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Update 8
Dada ji ne mujhe apne pas bithaya aur gale laga liya jab mai thoda shant hua to dada ji bole
Dada ji - kya hua tha bolo
Mai - us din mai apni maa ki …………..
Aur fir ek dhamaka hua………..
Aur fir kuch log nakab ……..
Aur fir hame bachate huye …….
Aur fir maa kaa hath chot gya …..
Maine unhe har ek baat batai vo bhi dhyan se son rahe the aur last me unki akhe ek dam lal ho gayi
Ab aage
Kamre me gehri shaanti thi.
Maine jab apni poori kahani suna di, to kuch pal tak koi bhi kuch bol nahi paaya.
Jaise har shabd…
har yaad…
har khoon ki boond…
is haveli ki deewaron me ghul chuki ho.
Dada ji khidki ke paas khade the.
Bahaar Rudragrah ka aangan dikh raha tha—
purana, vishaal, aur garv se bhara hua.
Unki peeth meri taraf thi.
Unhone dheere se kaha—
Dada ji - “Devvrat ziddi tha… par kamzor kabhi nahi.”
Mai chup raha.
“Uski sabse badi galti ye nahi thi ki usne apni pasand se shaadi ki…”
Dada ji ki awaaz bhari ho gayi
“…uski galti ye thi ki usne apni jung akela ladne ka faisla kar liya.”
Wo palte.
Unki aankhen laal thi…
par gehri thi—jaise andhera.
“Aur ab tum wahi galti karne aaye ho.”
Mai seedha khada tha.
Ansh - “Mai yahan jung ladne nahi aaya hoon.”
Dada ji ki bhaunhein zara si uthi.
“To phir kyun aaye ho?”
Ansh - “Sach jaanne.” aur khud ko us kabil banane ki apne pita ka badla le saku
Kuch pal ke liye unki nazar meri aankhon par tiki rahi.
Phir
unhone apni nazar hata li
Dada ji - abhi vo sach janne ka samay nahi aaya pehle kudh ko us kabil banao tumhe ayesa banna hoga ki koi talvar tumhe kaat na sake koi Aag tumhe jala na sake koi samundar tumhe baha na sake tumhari ladai abhi tumhare pita ke Dushmao se nahi hai tumhari ladai khud se hai jis din tum khud se jit jaoge tumhe koi hara nahi payega tumhara dusman chahe kitna bhi takatvar kyu na ho agar tumne apne aap ye samajh liya ki mai isse jit jaoga ye mujhe nahi hara sakta ussi vakt tum adhi ladai jit jaoge abhi jao aur Aram karo
Dada ji ki baat sidhe mere dilo dimag me baith gayi
Dada ji ne zor se awaaz lagayi—
“Sumitra!”
Dadi ji turant andar aayi.
Unhone mujhe dekha…
aur unki aankhon me jo tha—
use shabdon me baandhna mushkil tha.
Wo mujhe nahi dekh rahi thi…
wo Devvrat ko jeeta hua dekh rahi thi.
Dada ji: “Is ladke ke liye kamra tayaar karwao.
Aaj se ye isi haveli me rahega.”
Mere seene me kuch bhari sa ho gaya.
Mai kuch bolne hi wala tha—
Dada ji (sakhti se):
“Par yaad rakhna Ansh…
Rudragrah kisi ko aasani se apna nahi maanta.”
Mai sirf itna bola—
“Aur mai aasani se tootne nahi vala.”
Unhone kuch nahi kaha.
Bas pehli baar…
sirf ek baar…
halki si santushti unke chehre par dikhi.
Fir dadi mujhe ek kamre le gayi aur Aram karne ka bol kar vo chali gayi
( To bhai log thoda haveli ka layout bata deta hu haveli ke charo taraf badi se bondri jo haveli ko cover karti hai haveli ke samne ek bada sa get hai get se andar aao to haveli ke left side me teen car gadi hai aur right side astbal bana hua hai jis do ghode badhe huye hai ek pura white hai aur ek pura black tudha andar aao to haveli ke samne kuch jamin khali padi hai jaha roj rajveer ji sabhi Gao valo ki samasya sunte hai aur fesla sunate he uske age badhe to to haveli ke andar ane ka get hai uske andar ane ke baad ek bada sa Hall hai jaha ek khana khane ki ek badi si table hai aur dusri taraf purane jamane ki kursi aur shofa rakhe hai haveli do majil ki hai niche ki majil par 8 kamre hai left side me ek me rasoighar hai ek me bhandarghar hai aur ek me pustkalay hai ek kamre rajveer aur sumitra ji rehte hai right side me ek kamre me Rekha bua rehti hai ek kamra ravendra aur shima Chachi ka hai ek kamra
Pavan aur avni Chachi ka hai aur ek kamra devvrat ka ha jo jab se vo gaye ha tab se band hi rehta hai upar vali manjil par bhi 8 hi kamre hai upar vali majil me jane ke liye hall ke bich se shidhiya hai upar jane par left side me sabse pehle Atul ka kamra hai uske bagal mein poonam ka kamra ha aur fir doctor kamre khali pade hai right side me sabse pehle Anjali ka kamra hai uske baad Divya aur kabita ka kamra hai dono ek hi room mein rehti hai uske baad ek room hai jo kabita ka hai par vo Divya ke sath rehti hai is liye khali pada hai uske baad jo room hai vo mujhe diya gaya hai mere room ke bagal se chat ke liye shidhiya hai to ye tha haveli ka layout )
Shaam ko mujhe bade hall me bulaya gaya.
Lambe khambhe,
lakdi ki purani kursiyaan,
aur beech me ek bhari sa maun.
Sab wahin the. Sab mujhe ayese ghur rahe the jaise koi alien ho sirf dadi ji ko chod kar
Dada ji sabse aage khade hue.
Dada ji - hamara beta devvrat ab is duniya me nahi raha ye sun kar kuch log dokhi the to kuch log khush the fir dada ji bole “Ye Devvrat ka beta hai.
Ansh Rudrayan.”
Bas itna.
Koi introduction nahi.
Koi explanation nahi.
Par kamre me baithi har aankh
mujhe alag-alag tareeke se dekh rahi thi.
Dadi – Sumitra Rudrayan
Wo sabse pehle aage badhi.
Unke chehre par sakhti thi,
par aankhon me…
wo darr tha jo maa sirf kho kar jaanti hai.
“Agar ye bhi mujhse chheen liya gaya to?”
ye sawaal unki aankhon me likha tha.
Unhone mere sir par haath rakha.
“Bhagwan tujhe lambi umar de.”
Unki ungliyaan kaanp rahi thi.
Chacha – Ravendra Rudrayan
Wo shaant khade the.
Bahut zyada shaant.
Unki aankhon me curiosity thi—
par usse zyada hisab.
“Devvrat ka beta…
iska matlab haveli ke hisse phir se badlenge.”
Unhone halki si muskaan di.
“Swagat hai.”
Bas ek shabd.
Par uske peeche sau soch.
Chachi – Shima Rudrayan
Unki nazar sabse tez thi.
Wo mujhe aise dekh rahi thi
jaise koi cheez jo achanak wapas aa gayi ho
aur poori planning bigaad de.
“Ye ladka yahan raha…
to mera beta kya sirf naam ka Rudrayan reh jayega?”
Unhone kuch nahi kaha.
Sirf aankhen boli.
Atul Rudrayan
Wo kursi par aise baitha tha
jaise use koi farq hi na padta ho.
Par jab uski nazar mujh par padi—
uske chehre par ek challenge tha.
“Ek aur hero banne aaya hai.”
Wo muskuraaya…
par aankhon se nahi.
Poonam Rudrayan (14)
Wo mujhe chhup-chhup kar dekh rahi thi.
Uske chehre par confusion tha.
“Ye bhai hai ya mushkil?”
Uski aankhen baar-baar apni maa ki taraf ja rahi thi.
Choti Chachi – Avni Rudrayan
Wo alag khadi thi.
Chehre par thakaan,
aur aankhon me doori.
“Is ladke ke aane se phir se purani yaadein zinda ho jayengi…”
par vo boli kuch nahi
Par unki ankho me wohi thandapan tha
jo dil ke darwaze band kar deta hai.
Divya
Wo mujhe dekh kar turant aage badhi.
Uski aankhon me sirf ek cheez thi—
apnapan.
“Ye bhai mere jaise hi lagte hain.”
“Aap sach me shehar se aaye ho?”
Uska sawal seedha dil se tha.
Kabita
Wo meri peeth ke peeche se jhaanki.
“Aap ladai kar sakte ho na?”
Sab thode hairaan hue.
Mai pehli baar halka sa muskura diya.
Bua – Rekha Varma
Wo mujhe dekh kar ruk gayi.
Unki aankhen bhar aayi.
“Bilkul Devvrat…
bilkul wahi aankhen.”
Unhone mere gaal par haath rakha.
Pita ji ye devvrat ka beta nahi ab ye mera beta hai fir mujhe gale laga liya
Anjali
Wo sirf mujhe dekh rahi thi par boli kuch nahi .
Update 8 de diya hai koi galti ho to batana bhai log abhi Naya hu to jada pata nahi hai
Read and enjoy
Dhanyvad
Dada ji ne mujhe apne pas bithaya aur gale laga liya jab mai thoda shant hua to dada ji bole
Dada ji - kya hua tha bolo
Mai - us din mai apni maa ki …………..
Aur fir ek dhamaka hua………..
Aur fir kuch log nakab ……..
Aur fir hame bachate huye …….
Aur fir maa kaa hath chot gya …..
Maine unhe har ek baat batai vo bhi dhyan se son rahe the aur last me unki akhe ek dam lal ho gayi
Ab aage
Kamre me gehri shaanti thi.
Maine jab apni poori kahani suna di, to kuch pal tak koi bhi kuch bol nahi paaya.
Jaise har shabd…
har yaad…
har khoon ki boond…
is haveli ki deewaron me ghul chuki ho.
Dada ji khidki ke paas khade the.
Bahaar Rudragrah ka aangan dikh raha tha—
purana, vishaal, aur garv se bhara hua.
Unki peeth meri taraf thi.
Unhone dheere se kaha—
Dada ji - “Devvrat ziddi tha… par kamzor kabhi nahi.”
Mai chup raha.
“Uski sabse badi galti ye nahi thi ki usne apni pasand se shaadi ki…”
Dada ji ki awaaz bhari ho gayi
“…uski galti ye thi ki usne apni jung akela ladne ka faisla kar liya.”
Wo palte.
Unki aankhen laal thi…
par gehri thi—jaise andhera.
“Aur ab tum wahi galti karne aaye ho.”
Mai seedha khada tha.
Ansh - “Mai yahan jung ladne nahi aaya hoon.”
Dada ji ki bhaunhein zara si uthi.
“To phir kyun aaye ho?”
Ansh - “Sach jaanne.” aur khud ko us kabil banane ki apne pita ka badla le saku
Kuch pal ke liye unki nazar meri aankhon par tiki rahi.
Phir
unhone apni nazar hata li
Dada ji - abhi vo sach janne ka samay nahi aaya pehle kudh ko us kabil banao tumhe ayesa banna hoga ki koi talvar tumhe kaat na sake koi Aag tumhe jala na sake koi samundar tumhe baha na sake tumhari ladai abhi tumhare pita ke Dushmao se nahi hai tumhari ladai khud se hai jis din tum khud se jit jaoge tumhe koi hara nahi payega tumhara dusman chahe kitna bhi takatvar kyu na ho agar tumne apne aap ye samajh liya ki mai isse jit jaoga ye mujhe nahi hara sakta ussi vakt tum adhi ladai jit jaoge abhi jao aur Aram karo
Dada ji ki baat sidhe mere dilo dimag me baith gayi
Dada ji ne zor se awaaz lagayi—
“Sumitra!”
Dadi ji turant andar aayi.
Unhone mujhe dekha…
aur unki aankhon me jo tha—
use shabdon me baandhna mushkil tha.
Wo mujhe nahi dekh rahi thi…
wo Devvrat ko jeeta hua dekh rahi thi.
Dada ji: “Is ladke ke liye kamra tayaar karwao.
Aaj se ye isi haveli me rahega.”
Mere seene me kuch bhari sa ho gaya.
Mai kuch bolne hi wala tha—
Dada ji (sakhti se):
“Par yaad rakhna Ansh…
Rudragrah kisi ko aasani se apna nahi maanta.”
Mai sirf itna bola—
“Aur mai aasani se tootne nahi vala.”
Unhone kuch nahi kaha.
Bas pehli baar…
sirf ek baar…
halki si santushti unke chehre par dikhi.
Fir dadi mujhe ek kamre le gayi aur Aram karne ka bol kar vo chali gayi
( To bhai log thoda haveli ka layout bata deta hu haveli ke charo taraf badi se bondri jo haveli ko cover karti hai haveli ke samne ek bada sa get hai get se andar aao to haveli ke left side me teen car gadi hai aur right side astbal bana hua hai jis do ghode badhe huye hai ek pura white hai aur ek pura black tudha andar aao to haveli ke samne kuch jamin khali padi hai jaha roj rajveer ji sabhi Gao valo ki samasya sunte hai aur fesla sunate he uske age badhe to to haveli ke andar ane ka get hai uske andar ane ke baad ek bada sa Hall hai jaha ek khana khane ki ek badi si table hai aur dusri taraf purane jamane ki kursi aur shofa rakhe hai haveli do majil ki hai niche ki majil par 8 kamre hai left side me ek me rasoighar hai ek me bhandarghar hai aur ek me pustkalay hai ek kamre rajveer aur sumitra ji rehte hai right side me ek kamre me Rekha bua rehti hai ek kamra ravendra aur shima Chachi ka hai ek kamra
Pavan aur avni Chachi ka hai aur ek kamra devvrat ka ha jo jab se vo gaye ha tab se band hi rehta hai upar vali manjil par bhi 8 hi kamre hai upar vali majil me jane ke liye hall ke bich se shidhiya hai upar jane par left side me sabse pehle Atul ka kamra hai uske bagal mein poonam ka kamra ha aur fir doctor kamre khali pade hai right side me sabse pehle Anjali ka kamra hai uske baad Divya aur kabita ka kamra hai dono ek hi room mein rehti hai uske baad ek room hai jo kabita ka hai par vo Divya ke sath rehti hai is liye khali pada hai uske baad jo room hai vo mujhe diya gaya hai mere room ke bagal se chat ke liye shidhiya hai to ye tha haveli ka layout )
Shaam ko mujhe bade hall me bulaya gaya.
Lambe khambhe,
lakdi ki purani kursiyaan,
aur beech me ek bhari sa maun.
Sab wahin the. Sab mujhe ayese ghur rahe the jaise koi alien ho sirf dadi ji ko chod kar
Dada ji sabse aage khade hue.
Dada ji - hamara beta devvrat ab is duniya me nahi raha ye sun kar kuch log dokhi the to kuch log khush the fir dada ji bole “Ye Devvrat ka beta hai.
Ansh Rudrayan.”
Bas itna.
Koi introduction nahi.
Koi explanation nahi.
Par kamre me baithi har aankh
mujhe alag-alag tareeke se dekh rahi thi.
Dadi – Sumitra Rudrayan
Wo sabse pehle aage badhi.
Unke chehre par sakhti thi,
par aankhon me…
wo darr tha jo maa sirf kho kar jaanti hai.
“Agar ye bhi mujhse chheen liya gaya to?”
ye sawaal unki aankhon me likha tha.
Unhone mere sir par haath rakha.
“Bhagwan tujhe lambi umar de.”
Unki ungliyaan kaanp rahi thi.
Chacha – Ravendra Rudrayan
Wo shaant khade the.
Bahut zyada shaant.
Unki aankhon me curiosity thi—
par usse zyada hisab.
“Devvrat ka beta…
iska matlab haveli ke hisse phir se badlenge.”
Unhone halki si muskaan di.
“Swagat hai.”
Bas ek shabd.
Par uske peeche sau soch.
Chachi – Shima Rudrayan
Unki nazar sabse tez thi.
Wo mujhe aise dekh rahi thi
jaise koi cheez jo achanak wapas aa gayi ho
aur poori planning bigaad de.
“Ye ladka yahan raha…
to mera beta kya sirf naam ka Rudrayan reh jayega?”
Unhone kuch nahi kaha.
Sirf aankhen boli.
Atul Rudrayan
Wo kursi par aise baitha tha
jaise use koi farq hi na padta ho.
Par jab uski nazar mujh par padi—
uske chehre par ek challenge tha.
“Ek aur hero banne aaya hai.”
Wo muskuraaya…
par aankhon se nahi.
Poonam Rudrayan (14)
Wo mujhe chhup-chhup kar dekh rahi thi.
Uske chehre par confusion tha.
“Ye bhai hai ya mushkil?”
Uski aankhen baar-baar apni maa ki taraf ja rahi thi.
Choti Chachi – Avni Rudrayan
Wo alag khadi thi.
Chehre par thakaan,
aur aankhon me doori.
“Is ladke ke aane se phir se purani yaadein zinda ho jayengi…”
par vo boli kuch nahi
Par unki ankho me wohi thandapan tha
jo dil ke darwaze band kar deta hai.
Divya
Wo mujhe dekh kar turant aage badhi.
Uski aankhon me sirf ek cheez thi—
apnapan.
“Ye bhai mere jaise hi lagte hain.”
“Aap sach me shehar se aaye ho?”
Uska sawal seedha dil se tha.
Kabita
Wo meri peeth ke peeche se jhaanki.
“Aap ladai kar sakte ho na?”
Sab thode hairaan hue.
Mai pehli baar halka sa muskura diya.
Bua – Rekha Varma
Wo mujhe dekh kar ruk gayi.
Unki aankhen bhar aayi.
“Bilkul Devvrat…
bilkul wahi aankhen.”
Unhone mere gaal par haath rakha.
Pita ji ye devvrat ka beta nahi ab ye mera beta hai fir mujhe gale laga liya
Anjali
Wo sirf mujhe dekh rahi thi par boli kuch nahi .
Update 8 de diya hai koi galti ho to batana bhai log abhi Naya hu to jada pata nahi hai
Read and enjoy
Dhanyvad
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Yaar 2 chachiya aur 1 bua aur unki betiya. Mtlv sex ke liye pryapt material jama hai. Chudai ka shri Ganesh bua ji se ho to maja aaye. Fir avni chachi aur bad me Seema se. Aur fir unki betiya taki parivarik samaroh me maja aata hai. Aur ager sagi maa behene ho to aur maja aata hai.
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Thanks bro
Tq bhai
Dhanyvad miss
Dekhte hai bhai story me aage kya hota hai sath bane rahe
Dhanyvad
Tq bro
Aise hi sath bane rahe aaj ek aur update ayega
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Update 9
Kabita
Wo meri peeth ke peeche se jhaanki.
“Aap ladai kar sakte ho na?”
Sab thode hairaan hue.
Mai pehli baar halka sa muskura diya.
Bua – Rekha Varma
Wo mujhe dekh kar ruk gayi.
Unki aankhen bhar aayi.
“Bilkul Devvrat…
bilkul wahi aankhen.”
Unhone mere gaal par haath rakha.
Pita ji ye devvrat ka beta nahi ab ye mera beta hai fir mujhe gale laga liya
Anjali
Wo sirf mujhe dekh rahi thi par boli kuch nahi .
Ab aage
Fir mai sab se mila aur Aashirwad liya dadi ne sab bataya ki ye chachi hai ye bua hai ye tere behen bhai hai mai sab se mila aur
Mai bas sab ke how Bhau dekh raha tha jaha kuch log mere ane se kush the to kuch logo ka mera aana acha nahi laga par mere ye samajh me nahi aya ki kyu mai to unka apna hu na mai sabhi ko dekh hi Raha tha ki meri najar dada ji par gayi vo mejhe hi dekh rahe the fir mere ane ki kushi me dada ji ne kaha ki kal ek bhoj aur puja rakhne ka vichar hai to sab ne ha kardi kyuki ek baar jo dada ji keh diya vo sab maan lete hai fir sab log apne kamo me lag gaye chachi log khana banane chali gayi dada ji chacha bhi bahar chale gaye Atul aur ponam apne room me chale gaye dadi mujhe le kar apne room me aa gayi unke piche bua aur Divya kabita bhi aa gayi dadi mujhe lad pyar karne lagi kabhi vo mera matha chomti to kabhi pyar se mere balo me hath firati vo mujhese mere maa aur papa ke bare me puchti ab mujhe jada to pata nahi tha kyuki me us vakt sirf 5 saal ka tha to jitna pata tha vo batata gaya aur fir bua aur dadi ka rona shoro ho gaya aur aaj apno ka sath pa kar mujhe se bhi ruka na gaya aur mere bhi aansu nikal aye fir mai vaha se apne room ki taraf aa gaya room bhai mast tha room me daily use ki sab chije thi attach bathroom bhi tha to mai fresh hua aur abhi leta to Alice ki aavaj aayi
Alice - kaisa laga master pariwar ka pyaar pa kar
Mai - bahut accha laga Alice mujhe to pata hi nahi tha ki parivaar kya hota hai par yaha aa kar jaise ek sukoon sa milta hai par kuch logo ko mera ana acha nahi laga
Alice - ha master ye baat mere bhi samjh me nahi ayi
Mai - hmm
Tabhi kisi ne darvaje pe nok kiya maine ja kar darvaja khola to Divya aur kabita kadhi thi
Divya - kya ham andar aa sakte hai bhai
Mai - haa aao na aap dono
Vo dono aa gayi aur bed pe baith gayi
Mai - kuch kaam tha kya aap dono ko
Divya - kyu kya ham tumhare pass kaam se hi aa sakte hai
Mai - nahi nahi aap log kabhi bhi aa sakte ho
Mai abhi khada tha to kabita boli
Kabita - baitha jao bhaiya aap ka hi room hai
mai bas chup chap baitha tha samjh nahi aa raha tha ki kya baat ki jaye un dono ka bhi yahi haal tha fir Divya didi boli
Divya - acha ye bata ansh tera kabhi Maan nahi hua ham logo ke pass aane ka
Mai - mujhe to pata hi nahi tha didi ki maa papa ke alawa bhi meri koi femly hai vo to abhi kuch din pehle pata chala pehle pata hota to mai kab ka aa jata
Kabita - jante ho ansh bhaiya Atul bhaiya to sirf naam ke bhaiya hai vo hamse pyar nahi karte vo sirf ponam didi ko pyar karte hai vo bahut gande hai mai bhagwan se prarthna karti thi ki hame ache bhaiya bejh do to dekho bhagwan ne aapko bejh diya uski ankho se anshu beh nikle jise dekh kar mere andar ek halchal si Hui meine usko gale laga liya aur ek taraf se Divya didi bhi mere gale lag gayi tabhi
“ Ye kya ho raha hai “
Ham alag huye dekh darvaje pe avni Chachi kadhi thi vo ek dam gusse me thi vo ek dam se ayi aur
“ Chatak kar ke ek thappad pada mere gale pe “
Mai ek dam heran pareshan fir ek ek thappad pada Divya aur kabita ko
Avni - maine tum dono ko mana kiya tha na iske pass ane ko
Divya - vo vo vo maa ham bas
Avni - chup karo tum dono aur tum meri taraf dekh kar meri betiyo se dur raho mai apne pati ko to kho chuki ho ab apni betiyo ko nahi ko sakti
Mujhe samajh hi nahi aaya ye ho kya raha hai fir vo dono ko le kar chali gayi
Aur mai abhi soch soch ke mara ja raha hu ki mai to abhi is ghar me aya hu to maine kya kar diya kaise sochte sochte me so gaya
Fir bua ke uthane se meri nind khuli
Bua - bua uth ja beta 9 baj gaye chal khana kha le pita ji bula rahe hai
Mai - pata nahi bua kaise ankh lag gayi aap chao mai aata hu
Bua - jaldi ana
Aur bua chali gayi mai bhi fresh hua aur niche aa gaya khane ki mej par bhich vali kurchi par dada ji baite the ek taraf ravendra chacha baithe the unke baad Atul aur ponam aur dusri taraf dada ji ke bagal me ek kursi khali thi to dada ji ne mujhe bulya aur ushi kursi par baithne ko kaha mere bagal me Anjali fir Divya aur fir kabita baite the fir chachi log khana parusne lagi avni Chachi ko dekh kar mujhe unka jhannte daar thappad yaad aa gaya unho mujhe ek bar dekha fir khana parosne lagi sab chup chap khana ka rahe the Divya aur kabita chupke chupke mujhe dekh rahi maine unki taraf dekha to dono ne apni sir niche kar liya sab kha khana hone ke baad jab mai uthne laga to dada ji ne mujhe apne kamre me ane ka bool diya to mai bhi unke piche piche unke kamre me aa gaya fir meri dada ji se kuch bate huyi fir mai apne kamre me aa gaya room leta mai soch raha tha ki aage kya kiya jaye aur sochte sochte nind aa gayi ki kuch der baad mujhe laga koi mera darvaja khatkhata raha hai ghadi me time deka to 11 : 30 ho rahe the maine socha itni raat ko kon
hoga fir soch chalo dekhte hai kon hai aur maine ja ke darvaja khola to samne …..
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Dhanyvad
Kabita
Wo meri peeth ke peeche se jhaanki.
“Aap ladai kar sakte ho na?”
Sab thode hairaan hue.
Mai pehli baar halka sa muskura diya.
Bua – Rekha Varma
Wo mujhe dekh kar ruk gayi.
Unki aankhen bhar aayi.
“Bilkul Devvrat…
bilkul wahi aankhen.”
Unhone mere gaal par haath rakha.
Pita ji ye devvrat ka beta nahi ab ye mera beta hai fir mujhe gale laga liya
Anjali
Wo sirf mujhe dekh rahi thi par boli kuch nahi .
Ab aage
Fir mai sab se mila aur Aashirwad liya dadi ne sab bataya ki ye chachi hai ye bua hai ye tere behen bhai hai mai sab se mila aur
Mai bas sab ke how Bhau dekh raha tha jaha kuch log mere ane se kush the to kuch logo ka mera aana acha nahi laga par mere ye samajh me nahi aya ki kyu mai to unka apna hu na mai sabhi ko dekh hi Raha tha ki meri najar dada ji par gayi vo mejhe hi dekh rahe the fir mere ane ki kushi me dada ji ne kaha ki kal ek bhoj aur puja rakhne ka vichar hai to sab ne ha kardi kyuki ek baar jo dada ji keh diya vo sab maan lete hai fir sab log apne kamo me lag gaye chachi log khana banane chali gayi dada ji chacha bhi bahar chale gaye Atul aur ponam apne room me chale gaye dadi mujhe le kar apne room me aa gayi unke piche bua aur Divya kabita bhi aa gayi dadi mujhe lad pyar karne lagi kabhi vo mera matha chomti to kabhi pyar se mere balo me hath firati vo mujhese mere maa aur papa ke bare me puchti ab mujhe jada to pata nahi tha kyuki me us vakt sirf 5 saal ka tha to jitna pata tha vo batata gaya aur fir bua aur dadi ka rona shoro ho gaya aur aaj apno ka sath pa kar mujhe se bhi ruka na gaya aur mere bhi aansu nikal aye fir mai vaha se apne room ki taraf aa gaya room bhai mast tha room me daily use ki sab chije thi attach bathroom bhi tha to mai fresh hua aur abhi leta to Alice ki aavaj aayi
Alice - kaisa laga master pariwar ka pyaar pa kar
Mai - bahut accha laga Alice mujhe to pata hi nahi tha ki parivaar kya hota hai par yaha aa kar jaise ek sukoon sa milta hai par kuch logo ko mera ana acha nahi laga
Alice - ha master ye baat mere bhi samjh me nahi ayi
Mai - hmm
Tabhi kisi ne darvaje pe nok kiya maine ja kar darvaja khola to Divya aur kabita kadhi thi
Divya - kya ham andar aa sakte hai bhai
Mai - haa aao na aap dono
Vo dono aa gayi aur bed pe baith gayi
Mai - kuch kaam tha kya aap dono ko
Divya - kyu kya ham tumhare pass kaam se hi aa sakte hai
Mai - nahi nahi aap log kabhi bhi aa sakte ho
Mai abhi khada tha to kabita boli
Kabita - baitha jao bhaiya aap ka hi room hai
mai bas chup chap baitha tha samjh nahi aa raha tha ki kya baat ki jaye un dono ka bhi yahi haal tha fir Divya didi boli
Divya - acha ye bata ansh tera kabhi Maan nahi hua ham logo ke pass aane ka
Mai - mujhe to pata hi nahi tha didi ki maa papa ke alawa bhi meri koi femly hai vo to abhi kuch din pehle pata chala pehle pata hota to mai kab ka aa jata
Kabita - jante ho ansh bhaiya Atul bhaiya to sirf naam ke bhaiya hai vo hamse pyar nahi karte vo sirf ponam didi ko pyar karte hai vo bahut gande hai mai bhagwan se prarthna karti thi ki hame ache bhaiya bejh do to dekho bhagwan ne aapko bejh diya uski ankho se anshu beh nikle jise dekh kar mere andar ek halchal si Hui meine usko gale laga liya aur ek taraf se Divya didi bhi mere gale lag gayi tabhi
“ Ye kya ho raha hai “
Ham alag huye dekh darvaje pe avni Chachi kadhi thi vo ek dam gusse me thi vo ek dam se ayi aur
“ Chatak kar ke ek thappad pada mere gale pe “
Mai ek dam heran pareshan fir ek ek thappad pada Divya aur kabita ko
Avni - maine tum dono ko mana kiya tha na iske pass ane ko
Divya - vo vo vo maa ham bas
Avni - chup karo tum dono aur tum meri taraf dekh kar meri betiyo se dur raho mai apne pati ko to kho chuki ho ab apni betiyo ko nahi ko sakti
Mujhe samajh hi nahi aaya ye ho kya raha hai fir vo dono ko le kar chali gayi
Aur mai abhi soch soch ke mara ja raha hu ki mai to abhi is ghar me aya hu to maine kya kar diya kaise sochte sochte me so gaya
Fir bua ke uthane se meri nind khuli
Bua - bua uth ja beta 9 baj gaye chal khana kha le pita ji bula rahe hai
Mai - pata nahi bua kaise ankh lag gayi aap chao mai aata hu
Bua - jaldi ana
Aur bua chali gayi mai bhi fresh hua aur niche aa gaya khane ki mej par bhich vali kurchi par dada ji baite the ek taraf ravendra chacha baithe the unke baad Atul aur ponam aur dusri taraf dada ji ke bagal me ek kursi khali thi to dada ji ne mujhe bulya aur ushi kursi par baithne ko kaha mere bagal me Anjali fir Divya aur fir kabita baite the fir chachi log khana parusne lagi avni Chachi ko dekh kar mujhe unka jhannte daar thappad yaad aa gaya unho mujhe ek bar dekha fir khana parosne lagi sab chup chap khana ka rahe the Divya aur kabita chupke chupke mujhe dekh rahi maine unki taraf dekha to dono ne apni sir niche kar liya sab kha khana hone ke baad jab mai uthne laga to dada ji ne mujhe apne kamre me ane ka bool diya to mai bhi unke piche piche unke kamre me aa gaya fir meri dada ji se kuch bate huyi fir mai apne kamre me aa gaya room leta mai soch raha tha ki aage kya kiya jaye aur sochte sochte nind aa gayi ki kuch der baad mujhe laga koi mera darvaja khatkhata raha hai ghadi me time deka to 11 : 30 ho rahe the maine socha itni raat ko kon
hoga fir soch chalo dekhte hai kon hai aur maine ja ke darvaja khola to samne …..
Bhai log yaha se story thodi slow chalegi
Read and enjoy
Dhanyvad
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