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kahani ko bhi to aage badhao............ya to update me chudai ke alawa bhi koi incident dikhao...............ya update jaldi do
sare update mein.........chudai aur uske bare mein ajit ki faaltu commentary ........agar sex ka itna gyan apni biwi par istemal karta to.........wo randi ki tarah din rat ghar me nangi padi rahul se na chudti
jyada description wo bhi ghisi piti ajit ki.............isse update bada ho jata hai lekin.............utna hi boring
aise hi lagatar unhi 2 rahul-manali ki ek jaisi chudai.....bar-bar .........itne details ke sath padhke......boring lagne lagi hai...............
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think about it
I can understand what you are trying to say..... Main Story ko khamakha (unnecessary) lengthy ya bada karna nehi chahti.... But mai detailing pe jyada focus karti hun, uss wajah se shayad mera story unintentionally thode lengthy ho jaati hain..
Main kahaani ko aage bhi badana chahti hun, aur update bhi jaldi dena chahti hun.... pad jahan jahan sexual scenes dekhana jaroori hain wahan toh thodi describe karna jaroori rehete hain naa?? Afterall at the end of the day, it is a Sex Story..... So, Sex bina sex story kaise likhe jaa sakti hain? Aap hi batayea.....
AJit ke pass sex ka gyaan (knowledge) jaroor hain, pad uss knowledge ko execute karne ke kshamta (strength) Ajit mei nehi hain.. Kehte hain naa, knowledge bina practical experience, koi kaam nehi aati.. Theoretical knowledge ke saath saath Practical Knowledge bhi rehena jaroori hoti hain.... right??
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Aab Rahul ka tan-mann itna pyaasa hain, uss ke ander itna aag? bhada hua hain, toh wo Manali ko itni asaani se chhorega toh nehi, that's why story mei aab tak qaafi sexual scenes dekhaya gaya hain.... I hope you understand...... ??