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poore andhere me bhi mera haath mobile tak pahuch jaata hai .. aadat pat jaati hai ki kaha rakha hai mobile ,,,, yaa us jagah se thoda aage yaa pichhe ..
Pad savaal yehi uthta hain ki call karega kyun? Agar call karti bhi toh kya Ajit shaktiman ke tarah seedha office se ghar chala aata?? Is it possible??mere hisaab se 90% log sote samay bhi mobile apne aas paas rakhta hai ..6 ร 7 palang par mobile kitni dur rakhoge ki waha tak haath naa jaaye ..
kyunki manali agar aisa sochti ki ajit ko call karke aaj ki raat rahul apni marji karta par baadme ( next day ) ajit rahul ko ghar se jaane ko bolta ....Pad savaal yehi uthta hain ki call karega kyun? Agar call karti bhi toh kya Ajit shaktiman ke tarah seedha office se ghar chala aata?? Is it possible??
aap befikaar rehiye.. main kisi ke koi bhi comments ka bura nehi maanti.. maine pahele bhi kahaan hain ki any type of feedback is always welcome here.. so befikaar hoke comment kijiye iss thread pe, iss thread ko apna hi sochiye..writer ji aapko bura to nahi lag raha hai naa ..
me kahani enjoy kar raha hu aur isliye comment karne me maja bhi aa rah hai ..
ye pehli kahani hai ( aur poore forum par 3 ya 4 ) jisme me ek update par dul khol ke apne comment karta hu ..
agar dusre writer ki tarah aapko kabhi bura lage to keh dena .
par meri wajah se dusre reader ko kahani band karne ka bolke naaraj mat marna ..
aapne ye kaha mujhe khushi huyi ...par ek jagah maine writer ko sirf itna kaha ki present aur future ki kahani ek saath mat dikhao ( us kahani me waisa tha nahi present aur future ka combo ) .. tab bhi waha se mujhe block kar diya writer ne ..( aur ye bhi kaha tha ki aap ek update likhke dikha do ) .aap befikaar rehiye.. main kisi ke koi bhi comments ka bura nehi maanti.. maine pahele bhi kahaan hain ki any type of feedback is always welcome here.. so befikaar hoke comment kijiye iss thread pe, iss thread ko apna hi sochiye..
as a matter of fact i have read them all, your story is one of the great ones in this forum.I tried my level best.. I tried to put those things (which you mentioned) in my earlier Updates.. please check all my 52 updates thoroughly.. you may find which you want..... anyway, still I will keep your suggestion in my mind.. thanks for the lovely feedback.....โค
Ok.. I will keep your advice in my mind.... thanks for the suggesitions.......as a matter of fact i have read them all, your story is one of the great ones in this forum.
i know you have written the details in the previous posts, but i saying include more of it.
hm abhi update to nhi padhe hai,i think ab aage ajit cuckold banega ..aur manali rahul aur kaka ke saath threesome karegi .....
kahani aur romanchak ho gayi hai waiting for next ..