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Mai puri kosis karunga ki 1 Tarik Tak naya Update post kar du.
Ab naye update se story puri mere hisab se chlegi. To ab se week me ek hi update aaya karega. Kosis karunga ki Kam din me bhi update de du.
Aur sbs important baat is story me actual me sex nahi hai. To mi aap logo se puchna chta hu ki kya mi story me sex add Karu ya jise story chal Rahi hai waise chlne du.
nd ab se mujhe apne update par Kam se Kam 60 likes cahiye hi cahiye.
 
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INSULTING



Sohan ab puri baat samajh gaya tha ki Atharva usey kyu fasana chahta hai, lekin usey ye samajh nahi aa raha tha ki ye useless fool itna Clever kaise ho gaya hai.


Atharva " Yong aur Shuang dono hamari Family ke servent they unme itni himmat nahi thi ki wo akele hi Mayor ke son ko kidnap kar sake aur poor hone ki wajah se wo kahi se bhi CLEANSING PILL nahi la sakte they. "
" Sohan kyuki tum JADHAV Family ki daughter se marriage karna chahte they to main to wo hi karwa raha hu, lekin Jiya ko dekhke to mujhe bhi ab tumhare liye khusi ho rahi hai. Agar tum chup-chap JADHAV Family mein Marriage kar lete ho to main kisi ko ye nahi bataunga ki tumne mujhe maarne ki kosis ki hai. Tumhari ye halat dekhna tumhe maarne se jyada behtar hai. Lekin kitni buri baat hai ki tum yaha se bhagna chahte ho jo main hone nahi dunga. "


Sirf Sohan ne hi Atharva ke andar ye change mehsoos nahi kiye they bahar khade Kailashnath ko bhi surprise ho raha tha, usey aisa lag raha tha jaise wo pehli baar Atharva se mil raha ho. Kailashnath ne apne sapne mein bhi nahi socha tha ki Atharva itna Smart hoga aur aise plan bhi bana sakega.


Hahahaha…..

Sohan haste hue " Atharva mujhe tumhe aise dekhke sach mein surprise hua hu, maine kabhi nahi socha tha ki tum itne smart hoge, lekin tumne fir bhi ek stupid mistake kar di. "


Sohan ne apna apna killing intent release karte huye bola.


Atharva " Stupid mistake, kaisi stupid mistake ? "


Atharva apne kandhe hillate huye bola.


Sohan " Tum sach mein stupid ho, tumhe pata tha main aaj yaha se bhagne wala hu lekin fir bhi tum yaha akele aa gaye. Tum QI JING REALM ke 1st level pe hone ke baad bhut jaldi marna chahte ho. Ab main yaha se jaa hi raha hu to tumhe maarke hi jaaunga aur uske baad QI Province ke kisi big Sect ko join karne ke baad waapis aake us Old Man ko bhi maar dunga."


Sohan ne Atharva ko nicha dikhate huye kaha. Uske dimag mein Atharva kisi Ant se kam nahi tha jisey wo kabhi masal sakta hai.


Kailashnath " Shit. "


Kailashnath ne Apne mann mein ye bolte huye abhi andar enter karne ki sochi lekin wo Atharva ke word sun ke wahi ruk gaya.


Atharva " Tum mujhe nahi maar sakte. "


Sohan " Really, tum mere yard mein khade ho aur sirf QI JING REALM ke 1st level pe ho, Agar Kailashnath bhi yaha hota to wo bhi tumhe nahi bacha sakta. "


Sohan ne jor se haste huye ye baat kahi, usey Atharva ko maarne mein pura confidence tha.


Atharva " I am sorry, lekin mein QI JING Realm ke 1st nahi 9th level pe hu. "


Atharva ne ye bolte huye apni QI release kar di. Uski Body se itni jyada Force se Yuan Power release huyi ki usne Sohan ko bhi 3 step piche hone pe majboor kar diya.


" What "


Sohan kaafi shock ho gaya tha, wo Atharva ko aise dekh raha tha jaise wo koi ghost ho. Usne kabhi apne dream mein bhi ye nahi socha tha.


Bahar khada Kailashnath bhi kaafi shock ho gaya tha Atharva ki is transformation ko dekhke, lekin ek Father hone ki wajah se wo bhut jayda khus bhi they.


" Thank God, mera beta koi useless scumbag nahi hai. Lekin Damm it ye meri naak ke niche ye sab chuppa kaise raha tha ? "


Kailashnath ne khus hote huye khud se hi bola. Useless uske heart mein ek bhut bada wound tha. Lekin ab Atharva ne bilkul opposite QI JING REALM ke 9th level mein Breakthrough karke wo bhi sirf 16 ki Age mein ye proof de diya tha ki wo ek Genius hai, aisa abhi tak Fragrant Sky City mein kisi ne nahi kiya tha. Sohan bhi is level pe 16 ki Age mein pahucha tha. Aur Atharva jis tarah se wo Sohan ko handle kar raha hai aise koi bhi 16 ki Age ka ladka nahi kar sakta.


Sohan " Impossible, aisa nahi ho sakta, tum 3 din pehle sirf 1st Level pe they. Ye mat kehna ki tum abhi tak apni true strength hide karke rakhe huye they. Agar aisa hai bhi to 9th level ka person itni jyada yuan power nahi rakhta. "


Atharva " Is world mein aisi bhut si things hai jinhe tum bilkul nahi samajh sakte. Sohan tumhara ek bhut acha future ho sakta tha lekin tumne sab barbaad kar diya. Let's end this. "


Itna bolte hi Atharva lighting speed se move hua aur ek dum se Sohan ke samne aa gaya, wo bilkul bhi risk nahi lena chahta tha kyuki usne abhi tak ek bhi Combat Skill practice nahi ki thi. Atharva ne Sohan ke saamne aate hi lighting speed se apne right hand mein apni Yuan Energy mein flow karwake usey kisi sword ki tarah sharp kar diya aur usi speed se right hand kisi sword ki tarah Sohan ki neck ki taraf move ho gaya. Atharva ki speed itni fast tak thi ki Sohan ko ek finger move karne ka bhi time nahi tha.


" Stop. "


Kailashnath jor se chillate huye door ko tod ke andar enter ho gaya.



Snap!


Unfortunately, wo bhi Atharva ki movements se slow tha jab tak wo Atharva ko rokta tab tak Atharva ke right hand ne kisi sword ki tarah Sohan ka head uski bodi se alag kar diya tha. Sohan ki aankhe marne ke baad bhi shock mein thi aur uski body bhi kuch second tak wahi khadi rahi aur fir ekdum se nich gir gayi. Blood kisi fountain ki Tarah nikal raha tha.


Kailashnath " Atharva tumne usey kyu maar diya ? "


Dead body ko dekhte huye Kailashnath shock mein tha, Atharva ne same level pe hone ke bawjood Sohan ko ek strike mein khatam kar diya tha wo bhi bina kisi skill ko use kiye.


Atharva " Father kya aap iske marne se khus nahi ho. Agar main abhi isey nahi maarta to ye baad mein badi threat banke revenge lene aa jaata. Main apne enemy ko koi chance nahi deta. "


Kailashnath " Maine isko adopt karke galti kardi. Isne tumhe maarne ki kosis ki to of course tum usey maar sakte ho. Lekin ab ye mar gaya hai to JADHAV Family mein Marriage kon karega. Hamari families ke relations pehle hi kharab they ab aur ho jaayenge. "


Atharva " Father aap itne bhi pagal mat bano aap ko bhi pata hai ek Mountain mein 2 tiger nahi reh sakte.
Aisa koi raasta nahi hai jisse hamari Family aur JADHAV Family ek sath reh sake aur wo JADHAV Family ka chief humey kabhi bhi khud ke barabar nahi samjhega. Usne aaj hamari din mein insult ki hai. Hum unke sath acha kyu kare ? "


" Insult ki hai ? "


Kailashnath ne confuse hote huye kaha.


Atharva " Father aap us Karamchand ke innocent face se pagal mat bano wo real mein old fox hai. Yaha tak ki aaj Jiya ka aana bhi aaj hamari insult hai. "
" Hamari Family is City ki sabse Strong Family hai aur agar humne us Jiya se Marriage kar li to hum sabke samne laughing stock ban jaayenge. Humari family ki reputation bhi kam ho jaayegi aur agar Sohan, JADHAV Family mein marriage kar leta to aur bhi bura hota."


Atharva ne bolna jaari raka.


Atharva " Wo ugly Girl sirf hamari insult karne ke liye hi laayi gayi thi, mujhe to yakeen hai wo GYAN ki daughter bhi nahi hai. JADHAV Family ek reputed Family hai hamari tarah agar GYAN ki koi Ugly daughter hoti to ab tak puri City mein baat fail gayi hoti. Is baat se fark nahi padta ko Jiya marriage karke yaha aaye ya Sohan marriage karke JADHAV Family mein jaaye, insult to hamari hi hoti. "


Ab Kailashnath ko bhi sab kuch samajh mein aa raha tha, wo to bas dono Families ke relations ko thik karna chahta tha, lekin kam Knowledge hone ke wajah se wo khud ki hi Insult karwa leta.


Ek Mountain pe 2 Tiger kabhi bhi ek sath rule nahi kar sakte isi tarah YADAV Family aur JADHAV Family bhi ek sath nahi reh sakti.


Kailashnath " Atharva beta tum itna Clever kab se ho gaye ? "


Atharva " Father mein kabhi stupid nahi tha. "


Kailashnath " Aur tum ne suddenly 9th Level mein Breakthrough kaise kar liya ? "


Kailashnath ne shock hote huye pucha, is baat pe Atharva ko bhi Smile aa Gayi usey pata tha ye Question to uthega isliye usne pehle se hi answer ready Kar rakha tha.


Atharva " Father jab un dono Guards ne 3 din pehle mujhe maarne ki kosis ki thi tab waha se guzarte huye ek Great Warrior ne mujhe bacha liya. Usne undono ko maar diya aur unhone meri help karte huye meri body ke andar ki PILLS ko refine kiya aur mujhe Breakthrough karne mein bhi madad ki. "


Kailashnath " kon tha wo Warrior ? "
" Lekin dukh ki baat hai main unse mil nahi paaya. "


Kailashnath jor jor se hasne laga, uske liye isse badi khusi ki baat kya hogi ki Uska Beta ek Genius hai.


Atharva " Father humey JADHAV Family ke sath relationship ache karne ki koi jaroorat nahi hai, Mere opinion mein, City mein ek power hi reh sakti hai. Agar Karamchand khelna chahta hai to hum bhi khelenge. "


Atharva ne ek evil smile ke sath kaha.


Kailashnath " Tumne thik kaha humey unke sath War start kar deni Chahiye nahi to City ke People sochenge ki main dar gaya. Lekin kal ki wedding Ceremony ke baare mein kya kare ? "


Atharva " Jab se JIYA publicaly humare Mansion mein aayi hai to humari reputation affect ho chuki hai. Agar wo ye chahte hai to hum Unki reputation bilkul hi khatam kar denge Fragrant Sky City mein. "


Kailashnath " Tumhara plan kya hai beta ? "


Atharva " Simple kal wo Sohan ko lene aayenge marriage ke liye hum unhe Sohan hi denge lekin ek Casket mein. "


AK ke liye Friend Friend tha aur enemy enemy. Wo kabhi bhi apni enemies ke sath reh nahi paaya tha, jo uska enemy bana unme se ek ka bhi end acha nahi hua tha. Is life mein Sohan first tha aur JADHAV Family second. JADHAV Family ko jad se khatam karke Fragrant Sky City mein wo bas apni Family ko Top mein dekhna chahta tha taaki uske yaha se jaane ke baad yaha uski Family ko koi dikkat na ho.




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NEXT DAY


Aaj ka din kal ke din se bhi jyada lively tha, aaj to JADHAV Family se leke YADAV Family ke Mansion tak ka road Decorate kara gaya tha. Atharva aur Kailashnath ko chodke kisi ko nahi pata tha ki Sohan ab mar chuka hai.


Fragrant Sky City ki street pe mascular Karamchand horse pe ride karte huye aa raha tha uske piche JADHAV Family ke kayi Young Men they jinke Face pe ek alag hi arrogant look tha, ek parade unke piche aa rahi thi jiske End mein ek sedan Chair thi jisey 8 men carry kar rahe they. Yeh parade sidha Mayor Mansion ki taraf badh rahi thi raaste mein har ek person ko attract karte huye.


" Oh my god, ye koi woman hai ya God ke taraf se koi majak. "


" Uggg, mujhe vomit karne do, ye women sky ko bhi rok sakti hai aur ghost ko bhi dara sakti hai apne ugly face se. Maine suna hai Mayor ka elder son ek handsome aur genius man hai. Kya wo is marriage ke Baad jinda reh paayega. "


" Mayor apne adopted son ko ek fire pit mein daal rahe hai. "


City ke sabhi person aapas mein baate kar rahe they aur joke bana rahe they. Jaisa ki Atharva ne socha tha JADHAV Family puri City ke saamne Mayor ki insult karna Chahti hai. Itni lambi parade dekh ke sab ko pata lag gaya tha ko JADHAV Family ek Ugly Girl ko YADAV Family mein marriage karwa rahi hai aur ye baat kaafi thi Mayor ka laughing Stock banne ke liye.




TO BE CONTINUED….




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Pay Me For The Casket




Mayor Mansion ke bahar bhut jada bhid jama ho gayi thi. Mayor Mansion ke bahar Atharva aur Kailashnath khade hoke unki aur aati huyi lambi parade ko dekh rahe they, aisa dekhte huye un dono ke face pe ek cruel smile aa gayi.


Atharva " Aapne dekha Father, Karamchand itni simple si wedding ke liye itni lambi parade leke aa raha hai, Karamchand sirf hamari insult hi nahi humey dabana bhi chahta hai. "


Kailashnath " Hahaha, dekhte hai last mein kon laughing stock banta hai. "


Karamchand " Hahaha, Brother Kailashnath, main Sohan ko lene aaya hu kya wo taiyar hai ? "


Karamchand ne jor se chillate huye kaha taaki puri Crowd ko ke ye baat sun jaaye.


Kailashnath " Of course, mera beta ready hai, Atharva jao aur apne elder brother ko leke aao. "


Kailashnath ne ek smile ke sath jawab diya.
Karamchand ne ek silk Red Robe pehen rakha tha wahi Jiya ne ek phoenix cronot naam ki dress pehen rakhi thi aur wo bhut jada sharma rahi thi. Jadatar log to uske face ko dekh ke Vomit karne lage they aur dubara dekhne ki to himmat hi nahi ho rahi thi.


" Step Aside. "


Kuch moments ke baad ek loud shout sunayi di jo ki Atharva ki thi aur apne shoulder pe bada sa Casket leke aa raha tha.



Bang!


Atharva ne wo Casket aise hi Door se bahar fek diya jaise usme kuch bhi special na ho. Casket ka front Parade ki taraf tha aur uspe likha tha.


" Death. "


Puri crowd Casket ko hi dekh rahi thi aur bilkul silent ho gayi thi.


' ye log kya kar rahe hai ?'
' Wedding mein Casket laana ek buri baat hai, Mayor kya soch rahe hai ? '


Karamchand ke expression ek dum se change ho gaye aur Kailashnath se pucha.


Karamchand " Brother Kailashnath iska kya matlab hai. "


Atharva " I am sorry, mere elder brother kal ek bimari ke chalte maare gaye ab miss Jiya mere brother ki corpse se ho marriage kar sakti hai. Ye yaha pe present ho isliye maine ye mehnga Casket banwaya hai aur tension ki baat nahi hai isne Casket mein wedding dress hi pehen rakhi hai. "


Atharva ne apni voice mein QI energy mix karte huye bola taki Atharva har ek person ko ye baat suna sake.


Crowd mein ek dum se jor jor se baate hone lagi thi unhone pehle kabhi bhi aisa nahi dekha tha. Jadhav Family yaha pe ladke ko lene aayi thi lekin unka welcome uski Dead Body ke sath hua tha. Isse koi fark nahi padta ko Sohan jinda hai ya mar gaya, kyuki ye act sidha sidha Jadhav Family ki insult kar raha tha. Specially jab Jadhav Family itni badi parade ke sath aayi ho aur unhe mila sirf ek Casket, unki reputation ek dum se niche gir gayi thi.


Karamchand " Kailashnath, ye kya tum koi majak kar rahe ho ? "


Karamchand se ab apna gussa control nahi ho raha tha


Atharva " Uncle Karamchand tumhe ye kyu lag raha hai ki hum majak kar rahe hai ? "
" Tum yaha ladke ko lene aaye, aapne ye to bataya hi nahi ki Jinda chahiye ya mara hua. "


Paas mein khade logo ko lag raha tha jaise abhi unke mouth se blood bahar aa jaayega, ye kis type ki explanation thi.


Karamchand " Kailashnath tum aur tumhara beta bakwas mat karo. Sohan QI JING REALM ke 9th level ka warrior hai aur wo kal alive aur ek dum thik tha. Aise kaise mar gya ? "


Atharva " Agar tumhe vishwas nahi hai to khud hi ye Casket khol ke dekh lo. After all wo tumhare hi Family ka member hai ab. "


Atharva ne Friendly tone mein Karamchand se kaha. Kailashnath Atharva ke bagal mein silent khada tha aur sab kuch Atharvako handle karne de raha tha. Kailashnath Atharva se kaafi khus tha kyuki wo Karamchand jaise person se ek dum Normal aur Calm tone mein baat kar raha tha aur usse Argue bhi kar raha tha jo koi Normal 16 saal ka ladka Nahi kar sakta. Atharva ko pata tha ki Karamchand uspe attack nahi kar sakta kyuki Kailashnath aur Karamchand dono hi QI HAI Realm ke peak par they aur dono ki strength same thi.


" Fuck, hum yaha pe ladka lene aaye they aur Mayor humey ek Casket de raha hai, ye Jadhav Family ki insult hai. "


Jadhav Family ke ek Young man ne jor chillate huye kaha.


Atharva " hahhaaha, bilkul sahi kaha mere Friend, Lekin Jadhav Family thi jisne pehle humari insult ki hai. Sab log dhyan se dekho is Jiya ke Face ko, kyu Jadhav Family aise Sincerity dikhati hai humari Family ko? Main yaha sabhi men se puchta hu agar mein tumhe chance du is Jiya se Marriage karne ka wo bhi free mein to kya tum log insulted nahi howoge. Aur jo isse marriage karna chahte hai wo aage aaye."


Atharvane pehle jor se hasa fir ye baat boli aur Crowd ke saamne puri situation clear kar di uske paas koi reason nahi tha apne enemies ko respect dene ka.


Ye baat sunne ke baad waha khade har aadmi ka face green ho gaya tha.


' Shit, main khud suicide kar lunga is ladki se marriage karne se pehle. Jadhav Family itni badi Family hai aur unhone itni ugly Girl select ki hai marriage ke liye. Ye clearly ek insult thi Mayor Family ke liye. '


Ye baat kisi ne Crowd mein boli.


Atharva " Aur mujhe to doubt hai ki ye Ugly Girl tumhari daughter hai bhi ya nahi ? "


Atharva ne ek Cruel smile ke sath kaha.


Karamchand " Aaj se Jadhav Family aur YADAV Family enemies hai. "


Karamchand ek dum gusse se ubal raha tha wo ek dum differently Atharva ko dekh raha tha. Karamchand ek smart person tha to usey ab samajh aa raha tha ki suru se hi wo Atharva ke plan mein fas chuka tha Atharva ne Sohan ka use karke usey yaha parade laane pe majboor kar diya taaki wo inki insult kar sake.


Atharva " Good, mujhe koi fark nahi padta hum enemy hai ya nahi bas is Casket aur mere brother ko apne sath le jaana. Aur mujhe is Casket ka price dena mat bhulna ye bhut mehnga hai. "


JIANG Family ke sabhi member apne Young Master ki performance dekh ke ek dum surprise they. Unhe aisa lag raha tha jaise ye koi stranger ho. Jis useless Atharva ko wo jaante they usme kabhi itne guts nahi they ki wo Karamchand ke saamne aise baat kar sake. Waise Master Sohan kaise marr gaye? Lekin is baat se koi fark nahi padta kyuki Mayor waise bhi Atharva ko hi Pyar karta hai.


'Shameless, despicable, talented'


YADAV Family ke young Master ne Jadhav Family ki reputation ko mitti mein mila diya tha. Jo lambi Parade Jadhav Family leke aayi thi wohi abhi sabse bada laughing stock thi puri Fragrant Sky City ki.


Karamchand " Good, Very Good, Kailashnath tum aur tumhara beta thoda sa wait karo thode hi time tum dono is City mein ruk nahi paaoge. Let's go. "


Karamchand abhi bhut gusse mein tha, wo ek wise man hai aur aaj ek 16 saal ke bache ne uski réputation kharab kar di thi. Baat sirf réputation ki hi nahi thi uski insult bhi huyi thi puri City ke saamne.


Horse ko kick karte huye Karamchand waha se nikal gaya ab wo yaha ek minute bhi rukna nahi chahta tha.


" Atharva ek true man kabhi bhi aise method use nahi karta. Agar tumme himmat hai akele fight karne ki to main Suraj tumhe itna pitunga ki tumhare Father bhi tmhe nahi pehchan paayenge. "


Ek young ladke ne apne horse se niche utarte huye Atharva se kaha. Suraj Jadhav Family ka ek talented young man tha, halanki Karamchand yaha se chala gaya tha lekin wo Atharva ko itni asani se jaane nahi dena chahta tha. Unke paas khone ko kuch bacha hi nahi tha agar wo ab fight karke Atharva ko hara deta hai to kam se kam kuch to honor wapas aayega ye dikhake ki Jadhav Family ke Geniuses YADAV Family ke Geniuses se better hai.


"That's right, Atharva kya tumhare andar himmat hai challenge accept karne ki ? "


Jadhav Family ke doosre young man ne chillake kaha uske face pe arrogance saaf dikh rahi thi. Sabki nazaro mein Atharva ek useless Fool tha, beshak usne Jadhav Family ki insult ki ho lekin Jadhav Family ka koi bhi Genius asani se hara sakta tha aur maar bhi sakta tha.


Atharva " All right, tum mujhe fight karna chahte ho to main tumhara challenge accept kar lunga. Lekin main bina kisi Bet ke fight nahi karne wala. "


Atharva ne smile karte huye kaha. Yaha tak ki Kailashnath bhi jor se has raha tha, uske alawa kisi ko bhi Atharvaki real strength nahi pata thi. Sohan jo ki 9th level pe tha wo bhi Atharva ka koi match nahi tha. Aur Suraj to sirf 8th Level pe hi tha.


Suraj " Thik hai batao tum kya Bet lagana chahte ho ? "


Suraj ek dum khus ho gaya tha ye sunke ki Atharva uska Challenge accept kar raha hai.


Atharva " Hum log is Casket pe Bet lagayenge. Agar main harta hu to ye Casket Mayor Mansion ke front door pe 3 din tak latka rahega. Aur agar tum haare to tum is Casket ko us Sedan Chair pe rakh ke le jaaoge aur apne Front door pe 3 din ke liye latka doge. Agar aisa nahi kiya to Jadhav Family ke sabhi members bastard hai. "


Atharva ne jaanbujh kar jor se chilla ke kaha taaki sab sun sake. Ab Suraj fas chuka tha aur wo Bet ko cancel bhi nahi kar sakta tha kyuki Puri City ne sun liya tha. Agar wo haarke Casket leke jaate hai to wo aur bhi jada laughing stock ban jaayenge aur agar Bet accept nahi karte hai to aur insult hogi inki aur wo bastard kehlayenge. Fark nahi padta result kya ho insult Jadhav Family ki honi thi.


Suraj " Deal "


Suraj ne bina hesitation ke answer de diya jaise Atharva uske saamne koi Ant ho aur wo ye Bet jeet hi jaayega. Isliye usey Bet se koi matlab nahi tha.


Is event ko dekhte huye Crowd mein ek baar firse shor hone laga tha. Unhe laga tha Karamchand ke jaate hi maamla khatam ho jaayega lekin yaha dono Families ke young man aapas mein Fight karne ko ready they aur inki Bet inki Family ki reputation thi. Lekin logo ki attention Atharva pe thi ki ye Useless Fool Suraj joki 8th level pe hai usse kaise Fight karega.





TO BE CONTINUED….
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The Six Solar Finger



Ek evil smile ke sath Suraj Atharva ke saamne aake khada hogya.


Atharva " Kya tum taiyar ho Suraj ? "
" Agar nahi to tumhe ek aur mauka deta hu main. "


Suraj " Tum majak kar rahe ho kya? "
" Tum jaise ke sath fight karne ke liye mujhe prepare hone ki jaroorat nahi. "



SLAP!


Jaise hi Suraj ne bolna band kiya waise sabhi ko ek loud sound sunayi diya. Crowd ne bas Atharva ko apni jagah se disappear hote dekha aur fir Suraj ko slap karte huye. Ek slap se hi Suraj niche gir gaya.


Silence!
Ek dum Silence!

Crowd ne pehle Suraj ko dekha jisse khada nahi hoya jaa raha tha aur fir unhone shocking expression se Atharva ko dekha.


" Fuck ! Kisne kaha tha ye ki Young Master QI JING Realm ke 1st level ka useless fool hai. "
" Young Master ke single slap se hi ye Suraj niche gir gaya jisse khada bhi nahi hoya jaa raha. "
" Kon kehta hai Young Master useless hai ? "


" Awesome….., kya Atharva abhi tak apni true strength hide karke rakhe huye tha ? "


" Kya ye hamare Young Master hai ? "
" Ye ek dum different person lag rahe hai. "


Puri Crowd aur YADAV Family ke Guards mein is tarah ki baaate hone lagi thi.


Suraj " Impossible, aise nahi ho sakta? Tumne mujhe kaise haraya ? "


Jisey sabse jyada shock laga tha wo Suraj tha, jo abhi bhi ground pe leta hua tha aur sir bhaari ho raha tha. Atharva ke ek Slap ne usey weak bana diya tha uske body ke andar ki Yuan Power ek dum mess ban chuki thi. Uske paas hilne tak ki strength nahi thi.


2 Young man jaldi se aaye aur unhone Suraj ko sahara deke uthaya, in dono ke hi face pe dare huye expression they.


Bet ko yaad karke to Suraj ko marne ka mann kar raha tha agar wo bina Bet ke ladta to uski reputation down hoti lekin Bet ki wajah se puri Family ki insult ho jaayegi.


Atharva " Chang "


Chang piche se bhaagta hua aaya aur Atharva ke saamne sir jhuka ke bola.


Chang " young Master aapki kya wish hai ? "


Jabse Atharva ne Chang ko 10 Gold coins diye hai tabse Chang ko lagta hai ki Atharva bhut kind hearted hai.


Atharva " Tum is Casket ko JADHAV Family ki Sedan Chair pe rakhne mein meri madad karo. Fir inka picha karke dekho ki ye Casket leke jaate hai ya nahi agar nahi leke jaate to aaj se JADHAV Family ke members bastards ke naam se jaane jaayenge. "


Atharva ne jor se chillate huye kaha.



Blergh!


Suraj ko to ye sunte hi khun ki Vomit ho gayi aur wahi behosh ho gaya. Suraj is time badi dikkat mein tha agar wo Casket leke wapis jaata hai to Karamchand uski body se uski Skin alag kar dega. Aur agar nahi leke jaata hai to City ke sabhi log JADHAV Family ko bastard kahenge. Chahe wo kuch bhi kare lekin Karamchand usko Jinda nahi chodega.


Chang " Yes, Young Master. "


Chang ko fark nahi padta tha kisi se bhi usko to bas apne Young Master ko khus karna tha. Usne soch liya tha aaj ke baad wo Atharva ka har ek order follow karega bina refuse kiye.



Haaa!


Ek loud shout ke sath Chang ne wo bhaari Casket apne Shoulder pe rakh liya. QI JING Realm ke 6th level pe hone se ek Bhaari Casket uthana uske liye easy tha.


Bina kuch kahe aur sune Chang ne wo Casket Jiya jaha baithi thi uske bagal mein rakh diya. Jiya jor se ro rahi thi Apne husband ka Casket dekh ke jo usey aur bhi jyada ugly bana raha tha.


Atharva " Suraj tum log jis kaam ke liye aaye they ab wo pura hua, isliye jaldi se yaha se niklo aur wedding Ceremony ko aage badhao. Aaj se YADAV Family ki kisi bhi Property pe JADHAV Family ka koi bhi member welcome nahi hai. Aur tum jo mujhse haar gaye ho, aaj ke baad mujhe apna face mat dikhana, agar kabhi dikha to tumhe wahi pitna suru kardunga aur itna pitunga ki tumhari Mother bhi tumhara Face nahi pehchaan paayegi. Now, Get Lost ! "


Finally, JADHAV Family ki parade jaha se aayi thi usi taraf wapis Chali gayi wo bhi sirf ek Casket ke sath. Jitni khusi se ye log aaye they. Usse jyada dukh mein ye log wapis jaa rahe they.


Rumors aur discussion puri Fragrant Sky City mein suney jaa sakte they. Jo do Families ke bich mein Conflict tha ab wo another level pe pahuch chuka tha. Sabko pata tha ab Fragrant Sky City ke peaceful din jaane waale hai aur ye jab tak waapis nahi aayenge jab tak ek Family jeet nahi jaati.


Jabse YADAV Family aur JADHAV Family ke relationship kharab huye they us din se hi Kailashnath ek dum busy ho gaya tha. Kailashnath Family ke paas bahut saari properties thi jinme Mansions, Elixir shop, Commerce Chamber aur bhut si chize aati thi. Aur inme se jyadatar properties ko Sohan sambhalta tha. Ab Sohan to mar chuka tha isliye sab kuch Kailashnath ko akele hi sambhalna pad Raha tha.


Atharva us incident ke baad apne Mansion se bahar na aane ka faisla kiya tha. Atharva dusre logo se jyada aage ki sochta tha, uske paas ek simple tarika tha apne enemies ko harane ka aur wo thi Strength. Ye aisa world hai jaha pe Jo Strong hai uski sab respect karenge aur sabse jyada Strong hai usko log follow karenge chahe wo galat ho ya sahi.


Har ek single Warrior ke liye Cultivation talent aur Combat talent bhut jaroori hai. Atharva ne The Dragon Transformation Skill ko Cultivate karna start Kar diya tha jo usko doosro se jyada strength deti thi. Lekin Cultivation Skill sirf Foundation hoti hai aur ek Great Warrior banne ke liye usko Bahut achi Combat Skills ki jarurat padegi.


Saint Origin Universe mein Cultivation Skills ke jaise hi Combat Skills bhi Four part mein divide hai

1. Mortal

2. Earth
3. Heaven

4. Saint
Aur ye each level bhi 3 levels mein divide hai Low, Medium, High.


QI JING Realm sirf ek Foundation realm hai ek person QI HAI Realm mein Breakthrough karne ke baad hi Combat Skill ko practice kar sakta hai. Lekin Atharva doosro se different tha uske paas several Combat Skill ko practice karne ka experience tha. Aur The Dragon Transformation Skill usko normal person se jyada Yuan Energy provide karti thi, isliye filhal QI HAI Realm ke early stage ke Warrior Atharva ka koi match nahi they.


QI JING Realm ke Warrior isliye Combat Skills practice nahi kar paate they kyuki unke paas enough Yuan Power nahi hoti thi Skill ko support karne ki. Lekin Atharva ki story different thi.


Past Life mein Atharva ne Jo Combat Skill Practice ki thi wo thi ' Nine Solar Energy ' jo ki ek Saint level ki thi aur is Skill ko Atharva ne khud hi banaya tha apne liye. Ye bahut hi powerful Skill thi jo surroundings mein se energy collect karke User ko Great benefit provide karwati thi.


Is Combat Skill ko practice karne ke liye Ek strong body aur huge amount of QI energy chahiye. Joki bhut difficult hai achieve karna.


Past Life mein Atharva ne The Dragon Transformation Skill ki jagah Xuan Yuan naam ki skill Cultivate ki thi jo body ko bhut jyada Vital energy QI deti hai. Lekin iske baad bhi wo apni past life mein Nine Solar Energies Combat Skill ke Full potential ko use nahi kar paya tha.


Lekin is Life mein Atharva The Dragon Transformation Skill ko Cultivate kar raha tha, jo Xuan Yuan Skill se powerful hai. Har ek Red Dragon Mark ke sath uske bhut jyada amount mein Vital energy QI milegi aur iske sath wo is life mein Nine Solar Energies ko full potential ke sath use kar paayega.


Atharva " Too bad, main sirf QI JING REALM mein hu aur Nine Solar Energies is World ki sabse Strong Combat Skill hai. Even Divine Core Realm ke Warrior bhi is Skill ko practice nahi kar sakte. "



{ 5 Foundational Realm

1. QI JING REALM (9 Level hai)
2. QI HAI REALM (Early, Mid, Late Stage)
3. MORTAL CORE REALM (Early, Mid, Late Stage)
4. HEAVENLY CORE REALM (Early, Mid, Late Stage)
5. DIVINE CORE REALM (Early, Mid, Late Stage)

ISKE BAAD AATE HAI MAIN REALM JO UPPER 5 HAI WO SIRF FOUNDATION HAI.

6. COMBAT SOUL REALM (Early, Mid, Late Stage)
7. COMBAT KING REALM (First Grade to 9th Grade)
8. COMBAT EMPEROR REALM (First Grade to 9th Grade)

9. SAINT REALM (Minor, Great ) }


" Main abhi ke liye Nine Solar Energies ko practice nahi kar sakta. Lekin mein Six Solar Fingers Combat Skill ko practice kar sakta hu jo ki Nine Solar Energies Skill ka hi ek part hai. Six Solar Fingers Nine Solar Energies ka Foundation hai aur Six Solar Finger ko ek High Earth Level ki skill kaha jaa sakta hai. "


Atharva ne apne face pe ek smile liye ye socha. Puri Fragrant Sky City mein ek bhi Earth Level ki Combat Skills nahi thi, isliye yaha pe koi bhi Six Solar Fingers ko halke mein nahi le sakta tha.


Six Solar Finger mein Six Style they. Har ek Finger ki power alag Level pe thi jaha First Finger kisi bhi Stone ko bilkul Crush kar sakti thi wahi Sixth Finger kisi Mountain ko bilkul wipe kar sakti thi.


Next 3 din Atharva Six Solar Fingers ko practice karta raha bina apne Mansion se bahar nikle. Aur Kailashnath bhi bhut jyada busy ho gaya tha business manage karne mein ki uske paas Atharva ko disturb karne ka time nahi tha.


In 3 dino mein Atharva ne saara time The Dragon Transformation Skill ko Cultivate karne mein aur Six Solar Fingers ko practice karne mein lagaya. Is combination se uski Vital Energy QI se bharne lagi thi.


In 3 dino mein Atharva QI JING Realm ke ek dum peak pe pahuch gaya tha. Bas ek step dur tha QI HAI Realm mein Breakthrough karne se. Jo ek Red Dragon Mark form hua tha wo bhi bas Complete hone hi wala tha. Uske punch ki strength 5000 pound se 8000 pound ki ho gayi thi jo kisi bhi Early QI HAI REALM ke warrior ki nahi hoti.



Haaa!


Garden mein Atharva ek black Robe pehene khada tha aur usne jor se chillate huye apni Finger se ek Golden Ray release ki jo lightning speed se uske Finger tips se nikli thi.


Bam!


Wo Golden Ray waha pe rakhe ek bade se stone ko cut karte karte huye nikal gayi. Jaha se Golden Ray ne Stone ko Cut kiya tha waha pe smoke nikalne laga tha. Agar Fragrant Sky City mein koi is Attack ko dekh leta to pagal ho jaata.


" Main abhi sirf ek Finger hi use kar sakta hu Six Solar Fingers mein se aur abhi bhi ye First Finger ka full potential nahi tha. Aur is Attack mein meri body ki saari Yuan Energy khatam ho gayi. "


Atharva abhi paseeno mein bheeg raha tha aur weak feel kar raha tha attack karne ke baad aur jo attack tha wo bhi First Finger ke real potential ka half tha. Halanki ye powerful dikh raha tha lekin full power se bhut dur tha pura potentiel use karne ke liye aur practice ki jarurat padegi.


Ye bhi badi baat thi ki Atharva First Finger use kar paa raha tha. Kyuki SiX Solar Fingers ek High Earth Level ki Combat Skill thi ek QI JING aur QI HAI Realm ke Warrior itna bhi nahi kar sakte they.


Atharva ne Apne bag se Ek Restoration Pill nikal aur usko apne muh mein daal liya jisse uski Yuan Energy waapis pehle ke Level pe aa gayi. Restoration Pill ek aisi Pill thi jiski jarurat har ek warrior ko padti thi chahe wo koi se bhi realm mein ho. Fragrant Sky City mein Restoration Pill ki kimat 100 Silver Coins thi.


" Is Restoration Pill ki effectiveness sirf 60% hai baaki 40% impurities hai. Rubbish! "


Atharva ne khud se sochte huye apna sir hillaya. Mayor Mansion mein jo Restoration Pill thi wo sabse low Quality ki thi. Uske liye 60% effectiveness wali Restoration Pill kisi garbage se kam nahi thi.



Knock! Knock! Knock!


Atharva ko pehle se hi pata tha ye Kailashnath hi hai, isliye usne apna Door khola to usey Kailashnath ka worried face dikha.


Kailashnath " Atharva tumne fir improvement ki hai. "



Atharva ki QI sense karke Kailashnath ke worried face pe thodi si smile aa gayi thi. Sirf 3 din mein Atharva QI JING Realm ke 9th Level se ek dum peak pe aa gaya tha jaha wo kabhi bhi Breakthrough kar sakta tha QI HAI Realm ke Early stage mein.






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Atharva “ Father aap worried lag rahe hain? Kya hua ? ”


Kamalnath “ Aao andar chal ke baat karte hai. ”


Kamalnath aur Atharva dono andar ki taraf chal ke aa gaye. Room ke andar dono father aur son ek dusre ke aamne saamne baithe they.


Kamalnath “ Atharva tumhe pata hona chahiye ki Fragrant Sky City mein humare bhut se business hai, lekin jo sabse jyada money produce karta hai wo Pill Concocting ka hai. ”


{ Pill Concocting matlab jaha pill banayi jaati hai. }


Atharva “ Haa mujhe pata hai. ”


Atharva ne apna sir hillate huye jawab diya. Ek warrior ke liye pills ki supply se jada jaroori kuch nahi hota. Fragrant Sky City mein chahe wo JADHAV Family ho ya YADHAV Family dono ko sabse jyada money Pills ke business mein hi milta tha.


Kamalnath “ Hamara Pill Concocting ka business JADHAV Family ki wajah se bhut jyada affected hua hai, aur hum ab bhut badi musibat mein hai. ”


Kamalnath ne ek worried look ke sath kaha.


Atharva “ Father, exactly kya ho raha hai ? ”


Kamalnath “ JADHAV Family ne 70% effectiveness wali Restoration Pills Concoct karne wala master hire kiya hai. Wahi hamari shops mein jitni bhi Pills hai wo sab 60% effectiveness wali hai. Unhone ek baar Pills bechna start kiya to humara business hi band ho jaayega. Agar JADHAV Family ne puri Fragrant Sky City ko unki Pills se khush kar diya to hamari Family ka to is City mein rukna bhi muskil ho jaayega. ”


Atharva ko ab samajh mein aa raha tha ki uske Father itne worried kyu hai. Pill business khatre mein tha lekin Atharva ko is baat se koi farak nahi pada tha. Balki wo to khus tha kyuki apni past life mein Ek Great Warrior hone ke sath usko bhut saari chizo ka experience tha jinme se Pills Concoct karna bhi ek tha. Usne ek baar to 90% effectiveness ke sath Saint level ki Pill bhi Concoct ki thi. Restoration Pill ek basic Pill hai aur wo easily thousand pills concoct kar sakta hai wo bhi 100% effectiveness ke sath. Atharva apne past life ke experience ke sath easily JADHAV Family ko business se bahar kar sakta hai.


Atharva “ Father aap chinta mat kijiye, main kal Pill Shop pe visit karunga. ”


Kamalnath ne apna sir sehmati mein hillaya, halanki usey koi idea nahi tha ki Atharva Pill Shop pe kyu visit karna chahta hai ?


Atharva “ Father is Cultivation Skill ko dekho agar ye aapko fit hoti hai kya ? ”


Atharva ne ye bolte huye Kamalnath ko ek golden Paper de diya.


“ Cultivation Skill ! ”


Kamalnath ne surprise hote huye wo Paper Atharva ke hath se le liya aur usko curiosity ke sath dekhne lage.


“ Xuan Yuan Cultivation Skill. ”


Ek ek single word ko padhte waqt Kamalnath ki aankhe badi hoti chali gayi. Kuch aur words padhte hi wo ek dum excited ho gaye. Jab unhone puri Script khatam ki to unke hath bhi shake ho rahe they jaise ye chota sa Paper ka Weight Thousand Pound ka ho.


Kamalnath “ Atharva tumne ye itni achi Cultivation Skill kaha se obtain ki ? ”


Kamalnath bhut jyada excited tha, script dekhne ke baad bhi usey ye nahi pata tha ki ye Cultivation Skill konse Level ki hai, lekin wo koi idiot nahi tha. Wo asani se bata sakta tha ki Ye Cultivation Skill uski current Cultivation Skill se bhut jyada Powerful aur Superior hai. Ye Xuan Yuan Skill puri Fragrant Sky City mein kisi bhi cheez se compare nahi ho sakti thi. Yaha tak ki QI Province mein bhi iske level ki skill koi nahi hogi.


Ye script Atharva ne likhi thi. Apni Past Life mein Atharva isi Skill ko Cultivate karke the Greatest Saint bana tha, lekin ab uske pass The Dragon Transformation Skill hai to usey Xuan Yuan Skill ki koi jaroorat nahi hai. Kamalnath ko ye Skill de dena ek dum appropriate decision tha.


Atharva “ Father, ek Great Master ne mujhe ye skill di thi, agar aapko pasand hai to aap is Skill ko Cultivate karna start kar do. ”


Agar Kamalnath abhi se ye Skill Cultivate karna suru kar deta hai to usey 2 month mein MORTAL CORE Realm mein Breakthrough karne mein koi dikkat nahi hogi.


Agar Kamalnath ko pata chal jata ki jo Skill usne pakad rakhi hai wo Saint Level ki hai to wo khusi se hi mar jaata. Isiliye Atharva ne Kamalnath ko purposely Skill ka Level nahi bataya.


Kamalnath bilkul apne thoughts mein kho chukka tha usne to abhi se hi Xuan Yuan Cultivation Skill ko study karna suru kar diya tha. Wo is Skill se bhut jyada attract ho gaya tha aur wo khud ko apne thoughts se bahar bhi nahi nikal pa raha tha. Achanak hi wo pura pasine mein bheeg gaya aur aisa lagne laga ki wo abhi behosh ho jaayega. Ye sab sirf ek Minute ke andar hua tha jabse usne Skill study karna suru kiya tha.


Atharva “ Father. "


Atharva ne jor se chillate huye Kamalnath ko jagaya jo khudke thoughts mein hi kho chukka tha. Kamalnath sirf QI HAI Realm ke peak par tha aur uska talent bhi ordinary hi tha. Wo bhut tezi se Saint Level ki Cultivation Skill ko use kar raha tha isiliye aisa hua tha. Apne mouth se dhua nikalte huye Kamalnath ne Cultivation karna band kar diya aur tab usey realise hua ki wo ek dum exhausted hai.


Kamalnath “ Atharva ye Skill bhut powerful hai aur tumhare Dad ke paas limited talent hai, isiliye Cultivation ko rokna mere liye bhut hard ho gaya tha. "


Atharva “ Dad itni powerful Skill ko Cultivate karne mein time aur effort lagta hai. Aap isko bhut slowly-2 study kar sakte ho. ”


Kamalnath “ Beta tum ek dum sahi keh rahe ho, main QI HAI Realm ka warrior hu lekin fir bhi tumhari mental capacity mujhse jyada hai. Aisa lagta hai mera beta mujhse pehle hi bada ho gaya hai. Tumhara bhut acha Future hoga. Hahahhaha. ”


Kamalnath ko yaha se bhejne ke baad Atharva firse The Dragon Transformation Skill ko Cultivate karne laga, ye Skill Xuan Yuan skill se bhut powerfull hai. Agar Atharva ke paas apni past life ke 1000 years ka experience nahi hota to wo bilkul bhi aise result nahi nikal paata jaise uske paas ab hai.



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NEXT MORNING
PILL SHOP



Next Morning, Atharva ne ek clean Black Colour ka Robe pehna aur Mayor Mansion se nikal gaya. Usne apne hath mein ek Fan pakad rakha tha, apni smile aur bright eyes ki wajah se wo bhut handsome lag raha tha.


Pill Shop hi, wo YADHAV Family ka sabse important business tha aur wo Mayor Mansion se jyada dur bhi nahi tha. Atharva 15 minutes mein Pill Shop ke front door ke saamne pahuch gaya. Ye badi classical building thi jaise ordinary Pills building hoti hai. Pills ka strong Aroma door ke bahar bhi smell kiya jaa sakta tha.


“ Aap aa gaye Young Master. ”


“ Oh talented and handsome Young Master, aapke looks bhut gorgeous hai. Aap koi Mortal to lagte hi nahi ho, aisa lagta hai jaise aap Heavens se utre huye Angel ho. ”


Jo 2 guard Shop ke bahar khade they wo Atharva ko salute maarte huye uski tareef kiye jaa rahe they. Past mein bhi wo Atharva ko aise hi salute karte they aur tareef bhi aise hi karte they, lekin ab fark itna tha ki inki aankho mein sach mein respect thi.


Atharva “ Not bad, jaao aur jaake treasurey se 10 silver coins collect kar lo, lekin aage se mere saamne aisa bilkul bhi mat karna. ”


Fir Ek hath back pe aur ek hath mein Fan pakde huye Atharva Pill Shop ke andar chala gaya.


“ Apki jai ho Young Master. ”



Dono guards ne chillake kaha.

Pill Shop YADHAV Family ka main business tha lekin fir bhi yaha jyada guards nahi they. Kyuki Pill shop ke jo incharge they wo Jay tha, jo sirf ek alchemist hi nahi balki QI HAI Realm ke mid level ka warrior tha. Secondly Pill shop Mayor Mansion se jyada dur nahi thi. Agar yaha kuch hota bhi hai to Mansion se immediately help aa sakti thi.


Pill Shop ke meeting room mein 3 old man baithe they jinke face depressed aur clueless they. Jo 3 old man they wo teeno hi apni fifties mein they aur unhone grey robe pehna hua tha. Unme se ek fat tha aur ek bhut skinny. Jo old man bich mein baitha tha uski average body thi aur wo hi is Pill Shop ka incharge Jay tha. Jai hai wo Kamalnath ka best friend aur ye koi bhi bata sakta hai kyuki family member na hone ke bawjood Kamalnath ne usey Pill Shop ka incharge bana rakha hai.


“ Uncle Jay, aapke face pe ye depressed look bilkul suit nahi karta. ”


Atharva ne andar aate huye kaha. Trio Atharva ko dekhte hi apni seat se khade ho gaye.


Jai “ Young master aap yaha kyu aaye hai ? ”


Jai ko chodke koi bhi alchemist past mein Atharva se baat nahi karta tha, lekin jo 3 din pehle hua usko dekhke sabke mind badal gaye they.



Atharva “ Uncle Jai, Dad ne mujhe bataya hai ki JADHAV Family ne ek alchemist hire kiya hai jo 70% effectiveness ke sath restoration pill concoct kar sakta hai. ”


Atharva ne wahi pe rakhi huyi ek chair pe baithte huye kaha.


Jai “ Young Master, aapko ye bhi pata hai. Humne last kuch dino mein koi bhi restoration pill sell nahi ki hai. Hamari abilities limited hai aur hum 70% effectiveness wali pill banane ki ability nahi rakhte.”


Atharva “ don’t give up uncle, main aapko aise person se milwaunga jo 70% effectiveness se jayada effectiveness wala pill concoct kar sakta hai. ”


Jai “ What ? "
" Young master aise kisi ko jaante hai. ”


Jai ne khus hote huye kaha.


“ kaha hai wo alchemist ? "
" Agar wo hamari help karne ke liye taiyar hai to hum bilkul bhi disrespect show nahi karenge. ”


Fat man ne serious hote huye kaha.


Atharva “ Tum logo ko wo person dur lag raha hai, lekin wo tumhare bilkul saamne hi to hai. ”


Apne fan ko fold karte huye Atharva khada ho gaya.


“ What ? "
" Young master, kya tum khud ke baare mein hi to nahi keh rahe ho ? ”


Fat old man ne surprise hote huye Atharva se pucha. Baaki dono ka bhi same reaction tha.


Atharva “ Haa, main hi wo alchemist hu. ”


Hahhahahaha……


Jaise hi Atharva ne jawab diya waise hi trio ek dum jor se hasne lage.


Jai ” Young master aap pills concoct karna chahte ho ? "
" Majak karna band karo, sabko pata hai aap sirf pills consume karne mein ache ho naaki pills concoct karne mein. "


Atharva “ Uncle Jai mujhe itna bhi kam mat samjho. Wo kahawat hai na doctor wo hi banta hai jo sabse jyada bimar raha ho. Lekin mere liye alag hai ‘ acha alchemist wo hi banta hai jisne bahut saari pills consume ki ho. ’”


Trio ek baar firse hasne laga.


“ agar pills consume karne se hi log alchemist bante to abhi tak Saint Origin mein sabhi Alchemist hote. Ab aap yaha se jaao aur humey koi solution nikalne mein disturb mat karo. ”


Atharva “ Lagta hai tum log mujpe vishwas nahi karoge jab tak main tumhe apni ability na dikha du. Lets go, mujhe furnace room mein le chalo. ”


Apni sleeves ko uppar chahdate huye Atharva aise act kar raha tha jaise wo kuch bada karne wala ho. Trio ne Atharva ko dekha, unhe aisa bilkul bhi nahi laga ki wo majak kar raha hai. Kya wo sach mein itni pills consume karke alchemist ban gaya hai?










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“ Bhut saari Pills khaane se Alchemist ban jaana....Impossible. "


Trio ko abhi bhi believe nahi tha Atharva pe, halanki Atharva unhe kaafi serious lag raha raha tha.


Jai “ Thik hai, chalo Young Master ki Alchemist Skill bhi dekh lete ha i”


Jai ne haste huye kaha aur Atharva ko Furnace room ki taraf le jaane laga. Un sab ke paas Young Master ko accompany karne ka kafi time tha, kyuki Pill Business to abhi band hi tha unka. Furnace room pass mein hi tha aur bilkul Pill Shop ke middle mein bhi. Furnace room ki walls thick, heavy stones se bani huyi thi. Alchemists ke alawa is room mein kisi ko bhi andar jaane ki permission nahi thi.


Jai “ young Master, Furnace aur fire ready hai aur 3 Restoration Pill banane ke ingredients bhi ready hai. ”


Jai ne ek smile ke sath kaha.


Atharva “ Okay, tum log bahar hi wait karo, main akele hi Pill Concoct karunga. ”


Atharva apni baat khatam karte hi Furnace room mein enter kar gaya aur apne piche usne heavy stone door bhi band kar diya.


“ Sir aapko yakeen hai kya Young Master sach mein Pill Concot karna jaante hai ? ”


Skiny old man ne pucha.


Jai “ Kya tumhe main koi fool lagta hu ? "
" Ek Alchemist banne mein Soul ki Strength sabse important cheez hoti hai. Young Master kaafi change ho gaye, ek useless fool se ek Genius mein. Lekin agar tum mujhse kaho ki wo apne Soul ki strength ko badha sakte hai, to main Bet laga sakta hu ki ye Imossible hai. ”


Ek Soul ko na dekha jaa sakta hai na hi touch kiya jaa sakta hai, lekin ye body ka sabse important part hai aur Soul hi source hai jaha se Alchemy ki jaa sakti hai.


Sabke paas Soul hoti hai aur ek Alchemist banne ke liye person ko apne Soul ki Strength ko badhana padta hai. Jisey na dekha jaa sakta hai aur naa hi touch kiya jaa sakta hai uski strength ko unleash karna bhut difficult hai. Aur yahi reason hai Saint Origin Universe mein countable Alchemist hi hai.


Atharva apni Past life mein ek excellent Alchemist tha. Halanki wo 100 years pehle mar gaya tha aur isliye uski Soul ko kaafi damage huya tha, lekin usne usi time ek secret Skill ko use karke apni Soul ko 100 years future mein ek ladke ki Soul ke sath merge kar diya tha. Aur isiliye wo ab bhi jo similar level ke person hai unse jyada Soul ki strength ko unleash kar sakta tha.


Furnace room mein Atharva ne apne saamne rakhi Bronze Furnace ko dekhte huye sir hillaya.


Atharva “ Kitni Poor aur low quality ki Furnace hai. Mujhe khud hi Ground Fire ko control karna hoga. Ye kitna troublesome hai. ”


Furnace Room ki banawat aur Furnace ki placement ek dum sahi jagah aur sahi tarike se hone chahiye. Example ke liye jo uske saamne Bronze Furnace thi wo aisi jagah located thi jaha se ground fire ko control karne me asani ho. Halanki jo uske saamne Bronze Furnace thi wo sirf Ground fire ko hi use kar sakti thi, jiski quality bhut jyada kam thi. Ground fire sirf ek step upper hoti hai Normal fire se, yaha tak ki beast flame bhi isse better quality ki hoti hai.


Soul aur Fire ki strength Alchemist ke liye bhut important hoti hai. Ek bronze Furnace aur ground fire ka use sirf low level alchemist hi karte hai. Apni past life mein ek three types ki fire ko control kar sakta tha aur kisi Furnace ki jaroorat bhi nahi padti thi Pill Concoct karne mein.


Lekin ab koi past nahi tha, abhi uski current strength ke according usko bhi Furnace use karni padegi.


Furnace ke paas mein hi 3 Restoration Pill Concoct karne ke liye efficient ingredient they. Atharva ne estimate laga liya tha ki wo itne ingredients mein araam se 10 Pill Concoct kar dega.


Usne apna hath hillaya aur ek invisible yuan Power ne ek ingredient ka portion pakda aur Furnace mein daal diya.


Impurities ko hatana pehla step hota jab aap Pill Concoct kar rahe ho. Agar bahar jo trio unhone agar dekh liya hota jo Atharva abhi kar raha hai to unke jabde nikal ke ground pe gir jaate. Pill Concoct karne mein jo pehla step hota hai wo sabse hardest step hota hai, isiliye hi kayi saari Pills apne full potential tak nahi pahuch paati. Impurities ko hatane ke liye person ko slowly-2 time spend karna chahiye, agar aap ek sath saare ingredients ko ek sath Furnace mein daalke unki impurities hatate ho to aapke paas precise control hona chahiye.


Atharva ne apni Soul Power ka ek strong force sidhe Furnace mein bheja aur continue apne dono hatho se sign banane laga. Uske continue hand sign se ground fire bhi ek dum Soul Force ki tarah Furnace mein enter kar gayi. Ye sab itna smoothly ho raha tha jaise Atharva ne ye sab thousand baar pehle bhi kiya ho. Kuch hi minutes mein jo ingredients mein jo impurities thi wo jaa chuki thi, sirf ingredients ke essence hi bach tha.


Next step tha wo in essence ko merge karke Pill form karne ka, ye Atharva ke liye sabse easy job thi kyuki RestorationPill Sirf Mortal level ki thi aur wo inhe aankh bandh karke bhi merge kar sakta tha.


Kuch minutes baad usne sabhi Pills ko form kar liya aur fir ek loud shout ke sath usne apni Yuan power ko Furnace ke andar bhejke Pills ko bahar nikal liya aur apne hath mein pakad liya. Jo Restoration pill Atharva ke hath mein thi smooth aur perfectly Round thi aur glow bhi kar rahi thi. Puri Pill me impurities hone ka koi hint tak nahi tha aur ye proof tha ki ye 100% effectiveness wali Restoration pills hai.


Ingredient ke itne se portion se hi 10 Pills concoct kar li thi, Atharva is outcome se kaafi satisfied tha. 100% effectiveness RestorationPills wo bhi sirf 20 minutes mein wo bhi 100% success rate ke sath, agar Fragrant Sky City mein ye baat koi sunle to wo wahi shock ki wajah se mar jaayega.


“ 100% effectiveness Pill wo bhi first try mein wo log shock se hi na mar jaaye, mujhe cover ke liye kuch damaged Pills bhi concoct kar leni chahiye. ”


Smile karte huye usne apna hath hillaya aur ingredients ka doosra portion bhi furnace mein bhej diya.


Kuch minutes baad,



Boom!

Ek explosion sound hua jisey sunke pehle to Jai aur dono alchemist shock huye aur fir jor se hasne lag gaye.


“ Furnace explode ho gayi. ”


“ ye to normal hai. Jab maine Alchemy start ki thi to maine hundred se bhi jyada Furnace explode ki thi. ”


“ Chalo andar jaake check karte hai. ”


Trio ne gate ko dhakka dete huye khola aur dekha ki Atharva Furnace ke paas depressed khada hai.


“ Young Master, depressed mat hoiye. Furnace ka explode ho jaana normal hai, lekin mere opinion mein aapko Pills Concoct karne mein apne energy aur time waste nahi karna chahiye. ”


Fat old man ne Atharva ko comfort karte huye kaha.


“ Young Master, humey pata hai aap Pill Shop ke liye worried ho, lekin Pill Concot karna itna asaan kaam nahi hai. "


Jai ne bhi Atharva ka shoulder thapthapte huye kaha.


Atharva “ Uncle Jai, halanki Furnace explode ho gayi, lekin maine kuch Restoration pill produce ki hai. ”


“ Young Master aap majak kar rahe hai na. ek baar Furnace explode ho jaaye to uske andar ke saare ingredients khatam ho jaate hai. Explosion mein Pills produce karna impossible hai. ”


Skinny old man ne Atharva ko chedte huye kaha. Atharva ne bina kuch kahe apni mutthi ko khola to uske palm mein 3 white Pills jo ke marble ke size ki thi wo dikhi.


Trio ek dum se stunned ho chuke they unke face ki smile ek dum se froze ho gayi. Unke jitna koi bhi experienced ho to wo aram se bata sakta hai ki jo Pills Atharva ke Palm pe rakhi hai wo recently produce ki gayi hai. Pills thi wo ek warm feeling de rahi thi jo sign tha ki ye abhi Furnace se bahar nikli hai.


“ No way, furnace explode hone pe bhi tumne Pills produce kar di. ”


Trio ki aankhe ek dum chaudi ho gayi thi. Un teeno ne ek ek Pill li aur carefully examine karne lage. Restoration pills ek energy Pill hai jo warrior ko Cultivate karte time chahiye hoti hai. Restoration pills jo Atharva ne concoct ki thi wo smooth aur round thi, in Pills mein bilkul thodi se impurities thi jo prove kar rahi thi ki effectiveness low nahi hai.


“ ye… ye to 70% effectiveness Pill hai. ”


Fat old man chillaya.


“ Ye sach mein 70% effectiveness wali Pills hai, jo Pills hum produce karte they uske ek grade high hai. Lekin ye kaise possible hai. ”


Skinny old man ke face pe disbelief wala look tha. Jo wo dekh raha tha usey wo bilkul bhi accept nahi kar paa raha tha.


“ Young Master, ye Pills kya aapne khudse ye Pills produce ki hai ? ”


Jai ko bhi believe nahi ho raha tha.


Atharva “ Haan maine hi ki hai. ”


“ Young master kya aapne pehle kabhi koi Pill concoct ki hai ? ”


Atharva “ Nahi kabhi nahi. ”


“ Young Master, kya ye sach mein aapka first time tha ? ”


Atharva “ Haan! ”


“ Young Master, kya main puch sakta hu ki aapka current level kya hai ? ”


Atharva “ QI JING Realm 9th Level. ”


Trio ka blood almost unke muh se bahar aane ko ho gaya tha. Atharva ko dekhte huye har bitte time ke sath unki aankhe chaudi hoti jaa rahi thi. Unki aankho se aansoo niklne ko ho gaye they, unhe aisa lag raha tha jaise unhone apni entire life waste kar di ho.


Soul ki power bhut important hoti hai Pill Concoct karne mein, lekin ek person ka Cultivation level bhi utna hi important hota hai. Jo Pill Concoct karne ki process hoti hai wo bhut jaldi person ki Yuan energy khatam kar deti hai. QI HAI level se pehle ek Alchemist banna almost impossible hai kyuki isse low level ke person ke paas enough Yuan power nahi hoti puri Process complete karne ke liye. Wahi Atharva ne 70% effectiveness wali Restoration pill concoct kar di thi wo first attempt mein.


“ Young Master, main janna chahta hu ki aapne ye kaise kiya ? ”


Jai ne ye sawal pucha aur baaki dono old man bhi bade utawle ho rahe they answer sunne ke liye.


Atharva “ Maine bataya to tha jab aap bhut saari Pills khaate ho to naturally aapko pata laga jata hai Pill Concoct kaise karni hai. ”


Atharva ne apne kandhe hillate huye kaha. Wo kisi ko bhi nahi bata sakta ki uska rebirth hua hai aur bata bhi dega to koi believe nahi karega balki uspe hasenge aur. Sabko pata hai ki usne bhut Pills consume kar rakhi hai to abhi ke liye ye good reason tha.


“ What the fuck ! ”


Trio ke mouth se almost blood bahar aane ko ho gaya tha.


Atharva “ Uncle Jai, mujhe abhi bhut acha feel ho raha hai. Main ek baar aur Pill Concoct karne ke liye ready hu. Abhi jo explosion hua usse mujhe kuch insights mile hai. Mujhe feel ho raha hai ki main is baar easily 100% effectiveness wali Pill Concoct kar dunga. ”


Ye baat bolte huye Atharva ne bina kuch suney un teeno ko Furnace room se bahar nikal diya.


Furnace room ke bahar trio ke face pe mix emotions they. Unhe pehle laga tha ki Atharva sirf fun ke liye yaha aaya hai, unhe bilkul andaja nahi tha ki Atharva pehli baar mein 70% effectiveness wali Pill Concoct kar lega.


“ Sir, main pehle kehta tha ki is world mein koi Genius nahi hai. Main galat tha. ”


Skinny old man ne kaha.


“ Impossible, fark nahi padta Young master kitne bhi bade Genius ho, lekin 100% effectiveness Pills majak hai. ”


Jai aur Fat old man ne ek sath bola aur fir sir hillane lage.


Saint Origin Universe mein different levels ke Alchemists hai :- Mortal, Earth, Heaven, Saint Level. Ek Alchemist ka level uske Pills ki qualities se pata nahi lagta hta balki uski Soul ki strength aur Cultivation Level se ek Alchemist ki level ka pata lagta tha. Ek Earth Level Alchemist ke liye bhi 100% effectiveness Pills produce karna kaafi difficult hota hai.


Half hour Furnace room mein spend karne ke baad Atharva ne heavy stone door ko open kiya aur bahar aa gaya.


“ Young Master, Pill produce ho gayi kya ? ”


Jai ne curiously pucha.


Atharva “ Yes, main ek Genius hu jiske paas god given talent hai jo doosro ko nahi milta. Maine apne second attempt mein 100% effectiveness wali Restoration Pills produce ki hai. ”


Atharva ne itna bolte hi trio ki taraf 3 Pills trow kar di. Trio ne bhi jaldi se Pills Catch ki aur Carefully examine karne lage aur fir ek doosre ki taraf shock hoke dekhne lage.


“ 100% effectiveness Pills, oh my god. Ye color ye Pill ki strength, ye sach mein 100% effectiveness wali Restoration Pill hai. ”


Fat Old man ne chillate huye kaha, wahi skinny old man ki aankhe gol gol ghumne lagi usko khada hone mein dikkat ho rahi thi, wo kabhi ground pe gir sakta tha. Wo bilkul bhi ye accept kar paa rahe they kyuki ye bilkul unbelievable tha.


“ Young Master koi Genius nahi hai. Wo ek Peerless Genius hai jo thousand years mein ek baar paida hota hai. Aise talent ko koi word describe nahi kar sakte. ”











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“ Main kitne lambe time se apni life waste kar raha tha. ”


Fat old man ne apni chest pe punch karte huye kaha. Aur wah Skinny old man ne to lagbhag rona hi start kar diya tha. Un sab ke dimag mein bas ek hi thought tha ki wo sab ek Alchemist ke roop mein apni entire life waste karte aa rahe hai.


Jai bhi khud ko sambhal nahi paa raha tha, uski aankhe bhi 100% effectiveness wali Pills ko dekhne se ruk nahi rahi thi. Wo bhut jyada excited ho gaya tha. Trio ne kuch minutes mein khud calm kar liya. Unka Atharva ko dekhne ka nazariya bhi badal chukka tha aur wo ek cheez samajh gaye they ki Genius sach mein hote hai, bus unko common sense se nahi dhundha jaa sakta.


Atharva “ Uncle Jai, aur ingredients ka intezam karwaiye. ”


Jai “ What ? "
" Tum aur Pills Concoct karna chahte ho ? ”


Jai firse shock ho gaya tha. Jab ek Alchemist Pills concot karta hai to Yuan Power aur Soul Power bhut jaldi khatam ho jaati hai. Halanki Restoration Pills ek basic Pills hai lekin 100% effectiveness ke sath Concoct karna person ki power normal speed se jaldi khatam karta hai. Lekin dekhne se aisa lagta hai jaise Atharva ki energy loss nahi huyi hai itni Pillss Concoct karne ke baad bhi.


Atharva “ Is Pills Shop ko bachane ke liye mujhse jo hoga wo main karunga. ”


Wo dubara kyu Pills Concoct karna chahta hai iske piche bhi ek reason tha. Wo abhi The Dragon Transformation Skill Cultivate kar raha tha to uski Yuan QI Pillss ki need wo bhut jyada thi. Yuan QI Pillss wo cheez thi jo uske Cultivation Path mein bhut kaam aane wali thi. Restoration Pillss bhi ek Yuan QI Pillss hi hai, isse upper aati hai Earth Restoration Pills aur Heaven Restoration Pills. Cultivation World mein Restoration Pillss ko currency ki tarah bhi use kiya jaata hai. Sirf Fragrant Sky City ke log hi money ka use karte hai Restoration Pillss buy karne ke liye.


Ye Restoration Pillss itni basic hai ki apni past life mein Atharva inhe kisi Trash ki tarah dekhta tha lekin abhi usko khudke liye bhi yahi Pillss prepare karni padegi.


' jab mein Saint Cliff ke upper mar gaya tha 100 years pehle tab meri Soul damaged ho gayi thi, lekin ab 2 soul ek sath merge ho jaane se main MORTAL CORE level ki Soul Power use kar sakta hu. Mere ko apni Soul Power khatam ho jaane ka koi dar nahi hai kyuki mere paas ‘Soul Derivation Skill’ hai jo mujhe unlimited amount mein Soul Power supply karti hai. '


Atharva ne khudke mann mein socha aur halka sa has diya. Uski past life ka experience, uski memories, Cultivation aur Skill ki knowledge uska sabse bada treasure tha ab.


Saint Origin Universe mein jo Skill kisi ki Soul ko train kar sakti hai usko milna bhut muskil hai. Aur Fragrant Sky City mein to impossible hi hai. Aur yahi reason tha ki yaha ke Alchemist high effectiveness ki Pillss nahi Concoct kar paate. Divine Continent ke bache bhi 80% se 90% ke bich Pills Concoct kar lete hai.


The Mighty Soul Derivation Skill is world mein sabse powerful Skill thi jo kisi ki Soul ko train kar sake. Jo is Skill ko practice karte hai unhe ye unlimited Soul Power provide karwati hai.


The Dragon Transformation Skill aur The Soul Derivation Skill ke combination se Atharva ki QI, body aur Soul same time pe train ho rahi thi. Usey kam se kam 10 years lagenge wapis se Saint banne mein aur wo tab apni Past Life ko bhi surpass kar dega. Aur sayad wo Saint Realm ke baad Immortal Realm mein breakthrough kar le aur ek God ban jaaye.


Jai Furnace Room ke bahar khada tha usne ek lambi saans li aur fir baaki doono se bola.


Jai “ Tum dono yahi ruko aur Young Master ka dhyan rakho aur kisi ko batana mat ki Young Master Pills Concoct kar sakte hai. Main Mayor se milke aata hu. ”


Atharva ek Genius Alchemist ban gaya ye ek good news thi isliye Mayor ko inform karna jaroori tha.



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Mayor Mansion



Jabse Atharva ne Kamalnath ko Cultivation Skill di thi tabse Kamalnath se apna jyadatar time Cultivation mein hi laga diya tha. Uska talent limited tha aur itni advance level ki Skill ko Cultivate karna bilkul bhi asaan nahi tha. Atharva ke according agar Kamalnath 1 month mein is Skill ki Foundation ko bhi touch kar lete hai to wo bhi achi baat hogi.


Knock! Knock! Knock!


Achank se door khula aur Jai andar chala gaya. Jaise hi Kamalnath ne jai ko dekha to usey ek bad feeling aane lagi. Wo apne Cultivation mein itna busy ho gaya tha ki wo Pills Business ke baare mein to jaise bhoool hi gaya tha. Ab agar Jai khud aaya to koi na koi bad news leke hi aaya hoga.


Kamalnath “ Pills Shop mein kuch hua hai kya ? ”


Jai “ Mayor, mere paas ek good news hai aapke liye. Apni Pills Shop mein ek Peerless Genius aaya hai jo 100% effectiveness wali Pills Concoct kar sakta hai. "
" Jo JADHAV Family ki 70% effectiveness wali Pillss hai wo apni Pillss ke comparison mein bilkul trash hai. ”


Jai ne haste huye kaha.


Kamalnath “ 100% effectiveness wali Pillss ? "
" Jai kya ye sach hai ? ”


Kamalnath ne apni seat se khade hote huye pucha.


Jai “ Of course, ye sach hai. Aur mayor aap us Alchemist ko bhi jaante ho. ”


Kamalnath “ Main jaanta hu. Kon hai wo ? ”


Jai “ Ye person filhal apni Pills Shop mein hai. Mere sath chaliye aapko pata lag jaayega ki wo kon hai ? ”


Kamalnath jldi se “ Lets go. ”



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Pills Shop, Furnace Room



Atharva ne abhi tak hundred se jyada Pills Concoct kar di thi. Agar is City mein koi ye baat sun leta to wo to shock se hi mar jaata. Jo Alchemist Divine Core Realm mein hote hai wo bhi 100% effectiveness ke sath itni jaldi hundred se jyada Pills Concoct nahi kar paate. Lekin fir bhi itni der se ek hi cheez pe concentrate karne ki wajah se Atharva ko tired feel hone laga tha.


“ Halanki The Dragon Transformation Skill meri Yuan QI aur body ko strong banati hai aur Soul Derivation Skill mujhe unlimited Soul Power provide karti hai, lekin ye body abhi bhut jyada Weak hai. Lagta hai mujhe body ko iski roots se improve karne ka tarika dhoondna hoga. ”


Problem Clear thi aur wo thi uski Body. Is body ne beshak 10 years se precious Pillss aur Elixirs consume kiye ho lekin is body ke roots abhi bhi kaafi weak they.


“ Agar main Tiger Restoration Pills Concoct kar leta hu to ye meri body ke roots ki strength ko increase to karegi hi sath mein ye meri body kisi better cheez mein badal degi. Lekin meri body high level ki tiger Restoration Pills ko sehen nahi kar paayegi, isliye mujhe low level ki Tiger Restoration Pills Concoct karke usey consume karna hoga. ”


Usne Furnace Room mein se hi ek Pen aur Paper liya aur uspe Tiger Restoration Pills ke ingredients likhne laga. Ingredients milna muskil baat nahi thi specially YADAV Family jaise badi Family ke liye. Dikkat aa rahi thi wo sirf ek ingredient mein aa rahi thi aur is ingredient ko substitute bhi nahi kiya jaa sakta tha.


“ Agar mujhe Mortal Core Level ki Tiger Demon ki Soul mil jaati hai to perfect hoga. Lekin wo Fragrant Sky City mein bhut rare hai. Main isko QI HAI level ki Tiger Demon Soul se replace kar dunga. ”


Fragrant Sky City ke most powerful warrior bas QI Hai level ke hai. To mortal core level ki beast ka yaha milna impossible hai. Usey replacement se hi kaam chalana padega.


Saare ingredient likhne ke baad Atharva Furnace Room se bahar aa gaya. Kamalnath aur baaki sab Furnace Room ke bahar kaafi time se wait kar rahe they. Jaise hi Kamalnath ne Atharva ko room se bahar nikalte dekha to wo bhut jyada surprise ho gaya.


Atharva “ Dad, aap yaha kya kar rahe ho ? ”


Kamalnath Mujhe dekhne ke baad Jai ki taraf dekhte hue kehte hai “ jai, ye mat kehna ki jo Genius Alchemist hai wo Atharva hai. ”


Jai smile krte hue “ Haa, yahi hai wo Genius. ”


Kamalnath “ Impossible, ye ladka bas Pillss khaane mein expert hai Pills banane mein nahi. Tum log mera majak banane ke liye yaha laaye ho na. ”


Atharva “ Dad, aap khus nahi ho kya ? ”


Kamalnath kuch nahi bola kuch moments tak, fir wo jor jor se hasne laga aur Atharva ko jaake Hug kar liya. Wo is time bhut khus tha aur apne man me god ko thanks keh raha tha. Kamalnath bhut jyada excited tha akhir konsa parents apne bacho ki achievement dekh ke khus nahi hoga.


Atharva “ Dad, Uncle Jai ye lo 100% effectiveness wali 20 Pillss. ”


“ itni jyada. ”


Trio ne chillate huye kaha.


Kamalnath “ hahaha, perfect ! Ab main dekhna chahta hu JADHAV Family ki Pills Shop kaise survive karegi. ”


Sabhi log bhut jyada excited they. YADAV Family ke paas ek Genius Alchemist tha aur usne Pills Business ko khatam hone se bacha liya hai.


“ hum kal se hi 100% effectiveness wali Pillss sell karna suru kar denge. ”


Fat old man ne kaha.


“ lekin sirf Young Master hi 100% effectiveness wali Pills produce kar sakte hai. Aur Fragrant Sky City mein Restoration Pillss ki demand bhut jyada hai. Young Master ke liye bhi ye impossible hoga. ”


Jai ne apne hath failate huye apni helplessness show ki. Agar kal se 100% effectiveness wali Pillss sell hone lag jaayengi to unka kya kaam reh jaayega yaha pe.


“ Synthetic Pillss ! ”


Trio ne Atharva ki taraf dekha unhe bilkul samajh nahi aaya Atharva ne kya bola hai.


Atharva “ Pillss Concoct karna bhut hi complex process hai, lekin Synthetic Pillss produce karna bhut simple hai. Main tum logo se chuppana nahi chahta lekin mere paas ek method hai jisse Synthetic Pillss produce ki jaa sakti hai. Tum mujhe 2, 60% effectiveness wali Pillss doge main un dono ko merge karke 100% effectiveness wali bana dunga. Tum log Pills Concoct karoge main unhe Syntesize karunga. Hum sirf Restoration Pillss hi sell nahi karenge is shop mein, ek Pills aur hai jo main chahta hu ki tum log Concoct karo. ”


“ What ? "
" Two 60% effectiveness Pillss ko combine karke 100% effectiveness Pillss bana dena ? "
" Ye kaise Possible hai ? ”


Fat old man ne shock hote huye kaha. Kyuki usne aisa method kabhi nahi suna tha. Suna bhi kaise hoga kyuki ye log ek well mein baithe frogs they jo isi ko ocean samajhte they.


Atharva “ Mujhe pata hai tum logo ko shock lag raha hai lekin ye method bhut normal hai. Yelo ek Skill jo tumhari Soul ko train karegi, isse tum logo ko bhut help milni chahiye. ”


Atharva ne paper pe ek simple si Skill likh di jo Soul ko train karti hai. Ye Skill Soul Derivation Skill ke Comparison mein to kuch bhi nahi hai lekin baaki ordinary Soul training Skill se to achi hi hai. Trio ka expression Skill ko dekh ke hi badal gaya. Kyuki jo Skill wo practice kar rahe they wo kisi trash se kam nahi thi. Atharva ko koi surprise nahi hua trio ke reaction se kyuki jo usne unhe diya tha wo ordinary nahi tha. Soul training Skill beshak Atharva ke liye kisi trash jaisi ho lekin QI Province ke most Famous Clan bhi is Skill ke liye Fight kar jaayenge.


Kamalnath “ hahaha, Great ! Jab hum Pillss Sell karna start kar denge to JADHAV Family ka kya reaction hoga ? ”


Atharva “ OF course, hum kal hi apni Pills Shop ke bahar apne prices ka board laga denge. Ek single 100 % effectiveness Restoration Pills ki keemat 4 Gold coin hogi. Aur two 60% effectiveness Pillss aur 3 Gold Coins ke badle single 100% effectiveness Pills se exchange karenge. ”


“ hahaha, aap kitne brilliant ho Young Master, hum unki hi Pills use karke unhe wapis denge badle mein 3 Gold Coins bhi lenge. Aap to Business Genius bhi ho. ”


Fat old man ne Atharva ko thumbs up dete huye kaha.


Atharva “ Sabse important baat hum JADHAV Family se kharidi huyi Pillss ko exchange nahi karenge. Main chahta hu future mein single person bhi unki Pills Shop se Pillss na kharide. Ek aur baat kisi ko mat batana ki main Alchemist hu, bas bol dena humne koi Master Alchemist Hire kiya hai. ”


Atharva ne baat bolte huye sir hillaya. Kabhi bhi apne enemies ko pata mat chalne do ki tumhare paas kitni hidden tricks hai.


Atharva “ Oh, Dad, is list mein jitney ingredients hai unko collect kar dijiye. ”


Kamalnath “ Maine saare ingredients Collect kar dunga lekin QI Hai Level Tiger Demon Beast ki Soul milna muskil hai. ”


Demon beast ke pass usually strong body aur bhut jyada amount mein Yuan QI hoti hai. Agar wo kisi same level ke human se fight kare to human ke haarne ke chance 90% hote hai. Genius hote hai wo hi same Realm ke Demon Beast ko asani hai maar paate hai.


Kamalnath “ Lekin main tumhare liye jaroor arrange kar dunga. ”










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NEXT MORNING,


‘Restoration Pill with 100% effectiveness for sale today’

Mayor ke is notice ne puri Fragrant Sky City mein toofan sa laa diya tha. Notice publish hone ke half hour mein hi puri City mein ye news fail gayi thi.


“ Mayor 100% effectiveness wali Restoration Pills Sell karna chahta hai. Kya ye sach hai ? ”


“ Mujhe nahi lagta ye fake news hai, Mayor kabhi bhi fake news spread thodi karenge. Agar wo aisa karte hai to unki reputation ko hi nuksaan hoga. Kuch din pehle JADHAV Family ne 70% effectiveness wali Pills sell karna start kar di thi aur ab Mayor ki Pill Shop ne 100% effectiveness wali Pill sell karna start kardi hai. Dono Family ke bich kabhi bhi War start ho sakti hai. ”


“ Main aaj tak koi Restoration Pill nahi dekhi hai jo 100% effectiveness wali ho. Maine suna hai ki ye sirf strong power hi contain nahi karti balki isme koi impurities bhi nahi hoti. Har warrior ka dream hota hai aisi Pills consume karne ka. ”


“ Chalo chalke dekhte hai. Agar ye sach hai to kya pata humey us Great Alchemist ko dekhne ka mauka bhi mil jaaye. ”


Mayor ki taraf se ek single announcement ne puri City mein aag laga di thi. Logo mein tarah tarah ki baate hone lagi thi. Almost har koi Mayor ki Pill Shop ki taraf jaa raha tha. Inme se kayi log to aise they jo is Pill ko afford nahi kar sakte they lekin fir bhi sirf ek baar Pill ke darshan ho jaye wo bhi bahut they inlogo ke liye. Mayor Family aur JADHAV Family ke bich ka competition bhi ek reason tha jis liye log jaa rahe they.


Crowd Mayor ki Pill Shop ke bahar ikahta ho gaya tha. Jyada der na karte huye, ek lambi wooden table ko Pill Shop ke bahar rakh diya gaya. Us table ke piche fat old man ek peacefull look ke sath baith gaya. Chang ne Entrance ke bahar ek bada sa board laga diya aur jor se chillaya jisse puri crowd ko uski awaz sun gayi.


Chang “ Jo log Restoration Pills kharidna chahte hai, wo isey dhyan se padhe. ”


Jaise hi Chang ki baat khatam huyi waise hi Crowd ek dum saant ho gayi aur board ko padhne lagi.



{100% Effectiveness Restoration Pill – 4 Gold Coins}

{two 60% Effectiveness Restoration Pill + 3 Gold Coins = one 100% effectiveness Restoration Pill}
{3 Pills Per Person Everyday}


Board pe saaf tarike se Restoration Pill buy karne ke rules they. Restoration Pill buy karne ke liye money chahiye hota hai. Aur jab aap Money bhi de rahe ho tab bhi aapko rule follow karna padega. Ye Fragrant Sky City mein pehli baar ho raha tha.


Halanki, Restoration pill itni attractive thi ki log buying condition pe koi complain nahi kar rahe they. Normal warriors ko ye decision sahi lag raha tha, nahi to baaki Rich Families ek bhi Pill nahi chorti in logo ke liye.


“ 100% effectiveness ki Restoration Pill 4 Gold Coin mein, ye pichli Restoration Pill se 4 times jyada Price hai. ”


“ Price ek dum fair hai. In pills ki value previous Pills se nahi ki jaa sakti. Cultivate karne mein already dikkat hoti hai aur Restoration Pills ko consume karte huye unki impurities ko bhi sath-2 nikalna bahut time kharab karta hai. Lekin agar hamare paas 100% effectiveness wali Pills ho to humey impurities ki koi chinta nahi hogi, hamara time bhi bachega. ”


Pill Shop ke bahar hi Crowd aapas mein Board aur Pills ko leke discuss kar rahi thi. Jo trade rules they unhone successfully ek large amount mein logo ko attract kar liya tha. Agar Mayor Family sach mein 100% effectiveness wali Restoration Pills provide karti hai to kon bewkoof JADHAV Family ki Pill Shop se Pills lega.


“ kya sach mein yaha 100% effectiveness wali Restoration Pill milti hai ? ”


Kisi ne Crowd mein se chillake pucha.


Chang “ Hesitation band karo, agar Pill buy karni hai to line banao nahi to bhaag jaao yaha se. ”


Chang ne apni finger Crowd pe point karte huye kaha. Uske Face pe ab ek arrogant look tha.


“ Mujhe ek Pill kharidani hai, ye rahe 4 Gold Coin. "


Crowd mein se ek Fat man nikal ke aaya jisne fancy kapde pehne they, usne 4 Gold Coins table pe rakhte huye ye baat boli. Ye fatty bhi Fragrant Sky City ke kuch rich persons mein se ek tha. Ye abhi 7th level QI JING Realm ke peak pe tha. Agar ye ek 100% effectiveness wali Restoration Pill consume kar leta hai to 8th level mein breakthrough aram se kar lega.


4 Gold Coin Fragrant Sky City mein koi choti amount nahi thi. Kayi normal Families ye bhi afford nahi kar sakti thi yaha. Is World mein ek saying hai, ‘Cultivation ke path pe sirf Talent hi matter nahi karta, money bhi talent ke jitna hi matter karta hai.’ Agar koi person talented hai aur uske paas money nahi hai to uska cultivation 10 times jyada different ho jaata hai rich logo se.


“ Alright, ye rahi tumhari Restoration Pill, thik se pakdo. ”


Fat old man ne ek palm size ka box us fatty ko dete huye kaha. Us fat man ne bhi jaldi se box khola aur Pill ko bahar nikal liya.


“ Ye sach mein 100% effectiveness wali Restoration pill hai. Hahaha, 4 Gold Coins iske mukable kuch bhi nahi hai. ”


Fat man ne excitement mein chillate huye kaha. Jo waha pe crowd thi unhone ne bhi pill dekhi aur uska color dekha jo unhone pehle kabhi nahi dekha tha. Saari Crowd jaan gayi thi ek pill ek dum excellent hai. Aur isi ke sath Crowd mein jitne bhi log Pills buy karne mein interested they unhone bahut jaldi se line bana li kahi Pill khatam na ho jaaye. Fat Old man jor se hasne lag gaya tha. Pills bhi excellent thi aur public bhi interested thi. Pills ki demand bhut jyada thi wo log jald hi out of stock hone wale they. Lekin unhone aaj aaj mein hi 2 Month jitna profit kama liya tha.


“ Shit, ye log 100% effectiveness wali Restoration Pills buy kar rahe hai apne Cultivation ke liye. Jo ye 70% wali Pills maine buy ki thi kal ye ek dum trash hai inke saamne. Mujhe in Pill ko trade kar dena chahiye. ”


Ek warrior ne aage aake two 70% wali Restoration Pills nikali aur 3 Gold Coins jo 100% wali restoration Pill mein exchange karne ke liye they.


“ Hum JADHAV Family ki Pill Shop ki Pills ko trade nahi karte. ”


Fat old man ne bina hesitation ke ye baat bol di. Har Pill Shop ki Pills pe ek unique logo hota hai jisse koi bhi bata sakta hai ki ye Pill kaha se buy ki gayi hai. Aur filhaal is City mein sirf JADHAV Family hi 70% wali Restoration Pills produce kar rahi thi.


Wo warrior pehle to thoda gussa hua. Lekin fir usey jaldi hi Mayor Family aur JADHAV Family ke bich ki rivalary ka realization ho gaya.


Chang “ Sabhi log dhyan se suno hum log JADHAV Family ki Pills ke sath trade nahi karte hai. Agar JADHAV Family ki Pills hai to unhe wapis kar aao fir yaha aana. ”


Jaise hi Chang ne ye chillake kaha waise hi kayi logo ko dukh hone laga jinhone kal hi JADHAV Family se Pills kharidi thi.


Next 3 din tak Mayor ki Pill Shop ne bhut acha perform kiya. Inki pills ki deman bhut jyada thi ye baar baar out of stock ho jaa rahe they. In 3 dino mein Jai, Skinny old man aur Atharva kaafi busy they. Jai aur skinny old man 60% wali pill produce kar rahe they aur Atharva unhe merge karta jaa raha tha. Ye uske liye bhut asan kaam tha bilkul pani pine jaisa, bus usey ek dikkat thi ki uska time waste ho raha tha.


In 3 dino mein famous JADHAV Family ki Pill shop pe ek single Customer nahi aaya tha. Fragrant Sky City mein jo Pill ka business tha wo ek tarfa Mayor Family ka ho gaya tha, yaha tak ki jo Families JADHAV Family ke support mein thi wo bhi Mayor Family ki Pill Shop se Pills buy kar rahe they. Humans bhut realistic hote hai. Jab baaki sab 100% wali pills ke sath Cultivate kar rahe aur wo khud 70% wali Pills ke sath to wo obviously piche reh jaayenge baaki sab se. Aur is Cultivation World mein koi kisi se ek din bhi piche nahi rehna chahta, ek din ke gap mein to enemy saamne wali ko jad se ukhaad de.


Fourth day ki Morning ko Mayor Family ke paas bahut saari 100% effectiveness wali Pills ho gayi jo 1 Month tak bhi khatam na ho aur ye sirf Atharva ki wajah se ho Paaya tha jo din raat Pills merge kar raha tha. Is subah pill shop ki entrance pe table ke piche 4 chairs thi ek pe Fat Old Man baitha tha aur doosri pe Atharva aur unke bagal mein hi skinny old man aur Jai baithe they. Atharva ke thik Piche Chang khada tha kisi bodyguard ki tarah.


Chang “ Young Master, in dono hamara business aasmaan chuu raha hai. ”


Atharva “ not bad. ”


Kuch hi der mein Pills sell hona start ho gayi aur 1 hour ke baad hi Atharva ko waha baithe-2 aalas aane lage. Usi time Counter pe do warrior aaye jinhone black dress pehna hua tha aur sir pe ek bamboo hat pehen rakha tha jisse unke face thik se nahi dikh rahe they. In dono Warriors ne ek dum se Atharva ki attraction khich li thi.


“ Mujhe 3 Restoration Pills chahiye, ye rahe 12 Gold Coins. ”


Jo bamboo hat ke niche se voice aayi thi wo kafi loud aur arrogant thi aur voice se bhi kisi young man ki lag rahi thi. Atharva ne Glance mein pata kar liya ki ye young man QI JING Realm ke 9th level pe hai aur doosra warrior Early QI HAI Realm mein.


Atharva “ Apni bamboo hat utaro. ”


Atharva ne ek lazy voice mein ye bola.


“ Maine yaha sirf Restoration Pills buy karne aaya hu. Tumhe kyu meri bamboo hat se problem hai ? ”


Usi Young man ne doobara jawab diya lekin is baar uski voice mein arrogance aur badh gayi thi.


Atharva “ Kyuki Fragrant Sky City ki situation ke hisaab se agar tum apni identity chupa ka Pills buy kar rahe to tum JADHAV Family se belong karte ho. ”


Atharva ne face pe smile liye ye baat boli. Wo asani se bata sakta tha ye kon hai kyuki wo log apni identity hide karke pills buy karke buy kar rahe they. Doosri City ke warrior yaha aate nahi kyuki ye sabse small City hai aur is City ke Warrior ko apni identity chupane ki jaroorat nahi agar tum JADHAV Family ka hissa na ho to.


“ humph ”


Young man ne ek cold humph kiya aur jaise hi wo apni hat nikalne ko hua to doosre person ne usko rok liya.


“ Second Uncle, ab disguise ki koi jarurat nahi hai. Waise bhi inhe pata to lag hi chukka hai. ”


Us young man ne apni bamboo hat utar di. Wo ek handsome 18 years ka young man tha. Jiske face pe ek arrogant look tha jaise wo paida hi is look ke sath hua ho. Doosre ne bhi ek sigh ke sath apni hat utar di wo ek 50 year ka old man tha aur ek strong QI uski body se sense ki jaa sakti hai.


Atharva ne us Young man ki taraf dekha aur apni memory mein search kiya ki ye kon hai ?
Ye JADHAV Family ke Gyan ka beta hai, jo ek Genius hai, wo 18 ki age mein QI JING Realm kr peak mein pahuch gaya tha aur kisi bhi time QI HAI Realm mein breakthrough kar sakta tha. Aise person ko arrogant hone ka pura hak hai, lekin ye bhut bura tha ki wo galat time pe, galat jagah pe aut galat person ke saamne arrogance dikha raha tha.


“ Humph, First Son. Tum jaroor yaha pareshani khadi karne aaye ho na ? ”


Jai ne cold look ke sath us young man ko dekhte huye kaha, aur table se wo Coins uthake faikne ko hua lekin Atharva ne rok liya.


Atharva “ Uncle Jai, jo hamare door step pe money aaya hai usey kyu faikna chahte ho ? "
" Yaha se aaj koi waapis nahi jaayega. ”









TO BE CONTINUED……..
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( Only One Strike )





“ Atharva, ye money lo aur abhi humey Pills do. ”


First son ne arrogant tone mein kaha.


Atharva “ Humari Family ki Pills sirf humans ko milti hai animals ko nahi. Abhi mera mood acha hai isliye ye money yahi chodke nikal lo yaha se. ”


“ Atharva tum animal kise keh rahe ho ? ”


First son ko ab gussa aane laga tha. Wo JADHAV Family ka number one Genius tha aur aaj tak uske sath kisi ne bhi is tone mein baat nahi ki thi. Kuch din pehle jab Atharva ne iske chote bhai ko pitta tha tab se Atharva se fight karna chahta tha lekin usne ye kabhi nahi soch tha ki wo Atharva se is condition mein milega.


Chang “ Mere master tumhari insult kar rahe hai. Kisi pagal ko bhi ye pata hogi ki inka matlab kya hai. Tumhare ears mein jaroor kuch bhara hua hai. ”

“ useless slave, kon ho tum? "
" Tumhari himmat kaise huyi mujhse aise baat karne ki. ”


First son ne awaz unchi karke kaha. Atharva ke face pe ek smile aa gayi ye sunke. Ye young man itna arrogant hai ki ye bilkul bhul gaya hai ki wo kiske area mein khada hai. Aur ye bhi bhul gaya hai ki Mayor Family aur JADHAV Family ab ek doosre ki enemies hai.


Atharva “ Shut Up. ”


Atharva ne apne palm ko zor se table pe maara aur apni seat se khada ho gaya.


Atharva “ Is JADHAV Family ke Dog ko koi Manners nahi aate. Iski himmat kaise huyi humari territory mein aane ki aur bhaukne ki. Isko apni gufa se bahar nahi aana chahiye tha. Guards Isko yahi capture kar lo. ”


Sabhi Guards Atharva ki awaz sunke aage aaye aur us young man aur old man ko charo taraf se gher liya. Baaki people jo Pills buy karne aaye they wo ek dum se piche hoke dekhne lage, unhone ye kabhi except nahi kiya tha ki itni jaldi ek ‘good show’ dekhne ko milega.


“ Tum mere young master ko chuna chahte ho. ”


Old man ne apni awaz unchi karte huye kaha.


Atharva “ Tum sirf QI HAI Realm mein ho aur tumhari himmat kaise huyi itna arrogantly baat karne ki. Fist son ke dog ke paas bhi koi manners nahi hai, isey ye bhi nahi pata ki yaha aise act karega to kya hoga. Uncle Jai please mere liye is Old Dog ko Cripple kar dijiye. ”


Jai “ Yes, Young Master. ”


Jaise hi jai ne apni baat khatam ki wo siddha jump karke aage aa gaya aur apni Body se ek strong QI release kar di. Waha pe kaafi logo ko pressure feel hone lag gaya tha kayi ke face ek dum peele pad gaye they kaiyo ko saans aana band ho gaya tha.


“ Ye JADHAV Family ka First son sach mein arrogant hai, finally aaj ye ek thik opponent se mila hai. Young Master Atharva pehle ke jaise useless person nahi hai ab. ”


“ Sahi kaha, JADHAV Family aur Mayor Family ek doosre ke Mortal enemies hai. Lekin ye first son fir bhi Mayor Family ki Pill Shop pe aake trouble create kar raha hai. ”


Kayi logo ne apas mein discussion start kar diya tha. Jyadatar logo ne dekha tha kaise Atharva ne behave kiya tha kuch din pehle. Usne yaha tak ki JADHAV Family ke leader Karamchand ki bhi insult kar di thi aur to sirf uska beta hai.



Humph !!

“ Atharva, ek thug ki tarah act karne mein koi point nahi hai. Agar tumhare andar guts hai to mujhse akele fight karo. Dekhte hai Fragrant Sky City ka number one Genius kon hai. ”


JADHAV Family ke first son ne jabde bhichte huye kaha. Atharva ko realize ho gaya tha ki jabse Suraj ne JADHAV Family ki reputation ghatayi hai to JADHAV Family doobara apni reputation gain karne ki kosis karegi. Fact ye hai ki JADHAV Family ka number one Genius Atharva se milna chahta tha, jo ek dum se useless se kisi Genius mein badal gaya hai. Agar aaj Atharva isey provoke bhi nahi karta to bhi ye kisi na kisi method se Atharva se fight karta hi.


Atharva “ Guts! Of course mere pass Guts hai. Mujhe koi fark nahi padta is choti si Fragrant Sky City mein kon top Genius hai ? "
" Lekin agar tum fight karna chahte ho to main taiyar hu. Baki sab piche ho jaao. ”


Atharva ne baat bolte hi us young man ki taraf chalna suru kar diya tha. Aaj wo chahta tha ki is so called top Genius ko yaha aane pe regret ho aur JADHAV Family pe bhi ek deep wound chodna chahta tha. Jo gurads JADHAV Family ke in do bando ko ghere huye they wo bhi piche ko hat gaye they aur unhone fight karne layak jagah chhod di thi. Jai us Old Man ke saamne khada tha taaki ye bich mein interfere na kar sake aur us old man ke face pe chinta ki lakire saaf dikh rahi thi. Usey dar tha agar Karamchand ke bete ko kuch ho gaya to wo uski jaan khud le lega.


“ Uncle, aap bhi piche ho jaaiye aur dekhiye main is arrogant brat ko kaise sabak sikhata hu. ”


First son ne apne hath mein jo fan pakda hua tha usey andar rakha aur ek evil smile ke sath ye baat boli.


“ please be careful master. ”


Us old man dheere se ye word bole aur thoda piche ho gaya, lekin wo ekdum alert tha jaise hi kuch galat ho to wo jab ki jab act kar paaye.


“Atharva, dikhao mujhe tum mein kitna dum hai. Aur baad mein mere paas complain karne mat aane ki main tumhe bully kar raha hu. Main tumhe first strike karne ka mauka deta hu. ”


Atharva “ Agar tum mujhe first strike karne ka mauka dena chahte ho to kam se kam 10 strike ka mauka to do. Agar tum mujhe pehle 10 strike ka mauka nahi de sakte to aisi useless baate mat kiya karo. ”


Atharva ne jor se haste huye kaha. Is baaat se young man bilkul provoke ho gaya tha. Usne apni jagah se hilte huye apni QI release kar di, puri surrounding mein ek Yuan force kisi wave ki tarah faill gaya.


Jai “ Ye Karamchand ka beta sach mein Genius hai, ye sirf QI JING Realm ke 9th level pe hai lekin iska yuan force bhut powerful hai. "
" Kya Young Master isko handle kar payenge ? ”


Jai, Atharva ke liye chintit tha, lekin jaise hi usne Atharva ke face ki taraf dekha to Atharva ke face pe ek confident smile thi.


Atharva “ Stop, jab tak kuch stake pe na laga ho tab tak fight karne ka kya maja. Lets have a Bet. ”


Atharva ne ek evil smile ke sath kaha.


“ Alright, batao kispe Bet lagaye ? ”


Atharva “ Agar tum jeet jaate ho aaj to main tumhe bina koi nuksaan ke yaha se jaane dunga, aur agar main jeet jaata hu to tum ek cheez yahi chod ke jaaoge. Tension na lo aaj mera mood acha hai main tumhe jaan se nahi maarunga. ”


“ Ye Bet fair nahi lag rahi. Main jeet gaya to mujhe kya milega. ”


Karamchand ke first sun ne ye baat kahi.


Atharva “ Joke mat maar, tujhe kya lagta hai main tum dono ko abhi ke abhi nahi maar sakta wo bhi ek single order se. maine tujhe ek chance de diya yaha se jinda jaane ka tujhe to mere Pair padne chahiye. ”


Atharva ki baat sunke usko aur gussa aa gaya, usne wahi khade khade ek powerful punch Atharva ki taraf hawa mein maara.



Bang !!


Ek loud bang ke sath uske saamne ek bada sa green color ka punch form ho gaya aur wo full pressure ke sath Atharva ki taraf badhne laga. Ye punch ek High Mortal level Combat Skill thi jo JADHAV Family se belong karti hai.


Atharva “ Too Weak. ”


Atharva ne apna sir hillaya aur uske punch ko apne tak aane diya taki wo is punch ko apne force se punch kar sake.



Bang !


Atharva ki aur us Young Man ke punch ek doosre se takraye wo bhi ek thundering sound create karte huye. Is scene ko dekh ke sabhi shock ho gaye they.


Crack!
AHHH!



Ek haddi tutne ki awaz ke sath ek chikh suni jaa sakti thi. Aur uske baad ek human figure udte huye piche ko gir gaya.


Jahir si baat hai ye Atharva nahi tha jo udte huye gira ho. Wo young man udte huye 3 meter piche land hua uski taange jor se kaamp rahi thi. Wo khud ko ground pe girne se rokne ke liye apna pura zor laga raha tha.


Har koi is time us Young man ko ghoor rahe they aur uska muda hua hath dekhke ke surprise ho gaye they. Atharva ke Powerful Punch ne uske left hand ki sabhi bone ko destroy kar diya tha, uska left hand cripple ho chukka tha jiska wo kabhi use nahi kar paayega.



“ Impossible, ye itna Powerful kaise ho sakta hai ? ”


Wo pura pasine se bheeg gaya tha. Atharva ko ghurte huye uske face ka rang ek dum peela pad gaya tha. Wo akela hi surprise nahi tha puri crowd bhi surprise ho gayi thi. Atharva ne is young man ko sirf ek strike se hara diya tha wo bhi bina koi Combat Skill use kiye. Ye us time se bilkul alag tha jab Atharva ne Suraj ko haraya tha.


Skinny old man aur Fat old man ne ek dusre ki taraf dekh ke sir hillaya. Unka Young Master na sirf Alchemy mein Genius tha balki wo ek strong Warrior bhi tha. Crowd mein Atharva ko leke kaafi baate hone lagi thi lekin wo sab abhi bhi wahi khade they kyuki unhe pata tha asli show to ab suru hoga.










TO BE CONTINUED….
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( Third Young Lord of Parjapati Family )







Sabhi log is brutal scene ko dekh ke shock mein they aur Atharva kisi demon Lord se kam nahi lag raha tha unhe. Sabko ek baat samajh aa gayi thi agar wo is Young Master ke innocent face pe jaayenge to unhe bhut jyada nuksaan ho sakta hai.


Chang “ Young Master ye old dog behosh ho gaya. "


Atharva “ Iske sabhi kapde faad do aur iske dono taange tod ke aisi jagah fek do jaha se ye humey disturb na kar sake aur hum araam se apni Pills sell kar sake. ”


Kuch guards Atharva ki awaaz sunte hi us Old man ke paas chale gaye aur uske kapde faad diye aur steel baar se dono taange tod di. Aur un dono ko uthake Mayor ki Properties se bahar fek diya.


“ Ye dono to bilkul khatam ho gaye hai. Aur ye sab JADAV family ke number one Genius ki arrogance ke wajah se hua hai. Ab Atharva ne ek tarah se JADAV family ke khilaf War declare kar di hai. ”


“ In kuch dino mein JADAV family ki reputation pehle se hi khatam ho chuki thi. Aur aaj unka number one Genius aur Early QI HAI Realm ka warrior dono apna dick kho baithe. Dono ki taange cripple ho gayi hai jisse wo martial arts bhi practice nahi kar paayenge. ”


“ Sahi kaha tumne aur ab to YADAV family ke paas ek Alchemist hai jo 100% effectiveness wali Restoration pill concoct kar sakta hai. Aur Atharva ne aaj ye bhi saabit kar diya hai ki wo hi Fragrant Sky City ka number one Genius hai. Agar humey future mein kuch trade karna hoga to hum YADAV family ke paas hi jaayenge. Ab JADAV family unka koi match nahi hai. ”


Puri Crowd JADAV family aur YADAV family ke relations ki hi baat kar rahi thi. Ab wo log baat hi kar sakte they kyuki unka status itna bada nahi tha ki wo kisi family ko Join kar sake Fight mein.


Atharva “ Pills Sell karna continue karo. ”


Itna bolke Atharva wapis Pill Shop ke andar chala gaya. Uske back ke strong view ko dekh ke sabke mann mein fear aur respect thi. Yeh young man bilkul ek Devil ki tarah hai.




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EVENING TIME,
JADAV FAMILY




Apne bete aur jo old man niche jamin pe behosh lete they unko dekhke Karamchand ki aankho se almost aag niklne ko ho gayi thi. Ek middle age man jo apne forties mein lag raha tha wo dhyan se Young aur old Man ke wounds check kar raha tha.


Karamchand “ koi tarika hai indono ko fix karne ka. ”


“ Young Master ka right arm puri tarah se kharab ho gaya hai, aur inki dono taange tuti huyi hai. Jo serious wound hai, wo inka dick hai jo kabhi thik nahi hoga. ”


Itna kehke wo middle age man piche ko jaake khada ho gaya.



Bang !!


Gusse mein Karamchand ne jor se apna Palm samne rakhi table pe dekhe maara jisse wo table tukdo mein bhikar gayi. Hall mein jitney bhi log they wo sab silent they unme se kisi ki bhi awaz karne ki koi himmat nahi ho rahi thi.


Hall ke ek kone mein white clothes mein ek handsome sa young man baitha tha. Jo apne twenties mein lag raha tha. Ek seductive women uski gaud mein baithi aur usne exposing kapde pehen rakhe they aur uski body bhi bhut sexy thi. Koi bhi dekhke bata sakta tha ki wo Young women bhut hi beautiful aur lustful hai. Us young man ka bilkul bhi dhyan nahi tha ki us hall mein kya ho raha hai. Uski aankhe us women ke alluring boobs mein gadi huyi thi aur uske hath us young women ke exposing body parts ko sehla rahe they.


“ Chief, wo young ladka Atharva bhut cruel hai. Hum is matter ko itni asaani se khatam nahi hone de sakte. ”


Kisi ne chillate huye kaha. Atharva ne sirf JADAV family ke Young Genius ko barbaad nahi kiya tha balki JADAV family ke muh pe tamacha jad diya tha. Us young Genius ki halat aisi kar di thi Atharva ne isse acha to jaan se maar diya hota. Atharva ne usko hara ke point prove kar diya tha ki wo strong hai lekin is had tak jaane ki kya jarurat thi ?


Karamchand “ Wo useless brat uske to main tukde tukde kar dunga. Sab log dhyan se suno, apni sabhi Combat units ko ikhata karo YADAV family ke sath War ke liye taiyar ho jaao. Aaj Hum dono family mein se ek hi zinda rahegi. Main aaj us Kailashnath aur Atharva ko jinda nahi chodunga. ”


Aaj Karamchand bhut gusse mein tha, itna gussa to wo pehle kabhi nahi hua tha. Uski family ki reputation baar baar ek hi person ke wajah se kharab ho rahi hai. JADAV family puri Fragrant Sky city ke saamne ek laughing stock banke rah gayi hai. Unke liye future mein koi place nahi hoga Fragrant Sky City mein.


“ Wait !! "


Ye usi young man ki awaz thi jo hall ke ek kone mein baitha tha aur us seductive woman ke sath enjoy kar raha tha. Usne us woman ko dheere se apni gaud se dhakela aur khada ho gaya. Is young man ko dekhte huye kayi logo ke aankho mein ek disgusting feeling thi. Lekin is young man ke strength aur status ke saamne ye log kuch nahi they isliye apni disgust feeling ko chuppa ke rakhte they.


“ third Young Lord, main is matter ko itne asaani se khatam nahi hone dunga. Aur ab to YADAV family mein ek Alchemist hai jo 100% effectiveness wali pill concoct kar sakta hai. Jo aap Alchemist leke aaye they usey isne bhut buri tarah hara diya hai. Aaj main us Kailashnath se fight karunga aur fir dekhte hai is City kar asli Overlord kon hai ? ”


Karamchand abhi bhi bhut gusse mein tha lekin is Third Young lord se baat karte huye uski tone ek dum polite ho gayi thi. Fragrant Sky City ke two Overlord mein se ek hone pe bhi wo is Third Young Lord ko offend nahi kar sakta tha.


Ye Third Young Lord Red City ke Baiswar Family ke Chief ka Third son tha. Ye sirf 20 years ka hai lekin abhi se hi Early QI HAI Realm mein pahuch chukka hai. QI Province ke outside area mein sirf 28 Cities hai aur Red City inme sabse Powerful aur badi City hai. Fragrant Sky City sabse weak city hai is list mein to in dono mein koi comparison to ho hi nahi sakta.


Third Lord “ JADAV family mujhe ek baat puchne do tumse ? "
" Agar tum abhi YADAV family ke against War start karte ho to tumhare jeetne ke chances kitne hai ? "


Karamchand is baat se ek dum chup ho gaya tha kyuki JADAV family ki aur YADAV family ki strength past time se hi equal rahi hai agar dono Family mein war start hoti hai to pata nahi kon jeetega. Aur Atharva ne do baar JADAV family ki pure City ke saamne insult ki hai to YADAV family puri high spirits mein hai aur JADAV family ke Warriors itna loss dekhne ke baad ek dum low spirit mein hai. Agar ab wo sach mein fight karte hai to JADAV family ke jeetne ke chances sirf 20 to 30% hi hai.


Third Lord “ Agar main sahi hu to tumhari JADAV family ke jeetne ke chances sirf 30% aur usse kam hi hai. Aur agar tum jeet bhi jaate ho to tum itne weak ho jaoge ki doosri city ke Lords hi is city ko takeover kar lenge. "


Hall mein sabhi log apni mundi haan mein hilane lage they. Beshak ye Young lord lustful ho lekin iska mind bhi bhut brilliant hai.


Karamchand “ To Third Young Lord aap hi suggest karo ki hum log kya kare ? "
" Hum is matter ko itni jaldi nahi jaane de sakte. ”


Third Lord “ Chief, tum tension na lo. Maine tumhari help karne ka promise kiya hai. Aur main puri YADAV family ko khatam karke isey pura karunga. Aur jab aisa hoga to pura Mayor Mansion tumhara hoga aur ye City bhi. ”


Karamchand “ Third Young Lord kya idea hai aapka ? "


Third Lord “ Agar tumhe YADAV family ko khatam hi karna hai to tumhe pehle uski roots se suru karna hoga matlab unki Pill Shop. Aur wo Atharva usko main koi threat nahi samjhta. ”


Karamchand “ Third Young Lord, aap us Atharva ko kam mat samjho. Wo bahut tez hai, cruel hai, decisive hai, merciless hai. Wo apni age ke according to act hi nahi karta. ”


Third Lord “ Is Little Atharva se chutkara pana to bhut easy hai. ”


Karamchand “ Wo Kailashnath us Atharva ko kisi treasure ki tarah treat karta hai. Agar Atharva mar jaata hai to YADAV family ke liye ek huge blow hoga. Lekin wo little bastard humesa us Mayor Mansion mein rehta hai. Usse se chutkara pana bhut muskil hoga. ”


Third Lord “ Tum us Atharva pe dhyan mat do usse main personally nipat lunga. Tum kisi ko unki Pill shop par nazar rakhne ko bhejo aur us Alchemist ka pata lagao wo kaun hai ? "
" Aur fir main us Alchemist ko Parjapati Family mein invite karunga. Haa ye sahi rahega. ”


Third Young Lord ko YADAV family aur JADAV family se koi farak nahi padta usey to bas wo Alchemist chahiye jisse Parjapati Family mein uska Status uske dono bhaiyo se jyada ho jaaye.


Third Lord “ Chief tum tension na lo ek baar wo Alchemist mere hath lag jaaye to main us Atharva ko personally jaake maar dunga. Aur uske baad JADAV Familly puri Fragrant Sky City ki maalik ho jaayegi. ”


Third young Lord ne aisa kaha aur paas mein khadi seductive woman ke Lips pe kiss karne laga sabke saamne.


Karamchand “ Young Lord, agar aap YADAV family se chutkara paane mein hamari madad karte ho to ye saari womens aapki ho jaayengi. ”


Waha pe eight seductive women aur khadi thi aur sab ek se badh ke ek beauty thi. Ye normal prostitute se alag thi inhe JADAV family ne dusri City se khud personally pick kiya tha. Yaha pe sabko pata tha ki Red City ke Third Young Lord Parjapati ek lustful man hai. Yaha tak ki wo Red City se Fragrant Sky City in eight Women ke liye aaya tha aur inke badle mein JADAV family ki help karne ko taiyar ho gaya tha.




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PILL SHOP,
YADAV FAMILY




YADAV family ki Pill Shop mein Kailashnath ne Tiger Restoration Pill ke sabhi ingredients Ikhte kar liye they.


Kailashnath “ Atharva, maine suna hai tumne us Karamchand ke bete ko destroy kar diya hai. Tumne bahut acha kiya lekin wo JADAV family ka number one Genius hai, JADAV family is matter ko itni asani se nahi jaane degi. ”


Atharva “ Dad pagal mat bano aapko bhi pata hai dono Families ke bich mein War Start ho chuki hai. Mujhe koi faram nahi padta ki wo kya karenge ab lekin main JADAV family ko ab completely destroy kar dunga. ”


Kailashnath “ Lekin beta tumne un dono ko jinda kyu chod diya. Wo future mein trouble create karenge. ”


Atharva “ Dad, agar main unhe simply maar deta to JADAV family ki itni insult nahi hoti aur JADAV family ki Spirits down nahi hoti. Ye maine sirf isliye kiya hai taaki JADAV family Gusse mein aake koi galat step le aur humey mauka de unhe khatam karne ka. Ye War hai dad isme har ek step plan karke rakhna padta hai. ”


Kailashnath apne is bete ko dekhkar shocked ho gaya tha Kyuki usey bhi abhi War aur planning plotting ki koi knowledge nahi thi kyuki usne apne life time kabhi koi War nahi dekhi thi aur na ladi thi. Lekin Atharva ne apne Past Life mein thousands se jyada War ladi thi. wo bhi Demons, Devils, Ancient Sects aur Ancient clans ke sath. Uske paas itna experience tha ki wo apne enemies ko koi mauka nahi deta tha start karne ka, har step uske plan ka hissa hota tha chahe wo uska step ho ya uske enemies ka, isliye Past Life mein sub use WarGod ke naam se bhi jante they wo jaha jaata tha aur jo uska enemy hota tha usey bas death hi milti thi. Beshak Atharva ke past life ka Cultivation aur Strength na ho abhi lekin uske paas apne past life ki knowledge aur experience tha jo kisi treasure se kam nahi hai. Aur JADAV family ko to wo kuch samjhta hi nahi hai suru se beshak JADAV family strength mein equal ho Mayor Family ke lekin Atharva ko apne enemies ki Spirits aur Strength todna ache se aata tha.










TO BE CONTINUED……
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UPDATE NO - 16
(The First Dragon Mark)







Kailashnath “ Oh haan, maine saare ingredient collect kar liye hai jo tumne maange they. ”


Kailashnath “ Humey trading inventory mein sirf ek hi Tiger Demon Soul mili, lekin ye sirf Early QI HAI Relam ki hai. Mujhe dar hai kahi ye tumhari Pill ki effectiveness pe fark na pad jaye. Isliye maine ek warrior ko Red City bheja hai Late QI HAI Realm Tiger Demon Soul laane ke liye. ”



Atharva “ Thank You Dad. ”



Kailashnath “ Mujhe Thanks kehne ki koi jarurat nahi hai. ”




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PILL WORKSHOP



Furnace ke bagal mein herbs ka ek dher pada hua tha. Atharva unko examine kar raha tha: Thousand Leaves Grass, Hundred Soul Wood, Sprouting Blue Grass, etc…

Ye saare ingredients Tiger Restoration Pill concoct karne ke liye they. Waha pe ek wooden box bhi tha jiske under ek fist Size ki Demon Soul rakhi huyi thi. Ye kisi Crystal jaisi thi aur isse ek weak glow nikal raha tha. Atharva ko ek hi nazar mein uske andar se aati huyi energy feel ho gayi thi.


Atharva “ yeh to Fiery Tiger ki Demon Soul hai. Aur iske andar ki Fire core bilkul Pure aur undamaged hai. Ye to ek dum Bonus mil gaya. ”


Atharva khus bhi tha aur surprised bhi tha. Wo sirf ek single look se is Demon Soul ka origin bata sakta tha. Fiery Tiger waise to ek Normal demon Beast hi hai lekin tiger species mein ye ek Rare bloodline hai, aur ye ek Special type ki Fire posses karti hai. Is Fiery Tiger ki fire itni strong nahi thi lekin jo Mayor Family pill concoct karne ke liye Earth Fire Use karte hai usse to kaafi achi thi. Aur Atharva ke paas abhi koi elemental attribute nahi tha, kuch na hone se acha hai kuch to ho. Ek baar is Fire ko absorb kar lete ho to aap apni soul power se iske temperature ko bhi Control kar sakte ho. Kisi Normal Alchemist ke liye external Fire attribute absorb karna bhut muskil hota hai lekin Atharva ke liye Fiery Tiger ki Fire ko absorb karna bhut easy aur simple tha.


Atharva “ come. ”


Atharva ne apna hath wave kiya aur uske aisa karte hi wo Demon Soul hawa mein aa gayi. Fir Atharva ne apne dono hatho se complicated hand sign banaye aur in Hand sign ke effect se Fire Core us Demon Soul se ek dum alag ho gayi. Atharva ne apna muh khola aur us Fire core ko nigal gaya. Ek baar Fire core absorb ho jaati hai to ye Soul core ke sath merge ho jayegi. Aur person jitni uski Soul Power aur Yuan Power hai utni Fire Produce kar payega.


Jab Fire Core Atharva ke body mein enter kari to usey ek burning sensation feel hone lagi thi. Tabhi usne apni body ke andar hi apni Soul Power ko release karke us Fire core ko suppress kar liya.


The Dragon Transformation Skill aur Soul Derivation Skill ki wajah se wo Fire Core bhut tez speed se Atharva ke sath merge hone lagi thi. Atharva ne koi method use nahi kiya is process ke liye wo sirf apni The Dragon Transformation Skill aur Soul Derivation Skill ko use kar raha tha. The Dragon Transformation Skill is World mein kisi bhi aur kitni hi Special bloodline ko absorb kar sakti hai to ek normal fire core to ek dum piece of cake tha.


Atharva ne apne hath ko flip kiya aur kuch hi seconds baad uske hath mein bilkul Red Color ki Fiery Fire aa gayi. Jaise Jaise Atharva apni Yuan Power increase karne laga waise waise wo Fire bhi increase hone lagi.


“ Mera Dragon Mark pehle se jyada vivid aur condense hai agar mein is Fire Soul ko pura absorb kar leta hu to first Mark pura Complete ho jaayega aur main bhi Early QI HAI Stage mein breakthrough kar jaunga. Lekin ek Foundation banana usse jyada important hai. Mujhe pehle apne Foundation ko strong banane mein focus karna chahiye. ”


Atharva ka cultivation experience is pure World mein sabse jyada tha aur usey pata tha next level mein breakthrough karne se jyada jaroori Foundation ko strong karna hai. Aur is time usey waise bhi Breakthrough karne ki koi jaldi nahi thi.


Atharva “ is Fire se to main aur fast Pill Concoct kar paunga. ”


Atharva ki aankhe chamAtharva gayi thi. Soul Derivation Skill aur Fiery Fire ke sath to usey kisi Furnace ki bhi jarurat nahi padegi Pill Concoct karne ke Liye. Soul Derivation Skill sirf kisi ki Soul train karne ke liye nahi hai, ye Pill Concoct karne ke liye bhi ek suitable skill hai.



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Atharva ki body se huge amount mein Soul force release hua. Atharva ne apna hath ghumaya aur apne palm se fire release karte huye ek Flame sea bana di. Cracking Sound produce karte huye Soul Force aur Flame Sea aapas mein merge hone lag gaye. Atharva ne ek baar fir apna hath ghumaya aur saare ingredients us Flame Sea mein daal diye.


Furnace ki jagah aisa miraculous method use karna Pill concoct karne ke liye, agar Trio ye hote huye dekh lete hai to wo to Atharva ke pairo mein hi gir jaayenge.


Impurities hatana, essence ko melt karna aur Pill form karna. Is concocting process se Atharva bahut familiar tha. Fiery fire ne pure room ka temperature pehle se two time high kar diya tha. Soul Derivation Skill ki madat se Atharva ko sirf 1 Hour laga Tiger Restoration Pill produce karne mein. Atharva ne apna soul force, apni QI aur apni fire wapis apni body mein absorb kar li, sirf Fresh new Pill reh gayi to jo kisi lighting speed se uske palm mein aake gir gayi.


Atharva “ Ye Tiger Restoration Pill Mortal level ki hai, meri current condition ko dekhte huye ye Pill ekdum perfect hai mere liye. Ye Pill meri foundation aur roots ko strong bana degi. ”


Atharva wahi pe cross legged position mein baith gaya aur pill ko apne muh mein daalke nigal gaya. Us Pill ke andar se huge amount mein power nikal ke Atharva ki body mein fail gayi. Atharva ne immediately The Dragon Transformation Skill ko Cultivate karna suru kar diya. The Dragon Transformation Skill ki help se us Pill ki saari power bhut fast Atharva ki body mein absorb hone lag gayi. Jo ingredients ke essence they wo Atharva ki Body ke har Cell ke sath merge ho rahe they aur uske Foundation ko strong bana rahe they.



Hum….


Suddenly ek humming sound Atharva ki body aane lagi thi jisse Atharva ki puri vibrate hone lagi thi. Atharva ne ek dum se apne six senses band kar diye aur pura focus The Dragon Transformation Skill ko Cultivate karne mein aur pill ko absorb karne mein laga diya.


One Hour ke baad Atharva ne apne aankhe dheere se khol di. Tiger Restoration Pill ek dum fully absorb ho chuki thi. Atharva ko jo apni body mein missing lagta tha wo bhi complete ho chukka tha. Aur uski weak body The Dragon Transformation Skill aur Tiger Restoration pill ki wajah se abhi ke Cultivation level ke hisab se ek dum perfect ho gayi thi. Tiger Restoration Pill ki energy ki wajah se uski dantian mein First Red Dragon Mark fully complete ho chukka tha aur ek dum real Red Dragon ki tarah lag raha tha.


“ First Red Dragon Mark complete ho chukka hai ab main 10000 Pound ke force ke sath punch kar paunga wo bhi sirf QI Jing Realm ke 9th level pe hone ke bawjood. Is Dragon Transformation Skill ki wajah se mera potential past life se bhut acha hai. (HALANKI MEIN PAST LIFE MEIN 16 KI AGE MEIN COMBAT EMPEROR REALM MEIN BREAKTHROUGH KAR GAYA THA.) hahahaha. ”


Atharva ne jor se hasna suru kar diya. Aur fir usne suddenly apna hath uthaya aur hawa mein hi punch maar diya. Ek dragon roar pure room mein goonz gayi. Atharva ne apni full power ka bhi use nahi kiya tha balki sirf Dragon Mark ki power use ki thi agar wo apne cultivation aur Dragon marks ko combine karke use karta hai to uski power 15000 pound se kam nahi hogi. Ab Early QI HAI Realm ke warrior ko aram se maar sakta hai wo aur Mid QI HAI Realm ke warrior ke sath equally fight kar sakta hai.


“ Jaise jaise mein Cultivation mein aage badhta rahunga waise waise Level up karna difficult hota jaayega. Mujhe abhi aur energy resources gather karne padenge. Ye Skill agar normal warrior se jyada strength provide karwati hai to isey Energy consumption bhi normal warriors se jyada chahiye. ”


First Dragon Mark completely form ho gaya tha aur Atharva ki body aur Blood kisi Beast ke jaise strong ho gaye they. Apni body ko stretch karte huye wo pill room se bahar aaya aur apne Mansion ki taraf chal diya.


Abhi Atharva apne mansion mein Rest kar hi raha tha ki Chang ek panic face liye huye bhagta aaya.


Atharva “ Chang, kya hua ? "
" Kya gadbad hai ? ”


Atharva ne ek tea cup uthaya aur tea pine laga.


Chang “ Young Master, bahar do log aaye hai jo apne Pill Shop ke Master Alchemist se milna chahte hai. ”


Atharva “ Kaun hai wo log ? ”


Chang “ Ek Young man aur ek Old man. Young man bhut jyada arrogant hai aur wo bol raha tha ki wo Red City se aaya hai. ”


Atharva “ Red City, Unko Main Hall mein leke jaao aur bolo ki Master Alchemist thodi der mein aayenge. ”


Red City ek kaafi big city hai aur wo Fragrant Sky City se to Compare ho hi nahi sakti. Lekin Atharva kaafi curious ho gaya tha ki Red City se kaun aaya hai.


Kuch moments mein Atharva ne ek white robe pehen liya aur ek badi si bamboo hat daal li jisse uska face na dikhe aur apni QI ko apne galle mein pahucha ke apni voice bhaari kar li. Iske baad Atharva main hall ki taraf chala gaya. Waha pe ek young man baitha tha jo twenties mein tha aur uske face pe arrogance saaf dikh rahi thi. Aur old man apne fifties mein tha wo bhi bilkul arrogant tha. Atharva bhi surprise ho gaya tha unke Level dekh ke Young man Early QI HAI REALM mein tha aur wo old man Mid QI HAI Realm ke peAtharva par tha. Usne socha nahi tha ki is QI Province ke outer area mein koi hoga jo young age mein QI HAI Realm mein breakthrough karle. Halanki wo koi genius nahi tha ki kyuki Divine Continent mein lagbhag sabhi kam Age mein hi QI HAI Realm mein pahuch jaate hai aur koi Atharva ke Jaise monstrous genius hote hai wo choti age mein Divine Core Realm mein bhi pahuch jaate they. Kyuki Divine Continent ki spiritual Energy yaha se hundred times higher hai.


Atharva “ Leave us Alone. ”


Atharva ki awaz bhut bhaari thi jisey Chang bhi pehchan nahi paya. Chang ne ek baar Atharva ki taraf dekha aur fir waha se chala gaya.


Chang “ Young master is Master Alchemist ke sath kyu nahi aaye ? ”


Chang wahi main hall ke bahar guard banke khada ho gaya puzzle expression ke sath.











TO BE CONTINUED…
[ Note :- Dosto aap logo ko realms, captivation related koi bhi dought ho to aap 1st page par details dekh sakte hai. ]
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