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[John Cena]

Nice Update .....
But one question
Kia 10 star system k high ming ki jasusi krna itna easy hai aur Kia sirlima ki koi intelegence agency nahi hai jo apne high king ki protection aur jasosi se bachaye ? ....
Please thora mature likho .....
Sorry agr meri bat buri lage to .......
It's my opinion......
Stay blessed and keep writing.....

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[Jkking]

Wo aap ko aaj ke a update me pata lug Jay ga ke kese jasusi ho rahi he....
Aur aap ki daad Deni pere gi Kya point pekra he....
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[Agrawal ji]

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[John Cena]

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[Shahrukh]

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[Jkking]

Update 4

Aab dekhte he ki wo sapna kia tha jis ke Karan me der gia tha... Aur pesine se bhiga hua tha....
Aaj mujha ek sapna aya ki Earth ke oper kisi unknown Sena ne attack ker dia he aur bha kafi tbhai Hui he...
Mujhe laga ye sirf ek bura sapna he aur os bhul gya...
Aur jaldi Uth ker meditation kerne Chala gya meditation kerna aab Meri adat per gayi the jis ke Karan me jaldi bhi Uth jata tha ....
Main ...... 2 ghentu badh me dhian tura aur fresh ho ker mhasbha ke lie Ready ho gaya....
Aaj ki mhasbha specially Zefron ke madded kerni he ya nahi is bat per thi.....
Mhasbha shuru hone Bali thi me king Santana ke sath Sabha me phucha Mera swaget sab me kia Meri itni jai Jai kar dekh kera Zafron surprise tha me aur king santana Sabha ke center me bene sighashan per beath gia aur king Santana mere sath Bali saet per aur phir mene Sabha shuru kerne ka adesh yha lagbhag her ek starsystem ke commmanders mujude the...
Phir king santana ne bulna shuru kia.....
King Santana... Mere pyare sathio ye aaj ki mhasbha ka ye hai ki hum dark world ke bagio ki madded kere ge ki nahi me ye phuchna chahta hu ki is me aap Saab ka Kia rye he....
Sabhi... Hum pehle un se bat kerna
Chahte he...
Phir Zafron apni bat rakta he ....
Zafron.... Me Zofron hu me Darkworld ke 4th satrsystam Tron ka prince hu aur Darkworld ke khilaf Jung lad rhe sare bagio ka leader bhi hu....
Zafron.... Hemare yha per halat bahout hi kharab he Morgan hemare logu per zulm ker ke on ku majbur kerke un se jaberdasti apni Sena ke lie weapons aur spaceship bhi banbata he aur os ke badle me onhe sirf ek wqat ka khana hi deta he....
Ye sab sun ke sabhi ne kuch der bat ki phir mujhe se Meri Ray puchshi....
Main... Meri aur se tu Jo aap Saab ka hoga Mera bhi wohi hoga...
Sabhi... Hum tyar he meger itni ldai ke lie tyeari ke lie hum kuch saalo ka waqt chahie kio ki sirlima ki sena be Kai lakh salu se kisi bade yodh me hisa nahi Lia he hume tyari ke lie waqt lege ga shayad 2 se 3 saal ka waqt lege ga yodh ki tyario me.....
Sabhi... Man gye phir sbha ko smapte ker dia gia......

Is sabha ke badh hum sab Mahal lot aye me Zafron se Mila mujhe os ka behavior achsha laga...
Is badh me king Santana se bat kerne lga....
Main... King santana me aap se kuch bat kerna chahta hu...
King santana... Bulele highking aap ko hum se Kya bat kerni thi....
Main.... Me apni family ke sath kuch erath per Jana chahta hu is ke lie mujhe aap se bat kerni thi...
Santana... Tu highking is me puchne ki Kya bat he... Aap hemare highking he aap bes adesh kere tu aap.kub niklna chahte he....
Main... Me aaj shaam ko hi nklna chahta hun...
Santana ... Tu me aap ki Royal ship ready kerva deta hu....
Main.. tu phir thick hai ...
Aur phir me bha se apni family ke pass a gya jub on he mene ye bat baty tu bahout khush hue Meri Sabi jaan bhi khush ho gai thi kio ki wo sabhi bhi Earth pe Jana chahti thi....

Shaam ko hemari ship nikal gai sirlima se....
Lekin heme ye nahi pta tha ki Earth per ek musibat hemara intzar ker rahi thi....
Aur Jo log mujhe per Nazar rkhe hue the un ho ne ye khaber Agrom Tak phucaha di thi...
Ye jasus wo log the Jo Morgan jab sirlima ka prince tha tu oske sathi the Jo aaj bhi sarlima ke Mahal me Kam ker rhe the aur secret taur per Morgan ke jasus the.....

Baki ka agle update me
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Jkking
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[Jkking]

Bhai really behtareen story hai Kal sham parhna start Kiya Abbi complete Kiya maza aa Gaya Bhai

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[@kki]

Update 4

Aab dekhte he ki wo sapna kia tha jis ke Karan me der gia tha... Aur pesine se bhiga hua tha....
Aaj mujha ek sapna aya ki Earth ke oper kisi unknown Sena ne attack ker dia he aur bha kafi tbhai Hui he...
Mujhe laga ye sirf ek bura sapna he aur os bhul gya...
Aur jaldi Uth ker meditation kerne Chala gya meditation kerna aab Meri adat per gayi the jis ke Karan me jaldi bhi Uth jata tha ....
Main ...... 2 ghentu badh me dhian tura aur fresh ho ker mhasbha ke lie Ready ho gaya....
Aaj ki mhasbha specially Zefron ke madded kerni he ya nahi is bat per thi.....
Mhasbha shuru hone Bali thi me king Santana ke sath Sabha me phucha Mera swaget sab me kia Meri itni jai Jai kar dekh kera Zafron surprise tha me aur king santana Sabha ke center me bene sighashan per beath gia aur king Santana mere sath Bali saet per aur phir mene Sabha shuru kerne ka adesh yha lagbhag her ek starsystem ke commmanders mujude the...
Phir king santana ne bulna shuru kia.....
King Santana... Mere pyare sathio ye aaj ki mhasbha ka ye hai ki hum dark world ke bagio ki madded kere ge ki nahi me ye phuchna chahta hu ki is me aap Saab ka Kia rye he....
Sabhi... Hum pehle un se bat kerna
Chahte he...
Phir Zafron apni bat rakta he ....
Zafron.... Me Zofron hu me Darkworld ke 4th satrsystam Tron ka prince hu aur Darkworld ke khilaf Jung lad rhe sare bagio ka leader bhi hu....
Zafron.... Hemare yha per halat bahout hi kharab he Morgan hemare logu per zulm ker ke on ku majbur kerke un se jaberdasti apni Sena ke lie weapons aur spaceship bhi banbata he aur os ke badle me onhe sirf ek wqat ka khana hi deta he....
Ye sab sun ke sabhi ne kuch der bat ki phir mujhe se Meri Ray puchshi....
Main... Meri aur se tu Jo aap Saab ka hoga Mera bhi wohi hoga...
Sabhi... Hum tyar he meger itni ldai ke lie tyeari ke lie hum kuch saalo ka waqt chahie kio ki sirlima ki sena be Kai lakh salu se kisi bade yodh me hisa nahi Lia he hume tyari ke lie waqt lege ga shayad 2 se 3 saal ka waqt lege ga yodh ki tyario me.....
Sabhi... Man gye phir sbha ko smapte ker dia gia......

Is sabha ke badh hum sab Mahal lot aye me Zafron se Mila mujhe os ka behavior achsha laga...
Is badh me king Santana se bat kerne lga....
Main... King santana me aap se kuch bat kerna chahta hu...
King santana... Bulele highking aap ko hum se Kya bat kerni thi....
Main.... Me apni family ke sath kuch erath per Jana chahta hu is ke lie mujhe aap se bat kerni thi...
Santana... Tu highking is me puchne ki Kya bat he... Aap hemare highking he aap bes adesh kere tu aap.kub niklna chahte he....
Main... Me aaj shaam ko hi nklna chahta hun...
Santana ... Tu me aap ki Royal ship ready kerva deta hu....
Main.. tu phir thick hai ...
Aur phir me bha se apni family ke pass a gya jub on he mene ye bat baty tu bahout khush hue Meri Sabi jaan bhi khush ho gai thi kio ki wo sabhi bhi Earth pe Jana chahti thi....

Shaam ko hemari ship nikal gai sirlima se....
Lekin heme ye nahi pta tha ki Earth per ek musibat hemara intzar ker rahi thi....
Aur Jo log mujhe per Nazar rkhe hue the un ho ne ye khaber Agrom Tak phucaha di thi...
Ye jasus wo log the Jo Morgan jab sirlima ka prince tha tu oske sathi the Jo aaj bhi sarlima ke Mahal me Kam ker rhe the aur secret taur per Morgan ke jasus the.....

Baki ka agle update me
Apka dost
Jkking
Thanks

Nice update bhai
Ab dekhte hai earth pr kya hoga hero k saath or konsi musibat wait kr rhi h bha p

 

[Kalyansurya]

Nice update bhai but ek baat samaz nai aaya ki jab nikil ke pass etni takat hai wo pure ke pure garha ko tabah kar sakta hai to tron ko aazad karwane leya etna waqt kyu le rha hai and one more thing nikil ki jo log jasusi kar rhe hai wo logo ka kisi ko pta kyu nai chal rha hai
Phele be jasusi kar ke nikal gaye abe fir se nikal gaye enka kuch elaz kro bhai

 

[Avir]

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