Fantasy WARGOD

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UPDATE NO - 16
(The First Dragon Mark)​

Kailashnath “ Oh haan, maine saare ingredient collect kar liye hai jo tumne maange they. ”


Kailashnath “ Humey trading inventory mein sirf ek hi Tiger Demon Soul mili, lekin ye sirf Early QI HAI Relam ki hai. Mujhe dar hai kahi ye tumhari Pill ki effectiveness pe fark na pad jaye. Isliye maine ek warrior ko Red City bheja hai Late QI HAI Realm Tiger Demon Soul laane ke liye. ”



Atharva “ Thank You Dad. ”



Kailashnath “ Mujhe Thanks kehne ki koi jarurat nahi hai. ”



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PILL WORKSHOP



Furnace ke bagal mein herbs ka ek dher pada hua tha. Atharva unko examine kar raha tha: Thousand Leaves Grass, Hundred Soul Wood, Sprouting Blue Grass, etc…

Ye saare ingredients Tiger Restoration Pill concoct karne ke liye they. Waha pe ek wooden box bhi tha jiske under ek fist Size ki Demon Soul rakhi huyi thi. Ye kisi Crystal jaisi thi aur isse ek weak glow nikal raha tha. Atharva ko ek hi nazar mein uske andar se aati huyi energy feel ho gayi thi.


Atharva “ yeh to Fiery Tiger ki Demon Soul hai. Aur iske andar ki Fire core bilkul Pure aur undamaged hai. Ye to ek dum Bonus mil gaya. ”


Atharva khus bhi tha aur surprised bhi tha. Wo sirf ek single look se is Demon Soul ka origin bata sakta tha. Fiery Tiger waise to ek Normal demon Beast hi hai lekin tiger species mein ye ek Rare bloodline hai, aur ye ek Special type ki Fire posses karti hai. Is Fiery Tiger ki fire itni strong nahi thi lekin jo Mayor Family pill concoct karne ke liye Earth Fire Use karte hai usse to kaafi achi thi. Aur Atharva ke paas abhi koi elemental attribute nahi tha, kuch na hone se acha hai kuch to ho. Ek baar is Fire ko absorb kar lete ho to aap apni soul power se iske temperature ko bhi Control kar sakte ho. Kisi Normal Alchemist ke liye external Fire attribute absorb karna bhut muskil hota hai lekin Atharva ke liye Fiery Tiger ki Fire ko absorb karna bhut easy aur simple tha.


Atharva “ come. ”


Atharva ne apna hath wave kiya aur uske aisa karte hi wo Demon Soul hawa mein aa gayi. Fir Atharva ne apne dono hatho se complicated hand sign banaye aur in Hand sign ke effect se Fire Core us Demon Soul se ek dum alag ho gayi. Atharva ne apna muh khola aur us Fire core ko nigal gaya. Ek baar Fire core absorb ho jaati hai to ye Soul core ke sath merge ho jayegi. Aur person jitni uski Soul Power aur Yuan Power hai utni Fire Produce kar payega.


Jab Fire Core Atharva ke body mein enter kari to usey ek burning sensation feel hone lagi thi. Tabhi usne apni body ke andar hi apni Soul Power ko release karke us Fire core ko suppress kar liya.


The Dragon Transformation Skill aur Soul Derivation Skill ki wajah se wo Fire Core bhut tez speed se Atharva ke sath merge hone lagi thi. Atharva ne koi method use nahi kiya is process ke liye wo sirf apni The Dragon Transformation Skill aur Soul Derivation Skill ko use kar raha tha. The Dragon Transformation Skill is World mein kisi bhi aur kitni hi Special bloodline ko absorb kar sakti hai to ek normal fire core to ek dum piece of cake tha.


Atharva ne apne hath ko flip kiya aur kuch hi seconds baad uske hath mein bilkul Red Color ki Fiery Fire aa gayi. Jaise Jaise Atharva apni Yuan Power increase karne laga waise waise wo Fire bhi increase hone lagi.


“ Mera Dragon Mark pehle se jyada vivid aur condense hai agar mein is Fire Soul ko pura absorb kar leta hu to first Mark pura Complete ho jaayega aur main bhi Early QI HAI Stage mein breakthrough kar jaunga. Lekin ek Foundation banana usse jyada important hai. Mujhe pehle apne Foundation ko strong banane mein focus karna chahiye. ”


Atharva ka cultivation experience is pure World mein sabse jyada tha aur usey pata tha next level mein breakthrough karne se jyada jaroori Foundation ko strong karna hai. Aur is time usey waise bhi Breakthrough karne ki koi jaldi nahi thi.


Atharva “ is Fire se to main aur fast Pill Concoct kar paunga. ”


Atharva ki aankhe chamAtharva gayi thi. Soul Derivation Skill aur Fiery Fire ke sath to usey kisi Furnace ki bhi jarurat nahi padegi Pill Concoct karne ke Liye. Soul Derivation Skill sirf kisi ki Soul train karne ke liye nahi hai, ye Pill Concoct karne ke liye bhi ek suitable skill hai.


Huuu~~~


Atharva ki body se huge amount mein Soul force release hua. Atharva ne apna hath ghumaya aur apne palm se fire release karte huye ek Flame sea bana di. Cracking Sound produce karte huye Soul Force aur Flame Sea aapas mein merge hone lag gaye. Atharva ne ek baar fir apna hath ghumaya aur saare ingredients us Flame Sea mein daal diye.


Furnace ki jagah aisa miraculous method use karna Pill concoct karne ke liye, agar Trio ye hote huye dekh lete hai to wo to Atharva ke pairo mein hi gir jaayenge.


Impurities hatana, essence ko melt karna aur Pill form karna. Is concocting process se Atharva bahut familiar tha. Fiery fire ne pure room ka temperature pehle se two time high kar diya tha. Soul Derivation Skill ki madat se Atharva ko sirf 1 Hour laga Tiger Restoration Pill produce karne mein. Atharva ne apna soul force, apni QI aur apni fire wapis apni body mein absorb kar li, sirf Fresh new Pill reh gayi to jo kisi lighting speed se uske palm mein aake gir gayi.


Atharva “ Ye Tiger Restoration Pill Mortal level ki hai, meri current condition ko dekhte huye ye Pill ekdum perfect hai mere liye. Ye Pill meri foundation aur roots ko strong bana degi. ”


Atharva wahi pe cross legged position mein baith gaya aur pill ko apne muh mein daalke nigal gaya. Us Pill ke andar se huge amount mein power nikal ke Atharva ki body mein fail gayi. Atharva ne immediately The Dragon Transformation Skill ko Cultivate karna suru kar diya. The Dragon Transformation Skill ki help se us Pill ki saari power bhut fast Atharva ki body mein absorb hone lag gayi. Jo ingredients ke essence they wo Atharva ki Body ke har Cell ke sath merge ho rahe they aur uske Foundation ko strong bana rahe they.


Hum….


Suddenly ek humming sound Atharva ki body aane lagi thi jisse Atharva ki puri vibrate hone lagi thi. Atharva ne ek dum se apne six senses band kar diye aur pura focus The Dragon Transformation Skill ko Cultivate karne mein aur pill ko absorb karne mein laga diya.


One Hour ke baad Atharva ne apne aankhe dheere se khol di. Tiger Restoration Pill ek dum fully absorb ho chuki thi. Atharva ko jo apni body mein missing lagta tha wo bhi complete ho chukka tha. Aur uski weak body The Dragon Transformation Skill aur Tiger Restoration pill ki wajah se abhi ke Cultivation level ke hisab se ek dum perfect ho gayi thi. Tiger Restoration Pill ki energy ki wajah se uski dantian mein First Red Dragon Mark fully complete ho chukka tha aur ek dum real Red Dragon ki tarah lag raha tha.


“ First Red Dragon Mark complete ho chukka hai ab main 10000 Pound ke force ke sath punch kar paunga wo bhi sirf QI Jing Realm ke 9th level pe hone ke bawjood. Is Dragon Transformation Skill ki wajah se mera potential past life se bhut acha hai. (HALANKI MEIN PAST LIFE MEIN 16 KI AGE MEIN COMBAT EMPEROR REALM MEIN BREAKTHROUGH KAR GAYA THA.) hahahaha. ”


Atharva ne jor se hasna suru kar diya. Aur fir usne suddenly apna hath uthaya aur hawa mein hi punch maar diya. Ek dragon roar pure room mein goonz gayi. Atharva ne apni full power ka bhi use nahi kiya tha balki sirf Dragon Mark ki power use ki thi agar wo apne cultivation aur Dragon marks ko combine karke use karta hai to uski power 15000 pound se kam nahi hogi. Ab Early QI HAI Realm ke warrior ko aram se maar sakta hai wo aur Mid QI HAI Realm ke warrior ke sath equally fight kar sakta hai.


“ Jaise jaise mein Cultivation mein aage badhta rahunga waise waise Level up karna difficult hota jaayega. Mujhe abhi aur energy resources gather karne padenge. Ye Skill agar normal warrior se jyada strength provide karwati hai to isey Energy consumption bhi normal warriors se jyada chahiye. ”


First Dragon Mark completely form ho gaya tha aur Atharva ki body aur Blood kisi Beast ke jaise strong ho gaye they. Apni body ko stretch karte huye wo pill room se bahar aaya aur apne Mansion ki taraf chal diya.


Abhi Atharva apne mansion mein Rest kar hi raha tha ki Chang ek panic face liye huye bhagta aaya.


Atharva “ Chang, kya hua ? "
" Kya gadbad hai ? ”


Atharva ne ek tea cup uthaya aur tea pine laga.


Chang “ Young Master, bahar do log aaye hai jo apne Pill Shop ke Master Alchemist se milna chahte hai. ”


Atharva “ Kaun hai wo log ? ”


Chang “ Ek Young man aur ek Old man. Young man bhut jyada arrogant hai aur wo bol raha tha ki wo Red City se aaya hai. ”


Atharva “ Red City, Unko Main Hall mein leke jaao aur bolo ki Master Alchemist thodi der mein aayenge. ”


Red City ek kaafi big city hai aur wo Fragrant Sky City se to Compare ho hi nahi sakti. Lekin Atharva kaafi curious ho gaya tha ki Red City se kaun aaya hai.


Kuch moments mein Atharva ne ek white robe pehen liya aur ek badi si bamboo hat daal li jisse uska face na dikhe aur apni QI ko apne galle mein pahucha ke apni voice bhaari kar li. Iske baad Atharva main hall ki taraf chala gaya. Waha pe ek young man baitha tha jo twenties mein tha aur uske face pe arrogance saaf dikh rahi thi. Aur old man apne fifties mein tha wo bhi bilkul arrogant tha. Atharva bhi surprise ho gaya tha unke Level dekh ke Young man Early QI HAI REALM mein tha aur wo old man Mid QI HAI Realm ke peAtharva par tha. Usne socha nahi tha ki is QI Province ke outer area mein koi hoga jo young age mein QI HAI Realm mein breakthrough karle. Halanki wo koi genius nahi tha ki kyuki Divine Continent mein lagbhag sabhi kam Age mein hi QI HAI Realm mein pahuch jaate hai aur koi Atharva ke Jaise monstrous genius hote hai wo choti age mein Divine Core Realm mein bhi pahuch jaate they. Kyuki Divine Continent ki spiritual Energy yaha se hundred times higher hai.


Atharva “ Leave us Alone. ”


Atharva ki awaz bhut bhaari thi jisey Chang bhi pehchan nahi paya. Chang ne ek baar Atharva ki taraf dekha aur fir waha se chala gaya.


Chang “ Young master is Master Alchemist ke sath kyu nahi aaye ? ”


Chang wahi main hall ke bahar guard banke khada ho gaya puzzle expression ke sath.










TO BE CONTINUED…
[ Note :- Dosto aap logo ko realms, captivation related koi bhi dought ho to aap 1st page par details dekh sakte hai. ]

Fabulous update bhai

 

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UPDATE NO - 17
(A Written Challenge)​

Atharva undono ki taraf chala gaya aur unke saamne rakhi huyi Chair pe baith gaya bina kuch bole. Atharva ka aisa karne se wo Third Young Lord bilkul bhi offend nahi hua kyuki ek Master Alchemist jo 100% effectiveness wali pilll concoct kar sakta hai Uska Arrogant hona kisko bura lagega.


Third Lord " Main Red City ki Parjapati Family ka Third Young Lord hu. Main master alchemist ko apni respect pay karta hu. "


" Parjapati Family ? "
" Red City ? "


Atharva bhi ye sunke surprise ho gaya tha kyuki Parjapati Family ka status Red City mein aisa hai Jaise YADHAV Family Family ka Fragrant Sky City mein. Parjapati Family number one power hai Red City ki lekin ye Family puri tarah se dominate nahi karti Red City ko. Red City mein ek aur Family hai jo equally powerful hai Parjapati Family ke wo hai Rastogi Family.


Halanki, Atharva ko koi idea nahi tha ki ye Third Young Lord is war mein JADHAV Family ki madad kar raha hai. Jaise ki Third Young Lord ko bhi nahi pata tha ki Atharva hi wo Alchemist hai jisey wo pana bhi chahta hai aur maarna bhi.


Third Lord " Master Alchemist, ye Small Fragrant Sky City aapke abilities ke kaabil nahi hai. Aap mere sath Red City chaliye aur main aapko Parjapati Family mein ek High Position dilwa dunga. Aapko pata hona chahiye ki ye YADAV Family meri Parjapati Family ka garbage uthane ke laayak bhi nahi hai. Aap jaise master alchemist ka yaha rukna bilkul waste hai. "


Isi Speech ke sath Atharva ki feeling is Third Young Lord ke liye jo feeling thi wo neutral se disgusting pe chali gayi thi.


Atharva " Get Out ! "
" Niklo Yaha se. "


Atharva ne bhut Cold Tone mein kaha bina koi respect dikhate huye.


Third Lord " kya kaha tumne ? "


Third Young Lord ki smile ek dum se ruk gayi. Usne sapne mein bhi nahi socha tha ki uska naam aur status sunne ke baad saaamne wala aise behave karega.


Atharva " Get Out. Chang bahar nikal inko yaha se. "


Atharva ne ek dum cold tone mein kaha aur waha se nikal gaya. Agar JADHAV Family aur YADHAV Family Family ke bich War hoti to wo abhi is Young Lord ko jaan se maar deta.


Old Man " Young Master, aapne usey abhi ke abhi maar kyu nahi diya. "


Third Lord " humph, ye kya socha hai ki ye talented hai to mere se aise baat kar sakta hai. Ruk jaao ek baar is YADHAV Family Family ko khatam kar du fir dekhta hu kaha jaata hai ye. "


Itna bolte hi dono ek evil smile ke sath Mayor mansion se nikal gaye.



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AT AFTERNOON,
MY ROOM



Atharva apne room mein baithke ke The Dragon Transformation Skill Cultivate kar raha tha. Suddenly usne apne darwaje pe knock suni.


" Come in. "


Door khula aur Chang andar aaya.


" Young Master. "


Atharva " Chang, agar tumne mujhe disturb karne ka koi better reason nahi diya to main tumhari taang tod dunga. "


Atharva ko is baat se sabse jyada nafrat thi jab koi usey Cultivation ke time disturb kare.


Chang " Young Master, main aapko disturb nahi karna chahta. Mayor ne aapko bulaya hai Main Hall mein. "


Atharva " Main hall mein bulaya hai, kyu ? "


Chang " Young Master, maine suna hai ki JADHAV Family ne ek Written Challenge bheja hai. Is waqt saare Guest aur Elders Main Hall mein present hai. "


Atharva ne apne Kapde Change kiye aur sidha Main Hall ki taraf chala gaya. Usne ye bilkul accept nahi kiya tha ki JADHAV Family koi Written Challenge bhejegi, uske hisab se to ab tak Karamchand ne attack kar dena chahiye uske temper ko dekhte huye. Aur agar bhejna tha to kal hi bhej dete aaj ek din baad kyu bheja.


Main Hall mein Kailashnath center mein baitha tha aur uske bagal mein 10 QI HAI REALM ke Warriors baithe they jinme se Jai bhi ek tha. Aur Kailashnath ke right hand mein ek scroll tha.


" Dad, everyone. "


Atharva ne Hall mein aate hi sabko greet kiya. Wo ek dum kisi Noble Prince ke jaise lag raha tha ek Black Robe, Silver Long Hair, Black eyes aur ek Handsome Face. Sabhi Elders ne approval mein apne sir hillaye.


Atharva " Dad, maine suna hai JADHAV Family ne ek Written Challenge bheja hai. Kya hai isme ? "


Kailashnath " Ye raha Challenge, khud hi dekhlo. "


Kailashnath ne wo scroll Atharva ki taraf fek diya. Atharva ne wo scroll pakda aur usko padhna suru kiya, usme likha tha

" JADHAV Family aur YADHAV Family Family ke bich ke War ko khatam karne ke liye 3 din baad ek Fight hogi. JADHAV Family aur YADHAV Family Family Fragrant Sky City ke Public Square pe apni taraf se ek ek Young Genius bhejgi Fight karne ke liye. Aur Bet bhi koi Choti nahi thi. Jo haarega uski Pill Shop Jeetne waale ki ho jaayegi. "


Hahahhaha


Atharva haste hue " Bet ke liye Pill Shop Daav pe laga rahe hai. "


Atharva ne hasna suru kar diya aur us Written Challenge ko fek diya. Puri City mein Sirf Do hi Pill Shop hai aur dono Family kisi bhi haal mein apni Pill Shop khona nahi Chahti. Aur Karamchand Pill Shop ki Bet laga raha hai, lagta hai wo kaafi serious hai is baare mein.


Kailashnath " Atharva, tumhe nahi lagta ki is Written Challenge mein koi problem hai. "


Atharva " Problem to hai hi. JADHAV Family ke Number One Genius ko to maine pehle hi destroy kar diya. Mujhe yakeen hai unki Young Generation mein koi nahi jo mujhe hara sake, ya fir kisi Young Genius ne QI HAI Realm mein Breakthrough kar liya ho. Agar aisa hai tabhi unme mujhe challenge karne ke liye itne Guts hai. "


Jai " Young Master sahi keh rahe hai unke Young Genius ko to Master ne hara hi diya hai aur Karamchand ko Young Master ki true Strength ka bhi pata hai. Lekin is sab ke bawjood bhi uski Written Challenge bhejne ki himmat ho gayi. Mujhe lagta hai wo kuch bada plan kar raha hai. "


Kailashnath "Atharva, Tumhe kya lagta hai ? "
" Humey ye Written Challenge accept karna chahiye ya nahi ? "
" Lekin ek baat Clear hai Karamchand ka target sirf Tum hi ho. "


Atharva " Hum is Challenge ko accept karenge. Agar mera guess sahi hai to ye Written Challenge puri Fragrant Sky City mein sabke paas jaa chuka hoga. Aur sablog 3 din ke baad wale event ka intezaar kar rahe honge. Agar hum challenge accept nahi karte hai to humari hi insult hogi aur JADHAV Family koi mauka nahi chodegi humey humiliate karne ka. "
" Karamchand ne bada soch ke Plan banaya hai agar hum accept kare ya na kare fayda Karamchand ka hi hoga. Hahahaha. Aur agar Karamchand khel khelna chahta hai to main bhi taiyar hu. Mujhe bhi dekhna hai ki wo kya chhupa raha hai humse. "


Atharva ne iske Dad ke Face pe ek worried look dekha to fir se bolna start kiya.


Atharva " Dad, aap chinta mat kijiye mujhe pata hai ki main kya kar raha hu. Halanki is written challenge pe mera naam nahi likha lekin agar main fir bhi accept nahi karta to mera majak ban jaayega puri Fragrant Sky City mein. "


Atharva apni past Life mein ek Great Saint tha aur usey Challenge se kabhi dar nahi laga, uske hisab se jitna bada challenge hoga utna jyada hi wo khud improve hoga. Atharva ne apni aankhe band kari aur Confidence ke sath khada hoke waha se nikal gaya. Uski Ability ke hisab se kisi Early QI HAI Realm ke warrior ko maarna badi baat nahi thi, yaha tak ki Mid QI HAI Realm Warrior ke sath wo equally Fight kar lega. Usko ye bhi dar nahi tha ki JADHAV Family koi dirty tricks na play kare. Atharva ko dar tha agar wo aise Challenge nahi bhejte to koi maja nahi aata usey JADHAV Family ko khatam karne mein.


Kailashnath " Alright, hum ye Written Challenge accept karte hai. "



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FRAGRANT SKY CITY



Jaisa ki Atharva ne expect kiya tha waise hi ye News pehle se hi puri City mein faill chuki thi. Sablog bas Written Challenge ko leke hi discuss kar rahe they. Sab log is baat se surprise they ki Karamchand kya sochke ke YADHAV Family Family ko Challenge kar raha hai, kyuki JADHAV Family mein koi aisa Young Genius nahi tha jo Atharva ko hara sake. Sabko yahi lag raha tha ki Karamchand kuch chhupa raha hai.


" Tumhe kya lagta hai ? "
" YADHAV Family Family accept karegi Challenge ko ? "


" Wo to karegi hi, Atharva ke temper ko dekhte huye to pakka karegi. Aur unhe karna bhi padega kyuki sabko ko pata hai challenge ke baare mein aur agar wo accept nahi karte hai to wo laughing stock ban jaayenge puri City ke. "


" Tumhe kuch nahi pata Atharva ne pehle hi challenge accept kar liya hai. Ab ek good show dekhne ko milega. "



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3 DAY LATER



3 din bhut jaldi beet gaye. Aaj ke hi din Fragrant Sky City ke Public Square pe bhut kuch hone wala tha. Squar ke chaaro taraf Crowd ikhata hone lag gayi thi. JADHAV Family ke Member bhi jaldi hi Pahuch gaye Square ke ek side pe Bich mein Karamchand khada tha aur uske piche JADHAV Family ke 20 member khade they.


Karamchand bhut hi relax aur refresh lag raha tha jaise usey pata ho ki wo ho jeetega aaj. Uske bagal mein ek White Robe pehle huye Third Young Lord khada tha. Kayi log usey hi dekh rahe they kyuki unhone isey Kabhi nahi dekha tha aur wo jaldi se pata lagana chahte they ki wo kon hai ?


Karamchand " humph, abhi tak YADHAV Family Family kyu nahi aayi hai yaha ? "
" Lagta hai wo yaha aane se dar rahe hai. Hahahhaa. "



Tabhi bidh me se koi jor se chillaya " Dekho YADHAV Family bhi aa gayi hai. "


" Jisne Black Robe pehna hai wo to Young Master Atharva hai. Inke imposing appearance aur Handsome face ko dekho. Ye sach mein ek talented man hai. "


Sabhi YADHAV Family Family ke Members bhi aa chuke they aur JADHAV Family ke opposite side khade ho gaye they. Dono Group ko dekh ke koi bhi sakta tha ki dono Group ki strength equal hai.


Karamchand " Kailashnath, tumhari Family ko is fight mein kon represent karega ? "


Kailashnath " Sabko pata hai, mera beta hi karega. "


Kailashnath ne cold tone mein kaha. Atharva ko nazar bhi us Third Young Lord pe jaa chuki thi aur usko dekh ke hi usey JADHAV Family ki puri kahani samajh aa gayi thi.


Kailashnath " Aur JADHAV Family ko kon represent karega ? "
" Kyuki tumhari Family mein to koi bhi capable nahi hai aur jo tha usko to mere bete ne kahi ka nahi chhoda. Hahahaha. "


Karamchand ke expression ek dum se cold ho gaye kyuki Kailashnath ka har ek word kisi knife ki tarah uske heart mein ghus rahe they.


Karamchand " humph, tumhe uski chinta karne ki koi jaroorat nahi hai. Hai koi jo hamari JADHAV Family koi represent karega. "


Jaise hi usne bolna band kiya, wo Third Young Lord apni Early QI HAI Realm ki QI release karte huye Fighting stage pe aa gaya. Usne Atharva ki taraf ek disgusting look se dekha aur bola.


" Atharva jaldi se stage pe aao aur apni Death accept karo. "


Atharva ki aankhe ek dum Red ho gayi ye sunke kyuki Wo past Life mein ek Greatest Saint tha aur is baat ka pride uski bones, uski soul se nikal ke aata tha. Past life mein wo aise pure Divine Continent ko usne Dominate kiya tha aur aaj Eastern Continent ki sabse Weak Province ke Sabse weak City ka ladka usse aisa baat kar raha hai. Agar ye past life mein hua hota to wo ek strike mein pure Eastern Continent ko World Map se mita deta lekin ab baat alag thi lekin Gussa to pehle wala hi tha. Usey fark nahi padta kon enemy hai uska status kya hai. Agar wo Beshak Red City ki Famous Family ke Young Lord bhi hai to bhi wo usey jinda nahi chodega uski insult karne ke liye. Agar koi usey offend karta hai to wo uska enemy hai aur wo koi mercy show nahi karega apne enemy ke saamne.


Atharva ne jump liya aur Third Young Lord ke saamne khada ho gaya. Atharva ki aankh ek dum cold thi jaise wo abhi saamne wale ko faad ke rakh dega.


Karamchand " Main ek baat clear kar dena chahta hu. Aaj ka duel ek deathmatch hoga. Do person Stage pe gaye hai lekin ek hi wapis utrega. Aur jo Family haaregi wo apni Pill Shop bina koi Hesitation ke handover kar degi. "


Kayi log ye sunne ke baad Atharva ke liye pity feel karne lage they, unko lag raha tha Atharva haar hi jaayega aur is Death Match ki baat ne to sabki hila diya tha. Ye sab Karamchand ka trap tha aur ab YADHAV Family Family piche bhi nahi hat sakti thi.


Atharva " Jo Karamchand ne kaha hai wo sahi hai aaj is Stage se sirf ek hi person utrega aur doosra yahi khatam ho jaayega aur agar koi is Duel ke bich mein aata hai to wo aaj se mujhe Grandfather kehke bulayega. Hahahaha. "


Third Lord " kitne innocent ho tum. Tumhe maarna kisi ant ko maarne jaisa hoga. "


Third young lord hasne laga jor se, wo itna over confident tha ki wo apne opponent ko kuch samjh hi nahi raha tha.


Atharva " Tum ek disgusting poser ho. You really piss me off. "


Atharva ne ek cold tone mein kaha aur apni Body se ek murderous aura relase kar diya.












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TO BE CONTINUED.....

Excellent update bhai

 

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UPDATE NO - 18
( Ruthless )​

Third Lord " Hmph, tum ek weakling ho. Meri nazro mein tum kisi ant se kam nahi ho. Main tumhe easly 1 strike mein maar dunga. "


Third Young Lord ne Cold tone mein kaha. Usne apni QI release kar di aur Atharva ki taraf ek Powerful Punch throw kar diya. Punch itna Strong tha ki aaspaas ki Air mein thundering Sound aane laga tha. Wo Young Lord apni jagah se ek dum se gayab ho gaya aur Atharva ke saamne pahuch gaya. Dekhne walo ko to aisa lag raha tha ki Atharva sach mein sirf 1 Strike hi jhel paayega.


Atharva " Too Weak. "


Atharva ne dheere se bola aur ek dum se uski Dantian mein jo Dragon Mark tha wo jor se hilne laga aur ek dum se Atharva ne Apni QI ko Apne Punch mein Flow karwaya aur Third Young Lord ke Punch ke saamne apna Punch kar diya.


Bang !!


Jaise hi dono Punch aapas mein takraye waise hi waha pe ek Bang ki sound ke pure Area mein ek powerful wave faill gayi. Lekin jo next Scene tha usse sab surprise ho gaye they.


Clop !! Clop !! Clop !!




Wo Third Young Lord, three Step piche chala gaya tha aur Punch ki wajah se uske hath pura Numb ho gaya tha. Uski QI ka flow bhi Body mein bigad gaya tha.


" What "


Third Young Lord ne chillate huye kaha aur Atharva ko Surprise hote huye dekhne laga kyuki Atharva apni usi jagah pe khada tha aur uske dono hath uski Back pe they jaise kuch hua hi nahi ho. Aur yahi baat Third Young Lord ko hazam nahi ho rahi thi Kyuki wo jabse Paida hua hai tabse sab usey Genius samjhte hai Uske Father jo Parjapati family ke Chief hai wo bhi apne sabse Chote bete se yaani Third Young Lord se pyaar karte hai. Aur Atharva ke sath abhi jo Clash hua to usey pata lag gaya tha ki Atharva sirf QI JING Realm ke peak pe hai.


QI JING Realm Five Foundation Realm mein sabse pehle aata hai aur isme QI puri Body mein Faili huyi hoti hai. Lekin QI HAI Realm ke Warrior ki QI ek jagah ikhata hoti hai aur usey QI Sea kehte hai. Dono Realm mein bhut jyada difference hai kyuki QI JING Realm ke Warrior apni QI ka dhang se use nahi kar paate kyuki wo puri body mein faili huyi hoti hai lekin Atharva ki baat alag hai usey Past Life ka experience hai to usey pata hai kaise apni QI ko control karna hai, isliye wo normal Warrior se bhut aage hai aur Atharva The Dragon Transformation Skill Cultivate kar raha hai to Uski QI bhi ek jagah Us Dragon Mark mein hai, jis wajah se wo Aur bhi Strong hai.


Atharva " Tum bhut weak ho. Maine sirf apni 70% Strength use ki thi. "


Atharva ne ye baat bhut Arrogant tone mein kahi thi, jaise wo Third Young Lord ki sidhe Sidhe insult kar raha ho.


Third Lord " Atharva, tum abhi jeete nahi ho. Tumse deal karne ke liye mere paas bahut se tarike hai. "


Third Lord apni Jagah thik se khada hua aur apne dono hatho ko jod ke Atharva ki taraf point kar diye. Kuch Second mein hi uski Finger se ek Halke Golden Colour ki ek Badi Finger Ban gayi aur Sidha Atharva ki taraf badh gayi.


" Bright Yellow Finger. "


Ye ek Low Mortal Level ki Combat Skill thi Jo Atharva ki Six Solar Fingers ke saamne kuch bhi nahi thi. Atharva ki Combat Skill ke saamne ye bilkul hi Trash thi.


Atharva " Alright, Khel khelna band. "


Atharva ki Blood Aur QI kisi Dragon ki tarah strong ho rahi thi uski Cultivation Skill ki wajah se. Uske Right Hand mein ek dum QI flow hone lagi aur Uski Green Veins dikhne lagi aur uska Punch Green Light mein chamakne laga. Atharva ne us Bright Yellow Finger pe sirf wo Punch maara apni puri Strength se usey apni Six Solar Finger Use karne ki bhi Jaroorat nahi thi.


Boom !!


Atharva ka punch jaise hi Us Finger se Touch hua waise hi wo wahi tut ke bikhar gayi aur clash se jo Waves Create huyi thi wo Chaaro taraf fail gayi. Is Collision se wo Third Lord 5 step pich chala gaya aur Uske Muh se khoon nikalne lag gaya.


Atharva apni jagah se ek dum se gayab ho gaya aur Us Third Lord ke saamne aa gaya aur ek Kich uski Chest pe maar di jisse wo 10 Step aur piche chala gaya lekin is baar wo khada nahi tha lekin Niche gira hua tha. Ek baar fir Atharva swoosh ki awaz ke sath uske saamne aa gaya.


Atharva " Main tumhe feel karwaunga ki Human sandbag kaisa hota hai. "


Itna bolke Atharva ne usey apne dono hatho se uthaya aur pure Force ke sath Usey waha Public Square mein ek Boulder rakha tha uspe deke maara.


Bang !!


Shockwave ke sath Haddi tutne ki bhi awaz saaf suni jaa sakti thi. Aur ye scene dekhke waha khade sabhi logo ki Rid ki haddi thandi pad gayi thi.


AHhhh !!


Wo Third Lord jor se chillane laga pain mein. Waha khade sab log khaskar JADAV family ke Members surprise ho gaye thi ki Early QI HAI Realm ka warrior itni aasani se haar gaya.


Atharva ne Usko fir se uthaya aur fir zameen pe de mara.


Bang !! Bang !! Bang !!


Har ek Hit ke sath ek horrible Sound Create ho raha tha aur Crowd to ek dum saant hi ho gayi thi. Unhone pehle bhi Atharva ki Cruel side dekhi hai lekin yaha baat Parjapati family ke Young Lord ki ho rahi thi.
Third Lord non-stop chilla raha tha uska blood har taraf bhikra hua tha wo Atharva ke hath mein kisi khilone jaisa lag raha tha.


" Little Bastard, Stop. Tumhari himmat kaise huyi Parjapati family ke Young master ke saath aisa behave karne ki. "


Ye usi old man ki Awaz thi jo us Din Third Lord ke sath Mayor Mansion mein aaya tha.


" What ? "
" Parjapati family ? "
" Red City ?"
" Ye Parjapati family ka Young Lord hai ? "


" Oh No !!,is baar Atharva ne ek Iron wall mein takkar maari hai. "


Parjapati family ka naam sunke puri Crowd sant ho gayi thi yaha tak ki Mayor Family ke members ke Face bhi badal gaye they. Sabko lag raha tha ki Red City aur Parjapati family ka naam sunke Atharva ruk jaayega lekin aisa hua nahi.


Atharva " Shut Up. Old fool kya tumhe Death match ke rules mahi pata ? Get Lost. "


Atharva ne aisa bolke apni ek leg us niche pade Third Lord ke Face pe rakh di.


' Arrogant '
' Wild '
' Overbearing '


Apne opponent ki Identity jaanne ke baad bhi uske Face pe apna foot rakh ke khada tha Atharva aur ek Mid QI HAI Realm ke Warrior se aise baat kar raha tha jaise wo koi uska Servent ho. Pata nahi ye kaise End hoga lekin ye Scene dekh ke hi City ke logo mein Atharva ke liye Respect aa gayi thi. Is World mein Chahte kya hai Dominate karna lekin har kisi se nahi ho pata lekin jab koi aisa karta hai to uske liye respect aa hi jaati hai.


Kailashnath " Atharva. "


Kailashnath ko bilkul andaza nahi tha ki ye Ladka Parjapati family ka Third Lord hai. Atharva ko nahi pata tha lekin Kailashnath ko pata tha ki Parjapati family kitni Strong hai. Us Family ka Ek Warrior aake is puri City ko maar sakta hai to unke saamne YADAV Family kya cheez hai.


Atharva " Stop Dad. Aaj jo kuch ho raha hai wo mera decision hai aap beech mein mat aaiye. Hume Death match ke rules follow karne honge hum is Parjapati family jaise Disgusting nahi hai jo kisi Death match ko beech mein roke. "


Atharva ne ye baat jor se boli aur uske face pe apne foot ko press karne laga.


" Fuck, ek man ko aisa hi hona chahiye. "


" Agar mein iske jaise kuch moments bhi behave kar paau to wo puri life ke Liye worth hai. "


" Tum Death match ke Rules nahi tod sakte. Get out, ek Death Match ka result ek warrior ki death se hi hota hai. "


Kayi log Atharva ke action dekhke khus ho gaye they aur jor se chillane lage they. Haan. Red City ki Parjapati family bahut Strong hai aur wo unhe offend nahi kar sakte lekin fir bhi sab apne opinion de rahe they.


Aaj ka Challenge JADAV family ne rakha tha aur Rules bhi sab unke they fir unki Family ko koi Outsider represent kar raha tha jo bhut galat baat thi aur ab haar rahe hai to khud ke banaye huye Rules hi tod rahe hai. Lagta hai JADAV family ke paas koi Dignity naam ki koi cheez hi nahi hai.


Atharva " Old man, is Stage se niche utar jao warna iska face yahi Crush kar dunga. "


Us old Man ko bhut tez gussa aa raha tha wo Parjapati family ka elder tha aur aaj tak kisi ne usse aise baat nahi ki thi. Agar kisi ne ye baat kahi hoti to wo usko thousand pieces mein faad deta. Lekin abhi wo kuch nahi kar sakta tha Kyuki uska ek move uske Young Lord ki jaan le sakta tha.


Atharva ne ek baar us old man ko dekha aur fir JADAV family ko aur fir apne Dad ko jo abhi bhi chinta mein they aur fir usne us Third Lord ki taraf dekha aur fir apne Foot mein QI Flow karwate huye ek dum se us Third Lord ki khopdi ko fod diya.


Crack !!


Crack ke sound uski Khopdi puri khul gayi aur uska brain bahar nikal ke aa gaye aur blood kisi River ki tarah behne laga.


Ye bhut violent tha, bloody tha. Kayi log to aisa Scene dekhke vomit karne lage they. Unhone killing dekhi thi lekin itni Ruthless tarike se nahi. Kisi ne nahi socha tha ki Atharva itni asaani se kisi ko maar dega bina palke jhapkaye jaise killing to uska roz ka kaam ho. Ab jaise usne behave kiya tha usse saaf ho gaya tha jo Atharva ko offend karega wo usey maar dega fir wo beshak God ka beta hi kyu na ho.


" What !! "


Saamne ke scene ko dekhke old man aur Karamchand dono ek sath chillaye. Is Third Young Lord ke marne ki wajah se bhut badi problem khadi ho gayi thi sabke saamne.


" Little Bastard, main tujhe jaan se maar dunga. "


Wo ek dum se Atharva ki taraf bad gaya. Atharva ki aankho mein killing intent saaf dikh raha tha aur ek Mid QI HAI Realm ke Warrior ko face karte huye bhi uske expression ek dum calm they . Atharva ki Dantian mein Dragon Mark jor se hillne laga aur Atharva ne apni Finger kisi sword ki tarah Us Old man ki taraf point kar di. Usne mann bana liya tha ki wo Six Solar Finger ki First Finger ko full power mein release karega.


Shooop !!


Ek Golden Finger kisi Sword ki tarah ek dum lighting speed se us old man ki taraf badh gayi. Apni taraf aate huye powerful attack ko dekh ke uski speed dheere ho gayi aur usne Atharva ke attack ki taraf ek Palm Skill se attack kar diya.


Swoosh !!


Isi sound ko create karte huye Atharva ka attack us palm ko half mein karte huye sidha us Old men ki Chest mein ek Hole karte huye nikal gaya.


" Ye konsi Combat Skill hai ? "


Puri Crowd ka dhyan us Old man ki death se hatke Atharva ki Combat Skill pe atak gaya tha Kyuki unhone Apne life mein aisa Skill nahi dekhi thi. Yaha tak ki Kailashnath ka bhi muh khula tha kyuki usne bhi ye Skill pehli baar dekhi thi aur ye bilkul YADAV Family ki koi Skill nahi thi.


Atharva ki body bhi puri hill gayi thi uska face bhi pila pad gaya tha aur khade hone mein bhi dikkat ho rahi thi. Ek Earth Level ki Combat Skill use karna wo bhi uski Current Strength ke sath impossible tha. Is ek Attack ne hi Atharva ki saari Yuan Energy khatam kar di thi.


Pichli baar jab usne Six Solar Fingers ki First finger use ki thi tab wo First Finger ki half power bhi nahi thi lekin aaj usne Full power use ki thi to itna Backlash to normal tha.


Ek dum se puri Crowd ne shor machana suru kar diya tha. Aur sabki nazar us 18 saal ke ladke pe ruk gayi thi.


Uska vision kisi Ice ki tarah Cold tha.


Uske Expression kisi Water ki tarah Calm they.


Uska Mind kisi Ocean ki tarah Shaant tha.


Uska Courage jo ki Unlimited tha.


Is Scene ke baad JADAV family Apni Pill Shop ki Key deke waha se nikal gayi aur YADAV Family ne un dono dead bodies ko wahi jala diya aur wo bhi Mayor Mansion ki taraf chale gaye aur thodi der mein puri Crowd Apne apne kaam mein lag gayi. Sab kuch ek dum se shant ho gaya tha. Lekin sabko pata tha ki aaj ke event ke baad Fragrant Sky City ke peaceful day jaldi hi khatam hone wale hai. In 28 Cities mein sabse badi City Red City hai aur usey baaki kisi City mein kya ho raha hai usse koi farak nahi padta lekin aaj jo hua usse jaroor farak padne wala tha.



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JADHAV FAMILY



" Chief kya hum aise hi apni Pill Shop unko de denge. "


Karamchand " aur nahi to kya. Lekin tum jaldi se Red City jao aur Parjapati family ko aaj ke baare mein sab bata do. "


" Alright. "


Wo shaks jaldi se nikal gaya. Uske jaate hi Karamchand jor se hasne lag gaya.


Karamchand " Hahahaha, wo din dur nahi jab Parjapati family yaha aake puri YADAV Family ko khatam kar degi for ye City aur Pill Shops meri hi to hongi. Aur JADAV family ka sabI pe raaz hoga. Hahaha. "



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Jai " Mayor ab Parjapati family ka samna kaise karenge ? "
" Hume kuch to taiyari karni padegi. "


Kailashnath ke face pe bhi tension thi kyuki Parjapati family ke baare mein ache se pata tha wo Family bhut Cruel aur Strong hai YADAV Family uske samne kuch bhi nahi hai.


Atharva " Parjapati family ko main dekh lunga. "


Atharva ne ek dum Calm tone mein kaha jaise agar Sky bhi niche gir jaati hai to bhi wo Calm hi rahega. YADAV Family ke Member ek dusre ki taraf dekhne lage they. Unhe samajh nahi aa raha tha ki unke Young Master mein Red City ka naam sunne ke baad bhi itna Confidence kyu hai. Lekin Atharva ke past actions ko dekh ke unhe lag raha tha ki unka Young Master sab kuch sambhal lega.


Atharva " Main Cultivate karne jaa raha hu mujhe koi disturb na kare. Aur Dad apne sabhi Combat Forces ko ikhta kijiye. "


Kailashnath " Apni Force ko ikhta kyu karna hai ? "
" Atharva tum kya karna chahte ho ? "


Atharva " Mujhe nahi pata Parjapati family kya karegi ? "
" Lekin aaj Raat ko Fragrant Sky City me JADAV family ka koi Member jinda nahi rahega. "


Kailashnath " Tumhara kya matlab hai ? "
" hum JADAV family ke sath All-out War Start kar denge ? "


Atharva ne haan mein apna Sir hilaya aur waha se chala gaya.


Kailashnath " Jaisa Atharva ne kaha hai waisa hi karo. Aur apni YADAV Family ki sabhi Forces ko ikhta karo. "


Kailashnath ne Atharva mein Confidence dikhate huye kaha.


Aaj Fragrant Sky City wo feel karegi jo pehle kabhi mehsoos nahi kiya usne, aur Karamchand bhut tez hai lekin usey koi andaza nahi hai ki aaj raat ko YADAV Family All-out War start kar degi. Uske hisab se to YADAV Family ko abhi darke maare chup jaana chahiye Parjapati family ki wajah se. Lekin usey Atharva ke dimag ke baare mein bilkul nahi pata tha ki Atharva wo karega jo usne bilkul except hi na kiya ho.









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UPDATE NO - 19
(Ruthless-2)​

Jaha Jadhav Family ek dum shaant thi aur Parjapati Family ke aane ka wait kar rahi thi wahi YADAV Family mein chahl-pehel machi huyi thi. YADAV Family ke Core members aur Jai Sabhi Combat Forces ko ikhtata kar rahe they aur wait kar rahe they Atharva ki Command ka.


Wahi jab pura Mayor Mansion busy tha wahi Atharva ka Mansion ek dum Shaant tha jaise waha koi rehta hi na ho. Atharva apne Room Yard mein baith ke Cultivate kar raha tha aur Jo benifit usey aaj ki battle se mile they unhe samajh raha tha. Halanki Third Lord ki strength kabhi bhi Atharva ko khatra nahi lagi lekin wo abhi bhi sirf QI JING Realm mein hi tha. Ab bas wo ek step dur tha Early QI HAI Realm mein Breakthrough karne se. Usey bas ek opportunity chahiye thi jo aaj usey mil gayi thi.


Atharva niche Crossed leg position mein baitha aur uska Pura Focus The Dragon Transformation Skill ko Cultivate karne pe tha. Kuch hi minutes mein second Dragon Mark bhi pura Form ho chuka tha. Aur uski Dantian mein Crack aane lag gaye they jo Breakthrough ke Sign they. Ab Dantian tut ke QI Sea mein badlne wali thi aur yahi process hota hai QI HAI Realm mein Breakthrough karne ka.


Whoosh !!


Is Sound ke sath Dantian ka Crack pura open ho gaya aur saari QI ek Sea ke roop mein Form hone lagi aur 2 Dragon Marks usi QI Sea ke upper ud rahe they. Ab jo QI Sea form huyi thi ye bilkul khaali thi kyuki naye Realm aane ki wajah se Usey jyada Yuan Energy chahiye. Isliye Atharva full speed se The Dragon Transformation Skill ko Cultivate karta raha aur kisi bottomless hole ki tarah apne aaspaas ki QI absorb karta raha. Thodi hi Der mein Pure Mayor Mansion ki QI ek dum se khatam ho gayi aur Atharva ke Mansion ke upper ek bada sa Cyclone banne lag gaya jo time ke sath bada hi hota jaa raha tha.


Mayor Mansion mein sabhi log ye dekh ke kaafi excited ho gaye. Jo log QI HAI Realm mein they unhe pata tha aisa scene QI HAI Realm mein Breakthrough karne par hi banta hai aur jaha pe Scene ho raha tha waha pe unke Young Master ka room tha to sab khus ho gaye they.


Ek 18 year old QI HAI Realm ka warrior puri Fragrant Sky City mein aisa pehli baar hua tha. Isse sablog sadme me bhi they aur khus bhi they. Kuch hi minute mein Atharva ne apne aaspaas ki saari QI absorb kar li.


" Abhi bhi QI Sea puri form karne me kaafi kasar hai. Is Area ki QI kaafi weak hai. Mujhe Mortal Restoration Pills hi leni padengi. "


Usne ek Jade bottle nikal aur usme 10 Mortal Restoration Pills nikal ke apne muh mein daal li. Pill uski body mein jaate hi The Dragon Transformation Skill ki wajah se jaldi hi Yuan Energy mein badal gayi aur Atharva ki QI Sea ko pura karne lagi. In 10 Pill ki wajah se Atharva ki QI Sea mein Third Dragon Mark bhi aadha Complete ho gaya tha.


" Ek Normal Warrior ko Breakthrough karne mein Pills ki jaroorat nahi padti wo surrounding ki QI se hi Breakthrough kar leta hai. Ek Genius ko Breakthrough karne ke liye kam se kam 4-5 Pills Chahiye hoti hai lekin mujhe 10 Pills lagi hai iska matlab ye The Dragon Transformation Skill bhut khatarnak hai. Waise mere liye to ye good news hi hai jitna jyada main Consume karunga utna jyada mera potential hoga. Hahaha. "


Thodi der mein Atharva ne apni aankhe kholi ahi uski Body mein uski QI Sea puri tarah form ho chuki thi aur uski QI ki water ki tarah us Sea mein flow kar rahi thi us water ke upper hi 2 Complete Red Dragon ghum rahe they aur ek Half Complete Dragon ghum raha tha.


" Third Dragon Mark bhi Half Complete ho gaya ye to maine bhi nahi socha tha. Abhi mere har strike mein 25,000 pound ka Force hai. "


Atharva ne halka sa Smile kiya kyuki ab uski power ek norma Late QI HAI Realm ke Warrior ke jitni thi. Haa lekin ye abhi Jo bilkul Peak expert they Jaise Kailashnath aur Karamchand unke Comparison ki nahi thi lekin agar Atharva inse Fight karta bhi hai to ye dono milke Atharva ko injured kar sakte hai lekin maar nahi paayenge.


The Dragon Transformation Skill sirf Atharva ka Cultivation hi nahi badha rahi thi balki Atharva ka Blood aur Body bhi har ek Realm ke sath Strong hota jaa raha tha. Agar Atharva is Life mein Great Saint Ream tak pahuch jaata hai to uski body kisi Dragon jaisi Hard ho jaayegi.


" What ? "
" Main Divine Sense use kar sakta hu ? "


Atharva ne surprise hote huye khud se kaha. Atharva ke single thought se ek Invisible Force Atharva ke Mind se nikla jo uske aaspaas ke 100 meter area mein fail gaya aur is Area mein jo bhi ho raha tha wo Atharva ko feel hone laga usey grass ka hilna bugs ka udna sab mehsoos ho raha tha. Usne apni Divine sense wapis khich li.


" Ek Normal warrior apni Divine Sense Mortal Core Realm mein Breakthrough karne ke baad use kar sakta hai. Mujhe nahi pata tha ki main QI HAI Realm mein hi DiVine Sense Unlock kar lunga. The Dragon Transformation Skill sach mein ek Divine Skill hai. "


Jitna Atharva is baat ke baare mein sochta utna hi khus ho jaata kyuki usey Cultivation ka experience sabse jyada tha to usey pata tha QI HAI Realm mein Divine Sense use nahi kar sakte lekin wo use kar paa raha tha matlab The Dragon Transformation Skill wakayi mein ek terrifying Skill hai. Ye Skill usey ek Ancient Era ke Ruins se mili thi koi bhi Saint level ki Skill ki bhi iske Comparison mein kuch bhi nahi thi.


Atharva ne QI HAI Realm mein Breakthrough kar liya tha aur wo Early Stage pe tha. Lekin wo fir bhi uthke bahar nahi gaya kyuki abhi raat nahi huyi thi isliye wo wahi baitha raha aur apne foundation ko solid banata raha.


Suraj dhal gaya aur raat ho gayi. Atharva ne ek Black Robe pehna aur apne Mansion se bahar aa gaya. Aaj Fragrant Sky City mein ek sleepless night hone wali thi jisme sirf khoon hi bahega.


Mansion ke ander ek large bonfire jal rahi thi. Waha pe kam se kam 150 Warrior khade they jinke aage Kailashnath, Jai, aur baaki ke 6-7 Elder khade they jo QI HAI Realm mein hi they sab logo ko bas Atharva ki command ka hi wait tha thodi der mein unhe Atharva aata hua dikhayi diya.


Atharva " Dad, kya sab taiyar hai ? "


Kailashnath " Haa, humne apne sabhi Warriors ko bula liya hai lekin jo apni Properties pe warriors hai wo wahi hai kyuki Jadhav Family kahi apni Piche se attack na kar de properties pe. "


Jai " Young Master, kya plan hai aapka ? "


Atharva " Plan, humey koi Plan nahi chahiye. Aaj raat ke baad koi Jadhav Family nahi hogi. Dad 4 QI Hai Warriors ko Jadhav Family ki properties pe attack karne ke liye bhejiye aur baaki sab Jadhav Family pe direct attack karenge. "


Jai " Young Master, hamari Strength Jadhav Family se jyada nahi balki unke barabar hai aur agar hum unki properties pe bhi ek sath attack karenge to hum Jadhav Family se kaise jeet paayenge. "


Jai ko koi idea nahi tha ki Atharva ne itni jalbaazi mein War kyu declare kar di Jadhav Family ke khilaaf. Lekin jab dono Force equally strong ho to nuksaan dono side bhi ho sakta hai.


Atharva " Fuck, abse tumhe sirf mere order maanne hai aur jo main bolu wo karna hai. Main tumhe 4 QI HAI Warrior dunga aur tum ek ek karke Jadhav Family ki saari Properties apne kabje mein le loge War end hone tak. Agar tum aisa nahi kar sakte to Future mein apni sakal mat dikhana mujhe. "


Atharva ne badi Cold Tone mein ye baat boli aur Cold nazro se hi usse dekhne laga. Jai ke maathe pe pasina aa gaya usko ek single gaze se hi ye lag raha tha usey koi 18 saal ka ladka nahi balki koi thousand years old Demon dekh raha hai.


Jai " Yes, Young Master. "


Jai Atharva ke saamne Jhuka aur 4 QI HAI Realm ke Warrior leke chala gaya.


Atharva " Chang, tum 20 warrior ki team ko lead karoge aur Puri Fragrant Sky City ko Clear karoge aaj raat koi bhi apne ghar se bahar nahi niklna chahiye."


Atharva kisi Commander ki tarah orders de raha tha. Wo nahi chahta tha ki 2 Familles ki ladayi mein koi innocent hurt ho. Lekin dono families ki properties puri City mein faili huyi aur ek baar War start huyi to Puri City kisi Warzone mein badal jaayegi. Aur us time koi normal person apne ghar se bahar hota hai to wo Fights ke impact se hi mar jaayega aur Atharva aisa bilkul nahi chahta tha.


Chang " Yes Young Master. "


Atharva jo kahega wo Chang jaroor karega agar Atharva kehta hai ki uska Fart sungh to wo bhi karega wo.


Atharva " baaki sab mujhe aur mere Dad ko follow karo hum sidha Jadhav Family ke Mansion pe attack karenge. "


Aur Atharva ke itna kehte hi sab log apni jagah se gayab ho gaye aur apne apne orders ke hisab se jaane lage. Is waqt Atharva aur Kailashnath sabse aage full speed se Jadhav Family ki taraf badh rahe they. Tabhi puri City mein Fights ki awaz aa rahi thi Jadhav Family ki Properties jal rahi thi puri City mein ek dum se Chaos sa mach gaya tha.


Puri Fragrant Sky City kuch hi minute mein ek Warzone mein badal gayi thi normal people apne gharo mein darey huye baithe they aur War khatam hone ka wait kar rahe they. City ki aadhi se jyada khoon se bhar gayi thi. Sabko pata tha beshak koi bhi jeete lekin kal City pehle jaisi nahi rahegi.



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JADHAV FAMILY



" Chief, kuch bahut bura hua hai. "


Karamchand " Kya hua hai ? "


" Chief hamari Saari properties pe attack hua hai aur hum aadhe se jyada property pehle hi kho chuke aur baaki ko bachana bhi impossible lag raha hai. "


Karamchand " What ? "
" Kailashnath mere sath War declare kar raha hai ? "
" Usey to abhi kisi bill mein chupa hona chahiye. "


Karamchand ek dum se bhut tez gussa ho gaya uska plan bas ek jagah baithke Parjapati Family ko YADAV family ke sath uljhate huye dekhna tha lekin ab sab kuch ulta ho chuka tha. 15 minute mein Jadhav Family mein 100 Warrior ikhte ho chuke they jisme se 5 QI HAI Realm mein they. Kuch hi minute mein Atharva aur Kailashnath Jadhav Family ke samne aa chuke they Gate ke bahar hi Karamchand aur uski force khadi thi. Is time dono force ek doosre ke saamne khadi thi aur dono taraf ke log ek doosre ko nafrat bhari nazro se dekh rahe they.


Karamchand " Maine nahi socha tha Kailashnath tum meri Jadhav Family ke sath War Start kar doge. "


Atharva " Fuck You. Attack. "


Aur Atharva ne apni Sword nikali aur Jadhav Family ki taraf tezi se badh gaya aur uske piche saare warrior chillate huye aage badh gaye. 1 minute mein hi dono side ek dusre ke sath Clash ho gayi.


Karamchand " Main Kailashnath ko dekhta hu tum sab is Atharva ko jaan se maar do. "


Ye baat usne apne 5 QI HAI Realm ke Warrior se kahi thi. Uski awaz sunte hi Mid QI HAI Realm ka ek Old man Atharva ki taraf tezi se badh gaya apni QI release karte huye usey laga Atharva abhi bhi QI JING Realm mein hi hai aur usey wo aise hi supress kar dega. Lekin hua ulta hi jaise hi wo Atharva ke paas pahucha aur apna hath usey maarne ke liye uthaya waise hi Atharva apni Jagah se kisi Flash ki tarah gayab ho gaya.


" Die. "


Ek dum se Atharva us old man ke piche aa gaya aur Uski kisi Lighting ki tarah move huye aur Old man ki sir ko uski body se alag kar diya. Ye bilkul normal sword thi lekin Atharva isme apni QI flow karwa raha tha lekin normal sword hone ki wajah se wo sword bhi us Old Man ka gala kaatte hi kisi powder mein badal gayi.


Splash !!


Us Old man ki body ek dum se niche gir gayi aur blood kisi fountain ki tarah nikalne laga kuch blood to Atharva ke Face aur aur uske robe pe bhi gir gaya tha. Sabhi log ye scene dekh ke ruk gaye unke liye ek impossible scene tha unhone bahut killing dekhi hai lekin koi Early QI HAI Realm ke warrior ko kisi Mid QI HAI Realm ke warrior ko aise maarte huye nahi dekha. Ye scene itna fast tha ki normal warriors ko to kuch samjh hi nahi aaya. Jadhav Family waalo ka to muh chota sa ho gaya tha aur YADAV Family ke Warriors mein ek nayi spirit si aa gayi thi aur wo sab log Chillate huye fir se attack karne lage. Atharva us Old man ki body pe ek leg rakh ke khada tha aur un 4 QI HAI Warriors ko Cold nazro se dekh raha tha. Un chaaro ka gala sukh gaya tha ye scene dekh ke unhe bilkul bhi ye nahi lag raha tha ki unke saamne ek 18 saal ka ladka khada hai. Unhe ye lag raha tha ki unke saamne koi WarGod khada hai jisne Thousands War ladi ho aur wo unhe kisi prey ki tarah dekh raha ho.











TO BE CONTINUED...

Writter Note:- Next Update mein pura Jadhav Family ka Chapter khatam ho jaayega aur Red City ka suru ho jaayega.
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UPDATE NO - 01
ATHARVA YADAV​

Hose me aane ke kuch Minutes k baad Atharva Yadav ko sb kuch smjh me aane laga.


Atharva Yadav kud se " Calender ki hisab se Ye Saint Origin world ka 3486 year hai. Mujhe mare hue 100 year se bhi jyada ho chuka hai. "
" Atharva Yadav ! Mera name Atharva Yadav hai. "
" 100 year ke baad aakhir mera punarjanm kyu hua hai ? "


Ji ha dosto ye Hmari story ka Hero Atharva Yadav hai. Jo ki 100 year phle Saint Origin world ka greatest Saint tha. Isne Sky ko bich se cut karke hmari duniya ke hamesa se band pade door ko break kr diya tha. Jisase Hmari duniya ke logo ke liye ek naye Universe ka rasta open ho gaya jo ki Immortal Realm kahlata hai. Lakin aisa karne ke dauran use apne body ke blood ki last drop tak ko kimat ke roop me cukani padi thi. Atharva ne kabhi bhi nahi socha tha ki wo kabhi bhi 100 year baad reborn hoga.


Fir Atharva ne apna sir uthaya aur mehsoos Kiya ki wo ek andhere, tutey huye kamre mein hai. Us kamre ki har diwar mein cracks they aur gate bahar se band tha. Usey andaja ho chuka tha ki uska kidnap ho Gaya hai.


Atharva ne gate ke doosri taraf kisi ki Bahar baat karte huye sauna.


" Brother yong, wo mayor Ka eklauta beta hai. Mayor usse bahut pyar karta hai, bhale hi wo useless hai. Agar mayor ko is baare mein pata Chala to hum barbaad ho jayenge. "


Is room ke Bahar 2 strong ladke khade they, Jinme se ek ka face chinta se bhara hua tha. Yeh Fragrant Sky city mein ek sunsaan jagah thi. Aam Dino mein Yaha koi aata jaata nahi tha.


" Darne ki koi baat nahi hai iske baare mein kisiko pata nahi chalega, mayor Ko bhi nahi. Iske alawa, is Atharva ka khoon pine ke baad hum turant hi Fragrant Sky City chod denge. Shuang mujhe pata hai tum apni baaki ki jindagi kisi looser ki Tarah nahi nikalana chahte. "


Yong ne ye baat shuang Ko ek cruel face ke sath kahi.


Yong ki baat sunne ke baad Shuang ke face se chinta ke bhaaw chale gaye, aur ab Uske face pe bhi same cruelty aa gayi thi jo Yong ke face pe thi.


Shuang " Jab se Atharva paida hua hai, tabse usey kayi Tarah ki achi pills di gayi hai, lekin wo abhi bhi QI JING Realm ke 1st stage pe hi hai. Lekin wo pills agar humey di gayi Hoti to hum abhi QI HAI Realm tak pahuch gaye hotey. Yaha tak ki MORTAL CORE Realm mein pahuchna bhi impossible nahi Hota."


Yong " Wo pills uspar barbaad ho gayi hai, kyu na wo humey in Sab Ka Anand lene de. Chalo koi nahi 3 din aur wait karte hai. Jab CLEANSING PILL uski body ki sabhi Impurities ko saaf Kar dengi, Uske baad hum uska khoon piyenge aur apni strength badhayenge. "


Atharva ne undono ki poori baat sun li thi aur ye Sab baate sunne ke baad Atharva ke face pe Uske pichle janam ki yaade samane aa gayi aur Uske face pe bhi ek cruel smile aa gayi.


Atharva " Dreaming about drinking my blood, tmdono ko to pine ke liye mera pishab milega. "


Atharva ne apni yaadast pe jor Diya aur usne paya ki Bahar 2 log kon they ! Ye dono hi mayor ke mansion ke Guards they. Aur dono hi usey nuksaan pahuchane aur uska khoon piney ke sapne dekh rahe they.


Atharva ke face darr aur chinta ke koi bhaaw nahi they, past mein ek Greatest SAINT hone ki wajah se usne countless dangerous battle ladi thi, iske alawa uski body ki impurities Ko dur karne ke liye jo pills di gayi thi, Uske proper effective hone mein 3 din Ka time tha. 3 Din baad Uske pass ek opportunity hogi fight back karne ki.


Bahar ke dono Guards ko ignore karte huye Atharva ne apni body ko janchana Suru Kar Diya aur apni body ke apndar itni saari PILLS ki Dekh Kar wo excited ho Gaya.


Atharva " Is body Ka Father Apne bete Ko achi PILLS khilana janta haï lekin ye nahi janta ki Uske bete ki body itni saari PILLS ko absorb nahi Kar sakti.
Saari PILLS is body mein jama ho gayi hai, thode din baad ye body khatam ho jaati. Lekin mere liye ye body aur PILLS kamaal ki hai. "


Atharva apni jagah pe uth ke baith Gaya. Wo apni past life mein ek Greatest SAINT tha, Uske liye in PILLS ko Absorb Karna baaye hath Ka khel tha.


Atharva " In dono Guards ne mujhe CLEANSING PILL bhi khilayi hai, lekin ye in high level PILLS par koi asar nahi karengi. "


Thodi der usne apni past life ki memories check ki aur usey ek aisi skill Yaad aayi jo kisi bhi PILLS ki Puri strength ko absorb Kar sakti hai, aur usne wo skill use Karni Suru Kar di.


Jaise hi Atharva ne apni skill use Karni start Kari waise hi, Uske ander stored PILLS ki power uski body ke chaaro taraf ghumne lagi, aur uski body badi tezi se us power ko absorb karne lagi.


PILLS ne uski body, blood, skin, bones ko refine Karna Suru Kar diya, Sab Kuch refine ho Raha tha sath-2 CLEANSING PILL ne bhi apna kaam start Kar diya tha jiski wajah se Atharva ki body ki IMPURITIES bhi khatam hone lagi thi.


Pichle 10 Saal mein usne jitni bhi PILLS khayi thi, wo bahut hi strong thi. Atharva ki body kisi bhi Treasure se Kam nahi thi. Isme koi surprise nahi tha ki ye 2 Guards usey nuksaan pahuchana chahte hai.


Atharva ke face pe ek smile thi ye PILLS lagataar Uski body ko refine kiye jaa rahi thi, usey Strong Bana rahi thi.


Level Up!

Atharva QI JING REALM ke 2nd stage pe pahuch Gaya tha. Keval ek ghante mein usne BREAKTHROUGH Kar liya tha.


QI JING REALM 3rd stage

4th stage

5th stage

Yaha tak BREAKTHROUGH Kar liye tha Atharva ne sirf ek din mein.


Uski body mein bhut saari PILLS abhi bhi jama thi, bhale hi wo QI JING REALM ke 5th stage pe pahuch Gaya tha lekin abhi tak usne sirf half hi PILLS use ki thi.


Wahi Bahar ki taraf Yong aur Shuang lagatar excited ho rahe they, aur badi hi besabri se 3 din pure hone ka intezaar kar rahe they.


Shuang " Brother Yong, Pura 1 din ho Gaya hai, kya humey usey abhi marke uska blood le lena Chahiye, aur Yaha se nikal jaana chahiye ?"


Yong "Nahi abhi uski body mein IMPURITIES hai Jo ki 3 din mein khatam hogi, tab tak humey wait karna hoga."


Room ke andar, Atharva abhi bhi meditation pose mein baitha tha aur Level Up hone pe enjoy Kar raha tha. SAINT ORIGIN UNIVERSE mein har koi Martial Arts practice karta tha, ek Baar koi human QI JING REALM KE 9th stage pe pahuch jaaye to wo apni DANTIAN mein QI HAI banane mein able ho jaate hai. QI HAI REALM pahuchne ke baad aate hai MORTAL CORE REALM, THE HEAVENLY CORE REALM, and THE DIVINE CORE REALM. Log inhe FOUNDATION 5 Levels bhi kehte hai.


QI JING REALM 5th stage pe pahuchne ke baad bhi Atharva nahi ruka, wo lagataar PILLS ko refine kiye jaa raha tha, halanki Level Up hone ki Speed ab kaafi slow ho gayi thi.


2 Din baad, Atharva ne Apne andar ki saari PILLS ko refine Kar liya tha aur 8th Level ke peak par pahuch Gaya tha. Keval ek step dur tha 9th Level ke.


Atharva " Maine 3 din mein 8th level ke peak tak BREAKTHROUGH Kar liya hai, Lagta hai is body ki yahi limit hai. "


Atharva bilkul saant Sikh Raha tha, agar Yaha koi dusra person hota jisne 3 din mein 1st Level se 8th level tak BREAKTHROUGH Kiya ho, to uski khusi Ka koi thikana nahi hota. Lekin Atharva ke liye ek Sab normal tha usne apni past Life mein isse bhi Jada achivement hasil Kiya tha. Sach kahu to wo apni past life mein ek MONSTER ya DEVIL se Kam nahi tha.


" Haha, khoon pine Ka samay aa Gaya hai."


Jaise hi room Ka gate open hua waise hi usne dono Guards ko haste huye ye kehte huye suna, Jo Kuch hi moments mein Atharva ke saamne aa gaye they.


Atharva niche se utha aur bina ek bhi second gawaye usne apni QI ko dono Hatho mein flow karwaya Aur dono Guards ke pait mein punch jad diye. Wo dono Kuch samajh paate isse pehle wo dono pich ki taraf udte huye gire.


Wo dono beshak Mayor ke Mansion ke Guards they lekin unka level abhi tak sirf 6th hi tha, isliye wo Atharva ke koi match nahi they.


Atharva apni back se dhool jhadte huye un dono Guards ki taraf chal pada, usey pata tha ki Uske punch mein kitni takat hai ab wo dono nahi uthenge. Yong aur Shuang dono niche pait pakadar pade they, unki aankho mein dar aur surprise ke mile Jule bhaaw they.


"Impossible, tum level one pe they, tum 3 din mein Level 8th pe kaise aa sakte ho?"


Yong chaunk Gaya tha, Mayor ke mansion ke Guard ke roop mein wo Atharva ko ache se janta tha, Atharva ek useless person tha Jo nature se bhi acha nahi tha, wo Apne Father ki power Ka galat istemaal karta tha, wo Apne Father ke bina Kuch nahi tha, lekin ab Ka haal Dekh ke dono Guards ko apni aankho pe vishwas nahi ho Raha tha. Unhe lag Raha tha Jaise unke saamne koi different person khada hai.


Atharva " Tum dono ki himmat kaise huyi Mera kidnap karne ki, mujhe batao tumhe aisa karne ke liye kisne kaha tha. "



Atharva ne Yong ki aur ghoor ke Dekha, wo koi pagal nahi tha Atharva ko pata tha ye low level Guards Kabhi bhi usko harm nahi pahucha sakte, jab tak koi inse aisa karne ko na kahe.


Yong "nahi-2 humey aisa karne ke liye kisi ne nahi kaha, wo to hum dono hi they Jo apka blood Pina chahte they. "


Atharva " Kyuki tum mujhe sach nahi batana chahte ho to, ab tumhe koi doosra mauka nahi milega. "



Atharva ne itna bolke ek step aage liya aur apni QI ko Apne hath mein flow karwate huye Yong ke skull ke upper pure force se strike Kiya, jisse Yong ki skull explode ho Gayi aur uska blood kisi fountain ki tarah Bahar nikalne laga Jo ki Atharva ke upper bhi gir Raha tha.


Atharva, Yong ki body ki taraf dekhte hue "Main doosra mauka nahi deta. "


Atharva aise behave Kar Raha tha Jaise Kuch hua hi na ho, usne apni past life mein isse bhi Jada bloody death Dekhi thi, isliye usey koi farak Nahi pad Raha tha.


Shuang ko Apne sir pe maut mandrati nazar aa rahi thi, wo koi brave person Nahi tha na hi usne aisa scene Kabhi Dekha tha. Uska chehra pila pad chuka tha aur wo dar ke maare kaamp Raha tha.


Atharva "ab tumhari baari, tum batao aisa karne ke liye kisne kaha tha? "


Atharva ne Shuang ki taraf mudte huye pucha.


Shuang dar se kapte hue " no-one Master, kisi ne bhi Nahi kaha, please meri jindagi baksh dijiye. "


Shuang ko bhut dar lag Raha tha, Jo Uske saamne khada tha wo usey Kahi se bhi uska Young Master Nahi lag Raha tha. Jis Tarah se Atharva ne yang ko maara wo bhut cruel tha.


Atharva " Abhi bhi sach Nahi batana chahte ho, koi baat Nahi main tumhe Nahi maarunga. Mujhe ek technique pata hai jisse jab tak Heart stop na ho tab tak person ki death Nahi Hoti, main ye technique tumpe use karunga, fir tumhari dono aankhey, kidney, liver Bahar nikal lunga, tumhar dono hath kaat dunga aur dono legs alag Kar dunga body se. Tab main tumhe tumhari body ke andar Ka ek ek part nikal ke dikhaunga, Uske baad main tumhar Heart nikalunga, agar tum strong huye to apna dhadakta hua Heart Dekh paaoge."


Itna kehne ke baad Atharva ke face pe evil smile aa Gayi AUR wo Shuang ki taraf badha hi tha ki.


Shuang " batata hu.... batata hu... "


Shuang ke puri body se pasine nikalne lage they, usey Atharva ki aankho mein sirf death dikh rahi thi aur Atharva ek Devil.


Atharva "jaldi karo, mere patience Ka test mat lo. "


Shuang " young Master ne humey ye Sab karne ke liye kaha tha aur unhone hi humey CLEANSING PILL Di thi. "


" Sohan ! "


Atharva ki memories mein ye naam familiar tha. Ye Sohan, Atharva ke Father Ka sautela beta tha. Kyuki Atharva bachpan se kamjor tha to Uske Father ne Sohan ko adopt Kar liye tha. Lekin Atharva ki memories mein Sohan hamesa se Atharva ki Care karta tha chahe Atharva Kuch bhi Kare aur wo hamesa se hi Atharva Ki har sahi galat kaam mein help karta tha.


Atharva " Sohan Mujhe kyu maarna Chahta hai? "


Shuang " Mayor ne apko itni kimti PILLS khilayi hai, isliye Sohan jealous hai aapse aur wo nafrat karta haï aapse. Agar aapko Kuch ho jaata hai to Yadav Family Ka ek-matr sakshm Leader ban Jayega wo. aur sabse badi baat kal Jadhav Family aur Yadav Family ke bich engagement day hai. Agar aap mar jaoge to wo Jadhav Family ki beti se Shaadi Kar payega."


Shuang ne dar ke maare Atharva ko Sab Kuch bata Diya.


Atharva " to ye baat hai. "


Atharva ke face ek gambhir smile thi. Jadhav Family Fragrant Sky City ki ek powerful Family hai. Wo business industry mein to number one pe they. Yaha tak ki Mayor bhi unhe sidhe-2 provoke Nahi Kar sakte they. Aur agar YADAV FAMILY aur JADHAV Family ek doosre ke Saath connection Bana rahe hai, to ye bahut badi beneficial baat thi dono Families ke liye.



Sohan bhut hi tez aur cunning hai, agar wo Atharva se Bada hota to ab tak Atharva mar chuka hota. Lekin ab situation bilkul different hai, The GREATEST SAINT ab is body ke andar hai, Sohan ko ab sirf DEATH hi milegi aur Kuch nahi.


Shuang " Young Master ab to Maine aapko Sab Kuch bata Diya hai, ab to Mujhe maaf Kar dijiye. "


Shuang, Atharva ke pairo mein girke gidgidane laga.

Atharva ne usey niche se uthaya aur uski chest mein hath daalke uska Heart Bahar nikal liye jo abhi beat ho Raha tha, ye usne itni fast Kiya tha ki Shuang ki body ki feel tak Nahi hua, Lekin Kuch hi second mein uski body niche gir Gayi aur Atharva ne wo Heart wahi Gira Diya.


Atharva, Shuang ki body ko dekhte hue " lo Kar Diya maaf. "




TO BE CONTINUED....






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UPDATE NO - 02
I WON'T DO IT, DO IT YOURSELF​

Un Dono Guards ko maarne ke baad Atharva ne apna sir Aakash ki taraf uthaya aur mehsoos Kiya ki der ho chuki hai. Wo chalte huye compound se bahar aaya aur chaaro taraf nazar ghumayi jaha sirf dessert tha, aur ek ajeeb si smell pure area mein failli huyi thi.


Uski memories ke anusaar ye area Fragrant Sky City ka sabse durgam aur sunsaan area tha. Aam Dino mein Yaha koi nahi aata jaata hai.


Atharva " Main Apni past life mein ek bahut strong person tha, isliye is life mein kisi weakling ki Tarah Nahi rahunga. Mera pichla janam bit Gaya, lekin Jo Gaya so gaya. Kyuki ab main is body main hu toh, ab se tum main hu aur main tum. Tumhari family meri family, tumhare enemy mere enemy. Future mein hum Saath badhenge.


Aur Atharva itna kehke ek smile ke sath us dessert ki taraf badh Gaya.


Mayor ke mansion mein 3 din se koraham Macha hua tha jabse Atharva gayab tha. Halanki jo Purana Atharva tha wo aisi buri harkate karta rehta tha, lekin wo Kabhi bhi 3 din se jada gayab Nahi hua tha.


Atharva Mayor ka eklauta beta tha. Halanki ek bhi din aisa Nahi guzra tha jab Mayor usey daantte na ho, lekin wo ander se usey sabse jyada pyar karte they. Koi bhi ye baat asaani se bata Sakta haï ye Dekh ke, ki kitni saari mehngi PILLS unhone Atharva ko khilayi hai.


Mayor mansion ke sabhi guard 3 din se Apne Young Master ko dhund rahe they, unhone 3 din mein Puri city Ka ek ek Kona Dekh liya tha lekin Atharva Ka koi naamo nishaan Nahi tha. Aant mein Mayor ne sabhi Guards ko order de Diya tha ki, agar sunset se pehle Atharva Nahi Mila to kisi bhi Guard wapas lautne ki jarurat Nahi hai.



Jis sunsaan jagah pe Atharva ko kaid Karke rakha tha waha Guards Ka group aaya tha saari City dhundhne ke baad.


Guard 1 " Young Master humey Kabhi bhi chain se jinne Nahi dete, wo Kahi na Kahi kisi jagah enjoy Kar rahe honge aur suffer humey Karna pad Raha hai. Maine pure din se Kuch Nahi khaya hai. "


Guard 2 " shikayat Karna band karo, Young Master Mayor ke eklaute bete hai. Kal JADHAV Family ke sath engagement ki date hai aur tab tak humne unhe nahi dhundha to humare sath acha Nahi hoga. "


Guard 1 "Young Master kabhi bhi aisi sunsaan jagah pe nahi aayenge, hum apna time kharab kar rahe hai. "

Abhi Guard 1 ne itna hi kaha tha ki turant hi un sub ko aage kafi duri par koi dikhayi deta hai. kisi ko yaha dekh kr Guard 2 turant hi kahta hai " Ruko aage koi hai."


Guard 1 ne dekha ki unki taraf safed kapdo mein ek person ko aa raha hota hai.


" Young Master !!! "


Guard 1 aankho mein shocking expression lete huye chillaya. Usne apni aankhe mali aur firse us person ki taraf dekha jo ki unka Young Master hi tha. Saare Guards bhut jada khus ho gaye jaise unke saamne unka young Master nahi balki un sabka baap hi khada ho.


Kuch guard Atharva ki taraf daud pade, bhale hi wo ye nahi jaante they ki unka young Master yaha kya kar raha hai, unhe bas ek baat se fark padta tha ki unka Young Master ek dum sahi salamat hai.



Atharva " Alok , tum sab yaha kyu ho ? "


Guard 1 ka naam Alok tha, jisey sayad Atharva janta tha.


Chang " Young Master, akhirkar humne aap ko dhundh hi liya, agar aap nahi milte to Mayor humey jaan se maar dete. "


Atharva ke face pe thode shocking expression they, lekin wo sab kuch samajh gya tha ki, uske 3 din se laapata hone pe ye sab ho raha hai. Aur use ye bhi ache se pata chal raha tha ki ye log thik se soye bhi nahi hai.


Apne Father ke baare mein sochte huye, jinse abhi usey milna tha, usey thodi khusi mehsoos ho rahi thi. Beshak wo apne pichle jiwan mein ek Saint tha lekin uska na koi Friend tha, aur na hi koi Family, isliye ye sab Atharva ke liye ye sab naya tha aur isiliye wo khus tha.



Atharva " dekho main bilkul sahi hu aur tumhe bhi ab marna nahi padega, isliye jaldi mansion chalo. "



Chang " Young Master, jaldi se is horse pe baith jaiye. "


Chang jaldi se apna horse Atharva ke paas le gaya.


Atharva " Mujhe iski jaroorat nahi hai. Main khud hi chala jaunga. Tum sabne khoob mehnat ki hai isliye Mansion pahuchte hi tum sab treasury se 10 Gold coins collect kar sakte ho. "



" What 10 Gold coins…… ? "


Atharva ne ye baat aise kahi thi jaise ye kuch bhi na ho, lekin sabhi guard uski ye baat sunke sakhte mein chale gaye they.
10 Gold Coins... Unki Monthly salary sirf 10 Silver Coins thi. Aise main unka ye reaction lazmi tha.


Atharva ek Greatest Saint tha aur usko money ki parwah nahi thi nahi koi chinta thi, uske liye money pairo ki dhool tha. Lekin Guards ke liye to jaise unka Future hi Bright ho gaya ho.


" Young Master ko kya hua? Yeh unka style bilkul bhi nahi hai. Young Master kabse itne Generous ho gaye? Wo Horse pe ride bhi nahi kar rahe hai? Air jab se mile tab se unhe ek baar bhi nahi daanta hai, jo ki wo humesa karte hai. 3 din gayab hone se Young Master ek different person mein change ho gaye hai. "



Ye saare question sabhi Guards ke mann mein they lekin puchne ki himmat kisi ki bhi nahi thi.


Alok baki sub Guards se turant hi kahta hai " Chalo chale, jaldi karo aur Young Master ko follow karo. "


Alok is surprise se ubharne wala pehla person tha, baki sab bhi uski baat sunke Atharva ko follow karne lage. Wo sab bhi Walk hi kar rahe they, jab unka Young Master hi Walk kar raha ho to unme itni himmat kaha ki wo Horse pe baith sake.


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MAYOR MANSION, FRAGRANT SKY CITY



Mayor Mansion ke Main hall mein ek adhed umar ka takatwar aadmi chinta mein idhar - idhar tehel raha tha, usne ek Golden colour ka silk robe pehen rakha tha aur wo bhut hi mascular tha uski hieght bhi 7 feet thi, ye aur koi nahi balki Fragrant Sky City ka Mayor Kailashnath Yadav tha.


"Father aap tension na le, guards jald hi Atharva ko dhundh lenge. "


Mayor ke bagal mein ek handsome sa ladka khada tha white robe pehne, jiski age 18 hogi. Ek hi nazar mein koi bhi ye bata sakta hai ki ye koi ordinary ladka nahi hai. Uske face pe dukh saaf dekha jaa sakta tha, lekin ander se wo bhut khus tha.


Kailashnath " Ye bigdail ladka mujhe kabhi bhi shaanti se nahi rehne dega, agar uske paas tumhari ability ka half hissa bhi hota to main khusi mein nahi samata. "

RUN... RUN...


" Young Master is back. "


Tabhi Ek Guard ne bhaagte huye ye news pure mansion mein faila di.


" What !! "


Sohan lagbhag jor se chillaya, uske face ke expression pure change ho gaye they.


Kailashnath ne ispe koi dhyan nahi diya, wo andar se relieve mehsoos kar raha tha, lekin fir bhi wo zor se chillaya.


Kailashnath " Usey jaldi se yaha pe aane ke liye kaho. "


Guard ne yeh sense kar liya tha ki Mayor apna temper kabhi bhi kho dega, isliye usne araam se kaha.


Guard " Mayor, Young Master ne kaha hai ki wo bhut thak gaye hai, isliye wo apne room mein rest karenge aur aapse kal milenge. "


Kailashnathne ne us Guard ko ghurte huye kaha " What the hell ! "
" Is ladke ke manners kaha gaye ? "


Sohan "Dad, lagta hai Atharva sach mein thaka hua hai, aur waise bhi kal JADHAV Family ke sath engagement ka din hai to usey aap rest karne de."


Kailashnath " Sohan, humesa uski side mat liya karo wo nalayak bahut bigad raha hai. "


Sohan " Dad aap gussa mat kijiye, main usse baat kar lunga. "


Kailashnath " Ye thik rahega, tum uspe nazar rakhoge ki wo kahi aur na nikal jaaye, kal tak wo apne yard se bahar nahi jaana chahiye. Main nahi chahta kal ke din kuch bhi bura ho. "

Tap… Tap… Tap…

Kailashnath ye bolte hi Main hall se bahar nikal gaya.


Mayor ka Mansion bhut hi bade area mein failla hua tha, isliye Atharva aur Sohan ke pass khud ke chote-2 Mansion they. Apne dono hath apne back side pe bandhe Atharva moon ko nihar raha tha, waha khada hoke wo kisi ka intezaar kar raha tha jaise usey pata tha ki wo aayega.


Mansion ke Gate se Atharva ko Sohan andar aata hua dikhayi diyo, jo Atharva ko sahi salamat dekh ke bhut jyada gussa tha lekin ye wo bilkul bhi show nahi kar raha tha.


" Useless persons, unhone is bastard ko jinda kaise aane diya. "


Ye baat Sohan ne apne mann mein soch raha tha, kuch hi second mein wo Atharva ke paas aa gaya aur uske face ke expression aisa they jaise wo Atharva se bhut pyar karta ho.


Sohan " Brother tum 3 din se kaha they ? "
" Tumhe pata hai main kitna worried tha ? "


Atharva " Brother. "


Aur itna kehte hi Atharva ne Sohan ke upper jump laga di aur uske gale lag gaya aur uski aankho se aansu behne lage jo Sohan ke kandhe pe gir rahe they.


Sohan " Brother kya hua? "
" Tumhare sath kuch karne ki kisne sochi ? "
" Mujhe batao main tumhara badla jaroor lunga. "



Atharva " Wo 2 Guards Yong aur Shuang mujhe maarna chahte they. "


Atharva ne ye baat banawati gusse se boli aur Sohan se alag ho gaya. Sohan bhi ye do naam sunke chauk gaya lekin fir gusse mein aake bola " Unki tumhare sath aisa karne ki himmat kaise huyi ? "
" Unhe main jaan se maar dunga. "


Atharva " Brother, wo ab mar chuke hai. "


Atharva usse baate karte huye uske expression ko dekh raha tha, wo uske true colour dekhna chahta tha. Lekin Sohan apni feeling aur expression ko bhut ache dhange se chupa raha tha. Agar pehle wala Atharva hota to wo fas jaata lekin Ab wale Atharva ki aankhe bhut tez thi wo har cheez saaf dekh paa raha tha ki Sohan ke mann mein kya chal raha hai.


Sohan shocked ke sath " Wo dono mar mar gaye? "
" Tumne unhe kaisa maara wo dono QI JING Realm ke 6th Level pe they ? "


Atharva " Majak mat karo brother, main ek useless cultivatior hu, muskil se Level 1st pe aaya hu, bhala main unhe kaise mar sakta hu? "
" Wo to kisi Master ne mujhe kidnap dekh liya aur unhone un dono ke maar ke mujhe aazad kar diya, main jo shaksh iske piche hai uska naam janana chahta tha lekin tab tak der ho chuki thi, main to unhe reward dena chahta tha, lekin unhone mana kar diya aur gayab ho gaye waha se. "


Sohan ' Fuck! Kya kismat hai iski ? '


Sohan ne apne mann chillate huye ye kaha, usey is baat pe yakeen ho gaya tha ki Atharva sach bol raha hai, jaroor kisi ne uski help ki warna Atharva to useless hai wo khud se kuch nahi kar sakta. Sohan ko ye jaan kar bhi rahat mehsoos huyi kyuki uska naam saamne nahi aaya tha. Aage chal ke bhut se mauke aayenge Atharva ko maarne ke isliye wo shaant ho gaya.


Sohan " Yeh to achi baat hai ki wo dono mar gaye, aur tum bina kisi nuksaan ke laut aaye, agar tumhe kuch ho jata to mujhe jindagi bhar afsos rehta ki main tumhe protect nahi kar paaya. "


Sohan ke face pe aisa concerned look dekh ke Atharva ko vomit karne ka mann kar raha tha.


Atharva " My brother is best. "


Atharva ne bhi aisa dikhaya ki jaise uske jaisa bhai puri duniya main koi nahi hai.


Sohan " Aisa mat kaho, hum dono brothers hai. Kal JADHAV Family ke sath marriage engagement ka din hai. Tumhe tyar hona padega, ye puri life time opportunity hai. Agar tum JADHAV Family ki daughter se shaadi karte ho to ye hamari Family ke liye achi baat hogi. "


Sphan ne Atharva ke kandhe pe apna hath rakhte huye ye baat kahi.



Atharva " Unki beti se shaadi karu, Count me out! "


Sohan " Brother ye decision tumpe nahi hai, Father ne bhut kuch arrange kiya hai kal ke liye, tum aisa nahi kar sakte. "


Atharva " Main bilkul serious hu mujhe to ye bhi nahi pata JADHAV Family ki daughter dikhti kaisi hai. Ye kisi joke se kam nahi hai. Aur main abhi bhi Young hu. Agar koi best candidate hai marriage ke liye to wo aap hai. Aap bhi Mayor ke son hai aur mujhe bade bhi hai, main aapse pehle shaadi nahi kar sakta."
" I won't do it, do it yourself. "


Atharva apne decison pe bilkul khara tha. Atharva ki explanation ko sunne ke baad Sohan ko pehli baar aisa laga jaise uske useless brother ne koi Usefull kaam kar diya ho. Halanki Atharva ko maarne ka ek ye bhi kaaran tha ki wo JADHAV Family ki daughter se Shaadi karle to fir uska dono Family mein status high ho jayega.




TO BE CONTINUED....




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UPDATE NO - 3
(JADHAV FAMILY)​

Sohan andar se kaafi khus tha lekin wo bilkul bhi ye show nahi kar raha tha, bahar se to usne sirf ek sad sa face banaya hua tha.


Atharva " Brother aap hi hai jo humari family mein mujhe sabse jyada pyaar karte hai. Main kisi se shaadi nahi karna chahta, aap mere bhai ho to aap hi kyu nahi kar lete sadi. "


Sohan " Brother aisa nahi hai ki main tumhari help nahi karna chahta, lekin me adopted son hu. Main agar marriage ke liye haa bhi kardu to Father nahi maanenge. Ye arrangement sirf tumhare liye hai. "


Sohan ne ye baat helpless face ke sath kahi thi, lekin wo ander se bhut khus tha, kyuki agar Atharva marriage ke liye mana kar deta hai to wo hi replacement hoga.


Atharva " Agar aap haa karte ho to main aapse promise karta hu ki kal aap ki hi marriage JADHAV Family ki daughter se hogi. "


" Really ? "


Sohan ne kaafi khus hote huye kaha.


Atharva " Of course. "


Sohan " Hum dono Brothers hai, isliye is baar main tumhari help kar raha hu. "


Sohan ne baat aise boli jaise ki wo Atharva ke liye koi bhut bada favour kar raha ho, lekin andar se mann hi mann wo dance kar raha tha.


Atharva " Thank you brother, kal Main hall mein aap bilkul saant rahe aur pretend kare ki aapko kuch nahi pata. Let me handle this. "


Sohan " No problem, main kal ki saari jimmedari tumhe deta hu. "


Sohan ne Atharva ka shoulder thap thapaya au apne manison ki taraf nikal gaya. Sohan yahi soch raha tha ki uska useless brother kaise uski help karega. Lekin jaisa ki usne past mein dekha hai, usey pura yakeen tha ki Atharva kuch na kuch drama jaroor karega.


" Naaki mera status YADAV Family mein badhega balki JADHAV Family mein bhi badhega. Atharva kitna pagal hai marriage request ko thukrake ke mere ko replace karne ke liye bol raha hai. Lekin usne apni Life main pehli baar koi acha kaam kiya hai. Thode din baad jab mera status dono Family mein high ho jayega to main is Atharva ko khud jaan se maar dunga."


Sohan ne yaha se nikalte hi kud se ye sub kahte hue apne true colours dikha diye they.


Wahi doosri aur Mansion me mai Moon ki taraf ek evil smile ke sath dekh raha tha.


Atharva " Messing with me, you are going to die Brother...hahahaha. "



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NEXT MORNING


Next Morning kayi log pure mansion ko decorate karne mein lage huye they. Aaj hi wo din tha engagement ka dono Families ke liye. Fragrant Sky City ki puri history mein aisa kabhi nahi hua tha jab ye dono Families sath mein aayi ho, kyuki ye dono Families ek dusre ki rivals rahi hai centuries se.


" JADHAV Family ke Head aa chuke hai."


Tabhi Guards ki ek jordaar awaaz ke sath ek bhut hi powerful person gate se Main hall ke andar aaya.


Is person ki body bi Kamalnath jaisi hi thi, ye bhi apne forties mein tha aur face se cruel aur ek cunning fox lag raha tha. Usne ek colourful silk ka gown pehna tha aur kisi Tiger ki tarah andar aa rha tha.


JADHAV Family ke Head they Karamchand. Jo ki QI HAI Realm ke peak par they, jo kabhi bhi MORTAL CORE REALM mein BREAKTHROUGH kar sakte hai bilkul Kailashnath ki tarah.


" HAHA, Mere Mansion mein aapka Welcome hai Karamchand Brother. "
" Mujhe hope hai ki aap yaha pe aane ka pura anand lenge. "


Kailashnath ne ye baat dostana tarike se kahi aur wo Karamchand ki taraf badh gaye.


Karamchand " Meri khusi ka thikana nahi hai Mayor Kailashnath, kyuki aaj dono Families ek hone wali hai. "


Halanki, Karamchand face se bhut hi sareef insaan lag raha tha, lekin Atharva ko pehli najar mein wo kisi OLD Fox ke jaise nazar aa raha tha.


Atharva ne Karamchand ke piche dekha to usey koi bhi dikhai nahi diya, iska matlab wo akela aaya tha, lekin ye ek normal baat thi. Fragrant Sky City main ab tak jitne bhi event huye usme JADHAV Family se kabhi bhi Karamchand present nahi hua tha. Uska yaha akela aana uski puri Family ko represent kar raha tha.


Sabhi log chalte huye Main hall ke andar aa gaye, Karamchand aur Kailashnath ek dusre ke saamne apni-2 chair pe baith gaye they. Sohan aur Atharva apne Father ke piche khade ho gaye they.


Karamchand " Brother Kailashnath, main sidha mudde pe aata hu, mere aane ka maksad ye hai ki meri beti ki marriage aapki Family mein ho. Yaha hum aaj Marriage ki date fix karenge."


Kailashnath " Bahut badhiya, ek baar ye marriage ho jaaye to hamari Fragrant Sky City bhi last mein nahi rahegi. "


Kailashnath piche ki aur mudda aur Atharva ko dekhte huye bola.


Kailashnath " Atharva aage aao aur apne Father-in-law se milo. "


Karamchand "Great! Tumhara beta bhut acha hai."


Karamchand ne Atharva ko compliment dete huye kaha, lekin usey andar se pata tha ki wo khaali bakwas kar raha hai, kyuki puri Fragrant Sky City ko Atharva ki bad reputation ke baare main pata hai ki wo cultivation mein useless hai aur apna adha time prostitutes mein waste karta hai.


Lekin Karamchand ko is baat ki koi fikr nahi thi. Wo jaldi se jaldi Father-in-law banna chahta tha, kai baar personal needs se jada jaroori Family needs hoti hai aur aisa hi yaha bhi tha.


Atharva " Father, lagta hai aap galat samajh rahe hai. "
" Kya ye marriage Big Brother ke liye nahi hai ? "


Kailashnath aur Karamchand dono hi ye baat sunke surprise ho gaye they. Karamchand ne apna sir Sohan ki taraf ghumaya aur usko uper se leke niche tak observe karna suru kar diya.


" Isey kehte hai ek talanted young genius. Itni is age mein ye QI JING REALM ke 9th level pe pahuch gaya gaya hai. "


Kailashnath " Atharva bakwas karna band karo. "


Kailashnath ne gussa hote huye kaha.


Atharva " Father main stupid nahi hu, meri to qualifications bhi JADHAV Family ki daughter se marriage karne ke layak nahi hai. Wahi mere Big Brother itni si Age mein QI JING REALM ke 9th Level pe hai, puri Fragrant Sky City mein JADHAV Family ki daughter se marriage karne ke liye yahi layak hai. Main to abhi chota hu aur Big Brother abhi tak inki daughter se mille nahi hai lekin ye unse marriage karne mein interested hai. "


Atharva ne confidence ke sath speech dete huye apne Big Brother ki tareef ki. Atharva ke bagal mein khada Sohan lagbhag rona chahta tha ki uska little Brother usse kitna pyar karta hai, jo ki bhut rare hai.


Karamchand " HAHAHA, Mujhe kabhi bhi nahi pata tha Brother Kailashnath ki apka bada beta meri beti se pyar karta hai."


Kailashnath jor se has raha tha, haa ye marriage dono Family ke profit ke liye thi lekin usey Atharva aur Sohan mein choose karne ka mauka mille to wo Atharva ko choose kare itna pagal nahi hai.


Kailashnath " Sohan, Aao aur apne Father-in-law se millo."


Karamchand " Congratulations! Father-in-law. "


" Haso aur khus raho, kyuki tum baad mein rowoge. "


Atharva ne ye baat apne mann mein sochi aur fir apna gala thik karte huye bolne laga.


Atharva " Mister Karamchand, mere big brother ki ek aur wish hai. "


Karamchand " Ohhh, to bolo na mere aur brother Kailashnath ke rehte koi wish impossible nahi."


Sohan confused tha usey aisa kuch bhi yaad nahi aa raha tha, isliye wo kuch bolne ko hua usse pehle Atharva hi bol pada.


Atharva " Big Brother kaafi time se JADHAV Family ko praise karte hai, agar usnki marriage JADHAV Family se ho jaati hai to unhe apni Life mein aur kuch nahi chahiye."


Atharva ne apne face pe smile ke sath ye baat kahi thi. Atharva ne jo kaha tha usey sunke Sohan ka face kala padne laga tha.


Soha " Brother, tumne abhi kya kaha ? "


Sohan ne badi hi tez awaz mein pucha.


Atharva " Aapne hi to ye kaha tha mujhse. Oohh aap khud ye bolne mein shy feel kar rahe ho. Lekin aap Tension mat lo aapki wish jaroor puri hogi. Aap apne Little Brother pe sab chod dijiye. Aap kaafi time JADHAV Family ki tareef kar rahe they. Ye sach hai na ? "


Sohan bilkul ghabra gaya tha, haa wo bilkul JADHAV Family ki daughter se marriage karna chahta tha. Lekin wo unki Family mein marriage nahi karna chahta tha. Agar wo aisa karta to usey Mayor Mansion chod ke JADHAV Family mein hi rehna padta aur JADHAV Family hi uski Family ho jaati aur uska YADAV FAMILY aur Mayor Mansion se saare rishte khatam ho jaate. Uske itne years ki mehnat khatam hoti huyi nazar aa rahi thi. Aur agar wo JADHAV Family mein chala bhi jata hai to usey koi importance nahi dega balki sab usko nicha hi dikhayenge. Agar aisa hua to uska Future hi kharab ho jaayega.


Atharva " kya ? "
" Mujhe ye mat bolna ki jo kal aap JADHAV Family ki tareef kar rahe they wo jhoot thi. Mujhe aap se yeh umeed nahi thi. "


Atharva ne Sohan ko bina mauka diye hi ye sab bol diya, ab Sohan fas chuka tha wo kisi bhi tarah se naa bolke dono Family ko offend nahi karna chahta tha. Ab Sohan ko realize ho raha tha ki Atharva uske sath kitna bada Game khel raha hai. Sohan ab is position se wapis nahi aa sakta tha. Usey itna gussa aa raha tha ki wo muskil se apna killing intent sambhal paa raha tha jo Atharva ki nazaro se nahi bacha tha. Sohan ko ek baat aur sata rahi thi ki ye Useless Atharva itna smart kaise ho gaya jo usey aisi situation mein trap kar diya.


Sohan ke badlte expression dekh ke Atharva ke face pe ek evil smile thi. Kyuki Sohan, Atharva ko marna chahta tha isliye ye to bas shuruat thi.


Karamchand " Mujhe pata nahi tha brother ki apka elder son meri daughter se itna pyar karta hai, aur ye to hamari Family se marriage bhi karna chahta hai. Isliye humey jaldi se arrangement karni chahiye. Iske Baad puri Fragrant Sky City mein humare samne koi nahi aa paayega. "


Kailashnath " KYA tum apne faisle se khus ho Sohan ? "


Kailashnath ko dukh to ho raha tha ki uska adopted son doosri Family mein jaana chahta hai, lekin usne ye show nahi kiya. YADAV FAMILY ke bhut se business they Fragrant Sky City mein jinme se aadha kaam Sohan dekhta tha agar wo chala jaayega to business ka kya hoga. Lekin usey Sohan ke decision ke decision ki bhi respect karni hogi, isliye wo chup they.


Atharva " Father, wo yahi chahte hai. Mujhe ache se pata hai mere big Brother kaise hai aur wo kya soch rahe hai. Inhe aur aapko to khus hona chahiye inki wish jo puri hone jaa rahi hai. UnCle Karamchand aapko bhi mere Big Brother ki dekhbhal karni hogi kahi koi unhe nicha na dikhaye. "


Sohan apna muh kholne hi wala tha ki Atharva ne usse pehle hi badi chalaki se jawab de diya.


Karamchand " hahaha…… "
" Chinta na karo mere hote mere son-in-law ko nicha dikhane ki himmat kon karega. "


Soha gusse mein ubal raha tha, usne apni fist ko kaafi tight close kiya hua tha apne gown ke ander, uske saare plans fail ho gaye they wo bilkul fas gaya tha, ab wo chah kar bhi naa nahi kar sakta tha.


Atharva " Congratulations Uncle! Aaj ka din kaafi khusi ka hai, ab aap jaldi se apni daughter ko bulaiye taki hum sab unhe dekh sake. "


Kailashnath " Haa tumne sahi kaha Atharva, inki daughter ko aaj tak kisi ne nahi dekha hai naa hi wo kisi public place mein aati hai. Lekin ab marriage ka decision ho hi gaya hai to hum bhi aapki daughter ko dekhna chahenge brother."


Karamchand " haha…. "
" Meri beti JIYA abhi raste mein hai, wo jald hi yaha pe hogi."


Karamchand ander hi ander khus ho raha tha jaisa uska koi aur hi motive ho yaha aane ka aur ye baat Atharva se chuppi nahi thi. Jaha baaki teeno khus they wahi Soham sirf natak kar rha tha khus hone ka.


Atharva " Apki daughter ke naam se hi pata lag raha hai ki wo kitni komal aur sundar hongi, sayad wo kisi angel jaisi dikhti hongi. "


Aise hi Atharva, JIYA ki tareef kiye jaa raha tha jisse wo kabhi nahi Mila tha. Ye dekha wo ye sab bas Sohan ko tease karne ke liye kar raha tha.


"Cough! Cough!"


Atharva ki tareef sunne ke baad Karamchand ko khaasi aa gayi, uske muh se tea bhi bahar aa gayi thi jaise hi Usne Jiya ke baare mein ( sundar, komal aur angel) jaise word sune.



TO BE CONTINUED....











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UPDATE NO - 04
( The Mighty Dragon Transformation Skill )​

Sohan is time bhut gusse mein tha, wo abhi ke abhi Atharva ko maarna chahta tha. Sohan, Kailashnath, Karamchand ko aaj Atharva ne bewkoof bana diya tha. Keval ek cheez Sohan ko samajh nahi aa rahi thi ki ye useless itna smart kaise ho gaya hai.


Lekin ab kuch bhi badlne ya karne mein bhut der ho chuki thi ab to Sohan bas ek hi umeed rakh sakta ki Jiya ek beautiful aur gentle ladki ho. Agar aisa hua to fir uska mood kuch hadd tak thik ho sakta hai.


Kuch time baad purple dress mein ek ladki andar chalte huye aayi, jiske piche 2 JADHAV Family ke Guards they. Jab Karamchand, Kailashnath aur Atharva ne us ladki ki taraf dekha jo unki taraf hi aa rahi thi to unki face ki smile chali gayi.


Bang!


Kailashnath jis glass se drink kar raha tha wo uske hath se chhut ke niche gir gaya. Jo usne dekha wo uske liye bhi shocking tha. Kailashnath jor se khaasne laga. Jo ladki uske saamne khadi thi wo 8 feet tall thi. Aur wo apne Father ki tarah hi bhut jada mascular thi. Aur itna hi nahi wo kisi strong Man ki tarah dikh rahi thi, jiska weight kam se kam 300 pound ho.


" Mascular body hona fir bhi chal jaata hai lekin isne apne hair ko sky ki taraf kyu baandh rakha hai. Aur ye face bilkul oily hai, aur iski skin bhi kitni moti aur rough hai, aur iske Lips bhi kitne mote aur bade hai. Yukkkk! "


Atharva apne dimag mein hi vomit kar raha tha. Wo beshak past life mein ek Greatest Saint tha aur usne almost sab kuch dekha tha, lekin itni ugly ladki usne Kabhi nahi dekhi thi. Haa ye Saint Origin ki sabse Ugly ladki thi, Atharva ke opinion mein aur iska naam Jiya tha, jo sabse bada joke tha.


Atharva ka face bilkul red chuka tha, usko apni hasi rokne mein kaafi dikkat ho rahi thi. Lekin apne mann hi mann mein wo bhut tez has raha tha.


" Sohan, This is karma. "


Atharva mann hi mann Karamchand ki tareef kar raha tha kaise usne apne saare genes apni beti ko de diye the aur uska naam bhi JIYA rakh diya tha aur jo uske body se bikul bhi match nahi ho raha tha.


Kailashnath " Jaldi se miss JIYA ko unki seat pe baithao. "


Kailashnath ne apne shocking expression ko dabate huye kaha. Jo Kailashnath abhi tak thoda dukhi tha wo ab khus tha ki sahi hua jo is ladki shaadi karne wala Atharva nahi hai aur ye bhi achi baat thi ki Sohan JADHAV Family mein marriage kar raha tha iski wajah se is ladki ko Mayor Mansion mein nahi rehna hoga. Mann hi mann Kailashnath, Atharva ko Thanks bol raha tha.


Karamchand " hahaha, JIYA jaldi idhar aao aur apne Future Husband se milo. "


JIYA jaldi se chalti huyi aayi aur Sohan ke saamne khadi ho gayi, Sohan ko dekhte hi JIYA ki aanke chamakne lagi kyuki Sohan Fragrant Sky City ke geniuses mein ek tha aur handsome to tha hi. JIYA ne jaldi se Sohan ke arm ko tightly pakad liya aur boli.


JIYA " Dear Husband, Main Mayor Mansion mein pehli baar aayi hu kya aap mujhe Mansion dikha denge. "


Atharva ke muh se almost blood nikalne ko ho gaya tha. Usey aisa lag raha tha ki uske internal organs bhi bahar aa jaayenge 'miss JIYA' ki soft awaz sunke jo kisi Animal ke dhadane jaisi thi. JIYA ki awaz sunke Atharva ko apni spine mein coldness feel hone lagi thi. Lekin wo bhut jada enjoy kar raha tha is moment ko.


" Kisey pata Sohan apne mann mein kya soch raha hoga, mere hisab se to wo bas soch raha hoga ki kisi bhi tarah se Death ho jaaye uski. "


Kailashnath " Jaao Sohan jaake JIYA ko Mansion dikha do. "


Sohan " Yes Father ! "


Sohan ki awaz is time kaamp rahi thi, Main hall mein majood har koi yeh dekh sakta uske face bilkul red ho chuka tha lekin QI JING REALM ke 9th Level pe hone ke baad bhi JYA usey khichte huye Main hall se bahar le gayi.


Atharva " Father, Uncle, mujhe lagta hai humey jaldi se marriage ki date fix kar leni chahiye. "


Karamchand " Thik hai kal ki Date main hum Marriage kar lenge. "


Sohan jo waha se abhi nikla hi tha ki ye sunne ke baad to uska Heart uske Muh se bahar nikalne ko ho gaya tha.


Atharva " Uncle aap sahi keh rahe hai aise khusi ke mauke ke liye jyada din rukna nahi chahiye. Chalo aap log baate kijiye main bhi chalta hu. "


Atharva ki back ko dekhte huye Kailashnath soch mein pad gya tha ki Atharva kyu Sohan ko Frame karna chahta hai.
Kailashnath itna to intelligent tha ki wo Atharva ki baato se matter samajh gaya tha lekin usey reason pata nahi tha iske piche ka. Kyuki Dono Brothers ke bich ka relationship abhi tak bhut acha tha. Aur sabse jyada chaukane wali baat ye thi ki Atharva usey bilkul different person lag raha tha.


Atharva Mansion se nikal ke sidha apne Mansion mein aa gaya tha. Atharva ko pata tha ki ye badla Sohan ke liye kaafi nahi hai wo to usey Jaan se maarna chahta tha aur past Life mein ek Greatest Saint hone ki wajah se Atharva apne kisi bhi enemy ko second Chance nahi deta tha. Jo uska enemy hai usey sirf Death hi milegi aur kuch nahi.


Lekin abhi jo sabse important kaam tha wo thi Training. Saint Origin mein jo Strong hai wo Great hai aap kahi bhi chale jaao , log aapko Admire karenge chaahe aap kaise bhi ho bas strong hone chahiye. Past Life mein Atharva ek Great Saint tha lekin abhi wo sirf ek weakling tha jo ki sirf QI JING REALM ke 8th level pe tha.


Atharva apne room mein pahuch ke apne bed pe leg cross karke baith gaya.


Cultivation ke path pe sabse jada jaroori cheez thi skill. Jitna Higher Level hoga Skill utna hi aapki achievement high hogi aapki.


Apni past Life mein ek Greatest Saint hone ki wajah se Atharva ke paas Filhal 1000 se bhi jyada skill thi aur sabhi ke sabhi high level ki thi, 30% skill to aisi thi jisey wo HEAVENLY CORE REALM mein BREAKTHROUGH karne ke baad bhi use nahi kar sakta tha. Agar Atharva apne paas se sabse low level ki skill bhi nikal ke dikha de to puri Fragrant Sky City ke people us skill ke liye mar mitenge.


Saint Origin Universe mein Skill Four categories mein divide hoti hai :- Mortal ,Earth, Heaven, Saint. Aur Atharva ke paas abhi 5 Skill thi Jo Saint Category ki thi. Yaha tak ki Divine Continent ke Big Ancient Clans ke pass bhi Aisi Skills nahi hongi.


Lekin Atharva ne decide kar liya tha ki wo in 5 mein se koi bhi Skill Cultivate nahi karega, apni past life mein bhi usne in 5 Skills ki taraf dekha bhi nahi tha.


Is cheez ka ek hi reason tha " The Dragon Transformation Skill. "


Atharva ko ye Skill apni past Life mein kisi Ancient ruins se milli thi. Ye Skill Ancient times se Belong karti hai aur almost 10000 years old hai.


Atharva ke hisaab se The Dragon Transformation Skill ka potential Saint Category se bhut upper hai.


Lekin is Skill ko use karne ki ek bhut hi badi condition hai. Wo ye hai ki is Skill ko beginning se Practice karna padta hai. Jab Atharva ko ye Skill past Life mein mill thi tab wo isko Practice nahi kar paaya tha kyuki is skill ko Practice karne ke liye usey apna Saint cultivation destroy karke QI JING REALM se start karna padta. Beshak Past Life mein AK ka Heart as a Saint kitna hi hard ho lekin apna cultivation destroy karne jitna bhi nahi tha. Uski past Life ka doosra sabse bada regret yahi tha ki wo is Skill ko Cultivate nahi kar paaya tha lekin ab baat kuch aur thi. Ab doobara reborn hone ki wajah se Uska current Realm QI JING tha aur wo is opportunity ko waste nahi hone dene wala tha.


Abhi tak Atharva ki QI Sea aur Mortal Core form nahi huye they to ye best time tha The Dragon Transformation Skill Cultivate karne ka.


Atharva ne Dragon Transformation Skill ki script ko yaad kiya aur uske single thought se saari script uske dimag mein chalne lag gayi.


The Dragon Transformation Skill bhut powerful thi. Script ke according is Skill ko practice karne ke baad aap Saint Origin ki kisi bloodline se merge ho sakte ho. Aur aisa nahi hai ki aap sirf ek bloodline se merge ho sakte ho app chahe to 10,000 bloodline se bhi merge ho sakte ho aur un bloodline ki ability bhi aapke sath merge ho jaayegi. aur bas itna soch ki Atharva ke face pe ek smile aa gayi thi.


Jo The Dragon Transformation Skill ko Cultivate karte hai unki DANTIAN mein Dragon mark banne lagte hai. Ek dragon mark user ke punch ki strength 10,000 Pound tak badha deta hai. Dragon marks ka maximum number 108,000 hai, isse jada Dragon Marks aap form nahi kar sakte.


Script ke According agar ek baar Dragon Mark bann gaya to wo puri life mein kabhi gayab nahi hoga. Aur agar 108,000 marks ban gaye to user apne will se Dragon mein Transform ho sakta hai wo bhi Dragon ki puri ability ke sath.


Ek Dragon Mark 10,000 pound strength badhata hai agar 108,000 Dragon marks Complete ho jaate hai to aapki strength kitni hogi ye koi imagine bhi nahi kar sakta, yaha tak Saint Realm ke Warrior bhi aapke koi Match nahi honge. Ye sab soch ke hi Atharva ko apni body mein Cold mehsoos hone laga tha aur wo bhut jada excited ho gaya tha. Agar Atharva is Life mein is level pe pahuch jaata hai to wo Ek Strike mein Saint Origin Universe ko destroy kar sakta hai.


The Dragon Transformation Skill Body ko bhi bhut effective way mein refine karti hai aur end tak aate aate user ki body ki Dragon ki Body jitni Tough ho jaati hai. Atharva ki body mein beshak bhut saari PILLS thi lekin Un sabko refine karne ke baad bhi Atharva ki body abhi bhut jyada weak thi. Atharva abhi thoda unsure tha ki kahi uski body Dragon Transformation Skill ko sehen na kar paaye.


Lekin apni past Life mein ek Greatest Saint tha to uska will kisi mountain se bhi jada bada tha usne saare thoughts ko apne mind se nikala aur Dragon Transformation Skill ko Cultivate karne laga. Jaise hi usne Cultivation start kiya waise hi usey apni body mein Yuan Power flow hoti huyi feel hone lagi.


Atharva ne control apne hath mein lete huye apni body ke ander 2 region create kare, first region mein usne Yuan Energy ko clockwise direction mein flow karwaya aur second region mein usne Yuan Energy ko anti- clockwise direction mein flow karwaya.


Uske aisa karte hi uski body kisi machine ki tarah kaam karne lagi ek frightening speed aur bina pause ke.


Pong!


Dono separate region full speed se ek dusre ke sath collide ho gaye, aur aisa hote hi dono different force ki wajah se ek Whirlpool create ho gaya aur wo Atharva ke poori body mein failne laga.


Ughh!


Is impact ki wajah se Atharva ke mouth se Blood nikalne laga, sath hi uski puri body mein pain hone laga jaise wo kisi hellfire mein baitha ho. Jo uske mouth se blood nikal raha tha uska colour black tha. Ye sab impurities thi uski body ke ander ki jo Dragon Transformation Skill ki wajah se ekdum se bahar aane lagi thi.


Atharva " Dragon Transformation Skill sach mein bhut powerful hai abhi to ye first step hi hai aur ye hi mujhe itna pain de raha hai. Lekin ye mujhe manjoor hai effect ko dekhte huye. Meri body ki saari impurities lagbhag bahar aa gayi hai. Let's continue. "


Apni past life mein Saint hone ki wajah se uska will bhut strong tha to usko ye pain sehen karne mein koi takleef nahi thi aur Saint hone ki wajah se uske paas Cultivation ka bhut jada expérience tha jo ab uske bhut kaam aa raha tha.


Dragon Transformation Skill Atharva ke mind mein flow ho rahi thi, aur Cultivation ki wajah se usey bhut pain ho raha tha jo uske liye kuch bhi nahi tha.


4 Hours Later!


Crack!


Ek clear Crack ki sound Atharva ki body se suni jaa sakti thi. Jo Whirlpool tha wo Atharva ki poori body mein Refine ho gaya tha aur Atharva QI JING REALM ke 9th Level mein Breakthrough kar gaya tha.




TO BE CONTINUED....




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UPDATE NO - 05
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Yaha tak ki Atharva ne bhi nahi soch tha ki The Dragon Transformation Skill itni strong hogi. Sirf 4 hours cultivate karne se hi wo QI JING REALM ke 9th Level pe pahuch gaya tha.


Sath hi sath uski Yuan Energy badhne ki wajah se uski body bhi strong ho gayi thi aur isliye Atharva ki strength aur Defense mein kaafi fark pada tha.


The Dragon Transformation Skill ko Cultivate karte time ek baar firse 2 whirlpool ek doosre ke opposite create ho gaye they. Dono whirlpool Atharva ki body mein flow hote huye uski DANTIAN mein enter kar gaye aur ek Red Colour ka Dragon Mark form karne lage.


Waise abhi jo Mark form hua tha wo abhi bhut fika tha ek dum bright Red hone se kaafi dur tha. Atharva ki single thought se Red Dragon Mark bhut jor se shake hone laga.


HAA!


Atharva ne jor se chillate huye hawa mein ek bhut fast punch maara, punch ka pressure itna tha ki Air mein bhi friction hone lagi thi aur fir ek dum se BOOM ke sound ke sath samne ki Wall crack ho gayi.


"Good, mere punch ki power abhi 5000 pound thi, halanki abhi first Red Dragon Mark half complete hua hai. Ek baar Red Dragon Mark complete ho jaaye to mere har punch ke pich 10,000 pound ka force hoga. QI JING REALM 9th Level ke ordinary cultivators ke punch mein 3000 pound force hota hai, aur Genius hote hai unke punch ke piche 4000 pound hota hai. Lekin The Dragon Transformation Skill se mein sirf Half Red Dragon Mark ke hote huye bhi 5000 pound ke punch throw kar sakta hu. Incredible!"



{ Writer Note:- jo bhi punches aur uske force ki baat huyi hai wo sirf ek mark ki jaise jaise mark badhte jaayenge force badhta hai jaayega.}



Ek lambi saans lete huye Atharva ne Cultivate karna rok Diya. Usey Cultivation ke baare mein is world mein sabse jyada Knowledge thi, aur usey ache se pata tha ki Foundatain ko Strong karna kitna Important hai. Usko sab kuch step by step karna hoga bina ek dum se aage badhe. Usne abhi The Dragon Transformation Skill Cultivate karna start ki hai aur usey half Red Dragon Mark mil gaya hai aur wo is result se abhi ke liye khus hai. Kyuki Fragrant Sky City kuch bhi nahi hai.

Aapko bata du ki :-

{ SAINT ORIGIN UNIVERSE mein 5 Continent hai.
1. Northern Continent.
2. Southern Continent.
3. Western Continent.
4. Easter Continent.
5. Divine Continent.

Jisme sabse strong Divine Continent hai jisme Pichli Life mein Atharva ek Saint tha aur wo issi Continent se tha. Sabse Weak Eastern Continent hai jisme Filhal Atharva hai.
Eastern Continent mein 30 provine hai jisme sabse Strong Martial Saint Dynasty hai Aur Sabse weak QI Province hai jisme Filhal Atharva hai.
QI Province ke baare mein aage detail mil jaayegi Proper.

QI Province ka outer part hai jaha QI Province ke Log bhi dhyan nahi dete waha pe 28 City hai. Isme sabse Strong hai Red City aur sabse Weak hai Fragrant Sky City jisme filhal Atharva hai. }


Ek warrior ko Cultivate karne ke Liye PILLS, POTIONS, ELIXIRS ki jaroorat padti hai. The Dragon Transformation Skill ko practice karne ki liye ko Sabse jada jaroorat padegi kyuki Ye skill kisi bhi Bloodline kisi bhi Soul ko Absorb kar sakti hai. World Mein bhut saare Demon Beast hai, jinme se kaafi kam Rare Bloodline ke hote hai aur kuch to Ancient Time ke Rare Beast bhi hote hai, agar kisi rare Bloodline ke Demon Beast ki Soul ko Absorb karta hai to The Dragon Transformation Skill ki Wajah se usey use Beast ki Ability bhi millegi.


"Main 100 years se Dead tha is time mein bhut kuch badal gaya hoga. Agar meri Memory sahi hai to Fragrant Sky City Sabse small City hai QI Province ki, pata nahi Divine Continent yaha se kitni dur hoga. Past life mein The GREATEST SAINT hone ki wajah se maine kabhi is Small Eastern Continent pe dhyan nahi diya tha kyuki Meri aankho mein ye kuch bhi nahi tha."


Atharva apne Mansion se Nikal ke apne Father ke Mansion mein aa gaya aur sidha unke Room mein bani Library mein ghus gaya. Yaha pe kisi ko aane ki izzazt nahi thi yaha tak ki Sohan bhi bina permission ke enter nahi kar sakta tha lekin Atharva ki baat alag thi wo Mayor ka eklauta beta tha to wo pure Mayor Mansion mein kabhi bhi kahi bhi jaa sakta tha.


Atharva ne waha pe rakhi Martial Arts Skill ki books ko dekha bhi nahi kyuki usey pata is universe ki sabse small city mein Trash hi millega. Isliye wo sidha ek book ki taraf badh gaya jiska naam tha "History of Saint Origin"


Is Book mein saare History events se they Pure Saint Origin ke aur saari geographical condition.
Atharva ne jaisa hi first Chapter khola uske Face pe smile aa gayi. kyuki jo first Chapter tha wo Ek Greatest Saint ke baare mein tha jisne Apni Big Sword ki Ek Strike mein Heaven ko kaatte huye Immortal Realm ke Gate khol diye they 100 years pehle. Unfortunately wo Greatest Saint us din usi SAINT CLIFF pe khatam ho gaya.


100 year pehle Atharva ne apni Saint Blood ki last drop ko Use karte huye Immortal Realm ke gate khol diye aur wo iske backlash se wahi khatam ho gaya tha. Uske baad kya hua usey kuch nahi pata. Usne aisa isliye kiya tha kyuki Saint Origin Universe mein koi bhi person Saint Realm ke aage Cultivate nahi kar paata lekin Atharva ko pata tha ki Saint Realm ke baad bhi Realm hai jo is Universe mein possible nahi hai, isliye usne apni saari strenght ko use karke doosre Universe ka Gate khol diya tha Jiska naam hai Immortal Origin Universe ya Immortal Realm jisme Immortals rehte hai.


History ke according us event ke baad bhut kuch badal gaya tha. Jab Atharva ne Immortal Realm ke Gate khole to Jo baaki ke Saint they jo Atharva ko aisa karte dekh rahe they wo Atharva ki Death ke baad Gate se Us Realm mein enter kar gaye. Aur aisa hone se is Universe mein ek bhi Saint nahi bacha aur Saints ki protection hatne ke baad is Universe mein. Monsters, Beasts, Devils, Demon har jagah badh gaye they. Aur jo Clan Saint ki protection aur management they unme War start ho gayi thi aur uski Wajah se kayi Ancient Clan completely Wipe Out ho gaye they Aur New Clan ban gaye they.


Ek Smile ke Sath Atharva ne Book band kar di Usey pata tha wo is life mein ek baar firse Divine Continent mein apne kadam rakhega aur Fir Apne past Records ko todte huye Immortal Realm mein chala jaayega aur aisa hone ke liye abhi bhut lamba time tha kyuki abhi wo ek weakling tha aur uski age bhi abhi 16 years hi thi, uske paas puri life thi suru se start karne mein. Atharva ki life ka sabse bada regret tha ki wo immortal Realm mein enter nahi kar paya.


Library se nikalne ke Time Raat ho chuki aur Atharva apne Mansion ki Opposite direction mein jaa raha tha kyuki usey kisi se milna tha.


Atharva ko pata tha ki Sohan na to Jiya se Shaadi karega aur na hi JADHAV Family mein. Atharva confident tha kyuki wo bhi ek Man tha Sohan ki tarah. Ye bhut simple tha Jiya se shaadi karne se acha Sohan suicide kar lega.


Kal Wedding Ceremony hai aur agar Atharva ka guess correct hai to Sohan aaj ki raat hi usko maarne aayega.


Sohan ke jaisa person jiska Hard Work destroy ho gaya ho wo itni asaani se jaane nahi dega. Wo Atharva se nafrat karta tha, sirf Atharva se hi nahi balki Mayor Mansion ke har member se Nafrat karta tha. Uske Talent ko dekhke wo Is City ko Chod bhi dega to wo ek achi life ji sakta tha.


Lekin Atharva apne kisi bhi enemy ko bhaagne ka, surrender ka aur maaf karne ka mauka nahi deta. Kyuki usey pata hai baad wo hi enemy strength gain karke wapis Revenge lene aa sakta hai. Aur jis Path pe Atharva jaane wala hai uspe uske Countless enemy honge aur wo ek ko bhi jinda chodne ka risk nahi lega.


Sohan ne is time ek black outfit pehna hua tha aur moon ki taraf dekh raha tha uski eyes bilkul snake jaisi lag rahi thi jo strike karne ke liye kabhi bhi taiyar ho.


"Atharva tumne mere saare plan waste kar diye, aaj tumhe maarke yaha se nikal jaaunga aur strong hone ke baad is Mayor ko bhi maar dunga aur JADHAV FAMILY ko bhi destroy kar dunga."


Sohan ne apni fist ko tight karte huye ye baat sochi. Lekin koi aur tha jo usey itni asani se nahi jaane dega.


Atharva " Hey Brother, apne aisi dress kyu pehen rakhi hai jaise aap kahi bahar jaane wale ho. Kal aapki wedding Ceremony hai aapko rest lena chahiye. "


Jaise hi Sohan ki nazar Atharva pe padi wo ek dum gusse mein aa gaya uska killing intent bhi nikalne laga tha uski body se.


Sohan " Atharva tumne aaj mujhe kyu fasaya. "


Sohan ne ye baat ghuraate huye boli. Yard ke bahar ek aur Aadmi tha jo in dono ki baate sun raha tha. Wo aur koi nahi balki Kailashnath tha jo Sohan se baat karne aaya tha lekin inki baate sunke wahi ruk gaya aur apni presence hide kar li.


Atharva " Aapko kyu fasaunga main? Mujhe to laga JADHAV Family mein shaadi karna aapka sapna tha. Jiya ki body to dekho mujhe pata hai future mein aapko kamane ki jaroorat nahi padegi. Aapko to mujhe Thanks kehna chahiye. "


Sohan " Enough, us ladki ka mere samne naam mat lo, tumne kal bas mujhe replace hone ke liye kaha tha JADHAV FAMILY mein marriage ki baat kaha se aa gayi thi. Atharva maine tumse abhi tak pyaar hi kiya hai agar tum mujhe bhagana chahte ho to saaf saaf bata do ye gande method use karna chod do."


Sohan ki aankho mein Atharva ke liye Hatred chupaye nahi chup rahi thi.


Atharva " Mujhse pyaar karte ho, chalo tumhe expose karte aur apna score settle karte hai. "


Atharva ne apne Father ko pehle hi sense kar liya tha bahar jo ki Sohan nahi kar paaya tha kyuki uski sense Atharva se bhut weak hai ya ye kahu Atharva ki senses kaafi jada strong hai. Atharva ne apna attitude badalte huye Sohan ko expose karne ki sochi taaki wo yaha se bhaag na paaye aur usko opportunity bhi mil jaaye Sohan ko maarne ki.


Atharva " Mujhe ye batao tumne hi Yuan aur Shuang ko mujhe deserted area mein le jaane ke liye aur mujhe maarke mera blood pine ke liye kaha tha ?
Mere marne ke baad tum hi ho jo legally YADAV Family ko Heir ban jaoge. Isi liye tum mujhse pyaar se paish aate they? Kya maine kuch galat kaha My Dear Brother. "


Atharva ne ek Cruel look ke sath Sohan ko dekhte huye ye baat kahi. Wahi Kailashnath shock ho gaye they to jo Atharva ne kaha usey sunkar lekin wo fir bhi bahar hi khade rahe kyuki wo aur Sunna chahte they...





TO BE CONTINUED....


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