY ko bhi destroy kar dunga."



LONG ne apni fist ko tight karte huye ye baat sochi. Lekin koi aur tha jo usey itni asani se nahi jaane dega.



AK "Hey Brother, apne aisi dress kyu pehen rakhi hai jaise aap kahi bahar jaane wale ho. Kal aapki wedding Ceremony hai aapko rest lena chahiye."



Jaise hi LONG ki nazar AK pe padi wo ek dum gusse mein aa gaya uska killing intent bhi nikalne laga tha uski body se.



LONG "AK tumne aaj mujhe kyu fasaya."



LONG ne ye baat ghuraate huye boli. Yard ke bahar ek aur Aadmi tha jo in dono ki baate sun raha tha. Wo aur koi nahi balki JAIN tha jo LONG se baat karne aaya tha lekin inki baate sunke wahi ruk gaya aur apni presence hide kar li.



AK "Aapko kyu fasaunga main? Mujhe to laga MU Family mein shaadi karna aapka sapna tha. Jiya ki body to dekho mujhe pata hai future mein aapko kamane ki jaroorat nahi padegi. Aapko to mujhe Thanks kehna chahiye."




LONG "Enough, us ladki ka mere samne naam mat lo, tumne kal bas mujhe replace hone ke liye kaha tha MU FAMILY mein marriage ki baat kaha se aa gayi thi. AK maine tumse abhi tak pyaar hi kiya hai agar tum mujhe bhagana chahte ho to saaf saaf bata do ye gande method use karna chod do."



LONG ki aankho mein AK ke liye Hatred chupaye nahi chup rahi thi.



AK "mujhse pyaar karte ho, chalo tumhe expose karte aur apna score settle karte hai."



AK ne apne Father ko pehle hi sense kar liya tha bahar jo ki LONG nahi kar paaya tha kyuki uski sense AK se bhut weak hai ya ye kahu AK ki senses kaafi jada strong hai. AK ne apna attitude badalte huye LONG ko expose karne ki sochi taaki wo yaha se bhaag na paaye aur usko opportunity bhi mil jaaye LONG ko maarne ki.



AK "mujhe ye batao tumne hi Yuan aur Shuang ko mujhe deserted area mein le jaane ke liye aur mujhe maarke mera blood pine ke liye kaha tha?
Mere marne ke baad tum hi ho jo legally JIANG Family ko Heir ban jaoge. Isi liye tum mujhse pyaar se paish aate they? Kya maine kuch galat kaha My Dear Brother."



AK ne ek Cruel look ke sath LONG ko dekhte huye ye baat kahi. Wahi JAIN shock ho gaye they to jo AK ne kaha usey sunkar lekin wo fir bhi bahar hi khade rahe kyuki wo aur Sunna chahte they...




TO BE CONTINUED....
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UPDATE 6:- INSULTING



LONG ab puri baat samajh gaya tha ki AK usey kyu fasana chahta hai, lekin usey ye samajh nahi aa raha tha ki ye useless fool itna Clever kaise ho gaya hai.



AK "Yong aur Shuang dono hamari Family ke servent they unme itni himmat nahi thi ki wo akele hi Mayor ke son ko kidnap kar sake aur poor hone ki wajah se wo kahi se bhi CLEANSING PILL nahi la sakte they. LONG kyuki tum MU Family ki daughter se marriage karna chahte they to main to wo hi karwa raha hu, lekin Jiya ko dekhke to mujhe bhi ab tumhare liye khusi ho rahi hai. Agar tum chup-chap MU Family mein Marriage kar lete ho to main kisi ko ye nahi bataunga ki tumne mujhe maarne ki kosis ki hai. Tumhari ye halat dekhna tumhe maarne se jyada behtar hai. Lekin kitni buri baat hai ki tum yaha se bhagna chahte ho jo main hone nahi dunga."




Sirf LONG ne hi AK ke andar ye change mehsoos nahi kiye they bahar khade JAIN ko bhi surprise ho raha tha, usey aisa lag raha tha jaise wo pehli baar AK se mil raha ho. JAIN ne apne sapne mein bhi nahi socha tha ki AK itna Smart hoga aur aise plan bhi bana sakega.




LONG" HAHAH, AK mujhe tumhe aise dekhke sach mein surprise hua hu, maine kabhi nahi socha tha ki tum itne smart hoge, lekin tumne fir bhi ek stupid mistake kar di."



LONG ne apna apna killing intent release karte huye bola.



AK "Stupid mistake, kaisi stupid mistake?"



AK apne kandhe hillate huye bola.



LONG "Tum sach mein stupid ho, tumhe pata tha main aaj yaha se bhagne wala hu lekin fir bhi tum yaha akele aa gaye. Tum QI JING REALM ke 1st level pe hone ke baad bhut jaldi marna chahte ho. Ab main yaha se jaa hi raha hu to tumhe maarke hi jaaunga aur uske baad QI Province ke kisi big Sect ko join karne ke baad waapis aake us Old Man ko bhi maar dunga."



LONG ne AK ko nicha dikhate huye kaha. Uske dimag mein AK kisi Ant se kam nahi tha jisey wo kabhi masal sakta hai.



JAIN "Shit"



JAIN ne Apne mann mein ye bolte huye abhi andar enter karne ki sochi lekin wo AK ke word sun ke wahi ruk gaya.



AK "Tum mujhe nahi maar sakte."



LONG "Really, tum mere yard mein khade ho aur sirf QI JING REALM ke 1st level pe ho, Agar JAIN bhi yaha hota to wo bhi tumhe nahi bacha sakta."



LONG ne jor se haste huye ye baat kahi, usey AK ko maarne mein pura confidence tha.



AK "I am sorry, lekin mein QI JING Realm ke 1st nahi 9th level pe hu."



AK ne ye bolte huye apni QI release kar di. Uski Body se itni jyada Force se Yuan Power release huyi ki usne LONG ko bhi 3 step piche hone pe majboor kar diya.



"What"



LONG kaafi shock ho gaya tha, wo AK ko aise dekh raha tha jaise wo koi ghost ho. Usne kabhi apne dream mein bhi ye nahi socha tha.



Bahar khada JAIN bhi kaafi shock ho gaya tha AK ki is transformation ko dekhke, lekin ek Father hone ki wajah se wo bhut jayda khus bhi they.



"Thank God, mera beta koi useless scumbag nahi hai. Lekin Damm it ye meri naak ke niche ye sab chuppa kaise raha tha?"




JAIN ne khus hote huye khud se hi bola. Useless uske heart mein ek bhut bada wound tha. Lekin ab AK ne bilkul opposite QI JING REALM ke 9th level mein Breakthrough karke wo bhi sirf 15 ki Age mein ye proof de diya tha ki wo ek Genius hai, aisa abhi tak Fragrant Sky City mein kisi ne nahi kiya tha. LONG bhi is level pe 18 ki Age mein pahucha tha. Aur AK jis tarah se wo LONG ko handle kar raha hai aise koi bhi 15 ki Age ka ladka nahi kar sakta.




LONG "Impossible, aisa nahi ho sakta, tum 3 din pehle sirf 1st Level pe they. Ye mat kehna ki tum abhi tak apni true strength hide karke rakhe huye they. Agar aisa hai bhi to 9th level ka person itni jyada yuan power nahi rakhta."




AK "Is world mein aisi bhut si things hai jinhe tum bilkul nahi samajh sakte. LONG tumhara ek bhut acha future ho sakta tha lekin tumne sab barbaad kar diya. Let's end this."




Itna bolte hi AK lighting speed se move hua aur ek dum se LONG ke samne aa gaya, wo bilkul bhi risk nahi lena chahta tha kyuki usne abhi tak ek bhi Combat Skill practice nahi ki thi. AK ne LONG ke saamne aate hi lighting speed se apne right hand mein apni Yuan Energy mein flow karwake usey kisi sword ki tarah sharp kar diya aur usi speed se right hand kisi sword ki tarah LONG ki neck ki taraf move ho gaya. AK ki speed itni fast tak thi ki LONG ko ek finger move karne ka bhi time nahi tha.



"Stop"




JAIN jor se chillate huye door ko tod ke andar enter ho gaya.



Snap!



Unfortunately, wo bhi AK ki movements se slow tha jab tak wo AK ko rokta tab tak AK ke right hand ne kisi sword ki tarah LONG ka head uski bodi se alag kar diya tha. LONG ki aankhe marne ke baad bhi shock mein thi aur uski body bhi kuch second tak wahi khadi rahi aur fir ekdum se nich gir gayi. Blood kisi fountain ki Tarah nikal raha tha.



JAIN "AK tumne usey kyu maar diya?"



Dead body ko dekhte huye JAIN shock mein tha, AK ne same level pe hone ke bawjood LONG ko ek strike mein khatam kar diya tha wo bhi bina kisi skill ko use kiye.



AK "Father kya aap iske marne se khus nahi ho. Agar main abhi isey nahi maarta to ye baad mein badi threat banke revenge lene aa jaata. Main apne enemy ko koi chance nahi deta."




JAIN "maine isko adopt karke galti kardi. Isne tumhe maarne ki kosis ki to of course tum usey maar sakte ho. Lekin ab ye mar gaya hai to MU Family mein Marriage kon karega. Hamari families ke relations pehle hi kharab they ab aur ho jaayenge."



AK "Father aap itne bhi pagal mat bano aap ko bhi pata hai ek Mountain mein 2 tiger nahi reh sakte.
Aisa koi raasta nahi hai jisse hamari Family aur MU Family ek sath reh sake aur wo MU Family ka chief humey kabhi bhi khud ke barabar nahi samjhega. Usne aaj hamari din mein insult ki hai. Hum unke sath acha kyu kare?



"Insult ki hai!"



JAIN ne confuse hote huye kaha.



AK "Father aap us GYAN ke innocent face se pagal mat bano wo real mein old fox hai. Yaha tak ki aaj Jiya ka aana bhi aaj hamari insult hai. Hamari Family is City ki sabse Strong Family hai aur agar humne us Jiya se Marriage kar li to hum sabke samne laughing stock ban jaayenge. Humari family ki reputation bhi kam ho jaayegi aur agar LONG MU Family mein marriage kar leta to aur bhi bura hota."


AK ne bolna jaari raka.



AK "Wo ugly Girl sirf hamari insult karne ke liye hi laayi gayi thi, mujhe to yakeen hai wo GYAN ki daughter bhi nahi hai. MU Family ek reputed Family hai hamari tarah agar GYAN ki koi Ugly daughter hoti to ab tak puri City mein baat fail gayi hoti. Is baat se fark nahi padta ko Jiya marriage karke yaha aaye ya LONG marriage karke MU Family mein jaaye, insult to hamari hi hoti."



Ab JAIN ko bhi sab kuch samajh mein aa raha tha, wo to bas dono Families ke relations ko thik karna chahta tha, lekin kam Knowledge hone ke wajah se wo khud ki hi Insult karwa leta.



Ek Mountain pe 2 Tiger kabhi bhi ek sath rule nahi kar sakte isi tarah JIANG Family aur MU Family bhi ek sath nahi reh sakti.



JAIN "AK tum itna Clever kab se ho gaye."


AK "Father mein kabhi stupid nahi tha."


JAIN "Aur tum ne suddenly 9th Level mein Breakthrough kaise kar liya."



JAIN ne shock hote huye pucha, is baat pe AK ko bhi Smile aa Gayi usey pata tha ye Question to uthega isliye usne pehle se hi answer ready Kar rakha tha.



AK "Father jab un dono Guards ne 3 din pehle mujhe maarne ki kosis ki thi tab waha se guzarte huye ek Great Warrior ne mujhe bacha liya. Usne undono ko maar diya aur unhone meri help karte huye meri body ke andar ki PILLS ko refine kiya aur mujhe Breakthrough karne mein bhi madad ki."



JAIN " kon tha wo Warrior? Lekin dukh ki baat hai main unse mil nahi paaya."



JAIN jor jor se hasne laga, uske liye isse badi khusi ki baat kya hogi ki Uska Beta ek Genius hai.



AK "Father humey MU Family ke sath relationship ache karne ki koi jaroorat nahi hai, Mere opinion mein, City mein ek power hi reh sakti hai. Agar GYAN khelna chahta hai to hum bhi khelenge."



AK ne ek evil smile ke sath kaha.



JAIN "Tumne thik kaha humey unke sath War start kar deni Chahiye nahi to City ke People sochenge ki main dar gaya. Lekin kal ki wedding Ceremony ke baare mein kya kare?"



AK "Jab se AK publicaly humare Mansion mein aayi hai to humari reputation affect ho chuki hai. Agar wo ye chahte hai to hum Unki reputation bilkul hi khatam kar denge Fragrant Sky City mein."



JAIN "Tumhara plan kya hai?"



AK "Simple kal wo LONG ko lene aayenge marriage ke liye hum unhe LONG hi denge lekin ek Casket mein."



AK ke liye Friend Friend tha aur enemy enemy. Wo kabhi bhi apni enemies ke sath reh nahi paaya tha, jo uska enemy bana unme se ek ka bhi end acha nahi hua tha. Is life mein LONG first tha aur MU Family second. MU Family ko jad se khatam karke Fragrant Sky City mein wo bas apni Family ko Top mein dekhna chahta tha taaki uske yaha se jaane ke baad yaha uski Family ko koi dikkat na ho.




******



The Next Day,



Aaj ka din kal ke din se bhi jyada lively tha, aaj to MU Family se leke JIANG Family ke Mansion tak ka road Decorate kara gaya tha. AK aur JAIN ko chodke kisi ko nahi pata tha ki LONG ab mar chuka hai.



Fragrant Sky City ki street pe mascular GYAN horse pe ride karte huye aa raha tha uske piche MU FAMILY ke kayi Young Men they jinke Face pe ek alag hi arrogant look tha, ek parade unke piche aa rahi thi jiske End mein ek sedan Chair thi jisey 8 men carry kar rahe they. Yeh parade sidha Mayor Mansion ki taraf badh rahi thi raaste mein har ek person ko attract karte huye.



"Oh my god, ye koi woman hai ya God ke taraf se koi majak."



"Uggg, mujhe vomit karne do, ye women sky ko bhi rok sakti hai aur ghost ko bhi dara sakti hai apne ugly face se. Maine suna hai Mayor ka elder son ek handsome aur genius man hai. Kya wo is marriage ke Baad jinda reh paayega."



" Mayor apne adopted son ko ek fire pit mein daal rahe hai."



City ke sabhi person aapas mein baate kar rahe they aur joke bana rahe they. Jaisa ki AK ne socha tha MU Family puri City ke saamne Mayor ki insult karna Chahti hai. Itni lambi parade dekh ke sab ko pata lag gaya tha ko MU Family ek Ugly Girl ko JIANG Family mein marriage karwa rahi hai aur ye baat kaafi thi Mayor ka laughing Stock banne ke liye.




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UPDATE 7:- Pay Me For The Casket




Mayor Mansion ke bahar bhut jada bhid jama ho gayi thi. Mayor Mansion ke bahar AK aur JAIN khade hoke unki aur aati huyi lambi parade kodekh rahe they, aisa dekhte huye un dono ke face pe ek cruel smile aa gayi.



AK "Aapne dekha Father, GYAN itni simple si wedding ke liye itni lambi parade leke aa raha hai, GYAN sirf hamari insult hi nahi humey dabana bhi chahta hai."




JAIN "hahaha, dekhte hai last mein kon laughing stock banta hai."



GYAN "hahaha, Brother JAIN, main LONG ko lene aaya hu kya wo taiyar hai?"



GYAN ne jor se chillate huye kaha taaki puri Crowd ko ke ye baat sun jaaye.



JAIN "Of course, mera beta ready hai, AK jao aur apne elder brother ko leke aao."



JAIN ne ek smile ke sath jawab diya.
GYAN ne ek silk Red Robe pehen rakha tha wahi Jiya ne ek phoenix cronot naam ki dress pehen rakhi thi aur wo bhut jada sharma rahi thi. Jadatar log to uske face ko dekh ke Vomit karne lage they aur doobara dekhne ki to himmat hi nahi ho rahi thi.



"Step Aside"




Kuch moments ke baad ek loud shout sunayi di jo ki AK ki thi aur apne shoulder pe bada sa Casket leke aa raha tha.




Bang!




AK ne wo Casket aise hi Door se bahar fek diya jaise usme kuch bhi special na ho. Casket ka front Parade ki taraf tha aur uspe likha tha.



"Death"




Puri crowd Casket ko hi dekh rahi thi aur bilkul silent ho gayi thi.




'ye log kya kar rahe hai?, Wedding mein Casket laana ek buri baat hai, Mayor kya soch rahe hai?'



GYAN ke expression ek dum se change ho gaye aur JAIN se pucha.



GYAN "Brother JAIN iska kya matlab hai.




AK "I am sorry, mere elder brother kal ek bimari ke chalte maare gaye ab miss Jiya mere brother ki corpse se ho marriage kar sakti hai. Ye yaha pe present ho isliye maine ye mehnga Casket banwaya hai aur tension ki baat nahi hai isne Casket mein wedding dress hi pehen rakhi hai."



AK ne apni voice mein QI energy mix karte huye bola tak har ek person ko ye baat suney.




Crowd mein ek dum se jor jor se baate hone lagi thi unhone pehle kabhi bhi aisa nahi dekha tha. MU FAMILY yaha pe ladke ko lene aayi thi lekin unka welcome uski Dead Body ke sath hua tha. Isse koi fark nahi padta ko LONG jinda hai ya mar gaya, kyuki ye act sidha sidha MU Family ki insult kar raha tha. Specially jab MU Family itni badi parade ke sath aayi ho aur unhe mila sirf ek Casket, unki reputation ek dum se niche gir gayi thi.




GYAN "JAIN, ye kya tum koi majak kar rahe ho?"



GYAN se ab apna gussa control nahi ho raha tha




AK "Uncle GYAN tumhe ye kyu lag raha hai ki hum majak kar rahe hai? Tum yaha ladke ko lene aaye aapne ye to bataya hi nahi ki Jinda chahiye ya mara hua."




Paas mein khade logo ko lag raha tha jaise abhi unke mouth se blood bahar aa jaayega, ye kis type ki explanation thi.



GYAN "JAIN tum aur tumhara beta bakwas mat karo. LONG QI JING REALM ke 9th level ka warrior hai aur wo kal alive aur ek dum thik tha. Aise kaise mar gya?"




AK "Agar tumhe vishwas nahi hai to khud hi ye Casket khol ke dekh lo. After all wo tumhare hi Family ka member hai ab."



AK ne Friendly tone mein GYAN se kaha. JAIN AK ke bagal mein silent khada tha aur sab kuch AK ko handle karne de raha tha. JAIN AK se kaafi khus tha kyuki wo GYAN jaise person se ek dum Normal aur Calm tone mein baat kar raha tha aur usse Argue bhi kar raha tha jo koi Normal 16 saal ka ladka Nahi kar sakta. AK ko pata tha ki GYAN uspe attack nahi kar sakta kyuki JAIN aur GYAN dono hi QI HAI Realm ke peak par they aur dono ki strength same thi.



"Fuck, hum yaha pe ladka lene aaye they aur Mayor humey ek Casket de raha hai, ye MU Family ki insult hai."




MU FAMILY ke ek Young man ne jor chillate huye kaha.



AK "hahhaaha, bilkul sahi kaha mere Friend, Lekin MU Family thi jisne pehle humari insult ki hai. Sab log dhyan se dekho is Jiya ke Face ko, kyu MU Family aise Sincerity dikhati hai humari Family ko? Main yaha sabhi men se puchta hu agar mein tumhe chance du is Jiya se Marriage karne ka wo bhi free mein to kya tum log insulted nahi howoge. Aur jo isse marriage karna chahte hai wo aage aaye."



AK ne pehle jor se hasa fir ye baat boli aur Crowd ke saamne puri situation clear kar di uske paas koi reason nahi tha apne enemies ko respect dene ka.



Ye baat sunne ke baad waha khade har aadmi ka face green ho gaya tha.


'Shit, main khud suicide kar lunga is ladki se marriage karne se pehle. MU Family itni badi Family hai aur unhone itni ugly Girl select ki hai marriage ke liye. Ye clearly ek insult thi Mayor Family ke liye.'



Ye baat kisi ne Crowd mein boli.



AK "Aur mujhe to doubt hai ki ye Ugly Girl tumhari daughter hai bhi ya nahi?"



AK ne ek Cruel smile ke sath kaha.


GYAN "Aaj se MU Family aur JIANG Family enemies hai."



GYAN ek dum gusse se ubal raha tha wo ek dum differently AK ko dekh raha tha. GYAN ek smart person tha to usey ab samajh aa raha tha ki suru se hi wo AK ke plan mein fas chuka tha AK ne LONG ka use karke usey yaha parade laane pe majboor kar diya taaki wo inki insult kar sake.



AK "Good, mujhe koi fark nahi padta hum enemy hai ya nahi bas is Casket aur mere brother ko apne sath le jaana. Aur mujhe is Casket ka price dena mat bhulna ye bhut mehnga hai."



JIANG Family ke sabhi member apne Young Master ki performance dekh ke ek dum surprise they. Unhe aisa lag raha tha jaise ye koi stranger ho. Jis useless AK ko wo jaante they usme kabhi itne guts nahi they ki wo GYAN ke saamne aise baat kar sake. Waise Master LONG kaise marr gaye? Lekin is baat se koi fark nahi padta kyuki Mayor waise bhi AK ko hi Pyar karta hai.




'Shameless, despicable, talented'



JIANG Family ke young Master ne MU Family ki reputation ko mitti mein mila diya tha. Jo lambi Parade MU Family leke aayi thi wohi abhi sabse bada laughing stock thi puri Fragrant Sky City ki.



GYAN "Good, Very Good, JAIN tum aur tumhara beta thoda sa wait karo thode hi time tum dono is City mein ruk nahi paaoge. Let's go."


GYAN abhi bhut gusse mein tha, wo ek wise man hai aur aaj ek 16 saal ke bache ne uski réputation kharab kar di thi. Baat sirf réputation ki hi nahi thi uski insult bhi huyi thi puri City ke saamne.



Horse ko kick karte huye GYAN waha se nikal gaya ab wo yaha ek minute bhi rukna nahi chahta tha.



"AK ek true man kabhi bhi aise method use nahi karta. Agar tumme himmat hai akele fight karne ki to main Suraj tumhe itna pitunga ki tumhare Father bhi nahi pehchan paayenge."



Ek young ladke ne apne horse se niche utarte huye AK se kaha. Suraj MU Family ka ek talented young man tha, halanki GYAN yaha se chala gaya tha lekin wo AK ko itni asani se jaane nahi dena chahta tha. Unke paas khone ko kuch bacha hi nahi tha agar wo ab fight karke AK ko hara deta hai to kam se kam kuch to honor wapas aayega ye dikhake ki MU Family ke Geniuses JIANG Family ke Geniuses se better hai.




"That's right, AK kya tumhare andar himmat hai challenge accept karne ki."



MU Family ke doosre young man ne chillake kaha uske face pe arrogance saaf dikh rahi thi. Sabki nazaro mein AK ek useless Fool tha, beshak usne MU Family ki insult ki ho lekin MU Family ka koi bhi Genius asani se hara sakta tha aur maar bhi sakta tha.




AK "All right, tum mujhe fight karna chahte ho to main tumhara challenge accept kar lunga. Lekin main bina kisi Bet ke fight nahi karne wala."



AK ne smile karte huye kaha. Yaha tak ki JAIN bhi jor se has raha tha, uske alawa kisi ko bhi AK ki real strength nahi pata thi. LONG jo ki 9th level pe tha wo bhi AK ka koi match nahi tha. Aur Suraj to sirf 8th Level pe hi tha.



Suraj "Thik hai batao tum kya Bet lagana chahte ho?"



Suraj ek dum khus ho gaya tha ye sunke ki AK uska Challenge accept kar raha hai.



AK "Hum log is Casket pe Bet lagayenge. Agar main harta hu to ye Casket Mayor Mansion ke front door pe 3 din tak latka rahega. Aur agar tum haare to tum is Casket ko us Sedan Chair pe rakh ke le jaaoge aur apne Front door pe 3 din ke liye latka doge. Agar aisa nahi kiya to MU Family ke sabhi members bastard hai."



AK ne jaanbujh kar jor se chilla ke kaha taaki sab sun sake. Ab Suraj fas chuka tha aur wo Bet ko cancel bhi nahi kar sakta tha kyuki Puri City ne sun liya tha. Agar wo haarke Casket leke jaate hai to wo aur bhi jada laughing stock ban jaayenge aur agar Bet accept nahi karte hai to aur insult hogi inki aur wo bastard kehlayenge. Fark nahi padta result kya ho insult MU Family ki honi thi.




Suraj "Deal"



Suraj ne bina hesitation ke answer de diya jaise AK uske saamne koi Ant ho aur wo ye Bet jeet hi jaayega. Isliye usey Bet se koi matlab nahi tha.



Is event ko dekhte huye Crowd mein ek baar firse shor hone laga tha. Unhe laga tha Gyan ke jaate hi maamla khatam ho jaayega lekin yaha dono Families ke young man aapas mein Fight karne ko ready they aur inki Bet inki Family ki reputation thi. Lekin logo ki attention AK pe thi ki ye Useless Fool Suraj joki 8th level pe hai usse kaise Fight karega.




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Ek evil smile ke sath Suraj AK ke saamne aake khada hogya.



AK "Kya tum taiyar ho Suraj? Agar nahi to tumhe ek aur mauka deta hu main."



Suraj "Tum majak kar rahe ho kya? Tum jaise ke sath fight karne ke liye mujhe prepare hone ki jaroorat nahi."




SLAP!




Jaise hi Suraj ne bolna band kiya waise sabhi ko ek loud sound sunayi diya. Crowd ne bas AK ko apni jagah se disappear hote dekha aur fir Suraj ko slap karte huye. Ek slap se hi Suraj niche gir gaya.



Silence! Ek dum Silence! Crowd ne pehle Suraj ko dekha jisse khada nahi hoya jaa raha tha aur fir unhone shocking expression se AK ko dekha.




"Fuck! Kisne kaha tha ye ki Young Master QI JING Realm ke 1st level ka useless fool hai. Young Master ke single slap se hi ye Suraj niche gir gaya jisse khada bhi nahi hoya jaa raha. Kon kehta hai Young Master useless hai?"



"Awesome, kya AK abhi tak apni true strength hide karke rakhe huye tha."



"Kya ye hamare Young Master hai? Ye ek dum different person lag rahe hai."



Puri Crowd aur JIANG Family ke Guards mein is tarah ki baaate hone lagi thi.


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Suraj "Impossible, aise nahi ho sakta? Tumne mujhe kaise haraya?"



Jisey sabse jyada shock laga tha wo Suraj tha, jo abhi bhi ground pe leta hua tha aur sir bhaari ho raha tha. AK ke ek Slap ne usey weak bana diya tha uske body ke andar ki Yuan Power ek dum mess ban chuki thi. Uske paas hilne tak ki strength nahi thi.



2 Young man jaldi se aaye aur unhone Suraj ko sahara deke uthaya, in dono ke hi face pe dare huye expression they.



Bet ko yaad karke to Suraj ko marne ka mann kar raha tha agar wo bina Bet ke ladta to uski reputation down hoti lekin Bet ki wajah se puri Family ki insult ho jaayegi.




AK "Chang"


Chang piche se bhaagta hua aaya aur AK ke saamne sir jhuka ke bola.



Chang " young Master aapki kya wish hai?"



Jabse AK ne Chang ko 10 Gold coins diye hai tabse Chang ko lagta hai ki AK bhut kind hearted hai.



AK "tum is Casket ko MU Family ki Sedan Chair pe rakhne mein meri madad karo. Fir inka picha karke dekho ki ye Casket leke jaate hai ya nahi agar nahi leke jaate to aaj se MU Family ke members bastards ke naam se jaane jaayenge."



AK ne jor se chillate huye kaha.



Blergh!



Suraj ko to ye sunte hi khun ki Vomit ho gayi aur wahi behosh ho gaya. Suraj is time badi dikkat mein tha agar wo Casket leke wapis jaata hai to GYAN uski body se uski Skin alag kar dega. Aur agar nahi leke jaata hai to City ke sabhi log MU Family ko bastard kahenge. Chahe wo kuch bhi kare lekin GYAN usko Jinda nahi chodega.




Chang "Yes, Young Master."



Chang ko fark nahi padta tha kisi se bhi usko to bas apne Young Master ko khus karna tha. Usne soch liya tha aaj ke baad wo AK ka har ek order follow karega bina refuse kiye.



Haaa!



Ek loud shout ke sath Chang ne wo bhaari Casket apne Shoulder pe rakh liya. QI JING Realm ke 6th level pe hone se ek Bhaari Casket uthana uske liye easy tha.


Bina kuch kahe aur sune Chang ne wo Casket Jiya jaha baithi thi uske bagal mein rakh diya. Jiya jor se ro rahi thi Apne husband ka Casket dekh ke jo usey aur bhi jyada ugly bana raha tha.



AK" Suraj tum log jis kaam ke liye aaye they ab wo pura hua, isliye jaldi se yaha se niklo aur wedding Ceremony ko aage badhao. Aaj se JIANG Family ki kisi bhi Property pe MU Family ka koi bhi member welcome nahi hai. Aur tum jo mujhse haar gaye ho, aaj ke baad mujhe apna face mat dikhana, agar kabhi dikha to tumhe wahi pitna suru kardunga aur itna pitunga ki tumhari Mother bhi tumhara Face nahi pehchaan paayegi. Now, Get Lost!"




Finally, MU Family ki parade jaha se aayi thi usi taraf wapis Chali gayi wo bhi sirf ek Casket ke sath. Jitni khusi se ye log aaye they. Usse jyada dukh mein ye log wapis jaa rahe they.




Rumors aur discussion puri Fragrant Sky City mein suney jaa sakte they. Jo do Families ke bich mein Conflict tha ab wo another level pe pahuch chuka tha. Sabko pata tha ab Fragrant Sky City ke peaceful din jaane waale hai aur ye jab tak waapis nahi aayenge jab tak ek Family jeet nahi jaati.



Jabse JIANG Family aur MU Family ke relationship kharab huye they us din se hi JAIN ek dum busy ho gaya tha. JAIN Family ke paas bhut saari properties thi jinme Mansions, Elixir shop, Commerce Chamber aur bhut si chize aati thi. Aur inme se jyadatar properties ko LONG sambhalta tha. Ab LONG to marr chuka tha isliye sab kuch JAIN ko akele hi sambhalana pad Raha tha.



AK us incident ke baad apne Mansion se bahar na aane ka faisla kiya tha. AK doosre logo se jyada aage ki sochta tha, uske paas ek simple tarika tha apne enemies ko harane ka aur wo thi Strength. Ye aisa world hai jaha pe Jo Strong hai uski sab respect karenge aur sabse jyada Strong hai usko log follow karenge chahe wo galat ho ya sahi.



Har ek single Warrior ke liye Cultivation talent aur Combat talent bhut jaroori hai. AK ne The Dragon Transformation Skill ko Cultivate karna start Kar diya tha jo usko doosro se jyada strength deti thi. Lekin Cultivation Skill sirf Foundation hoti hai aur ek Great Warrior banne ke liye usko Bhut achi Combat Skills ki jaroorat padegi.




Saint Origin Universe mein Cultivation Skills ke jaise hi Combat Skills bhi Four part mein divide hai
1. Mortal
2. Earth
3. Heaven
4. Saint
Aur ye each level bhi 3 levels mein divide hai Low, Medium, High.



QI JING Realm sirf ek Foundation realm hai ek person QI HAI Realm mein Breakthrough karne ke baad hi Combat Skill ko practice kar sakta hai. Lekin AK doosro se different tha uske paas several Combat Skill ko practice karne ka experience tha. Aur The Dragon Transformation Skill usko normal person se jyada Yuan Energy provide karti thi, isliye filhal QI HAI Realm ke early stage ke Warrior AK ka koi match nahi they.



QI JING Realm ke Warrior isliye Combat Skills practice nahi kar paate they kyuki unke paas enough Yuan Power nahi hoti thi Skill ko support karne ki. Lekin AK ki story different thi.



Past Life mein AK ne Jo Combat Skill Practice ki thi wo thi 'Nine Solar Energy' jo ki ek Saint level ki thi aur is Skill ko AK ne khud hi banaya tha apne liye. Ye bhut hi powerful Skill thi jo surroundings mein se energy collect karke User ko Great benefit provide karwati thi.



Is Combat Skill ko practice karne ke liye Ek strong body aur huge amount of QI energy chahiye. Joki bhut difficult hai achhieve karna.



Past Life mein AK ne The Dragon Transformation Skill ki jagah Xuan Yuan naam ki skill Cultivate ki thi jo body ko bhut jyada Vital energy QI deti hai. Lekin iske baad bhi wo apni past life mein Nine Solar Energies Combat Skill ke Full potential ko use nahi kar paaya tha.




Lekin is Life mein AK The Dragon Transformation Skill ko Cultivate kar raha tha, jo Xuan Yuan Skill se powerful hai. Har ek Red Dragon Mark ke sath uske bhut jyada amount mein Vital energy QI milegi aur iske sath wo is life mein Nine Solar Energies ko full potential ke sath use kar paayega.




AK "Too bad, main sirf QI JING REALM mein hu aur Nine Solar Energies is World ki sabse Strong Combat Skill hai. Even Divine Core Realm ke Warrior bhi is Skill ko practice nahi kar sakte.


{ 5 Foundational Realm
1. QI JING REALM (9 Level hai)
2. QI HAI REALM (Early, Mid, Late Stage)
3. MORTAL CORE REALM (Early, Mid, Late Stage)
4. HEAVENLY CORE REALM (Early, Mid, Late Stage)
5. DIVINE CORE REALM (Early, Mid, Late Stage)
ISKE BAAD AATE HAI MAIN REALM JO UPPER 5 HAI WO SIRF FOUNDATION HAI.
6. COMBAT SOUL REALM (Early, Mid, Late Stage)
7. COMBAT KING REALM (First Grade to 9th Grade)
8. COMBAT EMPEROR REALM (First Grade to 9th Grade)
9. SAINT REALM (Minor, Great ) }





"Main abhi ke liye Nine Solar Energies ko practice nahi kar sakta. Lekin mein Six Solar Fingers Combat Skill ko practice kar sakta hu jo ki Nine Solar Energies Skill ka hi ek part hai. Six Solar Fingers Nine Solar Energies ka Foundation hai aur Six Solar Finger ko ek High Earth Level ki skill kaha jaa sakta hai."



AK ne apne face pe ek smile liye ye socha. Puri Fragrant Sky City mein ek bhi Earth Level ki Combat Skills nahi thi, isliye yaha pe koi bhi Six Solar Fingers ko halke mein nahi le sakta tha.



Six Solar Finger mein Six Style they. Har ek Finger ki power alag Level pe thi jaha First Finger kisi bhi Stone ko bilkul Crush kar sakti thi wahi Sixth Finger kisi Mountain ko bilkul wipe kar sakti thi.




Next 3 din AK Six Solar Fingers ko practice karta raha bina apne Mansion se bahar nikle. Aur JAIN bhi bhut jyada busy ho gaya tha business manage karne mein ki uske paas AK ko disturb karne ka time nahi tha.



In 3 dino mein AK ne saara time The Dragon Transformation Skill ko Cultivate karne mein aur Six Solar Fingers ko practice karne mein lagaya. Is combination se uski Vital Energy QI se bharne lagi thi.



In 3 dino mein AK QI JING Realm ke ek dum peak pe pahuch gaya tha. Bas ek step dur tha QI HAI Realm mein Breakthrough karne se. Jo ek Red Dragon Mark form hua tha wo bhi bas Complete hone hi wala tha. Uske punch ki strength 5000 pound se 8000 pound ki ho gayi thi jo kisi bhi Early QI HAI REALM ke warrior ki nahi hoti.



Haaa!




Garden mein AK ek black Robe pehene khada tha aur usne jor se chillate huye apni Finger se ek Golden Ray realease ki jo lightning speed se uske Finger tips se nikli thi.



Bam!



Wo Golden Ray waha pe rakhe ek bade se stone ko cut karte karte huye nikal gayi. Jaha se Golden Ray ne Stone ko Cut kiya tha waha pe smoke nikalne laga tha. Agar Fragrant Sky City mein koi is Attack ko dekh leta to pagal ho jaata.



"Main abhi sirf ek Finger hi use kar sakta hu Six Solar Fingers mein se aur abhi bhi ye First Finger ka full potential nahi tha. Aur is Attack mein meri body ki saari Yuan Energy khatam ho gayi."



AK abhi paseeno mein bheeg raha tha aur weak feel kar raha tha attack karne ke baad aur jo attack tha wo bhi First Finger ke real potential ka half tha. Halanki ye powerful dikh raha tha lekin full power se bhut dur tha pura potentiel use karne ke liye aur practice ki jaroorat padegi.



Ye bhi badi baat thi ki AK First Finger use kar paa raha tha. Kyuki SiX Solar Fingers ek High Earth Level ki Combat Skill thi ek QI JING aur QI HAI Realm ke Warrior itna bhi nahi kar sakte they.






AK ne Apne bag se Ek Restoration Pill nikal aur usko apne muh mein daal liya jisse uski Yuan Energy waapis pehle ke Level pe aa gayi. Restoration Pill ek aisi Pill thi jiski jaroorat har ek warrior ko padti thi chahe wo koi se bhi realm mein ho. Fragrant Sky City mein Restoration Pill ki kimat 100 Silver Coins thi.



"Is Restoration Pill ki effectiveness sirf 60% hai baaki 40% impurities hai. Rubbish!"




AK ne khud se sochte huye apna sir hillaya. Mayor Mansion mein jo Restoration Pill thi wo sabse low Quality ki thi. Uske liye 60% effectiveness wali Restoration Pill kisi garbage se kam nahi thi.



Knock! Knock! Knock!



AK ko pehle se hi pata tha ye JAIN hi hai, isliye usne apna Door khola to usey JAIN ka worried face dikha.




JAIN "AK tumne fir improvement ki hai."



AK ki QI sense karke JAIN ke worried face pe thodi si smile aa gayi thi. Sirf 3 din mein AK QI JING Realm ke 9th Level se ek dum peak pe aa gaya tha jaha wo kabhi bhi Breakthrough kar sakta tha QI HAI Realm ke Early stage mein.




TO BE CONTINUED....
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UPDATE 9:- Alchemist



AK “Father aap worried lag rahe hain? Kya hua?”



JAIN “aao andar chal ke baat karte hai.”



JAIN aur AK dono andar ki taraf chal ke aa gaye. Room ke andar dono father aur son ek dusre ke aamne saamne baithe they.





JAIN “AK tumhe pata hona chahiye ki Fragrant Sky City mein humare bhut se business hai, lekin jo sabse jyada money produce karta hai wo Pill Concocting ka hai.”





{Pill Concocting matlab jaha pill banayi jaati hai.}



AK “Haa mujhe pata hai.”



AK ne apna sir hillate huye jawab diya. Ek warrior ke liye pills ki supply se jada jaroori kuch nahi hota. Fragrant Sky City mein chahe wo MU Family ho ya JIANG Family dono ko sabse jyada money Pills ke business mein hi milta tha.





JAIN “Hamara Pill Concocting ka business MU Family ki wajah se bhut jyada affected hai, aur hum ab bhut badi musibat mein hai.”





JAIN ne ek worried look ke sath kaha.



AK “Father, exactly kya ho raha hai?”



JAIN “MU Family ne 70% effectiveness wali Restoration Pills Concoct karne wala master hire kiya hai. Wahi hamari shops mein jitni bhi Pills hai wo sab 60% effectiveness wali hai. Unhone ek baar Pills bechna start kiya to humara business hi band ho jaayega. Agar MU Family ne puri Fragrant Sky City ko unki Pills se khush kar diya to hamari Family ka to is City mein rukna bhi muskil ho jaayega.”





AK ko ab samajh mein aa raha tha ki uske Father itne worried kyu hai. Pill business khatre mein tha lekin AK ko is baat se koi farak nahi pada tha. Balki wo to khus tha kyuki apni past life mein Ek Great Warrior hone ke sath usko bhut saari chizo ka experience tha jinme se Pills Concoct karna bhi ek tha. Usne ek baar to 90% effectiveness ke sath Saint level ki Pill bhi Concoct ki thi. Restoration Pill ek basic Pill hai aur wo easily thousand pills concoct kar sakta hai wo bhi 100% effectiveness ke sath. AK apne past life ke experience ke sath easily MU Family ko business se bahar kar sakta hai.



AK “Father aap chinta mat kijiye, main kal Pill Shop pe visit karunga.”



JAIN ne apna sir sehmati mein hillaya, halanki usey koi idea nahi tha ki AK Pill Shop pe kyu visit karna chahta hai?





AK “Father is Cultivation Skill ko dekho agar ye aapko fit hoti hai.”



AK ne ye bolte huye JAIN ko ek golden Paper de diya.



“Cultivation Skill”



JAIN ne surprise hote huye wo Paper AK ke hath se le liya aur usko curiosity ke sath dekhne lage.



“Xuan Yuan Cultivation Skill”



Ek ek single word ko padhte waqt JAIN ki aankhe badi hoti chali gayi. Kuch aur words padhte hi wo ek dum excited ho gaye. Jab unhone puri Script khatam ki to unke hath bhi shake ho rahe they jaise ye chota sa Paper ka Weight Thousand Pound ka ho.





JAIN “AK tumne ye itni achi Cultivation Skill kaha se obtain ki?”



JAIN bhut jyada excited tha, script dekhne ke baad bhi usey ye nahi pata tha ki ye Cultivation Skill konse Level ki hai, lekin wo koi idiot nahi tha. Wo asani se bata sakta tha ki Ye Cultivation Skill uski current Cultivation Skill se bhut jyada Powerful aur Superior hai. Ye Xuan Yuan Skill puri Fragrant Sky City mein kisi bhi cheez se compare nahi ho sakti thi. Yaha tak ki QI Province mein bhi iske level ki skill koi nahi hogi.



Ye script AK ne likhi thi. Apni Past Life mein AK isi Skill ko Cultivate karke the Greatest Saint bana tha, lekin ab uske pass The Dragon Transformation Skill hai to usey Xuan Yuan Skill ki koi jaroorat nahi hai. JAIN ko ye Skill de dena ek dum appropriate decision tha.





AK “Father, ek Great Master ne mujhe ye skill di thi, agar aapko pasand hai to aap is Skill ko Cultivate karna start kar do.”





Agar JAIN abhi se ye Skill Cultivate karna suru kar deta hai to usey 2 month mein MORTAL CORE Realm mein Breakthrough karne mein koi dikkat nahi hogi.



Agar JAIN ko pata chal jata ki jo Skill usne pakad rakhi hai wo Saint Level ki hai to wo khusi se hi mar jaata. Isiliye AK ne JAIN ko purposely Skill ka Level nahi bataya.



JAIN bilkul apne thoughts mein kho chukka tha usne to abhi se hi Xuan Yuan Cultivation Skill ko study karna suru kar diya tha. Wo is Skill se bhut jyada attract ho gaya tha aur wo khud ko apne thoughts se bahar bhi nahi nikal raha tha. Achanak hi wo pura pasine mein bheeg gaya aur aisa lagne laga ki wo abhi behosh ho jaayega. Ye sab sirf ek Minute ke andar hua tha jabse usne Skill study karna suru kiya tha.





AK “Father.”



AK ne jor se chillate huye JAIN ko jagaya jo khudke thoughts mein hi kho chukka tha. JAIN sirf QI HAI Realm ke peak par tha aur uska talent bhi ordinary hi tha. Wo bhut tezi se Saint Level ki Cultivation Skill ko use kar raha tha isiliye aisa hua tha. Apne mouth se dhua nikalte huye JAIN ne Cultivation karna band kar diya aur tab usey realise hua ki wo ek dum exhausted hai.



JAIN “AK ye Skill bhut powerful hai aur tumhare Dad ke paas limited talent hai, isiliye Cultivation ko rokna mere liye bhut hard ho gaya tha.”





AK “Dad itni powerful Skill ko Cultivate karne mein time aur effort lagta hai. Aap isko bhut slowly-2 study kar sakte ho.”





JAIN “ Beta tum ek dum sahi keh rahe ho, main QI HAI Realm ka warrior hu lekin fir bhi tumhari mental capacity mujhse jyada hai. Aisa lagta hai mera beta mujhse pehle hi bada ho gaya hai. Tumhara bhut acha Future hoga. Hahahhaha.”





JAIN ko yaha se bhejne ke baad AK firse The Dragon Transformation Skill ko Cultivate karne laga, ye Skill Xuan Yuan skill se bhut powerfull hai. Agar AK ke paas apni past life ke 1000 years ka experience nahi hota to wo bilkul bhi aise result nahi nikal paata jaise uske paas ab hai.





Next Morning, AK ne ek clean Black Colour ka Robe pehna aur Mayor Mansion se nikal gaya. Usne apne hath mein ek Fan pakad rakha tha, apni smile aur bright eyes ki wajah se wo bhut handsome lag raha tha.





Pill Shop thi wo JIANG Family ka sabse important business tha aur wo Mayor Mansion se jyada dur bhi nahi tha. AK 15 minutes mein Pill Shop ke front door ke saamne pahuch gaya. Ye badi classical building thi jaise ordinary Pills building hoti hai. Pills ka strong Aroma door ke bahar bhi smell kiya jaa sakta tha.





“Aap aa gaye Young Master.”



“Oh talented and handsome Young Master, aapke looks bhut gorgeous hai. Aap koi Mortal to lagte hi nahi ho, aisa lagta hai jaise aap Heavens se utre huye Angel ho.”





Jo 2 guard Shop ke bahar khade they wo AK ko salute maarte huye uski tareef kiye jaa rahe they. Past mein bhi wo AK ko aise hi salute karte they aur tareef bhi aise hi karte they, lekin ab fark itna tha ki inki aankho mein sach mein respect thi.





AK “Not bad, jaao aur jaake treasurey se 10 silver coins collect kar lo, lekin aage se mere saamne aisa bilkul bhi mat karna.”





Ek hath back pe aur ek hath mein Fan pakde huye AK Pill Shop ke andar chala gaya.





“All hail Young Master.”



Dono guards ne chillake kaha. Pill Shop JIANG Family ka main business tha lekin fir bhi yaha jyada guards nahi they. Kyuki Pill shop ke jo incharge they wo Jay tha, jo sirf ek alchemist hi nahi balki QI HAI Realm ke mid level ka warrior tha. Secondly Pill shop Mayor Mansion se jyada dur nahi thi. Agar yaha kuch hota bhi hai to Mansion se immediately help aa sakti thi.





Pill Shop ke meeting room mein 3 old man baithe they jinke face depressed aur clueless they. Jo 3 old man they wo teeno hi apni fifties mein they aur unhone grey robe pehna hua tha. Unme se ek fat tha aur ek bhut skinny. Jo old man bich mein baitha tha uski average body thi aur wo hi is Pill Shop ka incharge Jay tha. Jai hai wo Jain ka best friend aur ye koi bhi bata sakta hai kyuki family member na hone ke bawjood Jain ne usey Pill Shop ka incharge bana rakha hai.





“Uncle Jay, aapke face pe ye depressed look bilkul suit nahi karta.”



AK ne andar aate huye kaha. Trio AK ko dekhte hi apni seat se khade ho gaye.





Jai “Young master aap yaha kyu aaye hai?”



Jai ko chodke koi bhi alchemist past mein AK se baat nahi karta tha, lekin jo 3 din pehle hua usko dekhke sabke mind badal gaye they.





AK “ Uncle Jai, Dad ne mujhe bataya hai ki Mu Family ne ek alchemist hire kiya hai jo 70% effectiveness ke sath restoration pill concoct kar sakta hai.”



AK ne wahi pe rakhi huyi ek chair pe baithte huye kaha.



Jai “Young Master, aapko ye bhi pata hai. Humne last kuch dino mein koi bhi restoration pill sell nahi ki hai. Hamari abilities limited hai aur hum 70% effectiveness wali pill banane ki ability nahi rakhte.”





AK “don’t give up uncle, main aapko aise person se milwaunga jo 70% effectiveness se jayada pill concoct kar sakta hai.”





Jai “ what? Young master aise kisi ko jaante hai,”



Jai ne khus hote huye kaha.



“kaha hai wo alchemist? Agar wo hamari help karne ke liye taiyar hai to hum bilkul bhi disrespect show nahi karenge.”



Fat man ne serious hote huye kaha.



AK “tum logo ko wo person dur lag raha hai, lekin wo tumhare bilkul saamne hi to hai.”



Apne fan ko fold karte huye AK khada ho gaya.



“what? Young master, kya tum khud ke baare mein hi to nahi keh rahe ho?”





Fat old man ne surprise hote huye AK se pucha. Baaki dono ka bhi same reaction tha.



AK “Haa, main hi wo alchemist hu.”



Hahhahahaha……





Jaise hi AK ne jawab diya waise hi trio ek dum jor se hasne lage.





Jai ”Young master aap pills concoct karna chahte ho? Majak karna band karo, sabko pata hai aap sirf pills consume karne mein ache ho naaki pills concoct karne mein.”





AK “Uncle Jai mujhe itna bhi kam mat samjho. Wo kahawat hai na doctor wo hi banta hai jo sabse jyada bimar raha ho. Lekin mere liye alag hai ‘ acha alchemist wo hi banta hai jisne bahut saari pills consume ki ho’”





Trio ek baar firse hasne laga.



“agar pills consume karne se hi log alchemist bante to abhi tak Saint Origin mein sabhi Alchemist hote. Ab aap yaha se jaao aur humey koi solution nikalne mein disturb mat karo.”





AK “lagta hai tum log mujpe vishwas nahi karoge jab tak main tumhe apni ability na dikha du. Lets go, mujhe furnace room mein le chalo.”



Apni sleeves ko uppar chahdate huye AK aise act kar raha tha jaise wo kuch bada karne wala ho. Trio ne AK ko dekha, unhe aisa bilkul bhi nahi laga ki wo majak kar raha hai. Kya wo sach mein itni pills consume karke alchemist ban gaya hai?





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