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Adultery Wife Fulfilled Sex Desire Of A Cancer Patient (Completed)

What will Happen?? Aab Kya Ho Sakta Hain??


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    28
  • Poll closed .

DARK WOLFKING

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writer ji aapko bura to nahi lag raha hai naa ๐Ÿง๐Ÿง๐Ÿง..
me kahani enjoy kar raha hu aur isliye comment karne me maja bhi aa rah hai ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ..

ye pehli kahani hai ( aur poore forum par 3 ya 4 ) jisme me ek update par dul khol ke apne comment karta hu ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜..

agar dusre writer ki tarah aapko kabhi bura lage to keh dena ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™ .

par meri wajah se dusre reader ko kahani band karne ka bolke naaraj mat marna ..
 

DARK WOLFKING

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Pad savaal yehi uthta hain ki call karega kyun? Agar call karti bhi toh kya Ajit shaktiman ke tarah seedha office se ghar chala aata?? Is it possible??
kyunki manali agar aisa sochti ki ajit ko call karke aaj ki raat rahul apni marji karta par baadme ( next day ) ajit rahul ko ghar se jaane ko bolta ....

insaan kitna bhi ghatiya kyu naa ho par apni chhoti si ijaat ki khatir wo kuch bhi kar sakta hai ..
 

Manali Bose

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writer ji aapko bura to nahi lag raha hai naa ๐Ÿง๐Ÿง๐Ÿง..
me kahani enjoy kar raha hu aur isliye comment karne me maja bhi aa rah hai ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ..

ye pehli kahani hai ( aur poore forum par 3 ya 4 ) jisme me ek update par dul khol ke apne comment karta hu ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜..

agar dusre writer ki tarah aapko kabhi bura lage to keh dena ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™ .

par meri wajah se dusre reader ko kahani band karne ka bolke naaraj mat marna ..
aap befikaar rehiye.. main kisi ke koi bhi comments ka bura nehi maanti.. maine pahele bhi kahaan hain ki any type of feedback is always welcome here.. so befikaar hoke comment kijiye iss thread pe, iss thread ko apna hi sochiye..๐Ÿ˜‡๐Ÿฅฐ
 

DARK WOLFKING

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aap befikaar rehiye.. main kisi ke koi bhi comments ka bura nehi maanti.. maine pahele bhi kahaan hain ki any type of feedback is always welcome here.. so befikaar hoke comment kijiye iss thread pe, iss thread ko apna hi sochiye..๐Ÿ˜‡๐Ÿฅฐ
aapne ye kaha mujhe khushi huyi ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜...par ek jagah maine writer ko sirf itna kaha ki present aur future ki kahani ek saath mat dikhao ( us kahani me waisa tha nahi present aur future ka combo ) .. tab bhi waha se mujhe block kar diya writer ne ๐Ÿ˜”๐Ÿ˜”..( aur ye bhi kaha tha ki aap ek update likhke dikha do ) .

2nd ...kamdev ji ne kuch comment kiya tha ( jo mujhe pata nahi ) uski wajah se writer naaraj ho gayi aur kahani band karne ka kehne lagi .....

isliye me har jagah jaha apni style me comment karta hu waha ye sab kehta hu ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™.. ( me private message me kahani aur writer ke naam bata sakta hu ) ..
 

Dungeon Master

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I tried my level best.. I tried to put those things (which you mentioned) in my earlier Updates.. please check all my 52 updates thoroughly.. you may find which you want..... anyway, still I will keep your suggestion in my mind.. thanks for the lovely feedback.....๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’œโค๐Ÿ–ค
as a matter of fact i have read them all, your story is one of the great ones in this forum.
i know you have written the details in the previous posts, but i saying include more of it.
 

Sexy launda

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i think ab aage ajit cuckold banega ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ..aur manali rahul aur kaka ke saath threesome karegi .....

kahani aur romanchak ho gayi hai waiting for next ..
hm abhi update to nhi padhe hai,
pr logo ke review ko padhkar to lg rha hai ki is update me bhi sirf aur sirf sex hi tha.
aur leon32 bhai cuckold me mja nhi aayega,
story aur bekar ho jayegi.
aur yrr lekhika mahoday ko ek bat khna chahunga ki agr koi pati apni wife ko is trh kisi ke sath dekh lega to wo apne izzat ki parwah nhi krega sidhe dono ka murder kr dega.
aap ki story ka reality se dur-dur tk koi rista nhi hai isliye padhne me mja nhi aa rha
1-koi cancer patient itna sex nhi kr skta
2-kisi bhi aurat ke bina marji ke uske sath sex nhi kita ja skta
3-kisi ko itna jyada hypnotize nhi kiya ja skta
4-koi bhi husband apni wife ko dusro se sex krte nhi dekh skta.

inhi sb reasons ke wajah se apki story boring ho gyi hai
 
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