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Fantasy White&Black.
- Thread starterAzlan jhan
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very nice introduction brother(Ye Kahani ek khyal plaw he is ka kisi b mazhab ya insan say koi lena dena nahi he)
Update 1.
Hamare earth ke elwa or b bohat sare planets he jin ke bare he ham insan nahi jante to chalye pehlay app ko in planets ka introduction de du.
no 1.
Argard.
.
yaha ke log element fighting me bohat mahir hote hen or in ki ageing b bohat slow hoti he matlab ke yaha ka amm banda b kai hazaro sal tak zinda rehsak ta he .
no 2
Midgard yani ke Earth .
yaha ke logo ke pass koi power ni he phir b kon sa esa bura kam he jo ye log ni krte
larahi jhgre
jhoot bolna
logo ki jan lena
rap
wagera wagera.
no3.
Beast island
yaha beast rehtay he matlab ke asy asy janwar jin ke bare me na kabi suna ho ga nahi kabi dekha hoga yahe pe bare say bare surma b jane say darte hen.
no4.
Jin and fairy town.
ye bohat hi khoubsurat jagha he name say to app logo ko pta chal hi gaya hoga yaha pe jin or faryes rehti hen.
no5.
World of dragon.
Dragon ke elawa or kisi ke bap me himat ni he jo yaha ja sake.
no6.
Elfs Town.
yaha elfs rehte he inke bare me mashoor he ke inki kaman say nikla teer kabi khli ni jata .
te apne elements or apne teer ka use itne kamal tariqe say krte hen ke samne wala dekh ke dang reh jata he.
no7.
Hogwarts.
yaha zada tadat me witch and wizard rehtay he. earth ko chor ke sab planets say log yaha magic and fight sikne a te he mab ke ye sab plants ka iklota school he.
no8.
Azkaban.
ye 1 jail he yaha ki dekh rekh vampire s krte hen yaha pe bure logo ko la ke rakha jata he or is jail say nikal na imposibal he.
no9.
Dark Empire.
ye bure logo ki jagha he bohat bure logo ki.
no10.
White Empire.
yaha immortals rehtay thy. yani who log jinhe sirf kisi khas cheez say mara ja sakta ho us ke ilawa un he ni mara ja sakta.
(to ye thay 10 realms . jin ka me ne intro diya or b bohat sare realms he jin ka intro waqt ke sat sat deta rahu ga .
umeed he app logo ko meri 1 update pasad i ho next update me me kuch cractors ko introduce kra hu ga to aj ke liye bs itna he ijazat den apne dost ko melte he kl 1 nahi update ke sat by by)
(MUJE PTA HE DOSTO UPDATE CHOTA HE PR ME ROZANA UPDATE DU GA PKKA.)
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Congratulations bhai
andyking302
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शानदार intro bhai(Ye Kahani ek khyal plaw he is ka kisi b mazhab ya insan say koi lena dena nahi he)
Update 1.
Hamare earth ke elwa or b bohat sare planets he jin ke bare he ham insan nahi jante to chalye pehlay app ko in planets ka introduction de du.
no 1.
Argard.
yaha ke log element fighting me bohat mahir hote hen or in ki ageing b bohat slow hoti he matlab ke yaha ka amm banda b kai hazaro sal tak zinda rehsak ta he .
no 2
Midgard yani ke Earth .
yaha ke logo ke pass koi power ni he phir b kon sa esa bura kam he jo ye log ni krte
larahi jhgre
jhoot bolna
logo ki jan lena
rap
wagera wagera.
no3.
Beast island
yaha beast rehtay he matlab ke asy asy janwar jin ke bare me na kabi suna ho ga nahi kabi dekha hoga yahe pe bare say bare surma b jane say darte hen.
no4.
Jin and fairy town.
ye bohat hi khoubsurat jagha he name say to app logo ko pta chal hi gaya hoga yaha pe jin or faryes rehti hen.
no5.
World of dragon.
Dragon ke elawa or kisi ke bap me himat ni he jo yaha ja sake.
no6.
Elfs Town.
yaha elfs rehte he inke bare me mashoor he ke inki kaman say nikla teer kabi khli ni jata .
te apne elements or apne teer ka use itne kamal tariqe say krte hen ke samne wala dekh ke dang reh jata he.
no7.
Hogwarts.
yaha zada tadat me witch and wizard rehtay he. earth ko chor ke sab planets say log yaha magic and fight sikne a te he mab ke ye sab plants ka iklota school he.
no8.
Azkaban.
ye 1 jail he yaha ki dekh rekh vampire s krte hen yaha pe bure logo ko la ke rakha jata he or is jail say nikal na imposibal he.
no9.
Dark Empire.
ye bure logo ki jagha he bohat bure logo ki.
no10.
White Empire.
yaha immortals rehtay thy. yani who log jinhe sirf kisi khas cheez say mara ja sakta ho us ke ilawa un he ni mara ja sakta.
(to ye thay 10 realms . jin ka me ne intro diya or b bohat sare realms he jin ka intro waqt ke sat sat deta rahu ga .
umeed he app logo ko meri 1 update pasad i ho next update me me kuch cractors ko introduce kra hu ga to aj ke liye bs itna he ijazat den apne dost ko melte he kl 1 nahi update ke sat by by)
(MUJE PTA HE DOSTO UPDATE CHOTA HE PR ME ROZANA UPDATE DU GA PKKA.)
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Update2.
Pehlay sirf 9 realms hi thay yani ke.
Asgard. Midgard. Beast Island. Jin and Farry Town. World of Dragons. Hogwarts. Elf Town.
Azkaban. And Dark Empire.
Pr dark empire ke logo ne har jagha tabhi macha na shuru kr di.
jeseey dikh ke Mother of creation ne White Empire ka nirman kiya or yaha 2 immortal ko janam diya or unhe creation ki power b di (ab say me mother of creation ko MoC likhu ga Ok)
MoC..jaho mere bacho ye Universe Ab say Tumhara he Burahi ka ab tum logo ne hi khatma krna he.
Admi2..Pr maa mante he ham dono bohat shakti shali he pr phir b ham Akele kitno ka samna kre .
Admi1..Ap is bewaqoof ka jane de maa app mujhe Bole Me is pure universe say burahi ka namo nishna mita du ga.
MoC.. pyar say un dono ke sar pe hat phar te huwe Admi 1 say muje pta he beta ke tum bohat shakti shali ho pr apne undar ghamand kabi mat ane dena Q ke ghamad esi cheez he jo ke devtaho ko bi barbad kr sak ta he. or admi 2 say mere bete tumhari bat bilkul durst he is liye mene tumhe creation ki power di he jis ka istemal tum keval 1 bar hi kr sakte ho.
MoC ki bat sun ke jahan admi 2 khush ho jata he wahi admi 1 ki ego hurt ho jati he. jis ka MoC ko andaza ho jata he.
Admi 2 . kya such me maa app ne ham dono ko creation ki power di he.
MoC. dono ko nahi sirf tumhe mere buchy .
Admi 1. ghusy me maa ye to glat bat he .
MoC. apne app ko shant karo beta Gussa achu cheez ni he. Or Ahinda mere kisi b kam me sawal mt uta na. or Admi 2 say mere bete apni ankhee band karo or apne world ki rachna karo
Admi2 .wesa hi krta he tabi os ke mind say 1 safeed rang ki light nikalti he jisay dikh ke admi1 ki ankhee b band ho jati hen jab light khatm hoti he to un ke samne 1 bohat hi khubsurat jagha thi or 1 lakh log zameen pe 1 pahu mor ke bethy thy .
jisay dikh ke ye 3no b zamen pe land krte he
MoC..uth jaho mere bacho
sabi log uth jate he .
MoC.admi 2 ki tarf ishara krte huwe
mere bacho ye hen tunhare King. or admi1 ki tarf ishara krte huwe or ye hen tumhare camandar .
tabi caro tarf nare gunjhne lagte hen
King ki jay ho MoC ki jay ho.
jisay sunke admi 1 ki jal jati he.
MoC. mere bacho tumhe apne king ka sath dena he hamesha or burahi ke kihlaf datt ke lar na he. MoC ki bat sun ke sab log ek sath bolte hen ham apne king ke sat hen or hamesha burahi ke khilaf datt ke laren ge.
tabi MoC apna hat hawa me lehrati hen or wahan in sab ke liye ghar or training sheltor ban jata he jis me har kism ke hatyar thay
or king ke liye 1 alishaan mehel b ban jata he.
or 1 bar phir MoC hat lehrati hen or inke hat say lights nikal ke sab ke mind me ghus jati hen
MoC. mere bacho mene tum sab ke dimag me
jo jo kam tumhen krna he us ki knowledge daldi he or tumhe us ke hisab say powers b dedi hen ab warriors training shaltor me ja ke Training kre or baki sab apne kam pe lag jahen.
sab wesa hi krte hen.
MoC.. calo bacho mehel me calen
admi 2 or admi 1 or b kuch log mehel me a jate hen
MoC.. king say beta app waha samne singhasan pe betho jake.
MoC ki bat sun ke admi 1 ki jal ke rakh ho jati he .
Admi 2 .ni maa app ke hotay huwe me waha ni beth sakta.
MoC. admi 2 ki bat sunke muskura deti he
or jake singhasan pe beth jati he
or ankhee band kr ke kisi ko yad krti he
tabi samne 3 log a jate hen .
3no ek sat messangars ka salam qabool kare mother.
MoC. uth jaho mere bacho or ja ke 8 realms ke kings say kaho me ne bulaya he.
(Dosto muje pta he update chota he or kuch khas b ni he pr me abi plot set kr raha hu to maff krna
Milte hen next update me jo kl rat ko a he gi tab tak ke liye apna kyal rakh na by by
Azlan..)
Pehlay sirf 9 realms hi thay yani ke.
Asgard. Midgard. Beast Island. Jin and Farry Town. World of Dragons. Hogwarts. Elf Town.
Azkaban. And Dark Empire.
Pr dark empire ke logo ne har jagha tabhi macha na shuru kr di.
jeseey dikh ke Mother of creation ne White Empire ka nirman kiya or yaha 2 immortal ko janam diya or unhe creation ki power b di (ab say me mother of creation ko MoC likhu ga Ok)
MoC..jaho mere bacho ye Universe Ab say Tumhara he Burahi ka ab tum logo ne hi khatma krna he.
Admi2..Pr maa mante he ham dono bohat shakti shali he pr phir b ham Akele kitno ka samna kre .
Admi1..Ap is bewaqoof ka jane de maa app mujhe Bole Me is pure universe say burahi ka namo nishna mita du ga.
MoC.. pyar say un dono ke sar pe hat phar te huwe Admi 1 say muje pta he beta ke tum bohat shakti shali ho pr apne undar ghamand kabi mat ane dena Q ke ghamad esi cheez he jo ke devtaho ko bi barbad kr sak ta he. or admi 2 say mere bete tumhari bat bilkul durst he is liye mene tumhe creation ki power di he jis ka istemal tum keval 1 bar hi kr sakte ho.
MoC ki bat sun ke jahan admi 2 khush ho jata he wahi admi 1 ki ego hurt ho jati he. jis ka MoC ko andaza ho jata he.
Admi 2 . kya such me maa app ne ham dono ko creation ki power di he.
MoC. dono ko nahi sirf tumhe mere buchy .
Admi 1. ghusy me maa ye to glat bat he .
MoC. apne app ko shant karo beta Gussa achu cheez ni he. Or Ahinda mere kisi b kam me sawal mt uta na. or Admi 2 say mere bete apni ankhee band karo or apne world ki rachna karo
Admi2 .wesa hi krta he tabi os ke mind say 1 safeed rang ki light nikalti he jisay dikh ke admi1 ki ankhee b band ho jati hen jab light khatm hoti he to un ke samne 1 bohat hi khubsurat jagha thi or 1 lakh log zameen pe 1 pahu mor ke bethy thy .
jisay dikh ke ye 3no b zamen pe land krte he
MoC..uth jaho mere bacho
sabi log uth jate he .
MoC.admi 2 ki tarf ishara krte huwe
mere bacho ye hen tunhare King. or admi1 ki tarf ishara krte huwe or ye hen tumhare camandar .
tabi caro tarf nare gunjhne lagte hen
King ki jay ho MoC ki jay ho.
jisay sunke admi 1 ki jal jati he.
MoC. mere bacho tumhe apne king ka sath dena he hamesha or burahi ke kihlaf datt ke lar na he. MoC ki bat sun ke sab log ek sath bolte hen ham apne king ke sat hen or hamesha burahi ke khilaf datt ke laren ge.
tabi MoC apna hat hawa me lehrati hen or wahan in sab ke liye ghar or training sheltor ban jata he jis me har kism ke hatyar thay
or king ke liye 1 alishaan mehel b ban jata he.
or 1 bar phir MoC hat lehrati hen or inke hat say lights nikal ke sab ke mind me ghus jati hen
MoC. mere bacho mene tum sab ke dimag me
jo jo kam tumhen krna he us ki knowledge daldi he or tumhe us ke hisab say powers b dedi hen ab warriors training shaltor me ja ke Training kre or baki sab apne kam pe lag jahen.
sab wesa hi krte hen.
MoC.. calo bacho mehel me calen
admi 2 or admi 1 or b kuch log mehel me a jate hen
MoC.. king say beta app waha samne singhasan pe betho jake.
MoC ki bat sun ke admi 1 ki jal ke rakh ho jati he .
Admi 2 .ni maa app ke hotay huwe me waha ni beth sakta.
MoC. admi 2 ki bat sunke muskura deti he
or jake singhasan pe beth jati he
or ankhee band kr ke kisi ko yad krti he
tabi samne 3 log a jate hen .
3no ek sat messangars ka salam qabool kare mother.
MoC. uth jaho mere bacho or ja ke 8 realms ke kings say kaho me ne bulaya he.
(Dosto muje pta he update chota he or kuch khas b ni he pr me abi plot set kr raha hu to maff krna
Milte hen next update me jo kl rat ko a he gi tab tak ke liye apna kyal rakh na by by
Azlan..)
Naik
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Bahot behtareen shaandaar intro bhai(Ye Kahani ek khyal plaw he is ka kisi b mazhab ya insan say koi lena dena nahi he)
Update 1.
Hamare earth ke elwa or b bohat sare planets he jin ke bare he ham insan nahi jante to chalye pehlay app ko in planets ka introduction de du.
no 1.
Argard.
yaha ke log element fighting me bohat mahir hote hen or in ki ageing b bohat slow hoti he matlab ke yaha ka amm banda b kai hazaro sal tak zinda rehsak ta he .
no 2
Midgard yani ke Earth .
yaha ke logo ke pass koi power ni he phir b kon sa esa bura kam he jo ye log ni krte
larahi jhgre
jhoot bolna
logo ki jan lena
rap
wagera wagera.
no3.
Beast island
yaha beast rehtay he matlab ke asy asy janwar jin ke bare me na kabi suna ho ga nahi kabi dekha hoga yahe pe bare say bare surma b jane say darte hen.
no4.
Jin and fairy town.
ye bohat hi khoubsurat jagha he name say to app logo ko pta chal hi gaya hoga yaha pe jin or faryes rehti hen.
no5.
World of dragon.
Dragon ke elawa or kisi ke bap me himat ni he jo yaha ja sake.
no6.
Elfs Town.
yaha elfs rehte he inke bare me mashoor he ke inki kaman say nikla teer kabi khli ni jata .
te apne elements or apne teer ka use itne kamal tariqe say krte hen ke samne wala dekh ke dang reh jata he.
no7.
Hogwarts.
yaha zada tadat me witch and wizard rehtay he. earth ko chor ke sab planets say log yaha magic and fight sikne a te he mab ke ye sab plants ka iklota school he.
no8.
Azkaban.
ye 1 jail he yaha ki dekh rekh vampire s krte hen yaha pe bure logo ko la ke rakha jata he or is jail say nikal na imposibal he.
no9.
Dark Empire.
ye bure logo ki jagha he bohat bure logo ki.
no10.
White Empire.
yaha immortals rehtay thy. yani who log jinhe sirf kisi khas cheez say mara ja sakta ho us ke ilawa un he ni mara ja sakta.
(to ye thay 10 realms . jin ka me ne intro diya or b bohat sare realms he jin ka intro waqt ke sat sat deta rahu ga .
umeed he app logo ko meri 1 update pasad i ho next update me me kuch cractors ko introduce kra hu ga to aj ke liye bs itna he ijazat den apne dost ko melte he kl 1 nahi update ke sat by by)
(MUJE PTA HE DOSTO UPDATE CHOTA HE PR ME ROZANA UPDATE DU GA PKKA.)
Naik
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Bahot behtareen shaandaar shuruwat bhai
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Mere bahi age b pic or sab kuch shaandar hi ho ga bas app logo ka sat cahiye