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Itachi_Uchiha

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Mai puri kosis karunga ki 1 Tarik Tak naya Update post kar du.
Ab naye update se story puri mere hisab se chlegi. To ab se week me ek hi update aaya karega. Kosis karunga ki Kam din me bhi update de du.
Aur sbs important baat is story me actual me sex nahi hai. To mi aap logo se puchna chta hu ki kya mi story me sex add Karu ya jise story chal Rahi hai waise chlne du.
nd ab se mujhe apne update par Kam se Kam 60 likes cahiye hi cahiye.
 
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UPDATE NO - 15
( Third Young Lord of Parjapati Family )







Sabhi log is brutal scene ko dekh ke shock mein they aur Atharva kisi demon Lord se kam nahi lag raha tha unhe. Sabko ek baat samajh aa gayi thi agar wo is Young Master ke innocent face pe jaayenge to unhe bhut jyada nuksaan ho sakta hai.


Chang “ Young Master ye old dog behosh ho gaya. "


Atharva “ Iske sabhi kapde faad do aur iske dono taange tod ke aisi jagah fek do jaha se ye humey disturb na kar sake aur hum araam se apni Pills sell kar sake. ”


Kuch guards Atharva ki awaaz sunte hi us Old man ke paas chale gaye aur uske kapde faad diye aur steel baar se dono taange tod di. Aur un dono ko uthake Mayor ki Properties se bahar fek diya.


“ Ye dono to bilkul khatam ho gaye hai. Aur ye sab JADAV family ke number one Genius ki arrogance ke wajah se hua hai. Ab Atharva ne ek tarah se JADAV family ke khilaf War declare kar di hai. ”


“ In kuch dino mein JADAV family ki reputation pehle se hi khatam ho chuki thi. Aur aaj unka number one Genius aur Early QI HAI Realm ka warrior dono apna dick kho baithe. Dono ki taange cripple ho gayi hai jisse wo martial arts bhi practice nahi kar paayenge. ”


“ Sahi kaha tumne aur ab to YADAV family ke paas ek Alchemist hai jo 100% effectiveness wali Restoration pill concoct kar sakta hai. Aur Atharva ne aaj ye bhi saabit kar diya hai ki wo hi Fragrant Sky City ka number one Genius hai. Agar humey future mein kuch trade karna hoga to hum YADAV family ke paas hi jaayenge. Ab JADAV family unka koi match nahi hai. ”


Puri Crowd JADAV family aur YADAV family ke relations ki hi baat kar rahi thi. Ab wo log baat hi kar sakte they kyuki unka status itna bada nahi tha ki wo kisi family ko Join kar sake Fight mein.


Atharva “ Pills Sell karna continue karo. ”


Itna bolke Atharva wapis Pill Shop ke andar chala gaya. Uske back ke strong view ko dekh ke sabke mann mein fear aur respect thi. Yeh young man bilkul ek Devil ki tarah hai.




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EVENING TIME,
JADAV FAMILY




Apne bete aur jo old man niche jamin pe behosh lete they unko dekhke Karamchand ki aankho se almost aag niklne ko ho gayi thi. Ek middle age man jo apne forties mein lag raha tha wo dhyan se Young aur old Man ke wounds check kar raha tha.


Karamchand “ koi tarika hai indono ko fix karne ka. ”


“ Young Master ka right arm puri tarah se kharab ho gaya hai, aur inki dono taange tuti huyi hai. Jo serious wound hai, wo inka dick hai jo kabhi thik nahi hoga. ”


Itna kehke wo middle age man piche ko jaake khada ho gaya.



Bang !!


Gusse mein Karamchand ne jor se apna Palm samne rakhi table pe dekhe maara jisse wo table tukdo mein bhikar gayi. Hall mein jitney bhi log they wo sab silent they unme se kisi ki bhi awaz karne ki koi himmat nahi ho rahi thi.


Hall ke ek kone mein white clothes mein ek handsome sa young man baitha tha. Jo apne twenties mein lag raha tha. Ek seductive women uski gaud mein baithi aur usne exposing kapde pehen rakhe they aur uski body bhi bhut sexy thi. Koi bhi dekhke bata sakta tha ki wo Young women bhut hi beautiful aur lustful hai. Us young man ka bilkul bhi dhyan nahi tha ki us hall mein kya ho raha hai. Uski aankhe us women ke alluring boobs mein gadi huyi thi aur uske hath us young women ke exposing body parts ko sehla rahe they.


“ Chief, wo young ladka Atharva bhut cruel hai. Hum is matter ko itni asaani se khatam nahi hone de sakte. ”


Kisi ne chillate huye kaha. Atharva ne sirf JADAV family ke Young Genius ko barbaad nahi kiya tha balki JADAV family ke muh pe tamacha jad diya tha. Us young Genius ki halat aisi kar di thi Atharva ne isse acha to jaan se maar diya hota. Atharva ne usko hara ke point prove kar diya tha ki wo strong hai lekin is had tak jaane ki kya jarurat thi ?


Karamchand “ Wo useless brat uske to main tukde tukde kar dunga. Sab log dhyan se suno, apni sabhi Combat units ko ikhata karo YADAV family ke sath War ke liye taiyar ho jaao. Aaj Hum dono family mein se ek hi zinda rahegi. Main aaj us Kailashnath aur Atharva ko jinda nahi chodunga. ”


Aaj Karamchand bhut gusse mein tha, itna gussa to wo pehle kabhi nahi hua tha. Uski family ki reputation baar baar ek hi person ke wajah se kharab ho rahi hai. JADAV family puri Fragrant Sky city ke saamne ek laughing stock banke rah gayi hai. Unke liye future mein koi place nahi hoga Fragrant Sky City mein.


“ Wait !! "


Ye usi young man ki awaz thi jo hall ke ek kone mein baitha tha aur us seductive woman ke sath enjoy kar raha tha. Usne us woman ko dheere se apni gaud se dhakela aur khada ho gaya. Is young man ko dekhte huye kayi logo ke aankho mein ek disgusting feeling thi. Lekin is young man ke strength aur status ke saamne ye log kuch nahi they isliye apni disgust feeling ko chuppa ke rakhte they.


“ third Young Lord, main is matter ko itne asaani se khatam nahi hone dunga. Aur ab to YADAV family mein ek Alchemist hai jo 100% effectiveness wali pill concoct kar sakta hai. Jo aap Alchemist leke aaye they usey isne bhut buri tarah hara diya hai. Aaj main us Kailashnath se fight karunga aur fir dekhte hai is City kar asli Overlord kon hai ? ”


Karamchand abhi bhi bhut gusse mein tha lekin is Third Young lord se baat karte huye uski tone ek dum polite ho gayi thi. Fragrant Sky City ke two Overlord mein se ek hone pe bhi wo is Third Young Lord ko offend nahi kar sakta tha.


Ye Third Young Lord Red City ke Baiswar Family ke Chief ka Third son tha. Ye sirf 20 years ka hai lekin abhi se hi Early QI HAI Realm mein pahuch chukka hai. QI Province ke outside area mein sirf 28 Cities hai aur Red City inme sabse Powerful aur badi City hai. Fragrant Sky City sabse weak city hai is list mein to in dono mein koi comparison to ho hi nahi sakta.


Third Lord “ JADAV family mujhe ek baat puchne do tumse ? "
" Agar tum abhi YADAV family ke against War start karte ho to tumhare jeetne ke chances kitne hai ? "


Karamchand is baat se ek dum chup ho gaya tha kyuki JADAV family ki aur YADAV family ki strength past time se hi equal rahi hai agar dono Family mein war start hoti hai to pata nahi kon jeetega. Aur Atharva ne do baar JADAV family ki pure City ke saamne insult ki hai to YADAV family puri high spirits mein hai aur JADAV family ke Warriors itna loss dekhne ke baad ek dum low spirit mein hai. Agar ab wo sach mein fight karte hai to JADAV family ke jeetne ke chances sirf 20 to 30% hi hai.


Third Lord “ Agar main sahi hu to tumhari JADAV family ke jeetne ke chances sirf 30% aur usse kam hi hai. Aur agar tum jeet bhi jaate ho to tum itne weak ho jaoge ki doosri city ke Lords hi is city ko takeover kar lenge. "


Hall mein sabhi log apni mundi haan mein hilane lage they. Beshak ye Young lord lustful ho lekin iska mind bhi bhut brilliant hai.


Karamchand “ To Third Young Lord aap hi suggest karo ki hum log kya kare ? "
" Hum is matter ko itni jaldi nahi jaane de sakte. ”


Third Lord “ Chief, tum tension na lo. Maine tumhari help karne ka promise kiya hai. Aur main puri YADAV family ko khatam karke isey pura karunga. Aur jab aisa hoga to pura Mayor Mansion tumhara hoga aur ye City bhi. ”


Karamchand “ Third Young Lord kya idea hai aapka ? "


Third Lord “ Agar tumhe YADAV family ko khatam hi karna hai to tumhe pehle uski roots se suru karna hoga matlab unki Pill Shop. Aur wo Atharva usko main koi threat nahi samjhta. ”


Karamchand “ Third Young Lord, aap us Atharva ko kam mat samjho. Wo bahut tez hai, cruel hai, decisive hai, merciless hai. Wo apni age ke according to act hi nahi karta. ”


Third Lord “ Is Little Atharva se chutkara pana to bhut easy hai. ”


Karamchand “ Wo Kailashnath us Atharva ko kisi treasure ki tarah treat karta hai. Agar Atharva mar jaata hai to YADAV family ke liye ek huge blow hoga. Lekin wo little bastard humesa us Mayor Mansion mein rehta hai. Usse se chutkara pana bhut muskil hoga. ”


Third Lord “ Tum us Atharva pe dhyan mat do usse main personally nipat lunga. Tum kisi ko unki Pill shop par nazar rakhne ko bhejo aur us Alchemist ka pata lagao wo kaun hai ? "
" Aur fir main us Alchemist ko Parjapati Family mein invite karunga. Haa ye sahi rahega. ”


Third Young Lord ko YADAV family aur JADAV family se koi farak nahi padta usey to bas wo Alchemist chahiye jisse Parjapati Family mein uska Status uske dono bhaiyo se jyada ho jaaye.


Third Lord “ Chief tum tension na lo ek baar wo Alchemist mere hath lag jaaye to main us Atharva ko personally jaake maar dunga. Aur uske baad JADAV Familly puri Fragrant Sky City ki maalik ho jaayegi. ”


Third young Lord ne aisa kaha aur paas mein khadi seductive woman ke Lips pe kiss karne laga sabke saamne.


Karamchand “ Young Lord, agar aap YADAV family se chutkara paane mein hamari madad karte ho to ye saari womens aapki ho jaayengi. ”


Waha pe eight seductive women aur khadi thi aur sab ek se badh ke ek beauty thi. Ye normal prostitute se alag thi inhe JADAV family ne dusri City se khud personally pick kiya tha. Yaha pe sabko pata tha ki Red City ke Third Young Lord Parjapati ek lustful man hai. Yaha tak ki wo Red City se Fragrant Sky City in eight Women ke liye aaya tha aur inke badle mein JADAV family ki help karne ko taiyar ho gaya tha.




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PILL SHOP,
YADAV FAMILY




YADAV family ki Pill Shop mein Kailashnath ne Tiger Restoration Pill ke sabhi ingredients Ikhte kar liye they.


Kailashnath “ Atharva, maine suna hai tumne us Karamchand ke bete ko destroy kar diya hai. Tumne bahut acha kiya lekin wo JADAV family ka number one Genius hai, JADAV family is matter ko itni asani se nahi jaane degi. ”


Atharva “ Dad pagal mat bano aapko bhi pata hai dono Families ke bich mein War Start ho chuki hai. Mujhe koi faram nahi padta ki wo kya karenge ab lekin main JADAV family ko ab completely destroy kar dunga. ”


Kailashnath “ Lekin beta tumne un dono ko jinda kyu chod diya. Wo future mein trouble create karenge. ”


Atharva “ Dad, agar main unhe simply maar deta to JADAV family ki itni insult nahi hoti aur JADAV family ki Spirits down nahi hoti. Ye maine sirf isliye kiya hai taaki JADAV family Gusse mein aake koi galat step le aur humey mauka de unhe khatam karne ka. Ye War hai dad isme har ek step plan karke rakhna padta hai. ”


Kailashnath apne is bete ko dekhkar shocked ho gaya tha Kyuki usey bhi abhi War aur planning plotting ki koi knowledge nahi thi kyuki usne apne life time kabhi koi War nahi dekhi thi aur na ladi thi. Lekin Atharva ne apne Past Life mein thousands se jyada War ladi thi. wo bhi Demons, Devils, Ancient Sects aur Ancient clans ke sath. Uske paas itna experience tha ki wo apne enemies ko koi mauka nahi deta tha start karne ka, har step uske plan ka hissa hota tha chahe wo uska step ho ya uske enemies ka, isliye Past Life mein sub use WarGod ke naam se bhi jante they wo jaha jaata tha aur jo uska enemy hota tha usey bas death hi milti thi. Beshak Atharva ke past life ka Cultivation aur Strength na ho abhi lekin uske paas apne past life ki knowledge aur experience tha jo kisi treasure se kam nahi hai. Aur JADAV family ko to wo kuch samjhta hi nahi hai suru se beshak JADAV family strength mein equal ho Mayor Family ke lekin Atharva ko apne enemies ki Spirits aur Strength todna ache se aata tha.










TO BE CONTINUED……
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UPDATE NO - 16
(The First Dragon Mark)







Kailashnath “ Oh haan, maine saare ingredient collect kar liye hai jo tumne maange they. ”


Kailashnath “ Humey trading inventory mein sirf ek hi Tiger Demon Soul mili, lekin ye sirf Early QI HAI Relam ki hai. Mujhe dar hai kahi ye tumhari Pill ki effectiveness pe fark na pad jaye. Isliye maine ek warrior ko Red City bheja hai Late QI HAI Realm Tiger Demon Soul laane ke liye. ”



Atharva “ Thank You Dad. ”



Kailashnath “ Mujhe Thanks kehne ki koi jarurat nahi hai. ”



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PILL WORKSHOP



Furnace ke bagal mein herbs ka ek dher pada hua tha. Atharva unko examine kar raha tha: Thousand Leaves Grass, Hundred Soul Wood, Sprouting Blue Grass, etc…

Ye saare ingredients Tiger Restoration Pill concoct karne ke liye they. Waha pe ek wooden box bhi tha jiske under ek fist Size ki Demon Soul rakhi huyi thi. Ye kisi Crystal jaisi thi aur isse ek weak glow nikal raha tha. Atharva ko ek hi nazar mein uske andar se aati huyi energy feel ho gayi thi.


Atharva “ yeh to Fiery Tiger ki Demon Soul hai. Aur iske andar ki Fire core bilkul Pure aur undamaged hai. Ye to ek dum Bonus mil gaya. ”


Atharva khus bhi tha aur surprised bhi tha. Wo sirf ek single look se is Demon Soul ka origin bata sakta tha. Fiery Tiger waise to ek Normal demon Beast hi hai lekin tiger species mein ye ek Rare bloodline hai, aur ye ek Special type ki Fire posses karti hai. Is Fiery Tiger ki fire itni strong nahi thi lekin jo Mayor Family pill concoct karne ke liye Earth Fire Use karte hai usse to kaafi achi thi. Aur Atharva ke paas abhi koi elemental attribute nahi tha, kuch na hone se acha hai kuch to ho. Ek baar is Fire ko absorb kar lete ho to aap apni soul power se iske temperature ko bhi Control kar sakte ho. Kisi Normal Alchemist ke liye external Fire attribute absorb karna bhut muskil hota hai lekin Atharva ke liye Fiery Tiger ki Fire ko absorb karna bhut easy aur simple tha.


Atharva “ come. ”


Atharva ne apna hath wave kiya aur uske aisa karte hi wo Demon Soul hawa mein aa gayi. Fir Atharva ne apne dono hatho se complicated hand sign banaye aur in Hand sign ke effect se Fire Core us Demon Soul se ek dum alag ho gayi. Atharva ne apna muh khola aur us Fire core ko nigal gaya. Ek baar Fire core absorb ho jaati hai to ye Soul core ke sath merge ho jayegi. Aur person jitni uski Soul Power aur Yuan Power hai utni Fire Produce kar payega.


Jab Fire Core Atharva ke body mein enter kari to usey ek burning sensation feel hone lagi thi. Tabhi usne apni body ke andar hi apni Soul Power ko release karke us Fire core ko suppress kar liya.


The Dragon Transformation Skill aur Soul Derivation Skill ki wajah se wo Fire Core bhut tez speed se Atharva ke sath merge hone lagi thi. Atharva ne koi method use nahi kiya is process ke liye wo sirf apni The Dragon Transformation Skill aur Soul Derivation Skill ko use kar raha tha. The Dragon Transformation Skill is World mein kisi bhi aur kitni hi Special bloodline ko absorb kar sakti hai to ek normal fire core to ek dum piece of cake tha.


Atharva ne apne hath ko flip kiya aur kuch hi seconds baad uske hath mein bilkul Red Color ki Fiery Fire aa gayi. Jaise Jaise Atharva apni Yuan Power increase karne laga waise waise wo Fire bhi increase hone lagi.


“ Mera Dragon Mark pehle se jyada vivid aur condense hai agar mein is Fire Soul ko pura absorb kar leta hu to first Mark pura Complete ho jaayega aur main bhi Early QI HAI Stage mein breakthrough kar jaunga. Lekin ek Foundation banana usse jyada important hai. Mujhe pehle apne Foundation ko strong banane mein focus karna chahiye. ”


Atharva ka cultivation experience is pure World mein sabse jyada tha aur usey pata tha next level mein breakthrough karne se jyada jaroori Foundation ko strong karna hai. Aur is time usey waise bhi Breakthrough karne ki koi jaldi nahi thi.


Atharva “ is Fire se to main aur fast Pill Concoct kar paunga. ”


Atharva ki aankhe chamAtharva gayi thi. Soul Derivation Skill aur Fiery Fire ke sath to usey kisi Furnace ki bhi jarurat nahi padegi Pill Concoct karne ke Liye. Soul Derivation Skill sirf kisi ki Soul train karne ke liye nahi hai, ye Pill Concoct karne ke liye bhi ek suitable skill hai.


Huuu~~~


Atharva ki body se huge amount mein Soul force release hua. Atharva ne apna hath ghumaya aur apne palm se fire release karte huye ek Flame sea bana di. Cracking Sound produce karte huye Soul Force aur Flame Sea aapas mein merge hone lag gaye. Atharva ne ek baar fir apna hath ghumaya aur saare ingredients us Flame Sea mein daal diye.


Furnace ki jagah aisa miraculous method use karna Pill concoct karne ke liye, agar Trio ye hote huye dekh lete hai to wo to Atharva ke pairo mein hi gir jaayenge.


Impurities hatana, essence ko melt karna aur Pill form karna. Is concocting process se Atharva bahut familiar tha. Fiery fire ne pure room ka temperature pehle se two time high kar diya tha. Soul Derivation Skill ki madat se Atharva ko sirf 1 Hour laga Tiger Restoration Pill produce karne mein. Atharva ne apna soul force, apni QI aur apni fire wapis apni body mein absorb kar li, sirf Fresh new Pill reh gayi to jo kisi lighting speed se uske palm mein aake gir gayi.


Atharva “ Ye Tiger Restoration Pill Mortal level ki hai, meri current condition ko dekhte huye ye Pill ekdum perfect hai mere liye. Ye Pill meri foundation aur roots ko strong bana degi. ”


Atharva wahi pe cross legged position mein baith gaya aur pill ko apne muh mein daalke nigal gaya. Us Pill ke andar se huge amount mein power nikal ke Atharva ki body mein fail gayi. Atharva ne immediately The Dragon Transformation Skill ko Cultivate karna suru kar diya. The Dragon Transformation Skill ki help se us Pill ki saari power bhut fast Atharva ki body mein absorb hone lag gayi. Jo ingredients ke essence they wo Atharva ki Body ke har Cell ke sath merge ho rahe they aur uske Foundation ko strong bana rahe they.


Hum….


Suddenly ek humming sound Atharva ki body aane lagi thi jisse Atharva ki puri vibrate hone lagi thi. Atharva ne ek dum se apne six senses band kar diye aur pura focus The Dragon Transformation Skill ko Cultivate karne mein aur pill ko absorb karne mein laga diya.


One Hour ke baad Atharva ne apne aankhe dheere se khol di. Tiger Restoration Pill ek dum fully absorb ho chuki thi. Atharva ko jo apni body mein missing lagta tha wo bhi complete ho chukka tha. Aur uski weak body The Dragon Transformation Skill aur Tiger Restoration pill ki wajah se abhi ke Cultivation level ke hisab se ek dum perfect ho gayi thi. Tiger Restoration Pill ki energy ki wajah se uski dantian mein First Red Dragon Mark fully complete ho chukka tha aur ek dum real Red Dragon ki tarah lag raha tha.


“ First Red Dragon Mark complete ho chukka hai ab main 10000 Pound ke force ke sath punch kar paunga wo bhi sirf QI Jing Realm ke 9th level pe hone ke bawjood. Is Dragon Transformation Skill ki wajah se mera potential past life se bhut acha hai. (HALANKI MEIN PAST LIFE MEIN 16 KI AGE MEIN COMBAT EMPEROR REALM MEIN BREAKTHROUGH KAR GAYA THA.) hahahaha. ”


Atharva ne jor se hasna suru kar diya. Aur fir usne suddenly apna hath uthaya aur hawa mein hi punch maar diya. Ek dragon roar pure room mein goonz gayi. Atharva ne apni full power ka bhi use nahi kiya tha balki sirf Dragon Mark ki power use ki thi agar wo apne cultivation aur Dragon marks ko combine karke use karta hai to uski power 15000 pound se kam nahi hogi. Ab Early QI HAI Realm ke warrior ko aram se maar sakta hai wo aur Mid QI HAI Realm ke warrior ke sath equally fight kar sakta hai.


“ Jaise jaise mein Cultivation mein aage badhta rahunga waise waise Level up karna difficult hota jaayega. Mujhe abhi aur energy resources gather karne padenge. Ye Skill agar normal warrior se jyada strength provide karwati hai to isey Energy consumption bhi normal warriors se jyada chahiye. ”


First Dragon Mark completely form ho gaya tha aur Atharva ki body aur Blood kisi Beast ke jaise strong ho gaye they. Apni body ko stretch karte huye wo pill room se bahar aaya aur apne Mansion ki taraf chal diya.


Abhi Atharva apne mansion mein Rest kar hi raha tha ki Chang ek panic face liye huye bhagta aaya.


Atharva “ Chang, kya hua ? "
" Kya gadbad hai ? ”


Atharva ne ek tea cup uthaya aur tea pine laga.


Chang “ Young Master, bahar do log aaye hai jo apne Pill Shop ke Master Alchemist se milna chahte hai. ”


Atharva “ Kaun hai wo log ? ”


Chang “ Ek Young man aur ek Old man. Young man bhut jyada arrogant hai aur wo bol raha tha ki wo Red City se aaya hai. ”


Atharva “ Red City, Unko Main Hall mein leke jaao aur bolo ki Master Alchemist thodi der mein aayenge. ”


Red City ek kaafi big city hai aur wo Fragrant Sky City se to Compare ho hi nahi sakti. Lekin Atharva kaafi curious ho gaya tha ki Red City se kaun aaya hai.


Kuch moments mein Atharva ne ek white robe pehen liya aur ek badi si bamboo hat daal li jisse uska face na dikhe aur apni QI ko apne galle mein pahucha ke apni voice bhaari kar li. Iske baad Atharva main hall ki taraf chala gaya. Waha pe ek young man baitha tha jo twenties mein tha aur uske face pe arrogance saaf dikh rahi thi. Aur old man apne fifties mein tha wo bhi bilkul arrogant tha. Atharva bhi surprise ho gaya tha unke Level dekh ke Young man Early QI HAI REALM mein tha aur wo old man Mid QI HAI Realm ke peAtharva par tha. Usne socha nahi tha ki is QI Province ke outer area mein koi hoga jo young age mein QI HAI Realm mein breakthrough karle. Halanki wo koi genius nahi tha ki kyuki Divine Continent mein lagbhag sabhi kam Age mein hi QI HAI Realm mein pahuch jaate hai aur koi Atharva ke Jaise monstrous genius hote hai wo choti age mein Divine Core Realm mein bhi pahuch jaate they. Kyuki Divine Continent ki spiritual Energy yaha se hundred times higher hai.


Atharva “ Leave us Alone. ”


Atharva ki awaz bhut bhaari thi jisey Chang bhi pehchan nahi paya. Chang ne ek baar Atharva ki taraf dekha aur fir waha se chala gaya.


Chang “ Young master is Master Alchemist ke sath kyu nahi aaye ? ”


Chang wahi main hall ke bahar guard banke khada ho gaya puzzle expression ke sath.










TO BE CONTINUED…
[ Note :- Dosto aap logo ko realms, captivation related koi bhi dought ho to aap 1st page par details dekh sakte hai. ]

 

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UPDATE NO - 16
(The First Dragon Mark)







Kailashnath “ Oh haan, maine saare ingredient collect kar liye hai jo tumne maange they. ”


Kailashnath “ Humey trading inventory mein sirf ek hi Tiger Demon Soul mili, lekin ye sirf Early QI HAI Relam ki hai. Mujhe dar hai kahi ye tumhari Pill ki effectiveness pe fark na pad jaye. Isliye maine ek warrior ko Red City bheja hai Late QI HAI Realm Tiger Demon Soul laane ke liye. ”



Atharva “ Thank You Dad. ”



Kailashnath “ Mujhe Thanks kehne ki koi jarurat nahi hai. ”



~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~


PILL WORKSHOP



Furnace ke bagal mein herbs ka ek dher pada hua tha. Atharva unko examine kar raha tha: Thousand Leaves Grass, Hundred Soul Wood, Sprouting Blue Grass, etc…

Ye saare ingredients Tiger Restoration Pill concoct karne ke liye they. Waha pe ek wooden box bhi tha jiske under ek fist Size ki Demon Soul rakhi huyi thi. Ye kisi Crystal jaisi thi aur isse ek weak glow nikal raha tha. Atharva ko ek hi nazar mein uske andar se aati huyi energy feel ho gayi thi.


Atharva “ yeh to Fiery Tiger ki Demon Soul hai. Aur iske andar ki Fire core bilkul Pure aur undamaged hai. Ye to ek dum Bonus mil gaya. ”


Atharva khus bhi tha aur surprised bhi tha. Wo sirf ek single look se is Demon Soul ka origin bata sakta tha. Fiery Tiger waise to ek Normal demon Beast hi hai lekin tiger species mein ye ek Rare bloodline hai, aur ye ek Special type ki Fire posses karti hai. Is Fiery Tiger ki fire itni strong nahi thi lekin jo Mayor Family pill concoct karne ke liye Earth Fire Use karte hai usse to kaafi achi thi. Aur Atharva ke paas abhi koi elemental attribute nahi tha, kuch na hone se acha hai kuch to ho. Ek baar is Fire ko absorb kar lete ho to aap apni soul power se iske temperature ko bhi Control kar sakte ho. Kisi Normal Alchemist ke liye external Fire attribute absorb karna bhut muskil hota hai lekin Atharva ke liye Fiery Tiger ki Fire ko absorb karna bhut easy aur simple tha.


Atharva “ come. ”


Atharva ne apna hath wave kiya aur uske aisa karte hi wo Demon Soul hawa mein aa gayi. Fir Atharva ne apne dono hatho se complicated hand sign banaye aur in Hand sign ke effect se Fire Core us Demon Soul se ek dum alag ho gayi. Atharva ne apna muh khola aur us Fire core ko nigal gaya. Ek baar Fire core absorb ho jaati hai to ye Soul core ke sath merge ho jayegi. Aur person jitni uski Soul Power aur Yuan Power hai utni Fire Produce kar payega.


Jab Fire Core Atharva ke body mein enter kari to usey ek burning sensation feel hone lagi thi. Tabhi usne apni body ke andar hi apni Soul Power ko release karke us Fire core ko suppress kar liya.


The Dragon Transformation Skill aur Soul Derivation Skill ki wajah se wo Fire Core bhut tez speed se Atharva ke sath merge hone lagi thi. Atharva ne koi method use nahi kiya is process ke liye wo sirf apni The Dragon Transformation Skill aur Soul Derivation Skill ko use kar raha tha. The Dragon Transformation Skill is World mein kisi bhi aur kitni hi Special bloodline ko absorb kar sakti hai to ek normal fire core to ek dum piece of cake tha.


Atharva ne apne hath ko flip kiya aur kuch hi seconds baad uske hath mein bilkul Red Color ki Fiery Fire aa gayi. Jaise Jaise Atharva apni Yuan Power increase karne laga waise waise wo Fire bhi increase hone lagi.


“ Mera Dragon Mark pehle se jyada vivid aur condense hai agar mein is Fire Soul ko pura absorb kar leta hu to first Mark pura Complete ho jaayega aur main bhi Early QI HAI Stage mein breakthrough kar jaunga. Lekin ek Foundation banana usse jyada important hai. Mujhe pehle apne Foundation ko strong banane mein focus karna chahiye. ”


Atharva ka cultivation experience is pure World mein sabse jyada tha aur usey pata tha next level mein breakthrough karne se jyada jaroori Foundation ko strong karna hai. Aur is time usey waise bhi Breakthrough karne ki koi jaldi nahi thi.


Atharva “ is Fire se to main aur fast Pill Concoct kar paunga. ”


Atharva ki aankhe chamAtharva gayi thi. Soul Derivation Skill aur Fiery Fire ke sath to usey kisi Furnace ki bhi jarurat nahi padegi Pill Concoct karne ke Liye. Soul Derivation Skill sirf kisi ki Soul train karne ke liye nahi hai, ye Pill Concoct karne ke liye bhi ek suitable skill hai.


Huuu~~~


Atharva ki body se huge amount mein Soul force release hua. Atharva ne apna hath ghumaya aur apne palm se fire release karte huye ek Flame sea bana di. Cracking Sound produce karte huye Soul Force aur Flame Sea aapas mein merge hone lag gaye. Atharva ne ek baar fir apna hath ghumaya aur saare ingredients us Flame Sea mein daal diye.


Furnace ki jagah aisa miraculous method use karna Pill concoct karne ke liye, agar Trio ye hote huye dekh lete hai to wo to Atharva ke pairo mein hi gir jaayenge.


Impurities hatana, essence ko melt karna aur Pill form karna. Is concocting process se Atharva bahut familiar tha. Fiery fire ne pure room ka temperature pehle se two time high kar diya tha. Soul Derivation Skill ki madat se Atharva ko sirf 1 Hour laga Tiger Restoration Pill produce karne mein. Atharva ne apna soul force, apni QI aur apni fire wapis apni body mein absorb kar li, sirf Fresh new Pill reh gayi to jo kisi lighting speed se uske palm mein aake gir gayi.


Atharva “ Ye Tiger Restoration Pill Mortal level ki hai, meri current condition ko dekhte huye ye Pill ekdum perfect hai mere liye. Ye Pill meri foundation aur roots ko strong bana degi. ”


Atharva wahi pe cross legged position mein baith gaya aur pill ko apne muh mein daalke nigal gaya. Us Pill ke andar se huge amount mein power nikal ke Atharva ki body mein fail gayi. Atharva ne immediately The Dragon Transformation Skill ko Cultivate karna suru kar diya. The Dragon Transformation Skill ki help se us Pill ki saari power bhut fast Atharva ki body mein absorb hone lag gayi. Jo ingredients ke essence they wo Atharva ki Body ke har Cell ke sath merge ho rahe they aur uske Foundation ko strong bana rahe they.


Hum….


Suddenly ek humming sound Atharva ki body aane lagi thi jisse Atharva ki puri vibrate hone lagi thi. Atharva ne ek dum se apne six senses band kar diye aur pura focus The Dragon Transformation Skill ko Cultivate karne mein aur pill ko absorb karne mein laga diya.


One Hour ke baad Atharva ne apne aankhe dheere se khol di. Tiger Restoration Pill ek dum fully absorb ho chuki thi. Atharva ko jo apni body mein missing lagta tha wo bhi complete ho chukka tha. Aur uski weak body The Dragon Transformation Skill aur Tiger Restoration pill ki wajah se abhi ke Cultivation level ke hisab se ek dum perfect ho gayi thi. Tiger Restoration Pill ki energy ki wajah se uski dantian mein First Red Dragon Mark fully complete ho chukka tha aur ek dum real Red Dragon ki tarah lag raha tha.


“ First Red Dragon Mark complete ho chukka hai ab main 10000 Pound ke force ke sath punch kar paunga wo bhi sirf QI Jing Realm ke 9th level pe hone ke bawjood. Is Dragon Transformation Skill ki wajah se mera potential past life se bhut acha hai. (HALANKI MEIN PAST LIFE MEIN 16 KI AGE MEIN COMBAT EMPEROR REALM MEIN BREAKTHROUGH KAR GAYA THA.) hahahaha. ”


Atharva ne jor se hasna suru kar diya. Aur fir usne suddenly apna hath uthaya aur hawa mein hi punch maar diya. Ek dragon roar pure room mein goonz gayi. Atharva ne apni full power ka bhi use nahi kiya tha balki sirf Dragon Mark ki power use ki thi agar wo apne cultivation aur Dragon marks ko combine karke use karta hai to uski power 15000 pound se kam nahi hogi. Ab Early QI HAI Realm ke warrior ko aram se maar sakta hai wo aur Mid QI HAI Realm ke warrior ke sath equally fight kar sakta hai.


“ Jaise jaise mein Cultivation mein aage badhta rahunga waise waise Level up karna difficult hota jaayega. Mujhe abhi aur energy resources gather karne padenge. Ye Skill agar normal warrior se jyada strength provide karwati hai to isey Energy consumption bhi normal warriors se jyada chahiye. ”


First Dragon Mark completely form ho gaya tha aur Atharva ki body aur Blood kisi Beast ke jaise strong ho gaye they. Apni body ko stretch karte huye wo pill room se bahar aaya aur apne Mansion ki taraf chal diya.


Abhi Atharva apne mansion mein Rest kar hi raha tha ki Chang ek panic face liye huye bhagta aaya.


Atharva “ Chang, kya hua ? "
" Kya gadbad hai ? ”


Atharva ne ek tea cup uthaya aur tea pine laga.


Chang “ Young Master, bahar do log aaye hai jo apne Pill Shop ke Master Alchemist se milna chahte hai. ”


Atharva “ Kaun hai wo log ? ”


Chang “ Ek Young man aur ek Old man. Young man bhut jyada arrogant hai aur wo bol raha tha ki wo Red City se aaya hai. ”


Atharva “ Red City, Unko Main Hall mein leke jaao aur bolo ki Master Alchemist thodi der mein aayenge. ”


Red City ek kaafi big city hai aur wo Fragrant Sky City se to Compare ho hi nahi sakti. Lekin Atharva kaafi curious ho gaya tha ki Red City se kaun aaya hai.


Kuch moments mein Atharva ne ek white robe pehen liya aur ek badi si bamboo hat daal li jisse uska face na dikhe aur apni QI ko apne galle mein pahucha ke apni voice bhaari kar li. Iske baad Atharva main hall ki taraf chala gaya. Waha pe ek young man baitha tha jo twenties mein tha aur uske face pe arrogance saaf dikh rahi thi. Aur old man apne fifties mein tha wo bhi bilkul arrogant tha. Atharva bhi surprise ho gaya tha unke Level dekh ke Young man Early QI HAI REALM mein tha aur wo old man Mid QI HAI Realm ke peAtharva par tha. Usne socha nahi tha ki is QI Province ke outer area mein koi hoga jo young age mein QI HAI Realm mein breakthrough karle. Halanki wo koi genius nahi tha ki kyuki Divine Continent mein lagbhag sabhi kam Age mein hi QI HAI Realm mein pahuch jaate hai aur koi Atharva ke Jaise monstrous genius hote hai wo choti age mein Divine Core Realm mein bhi pahuch jaate they. Kyuki Divine Continent ki spiritual Energy yaha se hundred times higher hai.


Atharva “ Leave us Alone. ”


Atharva ki awaz bhut bhaari thi jisey Chang bhi pehchan nahi paya. Chang ne ek baar Atharva ki taraf dekha aur fir waha se chala gaya.


Chang “ Young master is Master Alchemist ke sath kyu nahi aaye ? ”


Chang wahi main hall ke bahar guard banke khada ho gaya puzzle expression ke sath.










TO BE CONTINUED…
[ Note :- Dosto aap logo ko realms, captivation related koi bhi dought ho to aap 1st page par details dekh sakte hai. ]

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UPDATE NO - 16
(The First Dragon Mark)







Kailashnath “ Oh haan, maine saare ingredient collect kar liye hai jo tumne maange they. ”


Kailashnath “ Humey trading inventory mein sirf ek hi Tiger Demon Soul mili, lekin ye sirf Early QI HAI Relam ki hai. Mujhe dar hai kahi ye tumhari Pill ki effectiveness pe fark na pad jaye. Isliye maine ek warrior ko Red City bheja hai Late QI HAI Realm Tiger Demon Soul laane ke liye. ”



Atharva “ Thank You Dad. ”



Kailashnath “ Mujhe Thanks kehne ki koi jarurat nahi hai. ”




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PILL WORKSHOP



Furnace ke bagal mein herbs ka ek dher pada hua tha. Atharva unko examine kar raha tha: Thousand Leaves Grass, Hundred Soul Wood, Sprouting Blue Grass, etc…

Ye saare ingredients Tiger Restoration Pill concoct karne ke liye they. Waha pe ek wooden box bhi tha jiske under ek fist Size ki Demon Soul rakhi huyi thi. Ye kisi Crystal jaisi thi aur isse ek weak glow nikal raha tha. Atharva ko ek hi nazar mein uske andar se aati huyi energy feel ho gayi thi.


Atharva “ yeh to Fiery Tiger ki Demon Soul hai. Aur iske andar ki Fire core bilkul Pure aur undamaged hai. Ye to ek dum Bonus mil gaya. ”


Atharva khus bhi tha aur surprised bhi tha. Wo sirf ek single look se is Demon Soul ka origin bata sakta tha. Fiery Tiger waise to ek Normal demon Beast hi hai lekin tiger species mein ye ek Rare bloodline hai, aur ye ek Special type ki Fire posses karti hai. Is Fiery Tiger ki fire itni strong nahi thi lekin jo Mayor Family pill concoct karne ke liye Earth Fire Use karte hai usse to kaafi achi thi. Aur Atharva ke paas abhi koi elemental attribute nahi tha, kuch na hone se acha hai kuch to ho. Ek baar is Fire ko absorb kar lete ho to aap apni soul power se iske temperature ko bhi Control kar sakte ho. Kisi Normal Alchemist ke liye external Fire attribute absorb karna bhut muskil hota hai lekin Atharva ke liye Fiery Tiger ki Fire ko absorb karna bhut easy aur simple tha.


Atharva “ come. ”


Atharva ne apna hath wave kiya aur uske aisa karte hi wo Demon Soul hawa mein aa gayi. Fir Atharva ne apne dono hatho se complicated hand sign banaye aur in Hand sign ke effect se Fire Core us Demon Soul se ek dum alag ho gayi. Atharva ne apna muh khola aur us Fire core ko nigal gaya. Ek baar Fire core absorb ho jaati hai to ye Soul core ke sath merge ho jayegi. Aur person jitni uski Soul Power aur Yuan Power hai utni Fire Produce kar payega.


Jab Fire Core Atharva ke body mein enter kari to usey ek burning sensation feel hone lagi thi. Tabhi usne apni body ke andar hi apni Soul Power ko release karke us Fire core ko suppress kar liya.


The Dragon Transformation Skill aur Soul Derivation Skill ki wajah se wo Fire Core bhut tez speed se Atharva ke sath merge hone lagi thi. Atharva ne koi method use nahi kiya is process ke liye wo sirf apni The Dragon Transformation Skill aur Soul Derivation Skill ko use kar raha tha. The Dragon Transformation Skill is World mein kisi bhi aur kitni hi Special bloodline ko absorb kar sakti hai to ek normal fire core to ek dum piece of cake tha.


Atharva ne apne hath ko flip kiya aur kuch hi seconds baad uske hath mein bilkul Red Color ki Fiery Fire aa gayi. Jaise Jaise Atharva apni Yuan Power increase karne laga waise waise wo Fire bhi increase hone lagi.


“ Mera Dragon Mark pehle se jyada vivid aur condense hai agar mein is Fire Soul ko pura absorb kar leta hu to first Mark pura Complete ho jaayega aur main bhi Early QI HAI Stage mein breakthrough kar jaunga. Lekin ek Foundation banana usse jyada important hai. Mujhe pehle apne Foundation ko strong banane mein focus karna chahiye. ”


Atharva ka cultivation experience is pure World mein sabse jyada tha aur usey pata tha next level mein breakthrough karne se jyada jaroori Foundation ko strong karna hai. Aur is time usey waise bhi Breakthrough karne ki koi jaldi nahi thi.


Atharva “ is Fire se to main aur fast Pill Concoct kar paunga. ”


Atharva ki aankhe chamAtharva gayi thi. Soul Derivation Skill aur Fiery Fire ke sath to usey kisi Furnace ki bhi jarurat nahi padegi Pill Concoct karne ke Liye. Soul Derivation Skill sirf kisi ki Soul train karne ke liye nahi hai, ye Pill Concoct karne ke liye bhi ek suitable skill hai.



Huuu~~~


Atharva ki body se huge amount mein Soul force release hua. Atharva ne apna hath ghumaya aur apne palm se fire release karte huye ek Flame sea bana di. Cracking Sound produce karte huye Soul Force aur Flame Sea aapas mein merge hone lag gaye. Atharva ne ek baar fir apna hath ghumaya aur saare ingredients us Flame Sea mein daal diye.


Furnace ki jagah aisa miraculous method use karna Pill concoct karne ke liye, agar Trio ye hote huye dekh lete hai to wo to Atharva ke pairo mein hi gir jaayenge.


Impurities hatana, essence ko melt karna aur Pill form karna. Is concocting process se Atharva bahut familiar tha. Fiery fire ne pure room ka temperature pehle se two time high kar diya tha. Soul Derivation Skill ki madat se Atharva ko sirf 1 Hour laga Tiger Restoration Pill produce karne mein. Atharva ne apna soul force, apni QI aur apni fire wapis apni body mein absorb kar li, sirf Fresh new Pill reh gayi to jo kisi lighting speed se uske palm mein aake gir gayi.


Atharva “ Ye Tiger Restoration Pill Mortal level ki hai, meri current condition ko dekhte huye ye Pill ekdum perfect hai mere liye. Ye Pill meri foundation aur roots ko strong bana degi. ”


Atharva wahi pe cross legged position mein baith gaya aur pill ko apne muh mein daalke nigal gaya. Us Pill ke andar se huge amount mein power nikal ke Atharva ki body mein fail gayi. Atharva ne immediately The Dragon Transformation Skill ko Cultivate karna suru kar diya. The Dragon Transformation Skill ki help se us Pill ki saari power bhut fast Atharva ki body mein absorb hone lag gayi. Jo ingredients ke essence they wo Atharva ki Body ke har Cell ke sath merge ho rahe they aur uske Foundation ko strong bana rahe they.



Hum….


Suddenly ek humming sound Atharva ki body aane lagi thi jisse Atharva ki puri vibrate hone lagi thi. Atharva ne ek dum se apne six senses band kar diye aur pura focus The Dragon Transformation Skill ko Cultivate karne mein aur pill ko absorb karne mein laga diya.


One Hour ke baad Atharva ne apne aankhe dheere se khol di. Tiger Restoration Pill ek dum fully absorb ho chuki thi. Atharva ko jo apni body mein missing lagta tha wo bhi complete ho chukka tha. Aur uski weak body The Dragon Transformation Skill aur Tiger Restoration pill ki wajah se abhi ke Cultivation level ke hisab se ek dum perfect ho gayi thi. Tiger Restoration Pill ki energy ki wajah se uski dantian mein First Red Dragon Mark fully complete ho chukka tha aur ek dum real Red Dragon ki tarah lag raha tha.


“ First Red Dragon Mark complete ho chukka hai ab main 10000 Pound ke force ke sath punch kar paunga wo bhi sirf QI Jing Realm ke 9th level pe hone ke bawjood. Is Dragon Transformation Skill ki wajah se mera potential past life se bhut acha hai. (HALANKI MEIN PAST LIFE MEIN 16 KI AGE MEIN COMBAT EMPEROR REALM MEIN BREAKTHROUGH KAR GAYA THA.) hahahaha. ”


Atharva ne jor se hasna suru kar diya. Aur fir usne suddenly apna hath uthaya aur hawa mein hi punch maar diya. Ek dragon roar pure room mein goonz gayi. Atharva ne apni full power ka bhi use nahi kiya tha balki sirf Dragon Mark ki power use ki thi agar wo apne cultivation aur Dragon marks ko combine karke use karta hai to uski power 15000 pound se kam nahi hogi. Ab Early QI HAI Realm ke warrior ko aram se maar sakta hai wo aur Mid QI HAI Realm ke warrior ke sath equally fight kar sakta hai.


“ Jaise jaise mein Cultivation mein aage badhta rahunga waise waise Level up karna difficult hota jaayega. Mujhe abhi aur energy resources gather karne padenge. Ye Skill agar normal warrior se jyada strength provide karwati hai to isey Energy consumption bhi normal warriors se jyada chahiye. ”


First Dragon Mark completely form ho gaya tha aur Atharva ki body aur Blood kisi Beast ke jaise strong ho gaye they. Apni body ko stretch karte huye wo pill room se bahar aaya aur apne Mansion ki taraf chal diya.


Abhi Atharva apne mansion mein Rest kar hi raha tha ki Chang ek panic face liye huye bhagta aaya.


Atharva “ Chang, kya hua ? "
" Kya gadbad hai ? ”


Atharva ne ek tea cup uthaya aur tea pine laga.


Chang “ Young Master, bahar do log aaye hai jo apne Pill Shop ke Master Alchemist se milna chahte hai. ”


Atharva “ Kaun hai wo log ? ”


Chang “ Ek Young man aur ek Old man. Young man bhut jyada arrogant hai aur wo bol raha tha ki wo Red City se aaya hai. ”


Atharva “ Red City, Unko Main Hall mein leke jaao aur bolo ki Master Alchemist thodi der mein aayenge. ”


Red City ek kaafi big city hai aur wo Fragrant Sky City se to Compare ho hi nahi sakti. Lekin Atharva kaafi curious ho gaya tha ki Red City se kaun aaya hai.


Kuch moments mein Atharva ne ek white robe pehen liya aur ek badi si bamboo hat daal li jisse uska face na dikhe aur apni QI ko apne galle mein pahucha ke apni voice bhaari kar li. Iske baad Atharva main hall ki taraf chala gaya. Waha pe ek young man baitha tha jo twenties mein tha aur uske face pe arrogance saaf dikh rahi thi. Aur old man apne fifties mein tha wo bhi bilkul arrogant tha. Atharva bhi surprise ho gaya tha unke Level dekh ke Young man Early QI HAI REALM mein tha aur wo old man Mid QI HAI Realm ke peAtharva par tha. Usne socha nahi tha ki is QI Province ke outer area mein koi hoga jo young age mein QI HAI Realm mein breakthrough karle. Halanki wo koi genius nahi tha ki kyuki Divine Continent mein lagbhag sabhi kam Age mein hi QI HAI Realm mein pahuch jaate hai aur koi Atharva ke Jaise monstrous genius hote hai wo choti age mein Divine Core Realm mein bhi pahuch jaate they. Kyuki Divine Continent ki spiritual Energy yaha se hundred times higher hai.


Atharva “ Leave us Alone. ”


Atharva ki awaz bhut bhaari thi jisey Chang bhi pehchan nahi paya. Chang ne ek baar Atharva ki taraf dekha aur fir waha se chala gaya.


Chang “ Young master is Master Alchemist ke sath kyu nahi aaye ? ”


Chang wahi main hall ke bahar guard banke khada ho gaya puzzle expression ke sath.











TO BE CONTINUED…
[ Note :- Dosto aap logo ko realms, captivation related koi bhi dought ho to aap 1st page par details dekh sakte hai. ]



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UPDATE NO - 15
( Third Young Lord of Parjapati Family )







Sabhi log is brutal scene ko dekh ke shock mein they aur Atharva kisi demon Lord se kam nahi lag raha tha unhe. Sabko ek baat samajh aa gayi thi agar wo is Young Master ke innocent face pe jaayenge to unhe bhut jyada nuksaan ho sakta hai.


Chang “ Young Master ye old dog behosh ho gaya. "


Atharva “ Iske sabhi kapde faad do aur iske dono taange tod ke aisi jagah fek do jaha se ye humey disturb na kar sake aur hum araam se apni Pills sell kar sake. ”


Kuch guards Atharva ki awaaz sunte hi us Old man ke paas chale gaye aur uske kapde faad diye aur steel baar se dono taange tod di. Aur un dono ko uthake Mayor ki Properties se bahar fek diya.


“ Ye dono to bilkul khatam ho gaye hai. Aur ye sab JADAV family ke number one Genius ki arrogance ke wajah se hua hai. Ab Atharva ne ek tarah se JADAV family ke khilaf War declare kar di hai. ”


“ In kuch dino mein JADAV family ki reputation pehle se hi khatam ho chuki thi. Aur aaj unka number one Genius aur Early QI HAI Realm ka warrior dono apna dick kho baithe. Dono ki taange cripple ho gayi hai jisse wo martial arts bhi practice nahi kar paayenge. ”


“ Sahi kaha tumne aur ab to YADAV family ke paas ek Alchemist hai jo 100% effectiveness wali Restoration pill concoct kar sakta hai. Aur Atharva ne aaj ye bhi saabit kar diya hai ki wo hi Fragrant Sky City ka number one Genius hai. Agar humey future mein kuch trade karna hoga to hum YADAV family ke paas hi jaayenge. Ab JADAV family unka koi match nahi hai. ”


Puri Crowd JADAV family aur YADAV family ke relations ki hi baat kar rahi thi. Ab wo log baat hi kar sakte they kyuki unka status itna bada nahi tha ki wo kisi family ko Join kar sake Fight mein.


Atharva “ Pills Sell karna continue karo. ”


Itna bolke Atharva wapis Pill Shop ke andar chala gaya. Uske back ke strong view ko dekh ke sabke mann mein fear aur respect thi. Yeh young man bilkul ek Devil ki tarah hai.




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EVENING TIME,
JADAV FAMILY




Apne bete aur jo old man niche jamin pe behosh lete they unko dekhke Karamchand ki aankho se almost aag niklne ko ho gayi thi. Ek middle age man jo apne forties mein lag raha tha wo dhyan se Young aur old Man ke wounds check kar raha tha.


Karamchand “ koi tarika hai indono ko fix karne ka. ”


“ Young Master ka right arm puri tarah se kharab ho gaya hai, aur inki dono taange tuti huyi hai. Jo serious wound hai, wo inka dick hai jo kabhi thik nahi hoga. ”


Itna kehke wo middle age man piche ko jaake khada ho gaya.



Bang !!


Gusse mein Karamchand ne jor se apna Palm samne rakhi table pe dekhe maara jisse wo table tukdo mein bhikar gayi. Hall mein jitney bhi log they wo sab silent they unme se kisi ki bhi awaz karne ki koi himmat nahi ho rahi thi.


Hall ke ek kone mein white clothes mein ek handsome sa young man baitha tha. Jo apne twenties mein lag raha tha. Ek seductive women uski gaud mein baithi aur usne exposing kapde pehen rakhe they aur uski body bhi bhut sexy thi. Koi bhi dekhke bata sakta tha ki wo Young women bhut hi beautiful aur lustful hai. Us young man ka bilkul bhi dhyan nahi tha ki us hall mein kya ho raha hai. Uski aankhe us women ke alluring boobs mein gadi huyi thi aur uske hath us young women ke exposing body parts ko sehla rahe they.


“ Chief, wo young ladka Atharva bhut cruel hai. Hum is matter ko itni asaani se khatam nahi hone de sakte. ”


Kisi ne chillate huye kaha. Atharva ne sirf JADAV family ke Young Genius ko barbaad nahi kiya tha balki JADAV family ke muh pe tamacha jad diya tha. Us young Genius ki halat aisi kar di thi Atharva ne isse acha to jaan se maar diya hota. Atharva ne usko hara ke point prove kar diya tha ki wo strong hai lekin is had tak jaane ki kya jarurat thi ?


Karamchand “ Wo useless brat uske to main tukde tukde kar dunga. Sab log dhyan se suno, apni sabhi Combat units ko ikhata karo YADAV family ke sath War ke liye taiyar ho jaao. Aaj Hum dono family mein se ek hi zinda rahegi. Main aaj us Kailashnath aur Atharva ko jinda nahi chodunga. ”


Aaj Karamchand bhut gusse mein tha, itna gussa to wo pehle kabhi nahi hua tha. Uski family ki reputation baar baar ek hi person ke wajah se kharab ho rahi hai. JADAV family puri Fragrant Sky city ke saamne ek laughing stock banke rah gayi hai. Unke liye future mein koi place nahi hoga Fragrant Sky City mein.


“ Wait !! "


Ye usi young man ki awaz thi jo hall ke ek kone mein baitha tha aur us seductive woman ke sath enjoy kar raha tha. Usne us woman ko dheere se apni gaud se dhakela aur khada ho gaya. Is young man ko dekhte huye kayi logo ke aankho mein ek disgusting feeling thi. Lekin is young man ke strength aur status ke saamne ye log kuch nahi they isliye apni disgust feeling ko chuppa ke rakhte they.


“ third Young Lord, main is matter ko itne asaani se khatam nahi hone dunga. Aur ab to YADAV family mein ek Alchemist hai jo 100% effectiveness wali pill concoct kar sakta hai. Jo aap Alchemist leke aaye they usey isne bhut buri tarah hara diya hai. Aaj main us Kailashnath se fight karunga aur fir dekhte hai is City kar asli Overlord kon hai ? ”


Karamchand abhi bhi bhut gusse mein tha lekin is Third Young lord se baat karte huye uski tone ek dum polite ho gayi thi. Fragrant Sky City ke two Overlord mein se ek hone pe bhi wo is Third Young Lord ko offend nahi kar sakta tha.


Ye Third Young Lord Red City ke Baiswar Family ke Chief ka Third son tha. Ye sirf 20 years ka hai lekin abhi se hi Early QI HAI Realm mein pahuch chukka hai. QI Province ke outside area mein sirf 28 Cities hai aur Red City inme sabse Powerful aur badi City hai. Fragrant Sky City sabse weak city hai is list mein to in dono mein koi comparison to ho hi nahi sakta.


Third Lord “ JADAV family mujhe ek baat puchne do tumse ? "
" Agar tum abhi YADAV family ke against War start karte ho to tumhare jeetne ke chances kitne hai ? "


Karamchand is baat se ek dum chup ho gaya tha kyuki JADAV family ki aur YADAV family ki strength past time se hi equal rahi hai agar dono Family mein war start hoti hai to pata nahi kon jeetega. Aur Atharva ne do baar JADAV family ki pure City ke saamne insult ki hai to YADAV family puri high spirits mein hai aur JADAV family ke Warriors itna loss dekhne ke baad ek dum low spirit mein hai. Agar ab wo sach mein fight karte hai to JADAV family ke jeetne ke chances sirf 20 to 30% hi hai.


Third Lord “ Agar main sahi hu to tumhari JADAV family ke jeetne ke chances sirf 30% aur usse kam hi hai. Aur agar tum jeet bhi jaate ho to tum itne weak ho jaoge ki doosri city ke Lords hi is city ko takeover kar lenge. "


Hall mein sabhi log apni mundi haan mein hilane lage they. Beshak ye Young lord lustful ho lekin iska mind bhi bhut brilliant hai.


Karamchand “ To Third Young Lord aap hi suggest karo ki hum log kya kare ? "
" Hum is matter ko itni jaldi nahi jaane de sakte. ”


Third Lord “ Chief, tum tension na lo. Maine tumhari help karne ka promise kiya hai. Aur main puri YADAV family ko khatam karke isey pura karunga. Aur jab aisa hoga to pura Mayor Mansion tumhara hoga aur ye City bhi. ”


Karamchand “ Third Young Lord kya idea hai aapka ? "


Third Lord “ Agar tumhe YADAV family ko khatam hi karna hai to tumhe pehle uski roots se suru karna hoga matlab unki Pill Shop. Aur wo Atharva usko main koi threat nahi samjhta. ”


Karamchand “ Third Young Lord, aap us Atharva ko kam mat samjho. Wo bahut tez hai, cruel hai, decisive hai, merciless hai. Wo apni age ke according to act hi nahi karta. ”


Third Lord “ Is Little Atharva se chutkara pana to bhut easy hai. ”


Karamchand “ Wo Kailashnath us Atharva ko kisi treasure ki tarah treat karta hai. Agar Atharva mar jaata hai to YADAV family ke liye ek huge blow hoga. Lekin wo little bastard humesa us Mayor Mansion mein rehta hai. Usse se chutkara pana bhut muskil hoga. ”


Third Lord “ Tum us Atharva pe dhyan mat do usse main personally nipat lunga. Tum kisi ko unki Pill shop par nazar rakhne ko bhejo aur us Alchemist ka pata lagao wo kaun hai ? "
" Aur fir main us Alchemist ko Parjapati Family mein invite karunga. Haa ye sahi rahega. ”


Third Young Lord ko YADAV family aur JADAV family se koi farak nahi padta usey to bas wo Alchemist chahiye jisse Parjapati Family mein uska Status uske dono bhaiyo se jyada ho jaaye.


Third Lord “ Chief tum tension na lo ek baar wo Alchemist mere hath lag jaaye to main us Atharva ko personally jaake maar dunga. Aur uske baad JADAV Familly puri Fragrant Sky City ki maalik ho jaayegi. ”


Third young Lord ne aisa kaha aur paas mein khadi seductive woman ke Lips pe kiss karne laga sabke saamne.


Karamchand “ Young Lord, agar aap YADAV family se chutkara paane mein hamari madad karte ho to ye saari womens aapki ho jaayengi. ”


Waha pe eight seductive women aur khadi thi aur sab ek se badh ke ek beauty thi. Ye normal prostitute se alag thi inhe JADAV family ne dusri City se khud personally pick kiya tha. Yaha pe sabko pata tha ki Red City ke Third Young Lord Parjapati ek lustful man hai. Yaha tak ki wo Red City se Fragrant Sky City in eight Women ke liye aaya tha aur inke badle mein JADAV family ki help karne ko taiyar ho gaya tha.




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PILL SHOP,
YADAV FAMILY




YADAV family ki Pill Shop mein Kailashnath ne Tiger Restoration Pill ke sabhi ingredients Ikhte kar liye they.


Kailashnath “ Atharva, maine suna hai tumne us Karamchand ke bete ko destroy kar diya hai. Tumne bahut acha kiya lekin wo JADAV family ka number one Genius hai, JADAV family is matter ko itni asani se nahi jaane degi. ”


Atharva “ Dad pagal mat bano aapko bhi pata hai dono Families ke bich mein War Start ho chuki hai. Mujhe koi faram nahi padta ki wo kya karenge ab lekin main JADAV family ko ab completely destroy kar dunga. ”


Kailashnath “ Lekin beta tumne un dono ko jinda kyu chod diya. Wo future mein trouble create karenge. ”


Atharva “ Dad, agar main unhe simply maar deta to JADAV family ki itni insult nahi hoti aur JADAV family ki Spirits down nahi hoti. Ye maine sirf isliye kiya hai taaki JADAV family Gusse mein aake koi galat step le aur humey mauka de unhe khatam karne ka. Ye War hai dad isme har ek step plan karke rakhna padta hai. ”


Kailashnath apne is bete ko dekhkar shocked ho gaya tha Kyuki usey bhi abhi War aur planning plotting ki koi knowledge nahi thi kyuki usne apne life time kabhi koi War nahi dekhi thi aur na ladi thi. Lekin Atharva ne apne Past Life mein thousands se jyada War ladi thi. wo bhi Demons, Devils, Ancient Sects aur Ancient clans ke sath. Uske paas itna experience tha ki wo apne enemies ko koi mauka nahi deta tha start karne ka, har step uske plan ka hissa hota tha chahe wo uska step ho ya uske enemies ka, isliye Past Life mein sub use WarGod ke naam se bhi jante they wo jaha jaata tha aur jo uska enemy hota tha usey bas death hi milti thi. Beshak Atharva ke past life ka Cultivation aur Strength na ho abhi lekin uske paas apne past life ki knowledge aur experience tha jo kisi treasure se kam nahi hai. Aur JADAV family ko to wo kuch samjhta hi nahi hai suru se beshak JADAV family strength mein equal ho Mayor Family ke lekin Atharva ko apne enemies ki Spirits aur Strength todna ache se aata tha.










TO BE CONTINUED……
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UPDATE NO - 16
(The First Dragon Mark)







Kailashnath “ Oh haan, maine saare ingredient collect kar liye hai jo tumne maange they. ”


Kailashnath “ Humey trading inventory mein sirf ek hi Tiger Demon Soul mili, lekin ye sirf Early QI HAI Relam ki hai. Mujhe dar hai kahi ye tumhari Pill ki effectiveness pe fark na pad jaye. Isliye maine ek warrior ko Red City bheja hai Late QI HAI Realm Tiger Demon Soul laane ke liye. ”



Atharva “ Thank You Dad. ”



Kailashnath “ Mujhe Thanks kehne ki koi jarurat nahi hai. ”




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PILL WORKSHOP



Furnace ke bagal mein herbs ka ek dher pada hua tha. Atharva unko examine kar raha tha: Thousand Leaves Grass, Hundred Soul Wood, Sprouting Blue Grass, etc…

Ye saare ingredients Tiger Restoration Pill concoct karne ke liye they. Waha pe ek wooden box bhi tha jiske under ek fist Size ki Demon Soul rakhi huyi thi. Ye kisi Crystal jaisi thi aur isse ek weak glow nikal raha tha. Atharva ko ek hi nazar mein uske andar se aati huyi energy feel ho gayi thi.


Atharva “ yeh to Fiery Tiger ki Demon Soul hai. Aur iske andar ki Fire core bilkul Pure aur undamaged hai. Ye to ek dum Bonus mil gaya. ”


Atharva khus bhi tha aur surprised bhi tha. Wo sirf ek single look se is Demon Soul ka origin bata sakta tha. Fiery Tiger waise to ek Normal demon Beast hi hai lekin tiger species mein ye ek Rare bloodline hai, aur ye ek Special type ki Fire posses karti hai. Is Fiery Tiger ki fire itni strong nahi thi lekin jo Mayor Family pill concoct karne ke liye Earth Fire Use karte hai usse to kaafi achi thi. Aur Atharva ke paas abhi koi elemental attribute nahi tha, kuch na hone se acha hai kuch to ho. Ek baar is Fire ko absorb kar lete ho to aap apni soul power se iske temperature ko bhi Control kar sakte ho. Kisi Normal Alchemist ke liye external Fire attribute absorb karna bhut muskil hota hai lekin Atharva ke liye Fiery Tiger ki Fire ko absorb karna bhut easy aur simple tha.


Atharva “ come. ”


Atharva ne apna hath wave kiya aur uske aisa karte hi wo Demon Soul hawa mein aa gayi. Fir Atharva ne apne dono hatho se complicated hand sign banaye aur in Hand sign ke effect se Fire Core us Demon Soul se ek dum alag ho gayi. Atharva ne apna muh khola aur us Fire core ko nigal gaya. Ek baar Fire core absorb ho jaati hai to ye Soul core ke sath merge ho jayegi. Aur person jitni uski Soul Power aur Yuan Power hai utni Fire Produce kar payega.


Jab Fire Core Atharva ke body mein enter kari to usey ek burning sensation feel hone lagi thi. Tabhi usne apni body ke andar hi apni Soul Power ko release karke us Fire core ko suppress kar liya.


The Dragon Transformation Skill aur Soul Derivation Skill ki wajah se wo Fire Core bhut tez speed se Atharva ke sath merge hone lagi thi. Atharva ne koi method use nahi kiya is process ke liye wo sirf apni The Dragon Transformation Skill aur Soul Derivation Skill ko use kar raha tha. The Dragon Transformation Skill is World mein kisi bhi aur kitni hi Special bloodline ko absorb kar sakti hai to ek normal fire core to ek dum piece of cake tha.


Atharva ne apne hath ko flip kiya aur kuch hi seconds baad uske hath mein bilkul Red Color ki Fiery Fire aa gayi. Jaise Jaise Atharva apni Yuan Power increase karne laga waise waise wo Fire bhi increase hone lagi.


“ Mera Dragon Mark pehle se jyada vivid aur condense hai agar mein is Fire Soul ko pura absorb kar leta hu to first Mark pura Complete ho jaayega aur main bhi Early QI HAI Stage mein breakthrough kar jaunga. Lekin ek Foundation banana usse jyada important hai. Mujhe pehle apne Foundation ko strong banane mein focus karna chahiye. ”


Atharva ka cultivation experience is pure World mein sabse jyada tha aur usey pata tha next level mein breakthrough karne se jyada jaroori Foundation ko strong karna hai. Aur is time usey waise bhi Breakthrough karne ki koi jaldi nahi thi.


Atharva “ is Fire se to main aur fast Pill Concoct kar paunga. ”


Atharva ki aankhe chamAtharva gayi thi. Soul Derivation Skill aur Fiery Fire ke sath to usey kisi Furnace ki bhi jarurat nahi padegi Pill Concoct karne ke Liye. Soul Derivation Skill sirf kisi ki Soul train karne ke liye nahi hai, ye Pill Concoct karne ke liye bhi ek suitable skill hai.



Huuu~~~


Atharva ki body se huge amount mein Soul force release hua. Atharva ne apna hath ghumaya aur apne palm se fire release karte huye ek Flame sea bana di. Cracking Sound produce karte huye Soul Force aur Flame Sea aapas mein merge hone lag gaye. Atharva ne ek baar fir apna hath ghumaya aur saare ingredients us Flame Sea mein daal diye.


Furnace ki jagah aisa miraculous method use karna Pill concoct karne ke liye, agar Trio ye hote huye dekh lete hai to wo to Atharva ke pairo mein hi gir jaayenge.


Impurities hatana, essence ko melt karna aur Pill form karna. Is concocting process se Atharva bahut familiar tha. Fiery fire ne pure room ka temperature pehle se two time high kar diya tha. Soul Derivation Skill ki madat se Atharva ko sirf 1 Hour laga Tiger Restoration Pill produce karne mein. Atharva ne apna soul force, apni QI aur apni fire wapis apni body mein absorb kar li, sirf Fresh new Pill reh gayi to jo kisi lighting speed se uske palm mein aake gir gayi.


Atharva “ Ye Tiger Restoration Pill Mortal level ki hai, meri current condition ko dekhte huye ye Pill ekdum perfect hai mere liye. Ye Pill meri foundation aur roots ko strong bana degi. ”


Atharva wahi pe cross legged position mein baith gaya aur pill ko apne muh mein daalke nigal gaya. Us Pill ke andar se huge amount mein power nikal ke Atharva ki body mein fail gayi. Atharva ne immediately The Dragon Transformation Skill ko Cultivate karna suru kar diya. The Dragon Transformation Skill ki help se us Pill ki saari power bhut fast Atharva ki body mein absorb hone lag gayi. Jo ingredients ke essence they wo Atharva ki Body ke har Cell ke sath merge ho rahe they aur uske Foundation ko strong bana rahe they.



Hum….


Suddenly ek humming sound Atharva ki body aane lagi thi jisse Atharva ki puri vibrate hone lagi thi. Atharva ne ek dum se apne six senses band kar diye aur pura focus The Dragon Transformation Skill ko Cultivate karne mein aur pill ko absorb karne mein laga diya.


One Hour ke baad Atharva ne apne aankhe dheere se khol di. Tiger Restoration Pill ek dum fully absorb ho chuki thi. Atharva ko jo apni body mein missing lagta tha wo bhi complete ho chukka tha. Aur uski weak body The Dragon Transformation Skill aur Tiger Restoration pill ki wajah se abhi ke Cultivation level ke hisab se ek dum perfect ho gayi thi. Tiger Restoration Pill ki energy ki wajah se uski dantian mein First Red Dragon Mark fully complete ho chukka tha aur ek dum real Red Dragon ki tarah lag raha tha.


“ First Red Dragon Mark complete ho chukka hai ab main 10000 Pound ke force ke sath punch kar paunga wo bhi sirf QI Jing Realm ke 9th level pe hone ke bawjood. Is Dragon Transformation Skill ki wajah se mera potential past life se bhut acha hai. (HALANKI MEIN PAST LIFE MEIN 16 KI AGE MEIN COMBAT EMPEROR REALM MEIN BREAKTHROUGH KAR GAYA THA.) hahahaha. ”


Atharva ne jor se hasna suru kar diya. Aur fir usne suddenly apna hath uthaya aur hawa mein hi punch maar diya. Ek dragon roar pure room mein goonz gayi. Atharva ne apni full power ka bhi use nahi kiya tha balki sirf Dragon Mark ki power use ki thi agar wo apne cultivation aur Dragon marks ko combine karke use karta hai to uski power 15000 pound se kam nahi hogi. Ab Early QI HAI Realm ke warrior ko aram se maar sakta hai wo aur Mid QI HAI Realm ke warrior ke sath equally fight kar sakta hai.


“ Jaise jaise mein Cultivation mein aage badhta rahunga waise waise Level up karna difficult hota jaayega. Mujhe abhi aur energy resources gather karne padenge. Ye Skill agar normal warrior se jyada strength provide karwati hai to isey Energy consumption bhi normal warriors se jyada chahiye. ”


First Dragon Mark completely form ho gaya tha aur Atharva ki body aur Blood kisi Beast ke jaise strong ho gaye they. Apni body ko stretch karte huye wo pill room se bahar aaya aur apne Mansion ki taraf chal diya.


Abhi Atharva apne mansion mein Rest kar hi raha tha ki Chang ek panic face liye huye bhagta aaya.


Atharva “ Chang, kya hua ? "
" Kya gadbad hai ? ”


Atharva ne ek tea cup uthaya aur tea pine laga.


Chang “ Young Master, bahar do log aaye hai jo apne Pill Shop ke Master Alchemist se milna chahte hai. ”


Atharva “ Kaun hai wo log ? ”


Chang “ Ek Young man aur ek Old man. Young man bhut jyada arrogant hai aur wo bol raha tha ki wo Red City se aaya hai. ”


Atharva “ Red City, Unko Main Hall mein leke jaao aur bolo ki Master Alchemist thodi der mein aayenge. ”


Red City ek kaafi big city hai aur wo Fragrant Sky City se to Compare ho hi nahi sakti. Lekin Atharva kaafi curious ho gaya tha ki Red City se kaun aaya hai.


Kuch moments mein Atharva ne ek white robe pehen liya aur ek badi si bamboo hat daal li jisse uska face na dikhe aur apni QI ko apne galle mein pahucha ke apni voice bhaari kar li. Iske baad Atharva main hall ki taraf chala gaya. Waha pe ek young man baitha tha jo twenties mein tha aur uske face pe arrogance saaf dikh rahi thi. Aur old man apne fifties mein tha wo bhi bilkul arrogant tha. Atharva bhi surprise ho gaya tha unke Level dekh ke Young man Early QI HAI REALM mein tha aur wo old man Mid QI HAI Realm ke peAtharva par tha. Usne socha nahi tha ki is QI Province ke outer area mein koi hoga jo young age mein QI HAI Realm mein breakthrough karle. Halanki wo koi genius nahi tha ki kyuki Divine Continent mein lagbhag sabhi kam Age mein hi QI HAI Realm mein pahuch jaate hai aur koi Atharva ke Jaise monstrous genius hote hai wo choti age mein Divine Core Realm mein bhi pahuch jaate they. Kyuki Divine Continent ki spiritual Energy yaha se hundred times higher hai.


Atharva “ Leave us Alone. ”


Atharva ki awaz bhut bhaari thi jisey Chang bhi pehchan nahi paya. Chang ne ek baar Atharva ki taraf dekha aur fir waha se chala gaya.


Chang “ Young master is Master Alchemist ke sath kyu nahi aaye ? ”


Chang wahi main hall ke bahar guard banke khada ho gaya puzzle expression ke sath.











TO BE CONTINUED…
[ Note :- Dosto aap logo ko realms, captivation related koi bhi dought ho to aap 1st page par details dekh sakte hai. ]
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