I read first two pages of story containing around 15 updates... Socha kahin to kuch sense banega story me.... Magar nahi... Writer mahashay ne chutiyape ki hadde paar kar rakhi hai... Matlab manali ne naa apne pati se pehle koi baat kari aur uske dost ki baato me aakar baar baar uske saath intercourse karti rahi... Pehli baar hi usko sab samajh janaa tha ye uske pati ka dost kitna harami hai jab usne seedha manali ka muh chhod diya aur sperm bhi pila diya... Wo to alag raha baad me bhi kabhi apne pati se baat nahi kari... Aur waisa hi chutiya uska pati bana diya jo khushi khushi camere se sab dekhta raha aur apni biwi ko apne dost ki rakhail bante huye dekhne ke baad bhi kuch nahi kara... matlab reality to dur ku ki baat fantasy ki bhi maa chod kar rakh do writer ne... Aur ab ye mahashay uske pati ke saamne hi manali ko chodna chhate hai jispar bhi naaa to manali ko naa hi uske pati ko.... Shockingly.... koi aapatti nahi... Chalo manali ko ek baar ko bewakoof ladki dikha diya uske pati ko cuckold bhi bana diya.... Par aisa bhi kya cuckold jo uska pati bana rakha hai... uske saamne manali ab uske dost se chudwayegi aur wo chupchaap dekhta rahega wo bhi shaakshaat apni aankhon se bina camere ke use ke... Bahut hi ghatiya hai ye sab... Nihayati senseless... Itna padhkar hi mann itna prasann hua ki aage padhne ki iccha hi mar gai....