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Introduction

Mera Gao rudragrah hai

Dada ji - rajveer rudrayan
Gao mai bahut ijjat aur samman karte hai Gao vale

Dadi ji - sumitra rudrayan
Upar se bahut sakt hai magar dil ki bahut acchi hai

Inke teen bete aur aur ek beti hai

Dad - devvrat rudrayan ( death )
Bahut hi hosiyar aur aaklmand hai inho ne love marriage ki thi is liye ghar se nikal diya gaye

Maa - janvi rudrayan ( missing )
Dil ki bahut acchi hai sabki care karti hai inke Ghar valo ne inse rishta thod liya is liye bhag kar sadi ki

Inke ek hi beta hai

Hero - ansh rudrayan ( matlab rudra ka ansh)

Chacha - ravendra rudrayan
Ye dil ke ache hai magar biwi ke behkave me ake kaise bhi kar ke sari jaidad lena chahte hai

Chachi - shima rudrayan
Lalchi aur bahut hi ghatiya kism ke aurat hai

Inke ek beta aur ek beti hai

Atul rudrayan hero se 3 sal bada hai
Daru ladki baji yahi sab karta hai padhai me man nahi lagta chacha paise ke dam pe paas kara dete hai

Ponam rudrayan hero se 2 saal badi hai
Dil ki achi hai magar maa baap aur bhai ko dekh kar ye bhi bigad rahi hai

Chote chacha - pavan rudrayan ( death kaise vo story me aage pata chalega )

Choti Chachi - avni rudrayan
Dil ki achi hai magar hero se nafrat karne lagi hai

Inke do betiya hai

Divya rudrayan ye bhi hero se 2 saal badi hai
Ye bahut samjhdar hai aur hero ko Bahut manti hai

Kabita rudrayan ye hero se 2 saal choti hai
Ye bahut chulbuli hai aur masti karti rehti hai


bua - Rekha Varma
Teacher hai Nature se bahut acchi hai aur sabka khayal rakhti hai

fufaji - (death ek car accident me chal base )

Inki ek hi beti hai

Anjali Verma - ye hero se 3 saal badi hai aur bahut achi hai magar jabse fufaji ki maut hui tab se bahut chidchidi ho gayi hai

Dost kam bhai

Shivam Singh . Sumit Rathore

 

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[abhi09]

Update 1

Us raat baarish nahi ho rahi thi, phir bhi zameen geeli thi jaise kuch aisa hone vala ho jo nahi hona chahiye par kahte hai na jo hona hai .
Hokar hi rahega.

Ansh Rudrayan ( hero of the story. ) sirf 5 saal ka tha. Maa ki god mein sar rakh kar so raha tha. Ghar ke bahar neem ke patte hawa mein sarsara rahe the aur maa apne bete ko sote hoye dekh rahi thi —sab kuch bilkul normal.

Phir… ek awaaz.

Gate par pehla dhamaka hua.

Ansh ke pita Acharya Devvrat Rudrayan uth khade hue. Aankhon mein darr nahi tha—sirf tayyari. Unhone Ansh ko uthaya, maa ki taraf dekha.

"Bas jo ho, bachche ko zinda rakhna," unhone dheere se kaha.

Maa - dar to lag raha tha par ha me gardan hila di aur ansh ko kas kar pakad liya aur
Agli pal, ghar par attack shuru ho chuka tha.

Mask pehne aadmi- andar aya aur uske piche aur bhi mask pehne aadmi andar aye aur un sab ke hatho me Automatic rifles thi. Perfect timing. Ye chori nahi thi—yeh safaya tha.


To vahi Devvrat Rudrayan ne ek purani tijori kholi. Andar se ek lal dhaga, ek rudraksha, aur ek chhota sa kagaz nikala.

Aur maa ko diya aur hath me gun lekar gundo pe fire karne lage


Idhar "Isse kabhi alag mat hone dena," maa ne Ansh ke gale mein dhaga baandha.

Tabhi Goli chali.

Jo ansh ko lagne vali thi tabhi
Devvrat ne Ansh ko peeche se dhakka diya—

"Bhaago!"

Usi pal unke seene mein goli lagi.

Khoon ansh ke chehre par fail Gaya.

Ansh ne pehli baar khoon dekha vo bhi apne pita ka girte hue bhi unke chehre par maut ka koi dar nahi tha ha ek dukh jarur tha ki vo apni parivar ki rakcha nahi kar paye aur vahi gir pade

Ansh jaldi se apne papa ke pass gaya aur rone laga 5 saal ka baccha vo kya hi kar sakta tha

Papa kya ho gaya apko papa papa

TO vahi devvrat jo muskil se hi ankhe khol pa raha tha vo ansh se sirf itna hi bole apni maa ka khayal rakhna

Idhar Uski maa ne cheekhna chaha, par awaaz gale mein atak gayi. Padosi gharon ki lights jalne lagi. Aur Ghar bhi jal raha tha.

Kisi ne Ansh ko uthaya par vo apne papa ko chodne hi nahi chahta tha —Shivam Singh ( hero ka dost ) ke pita. Peechhe se Sumit Verma ( hero ke dost ) ke chacha cover de rahe the. Teen parivaar ek hi gali se bhage.

Aur Ansh ki maa?

Dhuein ke beech ek haath chhuta.

"Maa!" Ansh chillaya.

Par sirf aag ka jawab mila.

Fhir achanak barish shuru ho gayi jase aasman bhi ro raha ho.

Subah hui.

Police valo ne chan bhin ki to devvrat ki body mili par ansh ke maa ki nahi mili

Aur fir Devvrat Rudrayan ka antim sanskaar hua.

Maa lapata thi.

Baaki parivaar zinda the—par toot chuke.

Usi din faisla hua:

Shehar chhodna

Naam badalna

Pehchaan mita dena

Teen parivaar dusri jagah shift ho gaye.

Ansh se uska bachpan cheen liya gaya.

Par uske gale ka rudraksha aur lal dhaga zinda rahe.

Raat ko jab Ansh ne poocha:

"Papa kahan gaye?"

Jawab
sirf itna mila:

"Andhere mein."

Us din se, andhera Ansh ke andar rehne laga

Awesome start

 

[abhi09]

Update 2

NAYI PEHCHAAN, PURANA DAR

Gaadi subah ke pehle shehar chhod chuki thi.

Peechhe reh gaya tha jalta hua ghar, ek laash, aur ek lapata maa. Aage sirf ek anjaan raasta.

Ansh Rudrayan—ab sirf Ansh—khidki se baahar dekh raha tha. Uski ungliyaan apne gale ke rudraksha ko baar‑baar chhoo rahi thi, jaise agar chhod diya to sab kuch phir se toot jaayega.

Gaadi ke aage Shivam aur Sumit apne‑apne parivaar ke saath baithe the. Teen bachche, teen alag‑alag darr—par ek hi zakhm.

Kisi ne baat nahi ki.

Sirf engine ki awaaz aur mann ke andar cheekhta hua bachpan.

NAYA SHEHAR

Do din baad woh log Madhya Bharat ke ek chhote se shehar mein the—naam badla hua, pehchaan badli hui.

Rudrayan parivaar ka surname chhupa diya gaya.

Devvrat Rudrayan ki tasveer almari ke neeche band ho gayi.

Ansh ke liye duniya ab simple nahi rahi thi.

School ke pehle din jab teacher ne poocha—

"Papa kya karte hain?"

Ansh chup raha.

Shivam ne aage badhkar bol diya: "Unke papa… bahar kaam karte the."

Sumit ne Ansh ki mutthi bheench li.

Teenon ne pehli baar ek‑dusre ko samjha—yeh sirf dosti nahi, zimmedaari hai ek dusre ki har dukh dard mein sath deni ki ek dusre ki hifazat karne ki.

RAAT KA DAR

Raat ko Ansh ne phir wahi sapna dekha.

Goli. Aag. Apni maa ka haath chhootna.

Woh cheekh kar uth baitha.

Ansh - maaaa....
Uski chachi daud kar aayi. "Kuch nahi hoga, beta. Ab sab theek hai."

Par Ansh jaanta tha—

kuch bhi theek nahi hua hai.

Us raat pehli baar usne bed ke neeche se ek chhota sa patthar uthaya.

Usse kas ke pakad liya.

Agar phir koi aaya…

to woh chup nahi rahega.

Aaj uske andar kuch badal gaya.

Mahine beetne lage.

Ansh ka bolna kam ho gaya. Haasna lagbhag band.

Par jab school mein ek bada ladka Shivam ko dhakka deta—

Ansh beech mein aa jaata.

Kisi ne Sumit ke glasses tod diye—

Ansh ne us ladke ka haath aise moda ki teacher ko beech mein aana pada.

Us din principal ne kaha: "Tumhare andar bahut gussa hai."

Ansh ne sirf itna socha:

Tumhe andaza bhi nahi.

PEHLA SAWAL

Ek raat Ansh ne apni chachi se poocha:

"Meri maa kahan hai?"

Kamre mein sannata chha gaya.

"Tumhari maa…" chachi ki awaaz kaanp gayi, "shayad zinda ho."

Bas.

Itna hi kaafi tha.

Ansh ne us raat rudraksha ko pakad kar kasam nahi khai—

par ek faisla kar liya.

Main bada honga. Main sab yaad rakhunga. Aur ek‑ek ko dhoondhunga aur chun chun kar marunga

Bahaar baarish shuru ho chuki thi.

Teen chhote saaye khidki ke paas khade the—


future se anjaan, par dard se bhare hue.

Andhere ne unhe chhod diya tha…

par unhone andhere ko nahi.




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Dhanyvad

Very nice update

 

[king1969]

Badiya update

 

[ansh001]

Update 4

Jindgi badi jalim hai

Aaj mai 10 saal ka ho gaya hu jindgi vahi trening aur trening par mujhe pata nahi tha ki ek aur tufan ana abhi baki hai .


So ke utha to shivam aur sumit mere paas hi baithe the

Shivam - kitna sota hai bhai ab uth ja

Me - kyu kya hua

Sumit - abe Aaj tera janmdin hai aja gale lag ja

Me - thanks bhai

Shivam bhi aa ke gale lag gaya

Shivam - happy birthday mere yaar

Me - thanks mere bhai

Itne me shivam ki maa aur sumit khi Chachi aa gayi

S mom - uth gaya mere bete janmdin mubarak ho

Aur mujhe gale laga liya par mujhe khuch na bolta dekh meri taraf dekha
To Mera cehra aansu se bhara hua tha

S Chachi - ro kyu raha hai beta jo hona tha ho gaya par aaj din mat ro dekh tujhe dekh kar shivam aur sumit bhi ro rahe hai

Mai shivam aur sumit ko dekha to vo bhi ro rahe the aur akar mere gale lag gaye

S mom - chalo ab rona dhona band karo aur jaldi se tayar hokar niche aa jao

Aur s mom aur Chachi niche chali gayi maine bhi kudh ko sabhla aur bathroom me chala gaya nahne

Andar bathroom me Rudraksh ko pakad kar
Papa mai un kamino ko chodhoga nahi aur maa ko dhud kar laoga ye mera vada hai aap se

Itne me shivam bahar se aavaj deta hai bhai jaldi naha kar niche aa ja

Me - tu chal mai aata hu 10 minute me

Idhar niche shivam aur uske mom dad aur sumit aur sumit ke chacha chachi bathe the

S Chachi - aaj ansh ka birthday hai par vo apna birthday celebrate nahi karega

S mom - mere paas ek idia hai

S mom - sumit ke dad se sunye aap aaj in tino ko bahar le jaiye aur vahi market se ache se kapde bhi dilva dijiyega aur shida samko le aana

Shivam - kyu mom

S mom - kyuki aaj ansh ka birthday hai par vo celebrate nahi karega to tum log uske sath bahar jana tab tak ham log ghar pe sab tayiri kar lege aur usko surprise dege

Sumit - thik hai aunty

Itne me mai bhi naha kar niche aa gaya aur s dad aur s chacha ke per chu kar Aashirwad liya to dono mujhe gale laga liya

S dad - jite raho mere Sher bhagwan kare tujhe hamari bhi umar lag jaye happy birthday beta

Me - thankyou uncle par mai itna jaldi nahi maroga jab tak mai apni maa ko dhud nahi leta aur un kamino ko maar nahi deta mai nahi mar sakta

S chacha - thik hai bhai ab chalo hum aaj bahar ghumne chalege

Me - nahi uncle mera man nahi kahe jane ka mai akhada ja raha hu

S dad - nahi beta aaj ham sabhi mard bahar ghumne chalege

Me - nahi uncle mera man nahi hai

Shivam aur sumit - chal na yaar please hamare khatir tu itna bhi nahi kar sakta itni hi dosti hai

Me - tum dono mujhe blackmail kar rahe ho chao thik hai chalta hu

To dono mere gale lag gaye

ye hui na baat

Fir hum tino aur dono uncle market nikal gaye aur mujhe jabardasti naye kapde dilva diye fir hame waterpark le gaye mera man to nahi tha par apne dosto ke liye mai bhi chala gaya

Fir hum saam ko ghar lot aaye jaise hi mai ghar ke andar gaya to andar ek dam adhera tha ek dam se light aa gayi aur dono aunty mujhe gale laga kar mera matha chuma

S mom s Chachi - happy birthday beta

Me - thankyou aunty par aap to janti hai mujhe ye sab pasand nahi

S mom - ek maa apne bete ka janmdin nahi mana sakti

Me - maine ayesa kab kaha

S Chachi - to Chup chap aa aur cake kat

Me - thik hai

Fir mai candles bhujhai aur cake kat kya aur sab se pehle uncle aunty ko khilaya fir sumit aur shivam ko

Itne me bahar se aavaj aayi

Birthday celebrate ho raha hai hame bhi cake khilao bhai

Hamne darvaje ki taraf dekha to

Mask pehne aadmi Automatic rifles hath me liye andar aya aur uske sath aur bhi log the

Unhe dekhte hi mere tan badan me aag lag gayi mai us admi ki taraf daudta us pehle hi mujhe shivam aur sumit ne mujhe pakad liya

Me - chod do mujhe us admi ki taraf meri ma kaha hai

Admi - cinta mat kar bcche tujhe bhi teri maa ke pass hi le jane aaya hu

Aur usne fire kar diya toh shivam ki mom bhich me aa gayi aur unhe goli lag gayi

Shivam - maaaaaa ….

Aur mujhe chod kar apni maa ki taraf bhaga

Me - sale mai tujhe chodoga nahi

Admi - are waah kitna pyar hai bhai par kitini bar bachega tu

Aur aur fir se fire kar diya s Chachi mere age aa gayi aur unhe bhi lag gayi aur vo gir gayi
Aur usne ek aur goli chalayi to mere gale ke paas se chu kar nikal gayi aur khon nikalne laga jo mere gale se beh kar Rudraksh me me chala gaya aur ushi vakt ek tej rosni Rudraksh se nikal ne lagi aur fir me andar sama gayi jise kisi ne nahi dekha aur ushi vakt mujhe chakar aa gaya aur mai behos ho gaya aur pata nahi kaisi jagah pahuch gaya jaha adhera hi adhera tha

Idhar ye sab itna jaldi hua ki kisi ko sambhale ka moka hi nahi mila

Sumit chacha aur shivam dad age bhadhe to unko bhi pakad liya gaya

Leader - apne Admi se jao use pakad kar lao

Aur vo admi mujhe pakane aata use pehle hi mai uth kar khada ho gaya aur vo admi ruk gaya

Me - Main shaant hoon kyunki mujhe pata hai,
jab Rudra jaagta hai… toh pralay maangta nahi, laata hai.”


Mai leader ki taraf dekha to vo bhi mujhe hi dekh raha tha aur confuse ho raha tha ki kya ho rha hai

Me - to tum log mujhe marna chate ho

Leader - haa jaise tere baap ko mara vaise hi tujhe maroga

Aur apne admi se ja be khatam kar de

Aur vo admi jo mujhe pakadne aa raha tha
Vo meri taraf badhta usse pehle hi mai uske paas pahuc gaya aur uske kamar se chaku nikal kar uske gale me gusha diya aur vo admi vahi market gaya isse pehle koi kuch karta mai shidha leader ke pass pahuch gaya vo fire karta usse pehle maine uska daya hath kat diya aur fir uska dusra hath bhi kaat diya aur abhi bhi man nahi bhara to. Cakhu uske akho me ghusa diya ye itna jaldi hua ki vo samjh hi nahi aaya fir vo jhor se chillane laga
Aur mai dusro ki taraf chala gaya vo log sadme me chale gaye aur sabko cirna fadna suro kara diya sab ko khatam karne ke baad jab mai leader ke paas pahucha to

Leader - mere paas mat aana he bhagwan aaj mujhe bhacha lo

M
ai uske paas pahuc gaya aur uska gala kaat diya

Me - Tum log bhagwan ka naam lete ho…
main bhagwan ki khamoshi hoon

Aur fir mai behos ho gaya




Sorry bhai log kal update nahi de paya kuch kaam aa gya tha is liye introduction hi de paya tha Aaj update de diya hai
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Dhanyvad

 

[111ramjain]

Nice update bro