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Fantasy Warrior of love( magic and si fi )

Story main kha se suro kero?


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Asif khan

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Jkking

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Bhai likhte time left hand se bhout mistake ho Rahi he.... Fir bhi aap Seb ke lie koshish ker rha hu.....
 
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Akil

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Bhai likhte time left hand se bhout mistake ho Rahi he.... Fir bhi aap Seb ke lie koshish ker rha hu.....
It's ok bro i think aap pehle apne aap ko durust kijiye tab hi updates dena....
 
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Jkking

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Update 9

Abb Tak

Hum Earth per a chuke he aur Earth ki gov. ne hotel me rokvaya.....

Abb age

Subh me jaldi uth gya kio ki ajj mujhe bahout se Kam kerne the me jaldi uth ker hotal ke garden me Chala gya abhi meri sari jaan so Rahi thi.
Me apne kamere se nikel ker sidha garden ki terf gya raste me mujhe Earth aur mere royal guards bhi mele.
Garden me phuch ker me jaker dhyan me bath gya .Garden me phuch ker me jaker dhyan me bath gya .
Kuch der me hi me dhyan me chla gya ajj jab me dhyan gya tu mujhe ajj dhyan me ajj mhaveer mila ajj os ne mujhe kha....
Mveer... Kese ho nik ...
Nik.... Me thik hu aap kese he ....
Mveer... Me thick hu... Me tumhe yha ye btane aya hu ki tumhari terf ek bada khatra badh rha he apni powers ko jaldi control kero.......
Kuch der me hi me dhyan me chla gya ajj jab me dhyan gya tu mujhe ajj dhyan me ajj mhaveer mila ajj os ne mujhe kha....
Mveer... Kese ho nik ...
Nik.... Me thik hu aap kese he ....
Mveer... Me thick hu... Me tumhe yha ye btane aya hu ki tumhari terf ek bada khatra badh rha he apni powers ko jaldi control kero.......

Os ke jane ke badh hi me apni powers ko control kerne ki koshish me jut gya aur isme mhujhe ajj kafi hed Tak Kam yabi bhi mil gai thi me idher powers ko control kerne ki koshish me ye sab Seb tu bhul hi gya ki me sarlima ke apne mhal me nahi hu me Earth per ek hotel me hu yis ke ass pass aur is ke ander kafi log he .......
Mere dyan me bathne ke kush der ke badh hi mere ass pass Meri powers ke Karan ek bahout hi power ful enrgyy forcefiled ban gyi yo ke Meri abb Tak ki Meri on powers ke Karan bana tha yu mere full control me thi.....
Is force field ke Karan hotel ka Sara garden tu kab ka destroy hu chuka tha is sab ka baki logu ku tab Peta chla yab hotal me bhukamp ke yhatke ane lege yo ki mere ass pass bene forcefiled Karan a rha tha is bhukamp aur itne bade power source ki khaber yab Earth ki army ke redar me aya tu wo bhi heran hu gye aur hotel ko charu aur se army ne gher lia mere ass pass Meri rksha ke lie Meri force field ke sath sath mere senik aur meri charu jaan aur mom dad bhi the mere ass pass Mere soldiers ke sath sath Earth ki army ke soldiers bhi the wo sab mujhe dur se hi gher ke rksha ker rhe the is sab ke bich me sbha ke 6 se leker 9 beje Tak dyan me betha rha aur bhar ka mahul dheshat bhara rha.....
Mene yab apni white powers per kabu pa lia tu mere ass pass bani forcefiled bhi gyab hune lagi......
Kuch hi der me mene apni akhe khuli tu mere ass pass mhaul bahout ajeeb tha mere ass pass aur asman me Earth ki army ke ships ne weapons ka rukh Meri aur tha...
Baki ka agle update me ......

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Jkking

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Bro bari mushkil se itna update likha he left hand se galti hu yae tu muaf kerna abhi sirf is thrad ka hi update aye ge is ke complete hune ke badh hi me apni story per update dunga ...
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John Cena

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Update 9

Abb Tak

Hum Earth per a chuke he aur Earth ki gov. ne hotel me rokvaya.....

Abb age

Subh me jaldi uth gya kio ki ajj mujhe bahout se Kam kerne the me jaldi uth ker hotal ke garden me Chala gya abhi meri sari jaan so Rahi thi.
Me apne kamere se nikel ker sidha garden ki terf gya raste me mujhe Earth aur mere royal guards bhi mele.
Garden me phuch ker me jaker dhyan me bath gya .Garden me phuch ker me jaker dhyan me bath gya .
Kuch der me hi me dhyan me chla gya ajj jab me dhyan gya tu mujhe ajj dhyan me ajj mhaveer mila ajj os ne mujhe kha....
Mveer... Kese ho nik ...
Nik.... Me thik hu aap kese he ....
Mveer... Me thick hu... Me tumhe yha ye btane aya hu ki tumhari terf ek bada khatra badh rha he apni powers ko jaldi control kero.......
Kuch der me hi me dhyan me chla gya ajj jab me dhyan gya tu mujhe ajj dhyan me ajj mhaveer mila ajj os ne mujhe kha....
Mveer... Kese ho nik ...
Nik.... Me thik hu aap kese he ....
Mveer... Me thick hu... Me tumhe yha ye btane aya hu ki tumhari terf ek bada khatra badh rha he apni powers ko jaldi control kero.......

Os ke jane ke badh hi me apni powers ko control kerne ki koshish me jut gya aur isme mhujhe ajj kafi hed Tak Kam yabi bhi mil gai thi me idher powers ko control kerne ki koshish me ye sab Seb tu bhul hi gya ki me sarlima ke apne mhal me nahi hu me Earth per ek hotel me hu yis ke ass pass aur is ke ander kafi log he .......
Mere dyan me bathne ke kush der ke badh hi mere ass pass Meri powers ke Karan ek bahout hi power ful enrgyy forcefiled ban gyi yo ke Meri abb Tak ki Meri on powers ke Karan bana tha yu mere full control me thi.....
Is force field ke Karan hotel ka Sara garden tu kab ka destroy hu chuka tha is sab ka baki logu ku tab Peta chla yab hotal me bhukamp ke yhatke ane lege yo ki mere ass pass bene forcefiled Karan a rha tha is bhukamp aur itne bade power source ki khaber yab Earth ki army ke redar me aya tu wo bhi heran hu gye aur hotel ko charu aur se army ne gher lia mere ass pass Meri rksha ke lie Meri force field ke sath sath mere senik aur meri charu jaan aur mom dad bhi the mere ass pass Mere soldiers ke sath sath Earth ki army ke soldiers bhi the wo sab mujhe dur se hi gher ke rksha ker rhe the is sab ke bich me sbha ke 6 se leker 9 beje Tak dyan me betha rha aur bhar ka mahul dheshat bhara rha.....
Mene yab apni white powers per kabu pa lia tu mere ass pass bani forcefiled bhi gyab hune lagi......
Kuch hi der me mene apni akhe khuli tu mere ass pass mhaul bahout ajeeb tha mere ass pass aur asman me Earth ki army ke ships ne weapons ka rukh Meri aur tha...
Baki ka agle update me ......

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Jkking
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Jkking

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Bhai abhi update ka size atna hi rhe ga jab Tak Mera hath thick nahi hu jata thick hune ke badh update ka sizw
 
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