Adultery Wife Fulfilled Sex Desire Of A Cancer Patient (Completed)

[sharaabi]

Nice update but ek wahi baat sex seen nahut jade they kuch kahani ko age baraye

 

[sharaabi]

Intajar agley update ka

 

[Rajag]

Hello all. Writer ne ek aachi plot per story ko start kiya hai but aab story me koi story nai hai. Rah gaya hai to bas ek hi chej, minali ke sath kaise, aur kitni jyada sex dikha sake. Ab kaka ko enter krwa rahe ho, phir rahul bolega dudhwale se karo and so on. Had hai yaar. Story ye yhi ki ek admi jo marne wala hai, uski ek khwahish ek dost puri krt hai aur sath me uski bhi apni fantasy puri krta hai. Wife ek supportive character hai jo apne pati ke kahne per ye kadam uthati hai aur enjoy bhi krti hai. Yaha tak to thek hai lekin story me jis type se rahul ko dikhaya gaya hai kahi se nai lagta hai ki wo ill hai. Na koi medicine, na doctor na report. Ek baat janna chahta hu ki ho sakta hai rahul sab hide kr raha hai but ab jab minali uske sath etne din se lagatar day n night hai, to kya usne observe nai kiya ki rahul ek normal se bhi jyada healthy state me hai. Uska pati laptop per record kr ke apni wife ki fucking episode ko hi dekhta hai, dost ko medicine lete ya doctr se baat krte huwe nai dekhta hai. Maan liya ki minali sex me dub chuki hai, but uska pati ka dimag kaha hai, use feel nai ho raha hai ki kuch galat ho raha hai uske ghar pr, kitna wait karega wo, ya use ek aisi wife chahiye jo har kisi ke sath uske samne besharm ho kr sex krti rahe. Wo apni patni ko 'randi' banana chahta hai ya sirf apne dost ki help krna chahta tha.
Dear writer pls dont mind but pls understand ki aap ek bahut hi bahtareen story ki ab dhajiya uda rahi hai. Ye ab story na hoker ek sex game ho gaya hai. Baap saman kaka fuck karega bahu ko, ha kr sakta hai pr tab jab koi reason ho, story ki base hi us relation pr ho. Middle of the story kuch bhi daloge to, it will not be adjusted in the story. Love angle to kahi nai hai teeno character ke beech. Aap self feel kariye, starting me reader apko story ke liye aapreciate kr rahe the aur ab only for the sex scenes. Mai bhi apke writing skill ka dewana ho gaya hu jis tareke se aap sex scenes describe kr rahe ho, sabke bass ki baat nai h etni interesting type se present krna.
Pls milnali ke pati ko lao aur veto lagao sex pr, ya to rahul marega ya badla le raha h, sachaiye samne la kr rakhiye. Ye story ab jis stage pr hai uske age ab koi subject matter nai hai, sex sences aap kitni aur kitno se bhu kara lo alag baat hai
Pls dont mind and dont take it otherwise whatever i said. Having said that always remembr i am a fan of ur writing.. Keep writing...

 

[Koushikshine]

Starting of the story was very good, but now the story is getting jammed in one point itself, and is not advancing. The emotions can be brought up clearly, and the intensions are not clear yet. Also, what will happen when Manali finds out that Rahul was only using him and trying to transform her into a slut so that Ajit's home and family could be destroyed? And even he ignited Manali to Use slangs against her husband.
Also what will be the situation when Manali will find out that Ajit was watching everything whatever she has done with Rahul or said for Ajit in laptop clearly? So, it will become difficult to end the story with interesting point as the options will be closed now

 

[Darshu22]

Waiting jiii....last update is very good..Now see what rahul does next... now rahul say to manali during sex you imagin pramod kaka has sex with you...But if this continues for a few days.. Did manali take the name of pramod kaka himself while having sex with rahul? Manali is having sex with pramod, is rahul will be successful in putting him in her mind? would this roleplay manali like it? Whether in coming days manali will be curious to have sex with pramod? Whether in coming days manali will wait for pramod?Will rahul be able to persuade manali to have sex with promod?That 's a lot of questions?Further you will reply in the update. hope so, ohhh I forgot.. Ajit ..What would ajit do after seeing all this? Does it increase his excitement?whether her penis will feel stir after all this? Will his eyes get tears in ?Will ajit take all this to be his fault? There are lots of questions in your update.... story is right path... keep writing.. Take your time and write comfortably.

 

[Carewoks]

Let's see what next. A twist in a story or it still goes like this.

 

[Shashi68]

Writer ne achi story likhi but ab itna busy ki sabhi readers upset Hain...so much waiting period....

 

[sharaabi]

Intjaar

 

[Manali Bose]

Nice update but ek wahi baat sex seen nahut jade they kuch kahani ko age baraye

REPLY: I just want to say that, till now Friday has over. Now Saturday and Sunday need to come in the Story. So, please have some patience..

 

[Manali Bose]

Na koi medicine, na doctor na report.

Medical Report, Medicines, Doctor - Sab ka zikar already kiya gaya hain Story mei..

Uska pati laptop per record kr ke apni wife ki fucking episode ko hi dekhta hai, dost ko medicine lete ya doctr se baat krte huwe nai dekhta hai.

Ajit sabkuch dekh raha hain. Isliye hei toh Story mei yeh zikar kiya gaya hain ki Rahul time se davai nehi le raha hain. Ajit dekh sabkuch raha hain, pad likh wahei raha hain jo Story ke liye relevant ho..?? Understood?

Maan liya ki minali sex me dub chuki hai, but uska pati ka dimag kaha hai, use feel nai ho raha hai ki kuch galat ho raha hai uske ghar pr, kitna wait karega wo,

Ajit ko feel hokar bhi kya faida?? Wo aab jo bhi dekh raha hain voh sab highlights hain, jo past mei ho chuka hain in absence of him, when he was in Mumbai.. Isliye Ajit ko Sunday tak wait karna hei hoga.. Halaki Ajit abhi sunday mei hotel pe baith kar sabkuch highlights dekh raha hain. Aur wo Sunday tak uske absence mei ghar pe kya kya hua hain, yeh jaane bina wo ghar nehi lautega. Kyunki wo sabkuch jaan kar, ghar ka poora jaayeza lekar phir ghar lautna chaata hain..

ya use ek aisi wife chahiye jo har kisi ke sath uske samne besharm ho kr sex krti rahe. Wo apni patni ko 'randi' banana chahta hai ya sirf apne dost ki help krna chahta tha.

Who Knows???? Ajit kya chaata hain, yeh sayed Ajit ko bhi nehi pata. Wo kehta kuch hain, karta kuch aor hain. Humesha uske dil aur dimaag dono alag alag disha mei chalta hain. He is a very Grey Character of the Story. He is very much confused about himself, about what he wants and what he actually do. Wo ek taraf yeh sab nazara dekh kar khud ko koss raha hain aur Rahul ko gaali de raha hain, toh doosri taraf wahein nazare dekh kar excited bhi ho raha hain. Yehi hota hain jab tharak aur morality dono ek sath insaan ke ander kaam karta hain toh.. ????

Dear writer pls dont mind but pls understand ki aap ek bahut hi bahtareen story ki ab dhajiya uda rahi hai. Ye ab story na hoker ek sex game ho gaya hai.

I don't mind Rajag.. I always welcome the criticism. ?? Aab Story ka ek important character Rahul agar isse apne khwaish se aage baada kar ek sex game ke tarah lea jaye aur phir MaNaLi ko iss tarah se exploit kare toh what will I do?? ?? Story ko sex game mei tabdil Rahul ne kiya hain, agar mai isse skip kar jau toh kaise chalega?? ??

Baap saman kaka fuck karega bahu ko, ha kr sakta hai pr tab jab koi reason ho, story ki base hi us relation pr ho. Middle of the story kuch bhi daloge to, it will not be adjusted in the story. Love angle to kahi nai hai teeno character ke beech. Aap self feel kariye, starting me reader apko story ke liye aapreciate kr rahe the aur ab only for the sex scenes. Mai bhi apke writing skill ka dewana ho gaya hu jis tareke se aap sex scenes describe kr rahe ho, sabke bass ki baat nai h etni interesting type se present krna.

Time will say whether Manali will engage with another person or not. You can make assumption in your own ways, but don't take your assumptions as a conclusion.. Everything of the story in upcoming times will be put on the basis of logic and a careful way of characterization.. Don't worry.. Ok..☺?

Pls milnali ke pati ko lao aur veto lagao sex pr, ya to rahul marega ya badla le raha h, sachaiye samne la kr rakhiye. Ye story ab jis stage pr hai uske age ab koi subject matter nai hai, sex sences aap kitni aur kitno se bhu kara lo alag baat hai

For that, you need wait for the Sunday. Now the friday has over. Only Saturday and Sunday is left.. After that, hopefully Ajit will be available.. ?☺ Please have some patience dear..??

Pls dont mind and dont take it otherwise whatever i said. Having said that always remembr i am a fan of ur writing.. Keep writing...

I hope I can give the answer of all your queries!!.. And a BIG THANKS for become a Fan of my writing.. Thank YOU So Much..????