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Fantasy WHITE VS BLACK (CLOSED)

Zaigham Bhatti

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Update 1
(Kahani Hero ki jubani chalegi)
Hi mera naam Raj hai, aur mai kal 18 saal ka hone wala hun, isi liye behed dukhi hun kyun ki anath ashram ke rule ke hisab se mujhe parso hi anath ashram chodna padega, na mera paas paise hai na hi mere paas koi job isiliye aaj mai bahut pareshan hoke library mai betha hua tha.
Library mai bethke padhna mujhe bahut acha lagta tha, isliye mai hamesha anath ashram ke paas mai bane library mai aata jata rehta tha aur har wo kitab padhta tha jo mujhe acha lagta tha.
Jese ki apne suna ki mai anath ashram mai rehta hun to basically mai ek anath ladka hun, aur head bolte hai ki jaab mai muskil se 1 ya 2 mahine ka hounga taab hi kisi ne mujhe anath ashram ke bahar chod ke chala gaya tha, aur sath mai kuch nahi tha baas ek locket ko chod ke per aaj tak maine na hi kisine wo locket ko khola hai kyun ki wo khulta hi nahi hai, aur mujhe nahi pata ki ye locket kis chiz ka hai.
Mai hamesha har kisi ke sath hash ke, khul ke milta tha, aur mere sath bich bich mai bacho ko kayi parents aate thy aur adopt kar lete thy per mujhe koyi nahi kiya pata nahi kyun, sayad mera sakal surat unhe pasand nahi aaya, fir bhi mujhe koyi gham nahi tha.
Aur mera hasmukh nature aur sabhi se milna julna nature ke liye har koyi anath ashram mai mera dost hai to mujhe kabhi akelapan mehsus hi nahi hua. Per kal saab badle ne wala tha.
At present…..
Mai Raj har roj ki tarah aaj bhi library mai ghum raha tha aur ek acha kitab ki talash kar raha tha jisse mai padh saku. Har koyi mujhe baas ek hi naam se janta hai “KITABI KIDA”, aur mujhe bulate bhi hai iss naam se per mai sunke baas hass deta hun.
Yese hi kitab dhundte dhundte mujhe ek kitab mil jati hai, ye kitab ke upar black leather se wrapping ki gayi thy aur bilkul new bhi dikh rahi thy, per pata nahi kyun mujhe wo intresting laga isiliye maine usko utha liya, aur aake table pe beth gaya, aur kitab khulne hi wala tha ki ek bacha mere paas aagaya.
Bacha : Raj bhai, head apko bula rahe hai.
Raj : thik hai tu chal mai aaya.
Mera itna kehna tha ki wo bacha wanha se chala gaya aur mai bhi uthke wanha se wo kitab ko le liya aur wanha se anath ashram wapas aagaya. Aur wapas aate hi sidhe head ke cabin ke aur chal pada unse milne kitab ko apne room mai rakh ke.
Cabin ke bahar jake…..
Raj : may I come in head sir….
Head sir : yes yes come in Raj….
Fir ander gaya aur unke samne jake khada ho gaya, unke samne ek sakhs bethe huye thy dikhne mai yanhi koyi 40-45 saal ke lag rahe thy. To maine bhi unko hello kaha to unhone bhi mujhe hello kiya. Fir mai chup chap khada ho gaya.
Head sir : Raj inse milo ye hai Mr. Max ye TSM school se hai, aur inko tumhara koyi project acha laga to ye tumse kuch akele mai baat karna chahte hai to jake inse baat karlo.
Head ki baate sunke mujhe kuch samajh nahi aaya aur head sir ye kiss project ki baat kar rahe hai mai wanhi soch raha tha, yanhi soch ke mai head sir ko kuch jawab deta,
Max bol padte hai,
Max : Raj apse kuch bate karni hai aur aap jo project ke bare mai soch rahe hai wo 4 mahine pehle diya tha wanhi project ke bare, to kya ham baas 10 minutes baat kar sakte hai akele mai.
Mujhe kuch samajh hi nahi aaraha tha ki ye konsa project hai jab ki maine koyi project diya hi nahi kahi pe, fir bhi mai raji ho gaya pata nahi kyun unki ankho mai kuch tha jesse ki kuch jaruri baat batane wale thy mujhe,
Raj : thik hai….chaliye….
Fir mai aur Max chal dete hai wanhi anath ashram mai bane ek talab ke aur wanha aam tour pe koyi aata jata nahi tha. Wanha pahunch ne ke baad,
Raj : mister Max aap kis project ke bare mai baat kar rahe hai, aur maine to koyi TSM school ke bare mai kabhi suna bhi nahi hai.
Max : wo baate baad mai jo bataunga pehle usake upar dhyaan do aur mai jo puchunga uska jawab do….
Kuch der soch ke….
Raj : thik hai boliye….
Max : kya tumhe kabhi yesa laga tum khash ho….
Raj : nahi….
Max : mera matlab nahi samajh pa rahe ho tum kuch yesa jo tum unexpected samajh rahe ho ki wo nahi hoga fir bhi wo ho pa raha hai….aur kuch unusual jo ki sirf tum khud jante ho.
Raj : kabhi kabhi per bahut si baate hai….
Max : mujhe bata sakte ho….
Raj : thik hai,
Pehli baat mai ek kitab baas kuch hi ghante mai pura padh sakta hun each and every word ko yaad karke yesa lagta hai ki mera memory power bahut jyada strong hai.
Dusri baat jaab gussa hota hun to yesa lagta hai ki koyi chiz mere ander se bahar ana chahti hai per wo apne aap normal bhi ho jati hai.
Tisri ye baate kisiko bhi nahi bataya hai mai janwaro se baat kar sakta hun pata nahi kesse har tarah ke animal language bhi bol sakta hun.
Kabhi kabhi mere hatho se kuch saman gayab bhi ho jate hai per baad mai wo wapas bhi aajate hai. Yese bahut si baate hoti hai, per usse iska kya lena dena hai.
Max Raj ki sari baate sunke….
Max : thik hai, tumhe aaj kuch anokhi chiz mili jisse tum attract huye ho….
Raj : han ek kitab mili….
Max : thik hai ye kehke uske samne apna hath kar deta hai aur ek chota sa fire ball create kar deta hai,
Fir Raj ko dekh ke ye pata hai kya hai,
Raj ye dekh ke darne lagta hai, aur piche hatne lagta hai…..
Raj : dur raho tum mujhse….dur raho……
Max : daro nahi Raj, ye kehke fire ball withdraw kar leta hai, mai tumhe darane ke liye wo nahi dikhaya balki jo bate mai bolu usse tumhe yakin aaye issliye bataya.
Raj abhi bhi dar raha tha fir bhi himmat juta ke puch leta hai kya….
Max : mai ek wizard hun, aur mai iss duniya se nahi magical land se belong karta hun, aaj jo kitab mili hai tumhe wo koyi kitab nahi ek invitation letter hai TRIDENT SCHOOL OF MAGIC se hai. Jisme tum select huye ho aage ki padhayi ke liye jisse tum tumhara magic and weapon skill aur behetar kar sako. To mai baas tumahara jawab lene aaya hun agar han hua to tum mere sath chaloge aur na hua to mai wapas chala jaunga.
Raj Max ki baate badi hi dhyaan se sun raha hota hai, aur use shock bhi lagta hai ki ye kya hai aaj ki science ki duniya mai bhi magic mai believe karte hai wagera wagera….
Raj : aap kya kehna chahte hai…..
Max : mai ye kehna chahta hun ki tum wo school chalo aur magic sikho…..
Raj : per mere paas to koyi magic nahi hai….
Max :tum kya ho ye tum khud bhi nahi jante ho…
Raj : matlab…..
Max (mann mai) : ye mai kya bol gaya abhi sahi samay nahi aaya hai Raj saab kuch batane ka….
Max : kuch nahi Raj yanhi ki tum ek ache wizard ban sakte ho, mai tumhe force nahi karunga invitation ko ache se padh lena fir invitation ke akhir mai yes or no likhne ke liye space hai usme apna answer likh dena mujhe pata chal jayega….
Ye keh ke Wanha se gayab ho jata hai max, Raj ko shock mai chod ke….fir Raj thodi der wanhi khada rehta hai aur fir apne room ke aur chal padta hai.

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aalu

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ek anath larka jisne apne jeevan mein mile gamo ke bawjood bhi kabhi hasna nahin chhora... apne sabhi saathio ko apne mata-pita ke saath jaate dekh ke dukh toh hota lekin kabhi uska prabhaw nahin parne diya khud pe.... kitabi keeda akhir yahee toh sachhe dost hain kehne ke liye apne milansaar swabhaw se sabhi se dosti bana lee lekin wakt ke saath unme se kuchh saath chhorte gaye lekin kitab aur usme mili gyan kabhi saath nahin chhorti insan ka...

max mahashay ek anokhi duniya ke anokhe vidyalay ke pratinidhi jiske baare mein yeh anjaan tha aur shayad kabhi biswas bhi na karta agar unhone praman na diya hota... jahir hain yeh khud bhi ajeeb hain kuchh ajeeb shi shaktiyo ke saath janma jiske baare mein isne kisi se jikra na kiya.... lekin wo admi shayad kuchh ajeeb tha jo isne pehli hi baar mein apne saare raaz khol ke rakh diye...

ek school jisme jaadu sikhaya jata hain... jahir hain jaadu sunte hi sabke manmastisk mein tarange uthne lagte hain... har koi chahta hain kee kuchh aisa ho jisse uski saari pareshani door ho jaye... ek chhari ghumayee aur uski sabhi ikchhaye puri ho gayee uski saari pareshani gayab... wo jaadu kar sakega dekhte hain uska nirnay kya hota hain....

wasie bhi iss dharti pe aur iss anathalay mein uska samay ab pura hone hi wala hain toh yehan rah ke bhi usne kathinayee hi jhelni hain aur nayee jagah nayee sambhawnaye...

aapki lekhan shailli se nahin lagta kee aapne kabhi likha na hain... patro aur unki manodasha aur aaspass ke vatavaran aur log ka vivran beyhad hi umda tha....
 
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Update 1
(Kahani Hero ki jubani chalegi)
Hi mera naam Raj hai, aur mai kal 18 saal ka hone wala hun, isi liye behed dukhi hun kyun ki anath ashram ke rule ke hisab se mujhe parso hi anath ashram chodna padega, na mera paas paise hai na hi mere paas koi job isiliye aaj mai bahut pareshan hoke library mai betha hua tha.
Library mai bethke padhna mujhe bahut acha lagta tha, isliye mai hamesha anath ashram ke paas mai bane library mai aata jata rehta tha aur har wo kitab padhta tha jo mujhe acha lagta tha.
Jese ki apne suna ki mai anath ashram mai rehta hun to basically mai ek anath ladka hun, aur head bolte hai ki jaab mai muskil se 1 ya 2 mahine ka hounga taab hi kisi ne mujhe anath ashram ke bahar chod ke chala gaya tha, aur sath mai kuch nahi tha baas ek locket ko chod ke per aaj tak maine na hi kisine wo locket ko khola hai kyun ki wo khulta hi nahi hai, aur mujhe nahi pata ki ye locket kis chiz ka hai.
Mai hamesha har kisi ke sath hash ke, khul ke milta tha, aur mere sath bich bich mai bacho ko kayi parents aate thy aur adopt kar lete thy per mujhe koyi nahi kiya pata nahi kyun, sayad mera sakal surat unhe pasand nahi aaya, fir bhi mujhe koyi gham nahi tha.
Aur mera hasmukh nature aur sabhi se milna julna nature ke liye har koyi anath ashram mai mera dost hai to mujhe kabhi akelapan mehsus hi nahi hua. Per kal saab badle ne wala tha.
At present…..
Mai Raj har roj ki tarah aaj bhi library mai ghum raha tha aur ek acha kitab ki talash kar raha tha jisse mai padh saku. Har koyi mujhe baas ek hi naam se janta hai “KITABI KIDA”, aur mujhe bulate bhi hai iss naam se per mai sunke baas hass deta hun.
Yese hi kitab dhundte dhundte mujhe ek kitab mil jati hai, ye kitab ke upar black leather se wrapping ki gayi thy aur bilkul new bhi dikh rahi thy, per pata nahi kyun mujhe wo intresting laga isiliye maine usko utha liya, aur aake table pe beth gaya, aur kitab khulne hi wala tha ki ek bacha mere paas aagaya.
Bacha : Raj bhai, head apko bula rahe hai.
Raj : thik hai tu chal mai aaya.
Mera itna kehna tha ki wo bacha wanha se chala gaya aur mai bhi uthke wanha se wo kitab ko le liya aur wanha se anath ashram wapas aagaya. Aur wapas aate hi sidhe head ke cabin ke aur chal pada unse milne kitab ko apne room mai rakh ke.
Cabin ke bahar jake…..
Raj : may I come in head sir….
Head sir : yes yes come in Raj….
Fir ander gaya aur unke samne jake khada ho gaya, unke samne ek sakhs bethe huye thy dikhne mai yanhi koyi 40-45 saal ke lag rahe thy. To maine bhi unko hello kaha to unhone bhi mujhe hello kiya. Fir mai chup chap khada ho gaya.
Head sir : Raj inse milo ye hai Mr. Max ye TSM school se hai, aur inko tumhara koyi project acha laga to ye tumse kuch akele mai baat karna chahte hai to jake inse baat karlo.
Head ki baate sunke mujhe kuch samajh nahi aaya aur head sir ye kiss project ki baat kar rahe hai mai wanhi soch raha tha, yanhi soch ke mai head sir ko kuch jawab deta,
Max bol padte hai,
Max : Raj apse kuch bate karni hai aur aap jo project ke bare mai soch rahe hai wo 4 mahine pehle diya tha wanhi project ke bare, to kya ham baas 10 minutes baat kar sakte hai akele mai.
Mujhe kuch samajh hi nahi aaraha tha ki ye konsa project hai jab ki maine koyi project diya hi nahi kahi pe, fir bhi mai raji ho gaya pata nahi kyun unki ankho mai kuch tha jesse ki kuch jaruri baat batane wale thy mujhe,
Raj : thik hai….chaliye….
Fir mai aur Max chal dete hai wanhi anath ashram mai bane ek talab ke aur wanha aam tour pe koyi aata jata nahi tha. Wanha pahunch ne ke baad,
Raj : mister Max aap kis project ke bare mai baat kar rahe hai, aur maine to koyi TSM school ke bare mai kabhi suna bhi nahi hai.
Max : wo baate baad mai jo bataunga pehle usake upar dhyaan do aur mai jo puchunga uska jawab do….
Kuch der soch ke….
Raj : thik hai boliye….
Max : kya tumhe kabhi yesa laga tum khash ho….
Raj : nahi….
Max : mera matlab nahi samajh pa rahe ho tum kuch yesa jo tum unexpected samajh rahe ho ki wo nahi hoga fir bhi wo ho pa raha hai….aur kuch unusual jo ki sirf tum khud jante ho.
Raj : kabhi kabhi per bahut si baate hai….
Max : mujhe bata sakte ho….
Raj : thik hai,
Pehli baat mai ek kitab baas kuch hi ghante mai pura padh sakta hun each and every word ko yaad karke yesa lagta hai ki mera memory power bahut jyada strong hai.
Dusri baat jaab gussa hota hun to yesa lagta hai ki koyi chiz mere ander se bahar ana chahti hai per wo apne aap normal bhi ho jati hai.
Tisri ye baate kisiko bhi nahi bataya hai mai janwaro se baat kar sakta hun pata nahi kesse har tarah ke animal language bhi bol sakta hun.
Kabhi kabhi mere hatho se kuch saman gayab bhi ho jate hai per baad mai wo wapas bhi aajate hai. Yese bahut si baate hoti hai, per usse iska kya lena dena hai.
Max Raj ki sari baate sunke….
Max : thik hai, tumhe aaj kuch anokhi chiz mili jisse tum attract huye ho….
Raj : han ek kitab mili….
Max : thik hai ye kehke uske samne apna hath kar deta hai aur ek chota sa fire ball create kar deta hai,
Fir Raj ko dekh ke ye pata hai kya hai,
Raj ye dekh ke darne lagta hai, aur piche hatne lagta hai…..
Raj : dur raho tum mujhse….dur raho……
Max : daro nahi Raj, ye kehke fire ball withdraw kar leta hai, mai tumhe darane ke liye wo nahi dikhaya balki jo bate mai bolu usse tumhe yakin aaye issliye bataya.
Raj abhi bhi dar raha tha fir bhi himmat juta ke puch leta hai kya….
Max : mai ek wizard hun, aur mai iss duniya se nahi magical land se belong karta hun, aaj jo kitab mili hai tumhe wo koyi kitab nahi ek invitation letter hai TRIDENT SCHOOL OF MAGIC se hai. Jisme tum select huye ho aage ki padhayi ke liye jisse tum tumhara magic and weapon skill aur behetar kar sako. To mai baas tumahara jawab lene aaya hun agar han hua to tum mere sath chaloge aur na hua to mai wapas chala jaunga.
Raj Max ki baate badi hi dhyaan se sun raha hota hai, aur use shock bhi lagta hai ki ye kya hai aaj ki science ki duniya mai bhi magic mai believe karte hai wagera wagera….
Raj : aap kya kehna chahte hai…..
Max : mai ye kehna chahta hun ki tum wo school chalo aur magic sikho…..
Raj : per mere paas to koyi magic nahi hai….
Max :tum kya ho ye tum khud bhi nahi jante ho…
Raj : matlab…..
Max (mann mai) : ye mai kya bol gaya abhi sahi samay nahi aaya hai Raj saab kuch batane ka….
Max : kuch nahi Raj yanhi ki tum ek ache wizard ban sakte ho, mai tumhe force nahi karunga invitation ko ache se padh lena fir invitation ke akhir mai yes or no likhne ke liye space hai usme apna answer likh dena mujhe pata chal jayega….
Ye keh ke Wanha se gayab ho jata hai max, Raj ko shock mai chod ke….fir Raj thodi der wanhi khada rehta hai aur fir apne room ke aur chal padta hai.

Bhai apki story bhot achi hai
Or bina kisi glti k
Aisi story pdhkr aisa lgta hai ki bs pdhte rho
Isliye jldi jldi update dena bhai
Bs story ko complete krna. Bich me mat chhodna
 

SHADOWKILLER

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fantastic update bhai maza aa gya ab dekhte hai ki aage kya hota hai
Nayi kahani shuru kerne k liye mubarak baad
Superb Update bro
Bahot behtareen shaandaar shuruwat
Good start & amazing update
Superb update bhai story kafi interesting lag rhi hai maza ayega padh kr to ek bacche ko ek locket ke sath ek anath asram me chhod diya jata hai Vo 18 ka hone vala hai or ab use anath asram chhod kr Jane ka din aa gya hai Vo abhi library me hai use vha ek kitab milti hai jo ki real me ek invitation letter hai Raj ki khubi Bhi mast lag rhi hai jo bhi padhta hai vo sb turant memories Ho jata hai or Kabhi Kabhi kuchh chije gayab ho jati hai ek vijard Raj ke asram me aata hai or vo Raj ko sb thoda Bahut btata hai or vha se gayab ho jata hai Raj ko shock chhod kr... Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast
Excellent update
Fabulous update
Awesome start
Thank you guys.
 

SHADOWKILLER

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ek anath larka jisne apne jeevan mein mile gamo ke bawjood bhi kabhi hasna nahin chhora... apne sabhi saathio ko apne mata-pita ke saath jaate dekh ke dukh toh hota lekin kabhi uska prabhaw nahin parne diya khud pe.... kitabi keeda akhir yahee toh sachhe dost hain kehne ke liye apne milansaar swabhaw se sabhi se dosti bana lee lekin wakt ke saath unme se kuchh saath chhorte gaye lekin kitab aur usme mili gyan kabhi saath nahin chhorti insan ka...

max mahashay ek anokhi duniya ke anokhe vidyalay ke pratinidhi jiske baare mein yeh anjaan tha aur shayad kabhi biswas bhi na karta agar unhone praman na diya hota... jahir hain yeh khud bhi ajeeb hain kuchh ajeeb shi shaktiyo ke saath janma jiske baare mein isne kisi se jikra na kiya.... lekin wo admi shayad kuchh ajeeb tha jo isne pehli hi baar mein apne saare raaz khol ke rakh diye...

ek school jisme jaadu sikhaya jata hain... jahir hain jaadu sunte hi sabke manmastisk mein tarange uthne lagte hain... har koi chahta hain kee kuchh aisa ho jisse uski saari pareshani door ho jaye... ek chhari ghumayee aur uski sabhi ikchhaye puri ho gayee uski saari pareshani gayab... wo jaadu kar sakega dekhte hain uska nirnay kya hota hain....

wasie bhi iss dharti pe aur iss anathalay mein uska samay ab pura hone hi wala hain toh yehan rah ke bhi usne kathinayee hi jhelni hain aur nayee jagah nayee sambhawnaye...

aapki lekhan shailli se nahin lagta kee aapne kabhi likha na hain... patro aur unki manodasha aur aaspass ke vatavaran aur log ka vivran beyhad hi umda tha....
Thank you brother aapka ye pyaar bhara awesome review ke liye.
 
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