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Whi to leon 32 bhai itne din Bad pti aaya pr manali usse gussa hai kyuki sex pura nhi ho paya aur abhi bhi lekhika mahodaya bolengi ki manali ajit se pyar krti hai.ab me surety se keh sakta hu ki ajit ko manali se alag hona chahiye..itne din rahul ke saath mooh kaala kiya wo alag baat hai par pati itne din baad ghar aaya usse pyar se baat na karna aur gussa dikhana
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gusse ki wajah to kuch rahi hi nahi ab..
aur jarur dono bedroom me sex kar rahe honge...
ab itna hone ke baad lagta hai ki manali ajit se pyar karti hai ?? wo bas rahul ke saath sex karne ke maje lena chahti hai ,ajit ki usko koi parwah nahi warna kamse kam pati ghar aaye to usko paani ka to poochh hi sakti thi manali ..
manali ji agar aap ise update kahti hain..............to mujhe apke writer hone par shaq hai................UPDATE 49 -- I Came Back, But Manali is Not Happy!! Why??
Naha dho kar maine bag pack kiya aur jaldi se ready hua. Hotel se check-out karne bag lekar neeche hotel lounge mein pohuncha. Check out processing aur phir raste mein thoda traffic jam ke wajah se ghar aate aate 8:30 PM baaj gaye. Ghar ke darwaze (Main Door / Entrance Door of My Flat) pe aake maine ghar ka calling bell baajaya...... "ting.. ting.."
The Door From The Outsider View.....
That Door From The Insider View
Mai calling bell baja kar wait karne laga...........⏲
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Mai calling bell baja ke wait kar raha tha. Pad darwaza khol ne mei thodi deri hue......![]()
Mai wait kiye jaa raha tha pad ander se koi response nehi aa raha tha.Phir maine ek-do baar aor calling bell bajaya. Kuch der baad Manali darwaza khuli. Dekh kar lag raha tha Manali bohut unprepared and uncomfortable situation mei pad gayi the mere achyanak ghar aane se. Pad kyun,, wahein mujhe janna tha....
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Honey Demon As Manali
Manali Brown colour ke top aur grey coloured ladies bermuda pahene hue the. Pad mere kalpana (imaginations), mere inner ya third eye usse (Manali ko) parsu raat ke saree-blouse ki sexy saaj mein dhoond raha tha.Manali ko dekh kar pata nehi kyun mujhe parsu raat yani Saturday Night (check Update 44) ke baat yaad aane laga tha.
"MaNaLi" cum Model in Saree
Darwaza khol ne ke baad maine Manali se poocha, "itni der kyun hue darwaza khol ne mein?"
Manali mujhe dekh kar aise chonkhi (surprised) ki jaise laga usne koi bhoot dekh liya ho!!![]()
"Kyun; chonk gaye naa??"
Maine kahan, "kya hua, Manali? tum aise chonk kyun gaye??"
Manali: Tum toh kal aane wale the naa?
Me: Haan pad, kaam bohut jald khatam ho gaya, aur phir kolkata ke flight bhi luckily turant mil gaya, so bass main haazir ho gaya. Waise sare baatein darwaze pad hi karoge ya mujhe ander bhi aane doge?
Manali thodi peeche hokar mere liye jagah banayi ghar ke ander aane ke liye. Main ander aaya, Manali ne darwaza bandh kiye. Manali jab Main Door (mukkhya darwaza) bandh kar rehi the tab mai (I / me) dining room ke thode ander aa gaya tha, aur achyanak tabhi mere nazare mere bedroom ke aor pade..... Maine dekha ya keh sakte hain notice kiya ki tabhi RahuL mere room se fauran nikal ke apne room mein chala gaya!!![]()
Maine socha, wo kaamina (RahuL) mere room mein kya kar raha tha abhi?By the way, Pramod Kaka bhi kahan hain??
Yeh sare saawal (questions) mere dimaag mein ghumne lag gaya..
Mujhe yeh thoda suspicious activity laga.
Mere naak (nose
) ko kisi rahassya (mystery) ke buh (smell / odor/ odour) aane lag gaya tha.
Isliye maine wapas mud kar Manali ki taraf dekh ke phirse poocha Manali se, "kya hua Manali, tumne bataya nehi kyun deri hue tumhe darwaza kholne mein?"
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Manali mujhe gusse se dekhe.Usne koi jawab nehi diye. Wo thoda mujhpe ghussa the, yeh uski face dekh kar hi pata chal raha tha, pad gusse ka kaaran (reason) exactly kya tha yeh mujhe bilkul bhi samajh mei nehi aa raha tha.
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Itne dino tak baahar reh kar koi phone naa karna, aur itne din baad (6 din baad; from Tuesday Night to Monday Night) mera ghar lautne se kya wo ruthi the yaa wajah kuch aor hi tha??Matlab mera ghar der lautna (after 6 days) ya bataya hua samay se pahele lautna (I mean Rahul ko maine phone par kahan jo tha ki mai iss hafte ke Tuesday ko lautunga, pad mai lauta Monday night ko), kya tha aankhir iss gusse ka kaaran??
Ek taraf dekha jaaye toh mai ghar der se hi lauta tha, kyunki mai Tuesday night ko Mumbai ke liye rawaana hua tha, aur mai lauta 6 din baad, itna din ghar se baahar hi raha mai.. toh iss hisaab se mujhe ghar lautne mei bohut der hi hua tha.. Halaki Mumbai se mai do din pahele hi laut chuka tha, Saturday Night ko.. Baaki ke do din (Saturday Night to Monday Night) mai kahan tha, kyun tha aur kya kiya yeh sab phirse repeat karne ke koi jaroorat nehi hain..
Doosri taraf agar dekha jaye toh mai Rahul ko kahan tha ki mai kal yani iss hafte ke Tuesday ko lautunga, pad mai aaya Monday ko hi, raat mei.. toh iss hisaab se mai thoda jaldi hi aaya ghar mei..
Toh phir mere deri, ya mera jaldi lautna, kaun si wajah the Manali ki ruth ne ke??Main ek puzzle mein pad gaya tha Manali ki ajeebo garib aise mood dekh kar.
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Khair Manali darwaza bandh karke, mere sawal (question) ka koi jawab naa dekar mere se peeche mud gayi aur shayad kitchen ke aor jaane lagi. Shayad uske pass tab dene wali koi thos jawab (concrete answer) the hi nehi..![]()
Uska aise reaction aur behavior dekh kar main tajjub/ haeraan rahe gaya!!Main sochne laga, ki maine aisa kya kar diya jo ghar mei aate hi Manali itni gussa ho gayi hain mujh pe. Kya main samay (schedule time -- Tomorrow : Tuesday) se pahele ghar laut kar bohut badi galati kar diya?? Aisa karke, surprise visit dekar kya main kisi ke rang mein bhang daal diya??
Yeh toh mujhe baad mein find out karna hoga, karna hi hoga.
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Kyunki laptop off karne ke baad main hotel mein nahaya, phir bag jamaya (pack kiya), phir hotel se check-out kiya, taxi pakad kar aate hue jam (traffice jam) mein phasa; iss beech kya kuch aisa ghata tha jo main miss kar gaya tha!!??...Yeh toh baad mein pata chal hi jayega (through my security cams).
Pad Rahul ka mere room se nikalna, Pramod Kaka ka ghar mein koi aata pata naa rehna, Manali ki aise mujhe (mere savaalo ka) koi jawab naa diye chale jaana, yeh sab mere dimaag ka equilibrium hila chuka tha.![]()
Manali kya kitchen mein apna 'muh chhupane' ke liye gayi? Itne der tak kya wo Rahul ke sath apne room mein hi tha??Pata toh karna hi padega, pad pahele Pramod Kaka ko toh dhoond lu.
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Main dining hall mein waise ka waise hi khada tha. Lag raha tha khud ke ghar mein nehi kisi aor ke ghar mein bin bulaye mehmaan ke tarah aa gaya hu.Koi mujhe poochne ke liye bhi nehi aa raha tha, naa Manali, aur naa hi Rahul.
Mujhe kuch samajh mein nehi aa raha tha. Pramod kaka bhi kahan hain, pata nehi chal raha tha.Abhi tak maine unhe dekha bhi nehi tha. Sirf Rahul ka ek jhalak dekha tha, jab wo jaldi se (surreptitiously) mere room se nikal kar apne room mein gaya; pad wo jitna bhi jaldi hi 'escape' karne ke kosish kyun naa kare lekin aankhir kar wo mere nazro ko dhoka nehi de paya tha
, yeh cheez shayad usse (Rahul) bhi nehi paata tha, shayad kyun keh raha hun, usse bilkul bhi yeh pata nehi tha ki maine uska 'chori' pakad liya tha.
Anyway, kya Pramod Kaka kahi gaye hain? Aur phir issi pal ka phaida (advantage) Rahul ne Manali par uthaya toh nehi hain!!Ohhh, shit!!!!
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Itne dino tak baahar reh kar koi phone naa karna, aur itne din baad (6 din baad; from Tuesday Night to Monday Night) mera ghar lautne se kya wo ruthi the yaa wajah kuch aor hi tha??Matlab mera ghar der lautna (after 6 days) ya bataya hua samay se pahele lautna (I mean Rahul ko maine phone par kahan jo tha ki mai iss hafte ke Tuesday ko lautunga, pad mai lauta Monday night ko), kya tha aankhir iss gusse ka kaaran??
Ek taraf dekha jaaye toh mai ghar der se hi lauta tha, kyunki mai Tuesday night ko Mumbai ke liye rawaana hua tha, aur mai lauta 6 din baad, itna din ghar se baahar hi raha mai.. toh iss hisaab se mujhe ghar lautne mei bohut der hi hua tha.. Halaki Mumbai se mai do din pahele hi laut chuka tha, Saturday Night ko.. Baaki ke do din (Saturday Night to Monday Night) mai kahan tha, kyun tha aur kya kiya yeh sab phirse repeat karne ke koi jaroorat nehi hain..
Doosri taraf agar dekha jaye toh mai Rahul ko kahan tha ki mai kal yani iss hafte ke Tuesday ko lautunga, pad mai aaya Monday ko hi, raat mei.. toh iss hisaab se mai thoda jaldi hi aaya ghar mei..
Toh phir mere deri, ya mera jaldi lautna, kaun si wajah the Manali ki ruth ne ke??Main ek puzzle mein pad gaya tha Manali ki ajeebo garib aise mood dekh kar.
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ab me surety se keh sakta hu ki ajit ko manali se alag hona chahiye..itne din rahul ke saath mooh kaala kiya wo alag baat hai par pati itne din baad ghar aaya usse pyar se baat na karna aur gussa dikhana
..
gusse ki wajah to kuch rahi hi nahi ab..
aur jarur dono bedroom me sex kar rahe honge...
ab itna hone ke baad lagta hai ki manali ajit se pyar karti hai ?? wo bas rahul ke saath sex karne ke maje lena chahti hai ,ajit ki usko koi parwah nahi warna kamse kam pati ghar aaye to usko paani ka to poochh hi sakti thi manali ..
yes pata hi tha..warna bada update me sab raaz khul jaata jaldi se ..
Mai kisi ko support nehi kar rehi hun.. Mai sirf yehi kehte aa rehi hun ki story mei har ek character ki apne apne point of view hain khud ko justify karne ke liye.. Manali ki bhi hain, AJit ki bhi hain, aur shayad Rahul ki bhi hain....Whi to leon 32 bhai itne din Bad pti aaya pr manali usse gussa hai kyuki sex pura nhi ho paya aur abhi bhi lekhika mahodaya bolengi ki manali ajit se pyar krti hai.
Aur lekhika mahoday ye bhi bolengi ki abhi bhut kuch aana baki hai,pr sach to samne aa hi chuka hai.
Manali bewfa hai
alag se baithne ko kyun bolegi,, AJit guess thode hei hain kya?? Wo ghar ka maalik hain..... ghar uska hain, aur Manali ki bhi, as she is the wife of Ajit..paani lene to nahi gayi ..first ghar aane ke baad baithne ko bolti aur kehti pani ka..gusse se dekhkar koi pani lane nahi jaata
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***shubh shubh ***..( bol diya
.) ...
par wo itne din baad ghar aaya to patni aise hi kahegi as a formalityalag se baithne ko kyun bolegi,, AJit guess thode hei hain kya?? Wo ghar ka maalik hain..... ghar uska hain, aur Manali ki bhi, as she is the wife of Ajit..