Sexy launda
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Ha dost shi bole ho,writer ke paas idea nahi hai ki aage kya likna hai ..ye kahani aise thi ki pati apne patni ko apne dost ke saath chupke dekhe aur maja le ..
par readers ne apni alag raay di jiski wajah se ab writer ko alag plot banana padega ..
ye koi revenge type ya divorce dena jaisi kahani nahi thi par har koi yahi kehne laga ki biwi ko divorce dena chahiye ..
Unki hr story me yhi hota hai
Bivi apne pati ke dost ke sath sex krti hai aur husband dekhte rhta hai,
Pr is story me readers ke wajah se wo jaisa chahti thi waisa nHi hua isliye bhag gyi