Adultery Wife Fulfilled Sex Desire Of A Cancer Patient (Completed)

[mahadev31]

Ek baat bataay, agar aap ko kahani mei itna hei twist chahiye toh kya mai iss kahani ko "Thriller" category mei naa dalta?? Mai kyun iss story ko "Adultery" category mei rakkha?

haa ...thriller chahiye ????? manali ke ander bhoot aa gaya aur wo aisa kar rahi hai ,,,ajit cuckold hai ,,aur manali jab 100 logo se sex karegi tab wo maa bann jayegi ???? ....rahul wampire hai ?? .......sorry ????....

aur last me pata chale ki ye sab ajit aur manali ka plan tha rahul ki property pe kabja karne ke liye ???.....

*****agar aap kahani ko kisi bhi disha me le jana chahe to koi dikkat nahi ,,,,,par har reader ( me bhi ) yahi chahta hai ki mmanali( 60 %)aur rahul( 100 % ) galat hai ( ajit bhi ,par utna nahi ) ... bas ending achchi ho ?.... wo baadme discuss karenge .....????

 

[Kratos]

manali dear ...............ab aap kutark de rahi hain........... illogical

manali ne ek ki wish puri karne ke liye usse sex kar hi liya .................. ab chahe kisi se kare ya na kare...............wo utni hi kameeni rahegi
ye usne galti nahin ki hai.............soch samajhkar, jaan-boojhkar kiya hai............ aur iske liye use koi pachhtava bhi nahin hua.... balki excited hai


katl ek karo ya do ya usse bhi jyada..................hain to aap kaatil hi.....
ye thode hi hai ki ...........usne abhi pramod kaka se sex nahin kiya hai isliye wo.............galat ki bajay sahi ho gayi

sahi kaha...aapne aur sabse badi baat ye hai ki abhi to ajit hotel me hai par jab ghar me aayega tab inka rishta normal rahega...aur rahul ke chicha ko involv karne ka matlab ye to nahi ki waiting me rahulwe ke baad chacha hai..

 

[mahadev31]

bilkul sahi....aur imagination ke mamle me launde ka jawab nahi....pahle just imagine karte karte ajit ko galiya padwa di. aur ab fir imagine imagine karte kaka ko khalyalo me shamil kar liya ki tum shalini ki tarah dikhti ho and all that..jab kaka tumhe dekhenge to tantana jaayenge. aur sabse badi baat ajit ki alag hi kriya chal rahi hai....wo waha dekh ke hila raha hai aur yaha rahul manali ko hila raha hai...

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[Kratos]

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BC isliye maine aaj tak mutth nahi mari...sidhe latth gada tha

 

[Avinashraj]

Yaar aaj Sunday hain so aaj update mil jata to maza aa jata .

 

[mahadev31]

sorry for last comment ....par sab writer pe depend karta hai .....me har kahani ko aise dekhta hu jaise wo past me ho chuki ho .....

par yaha har update ko change kar sakte hai ....3 ya 4 kahaniya aisi padhi hai jisme update ko badal dete hai .....aur last comment yahi sochke kaha ki kahani ka base writer hota hai kyunki wo real nahi hai ,,,,agar real hoti to aap waise hi likhti jaise ho gaya hai past me ***( kuch jagah sahi shabd nahi mile to galat mat samajhna ) ...maine kisi ki bhi bhavna ko ....aage aap samajhe ????

 

[mahadev31]

Yaar aaj Sunday hain so aaj update mil jata to maza aa jata .

aaj hamara aur ajit ka sunday hai ....naa ki manali aur rahul ka .....un dono ko abhi saturday aur sunday maja karne ke liye mila hai .???

par aaj next update de hi do writer ji ????

 

[Kratos]

by the way...manali bose story tum ek number likh rahi ho...ab tumne aage ke baare me kya socha ye tum janti ho kyonki writer ho...but ho sake to ajit ka character build up karo. Kyonki lund to build up ho nahi sakta launde ka. kyonki rahul ke dil me ajit ke liye respect to dikhi nahi....kyonki bhake hi during kaam krida rahul ne ajit ko abuse kiya aur manali se bhi karwaya..aur manali ne thukai ke khumar me ajit ko bhi pel diya bhale hi shuruaat me thoda jhijhaki ho...par at last ajit ko humiliate kar hi diya...aur rahul ka kahna hai ki ye sab fun ke liye...bc fun fun bol ke apna fun kaayde me use kar raha hai..kyonki jo aapke dil me ho wahi aapke juban me aata hai aur humiliate karke usne ye prove bhi kar diya...aisa mera manna hai..ho sakta hai main galat hoon. kahi aisa na ho ki jab ajit ghar aaye tab tak manali ke dil se ajit utar chuka ho. aur rishta formality ka rah jaaye

 

[Avinashraj]

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aaj hamara aur ajit ka sunday hai ....naa ki manali aur rahul ka .....un dono ko abhi saturday aur sunday maja karne ke liye mila hai .???

par aaj next update de hi do writer ji ????

Sahi hain bhai

 

[Rahul The Devil]

Sabse phle to manali ji aapse maafi chahenge ki phla review diya to wo bhi sahi se nhi de paye... Baaki abhi aapne kha ki rahul n sirf imagination krne k liye kha h... Yha sex se leke sex style tk sab imagination or emotional drama krke hi shuruat ki h rahul ne... I think ki Cancer se leke diary tk sab pre planned tha or sirf drama hai... Ek cancer patient jo ki apne aakhiri din gin rha hai sex k mamle m kamdev ko bhi piche chhod rha hai... Baaki sach to aap hi jane lekhika mahodya...