Fantasy WARRIOR- EK UNKAHI PREM KAHANI
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Nice update bhaiUPDATE 17
AB TAK - apane dekha piyali jay ka pani pi chuki hai.
AB AGE-
Sare log piyali ke sath niche aa jate hai to piyali sabase apani jan chudakar apane kamare me bhag jati hai.
Yahi par jay bathroom me bhag gaya tha.
Usane undar se bathroom ka door lock kar diya tha.
Jay soch me pad gaya tha ke aaj usane anjane me kya kar diya agar piyali ne kisiko kuch bata diya to bahot bada bawal hone wala tha.
Wo yahi soch kar ghabara raha tha. Jay thodi der intejar karata hai par use kisi ki bhi ahat nahi sunayi deti to wo halaka sa darawaja khol kar bahar dekhata hai to use waha par Koi bhi khada nahi milata to wo ye sochakar khush ho jata hai ke piyali ne kisi ko bhi kuch nahi kaha hai. Jay bahar akar apane kapade pehanane lagata hai Aur sath hi ye sochane lagata hai ke piyali usake bare me kya soch rahi hongi aur wo use dekhakar kaise react kare.
Jay ab ulajhan me pad jata hai phir wo sochata hai jane do yar niche chalakar jo hoga wo dekhate hai.
Phir jay niche hall me aa jata hai jahapar sabhi log taiyar baithe the.
Jay jaise hi niche aata hai to sabhi log use dekhane lagate hai kyonki jay bahot hi handsome dikh raha tha.
Jay ki nani jay ke pas aa jati hai aur use apane ankh ka kajal nikalake lagati hai aur kehati hai mere pote ko kisiki najar na lage.
Jay - nani kya aap bhi mujhe thodi kisiki najar lagane wali hai.
Ye sab sweety bhi dekh rahi thi to wo man me sochati hai.
Sweety- man me ( ha ha pata hai mene dekha hai party mai ladkiya kaise aap ko ghur rahi thi jaise ki aap ko kahi kachha kha na jaye. )
Phir nani jay ko puchati hai ke jay ko bhukh lagi hai kya.
To jay ha me sar hila dita hai to nani jay ke mousi ko yane ki neha ko kehati hai.
Nani- neha bitiya jao aur jay ke liye puran poli le kar aao.
Jab neha puran poli lane chali kati hai to nani jay se kehati hai ke.
Nani - beta abhi thodasa kha lo kyon ki party mai to tumhe bahot kuch khana padega.
Fir neha puranpoli le kar aati hai to sabhi log jay ko puranpoli khilane lagate hai.
Jay ka pet bhar gaya tha to jay sab ko ab bas bhi karo nahi to mera pet phat jayega kehata hai.
Phir sabhi log milake bahar garden mai jane lagate hai jaha pe party rakhi thi jay jab bahar aa jata hai wo chonk jata hai kyon ki jabbtak jay ne naha liya tha tab tak bahar ka vatavaran hi change ho gaya tha kyo ki bahar sab jagah phulon se sajaya gaya tha bich me ek bada sa cake rakha gaya tha garden me jageh jageh buffet lagaya gaya tha aur aur bahot se log jama ho gaye the jo ek dusare se bate kar rahe the the.
To kuch logonke hath me drinks the.
Jab sab log jay ke nanaji ko ate dekhate hai to unako hath jodakar namaste karane lagate hai.
Phir jay aur sabhi family garden ke bich me aa jate hai jaha par cake rakha tha aur phulonse rangoli banayi gayi thi.
Jab bhanu waha pahonch jata hai to ek ladaka ake bhanu ko mike de ke jata hai.
Phir bhanu yane ke nanaji sab ko sambhodhit karake bolane lagate hai.
Nanaji - aap log soch rahe honge ke aaj maine yaha pe party kyon rakhi hai.
Aj mere aur mere family ke liye bahot bada khushi ka din hai. Aaj mai aap logonko mere pote se milane wala hu.
Aur bhanu jay ko apane pas bulata hai aur use apane bajume khada karata hai.
Aur kehata hai.
Ye hai mera pota jay roy. Ye USA se aaj louta hai aur ye ajase hamare sath rehane wala hai.
Ye sunake sare log taliya bajane lagate hai.
Bhanu- mai is khushi ko aap logonke sath batana chahata hun isliye aap sabako bulaya hai.
Phir bhanu aur sari family milake cake katate hai aur sab milake jay ko cake khilate hai.
Bhanu - sweety beta piyali kaha hai abhi tak nahi hai.
Bhanu yahi keh raha tha ke tabhi piyali ate hue sabako dikhayi deti hai.
Piyali ne princes type dress pehena tha jisame wo aaj bahot hi sexy aur hot dikh rahi thi.
Jay jab piyali ko dekhata hai to ek bar usake husn ka didar hi ho jata hai.
Piyali sab ke pas aa jati hai.
Phir bhanu jay ko sab logonse milata hai.
Jay party me piyali se najare nahi mila pa raha tha to wo sabako bolata hai ke mai ab thak gaya hun aur sona chahata hu.
Bhanu jay ko jakar aram karane ke liye bolata hai.
To jay jaldi se waha se apane room me chala jata hai.
Jay room me aa jata hai aur apane kapade badalkar bed pe let jata hai.
Jay aaj sach mai thak gaya tha to wo bed pe letate hi so jata hai.
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Roy mansion me ab sabhi log so gaye the.
Abhi rat ke 2 baj gaye the aur jay apane bed pe soya hua tha par usake muh par abhi kuch alag hi bhav dikh rahe the wo kabhi has raha tha to kabhi ro raha tha kabhi darane jaise hav bhav kar raha tha.
Jay koi sapana dekh raha tha.
Kuch der me jay ke badan se ek roshani nikalane lagati hai jo ke usake heart se nikal rahi thi aur phir usake sabhi angon me ja rahi thi.
Aur jay ka badan halke halke badalane lagata hai. Jay ka badan jo kasarat se bhara hua tha wo aur bhi bada ho raha tha.
Usaki body super saiyan form me jaise goku ki hai waise hi dikh rahi thi.
Tabhi jay ki room ki khidaki khul jati hai aur hum dekh sakate the ki bahar jorose barish ho rahi thi.
Badal garaj rahe the asaman me bijaliya kadak rahi thi. Hava teji se chal rahi thi.
Jay ka badan jaise jaise badal raha tha waise hi bijaliya aur bhi bad rahi thi abhi jay ka badan puri tarah se goku ki tarah dikh raha tha antar sirf itana tha ke jay ke bal kale the.
Jay ke heart se nikalane wali roshani jay jay ke sabhi badan ko badal deti hai to tabhi bijali badalo me se jameen pe niche ane lagati hai. Us niche girate hue bijali ko agar koi dekhata to use heart attack to jaroor aa jata.
Wo bijali niche ate hue sidha jay ke room ke khidaki se andar aati hai aur jay ke upar girati hai.
Aisa lag raha tha ke qo bijali aaj jay ka dharati se namo nishan hi mita degi.
Par tabhi jaise koi jadu hi ho jata hai aur jay ka badan us bijali ko apane andar samane lagata hai. Wo bijali puri tarah se jay ke sharir me sama jati hai.
Jay ka badan aisa lag raha tha bijali ne kisi adami ka roop le liya hai.
Jay ke sabhi badan me current doud raha tha.
Jay ke room ke sare bulb ud gaye the usake bed me se dhua nikal raha tha.
Usaka bed puri tarah se jal gaya tha.
Par jay ko jaise kisi bat ki bhanak bhi nahi thi.
Jay abhi koi suhana sapana dekh raha tha usake chehare par halaki si muskan thi.
Ye sab ho gaya tha par ROY MANSION me kisi koi khabar bhi nahi thi.
BHAILOG AAJ KE LIYE ITANA HI AB SHURU HONE JA RAHI HAI ASALI KAHANI TO MAI ASHA KARATA HUN KE AAP LOG IS KAHANI SE JUDE RAHENGE.
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Waiting for new update Bhai
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UPDATE 18AB TAK - apane dekha jay apane sapano me khoya hua hai.
AB AGE -
Jay apane sapano ki wadiyo me khoya hua tha use duniya ki koi khabar nahi thi use ye bhi pata nahi tha ke usake sath abhi abhi kya hua hai.
Jay ka bed jalakar rakh me badal gaya tha bijali ke girane ke bad jay ke badan pe jaise bijali ka ek kawach jaisa ban gaya tha aur usake sharir se bijali ke chote chote current nikalane lage the.
Jay thodi der me apane aap hawa me uthane lagata hai aur jay ke sath hi usake aas pas ki chije bhi hawa me upar uthane lagati hai.
Jay hawa me tair raha tha. Par use ab bhi koi hosh nahi tha.
Jab bijali akar jay ke badan par girati hai to bahar barish dhire dhire kam hone lagati hai.
Aur thode hi der mai barish rook bhi jati hai.
Par jay ab bhi hawa mai tair raha tha jay ke sath room me rakhi sabhi chije hawa me tarang rahi thi jay ka badan apane aap hawa me dhire dhire ghum raha tha.
Jay ke badan ke sampark me koi bhi chij aa jati to usake sharir se nikalane wale current se wo destroy ho jati.
Jay ka room aisa tha jaise mano kisi jagah pe bijali girake jaise khandahar bana deti hai.
Dhire dhire jay ke badan se nikalane wali current usake badan mai sama jati hai aur fir usake badan se roshani bhi kam ho jati hai.
Par wo ab bhi hawa mai jaise latak raha tha.
Subah ho gayi thi to sab jag chuke the.
Aur apane nityakarm karane lage the. Abhi sabhi log hall mai baithe the jaha pe sabako nashta parosa ja raha tha.
Nanaji - are abhi tak jay niche nahi aya.
Nani - lagata hai ab bhi so raha hoga kal thak gaya tha sone dijiye use.
Aur phir sabhi log nashta karane lagate hai.
Nashta karate hue sabhi log news bhi dekh rahe the.
Aur news me kal rat ke aye hue tufan ke bare mai bataya ja raha tha.
News reporter abhi bata raha tha ke kal rat me aya hua tufan ooti mai aya aaj tak ka sabase bada tufan tha.
Par Is bijali ke tufan mai town mai koi hani nahi hue hai.
Aur roy mansion ke aas pas kahi pe bijali girane ki ashanka vyakt ki jaa rahi thi.
Jay ab bhi apane room me hawa me hi latak raha tha par wo dhire dhire hawa se niche aane lagata hai.
Nanaji - akriti beta jao aur jakar jay ko utha do.
Aur use nashte ke liye niche taiyar hokar ane ke liye bolo.
Fir akriti jay ke room ke taraf jane lagati hai
Wo jay ke room ke bahar aa jati hai aur darawaja kholakar andar jati hai
Jab wo darawaja kholakar undar jati hai to usake akriti ke munh se ek chikh nikal jati hai jise sunakar sab chounk jate hai.
Par sweety piyali ke taraf dekhakar aajib tarah ae kehati hai.
Lagata hai ma ne bhi koi chuha dekh liya hai.
Par akriti jay nanaji ko joro se chikh kar bulati hai.
To sab log doudkar upar jane lagate hai. Jab sab log upar jate hai sab chounk jate hai kyonki jay ka room ek rat me jaise khandahar me badal gaya tha aur sab log dekhate hai ke jay jameen pe pada hai aur akriti use uthane ki koshish kar rahi thi.
To sabhi log jay ke pas aa jate hai.
Nana - ye sab kya hua hai.
Amar - Lagata kal rat yaha pe bijali giri hai.
Sab log jay ke taraf dekhate hai to jay ko kuch bhi nahi hua tha wo ab bhi nind me khoya hua tha.
Jab akriti jay ko hila kar uthane ki koshish karati hai to jay angadayi lete hue uth kar baithata hai.
Jab wo sab logon ko apane aas pas dekhata hai to khush hokar sabako Good morning bolata hai.
Jay ko sabhi log aise dekh rahe the jaise kisi bhoot ko dekh liya hai.
Jay ko scene mai kuch gadabad lagata hai to wo aas pas dekhata hai to wo chounk jata hai.
Jay ko kuch bhi samaz me nahi aa raha tha kyo ki wo kisi alag hi jagah par soya hua tha.
Aur apane nani se puchata hai.
Jay - nani ye hum kaha aye hue hai.
Ye to jaise kisi khandahar jaisa hai.
Aur uth kar khada ho jata hai. aur nani ye mai niche kyon leta hua hu.
Nani ke ankhonme abhi ansu the unake munh se koi bhi labj nahi nikal raha tha.
To wo jay ko apane gale laga leti hai.
Aur rone lagati hai to akriti aur neha bhi akar use apane gale laga leti hai abhi ghar ki teeno aurate bhi ro rahi thi.
To sabako kuch bhi samaz me nahi aa raha tha to jay sabase puchata hai aap sabhi log ro kyun rahe ho.
Aap sabhi log rowo mat nahi to mai bhi ro dunga.
Fir jay ke nanaji sabako wahase bahar chalane ke liye bolate hai.
To tino aurate chup ho jati hai aur jay ke sath bahar jane lagati hai.
Jay jab darawaje se bahar aa jata hai. To wo chonk jata hai kyon ki abhi jahase bahar aaya tha wo to usi ka room tha.
Jay - nanaji ye kya hua hai mera room aisa kyon hai.
Nanaji - rab ka shukra hai beta tumhe kuch bhi nahi hua. Tumhare room me bijali giri hai jisake wajah se ye sab hua hai ye sunake jay ke pasine chut jate hai.
Abhi sabhi log dare hie the aur sabase buri halat jay ke nanaji ki hi thi.
To jay ke nanaji sabako sambodhit karate hai aur kahate kal ka samay hamare liye ashubh tha hum aaj hi guruji se milane ja rahe hai.
Jay ko taiyar karo sabhi log bhi taiyar ho jao hum suryakund ke mandir me ja rahe hai.
To neha jay ko apane sath apane room me le jati hai taiyar hone ke liye.
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